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oscar pistorious

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chandamadam said:
Its bigger than any payment. Was Tagore paid to write Gitanjli?
Its a chance to live forever. He is not your typical writer who does desi erotica for few cents. He is special. That's why I have compared him with Rabindranath Tagore.
It would be an insult to offer him money for his work. Money can't compensate for his skills and the outcome henceforth.

Its a request, do not bring money/payment etc. in this thread. Its an insult to such a great writer.

If Penguin offers him a gig, that is another matter. Most of the great writers strive to get their work in front of as much audience as possible. Money is secondary for them. And oscar pistorious is great. One of the best writers in India.






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thank you all for your appreciation and love towards this story and special thanx to chanda madam who gave me such an honor that she compared me with such great personalities... I whole hearteddly accept your love and praises but one thing I would like to say that I stand nowhere infront of those great personalities like Rabindra Nath Tagore....they were legends I just started writing this story for the first time and I am really very happy that you guys gave so many praises and so much of love and one more thing I would like to say that besides this story I have a personal and professional life as well and all these things need time and I cant be dishonest with any of them....so kindly wait for the updates....I dont want you to pay me for this story as writing is not my profession...its just a hobby...still if you want to pay then do some charity....feed some poor people or donate it for some other noble cause....I have bought one laptop so i will try my best to update once in w week....I have written next update...but it needs lot of editing as it contains so much or objectionable contents which the moderates of this forum doesnt allow me to publish...but still i wrote it to email some of the selected readers to whom i had to email it...so tomorrow evening most probably i will give next update....till than have patience...tc...love you all
 
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Kuch der issi tarah heena ko apni god me bitha ker uske hontho ache se chus ker ramu ne heena ko apni god se utaar diya or uski skirt or panty ko utar diya or ur utaarker jalila ki taraf fenk di…Ramu ka ye signal saaf tha jalila k liye…wo farsh per giri apni fool si naazuk shehzadi ki skirt or panty ko gire dekh rahi thee…ab heena ke jism per ek bhee kapda nahi tha jo uski abroo ko dhakk sake…wahin ramu ke mann me ek sharart sujhi…or wo apne kale mazboot hatho se heena ki mulayam gori gaand ko sehlane laga or usne apne right hand ko zor se heena ki gaand per de maara jisse heena ki gaand laal ho gyi or ramu k hath or fingers ke nishan us per chap gye…or heena ke muh se zor se cheekh nikal gyi…..

Heena-aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Ramu ke chehre per ghinoni hassi aa gyi or usne lagater apne mazboot kale haatho se heena ki mulayam naazuk gaand ke dono sides ko thappad maar marker laal ker diya….Bechari masoom shehzaadi bass moan karti reh gyi…wo jaanti thee k ramu ko kisi bhee cheez ke liye rokna matlab ramu ko gussa dilwana hai…or gusse me ramu uske sath kaise pesh aayega ye wo ache se jaanti thee isliye siwaye zor zor se moan karne ke heena kuch nahi boli…

Moan karte waqt aaaahhhhh oooohhhhh ********** aaammmmmiiiiii pllzzzzzz aaahhhhh aisi awaazo se uska poora room goonj utha lakin zaalim ramu bass heena ki mulayam gaand per berehmi se thappad maarta jaa raha tha…jalila ko bhee apni beti ki kaamuk awaaze clearly sunayi de rahi thee….usko heena per taras bhee aa raha thaa….or ye scene dekh ker hairan thee wo k kaise ramu jaisa jaanwar uski fool si bachi ke sath aise pesh aa raha hai….or scene bhee kuch aisa hee thaa…koi dekhe toh aisa lagta jaise kisi khunkhaar rakshash k hath paristan ki sabse haseen pari aa gyi ho or wo rakshash ab us pari ko khaa jaane wala ho…or pari ko bhee us rakshash ki khuraak banne me maza aa raha ho…..

