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Romance Just Friends (Pure romantic,suspense,thriller and fantasy)
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:congratulation: for your story.
story plot is good till now
and your way to narrate talks is also good.
pataka is too funny and it seems that she is heroin of this story.
it'll be ouit interresting when she w'll meet our hero
keep it up.
story plot is good till now
and your way to narrate talks is also good.
pataka is too funny and it seems that she is heroin of this story.
it'll be ouit interresting when she w'll meet our hero
keep it up.
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Thnx for ur review:congratulation: for your story.
story plot is good till now
and your way to narrate talks is also good.
pataka is too funny and it seems that she is heroin of this story.
it'll be ouit interresting when she w'll meet our hero
keep it up.
..Hope further story also will loved by you
..Pataks character will highlight the further story..
And when she meet abhishek there will b to much fun I guarantee..
N the taste of it u will b getting in the coming update..
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UPDATE 3
From here I m writing as vashi(pataka)..
"Dude, what's with the shor sharaba in your house?" Adithi asked Mithali.
"I guess, Abhishek's victory celebration." She shrugged.
"Oh right, the hot guy is here." I rolled my eyes.
They chuckled at me.
"Don't go all fangirl mode on him." Mithali laughed.
"He ain't Virat Kohli, bro." I rolled my eyes, while getting out of the car.
"So, you're saying he's hotter than Virat?" Akanksha stepped in.
I glared at her in return.
I rang the doorbell in excitement. Sania didi opened the door.
"Sanduuuuu!" I hugged her, tightly, slightly chuckling at the nickname I'd given her.
"Vashi!" She squeeled and hugged me.
As soon as Komal didi heard my name she came running towards the door.
"Ay pataka!" She screamt while running towards me.
"Coma!" I screamt and practically launched myself on her.
"Coma? New one this time, huh?" She laughed while pulling away. I laughed along with her.
"I guess people tend to forget us, right Raj?" Manju aunty teased me.
"Arre jaanu!" I ran towards her.
Everyone laughed at that. I always called Manju aunty jaanu. She was so cool with it.
I stopped mid way.
"Jaanu yaar bollywood!" I said, reminding her.
A look of realisation washed over her face.
Me and Manju aunty always did that Raj-Simran run, whenever we meet. Though this was the second time I was meeting her.
Me and Manju aunty ran in slow motion and hugged each other.
"How're you beta?" Aunty asked me.
"I'm absolutely fine. Aap kaise ho?" I asked her.
"I hope someone remembers me." Raj uncle intruded.
I laughed at that and ran to the place where he was sitting to hug him.
While I was hugging uncle, I heard Mithali say, "Kabhi kabar doubt hota hai ki aap log mere mausa-mausi ho ya Vashi ke."
I laughed at that. Well, infact, all of us.
"They love me more." I stuck my tongue out.
"Well, Vashi, this is my son, Abhishek." Uncle introdued me to the hot guy.
"Hi hot guy!" As soon as these words left my mouth, my hand straight away slapped my mouth.
The girls started laughing. Aunty, uncle had an amused expression on their face. Coma(komal) and Sandu tried hard not to laugh but failed miserably.
And well, Abhishek? He had an amused smirk on his face.
Jerk already.
"Uh..I- I.. m-mean, don't you think it's too hot, guy?" I stuttered.
Only to make everyone laugh.
"Yeah, right, too hot, girl." Abhishek smirked, trying not to laugh along.
I glared at that idiot.
Okay, hot guy, my foot. More like arrogant hot guy.
Yeah, Vashi. Better.
"Abhay! Long time." Mithali said, while hugging him.
"How have you been? How's boarding?" He asked Mithu.
"I'm doing well. Boarding is fun, to be honest. And when these three are the people I share my room with, it has to awesome." She smiled.
I was now sitting next to uncle, showing him my muscles. He told me I'd become a stick.
"Oh by the way, meet my best friends."
"She is Adithi." He shook his hand with her.
"She is Akanksha." Mithu pointed out.
"Hey!" Akanksha said, a smile on her face, as she shook his hand.
Too formal.
"And she-" she stopped and blinked at me.
"What're you doing?" She asked with an eye brow raised.
"Supposed to be showing her non existent muscles." Uncle chuckled.
I fake glared at uncle.
Mithu smiled, shaking her head.
"And she is-"
"Pataka." Abhishek completed.
I narrowed my eyes at him.
"Hi, I'm Abhishek. You can call me Abhay." He smirked.
"More like go bye." I rolled my eyes at him.
From here the update will be written as abhishek..
"More like go bye."
Mom and dad laughed at that. Rest of them had on a look which said WOAH.
"You guys might be hungry na? Come eat something." Mom said leading them to the table.
Okay, Vashi was feisty. She was too cool, though. I can see how she sparks up everyone's mood. Akanksha was pretty cool too. She was easy to talk to. Adithi was kind of quite at the begining, but now we're chill.
I like Mithali's friends. They all are chill, well, except Vashi.
