Incest Kahani ek family ki ..... (completed)

[amita]

UPDATE 1

Ek college ke gate se kuch duri par kuch awara manchale ladke college aane wali ladkiyo par bhadde bhadde comment paas karke unhe chhed rahe the .... Sabhi ladkiyo ko to aadat si pad chuki thi inn sab kii isliye wo log apna face cover karke bina unki taraf dekhe aur sab kuch sunkar bhi ansuna karke apne college ki taraf chali ja rahi thi .... Ab inn awara ladko se kaun ulajhana chahe .....

Thik tabhi ek car se ek behad hi haseen ladki utarti hai ..... Ladki ne black goggle lagaya hua tha aur shirt pant pahna hua tha ..... jise dekh kar unn manchalo ka dhyan uske hi taraf chala jata hai aur wo muh faade uske taraf dekhe ja rahe the .... Tabhi unme se ek manchale ke muh se ek comment nikalti hai ....

Manchala 1 - Kya dikhti ho meri jaan .... kabhi hame bhi to seva ka mauka do ....

Manchala 2 - Abe wo meri hai .... chalo na rani kahi long drive se aate hain ....

Manchala 3 - Abe chup kar main tum sab ka boss hu isliye wo mere sath akele mein jayegi ....

Wo ladki apne car ka gate lock karke unn ladko ki hi taraf chal deti hai .... Aur college aane jane wale sabhi ladke aur ladkiya aascharya se uss nayi ladki ki taraf dekh rahe the jo ki jaan bujhkar unn bhediyo ke taraf ja rahi thi ....

Ladki - ji ap logo ne kuch kaha kya ???

Manchala 3 - Haan ham tumhare sath masti karna chahte hai .... chalogi kya ....

Abhi uss manchale ne bas itna hi kaha tha ki agle hi pal wo jameen par pada hua mila aur sayad uske kuch daant uska sath chhod chuke the .... Sabhi manchale hairan the ki achanak se ye kya ho gaya ..... Sabhi log ascharya se ek dusre ka muh dekh rahe the ....

Ladki - ab ek dusre ko yu suar ki tarah kyu dekh rahe ho aur kisi ko karni hai masti to aa jao ....

Darasal uss manchale ko kisi aur ne nahi balki uss ladki ne hi ek jabardast kick lagayi thi jisse wo jameen par gira hua tha aur ye sab itni tezi se hua kisi ko samajh mein hi nahi aaya ki abhi thode der pahle kya hua tha .....

Manchala 1 - Teri itni jurrat jo tune hamare sathi par hath uthaya ab teri khair nahi .... Aj to ham tera r##e karke hi chhodenge ....

Ladki - aaja aajma le main bhi to dekhu tumhare rago mein khoon hai ya sirf gandi naali ka paani hai ....

5 ladko ne uss ladki ko gher liya ....

Ladki - kiski majaal hai jo chhede diler ko ... are gardish mein to gher lete hain suar bhi sherni ko ...

Fir suru hua maar dhaad ka wo silsila jise dekh sabhi dekhne wali ladkiyo ke khoon mein ubaal aa gaya aur unke muh se swatah hi nikal gaya " ladki ho to aisi " ....

Kuch hi der baad sabhi manchale jameen par gire dhul faank rahe the ....

Ladki - sale gandi naali ke keede ghar mein maa bahan nahi kya jo yaha seedhi saadhi ladkiyo ko paresan karne aa jate ho .... Aj ke baad kabhi bhi yaha ya kahi bhi iss sahar mein dikhe to tumhari khair nahi ....

Wo ladki turant hi apna mobile nikal kar kisi se baat karti hai aur turant hi waha police ki ek gaadi aa jati hai aur sabhi manchalo ko load karke le jati hai (kyunki wo ab iss haal mein na the ki khud hi gaadi mein baith sake) ....

Waha par abhi achi khashi bheed jama ho chuki thi .... Wo ladki ab dheere dheere chalti huyi college ki ladkiyo ke paas aa jati hai jo ki uski taraf ijjat wali najro se dekh rahi thi ....

Ladki - dekho tum log ab yu dar dar ke jeena band kar do .... Agar tum jhukogi tabhi to koi tumhe jhukayega .... Har musibat ka dat kar saManchalaa karo .... Are tum sab mil kar agar ek ek thappad inn awaragardo ko lagati to kya wo tumhare samne tik pate ....

