Prince Arya
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Incest Kamina Bhai (Completed)
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Bhai ye kya baat hui..tumne hi story ke introduction me bataya tha ki ye only incest story hai..aur jinhe incest pasand nahi hai wo yaha visit nahi kare..fir tumne story me adultery dikhaya uski behan 5 baar chud chuki hai..aur ab chudne wali hai...agar wo apne boyfriend se pyar karti hai to alag baat hai..but wo yanha apni life kewal enjoy kar rahi hai...fir isme only incest kaha se aaya..ye to adultry woth incest hai..agar readers apna point of view rakkhe to aap writer log bolte ho ki ab story end..yaar story start karne se pahle clear mention karo ki story incest rahegi ya adultry but yaha story me sister bahar chudwa rahi hai..but story incest hi hai..ye kya baat hui
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Bhai mene kaha tha na m bilkul naya hu is site par,mujhse galti se incest add ho gaya but mujhe incest with adultery likhna tha,mene kafi try kiya but mujjse change ni hua,aur wese bhi Ajay ka is story mai koi roll nahi hai aage
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Bhai, you continue to write the story as you want it. It is coming out nicely. It is your choice to turn the story the way you want it. In modern times, most college kids have girl friend or boyfriend. Kya hua agar heroine ka botfriend hai toh?
Sex between brother and sister or close relatives is termed as incest. It does not mean that they should only have sex with each other and no one else.
Ha, lekin bhai behan ke beech mein bf khalta zaroor hai.
But it is your story and your characters. Please go ahead as you wish.
Best of luck
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Bhai mera bhi same yahi opinion hai,m nahi chahta ki ye sirf ek story ho,balki m chahta hu ki ye real lage,aur wo 22 yr ke college m bhi to unki bf gf to hoge hi na,aur rahi baat Ashu ke bf ki to uska ek update ke baad kahi bhi role nahi hoga
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Jaisa tumne bataya ki ek update ke baad ajay ka role nahi hoga story me...to aafe ye incest rahegi ya adultry rahegi
jonny khan
Nawab hai hum .... Mumbaikar
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sabse pehle toh main apko incest reader kya hota hai bata du :-
incest reader jab koi story padhta hai voh us story ke character se es tarah judh jata hai jese voh khud uss story ka character ho jese ke es story ka hero aryan hai toh incest reader khud ko Aryan samajhne lagta hai aur Aryan apni behan se sex karne ke liye pagal hai aur ab agar sare incest readers ko yeh padhne ko mile ke story ki heroin Ajay naam ke ladke se sex karti arahi hai toh incest readers ka dil tut jata hai usee bura lagta hai aur voh apne gusse ka izhar comment ke roop karta hai, yeh sari bate sirf incest readers hi mahsoos kar sakta hai,bahut se readers incest + adultary padh lete hai unke liye yeh sirf yeh ek story hoti hai par incest readers ka story ki heroin ka kisi dusre ke saath sex karna kisi shock se kam nahi hota jese raat mujhe yeh shock laga tha apki likhi kuch lines nai dimag ki waatt laga kar rakh di,main bhi mumbaikar hu main jis college mai study karta hu voh Mumbai ka nami girami college hai vaha toh girlfriend badalne ka faishon hai par phir bhi itna kullepan ke bawjood sab ladkiyo ke boyfriends nahi hote hai yaar ......
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UPDATE 7
College se aane ke baad is tarah time guzar gaya. Raat ke time sabhi khana khaane ke baad tv dekh rahe the. Aryan thodi der baad apne room mai aa gaya.us waqt 10 baj rahe the. Tabhi use mobile ki ringtone sunai di,ye ringtone Ashu ke mobile ki thi joki uske kamre se aa rahi thi(un dono ka kamara ek dusre se attach hai na). Aryan ne socha jaane ko phir socha ki rehne deta hu,uski kisi friend ka hoga. Phir jab mobile dobara se bajne laga to wo usthkar uske room mai chala gaya. Ashu ka mobile charging par laga hua tha. Usne mobile uthaya to us par caller name dekh kar wo thoda chonka.
" Ajay ki call,ise Ashu se kya baat karni hai". Usne apne aap se bola,itne mai call phir se cut ho gayi. Uske baad Ajay ka msg aaya but mobile ka lock laga hone ki wajah se wo dekh nahi paaya. Aur Wo apne kamre mai aa gaya,uska dhyaan baar baar Ajay ki call ki taraf hi jaa raha tha ki wo Ashu ko kyu call kar raha tha aur phir sms bhi kiya. Tabhi use seedhiyo se kisi ke aane ki awaaz aayi,usne dekha to Ashu thi. Usne kuch socha aur aese lait gaya ki jese wo so raha ho. Ashu apne room mai gayi aur mobile dekha to wo thoda dar gayi.
