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Aapka sabse favourite female character?

  • Kajal

  • Rashmika

  • Anu

  • Kriti

  • Krithi

  • Rashi

  • Anupama

  • Sriya

  • Shivangi

  • Divya

  • Shreya

  • Nadhiya

  • Ravina

  • Nayanthara

  • Anushka

  • Trisha, Sri Leela, Hansika, Pooja, Amala, Twinkle

  • Seetha, Pavitra, Diviya, Keerthy

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[God's Wish]

Recap: In the previous update humne padha tha ki Kalpana ne apne bete Sagar ko thik karne ke liye Arjun se ek deal karne ka decision liya tha. Shivangi pichhle kuchh dino se andar hi andar ro rahi thi par kyon sirf Shivangi ko hi pata tha.

Now Next: >>>

Aaj Sunday tha Kriti jaldi jaldi uth kar fresh ho gayi.

Kriti kitchen mein gayi jahan Shivangi sabke liye breakfast 🥞 ready kar rahi thi.


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Kriti: Bhabhi jaldi se fresh ho jaiye hum aaj hi anath aashram chalenge.

Shivangi: Thik hai Kriti main nahane ja rahi hoon tab tak tum Arjun ko call kar yahan bula lo.

Kriti: Thik hai bhabhi main Arjun ko call kar bula leti hoon.


[[Kriti calls Arjun]]

Arjun: Hello mam!

Kriti: Hello Arjun!!

Arjun: Kahiye mam kya baat hai jo itni subah subah aapne call kiya hai??

Kriti: Arjun, Shivangi bhabhi ko Iron city jana hai aur hum dono tumhe sath lekar jana chahte hain.

Arjun: Thik hai mam aap dono ready rahe main 1 ghanta ke andar aa jaunga.

Kriti: Okay Love, bye.


[[Call Disconnected]]

***

Arjun: Chachi mujhe Iron city jana hoga Shivangi bhabhi aur Kriti mam ke sath.

Kajal: Okay! Tumhare sath Rashmika bhi jayegi tum akele nahi jaoge.

Arjun: Okay!! Mausi aap bhi ready ho jaiye main ready hone ja raha hoon.

Rashmika: Thik hai Arjun main bas 30 minutes mein ready hokar aati hoon.

Arjun: Thik hai mausi.

***


[[After One Hour]]

Arjun aur Rashmika dono Kriti ke ghar par the. Wahan par Kriti aur Shivangi bhi ready hi the.

Sithara: Arjun bete sabka khayal rakhna.

Arjun: Ji maa.

Kriti: Mom hum sham tak wapas aa jayenge.

Sithara: Thik hai achhe se jana.

Kriti: Ji mom mere sath Arjun aur Rashmika mausi bhi sath mein hai, hum apna khayal rakhenge.

Wahin Sri Leela dur se Arjun ko dekh kar khush thi ki aaj Sunday ko bhi use Arjun ka darshan ho gaya.

***

Rashmika car drive kar rahi thi Arjun uske bagal mein baitha tha.

Kriti aur Shivangi dono pichhe baithe the.

Kriti: Bhabhi ab hum Amma ji aur bachho ke pass ja rahe hain ab to apne face par smile 😊laiye.

Shivangi ne apne face par ek fake smile le aaya jise sirf wo hi samajh pa rahi thi.

Car apne speed se badh rahi thi par Shivangi khamosh thi pahle ki tahah uske face par koi chamak nahi thi, jaise pahle hua karti thi jab wo anath aashram baccho se aur Amm ji se milne jaya karti thi, jo sath baithi Kriti easily padh pa rahi thi.

Kriti: Kya hua bhabhi aapke face par koi excitement najar nahi aa rahi hai aaj, kya hua hai koi pareshani hai kya, kabhi kabhi maine notice kiya hai ki aapke face par chinta ki lakir(line) chha jati hai aur phir thodi der baad aap normal behave karti hain.