Kuch der thappad maarne or heena ki gaand ko laal karne ke baad ramu ne bhee apne kapde utaarne shuru ker diye…apni shirt or banyan or pyajama toh utaar ker usne heena ki skirt or panty k pass fenk diya or apna ganda used underwear usne utaar ker seedha jalila ke muh ki taraf fenk diya or aise pretend kiya jaise usne jalila ko dekha na ho…jalila kabhi heena or ramu taraf dekhti toh kabhi un dono ke utre hue kapdo per….or tabhi wo underwear seedha jaaker jalila k face per laga…jisse bachne ke liye jalila ne apna hath bhee aage badhaya lakin ek baar underwear muh per toh aa laga tha. Halaki baad me wo underwear jalila k hath me aa gya…or uski smell jalila ke naak se hoker uski saanso me samane lagi….

Wahin bed per scene kuch aisa thaa ek taraf fool se naazuk mulayam gori maalkin heena or dusri taraf kala badsurat Buddha naukar…dono poori tarah nange or un dono ko is haal me dekhne wali heena ki ammi jalila….halaki jalila aaj subah bhee apni beti ko is haal me dekh chuki thee…lakin is waqt toh besharmi ki saari hadhe paar hone jaa rahi thee…or kahin na kahin jalila ke jism me bhee aisa scene dekh ker garmi paida hone lagi thee…lakin abhi uski himmat nahi ho rahi thee apni beti ko rokne ki…uski ek wajah uske shohar bilal or bête asif ki ghar me maujudgi…usko darr thaa k agar usne subah wala hungama kiya toh ghar me tandav hoga….isliye usne chup rehne ki hee sochi..wahin ramu ka gand underwear abhi bhee jalila k hath me tha..Ramu ne heena ke dono boobs ko zor se pakad ker berehmi se daba diya jisse heena firse cheekh uthi..or firse uske muh se zor se kaamuk awaaze nikalne lagi

Heena ke muh se aisi kaamuk awaaze sun ker jalila bohot zyada garam ho gyi or na chahte hue bhee uska hath jisme ramu ka underwear thaa wo jalila k face ke paas le aayi or use smell karne lagi…jisse usko peshab or lund ki mani dono ki mixed smell aane lagi…ye smell jalila k naak se hoti hui uski saanso me enter ker gyi or Ramu ke kale motte lambe lund ki smell se tajurbekar jalila bhee madhosh hone lagi…wahin ramu zor zor se heena ke soft spongy breasts ko nichod nichod ker baari baari se chus raha thaa..jabki heena ka hath ramu ke ser per usko baalo me fir raha thaa or uske muhh se loud moans nikal rahi thee….wahin jalila bass ramu ke used underwear ko smell karti jaa rahi thee or ander ka scene dekhte dekhte na chahte hue bhee uska dusra hath apni salwar k beech poahnch gya or use apni chut ki jagah per geela geela mehsus hone laga….

Uska hath uski chut ko masalne laga…or uski aankhe bhee halki si band hone lagi….wahin ramu chudai bhale heena ki ker raha thaa lakin uski nazar abhi bhee jalila per hee thee…jalila ki aisi halat dekh ker uske chehre per firse ek kameeni muskan aa gyi….usne heena k through jalila ko or tadpane ki sochi….breasts ko ache se chusne k baad ramu ne heena ko farsh per ghattno ko bal bitha diya or ek hee jhattke me zabardasti apna lamba motta lund heena ke muh me ghusa diya jisse wo lund heena ke gale tak chala gya or masoom heena bass ghu ghu karti reh gyi or uski aankho se aansu nikal aaye….wahin wo scene dekh ker jalila ka hath jisme raamu ka underwear tha apne muh per chala gya shock me…..

