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Update No 13
Maa beta dono Offfice se nikal jate hai ghar ke liye , raste me Archana chahci ka phone ata hai vo Pari ko Directly parlor bulati hai , to Pari Aaarav ko boti hai .Mom – Babu ap mere sath parlor chaloge , waha mujhe shirf thoda sa kaam hai phir hum ghar chale to koi problem .
Aarav – Mom sach bato last time 20 min bol apne 2 hours lagey the .
Mom – Bete aj man lo 1 hour minimum or smile karte hue aarav ko dekha .
Aarav – ap chachi ke sath ajana ,I take the car .
Mom – Tu maa ke sath Parlor mi kyu nahi ruk sakta aisa kya kaam hai ghar par .
Aarav – Mom waha sab mujhe aise ghurti hai ,jaise kha jay gi or mai boar ho jaunga ,please .
Mom- (Pari ab thoda sad face bana kar ) bete to shaddi ke baad badalte hai mera wala to pahle hi badal gaya , chalo jaise meri kismet .
Aarav – Mom ye senti dilouge nahi only 1 hour ,waise ap ko parlor ki kya jarurat waise hi itni khubsurat ho ap without makeup
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Mom- Kuch bhi bolta hai , Buddhi ho rahi hu day by day .
Aarav – Meri nazro se dekho you are still in your 20s mom ,(ab Pari apne bete ki baat sun blush karne lagi ) Or aise hi baat karte hue dono Parlor pahuch gey .
Archana ne jaise hi Aarav ko dekha to use gale laga kar use wish kiya happy birthday Betu .
Aarav Pure parlor walo ke samne jhuk kar apni chachi ke pair chuta hai or unka ashirwad leta hai , tabhi use waha 2 or log dikhte or vo use ashirwad lene ko kehte hai or vo or koi nahi Akriti di or Himanshi di hoti hai ,dono use gale laga kar birthday wish karti hai ( Ab aarav man me ab hogaya kalyan sari mahila ek parlor me )
VO sab andar chali jati hai or aarav wahi sofe par beth jata hai maxien padhne lagta hai par jaisa ki jab 2 yuva or 2 middle age women parlor me ho or time na lage to aisa ho hi nahi sakta tabhi Aaarav ka mobile baja ,
Aarav – ji papa
Tej- hero kaha hai tu or teri mom, I am in Home.
Aarav – Dad 2 ghante se Parlor me Hu.
Tej – waha kya kar raha hai tu.
Aarav – papa , MOM, Chachi, Akriti di or himanshi di sab andar hai mujhe bola tha 1 hour max and I am still waiting , Ye sun Tej hasne laga or bola tera suit me direct Venue par le ata hu wahi hotel me shower le kar Change karlena abhi 2 ghante or lagege , Or jaisa Dad ne bola ye 4 apne kapde lekar aey thi yahi se change kar ke jab charo samne aey to meri ankhe to aisa laga 4 ko bori me bandh kar lejau , charo itni khubsurat lag rahi thi ki shabdo me baya karna possible nahi hai .
- Archana chichi ne pink color ki siphon ki shadi or high heels with light pink color lipstick just looking perfect.
- Mom Black color ki sadi or backless blouse baal curly hairstyles kiye hue or kano me bade round wale jhumke gale me diamond pendent on gold chain she is just looking like a queen of kingdom.
- Akrit di had a Pink Patiala suit and mojri.
- Himanshi di ne yellow color ki annarkali style suit.
AKU – Muh to band karo Hero hume pata chal gaya hai we are looking stunning.
Aarav – Woooo just one word woo.
Archana – accha hum log chalet hai ab yaha se Aarav tu change kar ke driver ke sath ajana.
Aarav – Mai bhi ap logo ke sath chal raha hu dad mere kapde le kar aarahe hai directly venue par.
