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Jaandaar shaandar update bhai.bas aise hi likhte rahoAksar logo ko kehte suna hai ki kitna hi pyaar karne wala ho uski prem kahani kabhi poori nahi hoti....lekin main kehta hu ki pyaar dono taraf se bepanah ho to ?. Kyuki Maine to ye suna hai ki agar koi insaan kisi ko shiddhat se chahe to poori kaynat ushe milane me lag jaati hai or vaise bhi agar pyaar kiya hi hai to apne pyaar ke liye ladna bhi pade to ladna padta hai.....
Or vo pyaar hi kya jo juda ho jaye ye sab filmi baate hai kyuki log attraction ko pyaar samajh lete hai...SO COLD GEN-Z.
EK Kahani hai ek Raza ki jo apni Rani ko batata ta hai ki usme dost ki mrityu ho gai usne sabse ladkar shadi ki thi or ab uski patni vidwa Hogayi or uska pyaar adhura reh gaya..tabhi Rani kehti hai ki ye kaisa pyaar hai ye pyaar thodi hai..tab Raza puchta hai to pyaar kya hai...tab Rani kehti hai pyaar to vo h jiska pyaar mar jaye to uske praan apne aap nikal jaye...Raza is baat par kuch nahi kehta agle din vo shikar par jata hai or ek mom ke putle se apne jaisa hooba hu sir banata hai or rani ke paas bhij wa deta hai rani us sir ko dekhte hai behosh ho jaati hai hameshaa ke liyee.............Tab Raza ko samjh aata hai ki pyaar kya hai or vo bhi khud khusi kar leta hai......
Ab ye baat Shayad aap logo ko ajeeb Lage lekin aap logo ke kehne se sachhai nahi badal jayegi pyaar sirf ek insaan se hota hai or sirf ek hi baar hota hai......
Baar Baar Pyaar Karne Wale Insaan Nahi Kutte Or Kutiya Hote Hai....
Varna jinka jeevan sathi mar jaata hai vo log khud ke dam par Zindagi GOOZAR dete hai lekin kisi ka saath nahi lete.
Update 11.
PICHLE UPDATE Me apne dekha tha ki rashmi apne jerry ki baho me gir jaati hai or jerry jab ushe maa bolta hai to Rashmi apni ek ungli (finger) uske hothon par rakh deti hai....or jerry Bina kuch bole uske sir par haath ferne lagta hai or dono aise hi chup chap baithe rahte hai..
Aise hi rashmi bohot der Tak jerry ke pairo par sir rakh kar leti rehti hai or apni aankhe band kar leti hai or aisa aanand ushe Aaj Tak nahi aaya tha...
Aise hi bohot der ho jaati hai or Rashmi jo ki sukun ki neend so Rahi thi jerry bas ushe hi dekh raha tha or uske baalo me haath ferte ferte.....apne man me sochne lagta hai...
Jerry apne man me..
Jerry :- Aaj ye achanak kya hua kya ye meri wajah se maa ko aisa hua kya maa mere se naraz hai ? Nahi"'Nahi;*Agar aisa hota to vo mujh par gussa hoti chikhti chillati or sabse badi baat ye mujhe ajeeb sa kyu mehsoos ho raha hai...?.Ye kaisa ehsas hai jo shabdo me nahi aa para shayad ye meri hi galti hai kyuki Maine kabhi maa ko jaane ki koshish hi nahi ki..ha shayad yahi wajah hai maine maa se aaj tak kabhi khulke baat nahi ki unhe akela chord Diya lekin ab nahi ab main apni maa ka or bhi achhe se khayal rakhunga or maa bhi to mujh par kiya yakin karti hai unhone mangalsutra ke baare me ek baar bhi zikar nahi kiya unhe meri parwah hai bas to ab baari meri hai...
Tabhi Rashmi karwat leti hai or jerry Rashmi ke chere ko dekhta hai..
Jerry Rashmi Ke Chere Ko Dekhta hua :- kitni pyaari hai meri maa kitni khoobsurat bhi or kitni nazuk or komal bhi....lekin tabhi jerry ko apne baap par thoda ya yu kaho bohot jayada gussa aata hai..
Jerry :- Us kamine ne meri fool jaisi maa ki komalta sundarta even unki mehak ko bhi ujad ke rakh diya lekin bas ab nahi ab main apni maa ka khayal rakhunga.......
Or ye sab sunkar Rashmi ki aankhon se aasu girne lagte hai...JI HAA RASHMI SO NAHI RAHI THI VO BAS JERRY KI GODI ME SIR RAKH KAR EK ALAG HI SUKAN KA AANAD LE RAHI THI....