Bheed mein se hi ek ladki ne bolna suru kiya ....

Ladki 1 - didi ap kaun ho isse pahle to apo kabhi nahi dekha college mein ...

Ladki - are main iss college ki nahi hu .... Main iss ilake ki police inspector hu Rajni saxena .... Maine kal hi paas ke hi thane mein joining li hai ....

Ladki 1 - thank you madam apne jo hamare liye kiya hai wo sayad hi ham mein se koi kar pata .... Ham to ab jurm sahne ke aadi ho gaye the par ab ham bekhauf ghum sakte hain kyunki ap jo hamare sath ho ....

Rajni - bilkul aur please mujhe didi kaha karo .... Aur jab bhi tum logo mein se kisi ko meri jarurat ho bejhijhak call kar sakti ho ....

Aur fir wo inspector sabse vida lekar apni gaadi mein baith kar udanchoo ho jati hai ....

started reading again

 

[amita]

donon me jayada fark nahi hai
Haan isme bahut kuch nayapan hai

dost uss story ka plot xossip band hone ke baad se dimag se nikal gaya hai ....
abhi to filhal time ki kafi kami hai .... agar time mila to usko restart karne ke bare me sochunga

 

[amita]

Aapke reviews hamesha hi a he hote hai.
keep it up

Awesome update bhai,
aakhir kar ravi ki entry bhi ho hi gayi,
Diya ka ravi ke liye mamta ka bhaav adbhut hai,
vahi udhar mohini rajni ko samjha rahi hai ki har kisi se ulajhna sahi nhi hai,
ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

 

[amita]

For New story bhai

Story ki Starting bahut hi Jabardast hai or bhai agar ho sake to aapki pehle wali story ko restart karo wo story Meri favourite hai hai DIL KA RISHTA.

Good

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Kahan ho zopion bhai ??

Intjaar

 

[amita]

UPDATE 3

Rajni - maa ap please fir se suru na ho jana .... just chill ... Apki beti ko kisi se darne ki koi jaruratnahi kyunki main janti hu ki maine kuch bhi galat nahi kiya hai ....
Mohini - acha thik hai ab ja kapde change kar le .... main tere liye kuch khane pine ki cheezein ready karti hu ...

Rajni seedhiya chadh kar apne room ke taraf chal deti hai .... Room pahunch kar wo pahle apna uniform utarti hai aur fir washroom mein ghus kar shower lene lagti hai ....

AB AAGE

Idhar raat mein ravi ke mama ghar aa chuke the aur dono mama bhanje dinning table par baithe huye the aur diya unka dinner ka plate laga rahi thi ....

Ravi ke mama - Bete aur batao kaisa result raha apka ....

Ravi - mama ji bahut acha maine college mein top kiya hai ....

Ravi ke mama - Wah ye to badi achi baat hai .... tumne mohini didi ko ye khabar sunayi ya nahi ....

Ravi - oh sorry mama ji main bhul gaya abhi call lagata hu .... kya pata wo log abhi waha kya kar rahe honge ....

Ravi apni maa ko call lagata hai .... Ek do ring mein hi call pick ho jata hai ....

Mohini - hello beta kaise ho ....

Ravi - bahut acha maa aur ap log kaise ho ...

Mohini - ham bhi ache hain ....

Aur fir ravi apni ko apne result ke bare mein batata hai jise sun kar wo bahut khus hoti hai ....

Mohini - beta yaha kab aa rahe ho .... tumhare mama ji ne promise kiya tha ki graduation complete hote hi wo tumhe hamare paas bhej denge .... Ab to tumhara graduation ka result bhi aa gaya hai ....

Ravi - ji maa jald hi aaunga lijiye mama ji se hi baat kar lijiye ....

Aur fir ravi phone apne mama deepak ko thama deta hai .... Deepak apni sister mohini ko batata hai ki wo khud hi ravi ko pahunchane aayega .... Jisse mohini ko badi tasalli milti hai aakhir mile bhi kyu na apne bete ko 7 - 8 saal baad jo dekhne wali thi .... Ye to ek maa ka dil hi janta hai ki uspar kya bitati hai jab uske kaleje ka tukda usse dur rahta hai tab ....

