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Super duper update Bhai. Agle update ka bohot besabri se intezaar hai. Poora khel badalnewala hei agla update. Story zabardast hei. Aur aapke tarike se likiye. Keep going on Bhai.
bhai bahot hi galt likh rahe ho yaar..gajendra ne apni hawas ke liye ravi ka pariwar ujad diya..ab shakuntala bhi gajendra ka sath de rahi hai..story sach me galat direction me chali gayi yaar..!! ab shakuntala khud iss harami gajendra ko rok rahi hai..kaisi aurat hai yaar yeh..uska pati jail me sad raha hai woh bhi sirf iss haramjade gajendra ki wajah se..khud ka beta dusre room me behosh pada hai lekin isko fikar nahi hai..yaar yeh shakuntala bhi mann se uatr gayi..ravi ko jab uski maa ki asliyat pata chalegi toh bichare ka dil tut jana hai..shakuntala ko khud ke bete pe nahi iss haramjade par bharosa hai..ab gajendra shakuntala ko rameshwar se chhinana chahta hai..muze lagta hai ravi ab gajendra ko maar hi de..bhai aapne villain ko jo strong dikhaya hai wha tak thik tha lekin ravi ke character ke sath jo nainsafi ki hai woh bahot galat kiya hai..ab kuchh kehne ko hi nahi bacha hai..yeh shakuntala ravi ki soch ko galat bol rahi hai lekin woh kya kar gayi..usne bhi apne pati ko dhoka de diya..ab kis muh se apne pati ke samne jayegi..ab ravi shakuntala ka sach janega ki usne gajendra ke sath muh kaala kiya toh woh bhi apni maa se dur chala jayega..aur jab iss gajendra ke ghar me ek rakhel bankar rahegi tab isko iski aukat pata chalegi aur gajendra ne apni hawas ke liye uske pariwar ke sath kya kya kiya yeh jaan jayegi tab iss shakuntala ka khud ka dil marne ko karega..!! bhai ab ravi iss harami gajendra aur apni hawasi maa shakuntala dono ko saja de..bhai ab toh yaar ravi ko action me laao yaar..ravi gajendra ki beti ko chode, gajendra ki biwiyon ko bhi chode aur harami gajendra ki asliyat shakuntala ke samne lekar aaye..lekin shakuntala ko maaf na kare kabhi bhi..bas gajendra ko aisi saja de ki uska lund zindagi bhar khada na ho aur woh zindagi bhar tadapta rahe..bhai yeh toh request pri kar do yaar..bhai please yaar jaise gajendra ne ravi ke ghar ki aurat par hath dala hai waise hi ravi uske ghar ki auraton ko chode..bhai ab toh ravi ko strong banao aur woh badla le uss harami gajendra se..please bhai aisa toh ho sakta hai ya aap sirf ek tarfa story hi likhne wale ho..aur bhai reply toh do yaar..!!Next
Maa ko bistar pe chod raha tha Gajendar Aur Maa Chudai ki Luft utha rahi thi Ab unko birodh karna bekar Laaga kyun ki unko bhi chudne ka shauq chadhne Lagi thi
Gajendar mote Kale Lund ko Jadh tak nahi Ghusa paraha tha Maa ki Gori moti Jung Se uski kale jung takrane Laga
Gajendar: Shakuntala Jara ruko Main Aise pura de nahi parahu Andar Bolkar Maa ki phuli chut se Apna mota kala Lund nikal liya
Maa Gajendar ki bato ki koi jawab nahi de rahi thi Sirf murti Aisa Leti thi bistar pe
shakuntala Aao Jara Bistar ki kone pe khade khade Karlu,
Maa ki koi response nahi mila toh Gajendar unki Gand ki dono side ki Nitamb pakad ke Khichta huwa Bistar ki Side pe Le Aaya Aur khud Maa ki barabar khada hogaya
Gajendar
_ Jara isse(Sari saya) ko nikal deta hoon dikkat horahi hain Jara Apni kamar ko uthao toh shakuntala
Maa chup thi nahi kamar utha rahi thi Aur nahi gajendar ki bato ki jawab hi derahi thi
Gajendar Maa ki nangi pitho ke niche se apni kala hato ko ghusakar chadh diya upar Aur dusri ek hato se Sari ki fas kholkar Saya samet niche Pao ki taraf se Nikal diya
