Adultery Kagaz ke phool

[Mr. Marvel]

wonderful update, superb! excellent!

mast,lajawab, bahut h majedar update

vah!vah! bahut badhiya ek mind blowing update, ekdum jackhass update,
very very erotic and sensual moments , bahut accha batcheets aur narraations,bahut khoob bhai

jabardast update! mind blowing writing

wow! wow! What a great update! Mind blowing writings and sensational scenes. Very nice build up.

What a terrific update!! It is really dashing story. very much exciting and erotic writings. Waiting to see what is going to be happened in the next update.

Thanks guys. Keep supporting.

 

[Mr. Marvel]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Rajiv peshopesh me h or udhar Gaurav apne baap ke sath milkar aage ka plan bana raha h haramkhor.
Riya pregnant ??
Uske liye kharab lag raha h , ise kaise bhi karke sahi karna aap.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

Thanks bhai and kya baat hai bhai apko Riya ki kuchh jyada hi fikar ho rahi hai. Kahin dil toh nahi a gaya na?

 

[Mr. Marvel]

Waise ek baat main kehna chahunga ke har baap ka sapna hota hai ke uska beta uska empire sambhale iske liye rajiv ko kuchh jyada hi villian type pesh kiya gaya hai jo ke galat hai. Usne yeh sab mehnat karke banaya hai to uski yeh ichha ke beta sambhale kahan galat hai. Haan uske aur ladkiyon se relationship justify nahi ki ja sakti. Rahul ko bhi thoda to sunni chahiye baap ki. Anyways overall your story is superb. Nicely going

Bhai i like your point of view aur vaise v bhai villain aur hero real life mein koi nahi hota. And bhai main Rajiv ko villain dikhane ki kosish nahi kar raha hun aur na hi Rahul ke behavior ko justify kar raha hun. It's just a conflict of two different personalities. Yahan ek taraf Rajiv ke liye uska kaam hi jindagi hai toh Rahul ke liye kuchh v uski khushi se badh kar nahi hai. And agar Rajiv ka extra marital affair hai toh hamare Rahul sahab v toh koi dudh ke dhule nahi hain. aur koi pagal hi hoga jo in dono personalities ko white and black bata sakta hai. And ek writer ka kaam hota hai story likhna ab usmein kon sahi kon galat wo toh puri tarah se readers par depend karta hai and i am happy k apne apni ek alag ray rakhi is bare mein. Kionk jitne jyada point of view ayenge utna sab log is story ko samajh payenge. Main yahan sirf sex nahi likhna chahta isliye agar koi reader meri story ke kisi character ko uski personality se judge kar raha hai toh it's a big achievement for me. So thank you bhai for putting across your point of view.

 

[manikmittalme07]

Bhai i like your point of view aur vaise v bhai villain aur hero real life mein koi nahi hota. And bhai main Rajiv ko villain dikhane ki kosish nahi kar raha hun aur na hi Rahul ke behavior ko justify kar raha hun. It's just a conflict of two different personalities. Yahan ek taraf Rajiv ke liye uska kaam hi jindagi hai toh Rahul ke liye kuchh v uski khushi se badh kar nahi hai. And agar Rajiv ka extra marital affair hai toh hamare Rahul sahab v toh koi dudh ke dhule nahi hain. aur koi pagal hi hoga jo in dono personalities ko white and black bata sakta hai. And ek writer ka kaam hota hai story likhna ab usmein kon sahi kon galat wo toh puri tarah se readers par depend karta hai and i am happy k apne apni ek alag ray rakhi is bare mein. Kionk jitne jyada point of view ayenge utna sab log is story ko samajh payenge. Main yahan sirf sex nahi likhna chahta isliye agar koi reader meri story ke kisi character ko uski personality se judge kar raha hai toh it's a big achievement for me. So thank you bhai for putting across your point of view.

Yeh aam incest stories jaisi story nahi hai. It's a piece of art. You are really a great writer. Main feel kar raha tha ke rajiv ko kuchh jyada hi bura character pesh kiya ja raha hai jo ke galat hai. Rajiv bhi apni jagah sahi hai. Agar mere papa mujhe aisa kehte jo mujhe bilkul bhi pasand na ho to main unki isliye ijjat na karun ke hamesha mujhe mere vichar ke ulat hi bolte hain to kahin na kahin main hi galat hunga kyunki mata pita hamara kabhi galat nahi sochte. Haan agar kahin pe conflict hai to baar baar samjhao unhe kabhi to samjhenge.

Agar Rahul ek baar apne papa ki baat maankar unka business sambhal leta to shayad wo bhi uski baat maan lete kyunki pita kathor jarur hote hain par bure nahi..

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Thanks bhai and kya baat hai bhai apko Riya ki kuchh jyada hi fikar ho rahi hai. Kahin dil toh nahi a gaya na?

Nahi , dil ki koi baat nahi h bhai.
Main bas ye kah raha tha ki use is daldal se nikal lijiye.

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Intjaar

 

[Mr. Marvel]

Yeh aam incest stories jaisi story nahi hai. It's a piece of art. You are really a great writer. Main feel kar raha tha ke rajiv ko kuchh jyada hi bura character pesh kiya ja raha hai jo ke galat hai. Rajiv bhi apni jagah sahi hai. Agar mere papa mujhe aisa kehte jo mujhe bilkul bhi pasand na ho to main unki isliye ijjat na karun ke hamesha mujhe mere vichar ke ulat hi bolte hain to kahin na kahin main hi galat hunga kyunki mata pita hamara kabhi galat nahi sochte. Haan agar kahin pe conflict hai to baar baar samjhao unhe kabhi to samjhenge.

Agar Rahul ek baar apne papa ki baat maankar unka business sambhal leta to shayad wo bhi uski baat maan lete kyunki pita kathor jarur hote hain par bure nahi..

Bhai ab yahi toh problem hoti hai Rishton Ki k agar thodi duri ban jaye toh use paatna almost impossible ho jata hai ab na toh Rajiv Rahul ko samjh raha hai aur na Rahul Rajiv ko toh dono mein galat sahi ka kuchh pata hi nahi. Par han shayad age chal kar kuchh keh nahi sakte. Par bhai umeed hai k age chal kar kuchh toh saaf ho jaye. Baki dekhte hain k age kya hota hai.

 

[Mr. Marvel]

Nahi , dil ki koi baat nahi h bhai.
Main bas ye kah raha tha ki use is daldal se nikal lijiye.

Bhai ab main toh kya kar sakta hun ab jo karna hai story k ander ke characters ko hi karna hoga

 

[Mr. Marvel]

Intjaar

Han bhai sahi kaha writer sahab pata nahi kaha mashgul hai sala update hi nahi a raha par bhai main karta hun baat usse.

 

[SweetSonali]

mast, bahut h shandar aur ekdum jabardast update, lajawab aur faddu