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Aar am

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Dekh sahi chal ra h sab chalne de jaise likh ra h or tune intro ma kaha tha thuje kaisi story chiye to vse hi likh maine aj ek padi ma bete ki bc maa chod di story ki bnde ne gandu writer th vo tu likhta jaa or haa glti se bi kisi or story me ma bete ke alawa mt ad krio koi tesre ko
Tum gali kyu de Raha hai writer ko acha likh rha likhne do na
 
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Aar am

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Nahi bhai Jerry aur Reshmi ke bich me kisi aur ko nhi Lana please request hai bhai
 
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sharma ji_91

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Dekh sahi chal ra h sab chalne de jaise likh ra h or tune intro ma kaha tha thuje kaisi story chiye to vse hi likh maine aj ek padi ma bete ki bc maa chod di story ki bnde ne gandu writer th vo tu likhta jaa or haa glti se bi kisi or story me ma bete ke alawa mt ad krio koi tesre ko
Same tabhi to likh ra hu 😂🤭 koi na mazedar story likhenge saath me sabhi bhaio ke sath
 

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Same tabhi to likh ra hu 😂🤭 koi na mazedar story likhenge saath me sabhi bhaio ke sath
Dekh update chote dega to jayada update dene padenge isse achha bade update de jisse update kam ho or story bhi sahi se poori ho baki teri marzi vaise story kafi achhi chal rahi hai bas story ki maa mat chod diya bhale hi rashmi ko jerry se chudwa diyo 😂😂😂
 
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Don't speed up bro, Don't add third character to this beauty Story, sab sahi chal rha♥️
 

Aar am

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Don't speed up bro, Don't add third character to this beauty Story, sab sahi chal rha♥️
Dekh update chote dega to jayada update dene padenge isse achha bade update de jisse update kam ho or story bhi sahi se poori ho baki teri marzi vaise story kafi achhi chal rahi hai bas story ki maa mat chod diya bhale hi rashmi ko jerry se chudwa diyo 😂😂😂
Likhne do writer ko achese
 
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Aar am

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Likhne do writer ko achese
Dekh update chote dega to jayada update dene padenge isse achha bade update de jisse update kam ho or story bhi sahi se poori ho baki teri marzi vaise story kafi achhi chal rahi hai bas story ki maa mat chod diya bhale hi rashmi ko jerry se chudwa diyo 😂😂😂
Jaisa chal rha waisa likhne do jitna detail me likhega utna acha rhegga story ko
 
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Update 58.

Rashmi kuch bolti usse pehle darwaje par dastak hoti hai.......

Tabhi Parul :- lagta hai papa aagye.....

Or ye bol vo waha se tezi se bhag kar darwaza kholne chali jaati hai.........

Or rashmi jo parul ko rokne wali thi lekin vo jaa chuki thi or dar ke maare Rashmi kitchen me bhag jaati hai..........


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Darwaje par..........

Parul gate kholti hai or saamne jerry tha.........

P :- Papa🥰

J :- are meri bachhi kaisi hai.......

Or jerry usko apni god me utha leta hai...........

J :- hahahah lagta hai mera hi intezar kar rahi thi kyu haina......

P :- haa papa aap itna late kyu aaye.........

J :- kyuki main aap teeno ke liye ek surprise le kar aaya hu.......

P :- kya sachhi......yeeeee kya surprise hai..........

J :- aapne or priya ne mujhse kuch manga tha..........

P :- ummm humne kya manga tha aapse...........

J :- hahaha ohh lagta hai tum bhool gai koi baat nahi pehle apni mummy ko or priya ko bulao..........

FIr parul priya ko lane chali jaati hai...........

Lekin Rashmi jo kitchen se sab sun rahi thi..........


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Rashmi apne aap se :- Ye kya inhe dekh kar to nahi lag raha ki ye gusse me hai balki ye ham sab ke liye kuch surprise laye hai...........

M :- Ab thuje isme bhi problem ho rahi hai ?

R :- Are lekin fir bhi"""""

Or tabhi jerry :- Rashmi"""""""

Jerry Rashmi jo aawaj deta hai jisse Rashmi thoda dar jaati hai lekin jaana to padega hi na.........

Or rashmi chup chap bahr chali jaati hai lekin usne apni nazre niche ki hui thi.........

To ushe dekh jerry :- Kya hua badi shant ho din me to bohot chilla rahi thi ab kya hua.........