Shivangi: Kuchh nahi Kriti wo aaj kal mujhe thoda achha feel nahi hota hai kabhi kabhi par pata nahi hai wo kya hai???

Kriti: Relax bhabhi kabhi kabhi aisa hota hai sayad aapko bhaiya ki jarurat feel ho rahi hai lagta hai, lagta hai Arjun aapki tension ko dur sakta hai yadi aap chahe to, main aapki help kar sakti hoon.

[Kriti ne dhire se Shivangi ke kaan mein kaha jisse Arjun aur Rashmika ko sunayi na de.]

Pahle jahan Kriti ke aisi baat se Shivangi sharma jaya karti thi, lekin aaj usne Kriti ke is baat par koi reaction nahi diya aur na hi uske chehre par koi bhav aaya jisse Kriti ko kuchh bhi samajh aaye.

Kriti: Kya hua bhabhi boliye na Arjun aapko chahiye kya???


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Shivangi: Just shut up Kriti I don't want to talk to you anything right now.

[Kriti ko apne kano par believe nahi hua ki uski bhabhi ne aaj use chup rahne ke liye kaha jo hamesha usse baat karne ke liye excited rahti thi.]

Kriti ki eyes ke charon aur aansu 😢 😢 ki bunde chhalak aayi.

Jab Shivangi ne Kriti ki aankh mein dekha to use samajh aa gaya ki abhi abhi usne kya kah diya hai??

Shivangi: I am sorry Kriti I didn't mean that, I am just not feeling well for last 11 days and today my heart is burning of some unwanted sensation. Aisa lag raha hai jaise mera koi bahut hi kimti chij mujhse dur ja raha hai.

Kriti: Okay bhabhi par aapko kya hua hai aap mujhe batati kyon nahi hain, aapko meri kasam aap mujhe bata dijiye ki kya hua hai aapko??

Shivangi jo ab tak last 11 days se apni feeling ko chhupa rahi thi ab aur na rok payi aur usne Kriti ke samne sab kuchh confess karna start kar diya.

Shivagi: Kriti Maine last 18 days se tumhare bhaiya se baat nahi kiya hai.

Kriti: Kyon kya hua bhaiya ko ve aapse naraj hain kya?? mujhse, Leela se aur mom se to daily baat karte hain.

Shivangi: Nahi Kriti tumhare bhaiya mujhse naraj nahi hain aur na hi main unse naraj hoon.

Kriti: Phir kya baat hai bhabhi ki aap dono ne last 18 days se baat nahi kiya hai??

Shivangi: Mujhe nahi pata na mujhe call karte hain aur na hi mera call receive karte hain.

Kriti: Par bhaiya aisa kaise kar sakte hain bhabhi wo aapko kabhi naraj nahi karte hain aur yahan aapka call na receive kar rahe hain aur na call kar rahe hain, ye impossible hai jis par believe karna bahut kathin hai.

Shivangi: Mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai Kriti??

Kriti: Kis baat ka darr bhabhi???

[Shivangi apni feelings ko share karne hi ja rahi thi ki aage se Arjun ki aawaz aayi, mam destination aa chuka hai hum apne manjil par pahuch chuke hain.


[Destination Arrived]

***

Shivangi: Okay baad mein batati to tumhe, pahle andar chalte hain.

Sabhi anath aashram ke andar gaye.

Sabhi bacche Shivangi se mil kar khush the. Sabhi bacche Kriti ko bhi jante the aur didi bola karte the.

Jab Shivangi ne baccho ko bataya ki Arjun, Kriti ke hone wale husband hain to sabhi Arjun ko jija jija pukarne lage.

Arjun ne aisa koi bhi scene expect nahi kiya tha.

Anath aashram ki Amma jinka naam Roopa tha sabhi ko ekant mein le gayi.

***

Shivangi aur Roopa dono akele ek kamre mein thi.

Roopa: Kya hua Shivangi beti aaj tum bina kisi information diye huye aa gayi aur aaj pahli baar bahut sari chije huyi hain jiski mujhe tumse expectations nahi thi????

