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Thriller Kahani

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Shiva apne kamre jakar zameen pe bichi chatai pe let jata hai aur apna keypad phone nikal kar kuch padhne lagta hai abhi use padhte 15min hi hue honge ki kamre k darwaza bajta hai shuvauthta hai aur gate khol deta hai samne ek medium personality wala ladka khada hua tha jiski umr shiva ke barabar hi thi shiva bina kuch bole use rasta de deta hai wo kamee me aata hai shiva ki chatai pe baith jata hai aur shiva se kahta .

Ladka – kya kar rahe the shiva .

Shiva – kuch nahi baat ek raat ki padh raha tha exbii pe .

Ladka – baat ek raat ki matlb tum dead never lie poori padh li .

Shiva – nahi wo bhi padh raha .

Ladka - tujhe lagta hai ki dead never lie jaisi kahani real e dekhne ko mil sakti hai .

Shiva – ye sab fiction hoti hai real nahi .

Ladka – lekin phir bhi agar real me ho toh .

Shiva – toh mai ye kahunga ki ya wo ladka jhooth bol raha hai ya phir wo chutiya hai jo in sab bakwaas pe dhyan de rahe hai jaise tu ye kahaniyan sirf entertainment ke liye hoti inme haqiqat nahi hoti .

Ladka – han tumse mujhe yahi ummeed thi waise ye batao ki tum itni kahaniyan padhte ho net pe books me jahan mil jaye wahan toh tumhe isse milta kya hai .

Shiva – kuch nahi bas accha lagta kuch der ke liye hi sahi mai kisi dusri duniyan me pahuch jata hun aur ye duniyan bilkul waisi hi hoti hai jaisi mujhe chahiye .

Ladka – wo kaise mujhe toh aaj tak aisa kuch kyu mahsoos nahi hua jabki stories toh mai bhi padhta hun .

Shiva – kyuki tum mahsoos kat nahi pate

Ladka – matlb mai kuch samjha nahi .

Shiva – mai samjhata hun jaise ki mai abhi baat ek raat ki padh raha hun toh usme padmini jo heroin hai bahut sundar hai toh mai apni imaginary se uska ek sketch bana leta hun ki shyad aisi dikhti hogi rahul pandey jo hero hai wo ek jawan police wala toh mai samjh lunga ki uski height kareeb 6 feet hogi aur fit shareer hoga aise mai dusre characters ka bhi ek rough sketch bana leta hun toh mujhe padhte waqt lagta hai ki ye sare characters mere samne hai aur is scene me aisi body language hogi bas isi tarah se mai dusri duniya me pahuch jata hun .

Ladka – badi solid imaginary hai tumhari yar .

Shiva – ab chupchap ya toh yaha se nikal ke nahi toh apne muh ko tala laga tum ne mera kafi waqt barbaad kar diya. .

Kah kar shiva apne phone me baat ek raat ki padhne lagta hai ye thriller thi aur thrillers ka toh chaska hota ki jab tak khtm na ho jaye tab tak aap use chhod nahi sakte hai abhi shiva shiva ne ek update adha hi padha tha ki uska kamre ke darwaze pe kisi ne dastak di jab shiva ne koi jawab nahi diya toh dastak dena wyakti kamre me dakhil ho gaya ye archan ka assistant tha shiva use dekhta hai aur samjh jata hai shiva bina kuch bole apna phone kamre me rakh kar uske paas pahuch jata hai shiva ke paas aate hi wo wyakti bahar nikal jata shiva uske peeche peeche chal deta hai jab shiva archan ke paas pahuchta hai toh use archan ke saath ek ladki dikhai deti hai .

Shiva – aapne bulaya .

Archan – han shiva ye rudranshi hai mere dost ki beti orthography ka course kar rahi ise kuch pacchiyon ki photos leni thi toh maine ise yahan bula liya peeche jo jungle hai waha kafi prajati ke panchhi hai waise toh mai ise le jata magar mujhe compitition ke intzam dekhne hai toh tum ise le jao kyuki yaha mere baad tym hi ho jo jungle se wakif ho akhir wo tumhara dusra ghar jo hai .

Shiva – theek chaliye .

Archan – are abhi nahi thodi sham ko jana abhi toh dhoop hai .

Shiva – theek hai .

Kah kar shiva waha se chala jata hai uske jane ke baad rudranshi kahti hai .

Rudranshi – uncle apke students toh bahut deciplined hai .

Archan muskura kar kahte hai .

Archan – han magar shiva ki baat hi kuch aur hai usne aaj tak meri koi baat nahi tali .

Archan ki baton se rudranshi shiva kuch impress ho jati hai aur uske baree me janne ke liye ichhuk bhi wo puchti hai .

