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Thriller Kahani

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Rudranshi aur shiva wahan se seedha academy aate hai rudranshi kafi khush thi academy pahuchte hi subhash shiva ko bahar hi mil jata aur kahta hai .

Subhash – prabhu aapke darshan ho gye warna lag raha tha ki aaj apko dekhne ka saubhagya na milega .

Subhash ne vyang ke teer chhode jispe shiva ne use ghoor kar dekha magar rudranshi muskurane lagi phir subhash ne serious hote hue kaha .

Subhash – Shiva tujhe archan kab se dhoond rahe hai ja pahle un se mil le .

Shiva seedhe archan ke paas jata hai jab wo archan ke kamre me gusta hai toh use archan ke alawa 1 admi air dikhai deta hai shiva archan ke paas ja kar unhe pranam karta hai aur sawaliyan nazron se dekhta hai archan uska sawal samjh jate hai aur kahte .

Archan – shiva inse milo ye hai tung jang shaulin ke sabse bade pujari .

Shiva unki taraf dekhta hai wo ek monk ke bhesh me the phir acharan kahte hai .

Archan – mr jang ye hai shiva jiske bate me maine apko bataya tha .

Tung jang shiva se kahte hai .

Jang – inhonne mujhe tumhari pareshani ke bare me bataya magar mai tumhare muh se sunna chahunga

shiva ek nazar archan pe dalta hai jaise pooch raha ho ki bataye ya na bataye archan uski baat samjh ke ankhon se ishara kar dete hai phir shiva tung jang ko sab kuch bata deta hai jise sunne ke baad wo kahte hai .

Tung jang – toh isme tumhari pareshani kya hai .

Shiva – mera gussa .

Shiva kah chup ho jata hai phir kahta hai .

Shiva – mera gussa bahut jaldi aape se bahar ho raha pahle kabhi mujhe itna gussa nahi ata tha magar jabse ye sab shuru hua tab se ba jane kyu mujhe bahut jaldi aur bahut tez gussa aane laga hai .

Tung jang – toh tum kahna chahte ho ki wo yuddha tumhare andar ke gusse ko bhadka raha hai .

Shiva – nahi mujhe lagta hai ki wo mere andar ke gusse se zinda ho raha hai .

Shiva ki ye baat archan aur tung jang ko chukane ke liye kafi thi phir tung jang bolte hai .

Tung jang – shiva tumne jis tarah se aur jo bhi kuch mujhe bataya meri nazar me uska ek hi ilaaj hai .

Archan – kya

Isse pahle shiva kuch bol pata archan bol pade

Tung jang - – psychic room .

Archan – mr yang aap ye kya kah rahe hai psychic room se toh aaj koi sahi salamat nahi nikala koi pagal ho gya koi coma me chala gya kisi ko paralyses ho gya aise results hone ke wabjood aap shiva ko iski salah kaise de sakte hai .

Archan ne apni chinta waykt ki .

Shiva – kya ye kaam karega .

Tung jang – ye toh tumhari maansik shakti ke oopar nirbhar karta hai .

Shiva – theek hai mai taiyar hun .

Archan – lekin shiva …..

Shiva – apko mujhpar bharosa hai .

Archan – han hai .

Shiva – toh bas aap befikr rahiye mujhe kuch nahi hoga .

Tung jang – shiva agar tum chaho toh phir se soch lo .

Shiva – mai faisala soch samjh kar karta hun faisla karne ke baad nahi sochta.

Shiva ne poore vishwas ke saath jawab diya .

Tung jang – theek tumhe mere humare temple chalna hoga .

Shiva – kya ye temple china me hai .

Tung jang shiva ki baat pr has dete hai aur kahte hai .

Tung jang – nahi shiva humare har temple ek psychic room hota hai bas uska istemaal har kisi ko nahi aata .

Shiva – toh kab nikalna hai .

Tung jang – kal subah .

Shiva – mai Theek hai Mai kal apko taiyar milunga .

Kah kar shiva wahan se chala jata hai tung jang use jaye hue dekh rahe the ya yun kaho ki kuch soch rahe the unhe yun sochta dekh archan kahate hai .

Archan – aao kya sich rahe mr yang.

Tung jang – ye ladka bahut himmat wala .

Archan – wo toh hai ab iski yahi himmat ise psychic room se bahar nikalegi .

Kah kar wo tung jang ki taraf dekhte hai jaise apni baat ki pushti kar rahe hon .