((Pahla aaj tumhare face par koi smile 😊 nahi hai mujhse milkar aur na hi koi excitement najar aa rahi hai.))

((Dusra aaj tumne baccho ke liye na koi kapde laya aur na hi sweets 🧁 aisa pahli baar hua hai.))

((Tum khud hi kahin khoyi khoyi si lag rahi ho.))

Roopa: Kya baat hai batao mujhe???

Shivangi: Maa maine jab se hosh sambhala hai aapko hi apni maa maan liya hai aur main aapse kuchh bhi nahi chhupana chahti hoon.

Roopa: Phir kya baat hai batao mujhe??

Shivangi: Maa mujhe Ranjan ji ke bare mein mere dimag mein bahut galat galat khayal aa rahe hain, jisse mera dil ek anjane darr se bhar jata hai.

Roopa: Kya hua hai tum kaisa feel karti ho mujhe puri details mein batao??

Shivangi: Maa meri aur Ranjan ji ki pichhle 18 days se koi baat nahi huyi hai.

Roopa: Kya hua hai unhe ki ve tumse baat nahi kar rahe hain??

Shivangi: Nahi pata par unhone ek baar mujhse kaha tha yadi maine tumse bahut dino tak baat nahi kiya to samajh lena ki main mar chuka hoon, maine duniya chhod diya hai.

Roopa: Kya matlab hai iska main kuchh samjhi nahi??

Shivangi: Maa Ranjan ji ek underground fighter the aur ve kisi bhi desh mein jakar fight karte the aur unhone mujhse kaha tha ki yadi mujhe kuchh ho gaya to tum dusri shadi kar chali jana, ya phir meri family ko sambhal lena ye decision main tum par chhodta hoon, isliye unhone kabhi bacche ka try nahi kiya.

Roopa: Kya ye baat Kriti beti aur uski maa ko pata hai???

Shivangi: Nahi maa unhone ye baat sirf mujhse share kiya hai aur unhe kabhi bhi nahi batane ke liye kaha tha.

Roopa: Yadi unhe nahi pata hai to phir ve sabhi 18 days se itna nischint kaise hain??

Shivangi: Kyonki Ranjan ji ke ek dost hain jo Ranjan ki aawaz mein dono se baat kar lete hain par mujhse baat nahi kar sakte hain, kyonki ye hak sirf Ranjan ji ka hai, ek dost maa aur bahan se normal baat kar sakta hai par mere sath nahi isliye meri baat nahi hoti hai.

Roopa: Phir tumne uske dost se puchha kyon nahi ki Ranjan beta tumse kyon nahi baat kar rahe hain??

Shivangi: Kyonki ve kabhi mujhse baat nahi karte hain aur jaise hi main kisi aur ke phone se unse baat karne ki koshish karti hoon, ve phone cut kar dete hain.

Roopa: Phir tumne ye baat Kriti beti ya apni sasu maa se kyon nahi kaha hai abhi tak??

Shivangi: Main unhe kaise kah doon ki jisse ve sabhi baat kar rahe hain wah Ranjan ji nahi balki uska dost hai, par Kriti ne mujhe apni kasam dekar aaj bolne par majbur kar diya aur main use batane hi wali thi ki hum yahan pahuch gaye aur hamara conversation khatam ho gaya.

Roopa: Dekho Shivangi beti Ranjan ke sath jo bhi hua hai tum sabhi ko bata do, sabhi ko unke bare mein janne ka hak hai, isliye tum sabko jitni jaldi ye baat bata deti ho utna hi sabke liye achha hoga.

Shivangi: Ji maa sayad aap thik kah rahi hain, main ghar jakar sabhi ko bata dungi ki kya problem hai, aapne meri problem ko hamesha ki tarah aaj bhi solve kar diya.

Sabhi ne yahan lagbhag 3 hours time spend kiya.

***

Shivangi: Baccho ab hum sabhi ko jane ki permission do, hum phir aayenge tum sabse milne??