I sat next to Vashi.
She was muching on her fries.
"Don't stare at my fry, otherwise I'll make you cry." She said looking at her plate.
I chuckled at that, and started munching on my own fries.
Mom served us pizzas and coke later on.
"So, Abhay, how was your New Zealand trip?" Mithali asked.
"It wasn't a trip. He went to play." Vashi giggled.
"Same thing." Mithu face palmed herself.
"It was amazing to be honest! I got to learn a lot of things." I smiled at Mithu.
"That's good. So, what next?"
"Well, APL is coming up. It's starting after 2 weeks." I shrugged it off.
"What're you guys doing?" I asked them curiously.
"Well, me and Adithi have taken science. Akanksha and Urvashi have taken commerce." Mithu told me.
"Uh.. who's Urvashi?" I asked, totally confused.
Vashi looked at me as if I had a horn grown on my head.
"Uh... she is Urvashi." Komal didi pointed at Vashi, slightly chuckling.
It then hit me hard. Vashi- UrVashi.
Man, I'm stupid.
"Oh okay. Vashi Urvashi. Ah, I get it. You look like that though(urvashi rautela)." I winked at her.
I hope she really didn't get what I meant, because if she did she'll burn me alive.
"I got that." Vashi shot me a look.
"How glad I am to see my cousin and bestfriend get along so well." Mithu said sarcastically.
"Not my fault he's an arrogant hot guy." Vashi defended.
As soon as she realised what she said she turned crimson.
All of them started to fake cough.
"What I meant was-" she started but I ended.
"He's arrogant, isn't it hot, guy?" I tried matching her voice.
Everyone at the table started laughing.
If looks could kill I would've been dead meat by now.
"The upcoming weeks are going to be fun with you two under the same roof." Sania didi laughed.
"Exactly Sandu! With him being here I need to-" urvashi was going to say ahead but..
This time Adithi intruded.
"Control your hormones."
I put my head back and laughed at this statement. Everyone were laughing their ass off.
"I need to stop myself from killing him." Vashi ended, slightly blushing and irritated at the same time.
This is definitely going to be fun!..
Hope you guys like this update..
It took nearly 3 hours for me to type it...
Hope meri mehnat waste na ho n aap sabko ye acha lagge..
N if if like it then hit the like button..
If you loved it or hate it then hit the comment box with your reviews..
And in last if you want me to keep writing such updates do the both but don't forget to vote also
From here I m writing as vashi(pataka)..
"Dude, what's with the shor sharaba in your house?" Adithi asked Mithali.
"I guess, Abhishek's victory celebration." She shrugged.
"Oh right, the hot guy is here." I rolled my eyes.
They chuckled at me.
"Don't go all fangirl mode on him." Mithali laughed.
"He ain't Virat Kohli, bro." I rolled my eyes, while getting out of the car.
"So, you're saying he's hotter than Virat?" Akanksha stepped in.
I glared at her in return.
I rang the doorbell in excitement. Sania didi opened the door.
"Sanduuuuu!" I hugged her, tightly, slightly chuckling at the nickname I'd given her.
"Vashi!" She squeeled and hugged me.
As soon as Komal didi heard my name she came running towards the door.
"Ay pataka!" She screamt while running towards me.
"Coma!" I screamt and practically launched myself on her.
"Coma? New one this time, huh?" She laughed while pulling away. I laughed along with her.
"I guess people tend to forget us, right Raj?" Manju aunty teased me.
"Arre jaanu!" I ran towards her.
Everyone laughed at that. I always called Manju aunty jaanu. She was so cool with it.
I stopped mid way.
"Jaanu yaar bollywood!" I said, reminding her.
A look of realisation washed over her face.
Me and Manju aunty always did that Raj-Simran run, whenever we meet. Though this was the second time I was meeting her.
Me and Manju aunty ran in slow motion and hugged each other.
"How're you beta?" Aunty asked me.
"I'm absolutely fine. Aap kaise ho?" I asked her.
"I hope someone remembers me." Raj uncle intruded.
I laughed at that and ran to the place where he was sitting to hug him.
While I was hugging uncle, I heard Mithali say, "Kabhi kabar doubt hota hai ki aap log mere mausa-mausi ho ya Vashi ke."
I laughed at that. Well, infact, all of us.
"They love me more." I stuck my tongue out.
"Well, Vashi, this is my son, Abhishek." Uncle introdued me to the hot guy.
"Hi hot guy!" As soon as these words left my mouth, my hand straight away slapped my mouth.
The girls started laughing. Aunty, uncle had an amused expression on their face. Coma(komal) and Sandu tried hard not to laugh but failed miserably.
And well, Abhishek? He had an amused smirk on his face.
Jerk already.
"Uh..I- I.. m-mean, don't you think it's too hot, guy?" I stuttered.
Only to make everyone laugh.
"Yeah, right, too hot, girl." Abhishek smirked, trying not to laugh along.
I glared at that idiot.