Khair wakt pankh laga kar kab udd jata hai pata hi nahi chalta .... Ab to wo din aa chuka tha jab ravi ko apne ghar nagpur ke liye nikalna tha .... Train ki ticket evening ki thi par subeh se hi diya na jane kitchen mein kya kya banaye ja rahi thi mano aj duniya ki sari dishes ravi ko khila kar hi manegi .... Ravi bechara subeh se hi tarah tarah ke dishes chakh chakh kar paresan ho chuka tha ....

Ravi (kitchen mein ghus kar apni mami se) - mami ji .... kya ap bilkul nahi chahti ki main kabhi dobara yaha aaun ....

Diya ka dil tadap uthta hai ki aakhir usse kya galti ho gayi jo ravi ne usse aisa kaha ....

Diya - betu mujhse koi galti ho gayi kya ....

Ravi - nahi mami ji .... ap aj subeh se itna paresan kyu ho rahi hain .... Aj to apko mere sath jyada wakt bitana chahiye kyunki kal to main yaha nahi hounga ....

Diya - haan beta bas ye last hai .... Iske baad main bilkul free hu ....

Diya ne do din pahle hi ravi ke liye dher sare dress,jute aur uski pasandida chijo ki shopping kari thi .... yahi nahi usne rajni aur apni nanad mohini ke liye bhi shopping ki huyi thi ....

Kitchen ka kaam niptane ke baad diya aur ravi milkar packing karne lagte hain .... Teen trolly bags bhar chuke the ....

Ravi - mami ji itna sara saman dene ki kya jarurat thi ....

Diya - to kya apne betu ko khali hath bhej du ....

Ravi - mami ji ap bhi chalo na hamare sath ...

Diya - abhi to nahi chal sakti betu kyunki yaha bhi to kisi ko hona chahiye na tumhare mama ke absence mein buisness dekhne ke liye..... par main promise karti hu ki agle month jarur aaungi ....

Ravi - ok mami ji .... main bhi apka besabri se intjar karunga ....

Ravi ke mama bhi evening ko train ke time se 2 ghante pahle hi aa jate hain .... Diya ne unhe khana khila diya aur raste ke liye bhi khana pack kar diya ....

Ravi ke mama sabhi saman ko taxy mein rakhwa rahe the aur ravi diya ke paas aakar uske pair chhukar jane ki anumati mangta hai jisse diya ki aankho mein pani ka sailab umad pada .... Bahut der tak wo ravi ko apne seene se lagaye roti rahi .... Ravi ki aankhein bhi apni mami ka pyar dekh bhar aayi aur wo bhi bachche ki tarah bilakh bilakh kar rone laga .... Last mein ravi ne hi diya ko samjhaya aur aate rahne ka promise karke usko chup karwaya ....

Ravi bhi jakar taxy mein baith gaya aur fir taxy chal padi .... Diya taxy ko tab tak dekhti rahi jab tak wo uski aankho se ojhal na ho gaya ....

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Idhar nagpur mein apne bete ki wapsi ki khushi mein pure ghar ko nayi naweli dulhan ki tarah sajaya gaya tha .... Yehi nahi mohini ne apne bete ke aane ki khushi mein ek chhoti si party bhi rakhwayi thi ....

Ravi apne mama ke sath agle din evening tak nagpur pahunch chuka tha ..... Ek taxy lekar dono ravi ke ghar ki taraf rawana ho jate hain .... Ravi bahut excited tha apni family se milne ke liye .... Aakhir wo apne parents se 7 saal baad jo milne wala tha .... Rajni se to mile huye 10 saal beet chuke the ..... Rajni bachpan mein bade gussail nature ki ladki rahi thi aur apne chhote bhai par apna rob jamane ka koi bhi mauka wo hath se jane nahi deti thi .....

Apni bahan se huyi aakhiri mulakat yaad kar aj bhi uske rongte khade ho jate the kyunki last time rajni ne ek dande se maar kar uska sar phod diya tha aur uss wakt ravi ke mama mami wahi the ..... Wo ravi se itna jyada pyar karte the ki unhone usko apne sath le jane ka faisla kiya tha .... Uss din ke baad se ravi ki rajni se koi mulakat nahi huyi thi na hi rajni kabhi usse phone par baat hi kiya karti thi ....

Ravi ke ghar ke paas pahunch kar unhone taxy wale ki madad se luggage utarwaya ..... Ravi apne ghar ko ascharya se dekhe ja raha tha kyunki aakhiri baar jab usne apna ghar dekha tha wo itna bada nahi tha .... Aur ghar bahar se bhi aisa sajaya gaya tha mano ghar mein kisi ki shaadi ho ....

