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Agle din subah sabhi log compitition ki taiyari me lage hue the 10 baje se sare compititions shuru hone waale the har level ke martial arts combat honge kick boxing taicaundo karate sword fighting aur freestyle wrestling sabhi kuch duniya bhar se martial arts aur combat waiting lene wake students aaj yaha ikattha hue the sabhi log kafi excited the archan shiva aur rudranshi is waqt archan ke room me the archan shiva se kahte hai.

Archan – shiva mai tum se fir pooch raha hoon kya sach me tum kick boxing sword fighting aur freestyle wrestling teeno me participate karna chahte ho .

Shiva – mai to taicaundo aur karate me bhi participate karne wala tha magar rules sirf teen ki hi ijazat dete hai.

Archan – soch lo ek baar phir se .

Shiva – mai faisla sich samjh kar karta hun par faisla karne ke baad nahi sochta .

Jahan shiva ki ankho me confidence tha wahin archan ki ankhon me dar tha kyuki ek hi game participate karne me jaan ka khatra hota hai aur shiva toh teen teen me participate kar raha tha aisa nahi tha ki unhone shiva pe bharosa nahi tha poora bharosa tha magar fir bhi ek dar tha abhi shiva kamre se nikal bhi nahin paya tha ki ek ladka daudta hua aata hai aur archan se kahta hai .

Ladka – archan dig sahab ko kuch gunde adhmari haalat me jungle ki taraf leke jaa rahe the .

Archan – kya bakwas kar rahe .

Ladka – archan mai sach bol raha hun .

Archan – theek mai abhi dekhta hun jake .

Archan ne kaha hi tha ki shiva bol padta hai .

Shiva – nahi archan aap ka yahan rukna jyada zaruri hai mai jata hun .

Archan – lekin shiva compitition ka kya .

Shiva – mai compitition tak wapas aa jaonga aap fikr na karen

Archan – hmm toh fir ye liye jao .

Archan shiva ko ek katana dete hain shiva use leta hai aur unki taraf sawaliyan nazron se dekhta hai jaise kuch pooch raha ho archan samjh jate hain aur kahte hai .

Archan – mai janta hun ki kaime tumhe sikhaya hai ki jasn lene ke liye nahi jaan bachane ke liye lado magar kabhi kabhi jaan bachane ke liye jaan bachane ke liye jaan leni bhi padti hai .

Shiva unki baat sunke apna sar jhukata hai aur furti se nikal jata hai uske jaate hi rudranshi kahati hai.

Rudranshi – apko shiva ko akele nahi bhejna chahiye .

Archan – tum fikr mat karo shiva ki kabiliyat pe mujhe poora yakeen hai bas dar is baat ka hai ki kahin wo aape se bahar ho gya toh kya hoga .

Archan ne muskurate hue kaha magar unki muskurahat me dar bhi shamil tha

Rudranshi – matlb .

Archan – shiva ka gussa bahut bura hai halanki use kabhi gussa ata nahi magar jab aata hai toh kuch nahi bachta maine ek baar hi use gusse me dekha tha uske baad usne kafi badlne ki koshish ki aur kamyab bhi hua lekin fir bhi kuch kah nahi sakte .

Idhar shiva poori taqat se daudta hua jungle ki taraf badh raha tha academy se jungle ka rasta 30 min ki doori pe tha magar shiva 15 min me hi us deewaar ke paas pahuch gya tha shiva us deewaar pe chadhta hai aur upar ja kar charo taraf dekhta hai shiva badi sawdhani se aage badh raha tha abhi tak use aisa kuch nahi dikha tha jisse use dig sahab ka koi surang milta wo jungle me kaafi undar aa chuka tha wo is waqt black color ke karate suit me tha abhi wo do kadam chala hi tha ki tabhi uske peeche se koi bhari bharakam ladki se waar karta hai war itni zor ka tha ki ladki ke parkhacche ud jate hai abhi ye hua hi tha ke bai taraf se koi moorti si bel pe jhoolta hua aata hai aur ek laat shiva ke muh pe mar deta hai shiva dusri taraf ghoom jata hai toh teesra shaks use utha kar sar ke bal zameen pe patak deta hai shiva charon khane chit hokar zameen pe let jata hai uske girte hi char log uske samne khade ho jate hai un sabke aadhe aadhe chahre naqaab se dhake hue the un mese ek shaks kahta hai .

Shaks – mujhe nahi laga tha ki ye itni jaldi chit ho jayega .

Dusra shaks – han yar wo chinese academy wale bekar me hi isse dar rahe the .

