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Fantasy Jindagi ke rangJindagi Ke Rang (The Revenge Of Rebal)

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Raj ko biswa pass me hi prachin sivji ke mandir me le gaya.



Dono bike stand karke ander gye tabhi biswa bola


Biswa - ye dekh mandir me aayi ladkio ke taraf isara karte hua ise kahte hai hariyali


Ye sun kar raj bhadak gya or biswa ko marne laga tabhi raj ka pair phisal gya or woh ek ladki ke uper ja gira or us ladki ke prasad ki thali uske upar gir gya


Raj - Ladki ko dekhe bina sorry woh mera par phisal gya


Ladki - apni dress ko theek karte hue


Tum jaise lafenge ladko ko me achi tarah se janti hu tum logo ko to moka dekhte rahte ho ladki se chipakne ke liye


Magar raj ko jaise kuch sunai nahi de raha tha woh to bas us ladki ko hi dekh raha tha or apne man me soch raha tha kya khubsurat ladki he aur tabhi usko apne man me kisi ladki tasveer dekhai dene lagi ye tasveer kisi or ki nahi balki ruhi ki thi or raj apne hos me aata hai or bolta hai


Raj - dekho jo kuch bhi hua wo galti se hua or mai jan bujh ke aap se nahi takrya


Ladki - tum jaise ladko mai acche se pachanti hu


Itne me us ladki ke friends use bulate he or wo waj ke taraf bina dekhe chali jati he or raj to jaise use dekhta rah jata hai


or biswa to raj ke halat dekh has raha tha


Raj - ab tu kyu has raha hai


Biswa - are teri kya bajake gayi hai jyada sarif banega to aisa hi hoga


Raj - chid ke ab chal yaha se


Phir dono bike ke pass agye


Biswa - ab kaha jana hai maharaj driver haazir hai


Raj - abe notanki band kar aur mall chal mujhe kuch kapde lene hai


Phir raj or biswa mall chalte hai raj kuch dress shopping karta hai or niswa ke liye bhi kuch kharid ta hai


Phir dono biswa ke ghar aate ha or waha dinner karte hai


Uske bad raj apne ghar chale jata he or saam ko uske papa bhi ghar aate he or dono milke kuch der baate karte hai


Phir rat ko dinner karke so jate he
 

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Agli subha raj uthta hai aur fresh ho kar garden me chala jata hai or wah pahle se hi Raman baitha hua tha


Raman - aao beta mere pass baitho


Raj unke pass bath jata hai


Raman - beta yaha pe sign kardo


Raj - ye kya hai papa


Raman - ye hamare property ke papers hai aur ab mai ye tumhare nam karne ja raha hu


Raj - par papa abhi ye sub kyu


Raman - mere bad ye sab tumhra hi to hone wala hai to abhi se ho jaye to kya fark padta hai


Raj - par Papa


Raman - par bar kuch nahi tum sign karo

phir raj sign kar deta hai


Raman - ab jao ready ho jao aj tumhara collage ka pahla din hai


Raj ready ho gya or nasta karke Biswa ke ghar chala gya


Phir dono raj ki bike pe collage nikal gye collage pahuch kar raj ne biswa ko collage gate par hi utar diya


Magar tabhi biswa ko kal mandir bali ladki dikh gayi aur wo raj se bola


Biswa - Bhai dekh bhabhi bhi ishi collage me padhti hai


Raj - abe konsi bhabhi


Biswa - us ladki ki taraf isara karte hua abe wo dekh bhabhi


Raj us taraf dekhta hai waha wo kal mandir wali ladki thi raj ko ye dekh kar gussa aa gya or wo biswa ko marne laga


Raj - tu kabhi nahi sudhrega aur itna kah ke wo bike leke nikal gya parking me bike park karke bhar araha tha ki

Tabhi use kal mandir me jis ladki se jhagada hua tha use 4 Ladke ched rahe the or uske jagah-2 hat laga rahe the raj ye dekh kar waha chal gya or un ladko se bola

Raj - aap log inhe kyu paresan kar rahe hai


(Me in 4 ladko ko L1,L2,L3,L4 kahke bulaunga)

