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Are thanks yaar mujhe laga nahi tha ki ye story itni achhi lagegiVery nice update
Hahahaha indeedKya khatarnak story likhi hai boss matlab bhai ka dedication hai kisi or ki story pasand nahi aai to khud ki hi likh di nice yaar sahi hai likho
Intresting update bhai.next update ka besabri se intzaar rahegaKehte hai jab insaan pyaar me padta hai ya fir jis insaan se vo sabse jayada pyaar karta hai ya fir koi aisa jo u insaan ke liye sabse badkar hai even bhagwan se bhi badkar to vo us shaks ke liye kisi bhi had tak chala jaata hai or agar uske pyaar ko fir chahe vo koi bhi ho vo uske liye kisi ki jaan le bhi sakta hai or apni jaan de bhi sakta hai.....
Kehte hai ishwar jab ek raasta band karta hai or 100 raste khol bhi deta hai jo hamare liye achhe hai lekin us WAKTH jo thoda sabra karke sahi raasta chunta hai wahi jeevan me safal hota hai lekin uske liye sangharsh karna padta hai padta hai............
Pichle update me dekha tha ki jerry or karanveer us juye ke adde par pochte hai jaha 12 ya 15 log hi the or Jerry ka gussa aap logo ne dekha hi tha ki apne charam par tha or karanveer bhi jerry ki halat samjh Raha tha or vaise bhi jerry ne uske liye itna kiya hai uske karobaar ko tarikki dilwai din raat uska karobar khoob jerry ki wajah se chal raha tha or ishi bich karanveer ko bhi jerry se ek baap bete wala pyaar hona churu ho jaata hai ab khud hi sochiye ek aisa insaan jine apna beta hote hue bhi ushe kho diya or uski jagah jerry jaisa ek ladka apne bete ke roop me Mila to vo ushe to nahi kho sakta ishi liye karanveer jerry ka saath dene yaha tak aaya.......
Update 8.
Juye ke adde par..
1. Malik (digvijay)
2. So cold 2 bodyguard (raj/rajan)
3. Vo teen log jinki talash me jerry or karanveer yaha aaye the..
1. Raju :- ( jo thoda darpok kisam ka hai..
2. Vinod :- ( jo raju ki tarah hi hai lekin thoda bohot ladleta hai (thoda bohot )
3. Suresh :- ( ye main Banda hai jisne mangalsutra liya or Rashmi ko touch kiya tha jo ladna janta hai or darta kisi se nahi hai agar saamne koi kamzor khada ho to )
4. Or baki ke sabhi nashedi ganjedi udar hi nasha or patte(cards ) khelne aate hai sabhi tull the bas 2 ya 3 hi the jinhone kam pi rakhi thi)
Ghar Par Neetu......
Neetu jo bohot dari hui or ghabrai hui thi vo aakhon me aashu liye bas Bhagwan se prathna kar rahi.......
Neetu : Hey Ishwar mere jerry ka khayal rakhna uski rakhna karna vo bohot gusse me gya hai kahi kuch galat naa ho jaye ( or ye kehte hue uski akhe nam ho jaati hai ). Ek ye nasedi mere ghar me hai jisne meri or mere bachho ki zindagi kharab kar rakhi hai mera mangalsutra bikwa diya mere ko kisi or mard ne chua or ye nashe me bas dekhta raha or ek mera beta jo mere bare me pata lagte hi pata nahi kaha chala gya usko dekh kar lag raha tha ki kahi vo unhe maar na de..... Nahi or agar mere jerry ko kuch nahi nahiiiii.......(Shouting) Pls bhagwan pls mere jerry ki raksha karna agar ushe kuch ho gya to mera kya hoga or meri bachiya unka kya hoga ye aadmi unhe paiso ke liye bech dega..(crying )
Udhar juye ke adde pe....
Digvijay :- chalo be in sab ko bhagao yaha se Varna police wale aajayenge.....
Raj/Rajan :- Ji malik abhi bhagate hai...
Raj/Rajan Bahr aate hai or sabhi logo ko jane ke liye bolte hai :- Chalo be Madarchodo niklo yaha se adda band hone wala hai....
Tabhi ek aawaz :- yaha se koi kahi nahi jayega (chillate hue)
Sabhi ki nazar gate par padti hai to almost sabhi log shoked the.....
Kyuki waha or koi nahi jerry khada tha jo ki gusse me lal ho rakha tha....