Rashmi apni aakhe band karti hai or man me..
Rashmi :- ( Emotional or dukhi thodi si khusi teeno ki mix feeling ke saath sochti hai ) :- Or kitna karoge jerry mere liye or kitna karoge tum mere liye mat kro itna main iske layak nahi hu.....(SAD hote hue) Main iske layak nahi hu aakhir kya kiya hai maine tumhare liye aaj tak jis umar me bachhe kapde bike jaisi cheeje mangte hai ladte hai apne maa baapo se.....Us umar me tumne vo kiya jiska ehsaan main Zinda bhar nahi chuka paungi kyuki tumne sirf mere liye nahi balki apni Betiyon!!!!!! Or ye kehte hue Rashmi fir chup ho jaati hai.....Or rone lagti hai lekin aise jaise ki jerry ko sunai na de varna vo dukhi hota....
Tabhi jerry sochta hai ki kafi time ho gya hai to vo sochta hai ki Rashmi ko uthaye lekin vo usko disturb nahi karna chata tha to ishi liye vo thodi der aise hi wait karta hai lekin ab such me Rashmi so chuki thi to jerry dheere se....
Jerry :- Maa! Maa! ( Bohot pyaar se pukarta hai )
Lekin Rashmi ka jawab na aane par vo samajh jaat hai ki uski maa so chuki hai...
Tab jerry...
Rashmi ko apni mazboot baho me lekin pyaar se utha leta hai or niche kamre me jaha dono bachiya ro ro kar so gai thi unke paas bed par lita deta hai....
Or Rashmi ko bed par litane ke baad Jerry man me sochta hai..
Jerry man me :- kuch din or aise rehlo maa bas kuch din or main kuch aisa karunga jisse ham charo ki zindagi me khushiya bhar jayegi....
Fir jerry teeno ke sir par kiss karta hai pehle Rashmi ke..
Or fir apni dono baheno ke sir par bhi kiss kart hai bari bari dono ke...
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Or fir thodi der ke liye bahar chala jaata hai kuch khane pine ke liye laane ke liye kyuki uski baheno ko bhookh lagegi or Rashmi bhi aaj bohot preshan hai to Rashmi ko khana banana nahi padega....
Ghar se bahar....
Jerry abhi bahar hi tha karanveer ke saath jisko vo sab bata deta hai....To....
Karan :- Jo hota hai achhe ke liye hota hai.....ab jab Rashmi ko pata chal hi gya hai.....
( Guy's vaise ek baat karanveer ki age kafi thi even vo Rashmi se bhi bada tha kyuki uski beti ke 2 bachhe the ek 5th or ek 6th class me to aap andaza laga sakte ho....or usne kaha tha ki uski godi me uske pota poti hone chaiye the to aap samjh hi gaye honge.....)
Karan :- Or usne aisa reaction nahi diya jisse sabit hota hai vo tumse kitna pyaar karti haiab baari tumhari hai ki tum apne pariwaar ka kaise khayal rakhte ho or.....
Jerry :- Or kya uncle ?
Karan :- Dekho mujhe galat mat samajhna tumhe apni behno ka khayal sirf ek bhai ki tarah nahi rakhna...
Jerry :- Matlab main samjha nahi uncle ?
Karan :- Agle mahine vo dono 13 saal ki ho jayengi or samjh daar bhi dheere dheere ho rahi hai or yahi umar hai jo unko pyaar dena hoga sambhalna hoga Varna jaise jaise vo badi hongi unko apne aas paas ke logo se khatra bhi hoga or alag alag baate sunni padegi......Fir chahe aas paas ke logo se ya school me unki class me padne wali unki ham umar ladkiyon se yani unki saheliyon se or vaise bhi bachpan se vo ghar me kalesh dekh krahi hai vo to bhagwan ka shukar hai ki tum ho Varna apni maa ko pittha hua dekh unke man me mardo ke liye galat khayalat aajayenge kr kal ko unki shadi bhi to karni hai ishiliye unko ab sirf bhai nahi balki ek baap ka pyaar bhi jo himanshu Varna bohot kuch jo nahi hona chaiye vo ho jayega........ummid karta hu tum mujhe galat nahi samjhoge kyuki Maine bhi apne kisi karibi mere bete ko khoya hai mera beta....( Sad ) Hote hue jab galat Femi baith jaati hai to usko nikalna mushkil hi nahi naa mumkin ho jaata hai... himanshu.......