Ji ji didi lekin agli baar hamare liye sweets 🧁 lekar aana unme se ek bacche ne kaha.

Shivangi: Thik hai agli baar hum sweets 🧁 jarur layenge.

[Shivangi ne apne face par thodi smile 😊 late huye kaha.]

***

Jaise hi Arjun, Rashmika, Kriti aur Shivangi charo bahar nikle inke samne 5 vyakti apne hathon mein chaku 🗡️ liye huye khade the.

Hume Shivangi ko de do hum tum teeno ko jane denge hamare malik ka hukum hai ki Shivangi agli baar yahan se bach kar nahi jayegi, iska upar jane ka samay aa gaya hai, unme se ek vyakti ne kaha.

Arjun: Kaun hai tumhara malik aur tum sabko Shivangi bhabhi kyon chahiye???

Ye hum tum batana jaruri nahi samajhte hain unme se ek vyakti ne apni akad dikhate huye kaha.

Arjun: Thik hai inhe le jao.

Ek vyakti jaise hi aage badha Rashmika ki ek tez kick uske groin area mein pada, wo vyakti dard se chillata hua apni groin area ko pakad kar niche jameen par baith gaya.

Ye sab itna jaldi ho gaya ki pichhe ke charo vyakti dekhte hi rah gaye.

Sali ye tumne kya kar diya ab tumhe iski kimat chukani padegi, unme se ek vyakti ne gali dete huye Rashmika se tez swar mein chilla-kar kaha.


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Rashmika: You motherfuckers tum sabko kya lagta hai mere aur Arjun ke hote huye tum Shivangi ji koi nuksan pahucha paoge to ye tum sabki sabse badi bhul hai.

Arjun aur Rashmika dono Kriti aur Shivangi ke aage ho gaye. Ab charo vyakti ke aage Arjun aur Rashmika khade the.

Arjun: Hum dono se paar pa lo aur Shivangi ji ko le jao!!!

Charo vyakti ek sath aage badhe panchva vyakti abhi bhi niche jameen par baitha hua dard se karah raha tha.

2 vyakti Rashmika ki aur 2 vyakti Arjun ki aur bhage.

Ek vyakti ne Rashmika ke abdomen aur ek ne chest par chaku 🗡️ ka vaar karna chacha jise Rashmika ne khud ko ek ke vaar ko escape kar gayi aur ek ke knife 🗡️wali hand ko wrist(kalai) ke pass pakad liya. Jiske vaar ko Rashmika ne escape kiya tha uske larynx(kanth) mein Rashmika ka ek jordar punch ✊ pada aur dusre wale ke groin area mein ek tez kick 🦵 pada.

Dono vyakti apni halat par dard se tadap uthe. Ek ke muh se koi shabd hi nahi nikal raha tha aur dusra dard ke karan kuchh bol hi nahi pa raha tha.

Wahin 2 vyakti Arjun ki aur bhage unme se ek ne apni knife phenk kar Arjun ke chest ko target kiya aur dusra aage badh kar Arjun ke face par knife 🗡️ se vaar karna chaha.

Arjun ne knife ke path se khud ko hata liya knife Arjun ke bagal se hote huye diwar par ja bhidi aur law of conservation of energy ke according aawaz hone ke karan apni kuchh energy kho kar wapas jameen par gir gayi.

Ek vyakti jo Arjun ki aur bhaga tha jisne Arjun ke face par nishana banaya tha Arjun ne uske vaar ko apne face ke left movement se khud ko escape kiya aur uske nose pe ek jabardast punch ✊ pada jisse uske nose se blood nikalna start ho gaya, jisse wo apni naak pakad kar dard se chilla utha aur aage vaar karne ke phir se taiyar hi nahi hua.