Wahi shiva jab archan ke kamre se bahar ata hai toh subhash use gate pe hi khada mil jata hai wo shiva ka haath pakadta hai aur tanahai me le jake usse kahta hai .

Subhash – shiva tu pagal toh nahi ho gya tu psychic room ke liye raazi kaise ho gya .

Shiva – agar maine ye nahi kiya toh bhi kai pagal ho jaunga .

Subhash – matlb .

Shiva – matlb ye ki us warrior ne mujhe hi kyu chuna wo chahta kya hai wo duniya ko tanah karna chahta hai ya bachana ye sab cheezen mere dimaag me hai air mujhe pareshan kar rahi hai agar inka jawab mujhe nahi mila toh ek din mai bahut pachtaunga aur mai wo din nahi dekhna chahta .

Subhash – theek hai chal mani teri baat magar ye bata ki ye rudranshi se tera kya lafda hai .

Shiva – wo mujhse pyar karti hai .

Subhash – aur tu .

Shiva – tum jante ho ki mai nahi kar sakta .

Subhash – toh tune use bata diya .

Shiva – poori baat nahi batai .

Subhash – hmm theek hai .

Shiva – tujhse ek kaam tha .

Subhash – bol .

Shiva apni jeb se ek letter nikal kar subhash ko deta hai .

Shiva – agar mujhe kuch ho jaye toh ye letter tu janta hai kaha pahuchana hai .

Subhash – han janta hun aur ye bhi janta hun ki mujhe ye letter padhna nahi hai

Shiva – han .

Subhash – shiva ek baat bata tu aaj bhi usse pyar karta hai .

Shiva – han bilkul aur hamesha karta rahunga .

Subhash – magarkya tu janta hai ki tu usse kabhi milega bhi ya nahi ya wo bhi tera intzar kar rahi .

Shiva – nahi mujhe nahi pata .

Subhash – phir bhi tu usse pyar karta hai.

Shiva – ye zaroori toh nahi ki hum jise pyar karen wo bhi humse pyar kare pyar me sharten nahi hoti bas pyar hota hai aur jahan sharten hoti hai whan pyar nahi hota aur rahi baat milne ki ya paane ki toh mila unse jata hai jo door hota hai aur paya use jata hai jo kho jata hai .

Subhash – teri athics ki toh daad deni padegi magar aise kab tak jiyega zindgi ki kuch plannig bhi hoti mere bhai .

Shiva – zindagi koi plan nahi hoti aur jo plan ki jaye wo zindgi nahi hoti
 

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Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai...
Bahut hi sandar update hai Bhai..
Specially last line Jo aapne likhi hai wo Dil chu liya..
 

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Agle din shiva aur tung jang dono monk temple ke liye nikalte hai archan aur rudranshi bhi saath ana chahte the magar shiva ne unhe ye kah kar rok diya ki is mushkil ka samna wo akele karna chahta hai monk temple academy se 50 kilometer ki doori pe shiva aur tung jang jeep me apna sagar tay kar rahe the dono ke beech khamoshi thi jise todte hue tung jang kahte hai .

Tung jang – shiva mujhe pata chala ki tum kis tarah se academy me aaye lekin tum ne aaj tak kisi ye nahi bataya ki tumhari wo halat ki kisne .

Shiva – mai beete hue kal me nahi jeeta aur na hi uske bate me kisi ko batata hun .

Tung jang – magar ateet ke bina bhavishya ki koi pahchan nahi hai

Shiva – magar sirf ateet ke sahare hi bhavishya ka nirmaan bhi nahi hai .

Tung jang – hmm tum bahut dilchasp insan ho bahut dino baad aisa koi mila hai .

Shiva – mujhe toh laga tha ki mai akela hi pagal hun .

Tung jang – tum pagal nahi ho tum wo jo dusre ki samjh me nahi aata .

Shiva – khushi hui jaan kar waise ek baat poochho thi .

Tung jang – ki tum psychic room se sahi salamat nikloge ke nahi .

Shiva – nahi .

Tung jang – toh phir .

Shiva – ye yoddha hai kaun .

Tung jang – kya archan ne tumhe nahi bataya .

Shiva – thoda sa hi bataya hai magar mujhe poori baat janni hai .

Tung jang – ye kahani ankaromiha ki hai wo shaitan aghora aur ek insani ladKi ki aulaad tha .

Shiva – ye sab mai janta hun magar usse mera kya talluk hai .