Jalila(apne mann me) is zaalim berehem insaan ko zara bhee rehem nahi kaise vehshiana andaaz me meri fool si naazuk bachhi k sath pesh aa raha hai…aise toh koi jaanwar ke sath bhee pesh nahi aata…mere shohar ne toh kabhi mujhe ye sab muh me lene k liye nahi bola….ye fark hota hai ramu jaise jaahil gawaar me or mere shohar jaise ikhlaq wale insan me…kya karru??? Kaise roku is harami ko apni fool si shahzaadi k sath ye sab karne se….subah ki tarah roka toh hungama hoga or bilal or asif jag jayenge….kambakht heena bhee kuch nahi bol rahi na use rok rahi hai….kya karru main ab kaise roku isse???

Ramu- Haramzadi saali randi jalila…uski himmat kaise hue mujh per apne damaad per hath uthane ki….saali chudakkad namazi randi ko itni bhee tameez nahi hai ke damaad ka swagat kiya jaata hai us per hath nahi uthaya jaata….

Itna kehker ramu zabardast tareeke se heena ke muh ki chudai karne laga…ramu ke lambe motte kale lund ka her jhattka heena ke gale ke ander tak jaa raha thaa….heena ko takleef toh ho rahi thee ramu ke is vehshiyana andaaz se lakin usko pata thaa k ramu ka gussa uski ammi per se utaarne ka yahin ek tareeka hai k wo heena per apna gussa utaar de….or heena pehle bhee ramu ka aisa behavior tolerate ker chuki thee isliye kuch hadh tak heena ka mind pehle se prepared tha…lakin uske gaalo se uske neck tak uski laar beh rahi thee lund per chuppe lagate lagate….kyunki ramu ek sadak per chalne wali sasti randi ki tarah heena ke muh ki chudai ker raha thaa….sirf jalila ko dikhane ke liye…heena ke gulabi hontho ne ramu ke lambe kale lund ko apne ander sama rakha tha …Kuch der issi tarah heena se apna lund chuswane or usko gaaliya dene k baad ramu ne apna lund heena ke muh se nikaala or heena k gaalo per apne lund se thappad maarne laga…ramu ka lund muh se nikalte hee heena ne chain ki sans li ..

Ramu(heena ke gaalo per apne lambe motte lund ko maarte hue)- bol meri chudakkad randi tu meri kya lagti hai???

Heena- ji main aapki dharm patni hu….

Ramu(or zor se lund heena ke gaalo per maarte hue)- ek patni ka kya farz hai??

Heena- apne pati ka her hukm manna …use her tarah ka sukh dena….apne pati ki her khawaish poori karna….

Ramu- to meri khawaish hai k tu mujhe apni ammi ko chudwane me help karre…..bol karegi????

Heena(apna ser haan me hilate hue)-ji jaisa aapka hukm….lakin wo raazi kaise hongi???….matlab wo aaj jaise aapke sath pesh aayi…

Ramu- issi liye toh mujhe usko chodna hai…uski nafrat ka jawab pyar se yani apne lund se dena hai….bol tu madad karegi meri??

Heena(sharmili smile k sath)- ji jaisa aapka hukm mere pati dev

Ramu- wah ab bani tu meri dharm patni

Heena- ji ab toh aap meri ammi se naraaz nahi ho na??

Ramu- us chudakadd randi per toh mujhe gussa hamesha rahega or tab tak rahega jab tak us haramzadi ko main teri tarah apne lund bitha ker use maafi na mangwa du….lakin tujh per gussa nahi hu…tune aaj uske saamne mera lund chusker ye saabit ker diya k tu hamesha mera sath degi….main both khush hu tujh se..

Jalila ko ramu ke muh se apne bare me gaaliya sun ker ajeeb toh lag raha tha per bura nahi lag raha thaa…lakin uske liye hairani ki baat ye thee k kaise uski beti apni hee ammi ki abroo luttwane ko itni asaani se raazi ho gyi…kis hadh tak Ramu heena ke mann per or uske jism per control paa chuka hai iska ehsaas jalila ko ab ho raha tha….shayad heena ki humiliation dekh ker ab usko ramu ka ye behavior normal sa lagne laga tha ya yun kahe k acha lagne laga thaa….kyunki kahin na kahin jalila khud bhee Ramu ke dominating behavior ki mureed hoti jaa rahi thee…usko ab samajh me aane laga thaa k kyun uski khubsurat beti or bahu is kale budhe naukar ki ghulam bani hui hai….iski wajah ek toh hai Ramu ka lamba motta hathyar or dusra ramu ka domination …..