Jerry jo karanveer ki baato ko samajh bhi raha tha or lakho swal jo uske dil dimag me chal rahe the usne lad bhi raha tha lekin karanveer ki ek ek baat sach thi......
Jerry : main samjh Raha hu uncle lekin main kaise or maa unka kya...
Tabhi karanveer jerry ki halat ko samajh tha hu....
Karan :- dekho jerry mera kaam tumhe batane ka hai kyuki main ye sab bhugat chuka hu Paisa to haath kaal mail hai kabhi bhi kama loge....lekin pariwar?! Pariwar vo cheez hai jiski dor itni nazuk hoti hai ki agar galati se ya Jane anjaane me tooti to sab kuch khatam ho jaayega....
Karan :- Ab faisla tumhe karna hai ki tumhe kya karna hai.....
Jerry jo ki man me hi soch tha hai ki karanveer ki baat to sahi hai or rakshash kuch bhi kar sakta hai...meri maa or meri betiyon!!!!!!! Or ye kehte hue vo ruk jaata hai.....
Or shayad uski maa jis baat se pareshan thi vo bhi ab ishi baat se pareshan hone laga tha..
Tabhi jerry karanveer se....
Jerry :- main samajh gaya uncle ki mujhe kya karna hai mujhe apne pariwaar ko vo khushiyan deni hai jiske vo hakdar hai...
Tabhi karanveer :- Shabbash yahi hui na baat..main bohot khush hua Aaj tumse himanshu ishi liye aaj tum apne pariwaar ke saath enjoy Karo or kal kaam par mat aana....
Jerry sawali aawaj me :- kyu uncle
Karan :- vo kya hai na beta tumne mujhe bataya aaj ka to tum aaj un teeno ko ravan dahen dikhane le kar jaao or haa waha mela lagega to apni Betiyon ko bhi waha ghoomana...
Karanveer ke mooh se betiyan shabad sunkar jerry thoda ajeeb thoda sharam or thodi si hijaak wala chehra banata hai...
Karanveer uski halat samjh tha hua :- ab aise mat dekho relax ho jaao or haa ye lo paise....
Jerry :- are uncle ye kya mere paas hai...tabhi...
Karanveer :- Are ye tumhare liye nahi meri potio ke liye hai mere bete hahahahahhor haa kal kaam kar mat aana kyuki Maine socha hai ki main aaj apni beti ke ghar jaau vaise bhi bohot dino se bula rahi thi lekin mere paas time nahi tha or bachho ki bhi chutiya start hai to aaj niklunga to sham ko pochunga jayada door nahi hai or thoda pariwar se milna bhi ho jayega main waha or tum yaha apne pariwar ke saath enjoy karo
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Tabhi jerry :- aapka ye aehsan zindagi bhar nahi bhoolunga uncle main aapne mere liye bohot kiya hai.....or ye kehte hue jerry emotional ho jaata hai tabhi karanveer....
Jerry ko gale se laga leta hai or kehta hai...
Karan :- ehsan to tumne kiya hai himanshu tumne in chaar saalo me mere bete ki kami poori kardi ishi liye ye sab baate mat karo....
Jerry karan ki baat par sad hote hue :- main prathna karunga uncle aapka beta jaldi hi aajaye..
Tabhi karanveer halka sa muskurate hue :- uski chinta mat karo kyuki tumhari kahi baat sach ho rahi hai mere bete ne meri beti se baat karni shuru kar di haior shayd vo bhi waha aane wala hai or main ummid karta hu ki usse meri mulakat ho or sab thik ho jaye.....
Ye sunte hi jerry muskurate hue :- are waaaaaaa ab to party chaiye uncle lekin aap chinta mat kariye aapka beta yani mera bada bhai zaroor wapis aajyega
Or dono hasne lagte hai..
Tabhi karanveer time dekhta hua kehta hai are bhai ab mere saath hi gappe ladaoge ghar nahi jaana sab bhookhe honge or khane ko lekar jaao or haaa raat ko meri potio ka Dihan rakhna or Rashmi beti ka bhi.
Jerry muskurate hue :- ji thik hai uncle main poora Dihan rakunga aapki beti ka or potiyon ka hahahahaha
Karanveer bhi hasne lagta hai fir jerry or karanveer dono nikal jaate hai jerry kahane pine ka saman kharid kar karanveer ki station chord deta hai or dono ek doosre se vida lete hai....
Fir jerry sab saman lekar Jaa hi Raha hota hai itne vo dekhta hai......