Chautha vyakti jo khali hath Arjun ki aur bhaga Arjun ne uske chest par ek side kick jad diya jisse wo vyakti kai kadam pichhe jakar bahut tezi se jameen par dhadaam ki ek aawaz ke sath apne pith ke sahare gira, jisse uska backbone floor se bhidne ke karan haddi mein ek tez dard hua. Vyakti ko itna tez dard hua ki uske muh se karah bhi nahi nikla aur kuchh moment ke liye wo behoshi ki haalat mein chala gaya.

Pancho vyakti jameen par pade karah rahe the magar ek knife 🗡️ tezi se Arjun ki aur badh raha tha, jaise hi Shivangi ki najar Arjun ki aur badh rahi knife 🗡️ par padi Shivangi ne Arjun ko knife 🗡️ ke path se dur karna chaha par wo kar na saki aur khud hi knife 🗡️ ke vaar ka shikar hone wali thi, magar Arjun ne jaise hi ye dekha Arjun time par Shivagi tak nahi pahuch saka, isliye Arjun ne knife 🗡️ ke vaar ko apne right hand aage badha ka apne hatheli par le liya, Arjun ke hatheli par knife 🗡️lagte hi blood ki ek tez dhaar Arjun ke hatheli se bah kar sidha Shivangi ke maang ko bharne lagi, jisse Shivangi ki maang blood se red hona start ho gaya, Shivangi ke mathe par pahle jo sindur laga hua tha wo Arjun ke blood ke niche gayab hona start ho gaya.

Jisne knife 🗡️ se vaar kiya tha wo chhatha vyakti tha jo samne nahi aaya tha, magar jab uska vaar khali chala gaya to wo tezi se bhagna chaha par isse pahle ki wo bhagta Rashmika ne niche gire chaku se us par vaar kar diya jo sidha uske left shoulder par laga, phir bhi wo bhagne mein safal raha, kyonki yahan abhi bhi panch(5) vyakti jameen par pade karah rahe the.

***

Arjun ne apne right hatheli se chaku 🗡️ nikala jis par jaldi hi Kriti ne apni scarf 🧣 ko phad kar tightly bandh diya jisse blood ke flow ko roka ja sake.

Shivangi ko jab feel hua ki uske head par kuchh gira hai to usne apne hath se check kiya jis par blood laga hua tha.

Jab Kriti ne ye dekha to use samajh nahi aaya ki wo kya reaction de.

Shivangi ne jab blood ko apni maang se saaf karna chaha usse pahle hi Rashmika ne Shivangi se kaha.

Rashmika: Ruk jao Shivangi aisa karne ki sochna bhi mat ye jo bhi hua hai sayad god ki wish hai is par hum sabhi mil kar baat karte hain, pahle hume ghar chalna hoga tab tak blood ko aise hi rahne do saaf nahi karna hai.

Kriti jo abhi tak shant thi uski eyes ke charo aur tears(aansu) ki lakir banna start ho gaya. Kriti aur khud ko sambhal na saki aur ro 😢 😢 padi.

Shivangi ne use apne gale se lagate huye kaha.

Shivangi: Mujhe maaf kar do Kriti ye sab jo bhi hua hai kisi ne jaan bujh kar nahi kiya hai, isme Arjun ka koi dosh nahi hai main hi manhus hoon jo sab kuchh barbaad kar deti hoon. Jahan bhi hoti hoon wahan kuchh achha nahi hota hai pahle mujhe mata pita ka pyar nahi mila dono mujhe chhod kar chale gaye, ek bahan thi wo bhi mujhse dur ho gayi aur ab itne varshon ke baad mujhe mili hai par mere sath sahaj feel nahi karti hai aur mere sath nahi rahti hai, jis pati se meri shadi huyi hai usne mujhe kah rakha hai meri maut kabhi bhi ho sakti hai tum kisi aur se shadi kar chali jana ya phir meri family ki dekh bhal karna ye decision main tum par chhodta hoon.

Shivangi ne jaise hi ye kaha use samajh aa gaya ki usne jane anjane mein kitni badi galti kar di hai, jo use nahi bolna chahiye tha wo Shivangi emotional hokar bolti chali gayi. Par jab use realise hua tab tak bahut der ho chuki thi.