Maa ki Gori Moti badan Nangi bed pe padhi Rahi Aab Gajendar unko puri Bhog karne wala tha . Papa ke baad koi dusri mard unki jism ka Luft uthane wala tha Aur wo tha Haiwan Gajendar hi
Maa ki dono moti pao ko Dono taraf Modh kar Gajendar mote Lund ko phuli (chut) pe Ghusane ke liye halka jhuk sa Gaya Aur kaha
G: Shakuntala Sach tumhari jaisi Aurat ko ish Hal main pana Kavi socha nahi tha
Maa: kyun main koi pari hoo Aap Aisa kyun bol rahe hain
Yeh Rangeen chudai ki waqt maa ki pehla sabd tha Gajendar ki sath Nangi Halat pe
Gajendar Maa ki phuli chut pe mote Lund ko disha dete huye char kar ghusane Laaga
G: Sach main shakuntala tum husn ki malika hoon
Maa: Apki dono biwi se kya jada sundor hoon
Maa ki Jism main Hulchul machne Laga Etne kala Mote Lund ko Apni Andar lene ka dikkat ke sath Jismani sukh ka phuljhari unki maan pe behne Laga
Gajendar Maa ki chudai Ki Raftar jada karte huye unki chut ki Jartak mote Lund ko andar bahar karne laga Aur begum sahiba bistar par chat pat karne Lagi
Gajendar: dono biwi toh kya ish sahar ki tum sabse sundar Aurat hoo jo Abhi meri niche Leti chudwa Rahi hain ye meri kismat nahi toh kya hain shakuntala tumi kaho
Maa: Ahista kahiye BagaL kamre pe Ravi soya Hain na Sunlega
Gajendar ne Maa ki dono badi badi Gori Gori Doodh Dono hatose Tatolta huya mote Lund ki Shot marne laga. Ganedar ki chudai ki jor jhatke ne maa ki sar Anand se daye baye mudhne lagi
Fir
Gajendar ne maa ki kano pe dhere se kaha
Gajendar: Ravi ko bhi toh yahi chahiye thi tumhrai khuli jism
Maa ne Gajendar ki bato ko sunte hi sharam Aur Gusse se Aur Laal hogai Aur boli
Maa; Kabse jo usse ye gandi Laat Lagi bhanak bhi Nahi mili thi mujhe wo toh Acha huwa Apne pata Laga Liya tha time par nahi toh Anarth hojati
Gajendar ne jor jor se chod raha tha maa ko aur bato main uljha kar Apni Gulam bana raha tha
G: shakuntala tum Naraz na ho toh main tumhari Ish Komal Hoth ko chum sakta hoon karte waqt
Maa: ispe Anumati Lene ki kya jarorat hain ye pura jism pe apka haq hain
Gajendar ne Maa ki Hoth pe apna joban ghusakar Ras chum raha tha Aur thapa thap Pelbhi raha tha kya Najara tha Gajendar k liye ye
Maa ne apni dono hato ko Gajendar ki Kale pith par bandh ke usse sehlane Lagi Aur Idhar Gajendar Tez raftar se shot Laga ta huwa Maa ki Gori badan par Gir gaya Apna kaam ras maa ki phuli chut pe bahata huya
Maa ne Gajendar ko uthne ko kaha toh Gajendar ki mote kale Lund abhi bhi khada hi tha Maa ki samne
Maa: Aap isse saaf kyun nahi karte (Gajendar ki Lund ki Bal ko dekhkar kahi)
Gajendar: Time kaha milta hain utna
Maa: insab ke liye time nikal na padh ta hain Gandagi thori na rakhi jati hain jism pe
Gajendar; Lo ish kale sher(Lund) ko poch doh apni sari se
Maa ne apni Sari se Gajnedar ki Lund pe Lagi virya pochdi
Gajendar aur maa dono thakan ki mare sogai ek dusre ko baho par Lekar
Subha Gajendar Aur maa uthi toh maa ki chehra mayus toh thi par wo maan pe kuch aur hi than Li thi Aab Gajendar k liye Lekin Gajendar Aab koi Aur khel khelne wala tha
Gajendar ne maa se kaha
G: shakuntala Raat pe main hosh kho baitha tha ho sake toh mujhe shama kardena Main tumhari aur rameswar ki beach chala Aaya kanta bankar
Main hamesa ke liye jaraha hoon tumse door bolkar Gajendar uthne Wala tha ki
Maa ne gajendar ki hato ko pakad liya
Maa: Rote huye kahi Aap kahi nahi jaiyega Meri suhag Ujadh kar apne jo vughtan kiye hain wo apkohi Sudhar na hoga Sayad meri kismat pe yahi likha tha
Gajendar ne maa ko dono kandhe pakad kar kaha
Gajendar: Soch Lo shakuntala Fir toh main rameswar ko Hargis bardast nahi karunga tumhare sath dekh kar ..