Guy's next update bhi jaldi aayega tab tak ke liye peace![]()
Back to back update bhai maza aa gaya padke.shaandar story haiKehte hai jab insaan pyaar me padta hai tab ushe kuch samajh nahi aata even roz marra ki zindagi me karne wale kaamo me uska man nahi lagta halaki jab man dukhi hota hai tab bhi nahi lagta lekin pyaar ka bukhar thoda alag hai jisme tabiyat kharab ho jaati hai lekin maza bhi utna hi aata hai or jab pyaar pehla ho or pehli baar hua ho tab to ayhhh hayeeeeeee...
Ab jerry ko hi dekh lo bechara khane pina ka saman le kar achha khasa ghar ko aa raha tha lekin raste me kuch usne dekh liya jo ki itni badi baat nahi tha ek dam normal tha sab lekin fir bhi......
Update 12.
Jerry jo ghar ja raha tha raste me vo ek Sadi ki shop dekhta haior ushe thodi der dekhta hai or kahi kho jaata hai...
Jerry ke man me ajeeb si bechaini ho jaati hai vo kuch soch me pad jaata hai lekin tabhi..
Bike ka horn :::: peeeepppepepelellelep.....
Aadmi :- Are bhai raste se to hat jaaao kidhar Dihan hai raste ke bich me khade ho.?
Or jerry apni soch se bahar aataa hu...
Jerry :- Ohhh ji ji mujhe maaf karna vo main....
Bike wala shop ki or dekhta hai or jerry se kehta hai...
Aadmi :- ohhh to biwi ke liye sadi lene ki soch rahe ho lagta hai biwi rooth gai hai ahhahashhashhshshs. Bhai sahab main to kehta hu ek mahengi si or achhi si saddi lelo Varna biwi raat me bistar par nahi aane degi hahahahaahahhahah....
Jerry ye baat sunkar thoda gussa ho jaata hai ( bistar wali baat par biwi wali par nahi )
Jerry gusse me :- dekhiye aapme thodi tamiz hai ya nahi ye kya bol rahe ho?..
Aadmi :- are bhai sahab mujhe maaf krdo main to mazak kar raha tha mere kehne ka matlab hai ki agar biwi kisi baat par rooth jaye to aurto ko ye sab kapde gehne de kar manate hai..... Main khud aaj apni biwi ke liye ek suit lekar Jaa Raha hu vo gusse me apne mayike chali gai hahahha. Tabhi aadmi.
Aadmi :- are baap re mujhe to ushe station lene jaana tha mar gaye aaj to
Or wo waha se chala jaata hai lekin jaate jaate jerry ke dimag me ek chul karke jaata hai.
Jerry man me :- ye kya maine ushe ye kyu nahi kaha ki meri koi biwi nahi hai main to bistar wali baat par naraz hua tha.....
Jerry :- Lekin MAA mere se naraz thodi na hai (tabhi achanak) are maine cigrate pi thi vo baat kaise bhool gya )Fir achanak jerry sadi ki shop par jaata hai or ek achhi si green and gold type saree kharid tha hai....
Udhar Ghar Par....
Rashmi Apni Neend Me se uth jaati hai kyuki parul bohot der se aawaj de rahi thi or Rashmi jo ki naa jaane kitne saalo ke baad shayad zindagi me pehli baar it i gehri neend me soi thi ki usko uski beti pichle 10 min se utha rahi thi......
Parul :- Mummy:;Mummy;'"Kya hua aapko aap uth kyu nahi rahi thi.....
Rashmi Angdaiya lete hue :- Parul Kya Hua meri bachhi kyu utha rahi hai?..
Parul :- mummy mujhe bohot bhookh lagi hai or papa apne kamre me daru pi kar so rahe hai..(dono ladkion ko ganje ke baare me nahi pata tha)...or bhaiya bhi nahi hai....
Or bhaiya yani jerry ki sunte hi Rashmi ki aankhon me se neend maano gayab si ho gai vo ek dam se uthi or.....
Rashmi :- beta tu baith main tere liye kuch banati hu.....
Or Rashmi poore Ghar me jerry ko dhoond thi hai lekin vo nahi milta.....
Rashmi apne man me :- Ye jerry kaha chale gaye!!!!!
Or Rashmi ye kehte chup ho jaati hai ki usne jerry ko Chale gaye kaha na ki chala gya...
Rashmi man me :- Ye mujhe kya ho raha hai mujhe kuch samjh nahi aaraha hai....
Bahar......
