Mein koi expert to nhi par apna opinion de raha hun. To koi hurt nhi hona.
Starting story pura focus gajendra aur shakuntala par thi jaha tak aapne update delete kiya. Story uss time 90% adultery aur 10% incest thi. Jisse ye saaf pata chalta hai ki agar story bich me stop nhi hoti to 100% guarantee thi ki at the end of story shakuntala gajendra ki "slave" ban jati ya yun kahun to "gulam". Aur ravi "cuckold" hi reh jata.
Iss story ke adhiktar viewer's adultery reader's the. Maine bhi starting ke kuch update padh kar is story ko chor dia tha kyunki mein ek incest reader hun.
Lekin jab writer ne poll karwaya ki end me shakuntala kiski hogi to shayad writer ne bhi expect nhi kiya hoga ki ye ravi ki side jayega, may be iss karan story stop ho gayi ya writer ka kuch personal problem ho. Haa agar ye story ka prefix adultery hota to guarantee ye poll gajendra ki side hota.
Ab writer ne iss story ko ek tarah se restart kiya hai. Lekin abhi tak ye story incest plot se kafi dur hai. Shakuntala ravi ki tabhi hogi jab uske man me apne bete ke liye samarpan ya pati wala pyar janam lega jo ki mujhe nhi lagta writer karne wala hai. Gajendra shakuntala ko asani se gulam bna sakta hai chahe jabardasti ya pyaar se. Par ab ye jabardasti hi ho sakta hai.
Writer khud ye information de raha hai ki galat ko rokne ke liye ravi bhi galat kar raha hai. Isse se ye kaha ja sakta hai writer shakuntala ko kabhi bhi ravi ka nhi karega(ye mera khyaal hai baki writer jane).
Adultery Viewer's ki demand yahi hai ki gajendra aur shakuntala ke beech sex ho aur incest viewer's ki demand hai ravi x shakuntala. Jaha tak maine dekha hai writer adultery viewer's se jyada influence hota hai(personal opinion
).
To conclusion kuch iss tarah hai, chahe koi tragedy ya mind game ho dono me result bahut had tak aisa hona
1. Shakuntala kisi ki bhi nhi hogi aur jaisa story ka title hai "fir usi ne wapas... (Mujhe jail me daal diya
) " Aur gajendra ko bhi sabak kuch na kuch mil jayega ya wo bhi jail chala jayega ravi ke saath. Shayad shakuntala wapas apne pati ke saath rehne lagegi ya jo usne galti ki hai uske liye wo khud apne pati ko chor degi ya pati ise chor dega.
2.Gajendra aur shakuntala ka ek ya do baar sex encounter hoga aur ravi cuckold reh jayega. Fir ravi iss ka badla gajendra se lega ya uske parivar se aur shakuntala apne parivaar ke saath wapas rahne lagegi khushi khushi ya dukhi pata nhi. Bahut chance hai gajendra shakuntala ka r*p* ya blackmail kar chodega.
Ye tha mera personal opinion, par mujhe aisa kahi se bh inhi lag raha ki ravi aur shakuntala ke bich kuch hoga jiske liye mujhe bura jarur lagega.
As a reader only I hope ki writer gajendra aur shakuntala ke bich kuch na karaye aur shakuntala ravi ki ho jaye
.
Please writer try to end the story with ravi x shakuntala
.
Baki aapki story hai jo chahe wo kare kyunki ye bas ek fantasy hai. ☺