Arey bhai Ravi padhai ke liye foreign jayega. Rameshwar ji jail se chut jayenge.bhai bahot hi galt likh rahe ho yaar..gajendra ne apni hawas ke liye ravi ka pariwar ujad diya..ab shakuntala bhi gajendra ka sath de rahi hai..story sach me galat direction me chali gayi yaar..!! ab shakuntala khud iss harami gajendra ko rok rahi hai..kaisi aurat hai yaar yeh..uska pati jail me sad raha hai woh bhi sirf iss haramjade gajendra ki wajah se..khud ka beta dusre room me behosh pada hai lekin isko fikar nahi hai..yaar yeh shakuntala bhi mann se uatr gayi..ravi ko jab uski maa ki asliyat pata chalegi toh bichare ka dil tut jana hai..shakuntala ko khud ke bete pe nahi iss haramjade par bharosa hai..ab gajendra shakuntala ko rameshwar se chhinana chahta hai..muze lagta hai ravi ab gajendra ko maar hi de..bhai aapne villain ko jo strong dikhaya hai wha tak thik tha lekin ravi ke character ke sath jo nainsafi ki hai woh bahot galat kiya hai..ab kuchh kehne ko hi nahi bacha hai..yeh shakuntala ravi ki soch ko galat bol rahi hai lekin woh kya kar gayi..usne bhi apne pati ko dhoka de diya..ab kis muh se apne pati ke samne jayegi..ab ravi shakuntala ka sach janega ki usne gajendra ke sath muh kaala kiya toh woh bhi apni maa se dur chala jayega..aur jab iss gajendra ke ghar me ek rakhel bankar rahegi tab isko iski aukat pata chalegi aur gajendra ne apni hawas ke liye uske pariwar ke sath kya kya kiya yeh jaan jayegi tab iss shakuntala ka khud ka dil marne ko karega..!! bhai ab ravi iss harami gajendra aur apni hawasi maa shakuntala dono ko saja de..bhai ab toh yaar ravi ko action me laao yaar..ravi gajendra ki beti ko chode, gajendra ki biwiyon ko bhi chode aur harami gajendra ki asliyat shakuntala ke samne lekar aaye..lekin shakuntala ko maaf na kare kabhi bhi..bas gajendra ko aisi saja de ki uska lund zindagi bhar khada na ho aur woh zindagi bhar tadapta rahe..bhai yeh toh request pri kar do yaar..bhai please yaar jaise gajendra ne ravi ke ghar ki aurat par hath dala hai waise hi ravi uske ghar ki auraton ko chode..bhai ab toh ravi ko strong banao aur woh badla le uss harami gajendra se..please bhai aisa toh ho sakta hai ya aap sirf ek tarfa story hi likhne wale ho..aur bhai reply toh do yaar..!!