Bahar jerry saree lekar jaane lagta hai lekin usko raste me choti ladkiyon ke kapdo ki shop dikhti hai
Ta Jerry apne man me are ye to ladies suite ki shop hai to kyu na main apni Betiyon ke liye!!!!!!! Jerry thoda jhijhak te hue lekin agle hi pal.....
Jerry ka man :- Kya hua betiyon kehne me itna kyu ghabra Raha hai ???? Vaise bohot bada mard bana ghoomta hai ab jab mard banne ki baari aai tho kyu dar raha hai ??
Jerry :- Lekin ????
Jerry ma man :- Kya lekin suna nahi tha karanveer ne kiya kaha tha agar abhi kuch nahi kiya to sab bikhar jaayega jerry!! Sab kuch bikhar jaayega;!!!!!
Tabhi jerry :- Nahi Nahi main aisa nahi hone dunga BILKUL bhi nahi...
Or jerry shop ke andar jaata hai or apni dono betiyon ke liye 2 suit khard tha hai...
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Or ye sab shopping karne ke baad jerry jo ki ek alag hi ehsaas ke saath shop se bahar nikal tha hai vo sidha riksha karta hai or apni Betiyon ke liye or apni maa ke liye chudiya ( bangles ) Kaan me jhumke or pairo me pehnne ki pajeb or kuch rings,jutiya neckles ye sab khrid tha hai......sabke liye apni MAA or apni BETIYON ke liye
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Or ye sab kharidte WAKTH jerry soch raha tha ki ye khana thanda ho jaayega tabhi waah ek garib pariwar tha to jerry ne saara khana un bachho ko de diya jo bohot hi jayada khush huye the..To Unke MAA BAAP....
Gareeb Couple :- Beta Bhagwan Tumhare Maa baap or Biwi Bachho Ko Hamesha Khus Rakhe
Or is baat ko sunne ke baad jerry bhag kar jaata hai or us pariwar ke liye jaisee apne pariwar ke liye saman kapde sab khareede the vaise hi us gareeb pariwar ko kharid kar deta hai...
Gareeb Couple Nam Aankhon Se :- Beta in sab ki kya zaroorat thi itne paise be MATLAB kharach kiye tumhe pareshani hogi
Jerry :- Isme pareshani ki kya baat hai uncle auntyaap logo ke liye hi hai aap ishe rakh lijiye or vaise bhi aapne aisa ashirwad diya hai
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Gareeb Couple :- Beta Bhagwan Tumhari Or Tumhari Pariwar Ki Sari Khushiyan Poori Kare OR Tumhe Kabhi Kisi Ke Aage Haath Na Badana Pade Or Tumhare Biwi Bachhe Or Tumhare Maa Baap...
Tabhi Jerry achanak se :- Uhhhh;";";"";" vo uncle aunty mere maa baap nahi hai bas biwi or meri do betiyan hai.
Or ye bolne ke baad jerry khud shoked ho jaati hai lekin tabhi....
Gareeb Couple muskurate hue:- Koi baat nahi beta tumhare maa baap nahi hai to kya tumhari biwi or tumhari dono betiyan hamesha khush rahe or unki or tumhari sab ichha poori ho....Chalo bacho bhaiye ko dhanyawad kroo.....
Sabhi bachhe :- dhanyawad bhaiye aap bohot achhe ho.....
Jerry bas un logo ki smile dekhta hai or man hi man muskurate hue.
Jerry man me :- ye log sadak par rehte hai lekin fir bhi kitne khush hai ek POORA PARIWAAR EK SAATH
Or fir jerry...
Bye karta hua waha se chala jata hai.......
Ghar par...
Rashmi man me :- hey bhagwan Mere jerry kaha chale gaye kaha gaye kahi kuch nahi!! Nahi!!!!! Vo itne bhi kamzor nahi hai lekin vo gaye kaha;!;;!!!
Priya bhi so kar uth jaati hai jo rone wala mooh bankar Rashmi ke paas aati hai..
Tabhi Rashmi..
Rashmi :- Are meri gudiya uth gai lekin ye kya meri bachhi ki aankhon me aansu kyu...
Priya nam aankhon se :- mummy mujhe ravan dekhne jaana hai papa nahi jaa rahe kya hum bhi nahi jayengeor rone lagi tabhi....
Rashmi bhi priya ko rota dekh uski aankhein nam hone hi wali thi ki tabhi...
Tabhi ek aawaz aati hai..Kisne kaha meri bachiya or unki mummy ravan dekhne nahi jaayegi..
Tabhi Rashmi or priya jerry ko dekhti hai..jo gate par khada muskura raha tha...