Raj/Rajan :- kyu bhai tu kon hai be......
Karanveer :- Chup Chap vahi khade raho samjhe kya..
Raj/Rajan Digvijay Ko Bulate Hai...
Digvijay :- Kyu be yaha kis baat ki gunda gardi ho rahi hai...
Or wahi kisi kone me 3 aadmi aapse me....
Aadmi 1 : are bhai ye to manoj ka beta hai yaha kaise or iske saath ye transport ka malik kaise maine suna hai iski bohot jaan pahechan hai police me ..
Aadmi 2 : Haa bhai maine bhi suna hai iske baare me or ye ladka ye to dekh kar nahi lagta ki ye manoj ka beta hai saala kaisa sand sa hai. Or jitne gusse me lag raha hai aisa lagta h ye apni maa ka badla lene aaya hai bhai maine to kehta hu nikallo yaha se...
3. Tabhi teesra aadmi :- Abe iski bahen ki chut saale ki kya kar lega ye mera saala balak kahi kaa.... Isko bhi maarunga or iske is doosre baap ko bhi ahahahahahah aaya to aise hai jaise iska doosra baap ho kahi iski maa ko chakkar nahi hai na isse kyuki Maine suna hai iski biwi bhi zinda nahi hai (yaha karanveer ki baat kar raha tha)
AB digvijay:- kyu be kya gunda gardi ho rahi hai yaha.......
Tabhi jerry chillate hue :- Kis Bahen ke lode ne meri maa ko chua unke saath battamizi ki or unka mangalsutra lene ki himmat ki boloooooooooo......
Or waha baithe sabhi logo ka nasha ek dam se mano gayab ho jaata hai.....
Or tabhi Digvijay kuch bolne wala tha aage aate hue usne or raj/rajan ne jo ki is WAKTH ghabraye hue the aage aate hai or tabhi....
Karanveer...
Karanveer :- Khabardaar jo aage aaye to Varna teeno ka bheja uda dunga or ye dekh kar waha sabki Gand fat jaati hai khas kr digvijay ki kyuki usko laga ki karanveer koi police wala hai.... Or ab uski maa chudni pakki thi.
Tabhi vo teeno digvijay,raj/rajan ek saath
Maalikkkkkkkkk.......
Hamne kuch nahi kiya malik,sahab hamne kuch nahi kiya hame chod do hamne kisi ke saath battamizi nahi ki iiiiii.
Karanveer :- hame tum nahi koi or chaiye to kup chap waha baithe raho nahi to teeno ka bheja uda dunga tum jaante nahi mujhe.....
Teeno (gand fati hui thi to ushi halat me) :- ji ji j iji ji malik hu mhum kuch nahi kahenge jis madarchod ko marna hai maarooo....
Tabhi ye sab dekh kar
Vinod :- ye dono ek saath :- suresh bhai lag gaye lode maa chudi ab apni maine pehle hi mana kiya tha ki paise lekar aayenge or bas kuch or nahi lekin meri baat nahi maani ab kya hogaaaa.....
Raju :- main to ja raha hu bhai mujhe nahi marna mere biwi bachhe hai....
TAbhi suresh gusse me :- Abe madarchod aaj tak to yaad nahi aai biwi bachho ki or ab dekh kaise gand fat Rahi hai chup raho saalo main dekhta hu.......
Tabhi suresh chillate hue :- kyu be kutte ke pille...
Or sun jerry or karanveer uski taraf dekhte hai.
SURESH jisko uske saath rokte hai lekin vo aage aate Jaa Raha tha.
Or ye dekh kar jerry or karanveer samj jaaye hai ki yahi hai vo kameen jisne Rashmi ke saath battamizi ki hai or usko dekh kar jerry..
FUll gusse me uski taraf dekhta hai jaise ki ushe kha jayega...
Or tabhi suresh :- kyu be chuje tu maarega mujhe tu lega badla apni maa ka hahahahaahahhahah or ye kya ek baap se man nahi bhara to Teri maa ne tera doosra baap bana diya alelelele vaise bhi tera pehla baap kisi kaam ka nahi tha or jor jor se.
Or ye dekh kr sun kar karanveer ka gussa bhi saatve aasman lar tha lekin tabhi vo jerry ko dekhta hai jo gusse mere.......