Lekin Rashmi kuch nahi kehti...........

Tabhi jerry uske paas aakar......

J :- Kya tumhe sahi me lagta hai main tumhare alwa kisi or ko pasand karunga"""""or pasand to chodo maine kisi or ke baare me kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha or tumne mere upar aisa ilzaam laga diya...........


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Rashmi jo bas jerry ko hi dekh rahi thi ushe apne kiye par sharmindagi mehsoos ho rahi thi.........

Lekin vo kuch kehti isse pehle priya/parul aajati hai.........

Dono :- Lo papa ham aagaye ab batao kya surprise hai hamare liye...........

J :- hahahha to surprise tumhara bahar chalo...........

Or ye sun rashmi :- Bahar hai matlab?........

J :- are chalo to sahi......

R :- Lekin??

J :- Are....Oh"""""achha samjha chinta mat karo tumhari sotan lekar nahi aaya hu hahahah 🤣.


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Or rashmi jerry ke tont maarne par thoda naraz or thoda sharminda feel karti hai lekin kuch kehti nahi............

Or ye sab bahar jaate hai or jaise hi bahar jaate hai............


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or jaise hi sab log bike ko dekhte hai........

Priya/parul :- yeeeeee papa ne bike leli yehhhhh..........

Rashmi jerry ko dekhti hai......

Lekin jerry bas...........

J :- kaisa laga gift meri jaan........

R :- par.........

J :- shhhhhhh udhar dekho bachhe kitne khush ho gaye kya inse badkar kuch or ho sakta hai kya.............

Or rashmi bhi is baat ko samjhti hai lekin ab usko apne upar bohot gussa aara tha jo usne jerry se kaha tha..........


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Tabhi Rashmi :- Mujhe maaf kardo maine subha aapse.........

J :- shhhhhhh ab mafi mat mango or chalo ham sab mandir chalte hai pehle..........

Rashmi Bohot Khush ho jaati hai ki jerry uspar nahi gussa hua.........

J :- are bachho papa mummy ke saath ghumne chalogi?

Dono ( excited ) :- haaaaaaaa

Or rashmi bachho ko khush dekho ushe bhi bohot Khushi hoti hai............

Tabhi Rashmi :- Chalo Chalo pehle kapde badal lo or fir chalte hai..........

Dono :- thik hai........

Or dono bhag kr kapde badalne chali jaati hai........

R :- Aap bhi badal lijiye kapde or sorry maine aapko pani ke liye bhi nahi pucha sorry chalo pehle andar...........

Tabhi jerry...........


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Or jerry ke is harkat se rashmi kafi sharma jaati hai.........

R ( blushing ) :- Kya aap bhi na koi dekh leta to..........

J :- to kya ek pati apni patni ko kiss nahi kar sakta kya........

R :- haa lekin..........

J :- lekin vekin kuch nahi chalo ham bhi kapde badal lete hai mandir jaana hai..........

Fir ye poori family ready ho kar mandir chali jaati hai..............

Or mandir me darshan karke or bike ki pooja karke jerry sabko bahar hi khana khilane le jaata hai............

Or bahar sab khoob enjoy karte hai phele restaurant,movie,or ice cream bhi...........

Or fir der raat sabhi Ghar wapis aajate hai.........

Ghar aate hi jerry moholle me sabko mithai baat deta hai.......

Or rashmi priya/parul ko sulane andar Ghar me le jati hai jo raste me hi so gai thi..............

Or hall me aakar..........

J :- Kaisa laga gift.........

Or rashmi..........


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R :- or ye kiss bike ki liye nahi balki mera parivaar mere saath hai or khush hai ishi liye hai or priya/parul jo itna khush rehne lagi hai uske liye hai or ab to dono thodi moti bhi ho gai hai hahahaha aapka bohot bohot shukriya I Love You Meri Jaan Meri Piya Mere Jerry Aap Duniya Ke Sabse Achhe Pati Ho Kaash Aap Mujhe Pehle Mile Hote Sach Me I Love You I Love You I Love You 💋❤️............

J :- are bas bas bas bas itna pyaar ye maine mere parivaar ki khushiyon ke liye kiya hai rashmi or abhi ek surprise or bacha hai dekhti jaao tum bas..........

Or ye sun rashmi hairan ki ab jerry ne aisa kya kardiya.........