Tabhi Rashmi or priya bhag kar jaati hai or dono ek saath..
Rashmi or priya dono itni zor se hug karti hai or jerry ka saara saman niche gir jaata hai or tabhi waha parul aati hai or vo ye dekh.....
Parul :- Ohhhhhhh mere bina..
Tabhi jerry :- Aaja meri bachhi tu bhi aaja.
Or dono bachiya or Rashmi jerry ki bahon me thi or is WAKTH jerry ko aisa mehsoos ho raha tha jaise usko duniya ki saari daulat or sabhi khushiyan mil gai hoo....
Aaj Ke Liye Itna Hi....
Milte hai agle update me tab tak ke liye peace![]()
Bhai update 13 bohot badiya update tha jo story me naya rand add karta lekin pata nahi ye website ki kya problem hai fast or stable wifi ke baad bhi site open nahi hoti or update 13 poora likh diya tha lekin vo post nahi hua apne aap refresh hua or 80% update gayab ho gyaBro agla update kab aaygs
Aap opera app use karo chrome par yahi pareshani a rahi haiBhai update 13 bohot badiya update tha jo story me naya rand add karta lekin pata nahi ye website ki kya problem hai fast or stable wifi ke baad bhi site open nahi hoti or update 13 poora likh diya tha lekin vo post nahi hua apne aap refresh hua or 80% update gayab ho gya![]()
good start.To kahani shuru hoti hai saal 2005 me delhi me ***** jagah se ek jagah thi jahan na jayada gareeb na jayada ameer log rehte hai bas lower middle class log rehte the unme se ek ghar tha jisme ye kahani shuru hui.....
Lekin ye kahani khatam hui ya nahi hui ye to aapko kahani me hi pata chalega.......
KUCH IS TARAH SE IDEA LAGA SAKTE HAI FAMILY KA LEKIN APNA HERO JERRY NE BAAD ME BODY BANA LI THI
Kahani ke kirdaar..
1: (Father) Manoj Age: 48 Years
2: (Mother) Rashmi Age: 39 Years
JAISA KI AAP SABHI JAANTE HAI PEHLE KE TIME ME SHADI JALDI HO JAATI THI TO AGE US HISAB SE RAKHI GAI HAI
3: (Hero) Himanshu Urf Jerry Age: 23 (Note -: Himanshu Ko Jerry Uski Maa Yani Rashmi Bulati Hai Pyaar Se To Confused Mat Ho Jaana.....
AB Baari Hai Manoj Or Rashmi Ki Judwa Betiya Yani Ki Jerry Ki Behno Ki......
4: (Sister's/Betiyan) Priya OR Parul Age: 13 Saal.
Ab Confusion door kar deta hu jaisa maine aapko bataya ki pehle ke time me shadiya jaldi ho jaati thi khas kar ladki ki hamare parent's me bhi kafi age difference hai to Neetu ki shadi 16 saal ki age me ho gai thi kyuki uske maa baap bohot jayada ameer to nahi the halaki bohot jayada gareeb bhi nahi the lekin unki 5 Betiyan thi isiliye un hone shadi jaldi kardi jo ki unki galti bhi thi........ Ab vo galti kya hai aage bataunga or betio ki Age itni kam kyu hai. Vo bhi aage hi pata chalega.......
To baat us wakt ki hai jab barsaat ka mosam khatam ho kar sardiyo ka yani winter mosam aane wala tha. Or aapko to pata hi hai winter aate aate kitne saare festival'sbhi aane lagte hai aise hi dekhte dekhte Dusshera bhi aagya.....
Sabko pata hai usdin shree ram ne Ravan ka vadh kiya tha lekin ek ravan to khatam ho gaya bakio ka kya ?
Kher us maidaan yani us ground me aapko pata hi hai ravan dahan kafi open area's me hota hai...
US maidaan me bohot se log apne apne pariwaron ke saath aaye the koi apne biwi,pati,bachhe,maa,baap, ya yu kehlo koi na koi kisi na kisi ke saath aaya hi hua tha ab ye kahani 2005 ki hai to us time ladka ladki bhi Aashiqui na ke barabar ya yu kaho aisa kuch 1000 me se 1 hota tha vo bhi bohot chup chup ke kher un 1000/1500 logo ki bheed me 4 logo ka ek pariwaar bhi tha....
Samjhe kon apni Rashmi ka pariwaar to aaj bohot hi mushkil se vo log yaha aa paye the MUSHKIL Se ? Ji ha mushkil se chaliye is sawal kaa jawab bhi de hi deta hu.......