"Kahi Aryan ne to nahi dekha ki Ajay ka call aa raha hai,kahi use shak na ho gaya ho. Kese pata karu". Ashu thodi dar gayi thi .
"Kya pata wo so gaya ho". Ashu ne khud se kaha aur uske kamre ki taraf badne lagi. Wo uske kamre mai gayi to room ka darwaza open tha usne dekha ki Aryan to so raha hai,usne check karne ke liye awaaz lagai: Aryan..Aryan..
Aryan sab sun raha tha but uske man mai shak paida ho gaya tha isliye use confirm karna tha. Ashu ne dekha ki wo so chuka hai to wo apne room mai aayi aur door band karke Ajay ko call karne lagi. Aur yaha Aryan bhi jhat se khada hokar iske gate se kaan lagakar sunne laga ki andar kya hoga. Ajay ne call pick ki.
Ajay: hello jaan,kesi ho.
Ashu: tumhara dimag kharab ho gaya hai kya,mene tumhe kitni baar kaha hai ki jab m ghar hoti hu to mujhe call mat kiya karo.
Ajay: itna kyu bhadak rahi ho,kya hua.
Ashu: mera mobile upar charging par laga hua tha,Aryan bhi apne kamre mai hai lekin shukr hai ki wo so raha hai,agar wo aakar mobile dekh leta to.
Ajay: tum bewajah dar rahi ho,agar dekh leta to kya hota,ek bhai apni behan ko call nahi kar sakta kya.
Ashu: ha kar sakta hai,lekin tum agar mere mobile par karoge aur wo bhi itni raat m,to shak to hoga hi.
Ajay: chalo chhodo,ye batao parso pakka aaogi na.
Ashu: ha pakka aaungi,but jaayenge kaha.
Ajay: wahi hotel m.
Ashu: hotel mai jaana risky hota hai.
Ajay: wo tum mujh par chhod do,kab milogi time batao.
Ashu: pehle mujhe college jana hai aur do class deni hai khaaskar us teacher ki jo mummy ki dost hai,uske baad m 12 bje ke baad aaungi,aur 3 baje tak mujhe ghar bhi pahuchna hoga.
Ajay: theek hai parso milte hai phir.
Ashu: ok.
Aur idhar Aryan ne jab ye sab suna to uske to pero tale jameen hi khisak gayi,use yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki uski behan Ajay se set thi. Lekin wo aese kese kar sakti hai Ajay to uske chacha ka ladka hai. Aur Ajay bhaari kadmo se apne kamre mai aa gaya.
Mene introduction mai kaha tha na ki Rajesh ka bada bhai hai jo gao mai rehta hai. To ab mai uska introduction deta hu:
Sunil sharma: age 49hai,bahut seedhe saadhe aadmi hai,apne gao se bahut pyaar hai isliye yahi rehkar kheti karte hai.
Shanti: age 46hai, ye bhi bahut achhi hai,ye chahti thi ki dono bhai saath hi rahe jis se ki inke beech pyaar bana rahe,lekin uske pati gao nahi chhodna chahte the aur Rajesh city apni job ki wajah se ja raha tha.
Unke bhi do bacche the. Bada ladka tha aur chhoti ladki thi.
Ajay: iski age 25 saal hai,ye ek company mi job karta hai,dekhne mai acha hai.
Avni: ye 23 saal ki hai,MBA kar rahi hai,dekhne mai kafi sundar hai.
Aryan to shocked tha. Use yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki uski behan apne cousin ke saath hi ishq lada rahi hai.
" unki baato se to aesa lagta hai ki wo sex bhi kar chuke honge,aur parso phir hotel jaane ki baat ho rahi hai,mujhe to yakin hi nahi ho raha hai ki- kaha to mai apni hi behan ko thokne ke chakkar mai tha aur kaha wo khud apne bhai se chud rahi hai,chahe khud ka saga bhai muth maar maarke mar jaye". Aryan gusse m khud se keh raha tha. Use ye sochkar gussa aa raha tha ki uski Ashu ko kisi aur ne haat kese lagaya. Wo khud nahi samjh pa raha tha ki wo aesa kyu soch raha hai jabki wo bhi to khud use chodna chahta hai.
" Bas Ashu jitne maze tumhe lene the tum le chuki,m wada karta hu ab tum sirf chudogi to Aryan sharma se,mere siwa tumhe chodna to door koi touch bhi nahi karega". Aryan ko gussa to aa raha tha but ab use Ashu ko chodne ki ummid bhi nazar aane lagi thi.
"Ab tum dekhti jao Ashu darling,ki kese tum apne bhai ke neeche aati ho. Parso tumhe milne jaana hai na mai dekhta hu kese jaaogi tum."
