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Thriller Kahani

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Shivay chauhan

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Yuddh ka shankh naad ho chuka tha commissioner krishnamurti arohi deva aziz aur surya ke saath parachute se lab se 20 meter ki doori pe utarte hai aur lagatar firing karte hue aage badh rahe the idhar charu gunship se sab ko backup de rahi thi lab ki taraf se bhi lagatar firing ho rahi thi waha anti tank device hone ki wajah se wo log gunship par bhi fire kar rahe magar pilot kafi sadha hua tha to koi nuksan nahi ho raha tha wahi dusri taraf veenu archan aslam Mr yang aur Mr James lab ke peeche ki taraf 100 meter doori pe utarte achanak hue humle ki wajah se wo zyada ammunition saath nahi la paye the magar jab unhe firing ki awaz sunai di to wo samjh gye ki rescue operation shuru ho chuka hai kyuki ye log peeche ki taraf the to kisi ka dhyan unki taraf nahi ho isi liye unka lab tak pahuchna asan ho jata wahi dusri taraf lagatar firing aur muqable ki wajah commissioner krishnamurti aur unki team ki goliya khtm hone lagti hai aur manzil abhi bhi door thi gunship pe ho rahe lagatar humle ki wajah se charu bhi unki koi madad nahi kar pa rahi thi
Commissioner krishnamurti – deva mujhe nahi lagta ki hum is tarah se lab tak pahuch payenge
Deva – mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta commissioner sahab
Aziz – toh ab kya karen humari goliya jald hi khtam ho jayengi
Arohi – magar williams ke yaha tak hume ladte rahna hoga
Wo apni poori taqat jhonk dete hai. Magar phir bhi samne se ho rahi gola bari ki wajah unke pair ukhadne lagte hai magar lagte hai na ki agar aap sahi ka saath de rahe hai to bhagwan apki madad zaroor karta hai wahi hua jaise hi commissioner krishnamurti aur unki team out of ammunition hui waise williams force aur do chopper le kar unki madad ko aa gya ab bazi ki h had tak unke hath me thi magar abhi bhi kuch bhi ho sakta tha rahaman ka boss yani Dr ye sab dekh raha tha wo achanak micheal ki taraf dekhta micheal uska ishara samjh kar ek neeli button daba deta hai achanak lab ke samne ki zameen apni jagah se hatti hai aur bahut rahe automatic weapon station bahar niklte hai commissioner krishnamurti aur unki team aur baki sabhi log ye dekh kar apni-apni position par ruka jate hai 10 sec ke bad DR micheal ko fire karne ke liye bol deta hai force ke kafi log zakhmi ho jate hai aur bahut log mare jate hai DR ne charu ki gunship ko nishna banaya wo agar charu waqt rahte kood na gai hoti to zaroor mari jati dekhte hi dekhte williams commissioner krishnamurti aur unki team ko gher liya jata hai ab surrender ke alwa aur koi rasta nahi tha Idhar veenu archan aslam Mr yang aur Mr James peeche ke raste se aage badh rahe the us taraf koi Guard ya camera nahi tha magar phir bhi ye log badi sawdhani se phonk phonk kar qadam rakh rahe the magar unhe nahi pata tha ki unke har qadam par kisi ki nazar thi wo log pichhle darwaze ke paas pahuchte hai aslam archan ki taraf dekhta hai wo use ishara karte unka ishara pate hi jaise wo gate kholta hai samne hathiyaron se less 20 se 25 admi khade the aur unke aage khada tha Rahman
 