4 Hour's pehle......
Rashmi: (kaapte hue): Suniye vo bachho ko ravan dahan dikhane le jaana tha...
Silence.........
Rashmi : Aadmi ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue jo ki chair par baitha hua tha.
Thoda tej aawaj me SUNIYE......
Tabhi vo aadmi khada hota hai or Rashmi ke gaal par ek kheech kar thappad maar deta hai.....
SAALI Teri Himmat kaise hui mere se uchi aawaj me baat karne ki.....kutiya.....
Or aap samjh hi gaye honge ki ye aadmi kon hai hai ji haaa ye aadmi Neetu ki Pati Manoj hai jisne bohot jayada sharab pi rakhi hai..
Rashmi Jo abhi thappad se sahem chuki thi (darte hue..)
Rashmi : Ji ji (hoth kaapte hue) ji ji mujhe mujhe mujhe maaf kar dijiye (cry)
Manoj Rashmi ke baal pakadte hue..
Manoj : Bol saali jaldi Varna yahi maar dunga thuje
Neetu : ji bachho ko Dusshera dekhina le jana tha ishi lie aapse bola lekin aapne suna nahi ishi liye maine aapke khande par haath rakha tha(rote hue)
Manoj : Kyu tere baap ka theka le rakha hai kya maine huh? Kya mujhe kuch or kaam nahi hai jo teri in dono sali kutiya betiyon ko Dusshera dikhane lekar jaau jo ki teri hi tarah kisi kaam ki nahi hai paida ho gai meri chati par mongdalne ke liye huh? Bol kutiya ab chup kyu hai bol sali randi. Teri maa ki chut bolnaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh
Ek baat note karne wali hai ki manoj ne sirf Betiyan hi kyu kahan?
Doosre kamre me:-
Priya OR Parul Jo apne pita ke chillane se dari hui thi sehmi baithi thi or apna maa ke thappad ki aawaj se jo Dusshera dekhne Jane ki excitement or masti thi vo sab tehs nehs hogai or bechari dono chota sa mooh lekr dar ke maare nam aakhon se ek doosre ko dekhti hai or kehti hai..
(Priya jo ki Parul ko didi bolti hai kyuki Parul Thodi si height me lambi hai priya se or healthy bhi hai)
Priya : didi kya papa kabhi hame pyaar nahi denge kya papa hamse nafrat karte hai vo kabtak hamse aise hi nafrat krte rahenge aakhir hamne kiya hi kya hai sabke papa unse kitna pyaar parte hai or hamare papa hame dekhte tak nahi...... or fir vo parul ke gale lag kar bohot roti hai (crying)
Parul Jo khud kuch nahi kar sakti thi vo khud nam aanko se apni bahen ko sambhal ti hai or kehti hai.
Parul : chup hoja meri pyaari bahen ro mat sab theek ho jayega...( Lekin vo khud bohot ro rahi thi lekin vo kamzor pad gai to uski bahen ko kon sambhalega isiliye vo apne aasu rokne ki koshish karti hai)
mazbooran usko ye bolna padta hai kyuki uske pita un dono se nafrat kyu karte hai ye ushe bhi nahi pata.... Akhir kya Raaz hai iske piche vo to kahani me aage pata lagega dosto...
Parul apne aashu pochte hue:-
Parul: pagal aise rote nahi papa hamse pyaar nahi karte to kya hua bhaiya to hamse kitna pyaar karte hai na..(nam aakhon se ye sab vo bolti hai)
Or ji haa guys hamara Jerry apni behno se bohot pyaar karta hai itna ki shayad Jerry apni khud ki aulad se bhi na kare usne hi apni dono behno ko Bachpan se laad pyaar karke bada kiya hai jaise ek baap apni beti ko karta hai ya yu kaho ek baap se bhi jayada ek bhai ek baap sab kuch uski behno ke lie unka bhai hi tha or kehte hai na bada bhai baap saman hota hai
Andar karme me jaha Rashmi or Manoj the :-
Rashmi rote hue.... Dekhiye aapko nahi jaana to mat jaiye lekin meri betiyo ke baare me kuch mat boliye ( chukte hue ) maine aapko pehle bhi samjhaya hai hamesha samjhati hu lekin aap meri baat nahi maante aapko galat femi hai aap mera yakin kyu nahi karte.....
Manoj kuch bolne wala hi hota hai lekin tabhi tarwaaj par thak thak hoti hai.....
Manoj : jaa dekh ja kar sali randi bahen ki lodi dekh Tera koi khsam aaya hoga jaa....