Heena- jee shukriya or koi hukm ho toh farmayiye

Ramu- tujhe bura toh nahi laga maine teri chudakadd ammi ka gussa tujh per nikala??

Heena- jee isme gussa kaisa ye toh huq hai aapka or farz hai mere… mere patidev ne mujh nacheez ko apna gussa nikalne k kaabil samjha isse zyada khushnaseebi ki baat ek mere liye ya kisi bhee patni k liye kya ho sakti hai bhala???

Ramu(ek baar firse heena ki gaand per thappad maarte hue or neeche se heena ki chut me apne lund ke jhattke maarte hue)- wah meri dharm patni aaj mujhe tera pati kehlane me wakai fakr mehsus ho raha hai….

Heena(Ramu ke lund ki sawari karte hue)- ji main toh ussi din se apki patni hone per fakr mehsus ker rahi hu jab se aapne meri maang me sindoor bhara hai or mere gale me mangal sutra pehna ker mere sath suhagraat manayi hai…..ab toh bass ek hee khawaish hai…ammi abbu humare is rishte ko kabool ker le or bhabhi ki tarah meri kokh se bhee aap hee ka bachha paida ho….tab main samjhungi k meri zindagi ka maksad poora ho gya jab aapka bacha meri god me khelega or main fakr se apke bachhe ki maa kehla paungi….or is tarah chup ker nahi balki shan se main aapke sath pyar ker paungi….

Ramu(heena ki chut me jhattke maarte maarte)- ek din aisa zaroor aayega meri jaan….teri ammi toh maan gyi ek din tera gaandu abbu or bhai bhee maan jayenge…

Heena- sach??

Ramu- much

Itna keh ker ramu ne heena ko neeche leta liya or zor zor se uski chut me jhattke maarne laga or heena ke muh se tez tez siskiya nikalne lagi or wo jhadd gayi….lakin ramu ka ajgar abhi bhee khada thaa…wahin apni beti ki chudai ka live scene dekh ker jalila ka hath bhee salwar k ooper se apni chut per tez tez chalne laga….is umar me uski chut bhee geeli hone lagi or wo madhosh hone lagi….wahin dusri taraf is umar me jawan mardo se zyada josh or ramu ke lambe motte lund ko dekh ker jalila ko hairani bhee hui or usko samajh me bhee aa gya k kyun uski jawan bahu or beti us budhe ki deewani hui padi hain…lakin heena ke jhaddne k baad ramu ne apna lund heena ki chut se nikaal liya or heena ko pait k bal leta diya or uski gaand ooper ho gyi or ramu ne firse heena ki gaand per thappad mare or gaand ko apne hatho se faila ker uske beech apne kale motte lund ka top rakhne laga….ye scene dekh ker toh jalila ke hosh udd gye….heena pehle bhee ramu se apni gaand marwa chuki thee isliye usne koi objection nahi ki…jalila is baat per both hairan thee…usne kabhi sapne me bhee nahi socha tha aisa sex….wo toh kayi saalo se normal sex bhee bhool chuki thee kyunki umar k chalte ab uske shohar uske sath sex me itni dilchaspi lete nahi the….lakin jawani me bhee uske husband ne bhee kabhi usko na lund chuswaya tha or na hee uski gaand maari thee…or aise zaleel karke chodna toh kabhi socha bhee nahi tha usne….lakin ramu dwara uski beti ki aisi chudai hoti dekh wo na jaane kyun ramu ki taraf attract ho rahi thee…

