Adultery Kagaz ke phool
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Bro a honest Review.... Bhai story jab shuru hui thi to kafi maza araha tha, but ab story apna crisp kho rahi he. Or ye common he zyada tension nahi, mere saath bhi hua tha, me koi experienced to nahi hu but kuch baate zarur batana chahunga. Sabse pehli kami jo har reader mehsus karta he wo he Update Length, kya hota he agar aapka Update lamba hoga to readers ko padhne me maza ata he. To aap kya kar sakte ho ke 1 Update 1 episode sa bana do... it will be very helpful.... Or dusri baat ye dimag se hata do ke Story kitni lambi hogi, us se kya hota he kayi baar hum story lambi karne ke chakkar me aap main Incidents baadme dalne ki sochte ho, to ye ek baat par dhyan de sakte ho. But sabse ehem baat he story Length, usko ek episode sa bana do us se kafi help milegi. Kabhi kabhi aisa lagta he Update bewajah aadhe me hi khatam ho gaya, or ha bhai mene wo kiran or Rahul wala ek scene padha jab wo dance karte he etc etc or Rahul ke haath yaha waha chale jate he uska erect ho jata he, ye scene mujhe acche nahi lage, aisa sab to wo bahar kuch websites par kamuk stories nahi milti... Usme hota he. aapki story kafi acchi he aap isko thoda alag dhang se bhi pesh kar sakte ho.... or me asha karta hu ke aap meri baat Positive way me loge. Baki is story ki jagah humesha se dil me thi or aaj bhi dil me he.
Baki apna fixed nara #McRajiv
Baki apna fixed nara #McRajiv
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Sorry guys i am a bit busy right now. But i will try to update the story as soon as possible. May be tomorrow because its Saturday and i will also read your comments and reply to them. I hope you guys will understand my situation. I want to write but its been so stressful these days that i can't even think anything good. I hope a day off from work will help. And sorry once again to be late.
Koi baat nahi.
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Bhai thanks for your suggestion and bhai apki baat pe toh ek achhi khaasi discussion banti hai toh main apko DM karta hun. Baki apka nara sahi hi lag raha hai abhi toh.
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Bhai lamba khinchne ka koi chakkar nahi hai. Abhi jitna busy chal raha hun usse toh sochta hun k ek bada sa update likhke puri story khatam kardun but ap logon ka maja spoil nahi karna chahta baki try karunga k age v apko is jaise achhe achhe updates milte rahein. Thanks bhai.The last Update was awesome bro,
ha pichle kuch Updates me wo maza nahi aya, as i said earlier ke story thodi slow si ho gayi thi, jo kabhi kabhi story ko lamba khinchne ke chakkar me ho jata he, baaki last Update kafi romanchak raha
Still one of my favorite Story ❤
Waiting for Next Update.
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Guys kaam ke stress aur thoda personal life ki wajah se kuchh v dhang ka likh nahi pa raha hun. Toh main soch raha hun k ek adh week ka break lelun. But agar ap log kaho toh main 1 yah do update likh kar puri story khatam kar sakta hun yah fir ek do hafte ke break ke baad a kar achhe se finish karne ki kosish kar sakta hun. Baki jaisa ap log kahein.