L1 - ham iske sath jo kare teri kyu jal rahi hai

L2 - lagata he ye iski masuqua he isliye iske itne jal rahi hai

Raj - kya apki najar me ek ladka aur ek ladki sirf lovers ho sakte hai kya wo frinds nahi ho sakte

L3 - abe jyda bol bachan mat de or chup chap nikal le yaha se

phir raj us ladki ka hat pakad ke use waha se jane lagata hai

L3 - abe ladki ko kaha leke ja raha hai use yahi chod ke ja

Raj - Agar me yaha se jaunga to ye ladki bhi mere sath jayege

L4 - (ye in sab ka boss tha jo ab tak chup tha)me dekhta hu tu kese ise yaha se leke jata hai or itna kah kar wo apni sathiyo ko isara karta hai or woh log gadi me se hockey stick or baseball bat nikalte he or raj ki oar badhte hai

Tabhi biswa waha aajata hai

Magar raj use isare se dur rahane ko khata hai

Raj ka dhayan biswa ke or tha ki tabhi

L2 ek hockey stick lekar teji se bhag kar raj ke pass aata hai or hockey stick raj ke arm pe de marta par raj apni jagah se hilta hi nahi or us hockey stick ke do tukde ho jate hai

L2 haka baka hoke kabhi raj ko or kabhi apne hat me pakde adhe hockey stick ko dekh raha tha


Magar itne me wo baj nahi aaya or us adhe hockey stick se raj ke sar pe marne wala hota hai ki raj apne hat se stick ko pakad liya or ek kick uske pet me mara wo waha se 10 fit dur ja gira or wahi pe behos ho gya


ye dekh jaha sare students heran the wahi L1.L3.L4 thoda dar gaye magar peeche nahi hate


Ab L1,L3 dono ek sath raj ko marne ke liye aage badha par raj tezi se unke taraf badha or L1 ko ek jordar thapad lagya is se L1 ke liye sab mute ho gya use kuch sunai nahi diya or wo jor jor se chikhne laga or behos hogya


uski chekh sun kar sab ki ruh kamp gayi or L4 ki to phat ke hat me aagai or wo waha se bhag ne laga magar raj ne use pakad liya magar tabhi principal waha agya


Principal - ye sab kya ho raha he


Principal ko dekh kar L4 bhag ke unke pass gya


L4 - sir ye ladka bina bat ke mujhe or mere dosto ko mar raha hai dekhiye sir isne mere friends ki kya hal kar diya hai


Principal - (Raj se) tum kon ho or yaha kya kar rahe ho

Raj - sir maine naya admission liya hai


Principal - or pahle din aate hi ye sab kar diya tumhe mai ise waqt yaha se nikala jata hai


Raj - par sir


Magar principal kuch nahi suna or waha se chala gya


Phir raj apne papa ko phone kiya or collage ki sari bat bata di


Principal apne office tak pahucha hi nahi tha ki uska mobile baj utha or wo mobile pe bat karne laga ki uske chehre ke bhaw badalne laga or wo ulte par raj ke pass aaya or bola


Principal - beta mujhe maf kardo apne papa ko kaho mujhe collage se mat nikale


Raj - pahle aap agar mari bat sun lete to ye nobat hi nahi aati aapne phaisla sunane se pahle dusre paksh ke bat to sunleni chahiye sir aap mujhse bade hai ise aap mera updesh nahi ap ye meri ek binti samajhega or aap ki job ko kuch nahi hoga sir inhe un ladko ke taraf isara karte hua sudharne ka ek moka jarur dijiyega sir ab hum chalte he class ka time ho gya hai


Raj or biswa waha se jane lage to principal ne unhe roka


Principal - me bhi tumhare sath chalta hu


Phir principal, raj or biswa class ke or chal pade or unke piche wo ladki bhi


Class ke samne pahuch kar principal sir pahle ander gye or phir in logo ko bhi aane ka isara kiya biswa or wo ladki apne apne sit pe jake bath gye magar principal ne raj ko rok liya or raj ko apna intro dene ko kaha raj ne apna intro diya or apne sit pe jake baith gaya