Wo dono baat kar hi rahe the ki tabhi ek awaaz aati hai .

Bas ho gya tum logon ka .

Jab sabhi log awaaz ki taraf dekhte hai toh hairan rah jate hai kyuki ye awaaz kisi aur ki nahi balki shiva ki thi wo is samay unke samne khada tha haath me abhi bhi katana thi wo un charon ki taraf dekhta hai aur kahta hai.

Shiva – tum log nahi jante ki tum logon ne kitni badi galti ki .

Shiva apni katana wahin zameen pe gira deta hai aur unpe toot padta hai aur bijli ki gati se kisi ke muh pe kisi pasliyon pe kisi ke pet me aur kisi ki gardan pe poori taqat se goosa mar deta hai wo charon shiva ke ek war se zameen pe gir padte hai shiva unke paas aataa hai aur unse poochta hai .

Shiva – maine nahi socha tha ki tum log itni jaldi har maan loge ab batao kisne bheja tha tumhe .

Pahla shaks - Chinese academy walon ke taki tum compitition me hissa na le sako humara kaam tumhe bas uljhaye rakhne ka tha .

Usne karhate hue kaha Shiva unki taraf ek nazar ghoir ke dekhta hai jisse wo aur ghbra jate hai shiva unke kareeb jane lagta hai toh dusra shaks ghbra ke badi mushkil se bolta hai.

Dusra shaks – hum dach kah rahe hai sachmuch hume un Chinese academy walon ne hi bheja tha.

Shiva unke upar jhuk ke kahta hai .

Shiva – unse kahna agli baar koi dam daar admi bheje .

Toh tumhe damdaar admi chahiye .

Peeche se ek awaaz aati hai shiva us awaaz ki taraf dekhta hai toh samne ek lamba chauda vyakti khada tha uske pahnawe aur deel daul se saaf pata chal raha tha ki wo koi unche level ka fighter hai shiva uski taraf badhta hai aur 4 kadam ki doori pe ruk jata hai wo admi shiva ko gaur se dekhta hai aur kahta hai .

Admi – tum me mujhe abhi tak koi aisi baat nahi dikhi jisse ye sabit ho sake ki tum ye compitition jeetne ke layak ho .

Shiva – ye maine kab kaha ki mai jeetne ke layak hun lekin han koshish poori karunga .

Admi – koshish toh tum tab karoge jab yahan se wahan waqt par pahuch paoge .

Kar kar wo admi apni ghadi me me dekhta hai aur kahta hai .

Admi – compitition shuru hone me bas 30 min hain kya tumhe lagta hai ki tum mujhe hara kar compitition me participate kar paoge .

Shiva – bilkul tumhe koi shak hai kya .

Shiva ki baat sunke wo admi muskurata hai aur agle hi pal shiva pe furti se war karta hai magar shiva bhi usi furti se us ke war se bach jata hai shiva ka defence dekh kar wo admi muskurata hai aur kahta hai.

Admi – impressive ab maza ayega

Aur phir fir shiva par poori taqat se war jane lagta hai shiva bhi uske waron se badi hi furti aur tezi se bachne lagta abhi tak shuva ne us admi ko chua bhi nahi tha wo shiva ki gardan pe apni do ungliyon se war karta hai shiva apni hatheli se uski ungliyaan rok deta hai kisse wo admi hairan ho jata hai uski hairani dekhne se fmsaaf pata chalta hai ki uska achook war khali gya hai shiva uski taraf ek nazar dekhta hai shiva ki ankhon me is waqt angare dahka rahe the shiva uski ungliyan padkar mod deta hai jisse uski ungliyaan toot hata hain wo chilla padta hai phir shiva use apni taraf kheenchta hai aur ek mukka uski chati pe dusra uski pasliyon pe aur teesra uske dil pe marta hai shiva ke is war se us admi ke muh se khoon nikal padta hai aur wo zameen pe gir jata hai idhar sabhi log shiva ka wait kar rahe tha david archan se kahta hai .

David – archan shiva kahan kahin bhaag toh nahi gya dar ke .

Usne mazaak udhate hue kaha jispe archan use ghoor ke dekhte hai aur kahte hai .

Archan – darna aur bhagna yahi di cheezen hai jo na toh maine tumhe sikhayin thi na hi shiva aur na hi academy je kisi bhi student ko samjhe .

Archan baat pe david apna sar jhuka leta hai fir kahta hai .

David – magar shiva hai kahan .

Archan – yahi tih mai bhi soch raha hun .