Tung jang – shiva jaisa ki tumhe maloom hai ki wo ek insan aur shaitan dono ka mishran tha aur bahut taqatwar bhi tha .

Shiva – han toh .

Tung jang – toh usne apne jaisa ki ek aise insaan ki jarurat thi jo uski shaktiyon ko khud me sama sake isiliye usne tumhe chuna .

Shiva – agar mai use khud pe hawi hone se rok nahi paya toh kya hoga kya wakai duniya tabah ho jayegi .

Tung jang – ye sab tum par nirbhar tumhara insani jazba kitna mazboot hai .

Shiva – hmmm ek darkhast hai apse meri .

Tung jang – bolo .

Shiva – agar hum kamyab na hue toh aap mujhe mar dijiyega .

Tung jang – mujhe nahi lgta ki iski zarurat padegi mujhe tum par poora bharosa hai .

Baton baton me dono log monk temple pahuch gye wahan kuch doosre monks bhi maujood the tung jang unse mile aur phir shiva ko saath leke andar dakhil ho gaye na jane kyu shiva ko aaj bahut sukoon mil raha tha aisa use kai salo baad mahsoos hua tha waha ka vatavaran bahut accha tha har taraf positive energy thi dono log chalte hue ek kamre ke samne ruk gaye .

Tung jang – shiva yahi hai psychic room magar andar jaane se pahle mai tumhe kuch baate bata dena chahta hun .

Shiva – ji .

Tung jang – shiva psychic room me jane se pahle tumhe apne aap ko ektra karna hoga kisi bhi tarah ki pareshani nahi rakhni hogi sab kuch bahar hi chhodna hoga kyuki agar aisa hua toh tum apne maqsad me kamyabi hasil nahi kar paoge mai tumhe bahar se monitor karta rahunga magar kuch kar nahi paunga toh ab sab kuch tumhare haath me hi hoga andar jane ke baad tumhe dhyan lagana hoga apne andar maujood us taqat se baat karni hogi kya tum kar paoge .

Shiva – koshish karunga .

Tung jang – koshish nahi shiva tumhe karna hoga poori tarah se aur ek baat wo shaktiyan tum se bahut jyada taqatwar hai toh zara sambhal kar .

Shiva – ji bilkul .

Phir shiva psychic room me ghus jata hai ye kamara charon taraf se band tha sirf deewarein hi deewarein thi aane jane ka darwaza sirf ek hi tha aur deewaron ka rang bilkul safed shiva kamre ke beech me jata hai pakshi kar ke baith jata hai khud ko poori tarah relax karne baad wo apni ankhen band kar leta hai sunya me jane me use waqt laga par is waqt wo sunya me tha jaha kisi ka koi khyal uske dimaag me nahi tha tabhi use ek roshni dikhai deti hai wo roshni shiva ke bilkul samne thi shiva is waqt apne dimaag ke us hisse me tha jahan wo shaktiyan ya yun kaho ki ankaromiha tha shiva uski taraf dekhta hai dheere dheere roshni chahre ka akaar le leti hai wo Chahra shiva se kahta hai .

Chahra – mujhe maloom tha ki tha ki tum aaoge magar itni jaldi ye nahi socha tha .

Shiva – mujhe aap se kuch poochna hai .

Chahra – bolo mere bacche .

Shiva – aap ne mujhe hi kyu chuna apni shaktiyon ke liye .

Chahra – hahahaha tum shayad nahi jante magar tum mera hi ansh ho meri hi parchhai ho .

Shiva – matlb .

Chahra – tumhare zindgi meri di hui hai tum hi ho jo mujhe khud me sama sakte ho meri shaktiyon ko sambhal sakte ho aur manav jati pe raaj kar sakte ho .

Shiva – agar mai inkar karun toh .

Chahra – hahaha tumhare chahne na chahne se kuch nahi hoga magar phir bhi mai tum ek wada karta hun .

Shiva – kya .

Chahra – jab tak tum nahi chahoge tab tak mai tum pe hawi nahi hounga magr jis din tum mere saath jud jaoge mai tumhe us duniya me le jaunga jahan tumhari sabse jyada zaroorat hai bolo manzoor .

Shiva – doosri duniya me mai kuch samjh nahi .

Chahra – is duniya se alag humari ek duniya hai jahan shaitano par bahut zulm hota hai tum unki akhiri ummeed ho .

Shiva – magar mujge toh laga tha ki aap insanon ko khtm karna chahte ho .