Jab Kriti ne ye suna to uska dil apne pyar ko khone ke darr ko chhod kar apne bhai ki aur chala gaya, wo Shivangi ke behaviour ko samajhne ki koshish karne lagi ki wo aisa kyon kar rahi hai.

Kriti: Kya kaha aapne bhabhi bhaiya ki maut kabhi bhi ho sakti hai ye kya bakwas kar rahi hain aap??

Shivangi: Yahi sach hai Kriti Ranjan ji ne mujhse kaha tha ki agar main tumse bahut dino tak baat na karun to samajh lena ki meri maut ho chuki hai.

Kriti: Bhabhiiiiiiii aisa phir kabhi na kahna mere bhaiya ke bare mein varna main bhul jaunga ki aap meri bhabhi ho, ve mujhse lagbhag daily baat karte hain, phir aap aisa kaise kah sakti hain bhaiya ke bare mein??

[Kriti ke swar mein itna gussa tha jaise wo Shivangi ki jaan le lena chahti ho.]

Shivangi: I am sorry Kriti ab main aur ye sach ko bardast nahi kar pa rahi hoon, pichhle 18 days se Ranjan ji se meri baat nahi huyi hai aur aap sab jisse baat kar rahe hain wo Ranjan ji nahi balki unka dost hai.

**Badaaaaamp**

Kriti ka dil joro se dhadkana start ho gaya, muh se koi shabd nahi nikla par aankhon se jhar jhar tears 😭 😭 bahna start ho gaya.

Arjun: Please love 💕shant ho jaiye pahle hum sab ghar chalte hain, phir sach ka pata karte hain Ranjan bhaiya ko kya hua hai jo usne pichhle 18 days se Shivangi bhabhi se baat nahi kiya hai.

Shivangi: I am sorry Kriti mujhe kuchh samajh nahi aa raha tha ki main ye baat tumhe kaise bataun, par maa ne mujhse kaha ki unhe sach bata do???

Rashmika: Kriti shant ho jao hum sach ka pata karte hain pahle ghar chalo.

Arjun: Mausi aap Shivangi ji ke sath aage ki seat par baith jaiye main Kriti ke sath pichhe baithta hoon.

Arjun ne Kriti ko apne gaud mein utha liya aur pichhe ki seat par Kriti ko apne gaud mein uska sar rakh kar sula diya, Arjun apne left hand se Kriti ke aansu saaf karta ja raha tha magar Kriti ke aankhon se aansu 😢 😢bahte ja rahe the, uski aankh se tears 😭 bah kar uske suit ko geela kar rahi thi.

Ek lambi aur khamoshi se bhari journey ka end hua aur Rashmika ne car apne ghar ke pass khada kiya.

***


Kajal Home,
Time- 6:30 pm``~¥

Sabhi koi Arjun, Rashmika, Kriti aur Shivangi ke pass aa gaye.


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Kajal: Rashmika kya hua tum logo ke sath jo tum sabke aankhon mein aansu 😿 hain aur Arjun ke hand par scarf 🧣 kyon bandha hua hai??

Rashmika: Didi hum par kuchh logo ne attack kiya tha aur hadse mein Arjun, Shivangi ji ko bachane ke chakkar mein Arjun ke hand se blood gir kar Shivangi ji ke maang ko saja gayi.

Kajal, Nadhiya, Shreya, Sara aur Madhuri sabka Dil tezi se machalna start ho gaya. Sabhi ka body kuchh moments ke liye shunya awastha mein chala gaya.

Kriti jo abhi bhi Arjun ke bahon mein thi Kajal ne use apne gale se lagate huye kaha.

Kajal: Kriti maine tumhe vachan diya hai ki tumhari shadi Arjun se hogi aur sabhi ise apni apni sahmati de chuke hain, isliye chahe mujhe jo bhi karna pade tumhari shadi Arjun se jarur hogi.