Phir principal sir class me jo teacher the un se kuch bat ke or or chale gye


kuch samay bad 1st class khatam ho gya or ise tarah 4 classes khatam ho gya or wo ladki aj pure time bas raj ko hi dekh rahi thi or raj jab uski taraf dekhta to apni najre chura leti thi


phir lunch break ho gya raj or biswa canteen me chale gye or wo ladki bhi un ke peche chali gai


Raj or biswa ek table pe baith gye wo ladki bhi unke paas gayi or raj ke samne gayi or rote hue boli


Ladki - apka bahut bahut sukriya apne jo mere liye kiya or kal mandir me jo hua uske liye mai bahut sarminda hu mujhe maf kar dijiye


Raj - ye rona band kijiye maine apko maf kiya yaha baithiye


phir raj ne pani ka glass uthake use pani pila ya wo ladki thoda sant hui


Phir wo Ladki boli


Ladki - mera nam Sikha hai

raj or biswa ne apna apna intro diya

Sikha - kya tum log mera dost banoge

Raj or Biswa - kyu nahi


Phir sab hath milate he phir lunch bhi karte hai


Break khatam hone ke bad sab apne class me chale jate hai or class chalu ho jate hai aise hi aaj ka collage khatam ho jata hai or sab apne apne ghar chale jate hai


Raj ghar aake so jata hai sham ko uthta hai tab tak uske papa bhi agye the or raj unse kuch bate karta hai



phir rat ko dinner karta hai or thoda time books khol ke padhai karta he phir so jata hai
 
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agli subha raj utha or ghar me bane gym me workout karne laga (ye jym raman ne banya tha raj ke lea) 1hour gym me pasina bahane ke bad raj apne room me gya or fresh hoke room se bahar nikla to uske papa garden me baithe newspaper padhte huye mile raj unke pass gya

Raj - good morning papa


Raman - good morning beta tum aaj se tum car se collage jaoge woh dekho tumhari car


Raj car ko ek najar dekhta hai bahut hi sunder farari car thi phir bolta hai


Raj - papa iski kya jarurat thi mai bike se chala jata


Raman - tum Raman Ray ke bete ho or Raman Ray ka beta car se collage jayega bike se nahi


Raj or kya bolta uske pass bolne ke liye or kuch nahi tha


phir dono bap bete ek sath nasta karte hai or raman chala jata hai office or raj nikal jata hai collage ke liye biswa ke ghar


Biswa jab nayi car dekh kar pahle to khus hota hai fhir bolta hai


Biswa - tune parso hi nayi bike kharide thi aaj ye nayi car


Raj - are aisa kuch nahi bike papa ne di thi or car bhi papa ne hi di hai


Phir dono nayi car me nikal jate hai collage or collage me toh sare log bas inki car ko hi dekh rahe the


Dono car parking me laga ke nikal jate hai canteen ke taraf kyuki class suru hone me abhi time tha


dono canteen ne jake ek table pe baith jate hai or tabhi sikha bhi waha ajate hai or inke pass aakar baith jati hai or majak me raj se bolti hai


Sikha - kya baat hai nayi car woh bhi farari collage ki ladkio ko impress karne ka bada acha taiyari ki hai

Raj - nahi nahi aise koi baat nahi papa ne gift ki hai or unhone force ki to maine le li


Ye bat sun ke sikha thoda sa udas ho jati hai ye baat raj ko pata chal jata hai magar kuch nahi bolta aise he kuch der bat karte hai phir tino class me chale jate hai


lunch time me biswa ko uske dad ka phone aata aur woh raj ko bata ke chala jata hai ki use dad ne use jaruri kam se bulaya hai

phir raj or sikha class me chale jate hai aur isi tarah sare classes khatam ho jate hai raj apni ghar ki taraf nikal jate hai


Raj ko collage ke bahar sikha dikh jati hai raj uske pas car rok deta hai or car se utar ke sikha se bolta hai


Raj - mai tumhe ghar chod du


Pahle sikha mana karti hai phir man jati hai raj driving sit pe baith jata hai or sikha uske baju me


Raj driving karne lagta he phir sikha se puchta hai


Raj - Sikha tumhara ghar kanha he


Sikha - mera ghar nahi hai


Raj - aisa kese ho sakta hai sab ka ghar hota hai


Sikha - mai ek anath hu


Raj - sorry maine janbujh ke nahi kaha


Sikha - its ok


Raj - ab tum rahti kaha ho


Sikha - pahle me anath asram me rahti thi ab mujhe school me se scolarship mila to abhi hostel me rahti hu