Rudranshi – accha ye kaun si city se hai .

Archan – pata nahi nahi .

Rudranshi – pata nahi .

Archan – han ye aaj 1 saal pahle mujhe jungle ke bahar behosh mila tha kaha se aya hai kaun hai kuch pata nahi aisa nahi ki use yaad nahi bas wo batana nahi chahta jab wo mujhe mile tha toh uske shareer pe kafi zakhm the aur gahre zakhm the jisse maine ye andaza lagya ki iski koi dushmani hogi .

Rudranshi – magar is umr me dushmani kuch ajeeb nahi hai .

Archan – ajeeb toh hai magar maine kabhi shiva se poocha nahi jab shiva hosh me aya toh usne mujhse kaha ki mai use apna student bana lun aur martial arts sikhaun aur mai man gya kyuki maine uske andar yoddhaon wale gun dekhe the sach kahun toh kabhi kabhi mujhe usme meri jhalak dikhai deti hai agar ek sentence me shiva ko describe karna ho toh he is the best jitne bhi students yahan hai ya the un sab me mujhe shiva ki takkar ka koi nahi dikha .

Archan ki baat sun ke rudranshi ke man me na jane kyu shiva ko janne ki iccha hone lagi aisa aksar hota hai ki jo cheej dusron se alag hoti hai hum uske baare me janne ke liye kuch jyada hi bechain rahte hai yahi rudranshi ke saath bhi hua .



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Sham ke waqt jab shiva archan ke paas pahucha toh usne dekha ki kuch log archan se bahas kar the shiva jab wahan pahuchta hai toh ek admi archan se kah Raha tha .

Admi – ye jagah Hume kisi bhi qeemat pe chahiye chahe kuch bhi kyu Na Karna pade .

Usne badi hi badtameezi se kaha jis par archan ne use thappad mar diya tabhi peeche se ek gunda aage aata hai aur kahta .

Gunda – buddhe teri ma ka .

Kah kar wo jaise hi apna haath archan ko marne apna haath uthaya hi thi ki achanak uske pet me ek ghoosa padta hai aur wo dard se dohra ho jata hai ye ghoosa kisi aur ne nahi balki ki shiva ne chalaya tha shiva ki is harkat pe jo admi tha jo sab ka leader raha hoga wo gusse se shiva se kahta hai

Admi – tu janta hai tune kiske admi pe haath uthaya hai .

Shiva ek nazar uski taraf dekhta hai aur kahta hai .

Shiva – admi aurton ke hote hai mardon ke nahi .

Admi – aey sale .

Wo shiva ki taraf bhadta hai toh shiva sirf apni ungli uske chahre ki taraf karta hai aur kahta hai .

Shiva – sun pahli aur akhiri baar samjha raha hun chala ja aur yaha dubara dikhai mat dena warna itni jagah se todunga ki jodne wala bhi pareshan ho jayega chal nikal .

Shiva ne bilkul sakht aur rookhe laheje me gusse se kaha

Admi – dekh lenge tujhe chalo

Wo admi apne logon ke saath waha se nikal jata hai rudranshi jo door se ye sab dekh rahi thi shiva aur archan ke paas aati hai shiva archan se puchta hai .

Shiva – kaun the ye log .

Archan – is jagah ko khareedna chahte hai taki yaha mall baba sake mall kya drugs ka adda bana sake .

Shiva – aapne police me complaint ki .

Archan – nahi aaj pahli baar hi aye hai mai dost dig vikramaditya se baat kar lunga tum fikr mat karo .

Shiva – phir bhi apko aitiyat baratni chahiye.

Archan – mai dekh lunga mat bhulo ki mai tumhara guru hun .

Shiva – yahi toh dar hai ki aap mere guru hai apke usool hai magar inke koi usool nahi hai .

Archan Shiva talte hue kahte hai .

Archan – are rudranshi beta tum aa gai accha kiya jao shiva ke saath .

Shiva – mai kahi nahi jane wala archan apki jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai.

Archan – tum fikr mat karo beta mai khyal rakh sakta hun tum rudranshi ke saath jao .

Shiva – theek hai .