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Shivay chauhan

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Is waqt sabhi log us lab me gun point pe Rahman aur DR ke samne kursiyon par bandhe hue the sabhi achhi tarah se mara gya tha phir chahe wo ladka ho ladki ho archan ya Mr yang aur Mr James sabhi ki halat kharab thi sabse zyada maar aslam deva aziz aur surya ki padi thi kyuki in logon ne shiva ke saath mil kar kai bar rahaman ko maat di thi commissioner krishnamurti ko bhi yahi halat thi wo bhi ab kisi bhi prakar se ladne ke qaabil nahi the tabhi taliyan bajata hua DR wahan ata hai aur kahta hai.
DR – bravo Bravo maine socha nahi tha ki tum log yaha tak aa jaoge man gye bhai.
Deva use ghoorte hue kahta hai
Deva – tujhe taliyan bajane ka bahut shauq hai na ek bar hume khol de phir har nukkad aur chaurahe par tujhse taliyan na bajwai toh mera naam deva nahi.
Deva ki baat sunke Rahman aage badhta to DR use rok deta hai aur khud deva ke paas ata hai aur deva chahre par lohe ki rod se war karta hai deva muh se khoon phek deta toh aslam bolta hai
Aslam – sale agar ek baap ki aulad hai to hath khol tujhe yahi zinda dfnata hun
DR aslam ki baat sunke Rahman se kahta hai
DR – rahaman lagta hai tumne unki khatirdari theek se nahi ki tabhi itna bol rahe hai
Commissioner krishnamurti – abe chutiye hum chahe adh mare hi kyu na hon magar tujhe par humesha bhari padenge jise tu torcher samjh raha hai wo to khel hai humare liye
Commissioner krishnamurti ki baat sunke DR bolta hai
DR – hmm lagta apko batna padega ki asli torcher kise kahte
Kah kar wo micheal ki taraf ishara karte micheal ek button dabata hai aur uske samne rakhi spherical jaise machine rotate karti hai aur samne shiva us machine ke beech o beech ek electric field se bandha hua khada tha use dekh kar yahi lag rha tha ki wo mar chuka ki aisi halat dekh kar sabhi ko ankhen nam ho jati hai archan to apni ankhen band hi kar lete hai unse shiva ki ye halat dekhi nahi jati aur kaise dekh lete jis shiva ko unhone apne bete ki taraf rakha sab kuch sikhaya jise humesha Sher ki tarah har mushkil se ladta dekha Aaj use is halat me dekh kar unka kaleja fat jata wo gusse se kampe lagte hai aur kahte hai
Archan – tu apne aap ko bahut bada Sher samjhta hai na mahakaal ki saugandh agar Mai zinda bacha toh Teri chhati cheer ke Tera Dil nikal lunga
Unki is garjana se bhari hui dhamki sunkar ek baar to DR bhi kamp jata hai wo toh uske chahre pe naqab tha toh uske expression dikh nahi rahe the tabhi wo mahaguru waha aate hai jinhe dekh Mr yang archan se bolte hai
Mr yang – Kya yahi hai wo
Archan use dekhte hai aur apna jabda peeste hue kahte
Archan – han yahi hai wo dhokebaaz
Idhar dusri duniya me ek oonchi se pahad ki choti pe bani gufa hoti hai jiske andar bahut andhera tha andar insano ki haddi idhar udhar padi hui thi aur insani maans ki terwra gandh aa rahi thi usi gufa ke aakhiri chhor par ek dragon jaisa dikhne wala Vishal kaai jeev zanjeeron se bandha hua tha uske teen muh the aur uski ankhen band aisa lag rha tha ki wo so Raha hai.
Idhar shiva aur wo saya abhi bhi bahas me Lage hue the shiva us saye se kahta hai
Shiva – aap itna soch kyu rahe hai meri madad kijiye
Saya – Mai soch raha hun ki kya tum iski keemat chuka paoge
Shiva – kaisi keemat
Saya – agar Mai tumhari madad karta hun toh tumhe uski bhari keemat chukani Pad sakti hai tumhre apne hi tumhe marna chahenge har wo cheez jo tumhe pyari wo tumse chhin jayegi tumahre dost tumhre sathi tumahra sab kuch kya tum taiyyar ho
Shiva – agar aisa hone se Mai mere apno ki jan bacha sakta hun to Mai taiyyar hun
Saya – ek bar phir soch lo josh me koi faisala mat karo.
Shiva – Mai faisala soch samjh kar karta hun faisala karne ke baad nahi sochta aur waise bhi apno ki jan bachane ke liye Mai kisi koi bhi keemat chuka sakta hu jaise apne chukai thi aur waise bhi 10 ko bachane ke liye 100 ko marne ya khud marne se Mai peeche nahi hatta
Saya – Mai janta thi ki tum yahi kahoge akhir ho to tum mera hi ansh aur kisne kaha ki tum marne wale ho ya mar jaoge
Shiva – to phir
Saya – har sawal ka turant mil jaye to maza hi kya
Kah wo saya gayab ho jata hai aur jaise hi saya gayab hota hai shiva ko lagta hai ki wo gir raha hai idhar micheal machine ki taraf dekhta hai aur DR aur Rahman ko apne paas bulata hai shiva ki pulse wapas aa gai thi wo sand le raha tha jise dekh kar teeno ke teeno hairan the kyuki picchle aadhe ghante se shiva ki sand aur pulse nahi chal rahi thi jaha ye log pareshan the wahi wo mahaguru ghabra gya tha wo dheere se kahta hai
Bhavishya wani sach ho rahi hai
 
