Fantasy Jindagi ke rangJindagi Ke Rang (The Revenge Of Rebal)
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Intro
Hero -Raj Dewan
Father-Ashok Dewan
Mother-Kamla Dewan
Sister-Kirti Dewan
Amrica ke new york city me ek ghar me ek bahut he handsome ladka baitha hua tha 6fit ka height tha 8 pack abs the or uski ankhe to kya khane halka green or blue color ka tha koi ladki agar uske ankhe me dekh le to Usse pyar kar bathe
woh waha baitha kuch soch raha tha
Dosto ab story flashback me jaygi
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Raj ke Father Ashok Dewan ek ayase kisme ka admi he paise ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai or Raj ke mom bhote he achi aurat he inko apni pati ke bare me kuch bhi pata nahi he ye apne pati ke har ek bat manti he.
Magar Raj jab 2 sal ka tha tab Kamla ko apne pati ke bare me sab kuch pata chal gya ke uska pati use dhoka de raha hai or uske pati ka uske alava or kai ladki or aurat ke sath sambandh hai or kai ladkio ka rape bhi kiya hai
Ye sab jan ne ke bad use apni pati se nafrat se ho gai or usne apni pati ko divorce dene ka phaisla kiya
Mgar Ashok ne use divorce dene ke liye ek sart rakha ke Raj uske pass rahega
Kamla is bakt bahut gusse me thi use ye laga ke Raj bada ho ke uske Papa jaisa hi banega isliye us ne han kar di iske bad inka divorce ho gya
Magar jab inka divorce hua tab Kirti Kamla ke pet me thi
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Raj ke mom use chod ke chali gai
Raj ke papa raj ki mom ke jane ke bad Raj par bina bat ke gussa hone lage us ko marne lage
ye dekh kar raj ko dadaji ne us uske chacha chachi ke pass bhej diya unka koi santan nahi the to unhone raj ko apne bete ki tarah palne lage
lakin bhagwan ko ye bhi manjur nahi tha raj ke unke ghar jane ke kuch din bad raj ke chacha chachi ka accident me maut ho gai
( or iske peeche raj ke hi dad ka hi hath tha woh raj ke chacha chachi ka sampati hadapna chahata tha isliye usne apne bhai ko or uske patni ko mar diya ye baat raj ko nahi pata)
Raj ko phir apne ghar lot jana pada or phir se raj ko wahi sab kuch sahena pada
isi bich raj ke papa ne ek din ek ladki se sadi karke use ghar le aye or woh bhi raj ke upar atyachar karne lage
ye sab raj ke dadaji ye sab roj dekh rahe the par kuch nahi kar paye
Raj ke chacha marne se pahle apna sari property raj ke nam kar diya tha joki uske 18 sal ke hone par usko milegi agar is se pahle use kuch ho gaya to sari property ek trust me chali jayegi
isi bich Raj 16sal ka ho gaya or us ki bahen bhi 14 sal ki ho gai thi raj ki maa ab raj ke nanaji ki company sambhalti hai
Raj ki nayi maa ki bhi ek beti thi jiska nam Punam tha ye bhi Raj ko apna bhai nahi manti thi or uski hamesa bajati rahti thi
Magar ak din Raj ke Dadaji ke bhi deth bhi hogai
Raj ka ab apna khane ke liye uske do friends he the school me
friend 1-Mohit
friend2-Ruhi
Mohit ye ak simple ladka hai aur raj ko apna bhai manta hai
Ruhi ye raj ke dad ke khas dost ke ladki hai iske dad or Raj ke dad best friends hai har ache bure kam ek sath milkar karte hai
Raj Ruhi se pyar karta hai magar usne kabhi kahne ki himmat nahi huyi kyuki ruhi dikhne me bahut sunder thi or hamara raj ek dum dubla sa patla sa or hamesa ankho me chasma lagata tha
Ise bich Raj ko 18 sal ho gye
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Raj ab 18 sal ka ho gaya tha
Raj ke papa ko to bas paisa chahiya or usne Raj ko marne ki sochi or taki vo us ke property pa sake
Ashok ne ye plan kab se bana rakha tha q ke vo Raj ko apna beta nahi manta tha vo to bas use apne pass rakha tha taki jab vo 18 sal ka ho jaye to use mar kar uski property pa sake
Uski ye soch thi ki vo Raj ke jesa beta or bhi peda kar sakta he or property ke liye vo apne bete ko bhi bali chadhane ke liye taiyar tha
Aj Raj ka birthday tha magar uske ghar me to kise ko kuch bhi phark nahi padne vali thi
Raj aj school gya or use ruhi or mohit ne wish kia or use gift bhi diya
Raj ki choti bhane Krite bhi ise school me padhti he usne bhi Raj ko wish kia
Raj use apne gale laga liya phir krite ne Raj ko gift diya
(Note-Krite jab 11sal ki thi to usne ak din bhulse apni maa ki diary padhle or use apne Bhai or Dad ke bare me pata chala or tab se vo Raj ko janti hai)
Aj school khatam hone ke bad Raj ghar chala gya or jate he uske Dad ne use kuch papars par sign karne ko kaha
Raj ne paper dekhate he samjhe gya ke agar vo sign karta hai to uske chacha chachi ne jo property uske nam kiya tha vo uske Dad ka ho jaega