Shiva ne bade anmane thang se jawab diya aur rudranshi ko chalne ka ishara kiya jane kyu shiva ka man nahi tha rudranshi ke saath jane ka aisa nahi tha ki use archan ki fikr thi wo janta tha ki archan ka koi kuch nahi bigad sakta aur na hi use dar lag raha tha archan ke liye uski sabse badi pareshani thi rudranshi pata nahi kyu shiva ko ladkiyon se kya chid thi wo kabhi kisi ladki se baat karna pasand nahi karta tha yahi wajah thi ki aaj use ajeeb si ghabrahat ho rahi thi kyuki aaj pahli bar wo kisi ladki ke saath akela tha khair archan ki baat toh manni thi dono log chal dete jungle waha se 2 kilometer ki doori pe tha dono log paidal chal rahe bilkul khamosh dono mese koi kuch nahi bol raha shiva toh karega nahi aur rudranshi ka pata nahi waise toh wo bahut baate karti thi magar aaj shiva saath use ajeeb sa mahsoos ho raha tha ya fir yu kahe ki use jhijhak si ho rahi thi kyuki aaj tak usne aise ladke hi dekhe the jo usse khud aake baat karte magar shiva wo toh kuch bol hu nahi raha thak kar rudranshi ne hi baat karne ka faisla kiya .

Rudranshi – tmhara naam kya hai .

Shiva – archan ne nahi bataya

Shiva ki baat sunke rudranshi thoda sakpka jati hai kyuki uski tone bahut hi jyada rude thi magar phir bhi wo himmt karke kahti hai .

Rudranshi – tum theek de baat kyu nahi karte .

Shiva – mai aise hi baat karta hun .

Rudranshi – magar mujhe pasand nahi tumhara is tarah se bolna .

Shiva – toh mat bolo .

Rudrashni ek nazar shiva ko dekhti hai wo is waqt black round neck t shirt aur black lower pahne hue tha uski t shirt Uske bazuon pe kasi ho rahi thi sab kuch toh normal tha magar uski kamar me3 round rassi bandhi hui thi rudranshi ko samjh me nahi aya ki is rassi ka kya chakkar hai utsukta vash wo shiva se poocha hi leti hai .

Rudranshi – shiva ye rassi ki liye .

Shiva – waqt aane pe par pata chal jayega

Phir dono me koi baat nahi hoti hai kuch door jane ke baad shiva aur rudranshi ruk jate hai kyuki samne kareeb 15 se 20 fit ki ek sapat chattan thi jise dekh kar rudranshi kahti hai .

Rudranshi – shiva ab kaha jana hai.

Shiva – upar .

Rudranshi – upar matlb kaise .

Shiva – wait and watch .

Shiva aage badhta hai aur us chattan par chadne lagta hai lagta hai aur kuch hi der me wo upar khada tha phir shiva apni kamar me bandhi hui rassi kholta hai aur use neeche dal kar kahta hai

Shiva – ise pakad lo .

Rudranshi wo rassi pakad leti hai shiva use rassi ke sahare upar kheench ne lagta hai rudranshi shiva ko hairani se dekhne lagti hai shiva ko dekh kar aisa bilkul nahi lag raha tha ki use zara bhi mushkil ho rahi hai hai aisa lag raha tha ki jaise ye toh uska roz ka kaam hai jab rudranshi upar aa jati hai toh shiva wapas rassi apni kamar me bandh leta hai rudranshi is waqt shiva ko dekhe ja rahi thi usne pahli baar shiva ke chahre ko gaur se dekha tha uske chahra ek dam sakht tha uski hari ankhen kisi ko bhi khaufzada karne ke liye kafi thi magar ek cheez jo shiva ke chahre me rudranshi ko ajeeb lagi wo uski masoomiyat rudranshi ko is baat ki zara bhi ummeed nahi thi kyuki shiva ka behavior masoomiyat shbd se koson door tha magar thodi hi sahi shiva ke chahre pe masoomiyat toh thi jab shiva rudranshi ko is tarah apni taraf dekhta pata hai toh wo kahta .

Shiva – tum yahan mujhe dekhne nahi pacchiyon ki photos lene aai ho chalo .

Shiva ki baat se rudranshi ka dhyan tootta hai shiva jungal ki taraf padta hai aur rudranshi uske peeche peeche chal deti hai jungal kafi ghana aur darawana tha agar shiva saath me na hota toh rudranshi ki toh haoat hi kharab ho jati ghaas ghutno tak aa rahi thi magar shiva bade aram se aage bhad raha tha jaise use poora rasta yaad ho kuch door chalne ke baad shiva rudranshi se kahta hai .

Shiva – chalo shuru ho jao .

Rudranshi ek nazar shiva ki taraf dekhti jaise pooch rahi ho ki wo kahna kya chahta hai shiva ko jaise uski baat samjh me aa gai ho wo samne ki taraf ishara karta hai jab rudranshi ishare ki tarf dekhti hai toh khushi aur hairani se charon taraf hariyali hi hariyali thi aur pedon par na jane kitni kism ke panchhi the rudranshi apne camere se unki tasveer lene lagti wo kafi khush thi aur shiva khamosh sab theek theek chal raha tha magar achanak …………….


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