Aise me Archana ,pari or driver and Himanshi Ek car me or Pari ki car Akriti and Aarav jane lagte hai ( Waise bhi Akriti di ko dekh kar mom ko sab se jyada alas car chalne me ata hai kyu ki di ko tej Driving pasand nahi or meri mom hai Hot weels car racer, Mai khud unke sath bina seat belt bandhe nahi baithta, She drive very rash but she had a great control on his car , But Aku di ki wajah se mom unhe dedeti hai drive karne ke liye )
Akriti – So what’s the Plan for today ?
Aarav – what plan , no plan today is my birthday and Mom company success party , No plan .
Akriti- Aarav you can play with other not with me, Plan ? why you asked info about Altmash khan ?
Aarav- Di sab yaha hi puch logi to waha kya dekhogi ?
Akriti – thoda to info de agar tera plan na chala to ?
Aarav- Jaha mai harunga vaha ap suru ho jana you are RAW agent now , show me your skills and who’s going to ask you any thing , waise bhi aj ek kide kaam ho jayga or ravi Mehta ko milega jawab kuch savalo ka .
Akriti muskurati hai or sochti hai kitna bharosha karta hai tu mujh par , or kitna chata hai apno ko tu or vo apne hi sab tujhe dard dene ke liye tayar hai .
Aise hi Aarav Hotel Pahuchta hai ye ek 5 star hotel tha vaha lobby me Aaarav ke dad use uske kapde deta hai or bolte hai beta 30 min me guest ane shuru ho jayge , please be ready fast or use room keyes dete hai , Tabbhi aarav ke mobile par ek MSG ata hai ( Come to Room no 707) Aarav shok ho jata hai ,
par vo Waha kisi ko kuch nahi bolta or room No 707 ki taraph nikal jata hai,
Aarav jaise hi 707 ke gate par pahuchta hai use thoda dar lagta hai,
par vo door knock kar ta hai par pata hai room khula hua hai vo Dhire se dhakha deta hai to door pura khu jata hai vo dekhta hai room me door se lekar andar tak candle jal rahae hai or pure raste me red rose biche hue hai vo andar pahuchta hai to koi bahar se door lock kar det ahai or vo room me candle light me ek saya nikal kar ata hai or badi teji hai aarav ko hug kar ke uske kano me bolta hai Happt birthday to my future husband and current Boyfriend, ( Or ye awaj sunte hai Aarav saye ko jor se apni baho me jakad leta hai or uske kano me bolta hai, Thank you jaan , J ha dosto ye or koi nahi Pihu hai )
Dono thodi der aise hi bina bole ek dusre ki baho me rehte hai Phir Pihu aarav ki baho se nikal kar usko bed per baithne ko bolti hai , or uske kano me bolti hai abbhi to yehi gift de sakti hu jaan or itn bol , Dhire se Aarav ke Hoto ko chum leti hai kuch palo keliye or dihre dihere pahle upar wala hoth phir neeche wala hoth , Or aarav bhi ab romanchit ho jata hai or uska Land Dhire dhire khada hone lagta hai , Yaha Aarav ko lag raha tha jaise Pihu ke hoto me shed laga hai ye uska Pehla Kiss tha or pihu ka bhi ye pahla hi kiss tha , Pihu dheere se apni tounge ko aarav ki muh me dar kar ghumane lagti hai or Aarav bhi use betaha chumne lagta hai 10 min dono rukte hai .
Pihu – apne hatiyar ko control karo ise badi jaldi hai , ise kaho abhi samay nahi aya .
Aarav pihu ko apni or kheechte hue ise laga jaise tum mujhe kiss kar rahi ho ise bhi moka milega iski sehali se milne ka or vo pahli baar Pihu ki jeans ki upar uski chut ko hath lagta hai , Pihu to sihar jati hai arrav ke touch se hi , par vo apnea p ko sayamit kar ke , Uska bhi smaay aeyga thoda intezar jaan bass thoda intezar .
Aarav – I will wait for you jaan or phir Pihu kisi ko call karti hai or gate khulta hai to aarav riya ko samne dekhta hai vo akar use wish karti hai , Or aarav ki jeans me bane ubhar ko dekh kar muskurati hai or Pihu ka hath pakad bahar chalne ka bolti hai , aarav ko jaise hi apni paristiti ka gyan hot hai vo Washrrom ki tarph jata hai or jaldi se apne kade nikal shower ki neeche khade ho kar jo abhi uske or Pihu ke beech hua ye ladakpan ka pyar ke bare me soch kar muskurata hai or nahane lagta hai .