Rashmika: Didi baat itni sidhi nahi hai jitna aap sab samajh rahe hain, baat isse bhi bahut badi hai jiske bare mein soch kar bhi dil ek anjane darr se bhar jata hai.

Kajal: Kya baat hai Rashmika batao hum sabhi ko??

Rashmika: Ji didi baat ye hai ki Shivagi ji ka kahna hai ki unki pichhle 18 days se Ranjan ji se baat nahi huyi hai jabki Kriti aur baki sab ki Ranjan ji se baat huyi hai.

Kajal: Isme jayada tension lene ki kya baat hai mujhe jayada samajh nahi aa raha hai Rashmika!!!

Rashmika: Didi Shivangi ji ka kahna hai ki Kriti aur baki sabhi ka jisse baat hua hai wo Ranjan ji ke dost hain Ranjan nahi hai, samajh rahi hain aap baat ki seriousness ko???

Kajal: Arjun tumhare pass Ranjan ji ka cell phone 📱number hai call him right now. We want to know kya baat hai.

Arjun: Hmmm.

[Arjun ne sirf ha mein apna gardan hilaya.]


[[Arjun Calls to Ranjan]]

Arjun: Hello!!

Ha Arjun bolo kya baat hai jo tumne mujhe call kiya samne se jawab mila???

Arjun: Bhaiya aap thik to hain na sabhi aapke liye yahan par pareshan hain.

Ha main thik hoon mujhe kya hua hai aur tension ki koi baat nahi hai main ek ghante mein ghar pahuch raha hoon, tum ek kaam karo Arjun tum sabhi ko lekar mere ghar aa jao main sabhi se aaj ek sath milna chahta hoon, samne se jawab mila.

Arjun: Thik hai bhaiya Kriti aur Shivangi ji yahin mere pass hain main unhe lekar ghar pahuch raha hoon.

Nahi Kajal ji, Rashmika ji aur baki sabhi ko bhi ek sath lekar mere ghar aao main sabhi se ek sath milna chahta hoon samne se jawab aaya.

Arjun: Ji thik hai bhaiya main sabhi ko lekar aapke ghar aa raha hoon, aapke aane se pahle main wahan pahuch jaunga.

Thik hai Arjun main aa raha hoon, bye.

Arjun: Bye bhaiya!!!!

[[Call Disconnected]]

Kuchh hi der mein sabhi Kriti ke ghar pahuch gaye jinme Shreya ke husband Ranjit bhi unke sath tha.

Sabhi besabri se Ranjan ke aane ka wait kar rahe the aur ye bhi janna chahte the ki Ranjan ne sabhi ko ek sath milne kyon bulaya hai.

***


College Hostel,
Time- 4:35 pm~~
Krithi Room``~~¥

Anupama ka phone ring hua jis par private number likha hua tha, jiska saaf matlab ye call Kaal ka hai aur use akele mein jakar baat karna hai.

Anupama ne room se bahar nikal thoda ekant mein jakar call receive kiya.

Anupama: Hello master!!

Kaal: Hello little princess!!

Anupama: Ji kahiye kaise call karna hua??

Kaal: Tumhare liye ek bad news aur ek good 👍news dono hai pahle kaun sa sunna pasand karogi princess??


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Anupama: Pahle good news!!

Kaal: Arjun, Rashmika, Kriti aur Shivangi par attack hua tha, par sabhi safe hain par Arjun ke right hatheli par thoda injury hua hai.

Anupama: Aur bad news kya hai master??

Kaal: Bad news ye hai ki Arjun aur Shivangi ka accidentally shadi ho chuki hai, Kaal ne Anupama ko incident ke bare mein bataya???

Anupama: Ye kya ho gaya master pahle ek Kriti mam kam thi jo ab Shivangi bhabhi bhi aa gayi.

Kaal: Tumhe Arjun chahiye to tumhe isse bhi bade bade heart break 💔sahne honge little princess, be ready for that.

Anupama: Main kuchh samjhi nahi master aap kya point karna chahte hain???