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Girte hue shiva ke kanon me us aaye ki lafz goonjte hain
Saya – tumhare shareer me abhi itni taqat nahi hai ki jo tum mang rahe ho wo tum sambhal sako
Shiva – mai jhel lunga kuch na karne se toh kuch karna bahter hai
Saya – jaisi tumahri marzi
Idhar shiva dheere dheere ankhe kholta hai uske samne uske sari team thi bebas aur lachar jise dekh kar shiva ki ek ankh se ansu nikal jata hfi DR shiva se kahta hai.
DR – are are are shiva rota bhi hai mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha abhi mat ro jab in sab ko bari bari mar kar ladkiyon ka gang rape karwa ke unhe acid se jalunga na tab rona
Shiva DR ki taraf dekhta hai uski ankhon me jwalamukhi phoot raha tha uski ankhon me itna tej tha ka DR ka usse ankhen mila pana mushkil ho gaya tha wo DR se kahta hai
Shiva – jab tak shiva zinda hai in logon ko kuch nahi ho sakta
Wahi dusri taraf dusri duniya me ek saya ek unchi pahadi par bani gufa me tezi se badh raha tha jab wo gufa ke chhor par pahunchta hai toh use wahi teen muh wala Vishal kaai jeev zanjeeron se jakda hua milta hai wo jeev us saye ko dekhta hai aur adab se apne teeno Sir jhuka deta hai saya us jeev ke beech Wale Sir par pyar se hanth pherta hai wo apne teeno muh upar karke bahut ke chinghad nikalta hai jise dusri duniya ke sare rajya kamp uthte hai uske bad wo apne teeno muh se bahut bhayankar aag uglta hai jo gufa me ikkathi hone lagti hai wo saya apne hanth upar uthata hai aur kuch mantra padhta hai dheere dheere wo aag Kali hone lagti hai jab wo poori tarah se Kaali ho jati hai to wo saya bolta hai
Saya – jao mere ansh ko tumhari zaroorat hai jao usko madad karo aur bhi tumahre rastee aye use mita do jaao
Wo kali shakti tezi se gufa se nikalti hai aur seedhe us deewar ki taraf badhti hai jo dusri duniya aur humari duniya ke beech me thi wahan ke paharedar use aata hua dekh lete hai
Pahla paharedar – dekhiye mukhya lagta ansgromia ki shakti isi taraf aa rahi hai
Dusra paharedar – hume ise rokna hoga
Mukhya paharedar – ab ise koi nahi rokta sakta kyuki ise adesh seedha iske malik se mila hai
Aur unke dekhte dekhte wo kali shakti us abhedya deewar me ek chhed banati hui nikal jati hai
Idhar DR jab shiva ki baat sunta hai toh kahta
DR – achha aisa hai toh phir tu hi bata pahle kise marun
Shiva – sabse pahle mujhe maar
Shiva poori kathorta se kahta hai uski baat sunke DR kisi bacche ki tarah bolta hai
DR – are yaar aisa thode hota hai tujhe toh tadpane ka plan hai
Shiva uski taraf dekhta hai aur kahta hai
Shiva – tu samjh nahi Raha hai agar tujhe zinda rahna hai toh mujhe marna padega
DR – kya yar shiva tu toh Sara game hi kharab kar raha hai chal theek hai mai hi decide karta hun ammm sabse pahle tere archan ko Marta hun kyuki usi ne tujhe shiva banaya chal phir faisla ho gya Rahman mar de iske archan ko
Rahaman apni pistol cock karta hai shiva archan ki taraf dekhta hai archan samjh jate hai aur shiva se kahte hai
Archan – fikr mat kar mere bachhe majne tujhe sikhaya hai na maut any nahi shuruaat hai
Shiva roye hue archan se kahta
Shiva – archan mujhe maaf kardo
Rahaman trigger dabane Hi wala hota ki tabhi bahut tez bijli tadakti hai aisa lagta jaise aas paa hi giri ho sabhi ek second ke liye chaunk jate hai Rahman phir se goli chalne hi wala hota hai ki lab ke samne ki deewar toot jati hai aur wo kali shakti seedha shiva ke seene me ghus kar aar par nikal jati hai mahaguru ye dekhkar wahan se bhag jata hai micheal jaise ye dekhta wo us machine ko on karne ki koshish karta hai jise wo dursi duniya ka darwaza kholne ke liye istemal karne wala tha magar power zayada hone ki wajah se sare blast ho jate hai idhar shiva ke shareer me wo shakti lagatar aar paar ho rahi thi shiva ke aas pas kala dhuan uth Raha aur wo bhi itna gahra ki kuch dikhai nahi de raha tha wo dhuan dheere dheere shiva ki team ki taraf badhta hai DR rahaman se firing karne ko kahta Rahman aur uske sare admi fire karne lagte hain magar koi response nahi aata jab dhuan chhatta hai toh wahan koi nahi hota
Shiva ki saari team waha se Gayab thi Dr ye dekh kar baukhla jata idhar jab shiva ki team apni ankhe kholti hai toh khud ko azad aur jungle ke beech o beech pati hai wo samjh nahi pate ke abhi abhi kya hua unhe bas itna yaad tha ki un par firing ho rahi hai
 
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