are bhai maine jo starting se chal rahi story ke hisab se comment kiya hai..mai koi pressure nahi daal raha hu..mai bas itna batane ki koshish kar raha hu ki johny bhai ne second part ke naam pas iss harami gajendra ke hisab se story likhi jo ki sahi nahi hai..!! maine story pehle se padhi hai..aap shayad first part padhte toh meri baat samajhte lekin aap samajh nahi rahe hai..!! mai koi pressure nahi daal raha hu..mai apne dil ki baat rakh raha hu..!! bhai maine yeh bhi bola tha ki ravi aur shakuntala ko nahi dikhana toh shakuntala aur harami gajendra ka mat dikhana..kyunki gajendra saja deserve karta hai na ki maja..yaha pe kahani incest section me chal rahi hai isliye maine ravi aur shakuntala ka bola tha..!! lekin ab toh mai bol raha hu ki ravi uss harami gajendra se badla le uske ghar ki saari aurton ko chod kar..iss gajendra ki beti ko prenant kare..gajendra ko apni hawas ke chakkar me aisi saja mile ki uski family barad ho..sirf ek shakuntala ko thokane ke chakkar me ravi usse aisa badla le ki uski family tabah ho aur yeh harami gajendra marna chahe lekin mar na paye..aur yeh shakuntala toh ab mere dil se utar gayi hai jo khud ke pati ko dhoka de gayi..mai toh chahta hu iss aurat ko bhi saja mile..!! ab bhai yeh mere dil ki baat hai maine rakh di..aapko isme problem nahi honi chahiye..maine writer ke liye kabhi kuchh baat kahi hai aap hi bata dijiye muze..!!Arey bhai Ravi padhai ke liye foreign jayega. Rameshwar ji jail se chut jayenge.
Chutke unko kisise set karwakar unko raste se hata denge Ravi foreign me set hokar mast ladkiyan chodega. India aana bhul jayega. Idhar shakuntala gajender koi pativrata biwi banegi. Pregnent hoke gajender ko ladka aur waris degi. Gajender khushi se sab kuch bhulakar uske sath aur teen char bache paida karega. Aur happy ending.
Ye meri thinking hei. Story Aisa nehi hei. Aisa mei bhi kehke Johny Bhai pe pressure daal sakta tha. Per nehi.
Unki story hei. Woh likhe. Unka mind bohot achha hei isliye sab pad rahe hein. Plz sab kuch incest nehi rehta. Story ki tarif na kar sake toh ulta mat boliye. Aapko apna thought Dene ka haq hei bolke writer ke upar Aisa hona chahiye nehi toh story galat hei mat boleyega.
Toda adultery story samaj ke support dijiye.
I would never have commented Iike all those who talked rubbish after these updates. I would support Johnny Bhai if story turned to be incest and against Gajender. Think about writer whose efforts and time makes good stories.
Good luck Johnny Bhai. Fantastic story. Plz come with such super stories after this too. And plz write one incest story too for AAG bro.
Right brother. Writer should write the way he wants to write and tell the story. Story मैं adaultry रेहता है तो मजा आता है वर्ना इस xforum मैं बस incest ही bhara pada है |Arey bhai Ravi padhai ke liye foreign jayega. Rameshwar ji jail se chut jayenge.
Chutke unko kisise set karwakar unko raste se hata denge Ravi foreign me set hokar mast ladkiyan chodega. India aana bhul jayega. Idhar shakuntala gajender koi pativrata biwi banegi. Pregnent hoke gajender ko ladka aur waris degi. Gajender khushi se sab kuch bhulakar uske sath aur teen char bache paida karega. Aur happy ending.
Ye meri thinking hei. Story Aisa nehi hei. Aisa mei bhi kehke Johny Bhai pe pressure daal sakta tha. Per nehi.
Unki story hei. Woh likhe. Unka mind bohot achha hei isliye sab pad rahe hein. Plz sab kuch incest nehi rehta. Story ki tarif na kar sake toh ulta mat boliye. Aapko apna thought Dene ka haq hei bolke writer ke upar Aisa hona chahiye nehi toh story galat hei mat boleyega.
Toda adultery story samaj ke support dijiye.
I would never have commented Iike all those who talked rubbish after these updates. I would support Johnny Bhai if story turned to be incest and against Gajender. Think about writer whose efforts and time makes good stories.
Good luck Johnny Bhai. Fantastic story. Plz come with such super stories after this too. And plz write one incest story too for AAG bro.