Wahin ramu heena ki mualayam gaand ko faila ker apna lamba motta kala lund ka laal top heena ki gaand me ghusa chukka thaa….heena ko dard toh ab bhee ho raha thaa lakin first time karwane jitna nahi….usne apna face pillow per daba liya taanki uski cheekhe zyada zor se na nikal sake…lakin fir bhee uski cheekhe jalila ko toh sunayi or dikhayi de rahi thee apni masoom beti ka aansuon se bhara chehra dekh ker jahan jalila ko taras bhee aa raha thaa wahin excitement bhee ho raha thaa itna motta lund itne tight hole me jaate hue dekhne ka…wahin ramu ne top ghusa ker zor se jhattka maara jisse aadhe se zyada lund heena ki gaand me chala gya or wo cheekh uthi

Heena- aaahhhhhhhhh plzzzzz araaammmm sseeeeeeeee

Jalial(mann me)- uff zaalim insan….. chodd de meri bachhi ko wo marr jayegi ***** k liye uski jaan baksh de…

Per jalila ko kya pata thaa k uski beti kuch hee din pehle jalila or bilal k hee room me ramu se apni gaand marwa chuki hai or ramu k lund ki mani bilal or jalila ko pila chuki hai apni chut or gaand se nikalker…….wahin ramu heena ki tabadtod chudai karne laga….wahin jahan shuruwat me heena ko dard ho raha thaa….lund ke jhattko ki frequency se kuch hee der me heena ko maza aane laga…gaand maarte maarte ramu heena ki gaand per thappad bhee maarta raha….kuch der baad fir se ramu ne heena ki gaand se apna lund nikaal liya or bed se uth gya….or heena ko utthne k liye bola….heena ne koshish toh ki per uski halat uska badan itna toot chukka thaa dono taraf ki chudai se k use utha nahi jaa raha that oh ramu ne uska hath pakad ker usko uthaya or firse uski legs apni waist k around cross karwa ker khada ho gya heena ko utha ker….or standing position me heena ki gaand per hath rakh ker heena ki chut ko chodne laga….

Wahin heena ne toh bass ramu ko hug kar rakha tha jabki ramu tez tez jhattke maar raha tha heena hee chut me or uski gaand me finger daal raha thaa…dono holes me heena ki chudai ho rahi thee wo bhee buri tarah se ….apni beti ko aise haal me dekh ker jalila ko taras bhee aa raha thaa or uska hath apni chut per bhee chal raha thaa…ek baar jalila pehle hee jhadd chuki thee or dusri baar bhee jhaddne k liye tayar thee…lakin ab usne apna hath apni salwar k ander daal liya thaa or apni chut masal rahi thee apni aankho k saamne sex scene dekh ker…uski jagah koi bhee hota shayad yahin karta…room ka scene hee kuch aisa thaa….kuch der tabadtod chudai karne k baad heena ek baar firse jhadd gyi or aisa chudai ka scene dekh ker jalila bhee heena k sath hee jhadd gyi…or uski saanse bhee tez ho gyi…or ramu bhee jhaddne k kareeb pohanch gya….toh usne heena ko neeche utar ker farsh per bitha diya or apne lambe motte lund ki sari mani heena ke chehre per nikal di……or bed heena k bed per late gya or kisi shahanshah ki tarah araam farmane laga….

Kuch der baad heena farsh se utthne ki koshish karne lagi halaki uska jism abhi bhee thakaan se toot chuka thaa lakin bed ka sahara leker wo utthne lagi ot bathroom ki taraf jaane lagi toh ramu ne usse rukne ke liye bola

Ramu- Sun meri dharam patni….aaj ki raat ka ek aakhri hukm apni patidev ka…

Heena- ji farmayiye…

Ramu- ye apne chehre per giri mere lund ki mani tu dhoye gi nahi…balki chaat ker saaf karegi….

Jalila(mann me)- ufff ye kaise gande kaam karwa raha hai ramu meri beti se…cheee aise bhee koi karta hai kya??? Nahi heena tujhe ***** ka waasta aisa ghinona kaam na ker….

Lakin usko or ek shock laga jab heena ne ser jhuka ker ramu ka hukm maana or apni finger se ramu k lunki mani ko saaf karke chaatne lagi….
 
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