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Agle din subah sabhi log compitition ki taiyari me lage hue the 10 baje se sare compititions shuru hone waale the har level ke martial arts combat honge kick boxing taicaundo karate sword fighting aur freestyle wrestling sabhi kuch duniya bhar se martial arts aur combat waiting lene wake students aaj yaha ikattha hue the sabhi log kafi excited the archan shiva aur rudranshi is waqt archan ke room me the archan shiva se kahte hai.

Archan – shiva mai tum se fir pooch raha hoon kya sach me tum kick boxing sword fighting aur freestyle wrestling teeno me participate karna chahte ho .

Shiva – mai to taicaundo aur karate me bhi participate karne wala tha magar rules sirf teen ki hi ijazat dete hai.

Archan – soch lo ek baar phir se .

Shiva – mai faisla sich samjh kar karta hun par faisla karne ke baad nahi sochta .

Jahan shiva ki ankho me confidence tha wahin archan ki ankhon me dar tha kyuki ek hi game participate karne me jaan ka khatra hota hai aur shiva toh teen teen me participate kar raha tha aisa nahi tha ki unhone shiva pe bharosa nahi tha poora bharosa tha magar fir bhi ek dar tha abhi shiva kamre se nikal bhi nahin paya tha ki ek ladka daudta hua aata hai aur archan se kahta hai .

Ladka – archan dig sahab ko kuch gunde adhmari haalat me jungle ki taraf leke jaa rahe the .

Archan – kya bakwas kar rahe .

Ladka – archan mai sach bol raha hun .

Archan – theek mai abhi dekhta hun jake .

Archan ne kaha hi tha ki shiva bol padta hai .

Shiva – nahi archan aap ka yahan rukna jyada zaruri hai mai jata hun .

Archan – lekin shiva compitition ka kya .

Shiva – mai compitition tak wapas aa jaonga aap fikr na karen

Archan – hmm toh fir ye liye jao .

Archan shiva ko ek katana dete hain shiva use leta hai aur unki taraf sawaliyan nazron se dekhta hai jaise kuch pooch raha ho archan samjh jate hain aur kahte hai .

Archan – mai janta hun ki kaime tumhe sikhaya hai ki jasn lene ke liye nahi jaan bachane ke liye lado magar kabhi kabhi jaan bachane ke liye jaan bachane ke liye jaan leni bhi padti hai .

Shiva unki baat sunke apna sar jhukata hai aur furti se nikal jata hai uske jaate hi rudranshi kahati hai.

Rudranshi – apko shiva ko akele nahi bhejna chahiye .

Archan – tum fikr mat karo shiva ki kabiliyat pe mujhe poora yakeen hai bas dar is baat ka hai ki kahin wo aape se bahar ho gya toh kya hoga .

Archan ne muskurate hue kaha magar unki muskurahat me dar bhi shamil tha

Rudranshi – matlb .

Archan – shiva ka gussa bahut bura hai halanki use kabhi gussa ata nahi magar jab aata hai toh kuch nahi bachta maine ek baar hi use gusse me dekha tha uske baad usne kafi badlne ki koshish ki aur kamyab bhi hua lekin fir bhi kuch kah nahi sakte .

Idhar shiva poori taqat se daudta hua jungle ki taraf badh raha tha academy se jungle ka rasta 30 min ki doori pe tha magar shiva 15 min me hi us deewaar ke paas pahuch gya tha shiva us deewaar pe chadhta hai aur upar ja kar charo taraf dekhta hai shiva badi sawdhani se aage badh raha tha abhi tak use aisa kuch nahi dikha tha jisse use dig sahab ka koi surang milta wo jungle me kaafi undar aa chuka tha wo is waqt black color ke karate suit me tha abhi wo do kadam chala hi tha ki tabhi uske peeche se koi bhari bharakam ladki se waar karta hai war itni zor ka tha ki ladki ke parkhacche ud jate hai abhi ye hua hi tha ke bai taraf se koi moorti si bel pe jhoolta hua aata hai aur ek laat shiva ke muh pe mar deta hai shiva dusri taraf ghoom jata hai toh teesra shaks use utha kar sar ke bal zameen pe patak deta hai shiva charon khane chit hokar zameen pe let jata hai uske girte hi char log uske samne khade ho jate hai un sabke aadhe aadhe chahre naqaab se dhake hue the un mese ek shaks kahta hai .

Shaks – mujhe nahi laga tha ki ye itni jaldi chit ho jayega .

Dusra shaks – han yar wo chinese academy wale bekar me hi isse dar rahe the .

Wo dono baat kar hi rahe the ki tabhi ek awaaz aati hai .

Bas ho gya tum logon ka .