Raj ko raste me ek coffee shop dikhta hai


Raj - chalo ek ek coffee pete hai tumhara mood fresh ho jayega


Sikha - ok


Dono coffee shop me chale jate hai or ek table pe baith jate hai raj coffee ka order de deta hai phir sikha bolti hai


Sikha - tumhe to mere bare me sab kuch jan liya ab apne bareme bhi kuch batao koi gf bagera hai ke nahi


Itne me coffee aagayi or coffee pete pete raj ne jabab diya


Raj - mere pass aj se 2mahine tak ki hi memory hai ek accident me apna yadast kho baitha hu agar usse pahle koi gf hogi to mujhe nahi pata


Sikha - ye to bahut bura hua tumhare sath magar tum chinta mat karo ache logo ke sath kabhi bura nahi hota dekhna bahut jald he tumhari yadast bapas ajayge


Itne me coffee khatam ho jati he raj bill pay karta he or sikha ko leke car me baith jata he phir sikha ko le ke uske hostel chala jata hai or phir sikha se bolta hai


Raj - kalse collage time pe ready rahna


Sikha - kyu


Raj - kalse tum mere sath collage jaogyi or mai tumhari koi bat nahi sunuga agar tum mujhe apna dost manti ho to kal subha collage time pe ready rahogi


Itna kah kar raj waha se chala jata hai or sikha use dekhti rah jati hai


Raj ghar jata hai apne papa se thodi der bat karta hai or dinner karta hai phir thodi der padhta hai or so jata hai
 

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agli subha teno raj, biswa or sikha teeno ek sath collage gye


aise ye teeno bahut ache friends ban gye sikha man hi man raj se pyar karne lagi thi or din ba din uska pyar badhta hi ja raha tha idher raj use bas apna sab se acha friend man raha tha


aise hi 9 mahine bit gye ek din college me sports tournament ka announcement hua is turnament me india ke top 5 collages bhag lenge tournament abhi 15 din baki tha or 4 din bad selection hona tha


Raj boxing me select hogya or sikha ka tennis me ho gya magar biswa ne kisi me bhag nahi liya


ek din teeno canteen me baithe the tabhi sikha ne pucha


Sikha - biswa tumne sports me hissa kyu nahi liya


Biswa - are tum dono ne hissa liya hai na to mere liye itna hi kafi hai agar maine hissa le liya toh tum logo ke liye talli kon bajayga


Raj - are isse to puchna he bekar hai mane bhi yahi sab pucha tha isse to isne kya jabab diya janti ho

bola ki agar mai sports me hissa lunga to sare madels mujhe hi milenge to maine socha ki agar sare medals mujhe he milenge toh dusre students ka dil tut jayega to maine un par daya aa gayi to maine hissa nahi liya


Sikha - han yar agar isne hissa liya to hame medal nahi milega ye to tune hamare uper bahut bada ahsaan kar diya


Sikha ne itna hi kaha tha ke raj ki hasi nikal gayi or sath me biswa or sikha bhi hasne lage


Ise tarah kab din nikal gaya pata he nahi chala ab sports tournament ko sirf 2din rah gaye hai tournament pune me hona tha jaha raj ka ghar tha


aaj sab ko pune jana tha kyuki kal tournament tha


Raj ke papa ne raj, sikha or biswa ke liye flight ke tickets book karva diya tha


teno flight me pune pahunch gaye or hotel me raj ne do room book kiya tha raj or biswa ek room me or sikha liye ek room


teeno hotel pahunch kar sab apne apne room me chale jate hai


Agli subah se tournament start ho jata hai sikha semi final me bahar ho jati hai magar raj boxing ke final me pahunch jata ai


Sikha bhi bahut khus thi raj ke liye woh soch rahi thi ye tournament khatam hone ke baad woh raj ko apni feelings ke baare me batayegi


Raj ke against jo tha woh 2 sal se ye mukabala jeetata aa raha tha
uska nam rahul tha or woj bhi raj ke kamine bap ke dost ka beta tha




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