Jerry dahadte hue :- Madarchodddddddddddddddddd..or jerry sidha jaakar suresh ke upar toot padta hai or ek zor daar puch..bhosadikeeeeeeeeeee
Or ye dekh waha baithe sabhi ki gand fat jaati hai even karanveer bhi hairan tha ki itna gussa himanshu me kaise.....
OR suresh piche jaakr apne sathio ke upar girta hai or dobara khada hota hai kuki vo bhi ladna jaanta tha thoda bohot...
Suresh nak se khoon hatate hue :- saale teri itni himmat or dobara jerry par toot padta hai lekin jerry.....
Jerry uspr punches ki bohot char kar deta hai lekin sureh usme attacks dodge kar raha tha lekin jerry bhi kaha piche rehta vo usko piche le jaata hai or jaise hi diwar ke paas suresh aata hai..
Or fir kya tha jerry uske mooh par pet pr ghusso ki barish kar deta hai bohot buri tarah se maarta hai itna ki uske khud ke kapde laal ho gaye the suresh ke khoon se.....
Tabhi piche suresh ko kuch saathi aajate hai jinhe raju or vinod ne bulaya tha jo jerry ki taraf bad rahe the lekin tabhi karanveer...
Karanveer :- kaha ja rahe ho madarchodo apne baap se to nipat looo....
Or tabhi un 5 logo ka leader....
Leader :- or saalo kutto shakal kya dekh rahe ho maaro saale kooooooo
( or vo sab karanveer ke upar toot padte hai lekin karanveer koi aam aadmi nahi tha aisa kyu baad me pata lagega )
Tabhi karanveer sabko akela handle karta hai jisme raju or vinod bhi the.
Or bohot buri tarah se karanveer ek ek kar sabki Gand Faad Deta Hai....
Or ye sab se digvijay or raj/rajan ki bhi maa/bahen ek saath chud gai thi kyuki unke juye ke aade par maar pit vo bhi itna raat ko sab jaag Gaye or tahes nahes ho gya sab or in sab ko dekh digvijay ko suresh or uske sathio par gussa aara tha lekin vo kya hi kehta us sabki maa chud hi gai thi......
Tabhi karanveer sabko niptakar jerry ko dekh ta hai jo abhi bhi suresh ko maar raha tha or suresh ad mara ho gya tha ye dekh kar vo ghabraye hue jaata hai ki kahi jerry usko maar na dee.
Karan :- himanshu chodo ushe" himanshu chodo" ushe" or jerry to mano be kaabu sa ho gya tha..
Jerry :- saale madarchod meri maa ko haath lagya tune maadar chod haath lagaya tune bahen ke lode meri maa ka mangalsutra liya tune bhosadikeeeeeeeeeee........
Or tabhi waha police aajati hai jinhe dekh kar digvijay ki gand fat jaati hai.......
Tabhi kuch police wale jerry ko shant krte hai or suresh ko chud waate hai jo ki admara ho gya tha.
Inspector :- mar gya kya.
Constable :- nahi sir
Inspector :- ishe jldi lekr jao nahi to mar jayega hahahaa
inspector :- Jay Hind Sir ...
Karanveer:- Jay Hind Inspector sahab..
Or guys yaha reveal hota hai karanveer ka sach.
To dosto karanveer ek retired army officer tha jo ki jang me apni 2 ungliya ( fingers left hand ki kho chuka tha ishiliye usne retirement liya or aanaz ke godam khola kyuki usko rashan or paise bhi mile the retirement ke ishi liye usne dimag laga kar transport khola jisse vo baki foji or unke ghar walo ke liye rashan or sabhi logo ke liye rashan ka business karne laga taki kisi ko rashan ki kami na ho or sabko ek dam sahi kimat par rasan deta tha or bade vyapario ko mehnge me jo bahar business karte the important export ka.....
Inspector baki sabhi ko arrest krlete hai jinpar pehle bhi kai case chal rahe the or ye sab dekh kar digvijay karanveer ke pairo me girkar...
Digvijay :- Sahab maine kuch nahi kiya mujhe chod dijiye in kamino ke saath jo karna hai kro lekin mujhe chod dijiye main aaj ke baad yaha kisi aise waise ko nahi aane dunga...
Inspector :- bohot besharam hai be tu abhi bhi nahi sudharaaa ek to juye ka adda khola hua hai or mafi mang raha hai....
Karanveer inspector se :- chodiye inspector sahab ishi ke adde ki wajah se ye sab pakde gaye...