Neetu jo bohot gusse me thi or ro bhi rahi thi lekin kya karti vo apne aap ko thik karti hai or aasuo ko saaf karti hai vo chup chap chali jaati hai darwaja kholne or darwaja kholne se pehle apni betio ko dekhti hai jo chup chap so gai thi ab Rashmi unhe dekh kar darwaja kholti hai
Darwaja kholte hi:-
Saamne apna hero Jerry khada tha jo bohot hi khush tha or ushe dekh kar neetu jo ki abhi to rahi thi vo bohot khush ho jaati hai
Jerry : kya hua maa itna time laga diya gate kholne me...
Rashmi : are nahi nahi beta aisi baat nahi hai vo to tumhare papa...jaise hi Rashmi ne bola tabhi manoj ki aawaj aati hai..
Manoj : Kon Hai Rashmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Rashmi : (Kapte hue) ji ji j j ji vo himanshu hai
Ek baat or note kijiyega ki Rashmi himanshu Ko Jerry manoj ke saamne nahi bolti aisa kyu ye aage janne ko milega kher abhi....
Rashmi ki aawaj sunte hi Jerry ko kuch kuch samaj aagya tha kyuki ye pehli baar nahi tha pehle na jaane kitni baar aisa hua hai shayad hamesha hi...
Manoj nashe me Rashmi ki baat ka bas itna hi jawab deta hai sali randi kutiyaaaaa...
Or ye sunte hi Neetu fir se udas ho jaati hai
Jerry jo abhi bohot kuch tha andar aakr darwaja lagata hai or :-
Jerry : mujhe maaf kardo maa ( nam aakhon se ) main samaj gaya ki kya hua tha yaha thodi der pehle lekin main khush tha kisi or baat pr isiliye aapki taklif nahi samj paya mujhe maaf krdomain kisi kaam ka nahi hu maa main kisi kaam ka nahi hu" kisi kaam ka nahi" or vo gusse;pyaar;nafrat ke saath bohot zor se punch wall lar maarta hai jishe dekh kar raskhmi dar jaati hai
Rashmi darte hue lekin pyaar se or dheere se
Rashmi : tum"tum"tum" pagal ho gaye ho jerry ye kya kar rahe ho...Dekho khoon nikal raha hai jerry ye tumne kya Kiya ( ghabraye hue jerry ko sambhalti hai )
Or tab tak dono bahene bhi aawj sunkar aa jati hai dono bohot udas thi...or bhi aate hai mummy kya hua bhaiya ko (nam aakhon se) or ye khoon kaise
or vo dono bohot ghab ra jaati hai ..Rashmi dod kar un dono ko kamre me lekar jaati hai or unhe samjhati hai.....
Rashmi : (fake sime ke saath) are meri gudiyaon bhaiya ko kuch nahi hua vo to bhaiye injection lag waya hai ishi lie aisa hi raha hai agar tum dono bhi jaldi nahi sogi to tumhe bhi lagega
Ab dono betiyan choti thi to vo Rashmi ki baat ko seriously lete hue thoda darti hai or kehti hai dono ek saath nahi hame nahi lag wana injection or dono jaldi se ek doosre ki bahon me sone lagti hai... Ye dekh Rashmi ko thodi si hasi aati hai lekin agle hi pal vo jerry ko yaad krke bhar aati hai or bahar se betiyon ke room ka gate band kardeti hai lekin jaise hi vo bahar aati hai vo dekhti hai jerry kahi nahi hai vo ushe dekh ti idhar udhar
Rashmi : (nam aakhon se ) man me :- tum kaha chale gaye mere jerry tum kaha chale gaye mujhe chod kar is halat me kaha chale gaye
Vo bilkul pagal si ho jaati hai lekin tabhi vo dekhti hai khoon ki boonde stairs so hoti hui terrace par jaa rahi hai vo samj jaati hai ki mera jerry upar hai.
Or jaise hi rashmi khoon ki boondi ka picha karte hue jaati hai or upar jaakr jerry ko dekhti hai to uske haath se bohot khoon beh ra tha or saamne lage hue mirrorke tukde tukde ho rahe the or Jerry apne ek haath me sigarate lie hue bas nam aakno se bas gusse me khada apne daatho ko mask raha tha or cigrate ke kushhh laga raha tha rashmi ye sab dekh kar dar jaati hai or lekin ushe sigarate ko dekh kar bohot gussa bhi aata hai vo sidha jerry ke paas jaati hai.......
Or ek zor dard thappad ki aawaj aati hai
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