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Romance Just Friends (Pure romantic,suspense,thriller and fantasy)

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nice update.
:superb::superb:
seems that vashi has horrible experience with boys.
but she spoke softly with abhay this time. good.
lets see whats next in writers mind.
Thnx for ur beautiful review:hi::hi:..
It will be revealed soon..
Why she spoked ajay softly has 2 reason..
One was mood swings and another he is arrogant hot guys..
U know..
Hope further story also will loved by you like this only:peace::peace:..
Thnx for the appreciation..

Keep commenting:poet::poet:..
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UPDATE 7

Abhishek's POV-(From here on I will right like this..
When it's abhays side it will be Abhisheks POV and when it's urvashis side it will be Urvashis POV-)

I'm actually glad that I went on a walk with her. She's fun to be with.

I switched off the lights and closed my eyes for something I wanted from such a long time; sleep.

Urvashi's POV-

Here on next day..
"Aunty! I'm full." I said for the hundredth time.

"Last one." Aunty put one more paratha on my plate.

Coma started laughing at my condition.

"Maa, aap pichle dus minute se yahi keh reh ho. Aur iss bichari ne pichle dus minute mein chhe parathe khaye hai." She supported me.

"But look at her! Bohot patli ho gayi hai. She has to eat.

Mithu, Adithi, Akanksha, aur parathe lau?" Aunty asked them.

They furiously shook their head. Poor people, they had to eat

I'm still stuck on my 6th one. I'm so full. I can't eat more.

"Hostel mein khana nahi dete kya? Yeh dekho." Aunty said while showing my right wrist to everyone.

HEYY RABBA!

I quickly ate my 6th paratha and started with my 7th.

I noticed Abhay starting his 10th paratha. I looked at him in shock, but the guy was busy eating.

"Maa, Shubman aur Manjot aane wale hai."

Just as Abhay said this, the door bell rang.

Shubman and Manjot came in and touched uncle-aunty's feet.

They said their hello to Komal and Sania and gave a fist pump to Abhay.

Abhay introduced us to those two.

"Why do you look like you're about to puke?" Shubman asked me.

Before I could answer him, my stomach decided otherwise.

I quickly ran to the washroom and threw up.

That is exactly why you should never eat more.

I cleaned up and came out of the washroom. I sat in my place and drank a glass of water.

"Humne toh kal raat kuch aisa waisa kiya hi nahi, toh tujhe ulti kyu aayi?" Abhay joked.

There was a round of fake coughs, including aunty and uncle.

"Isiliye bol rahi thi isko zyaada math khilao. Yeh digest nahi kar payegi." Komal di stated.

"Vashi, you want anything?" Aunty asked me, showing concern.

I smiled at her and told her I'm fine.

ABHAY, MANJOT AND SHUBMAN ATE 15 FUCKIN' PARATHAS! CAN YOU BELIEVE IT?! I COULDN'T EVEN COMPLETE 7!

"Let's go somewhere today!" Abhay suggested.

"The whole day out?" Akanksha asked.

"Yeah, why not!" Adithi stated.

"And then you both can stay over too." Mithu suggested.

"Sure, we don't mind." Manjot shrugged his shouders. Shubman agreed with him.

I was about to take a bite of my paratha when all of them turned to look at me. That made me stop. It was like my mouth was open, but I couldn't bite it.

"I thought you were full." Abhay asked.

"You toh shut up. Khud pandrah parathe khata hai, aur mujhe bolta hai." I rolled my eyes.
"And, I'm a growing girl. I need to eat." I shrugged and took a bite.

Abhay rolled his eyes and asked me whether I was fine with the plan.

"Cool. But...... I need ice cream after movie. Okay?" I demanded. It's period speaking, not me. Don't blame me.

"Done, madam." Abhay agreed.

A huge grin found its way to my face.

Abhishek's POV-

The grin which formed on her face was extremely cute. I didn't even know I was staring at her until Shubman clicked his fingers infront of my eyes.

"Kya chal raha hai?" He asked, smirking.

"Kuch nahi." I shrugged it off.

"Tu humse jhoot math bol." Manjot chuckled.

"Arre yaar, kuch nahi. Uski smile cute hai. Bass." I told them.

Both of them looked at me for a minute and then looked at each other and smiled.