Deepak ne jakar ghar ka doorbell bajaya to gate uski bahan mohini ne hi khola ....

Mohini - wah bhai aa gaye tum .....

Deepak - ha didi aur ye raha apke kaleje ka tukda ....

Apni maa ko dekh ravi ki aankho mein aanshoo aa gaye ..... Usne jhuk kar apni maa ke pair chhuye .... Mohini ne usko pakad kar apne seene se laga liya .... Dono maa bete ki aankhein nam thi .... Mohini ne ravi ko itne jor se jakda hua tha mano wo ab usko ek pal ke liye bhi khud se dur rakhna nahi chahti thi ....

Tabhi peechhe se ek mardana awaz aayi ....

"Are bhai unhe yu hi bahar hi khadi rakhogi ya andar bhi aane dogi ...."

Ye awaz kisi aur ki nahi ravi ke papa raj saxena ki thi ....

Mohini ravi se alag hoti hai aur unhe 2 minute wahi bahar rukne ka kah kar andar bhagti hai aur kuch hi palo baad wo aarti ki thaali liye huye wapas aati hai aur apne bhai aur bete ki aarti utar kas unhe tika laga kar mithayi khilati hai ....

Mohini - Haan ab andar aa jao ....

Ravi aur uske mama andar aa jate hain aur raj saxena se milte hain .... Mohini unhe andar le jakar hall mein lage sofe par bithati hai .... Kuch der baad 25 - 26 saal ki ladki hath mein khane pine ki tray le kar aati hai ....

Ravi ne aankho ke ishare se apni maa se uss ladki ke bare mein pucha ....

Mohini - beta ye khushi hai .... Tum isko didi kah sakte ho ....

Ravi ne uss ladki ko namaste kiya jiske jawab mein wo bhi muskura kar uska abhiwadan karti hai ....

Khushi - ye ek anath ladki hai jise ravi ke father raj ne ek orphanage se god liya hua hai .... Mohini isko apni beti jaisi hi manti hai .... Ye bhi badi shiddat se ghar ke har kaamo mein mohini ka hath bantati hai .... Dikhne mein kafi sundar hai aur iska jism bhi kafi ache shape & size mein hai .... Aj ravi pahli baar khushi se mil raha tha ...

Ravi aur uske mama deepak halka fulka nasta karte hain ...

Deepak - didi hamari inspector bitiya kahi nahi dikh rahi ....

Mohini - bhai wo to kaam ke silsile mein delhi gayi huyi hai aur sayad kal tak wapas aaye .... Aur tumne bhabhi ko sath kyu nahi laya ....

Deepak - are didi waha bhi to kisi ko hona chahiye na buisness dekhne ke liye ....

Mohini - haan bhai wo baat bhi hai ....

Ravi - maa mami ji next month hamse milne aayengi ....

Raj - ye to achi baat hai unse mile huye lamba arsa beet gaya hai ....

Mohini, ravi aur deepak ko unke kamre mein le jati hai jo usne khas karke unke liye hi taiyar karwaya tha .... Taki shower wagairah lekar safar ki thakan ko mita sake aur unhe raat mein party bhi to attend karni thi jo ki uski maa ne hi unke aane ki khushi mein organise kiya tha ....

Good going

 

[amita]

Awesome update bhai,
behad hi shandaar aur lajawab update hai bhai,
ravi 10 saalon ke baad aakhir kaar apne ghar aa hi gaya,
rajni ke saath uski last meeting kafi horrible thi,
mami ravi ke jaane se kafi bhavuk ho gayi hai,
Khushi ka intro achchha hai,
ab dekhte hai jab hitler didi aayegi tab kya hoga,
Waiting for next update

Good review

 

[amita]

UPDATE 4

Ravi - maa mami ji next month hamse milne aayengi ....

Raj - ye to achi baat hai unse mile huye lamba arsa beet gaya hai ....

Mohini, ravi aur deepak ko unke kamre mein le jati hai jo usne khas karke unke liye hi taiyar karwaya tha .... Taki shower wagairah lekar safar ki thakan ko mita sake aur unhe raat mein party bhi to attend karni thi jo ki uski maa ne hi unke aane ki khushi mein organise kiya tha ....

