Incest KAISE MUJHE PYAR HUA (family) (Completed)

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

bhai..."dhyn" kaa matlab kya hai? "daaiyan" or "dhyan" this is what makes your story less appealing...my criticism may be harsh..but think about it. I have told you many times earlier also...
Alternate way is..you write your story in Hindi...then these kind of issues will not be there. Thanks.

DEVIL MAXIMUM

Thanku bhai smj gya bat aapki

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai DEVIL MAXIMUM bhai....
Nice and lovely update....

Thanku parkas bhai

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

Zabardast ending bhai...

Thanku Kunwar.YashRaj bhai

 

[Raj_sharma]

Thanku bhai smj gya bat aapki

Jaise thanku nahi thank you

 

[Mass]

Thanku bhai smj gya bat aapki

Thank you. Intention is to help you and not otherwise..

 

[Mass]

Jaise thanku nahi thank you

haha...sahi kaha bhai...

 

[maakaLover]

DEVIL MAXIMUM Bahut bahut jordar brother,,, Raj_Sharma bro se prabhavit hokr jo last ki line likhi wo bhi mast thi bhut,,, albela k lie waiting

 

[Smith_15]

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

DEVIL MAXIMUM Bahut bahut jordar brother,,, Raj_Sharma bro se prabhavit hokr jo last ki line likhi wo bhi mast thi bhut,,, albela k lie waiting

Thank you soo much
maakaLover , Smith_15

 

[Shekhu69]

Bahut hi shaandaar Lajawab Jabardast superb mast