R ( shoked ) :- Kya aapne or bhi kuch kiya hai jerry ye kya kar rahe ho aap...........

J :- are are oh meri jhasi ki rani maine kuch aisa vaisa nahi kiya............

R :- Fir...........

J :- Hahaha main nahi bataunga.........

R :- ahhh pls batao Naa Varna mujhe poori raat neend nahi aane wali.........

J :- jaana acha baba batata hu actually maine ye ghar sell kar diya...........

R ( shoked ) :- Kya""""""lekin kyu kab kaisa kaha kisko or ab ham kaha jaayenge bataya bhi nahi itna saman hai"""""""

J :- are are bas yaar tabhi main kuch nahi batata tumhe bas shuru ho jaati ho...........

R :- To kaam hi aapne aisa akiya hai.........

J :- ha ha thik hai ab suno maine kuch socha hai ki ham is makan ko beche se achha is makan ke badle me aisa hi ghar ya isse bada ghar kahi or lele agar outer area me lenge to sasta or bada ghar milega lekin mid me lenge jaisa hai to same aisa hi milega batao kya karna hai.............

R :- Vaise mujhe lagata hai mid me hi lelo outer me bekar rehta hai door door tak dukane nahi hoti market nahi school nahi or sunsan ho jaata hai rasta raato me........or fir bachho ke school aapka kaam sab yahi hai to..........

J :- Hmmm maine bhi yahi socha tha ishiliye maine baat kar li hai Dikshit bhaisahab se...........

R :- Ab ye Dikshit bhaisahab........Kon hai......

Fir jerry poori baat bata deta hai........

R :- ohh to thik hai........

Lekin tabhi Rashmi kuch sochte hue........

R :- Achha vaise ab itna kar liya hai to aage ka kya socha hai.......

J :- age kya socha hai matlab........

R :- matlab jeevan me kuch or bhi to karna hoga.........

J :- nahi mujhe kya karna hai sab sahi to hai in dono ki padai poori hone ke baad inki shadi karenge or kya...........

Or ye baat sunte hi rashmi ka paara satve aasman par...........


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R :- Haa sahi hai bas apna kaam bachhe dikhte hai or mere kya hai main to is ghar ki nokrani hu na meri to kisi ko parwa hi nahi hai........

Or rashmi ko aisa karta dekh jerry man hi man khush ho raha tha............

Lekin us bare me kehta kuch nahi balki.........

Jerry :- Are kisne kaha tumse ki tum naukrani ho hahahah........

R :- ha ha haslo main jaa rahi hu...........

Or rashmi jane hi wali thi tabhi..........


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Jerry Rashmi ko apne paas khich ushe apni god me baitha leta hai...........

J :- are meri jaan tum to meri sab kuch ho or tumhe kya lagta hai ki mujhe nahi pata ki tum kis baat par chidi rehti ho.......main sab jaanta hu lekin pehle ye kaam zaroori the lekin ab tum chinta mat karo jaise hi ghar milega uske agake hi pal main tumhara or tum meri ho jaaogi 7 janmo ke liye or ham jo ghar ke andar pati patni hai or bahar poori duniya ke samne ban jayenge fir ham ek doosre ko khul ke pyaar krenge bilkul pati patni ki tarah jaha ek doosre ka haq ham ek doosre ko denge or usse bhi badi baat fir hamare chote chote bachhe honge.............

Or ye bol jerry...........


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Or ye baat sun or jerry ke hontho ke sparsh se Rashmi ke sharir me maano ek alag sa ehsas mehsoos hota hai uska poora sharir halka kapne laga or sabse badi baat rashmi ki chut me nami aagayi or iska reason tha jerry ka aisi baate karna haq dena khulke pyaar or usse bhi badi baat chote chote bache karna..............

Tabhi Rashmi bilkul halki aawaz me :- Kya aap sach keh rahe ho dekho mazak mat karo aapko meri kasam sach sach batao kya aap sachme.........

J :- Haa rashmi main sach keh raha hu Tumhari kasam meri Jaan I love you 💕

R :- I love you too 💞

Or dono ek doosre me hi kho jaate hai or dekhte hi dekhte dono ki aankh lag jaati hai......

Or dono ek saath...........


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Ek doosre ki baho me wahi sofe par so jaate hai...........

To Be Continue...........✌🏻❣️
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