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Superb update dear maximumUPDATE 4
Mera dost-(kisi se call pe) Hello madam
Samne se Leady-Ha bolo ky bat hai
Mera dost-sb thik hai madam aaj rat me party me Jana hai waiter bn ke humlogo ko
Samne se Leady-ohhhoo lgta hai time aagya hai
Mera dost- bat ye ni hai Madam aaj Sunny alag behave kr rha hai
Samne se Leady-ky mtlb hai alag behave ka ?
Mera dost-mera mtlb alg se NORMAL behave se hai Madam jaise kuch hua ni ho
Samne se leady-Tumhe jis kam ke lye btaya gya hai bs uspe dhyn do or rhe party ki bat uska Jana jroori hai bhot Q ki...
Mera Dost-(bech me bat katte hue)Madam party me khe dikkat na hojay khe gusse me Sunny kuch ..
Samne se Leady- (bech me bat kaattee hue)esa kuch ni hona chahey smje tum or bholo Mt tumhe Sunny ka dhyn rakhne ke lye bheja gya hai waise bi wo apne aapko itna control kr skte hai agar koi dikkat lge call krna thik hai
Mera dost-ok Madam (call cut)
other city me ek room me
Leady-(apne samne other leady se)Aaj party me Jaa rha hai Sunny bs dua kro wha pe esa kuch ho jisse Hume fayda ho jayy
Other Leady-dont worry mujhe poora yakeen hai wo wha gye hue hai Bina kuch kre waise bi unka mnn ni bhrta hai yha to party hone wali hai wo bi rat me jiski subh ka koi andaja ni hai bs Sunny control me rhe party me
Leady-Hmmm
back to Jodhpur
ab tyaar hoke nikl gy Hotel ki trf raste me inlogo me shopping ki apne lye sbne hotel me aate he sb apne kam me lg gy shamm hote he party suru hogy HOTEL me
log aane lge party me
Sunny , Zaid , Sunil , Prithvi waiter me getup me mask ke sath tyaar hoke h table me order le rhe the sath me unka order serve kr rhe the mje ki bat ye hue ki jis table me order lene jate unhe hr order ke sath log waiter ko 500 ke 4 note de rhe the party me enjoy ment suru hogya dance Masti suru hogy
ye sb dost waiter ka kam baakhobi kr rhe the ek table me Sunny gya wha pe..
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Sunny-Sir can I take your order
Unknown1-Yes 1 whisky bottle TEACHERS
Unknown2- sath me snacks bi
Sunny-(unknown sunny ko order ke sath 500 ke 4 note deke)ok sir give me 5 min
fir Sunny ne indono Unknown ka order dedia enjoy ment krne lge ye log bi
Unknown2- yr kitna pite rhege kuch or bi mjedar hona chahey bhai poori rat ese pina ni aay hai
Unknown1-Sabar kro bhai jldi he ye rat mjedar hogi apni
unknown2-or kitna intjar bhai
Unknown1-thoda or intjaar Nasha to ab hona suru ho rha hai jldi he mil jayga mja bi
or fir Unknown1 ki najar gy kisi leady pe to wo uth ke wha chla gya leady se bat krne lga thodi der bad usne unknown2 ko bi bula lya itne me ek leady or aagy unke pass charoo milke bat krne lge drinkkrne lge fir dj me Jake dance kia thodi der bad wapas aay table pr or waiter ko bulaya mtlb Sunny ko
Sunny-yes sir btaye ky laao aapke lye
Unknown1-(dhire se kaann me)yr bs ek room dila de kuch time ke lye
Mai-sir room ka ky krege yha pe bathroom, toilet sb hai?
Unknown1-(sunny ki pocket me 500 ke 10 note dalte hue)bs ab jldi se room ka intjaam kra de
Mai-(mnn me hste hue)Sir hum 12 log hai yha pe or sb mere apne khass hai 10 noto ka ky kro jbki aapko Room chahey wo bi private
Unknown2-(unki bat sun ke)dekh jitna mil rha hai mje kr jada dosroo ka Mt soch jldi kam krde
Mai-Sorry sir ye Kam ni ho payga aapko kuch order Dena ho to btaye
Unknown1-(is bar 500 ki 2 packet sunny ki pocket me dalte hue)ab wajan halka ni lg rha hai mujhe (smile dete hue)
Mai-Ek bat Khe suna thi maine kbi
PAISA HAI BHAGWAAN
JHOTHA HAI INSAAN
TU MAAN YA NA MAAN
PAISOO ME BIKEE BHAGWAAN
jldi milta ho sir
Mai- Zaid bhai ek kam hai tere se
Zaid-ha bol na bhai apn islye yhe hai
Mai-(hste hue bola)Wo table hai jispe 2 aadmi or 2 leady baithe hai
Zaid-to ky hua bhai set hogy ky tere se
Mai-are ni yr wo dono leady undono se set ho gy hai room chahey unko sath me 500 ke 2 packet dia hai bs kisi ko pta ni chle room ka
Zaid-lgta hai bhot uchi cheej lgte hai dono , dekh mai bat krta ho kam to bn jayga dekhna
Sunil or Prithvi-sale tumdono yha msti kr rhe ho wha serve kia kia humdono ki lge PDI hai yr
Mai-Q bhai hr table se 500 ke 4 note mil bi rhe hai wo bi hr ek order me usme bi dikkat hai tujhe
Prithvi-abe socha tha enjoy krege party me yha to room dudne pd rhe hai tharkiyoo ke lye
Mai-ky tujhe kisne bola room ke lye be
Sunil-abe ise ni humdono ko bola hai wo baithe hai na 3 ladke or 3 leady unke lye chahey
Prithvi-hd hai yr yha aay the waiter bn ke jayge kuch or bn ke
humsb-
Zaid-(aate he bola)hogya bhai jugada room ka
Mai-kha pe hai room bta
Zaid-wo uper dekh balcony me first floor pe
Mai-kamal kr dia tharki ke lye room dudd lya tune (zaid ko side me lejaake) ek kam or kr de na room me Jaa or mobile set krke aaja
Zaid-ky mtlb hai be Tera
Mai-ye le mera mobile AIRPLANE mod me hai video recorder on krke ek achi jgh set krde kisi ko pta na chle bs kr de itna kamm
Zaid-myskura kr hojayga bhai bs 5 min me
Mai-(table pe Jaa ke Unknown ke pass) Sir kam bn gya hai lekin sirf 1 hour ke lye Q ki manager 1 hour bad aayga tb tk ke lye aap enjoy kr skte hai
Unknown2-1 hour bs itne paise islye dia hai ky
Mai-ha sir bs 1 hour manjoor ho to thik ni to (table pe unke paise rakhte hue) ye rhe aapke paise
Unknown1-koi bat ni hame manjoor hai
Mai-ok sir first floor pe aaye mere sath
unko leke first floor ke roome legya or room ke bhar unko chod ke nikl gya mai
Zaid-(mere se)kam bn gya hai bhai
Mai-ab aayga asli mja inke sath
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sorry friend's der ke lye bs koshish kr rha ho story behter krne ki
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