AB AAGE

Raat mein sahar ke gine chune log ravi ke ghar party mein aaye huye the .... Mohini ne specially khud apne bete ko taiyar kiya tha ....

Jab mohini ne apne bete ko fully ready kar liya to usko ek baar upar se neeche tak gaur se dekha ..... Waise ravi ki height pahle se hi 5'11" inch thi aur sath hi sath usko halki fulki exercise ka bhi shaukh raha tha jiske wajah se uske muscles bhi ache khase the .... Wo abhi bahut pyara lag raha tha ....

Mohini - aaye haye mere bete ko kisi ki najar na lag jaye ....

Aur mohini ne apni kajal ka ek chhota sa tika ravi ke mathe par laga diya ....

Raj saxena khud hi apne bete ko apne sabhi dosto aur sahar ke nami girami logo se mila rahe the .... Party mein aayi huyi ladkiya tirchhi najar se ravi ko hi ghur rahi thi jabkii sare mard aur ladke mohini ke husn ko chori chhupke nihar rahe the .....

Jab sab se miilna julna ho gaya to ravi ke papa ne usko party enjoy karne ke liye chhod diya .... Ravi jakar ice cream counter se ice cream lekar khane laga .... Abhi usne ice cream ka pahla katra muh mein liya hi tha ki uske peechhe se ek bahut hi pyari si awaz aayi ...

"kya baat hai janab apni party mein khud hi hath saaf kar rahe hain aur hame to puchha tak bhi nahi ..."

Ravi ne peechhe mud kar dekha to ek badi hi pyari shakl surat ki ladki uski taraf hi dekh rahi thi aur muskura rahi thi ....

Ravi - ji apne mujhse kuch kaha kya ....

Ladki - aur nahi to kya main koi pagal hu jo khud se baatein karungi ....

Ravi - main kisi ko yaha janta nahi na isliye akele hi khane laga ....

Ladki - janab jaan pehchan to banane se hi banti hai na ....

Ravi - oh sorry mera naam ravi saxena hai ....

Ladki - ye huyi na baat .... mera naam jhanvi singh hai .... kya ap mujhse dosti karna pasand karenge ....

Ravi - haan kyu nahi koi pagal hi hoga jo ap jaisi khubsurat ladki se dosti na karna chahe ....

Ravi jhanvi se hand shake karta hai .... Aur fir dono ek dusre ke sath baat karte huye party ka lutf uthane lagte hain .... Ravi bhi khus tha ki usko kisi ki company to mil gayi ....

Wahi party mein aur bhi kai ladkiya thi jinki nigahe bahut der se ravi ki taraf chipki huyi thi par jhanvi ko ravi ke sath milne julne se wo usse jal bhun gayi aur man hi man jhanvi ko bhaddi - bhaddi gaaliya diye ja rahi thi ....

Khair party khatm hote hi sabhi log apne apne gharo ko chale gaye .... Ravi bhi aj safar aur party ke wajah se thak chuka tha isliye wo bhi apne room chala jata hai aram karne ke liye ....

Ravi ka ghar 2 floor ka tha .... Ground floor par kitchen, dinning room, guest room aur raj aur mohini ka kamra tha .... Jabki rajni,ravi aur khushi ke kamre first floor par the .... Ravi aur rajni ka kamra agal bagal mein tha aur dono ke room ke beech mein ek common bathroom tha jiska ek gate ravi ke room mein khulta tha jabki dusra gate rajni ke room mein khulta tha aur ghar ke baki sabhi kamro mein attached bathroom the ....

Ravi abhi apne room mein aakar leta hi tha ki uske mobile par uski mami diya ka call aa gya .... Ravi ne apni mami ko aj ki party ke bare mein bataya jisse wo khus ho gayi .... Aur bhi thodi der tak dono mami bhanje mein baatein huyi uske baad ravi diya ko good night kah kar neend ki waadiyo mein chala jata hai ....

Agle din ravi ki neend kisi ladki ki awaz se khulti hai ye koi aur nahi khushi hi thi jo ki ravi ko coffee dene ke liye aayi huyi thi ....

Khushi - chhote malik uthiye ye rahi apki coffee ....

Ravi - please ap mujhe malik walik na bola kare ya to ap mujhe mere naam see bulaiye ya ap mujhe bhai kah sakti ....

Khushi - ji jaisa ap kahe ....

Ravi - meri to thik hai par apki coffee kaha hai ....

