1) gajendra ek sal ka pati hai to usko romance, boob pressing, kissing, nude dekhana chal jayega but sex chudai ho ye jaruri nhi.
2)Ravi ko pata hai gajendra ke plan ka. Yadi ghar me rah kr bhi apni mom ko nhi bacha paya to hero ka kya matlab.
3)Shakuntala ke sarifat ka hoga. Yadi jhute pyar me fasakr gajendra apni hawas mita leta hai to Shakuntala ke itna sarif hona mujhe achha nhi lag rha.
4)bhai story me incest adult hai iska matlab ye nahi ki story me sex hi dikhana jaruri hai story bina sex ke bhi achha hota hai.
But aap jaisa chahe waisa likhe. Hum reader to bolte hi rhenge.
Waiting for next update
Mai bhi agree hu same aisa hi hona chahiye ....
5) hero ko bhi chaal chalni chahiye...story ko aapne hero ki maa per focus rakha achi baat h ... lekin jisse baat shuru hui uska b role hona chahiye ...hero ko b to badla lena chahiye ....aap bhi jaante h har vyakti revenge chahta h ...agar aap sakuntla ka gajendra k sath sex karwa doge tab story ka kuch mahatva nhi reh jayega ..isko bas vahi log padhenge jinhr sirf sex se matlab h ...
6) gajendra dheere dheere jo kr rha h sahi h ...lekin aap dekho hero mutthi b nhi maarta ...to isme hero ka role kuch khas nhi h ...aapko story kalpnik tareeke se likhni chahiyr ...jis base se liya h use padhke readers ko dukh hua h ...imagine krke dekhte h to gajendra villain h aur hum chahte h ki vo apne mansoobe me kamyab na ho ...
Baaki aapki marji ...mere akele k story chhodne se koi fark nhi padega aapko ...lekin jo b koi hero ko padhke ya dekhke chalta h to vaha khud ko leke chalta h imagine krta h ...yahi incest h ....hai to galat hi lekin phir b hum padhte h ....to story ab aapke hath me h