I know what they're thinking.

"I don't like her guys." I made it clear.

"We didn't even talk about like." Manjot smirked.

"Neither did we talk about her." Shubman smirked, this time.

"Maroge dono." I glared at them.

We didn't even realise that the girls had gone to the room to change.

I went to my room and quickly changed.

I wore a pair of black jeans and blue denim three-fourth button up.

I wore a pair of white converse to complete the outfit.

I quickly climbed down the stairs to see everyone ready.

We were to ride in Shubman's black duster which had seats for all of us. It was just me, Shubman, Manjot, Mithu, Akanksha, Adithi, and Vashi.

Speaking about Vashi, she looked pretty.

She was wearing a pair of black shorts and a blue denim three-fourth button up- woah! We're twinning.

As if reading what's on my mind, Vashi said, "Hey! We're twinning."

It's just I'm on my converse, whereas, she's on her white superstars.

"I knew it! I knew you liked me from the very begining." I joked.

"Muh dekha hai aine mein?" She questioned.

"Hot hu pata hai." I winked at her.

"Bakre ki bachhe ki tarah dikhta hai." She gave a sarcastic smile.

All of them started laughing at her comment.

I couldn't help but smile at that.

She winked at me and walked out of the door. We all followed her.

Shubman was driving the car, Manjot got shotgun, the three bitches sat in the next row, leaving me and Vashi together at the end. I know this was all planned.

I told you, bitches.

"Bitches." I mouthed to the three girls, who were busy chuckling at me.

"I'm not sitting with him." Vashi said.

"It's just 30 minutes ride dude." Adithi said.

"I'd spend 30 minutes in hell, but not with him." She glared at me.

Mood swings.

Now, I was adamant on sitting with her.

"Are you sitting or no?" I asked her.

"With you? No!" She stated.

I rolled my eyes-because I know it annoys her- and opened the door, carried her in, and closed it.

"Chichora!" Vashi glared at me.

"Patola." I winked at her.

She gave me an annoyed look and looked away while muttering something under her breath.

Honestly, the scene was cute.

The others quickly sat in the car and we were on the way for an amazing day.

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UPDATE 8

Abhishek's POV-
In car..

"Don't keep your feet here!" Vashi exclaimed, very much annoyed.

"I will do whatever I want." I glared at her.

She's so bossy when she's on her periods.

Damn.

"Mithali, swap places now." Vashi ordered Mithu.

"Mithali, no." I smirked.

"Mithali, yes." Vashi glared at me.

"Mithali, you do remember our deal, right?" I asked Mithali, with an eye brow raised.

Before Mithali could answer, Vashi spoke up.

"What deal?"

The three girls looked at me with a frown.

Before anyone of us could answer, Vashi said, "Okay, whatever it is. While returning back home, I'm not sitting with him."

"We'll see." I challenged her.

"We definitely will."

A few minutes later, I got a text from Manjot.

M- What deal?

A- I'll tell you later.

M- Related to Vashi?

A- Yeah.

M- Sounds interesting... xD

A- Trust me. It is. I'm sure you'll be shocked. :P

M- As soon as we get out of the car, you're telling us.

A- Lol okay.

That was the end of the conversation.

I looked at Vashi. She was doing something on her phone with a smile on her face.

Even if she falls for me, I won't be able to reciprocate those feelings, that will eventually break her down.

Am I doing the right thing?

Urvashi's POV-
We all reached the cineplex where we where about to watch the movie an guess what .

WHY?!(caps means convo in mind)

Why did they make me sit next to Abhay for the movie?

Why did they have to be so cruel?

Ugh!

We had this little fight over the arm rest, which was of MY seat's! But no! Abhishek Sharma HAS to fight with me. But, ofcourse, I won it.

At some point of time he even pulled my hair lightly. That blew off my head. I took his hair in my fist and pulled it. After he screamt and apologised and shit, I left him.

You don't mess with Urvashi Mehra, Mr. Sharma.

Sharma reminds me of this Sharma ji ka beta joke. I'm sure 96% of the Indian children have experienced this.

"You paid money to watch the movie not watch your shoe." Abhay whispered in my ear.

His hot breath tickled my neck.