Khushi - ji bhai meri coffee neeche hai ....

Ravi - apko mera yu apse baatein karna agar pasand na ho to main apko aage se tang nahi karunga ....

Khushi - ji ye ap kya kah rahe hain .... Bade sahab ne to mujh anath ko nayi jindagi di hai .... Waha anathalaya mein main kabhi khwab dekha karti thi ki kash mera bhi koi ho jise main apna kah saku aur yaha to mujhe itni pyari family mil gayi ..... Yaha aakar mujhe pata chala ki family kya hoti hai aur apne kya hote hain .... Mujhe yaha kisi chij ki kami nahi bhai .... Main yaha bahut khus hu ....

Bolte bolte khushi ki aankho se aanshoo beh nikle the ....

Ravi bed se uth kar khushi ko gale se laga leta hai aur uski aankho se aanshoo ko saaf karta hai ....

Ravi - didi apne mujhe bhai kaha na to fir ro kyu rahi ho .... beeti huyi baato ko bura sapna samajh kar bhul jaiye abhi apke samne to puri jindagi padi hai .... Yaha apko kabhi bhii koi dikkat nahi hogi .... Aur please aainda se rona mat warna main samjhunga ki ap hame apna nahi manti .... waise bhi apka naam to khushi hai aur apke chehre par udashi shobha nahi deti ....

Ab khushi ka rona ruk chuka tha aur wo ravi ki baanho mein khud ko dheela chhod deti hai aur ravi ke apnepan ko mehsus kar rahi thi ....

Wahi mohini bahar khadi ye sab dekh sun rahi thi usko apne bete par naaz ho raha tha .... Wo man hi man diya aur deepak ka sukriya adaa kar rahi thi jinhone uske bete ko itne ache sanskar diye the ....

Kuch der baad ravi khushi ko apni baanho se azad karta hai .....

Khushi - oh sorry bhai meri wajah se apki coffee bhi thandi ho gayi ....

Ravi - koi baat nahi didi ....

Ravi fresh hone ke liye washroom chala jata hai aur khushi tab tak uski coffee garam karke wapas uske room mein rakh aati hai ....

Evening tak ravi ke mama deepak bhi sabse wida lekar apne ghar ke liye nikal jate hain ....

Agli subeh ravi adat ke mutabik jogging ke liye nikal jata hai ..... Wo jab jogging karke wapas aata hai to usko apne ghar ke gate par ek nayi car park ki huyi milti hai ....

Wo ghar ke andar ghusta hai to uski najar sofe par baithi huyi ek behad khubsurat ladki par padti hai ..... Ladki ne abhi ek tight top aur jeans pahna hua tha .... Height 5'9" aur body bhi kasrati tha ..... Ravi to jaise uske chehre ko dekh apna sudh budh kho baitha tha .... Sayad usne aj tak usse khoobsurat koi ladki dekhi hi na thi ..... Teekhe nain naksh chehra itna gora mano abhi doodh se naha kar aayi ho ..... Hontho par laal rang ke lipstic lage the aur apna hero ravi usko ghure ja raha tha ..... Tabhi mohini ne uski tandra todi ....

Mohini - are beta tum aa gaye aao baitho ..... Isse milo ye hai tumhari didi rajni ......

Ravi man hi man khud ko kosne laga ki pahli baar uska dil bhi aaya to uski khud ki bahan par .....

Ravi ne hath jod kar usko namaste kiya .... Rajni ne jawab mein bas ek sarsari si nigah dali ravi par mano itna karke bhi wo uske upar bahut bada ehsan kar rahi ho .....

Kuch der baad uth kar wo apne room mein chali jati hai .... Ravi ke prati rajni ke iss rawaiye ko khushi aschrya se dekh rahi thi ....

Nice update

 

[amita]

Awesome update bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
khushi aur ravi ki achchhi bonding ho gayi hai,
vahi ravi ko janavi ke roop me ek dost bhi mil gayi hai,
ab rajni aise behave kyu kar rahi hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

Awesome update bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
khushi aur ravi ki achchhi bonding ho gayi hai,
vahi ravi ko janavi ke roop me ek dost bhi mil gayi hai,
ab rajni aise behave kyu kar rahi hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

Shaandar review

 

[amita]

That was a superb story

sir i am big fan of your story "dil ka rishta"
i was a silent reader in that site
i hope your new story will also rock the story section