Tabhi karanveer digvijay se :- sun be madarchod aaj ke baad maine suna ki tere yaha se juaa khel kar or daaru pikar kisne ne bhi is ilake me koi chori ya kisi ki bahen betio ko cheda ya KOSHISH bhi ki to thuje ushi WAKTH jaan se maar dunga
Or tabhi teeno yani digvijay, raj/rajan....
Teeno ek saath :- Nahi sahab aaj ke baad aapko koi shikayat nahi hogi or agar hui to hamara sir or aapka joota pls hame maaf krdijiye..
Tabhi vaha jerry aata hai or ushe dekh kar inspector.
Inspector :- oh to tum ho vo himanshu bohot khoo beta tumne Aaj in kamino ko pakad waa hi diya...
Jerry :- matlab.?
Karan :- main bata ta hu himanshu darasal jab tumne in logo ke baare me bataya to main samajh gya ki ye suresh hi hai jo kamzor logo ko tang karta hai fir jab uske adde ke baare me pata laga to maine inspector sahab ko phone kar diya tha yaha aane ke liye vaise tumne bohot achha kama kiya jo tum Bina dare in logo ka samna karne ke liye aage aaye Varna sab log dar ke maare inka naam nahi batate the or aaj tumhari wajah se ye sabhi pakde gaye....
Inspector :- haa beta ham sabko tum par garv hai or kal ke akhbaar (newspaper ) me tumhare baare me zaroor chalega pehla panna....
Or fir jerry.....
Jerry :- lekin meri maa ka mangalsutra vo kaha hai vo to mila nahi... Mujhe ( dukhi hote hue).
Tab karanveer jerry ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue thoda udas hokar....
Karan :- vo jerry vo*"beta"";";vo main kaise..
Jerry :- kya hua uncle ? Aap aise kyu? Matlab??
Karanveer : beta vo maine raju matalab suresh ke saathio se pucha tha to unhone bataya ki vo mangalsutra to unhone kisi videshi vyapari ko bech diya jo ki aaj hi videsh nikal gya (sad face banate hue)
Jerry nam aaknho se :- to ab main apni maa ko kya mooh dikhaunga uncle
Inspector :- dekho beta main samjh ta hu lekin ab kya kar sakte hai.... Ek kaam kro tum mehnat karo or khoob naam kamao or shadi karlo fir tumhare bachhe honge unhe apni maa ko dena vo khus ho jaayegi apne pota ya potiyo ko dekh kar jo ki kisi mangalsutra se 100 guna jayada kimti hoga tumhari maa ke liye or vo bohot bohot jayada khus ho jayegi kyu thik kaha na sir hahahahaahh..
Inspector jerry ke baare me sab jaanta tha karanveer ne bataya tha ishiliye usne jerry ke pita ka jikar nahi kiya ki vo dobara mangalsutra dila denge ishiliye inspector ne aisa kaha...
Lekin jerry bohot dukhi tha or ye dekh ke karanveer....
Karan :-abbab ba vo inspector sahab vaise ye sab chodiye ye bataiye ki ab kya karna hai...
Inspector proud se :- are sir karna kya hai hamare himanshu ne aise apradhi ko padak waya hai or iske saathio ko to pehle hum himanshu ko puraskar denge kr saath hi saath in kamino ko kadi se kadi saza dil waayenge.....
Tabhi jerry:- nahi sir mujhe koi puraskar nahi chaiye...
Inspector or karanveer shoked hote hue ek saath :- LEKIN KYU ???
Jerry :- mere liye puruskar vo tha ki agar main apni maa ka mangalsutra waapis unhe laakr de deta lekin maine aisa nahi kiya...to mujhe koi puraskar nahi chaiye or waha se chala jaata hai..
Tabhi karanveer inspector se alwida leta hai.
Karan :- inspector sahab main chalta hu ushe sambhalna hoga vo bechara pehle hi bohot dukhi hai or upar se ye sab lekin fir bhi usko uski maa ka mangalsutra nahi mila.
Inspector :- ji sir koi baat nahi main samajh tha hu thik hai aap jaiye main bhi nikalta hu JAY HIND
Karanveer :- JAY HIND Inspector milenge fir kabhi or aaj ki madad ke liye bohot bohot shukriya.
Inspector :- Any Time Sir
Tabhi karanveer jerry ke paas aata hai or usse Bina kuch bole apne ghar le jaata hai...
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