I didn't dare to look at him, because I knew if I did, the stupid shit which happens in the movie will happen. The 'I looked at him- our closeness- got carried on' shit.

I looked at the movie screen and from the corner of my eye saw Abhay sit back in his seat.

I literally had no interest in the movie. It was some shit love story, where the male protagonist and the female protagonist meet, fall in love, get separated, meet after years, the girl is engaged, but falls in love with the male protagonist again, breaks her engagement, and finally ends up with her love.


Bruh! What about that guy you left for this ass?

No one thinks about that! Poor soul, no one even feels for him.

There was this time where I loved these kind of movies so much. And look at me now. The total opposite. It's funny, isn't it? Life plays such games on you. But at the end, as they say, everything happens for a reason.

In no time we were done with the movie. Abhay bought an ice cream for me since that was our deal.

We decided to have our lunch at Pizza Hut. It was just a kilometer away from the theatres, so we decided to walk.

On the way, there were a couple of fans who came up to the boys for pictures and autographs. The boys gladly accepted.

Me and the girls were talking when one of the fans came to us.

"Hey! How're you guys related to them?" She asked.

"I'm Abhay's cousin. And these are my friends." Mithali smiled at her.

"Is Abhay single?" She asked.

The three girls turned to look at me.

What?

"Yeah, he is." I told her.

"Does that mean I have a chance with him?" She asked, totally excited.

"Ask him." I winked at her.

She quickly walked up to Abhay and asked him out.

Abhay looked at her as if she was some kind of ghost.

Shubman and Manjot controlled themselves from laughing.

It was me who cracked up first, following the rest.

Abhay gave me a look and told the fan that he just wants to concentrate on his career now. The fan looked disappointed but seemed to understand.

"Why did you tell her that I was single?" He shouted at me.

Why is he shouting?

"She asked whether you were single or not, I said yes you are." I replied, calmly, looking into his eye.

We had this eye war for some time until Shubman pulled Abhay away.

I swear I would've pulled the guy's neck off his body.

We made it to Pizza Hut quickly, ate our food and quickly walked back to the car.

I screamt shotgun and ran to the passenger's seat.

The girls and Manjot had already taken their seats. Shubman and Abhay were talking about something.

While I was scrolling through my instagram, the driver's door opened and Abhay sat in the driver's seat.

I looked behind to see Shubman sitting with Manjot.

When Shubman looked at me, he winked, I shot him daggers in return. He fuckin' knew I didn't want to sit next to this guy!

"Why're you sitting here?" I whined.

"Shubman's tired." Abhay shrugged his shoulders.

"Not tired enough to wink." I muttered under my breath.

Abhishek's POV-

Shubman told me to drive because he was "tired". I knew he was lieing. You could make it out when he gave me that mischevious smile.

"Why're you sitting here?" Vashi whined when she saw me taking the driver's seat.

"Shubman's tired." I said, not in the mood.

I mean, I don't know why she hates me. She's fine with Manjot and Shubman, but she has a problem with me!

"Not tired enough to wink." I heard her murmer.

I gripped the stearing wheel tightly.

The whole ride I ignored Vashi. She did pass a few comments here and there expecting me to reply but I didn't.

On the other hand, when someone else spoke, I replied.

From the corner of my eyes I could see Vashi glaring at me. I didn't budge though, just kept on driving.

Urvashi's POV-

WOW. Now he ignores me?

You know what? Let him do whatever he wants. I don't care.

Manjot suggested that we go to a park.

We went to a nearby park. The guys decided to play football. We, girls, too agreed.

Me and Abhay were good at ignoring each other in the game too.

After about 15 minutes, I went to drink water. The running this sport makes me do. Damn.

Mithali tried to kick the ball [A/N: This sounds so wrong. Oh god! ], which Shubman passed to Abhay.

I stood beside Adithi, watching them play. We soon started talking about some saas-bahu serial.

"VASHI!" I heard Akanksha scream my name.

The last thing I remember was falling on Adithi, with a pain on my left cheek.

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Closing this thread for now as here no one's interested in english written story..
As of now i have already drafted all the updates of this story in english so I cant re write it in hinglish font now..
I have started up with a new story ..
Which is in process and today only the first look say will b posted..
That to in hinglish..
Hope u all will love it..

And will write this story in hinglish font soon..
 

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