phir usne socha ke uske dad hi to he or property uske nam rahe ya phir uske dad ke dono ek bat hi to hai magar use ye nahi pata tha ke uske sign karne ke bad uske sath kya hoga
phir Ashok kisi ko phone kiya or kuch he der me 4 mustande gunde jaise log under aye itne me Ashok bolta he
Ashok-Beta Raj aj tumhe tumhare birthday ka best gift dunga
Raj ko Ashok ke bat thodi hajam nahi hui aj Ashok Raj se badi narmi se bat kar raha tha phir bhi Raj ne puch he liya
Raj-Dad vo gift kya he
Ashok-vo gift tumhe ye log denge (un charo gundo ke teraf isara karte huye)
Raj-Dad Ap majak kar rahe hai
Ashok-chup kar me tera Dad nahi hu teri maa ne tujhe mandir ki sidhiyo se utha ke lai thi
Raj-Dad ap ye kya kah rahe hai
Ashok-chup kar sale mane tujhe aj tak pala tha sirf is property ke liye ab ye property meri ho chuki he ab tera kya kam (un gundo se)le jao ise or mar dalo
Phir un gundo ne Raj ko banha se pakad kar le gye
ek sunsan jangal me vaha unhone Raj ko gadi se bhar nikala Raj kuch nahi kar pa raha tha tabhi un gundo ke peche jhadeo se kuch abaje aie to bo us tarf dekhne lage
Is moke ka fayda utha kar Raj vanha se bhagne laga tabhi ek gunde ki najar us par pad gai usne gun nekal ke Raj par goli chala di
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Us gunde ne jo goli chalai vo sedha jake Raj ke pair me lagi or vo neche khai me gir gya or vo gunde loge Raj mar gya samajh kar banha se chale gye
Us khai ke neche ek nadi thi Raj usme ja gira or nadi me bhate hua ek jagha vo jake ruka
Agli subha usko hos aaya ladkhadata hua uth khada hua or aas pass dekha to vo abhi ek jangal me hai aas pas dekha to use ek medium size ka ghar najar aya to vo banha pe gya or darbaja khat khtya to ak 55 -60 sal ka admi bhar aya tabhi Raj bahi pe behos ho gya
vo admi use ghar ke under le gya darbaja band karke usne ek ghar ke wall pe laga ek switch ko on kiye jis se ghar ke neche ek rasta khula or vo apni mobile se kuch karne laga or agle he pal us me se do robo bhar nekle us admi ne un robo ko Raj ko neche le jane ko kaha or vo robo Raj ko utha ke neche le gye or unke piche vo admi bhi
Not-jo admi Raj ko ghar me laya bo ak Scientist he inka nam dr Raman he
vo log Raj ko ghar ke neche bane ek lab me le gye or uske pao me se goli nekal de or uski pati karde
2hours bit gye magar Raj ke halat me koi sudhar nahi araha tha or to or Raman ko ye dekh kar ascharya ho raha tha ki abhi Raj ke sarir me bas kuch he bund blood bachi thi fhir bhi Raj jinda tha
Raman-(apne man me) ye kesa admi he itna blood chale jane ke bad bhi ye jinda he me to abhi kanhi se blood bhi nahi la sakta kya karu ise me kese bachau tabhi use kuch sujha to usne Raj ke body ko scan karne laga or uske dna test karne laga magar uske kuch hat nahi laga vo phir se neras ho gya
Raman-ab kya karu aese to ye marjayga is par vo formula apply karu par maine aj tak jetne bhi logo par vo formula apply kiya hai vo sab mar gya ab kya karu ek bar apply karke dekhata hu shayad ye bach jaye vese bhi ye marne vala hai or iske sarir me itne kam blood hone ke bad bhi ye ab tak jinda he kuch to bat he isme ak bar apply karke dekhta hu shayad mera itne sal ka experiment safal ho jaye
phir Raman ne Raj ke sarir me kuch 2-4 injection lagya or bada sa kach ke container me Raj ko letya fhir us ne Raj ke sar me ak chip inject kea or uske nose me do pipe laga dea sans lane ke liye
Phir usne Raj ke sarir me har ak unge me bhote sare sue ghusdea or us sue me chote chote wire type ke pipes lage hua the uske bad usne us container ko band kar diya or usme kuch he der me kuch green color ke liquid bharne laga or vo container us liquid se full hogya or Raj us me dub gya phir or phir bo us wire type ke pipes me se kuch blue color ke liquid Raj sarir me jane laga
Magar kuch 5min bad Raj ke sarir me vibrate hone laga or bo container bhi hilne laga phir Raj ke sarire akdam se sun hogya or uske Heart bit band ho gya oe compute pe Raj ko dead so karne laga
Is se Raman ko bhote nirasa hui magar tabhi aesa kuch hua ke Raman ki khusi ka thekana nahi raha or vo nachne laga
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Tabhi Raj ki heart bit chalne lagi or Raman khusi se nachne laga aajj uske 20 sal ki tapasya saphal hua he
Ase he 3din tak Raj ko us container ke under rahena pada or 3din bad Raman ne Raj ko us container se bahar nikala ab Raj ak dam badal gaya tha ab uski hight 6fit thi or uske 8pack abs tha
Kuch he der me Raj ko hos ane laga or usne ankhe kholi to uski ankhe halki green or blue color ke the Raj hos me ate hi Raman se pucha
Raj-Ap kon ho or me yaha kya karraha hu or mera nam kya he mujhe kuch yad kyun nahi aa raha.