Wahi ek room me ek Aurat apne ghutno ke bal baithi hoti hai or kisi ka land chus rahi hoti hai , or admi bolta hai waise to teri kimat 2lack ki nahi hai ,par Ravi ne bola hai is liye tujhe bina intrest ke 1cr ka loan dedeta hu , Par hafte me 2 baar puri raat ke liye is land ko shant karna hoga ye thi Sonal talvar jo ki Altamsh ka land chus kar apne liye loan ka jugad karti hai or bolti hai hafte me 2 baar kyu 3 baar bolo hazoor wah kya land hai itna mota , uff jab ye mere andar jayga to meri dhgajiya uda dega (Man me sala chuitya 5 inch ke luli ko land bolta hai , Mujhe kya thode din ki dikkat hai )
Par in dono ki in harkato ko koi apne camera me recod kar raha tha or bola kya mast scene hai sala maza aeyga, Pahli baar Aarav bhai me mast kaam diya hai mujhe.
Aj Aarav ne Ek dhamake ka plan kiya or vo Ready hone lagta hai use ek call ata hai .
Aarav- hello who’s is this?
Unknown – Wish You Happy birthday Hero.
Aarav:- thank you so much , But who is this ,do I Know you.
Unknown- Abhi ke liye apna well-wisher samjah lo or itna jaan lo mujhe pata hai Ravi Mehta ko contract kyu nahi mila or Sonal Talvar ki dhajiya kisne udai hai, but I am your well-wisher so don’t worry , your secret is mine secret , But Altamash is my boy use kuch kiya to I will screw your happiness .
Aarav- Illayasi uncle kya bache ko darate hue sharam nahi ati ap ko , Tension na lo Altamash ko uske karmo ki saza milegi usne jaamene hadpi mujhe farak nahi padta par use 10 ladkiyo ki zindgi kharab ki ye galat kiya ,or is karam ki saza use dekar rahunga ab beech me ap aey ya bhagwan aj vo jayga , waise ap ko ana chaiye tha mere birthday par , Jhagda apke or dad ke beech hai , saza mujhe kyu .
Illayasi – tujhe mere or tere dad ke bare me pata hai.
Aarav – class 1 se kar Mumbai ane taka p dono sath the uske baad apne apna profession chuna or unhone apna , ye ap dono ka matter hai , Par meri kya gati 18 saal se har saal birthday par racing car bhejte ho samne akar gale lagar bhatije ko wish bhi kar do chacha .
Illayasi – Tera baap dekhte hi encounter kardega mera, Waise tujhe kaise pata chala mai hi call par.
Aarav - Dad or baki officer kai baar ghar par baith kar ap ki purani call recording sunte the bass wahi se awaj yaad reh gey .
Illaysi – Jaldi milege tujse hum .
Aarav- Phir Altamash or mere beech mat ana chacha, or waise ye safe line to hai na pata chala abhi Police aarahi ho mere ko pakadne.
Illyasi – kyu dar gaya kya .
Aaarav – Darta to shirf apne maa or baap ko hu mai baki duniya ke liye AAG hu jala kar basham kar dunga ,or ye bol vo call rakh deta hai (Sochane lagt ahai jab ise itna pata hai kahi Mom ke bare me to nahi , Nahi aisa nahi hona chaiye , Or yahi sochte hue Aarav Room se nikalta hai party Venue ke liye , Jaha Aj bahut kuch hona hai .
So guys dekhte hai kya hot hai age ki story me and I request please hit 10 likes minimum to story if you like it .
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Update NO 13 Posted Please read and Like and Review guys
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Hey Ayush brother jahan kissing scene ho raha hai wahan par Pihu ki jagah tumne Pari likh diya 2, 3 baar usko correct kar lo baki dekhte hain next update mein Sonal Talwar ke sath kya hota hai???
Nice update brother.