Chahra – jo ladai tumne sapne me dekhi wo shaitano aur insano ke beech nahi thi balki dusri duniya ke sabhi rajyon se ho rahi thi .

Shiva – mai kuch samjha nahi aap theek se bataiye .

Chahra - 1 . Gondor - ye state ish mayabi duniya kii sabse jyada saktishali aur bikasit state hai baki ke state's ke muqable , yakan ke log jadui kala me mahir hain aur ache khase yodha bhi hain , ish state ne mayabi duniya ko bohut bade bade jadugar aur yodha diye hain jinhone hamesha hii ish mayabi duniya ko buri shaktiyon se bachaya hai
2 . Gandharv Nagri - ye state hai Gandharvon ka yahan pe sivae Gandharvon ke aur koi bhi nahin reh sakta ish liye ish state ka naam Gandharv Nagri hai , Gandharv Nagri ke Gandharv bohut hii saktishali hote hain aur bohut chalak bhi inke pass daybii shaktiyan hoti hain aur ye sab bohut hii kushal yodha bhi hote hain aur sath me ye Gandharv bohut hii shant swabhav ke hote hain
3 . State Of Hobbit's - Hobbit's yane kii boune(chote kad ke insaan) ye bohut hii takatvar hote hain aur jiddi bhi , din bharr mehnat karna aur sham ko apne sare thakan ko dur karke apne parivar aur apne doston ke sath mouj masti karna inka roj ka kaam hai , zindagi ko kese jiya jata hai ye log bohut hii ache tarike se jante hain , ye log bohut hii shant hote hain lekin agar inhe kissi baat pe gussa agaya to yehi shant log bhukamp macha dete hain
4 . Witches Mountain - ye ek pahadi aur jungli ilaka hai , yahan pe Witches yane kii chudail yane kii dayanon ka raaz chalta hai , chote chote bachon ko marke unke dil khajana ye inka kaam hai ish se wo apni umar badhate hain aur unhi bachon ke khun ke madad se tarah tarah ke jadu tona karna bhi inki hamesha kii adat hai aur yahi inka kaam hai inn sab kaam me inko maza atta hai aur ishi wajah se koi bhi ish ilake ke pass se bhi nahin gujarta hai
5 . Jungle Of WareWolf's - ye ek bohut hii bada jungli ilaka hai aur yahan pe WareWolf's kii hukumat chalti hai , WareWolf's yane kii adam bhediye , ye ek aishi prajati hai jo dekhne me to aam insaanon kii tarah hote hain lekin dekhte hii dekhte ye sab bishal kai bhediye ke rup me badal sakte hain aur jab ye apne WareWolf's ke rup me hote hain to bohut hii khatarnak hote hain aur ush waqt inhe harana bohut hii mushkil hojata hai
6 . Death Valley - Death Valley yane kii murdon kii wadi ye ilaka hai vampire's aur monster's ka yane kii pisach aur danavon ka ,aaj ish state pe WareWolf's ka raaj hai , inn warewolf's ne vampire's aur monster's ko apna gulam banake rakha hua hai , bhale hii aaj ish state pe kisika bhi raaz ho lekin salon pehle Death Valley ish pure mayabi duniya kii sabse khatarnak state's hua karta tha.

Humari jung yani death valley ki jung baki panch rajyon se ho rahi thi .

Shiva – matlb insani duniya ko mujhse koi khtra nahi .

Chahra – nahi humari duniya alag hai .

Shiva – theek hai mai raazi hun .

Chahra – theek hai lekin tab tak tum meri kisi shakti ka istemal nahi kar saktehan tumhara bahubal hi sirf tumahara rahega jis din bhi tumne meri kisi shakti ka prayog karna chaha mai tum pe hawi ho jaunga .

Shiva – mai poori koshish karunga ki wo din kabhi na aye .

Chahra – tum apni niyati nahi badal sakte magar kisi humare beech hui baat mat batana warna ye log hi tumhe mar dalenge .

Kahte hue wo Chahra mitne lagta hai aur dheere dheere gayab ho jata hai




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Shivay chauhan

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Lijiye doston update hazir hai padhiye aur apne kimti reviews dijiye

Is update ka kuch baag maine agnivarsha story se liya hai because I found it best sorry agni bhai
 
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Super fantastic update bhai Shiva kab death valley jayega aur Shiva ka past kya hai
 
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FABULOUS UPDATE BHAI
KOI HOLLYWOOD MOVIE LG RHI HE
 
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