Jab sabhi log awaaz ki taraf dekhte hai toh hairan rah jate hai kyuki ye awaaz kisi aur ki nahi balki shiva ki thi wo is samay unke samne khada tha haath me abhi bhi katana thi wo un charon ki taraf dekhta hai aur kahta hai.

Shiva – tum log nahi jante ki tum logon ne kitni badi galti ki .

Shiva apni katana wahin zameen pe gira deta hai aur unpe toot padta hai aur bijli ki gati se kisi ke muh pe kisi pasliyon pe kisi ke pet me aur kisi ki gardan pe poori taqat se goosa mar deta hai wo charon shiva ke ek war se zameen pe gir padte hai shiva unke paas aataa hai aur unse poochta hai .

Shiva – maine nahi socha tha ki tum log itni jaldi har maan loge ab batao kisne bheja tha tumhe .

Pahla shaks - Chinese academy walon ke taki tum compitition me hissa na le sako humara kaam tumhe bas uljhaye rakhne ka tha .

Usne karhate hue kaha Shiva unki taraf ek nazar ghoir ke dekhta hai jisse wo aur ghbra jate hai shiva unke kareeb jane lagta hai toh dusra shaks ghbra ke badi mushkil se bolta hai.

Dusra shaks – hum dach kah rahe hai sachmuch hume un Chinese academy walon ne hi bheja tha.

Shiva unke upar jhuk ke kahta hai .

Shiva – unse kahna agli baar koi dam daar admi bheje .

Toh tumhe damdaar admi chahiye .

Peeche se ek awaaz aati hai shiva us awaaz ki taraf dekhta hai toh samne ek lamba chauda vyakti khada tha uske pahnawe aur deel daul se saaf pata chal raha tha ki wo koi unche level ka fighter hai shiva uski taraf badhta hai aur 4 kadam ki doori pe ruk jata hai wo admi shiva ko gaur se dekhta hai aur kahta hai .

Admi – tum me mujhe abhi tak koi aisi baat nahi dikhi jisse ye sabit ho sake ki tum ye compitition jeetne ke layak ho .

Shiva – ye maine kab kaha ki mai jeetne ke layak hun lekin han koshish poori karunga .

Admi – koshish toh tum tab karoge jab yahan se wahan waqt par pahuch paoge .

Kar kar wo admi apni ghadi me me dekhta hai aur kahta hai .

Admi – compitition shuru hone me bas 30 min hain kya tumhe lagta hai ki tum mujhe hara kar compitition me participate kar paoge .

Shiva – bilkul tumhe koi shak hai kya .

Shiva ki baat sunke wo admi muskurata hai aur agle hi pal shiva pe furti se war karta hai magar shiva bhi usi furti se us ke war se bach jata hai shiva ka defence dekh kar wo admi muskurata hai aur kahta hai.

Admi – impressive ab maza ayega

Aur phir fir shiva par poori taqat se war jane lagta hai shiva bhi uske waron se badi hi furti aur tezi se bachne lagta abhi tak shuva ne us admi ko chua bhi nahi tha wo shiva ki gardan pe apni do ungliyon se war karta hai shiva apni hatheli se uski ungliyaan rok deta hai kisse wo admi hairan ho jata hai uski hairani dekhne se fmsaaf pata chalta hai ki uska achook war khali gya hai shiva uski taraf ek nazar dekhta hai shiva ki ankhon me is waqt angare dahka rahe the shiva uski ungliyan padkar mod deta hai jisse uski ungliyaan toot hata hain wo chilla padta hai phir shiva use apni taraf kheenchta hai aur ek mukka uski chati pe dusra uski pasliyon pe aur teesra uske dil pe marta hai shiva ke is war se us admi ke muh se khoon nikal padta hai aur wo zameen pe gir jata hai idhar sabhi log shiva ka wait kar rahe tha david archan se kahta hai .

David – archan shiva kahan kahin bhaag toh nahi gya dar ke .

Usne mazaak udhate hue kaha jispe archan use ghoor ke dekhte hai aur kahte hai .

Archan – darna aur bhagna yahi di cheezen hai jo na toh maine tumhe sikhayin thi na hi shiva aur na hi academy je kisi bhi student ko samjhe .

Archan baat pe david apna sar jhuka leta hai fir kahta hai .

David – magar shiva hai kahan .

Archan – yahi tih mai bhi soch raha hun .



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awsome update , toh shiva ko fasaya gya aur ho na ho Accadmey lang koi shamil hoga , dekhte aaghe kia Hota hai abhi toh shiva ka aadha past chal raha hai actual past abhi baki hai
 
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