Raman-beta beta sant ho jao sab batata hu
Raman-tu mera beta hai or tujhe kuch gundo ne mara tha or tere sar me chote lagi thi gisse tu sab kuch bhul gya he
Raj-par Papa mujhe kuch yad nahi araha he yaha tak ki mujhe mera nam tak yad nahi
Raman -Beta tera nam....... Tera na.....
Raj-Papa Ap hakla ku rahe ho jase Ap mera nam nahi jante (or tabhi Raman ki najar Raj ke gale me bandha locket pe gya jispe Raj lekha hua tha )
Raman-nahi deta tera nam Raj hai or me kuch soch raha tha
(Note-Raman ne Raj ke sar me jo chip inject kiya tha us se Raj ki yadast chali gai hai)
Raj -Papa Mom kaha hai
Raman-Beta teri Mom ab is dunia me nahi he bo to tere bachpan me he tujhe chod kar chali gai thi
Itna sunne ke bad Raj ne kuch nahi kaha
Raman-Beta mujh se ek vaada karega
Raj-kesa vaada Papa
Raman-Beta un gundo mar khane bajhe se tumhari halat bhote begad gai thi is lea mane tumhare sarir me ek formula inject kiya hai jisse tumhe kuch saktia melagi or tum uska galat istamal kabhi mat karna
Raj-ok Papa
Raman-ab ham yanha nahi rahenge ham delhi chale jaynge
Raj-q Papa
Raman-q ke yaha hamari jan ko khatra he
Raj-ok
Agle din Raman Raj ko leker delhi chala jata he
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Raman ka delhi me ek medicine manufacturing company he vo banha jake Raj ka Rajesh Ray nam se Documents banba lea or uska school me admission karva diya 2din bad Raj ki school start honi thi
Aj Raman Raj ko apne company le gaya or apne staff se bhi milaya or phir Raman use apne cabin me legaya
(Not-Raman ki sadi nahi hui thi magar Raj ne jab Raman ko Papa kha kar bulaya to Raman ko bhote acha laga use laga jaise uska is dunia me koi hai jiske liye vo sab kuch karega like a Father)
Raman ne Raj ko apne cabine me bethaya or apne manager ko bulaya
Manager-my i com in sir
Raman-yes vikas under ao
vikas-sir aapne bulaya
Raman-vikas mane tumhe kitne bar kaha he ye sir mujhe sir mat bulana
tu mera dost hai tu mujhe Raman bula sakta hai
Viksh-sorry Raman ab bolo mujhe q bulya
Raman-Raj inse melo ye he Viksh Uncle
Raj-namste Uncle
Viksh-manste Beta are Raman ye kon he
Raman-ye mera Beta he .
Tabhi Viksh kuch bolne vala hota he ke Raman use chup rahne ka isara karta he
Raman-Beta Raj tum jara bhare wait karo mujhe Viksh Uncle se kuch bat karni he
Raman-ab puch kya puchna he
Viksh-ye ladka tera Beta kase ho sakta he teri to abhi sadi nahi hui
Raman-to sun ye mujhe puna me mela tha us bakt isko goli lagi hue thi or maine iska elaj karbaya or hos me ane ke bad ye apni yadast kho betha tha to mane ise apma beta bana ke yanha le aya or mujhe jeene ka ek sahara mil gya
Viksh-to ye bat he
Raman-thode uche abaje me Beta Raj under ajao
Raj under aa gya
Raman- are me asli bat tumhe puchna bhul gya tumhara beta xxx school me padhta he na
Viksh-han
Raman-to tum aj Raj ko ghar le jaoge or apne bete se mil baoge q ke Raj ka bhi admission usi school me hua he to dono dost ban jaege
Viksh-me Raj ko nahi le ja raha hu tum dono aj rat dinner pe mere ghar aa rahe ho or me koi excuse nahi sunuga
Raman-ok
or phir rat ko Raj or Raman Viksh ke ghar gye
Viksh family intro
Viksh Singh-manager of Ramans medicine manufacturing company
Mohine Singh -wife of Viksh ye ak housewife he
Biswajit Singh-(Biswa)Viksh ka beta
Raman or Raj Viksh ke ghar pahanch gye
Raj Biswa se mila or dono me dosti ho gai or dono ne kal ghumne jane ka plane banya
Phir sab ne dinner kiya Raman or Raj Viksh ke family se vida le kar apne ghar aa gye or so gye
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shandar, awesome lajawab, fantastic update..............
keep posting bhai...............
waiting for next update................
keep posting bhai...............
waiting for next update................