Kaal: Ye tumhe kabhi na kabhi khud tumhe pata chal jayega princess, meri apni kuchh limitations hain isliye main tumhe nahi bata sakta hoon, main sirf tumhe pahle se mentally strong kar raha hoon.

Anupama: Thik hai master yadi hum jinda rahe to hum jarur milenge varna main kabhi shadi nahi karungi.

Kaal: Ek aur baat hai princess jise main samajh nahi paya kyonki uski aawaz main nahi sun sakta tha.

Anupama: Wo kya hai master??

Kaal: Charo jab wapas aa rahe the to sabhi bahut pareshan the, kyon ab mujhe pata nahi ye tumhe khud hi pata karna hoga.

Anupama: Thik hai master main pata kar lungi kya baat hai, bye master.

Kaal: Bye princess!!

[[Call Disconnected]]


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Kriti Home
Sunday Night
Time- 8:25 pm~

Kriti ke ghar ke bahar ek Ambulance 🚑 aakar ruki Kriti aur Shivangi dono bahar hi wait kar rahi thi, jaise hi unki nazar Ambulance 🚑 par padi unki heart beat tezi ke sath badhna start ho gaya.

Jo andar the ve sab bhi bahar aa gaye, unka bhi haal waisa hi tha jaisa haal Shivangi aur Kriti ka tha.

Sabhi ke andar ek anjane darr ne gherna start kar diya. Sabhi ki heart beat saaf suni ja sakti thi. Sabhi ki dhadkan ki speed abnormal pace se pump kar raha tha.

5 minutes gujar chuka tha, magar kisi ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi ki koi ambulance 🚑 ke karib jaye. Ambulance se koi bahar bhi nahi aaya aur na hi ambulance mein Ranjan kahin dikh raha tha.

Driver ke sath ek vyakti baitha tha jise koi bhi nahi pahchanta tha.

Wo vyakti jo driver ke pass baitha tha sabke pass nikal kar bahar aaya aur sabke samne khada ho gaya.

Usne kisi tarah bola aap sabme se Arjun kaun hai???

Ji ji main hoon Arjun kya baat hai Arjun ne kisi tarah apni ladkhadate juban ke sath kaha.

Mera naam Rohit hai main Ranjan ka bestfriend hoon samne wale ne apna parichay dete huye kaha.

Arjun: Ji kahiye kya baat hai aur Ranjan bhaiya kahan hain unhone mujhse kaha tha ki main wapas ghar aa raha hoon, tum sab mere ghar par mera wait karna.

Rohit: Arjun ab tumhare Ranjan bhaiya is duniya mein nahi rahe, ve hum sabko chhod kar ja chuke hain jahan se koi bhi wapas nahi aata hai.


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Maine is update ke bahut sare scenes ko cut kar diya, kyonki jab maine use likha to meri heart beat ki pace bhi abnormal ho gayi thi isliye maine bahut sochne ke baad ye decision liya.

Khair koi baat nahi samay samay pe ve sabhi scenes samne aa jayega.

Waise aap easily guess kar paoge ki maine kaun kaun se scenes ko cut kar diya.

1. Kriti aur Shivangi ki manodasha.

2. Ranjan ki maa Sithara aur uski bahan Trisha ka haal.

3. Sri Leela ki halat kyonki Leela ka bhi sirf ek hi bhai tha Ranjan jo ab usse dur chala gaya.

4. Ranjan ke sath kya hua hai wo bhi maine abhi ke liye cut kar diya hai.


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Update jabardasti hai par mujhe laga shayad thode pain ki jarurat thi the pain of sister and lover is ok but the pain of wife you had not described properly
 
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Update jabardasti hai par mujhe laga shayad thode pain ki jarurat thi the pain of sister and lover is ok but the pain of wife you had not described properly
Yeah maine likh to diya ki main scenes ko cut kar raha hoon, kyonki meri halat hi kharab hone lagi thi soch soch kar, isliye mujhe cut karna pada.

No worry kuchh scenes alag alag update mein show karunga.
 
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