Okay, hot guy, my foot. More like arrogant hot guy.
Yeah, Vashi. Better.
"Abhay! Long time." Mithali said, while hugging him.
"How have you been? How's boarding?" He asked Mithu.
"I'm doing well. Boarding is fun, to be honest. And when these three are the people I share my room with, it has to awesome." She smiled.
I was now sitting next to uncle, showing him my muscles. He told me I'd become a stick.
"Oh by the way, meet my best friends."
"She is Adithi." He shook his hand with her.
"She is Akanksha." Mithu pointed out.
"Hey!" Akanksha said, a smile on her face, as she shook his hand.
Too formal.
"And she-" she stopped and blinked at me.
"What're you doing?" She asked with an eye brow raised.
"Supposed to be showing her non existent muscles." Uncle chuckled.
I fake glared at uncle.
Mithu smiled, shaking her head.
"And she is-"
"Pataka." Abhishek completed.
I narrowed my eyes at him.
"Hi, I'm Abhishek. You can call me Abhay." He smirked.
"More like go bye." I rolled my eyes at him.
From here the update will be written as abhishek..
"More like go bye."
Mom and dad laughed at that. Rest of them had on a look which said WOAH.
"You guys might be hungry na? Come eat something." Mom said leading them to the table.
Okay, Vashi was feisty. She was too cool, though. I can see how she sparks up everyone's mood. Akanksha was pretty cool too. She was easy to talk to. Adithi was kind of quite at the begining, but now we're chill.
I like Mithali's friends. They all are chill, well, except Vashi.
I sat next to Vashi.
She was muching on her fries.
"Don't stare at my fry, otherwise I'll make you cry." She said looking at her plate.
I chuckled at that, and started munching on my own fries.
Mom served us pizzas and coke later on.
"So, Abhay, how was your New Zealand trip?" Mithali asked.
"It wasn't a trip. He went to play." Vashi giggled.
"Same thing." Mithu face palmed herself.
"It was amazing to be honest! I got to learn a lot of things." I smiled at Mithu.
"That's good. So, what next?"
"Well, APL is coming up. It's starting after 2 weeks." I shrugged it off.
"What're you guys doing?" I asked them curiously.
"Well, me and Adithi have taken science. Akanksha and Urvashi have taken commerce." Mithu told me.
"Uh.. who's Urvashi?" I asked, totally confused.
Vashi looked at me as if I had a horn grown on my head.
"Uh... she is Urvashi." Komal didi pointed at Vashi, slightly chuckling.
It then hit me hard. Vashi- UrVashi.
Man, I'm stupid.
"Oh okay. Vashi Urvashi. Ah, I get it. You look like that though(urvashi rautela)." I winked at her.
I hope she really didn't get what I meant, because if she did she'll burn me alive.
"I got that." Vashi shot me a look.
"How glad I am to see my cousin and bestfriend get along so well." Mithu said sarcastically.
"Not my fault he's an arrogant hot guy." Vashi defended.
As soon as she realised what she said she turned crimson.
All of them started to fake cough.
"What I meant was-" she started but I ended.
"He's arrogant, isn't it hot, guy?" I tried matching her voice.
Everyone at the table started laughing.
If looks could kill I would've been dead meat by now.
"The upcoming weeks are going to be fun with you two under the same roof." Sania didi laughed.
"Exactly Sandu! With him being here I need to-" urvashi was going to say ahead but..
This time Adithi intruded.
"Control your hormones."
I put my head back and laughed at this statement. Everyone were laughing their ass off.
"I need to stop myself from killing him." Vashi ended, slightly blushing and irritated at the same time.
This is definitely going to be fun!..
Hope you guys like this update..
It took nearly 3 hours for me to type it...
Hope meri mehnat waste na ho n aap sabko ye acha lagge..
N if if like it then hit the like button..
If you loved it or hate it then hit the comment box with your reviews..
And in last if you want me to keep writing such updates do the both but don't forget to vote also
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Really good one.
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Keep writing adorable updates like this for us.
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And when it comes to vote the problem still persists that we are not able to read the title of the story as well as the pole question and it's options.
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By the way excellent writing babes(hope u won't mind)
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Keep posting.
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Keep writing adorable updates like this for us.
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And when it comes to vote the problem still persists that we are not able to read the title of the story as well as the pole question and it's options.
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By the way excellent writing babes(hope u won't mind)
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Keep posting.
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Jay Sutar
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I just want to tell you that you are going awesome with story. You have a such a creative mind and for your story that is awesome. Waiting for next update.............
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That's something Hatke ..
Really this kind of story never been written before having such cool plot..
Vashi n abhay or can say Urvashi n Abhishek chemistry is going to be crazy n full of fun ( for us definitely )..
Going great .. let's see what's ahead..
Really this kind of story never been written before having such cool plot..
Vashi n abhay or can say Urvashi n Abhishek chemistry is going to be crazy n full of fun ( for us definitely )..
Going great .. let's see what's ahead..
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