Aryan planning karta krta so gaya.
College se aane ke baad is tarah time guzar gaya. Raat ke time sabhi khana khaane ke baad tv dekh rahe the. Aryan thodi der baad apne room mai aa gaya.us waqt 10 baj rahe the. Tabhi use mobile ki ringtone sunai di,ye ringtone Ashu ke mobile ki thi joki uske kamre se aa rahi thi(un dono ka kamara ek dusre se attach hai na). Aryan ne socha jaane ko phir socha ki rehne deta hu,uski kisi friend ka hoga. Phir jab mobile dobara se bajne laga to wo usthkar uske room mai chala gaya. Ashu ka mobile charging par laga hua tha. Usne mobile uthaya to us par caller name dekh kar wo thoda chonka.
" Ajay ki call,ise Ashu se kya baat karni hai". Usne apne aap se bola,itne mai call phir se cut ho gayi. Uske baad Ajay ka msg aaya but mobile ka lock laga hone ki wajah se wo dekh nahi paaya. Aur Wo apne kamre mai aa gaya,uska dhyaan baar baar Ajay ki call ki taraf hi jaa raha tha ki wo Ashu ko kyu call kar raha tha aur phir sms bhi kiya. Tabhi use seedhiyo se kisi ke aane ki awaaz aayi,usne dekha to Ashu thi. Usne kuch socha aur aese lait gaya ki jese wo so raha ho. Ashu apne room mai gayi aur mobile dekha to wo thoda dar gayi.
"Kahi Aryan ne to nahi dekha ki Ajay ka call aa raha hai,kahi use shak na ho gaya ho. Kese pata karu". Ashu thodi dar gayi thi .
"Kya pata wo so gaya ho". Ashu ne khud se kaha aur uske kamre ki taraf badne lagi. Wo uske kamre mai gayi to room ka darwaza open tha usne dekha ki Aryan to so raha hai,usne check karne ke liye awaaz lagai: Aryan..Aryan..
Aryan sab sun raha tha but uske man mai shak paida ho gaya tha isliye use confirm karna tha. Ashu ne dekha ki wo so chuka hai to wo apne room mai aayi aur door band karke Ajay ko call karne lagi. Aur yaha Aryan bhi jhat se khada hokar iske gate se kaan lagakar sunne laga ki andar kya hoga. Ajay ne call pick ki.
Ajay: hello jaan,kesi ho.
Ashu: tumhara dimag kharab ho gaya hai kya,mene tumhe kitni baar kaha hai ki jab m ghar hoti hu to mujhe call mat kiya karo.
Ajay: itna kyu bhadak rahi ho,kya hua.
Ashu: mera mobile upar charging par laga hua tha,Aryan bhi apne kamre mai hai lekin shukr hai ki wo so raha hai,agar wo aakar mobile dekh leta to.
Ajay: tum bewajah dar rahi ho,agar dekh leta to kya hota,ek bhai apni behan ko call nahi kar sakta kya.
Ashu: ha kar sakta hai,lekin tum agar mere mobile par karoge aur wo bhi itni raat m,to shak to hoga hi.
Ajay: chalo chhodo,ye batao parso pakka aaogi na.
Ashu: ha pakka aaungi,but jaayenge kaha.
Ajay: wahi hotel m.
Ashu: hotel mai jaana risky hota hai.
Ajay: wo tum mujh par chhod do,kab milogi time batao.
Ashu: pehle mujhe college jana hai aur do class deni hai khaaskar us teacher ki jo mummy ki dost hai,uske baad m 12 bje ke baad aaungi,aur 3 baje tak mujhe ghar bhi pahuchna hoga.
Ajay: theek hai parso milte hai phir.
Ashu: ok.
Aur idhar Aryan ne jab ye sab suna to uske to pero tale jameen hi khisak gayi,use yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki uski behan Ajay se set thi. Lekin wo aese kese kar sakti hai Ajay to uske chacha ka ladka hai. Aur Ajay bhaari kadmo se apne kamre mai aa gaya.
Mene introduction mai kaha tha na ki Rajesh ka bada bhai hai jo gao mai rehta hai. To ab mai uska introduction deta hu:
Sunil sharma: age 49hai,bahut seedhe saadhe aadmi hai,apne gao se bahut pyaar hai isliye yahi rehkar kheti karte hai.
Shanti: age 46hai, ye bhi bahut achhi hai,ye chahti thi ki dono bhai saath hi rahe jis se ki inke beech pyaar bana rahe,lekin uske pati gao nahi chhodna chahte the aur Rajesh city apni job ki wajah se ja raha tha.
Unke bhi do bacche the. Bada ladka tha aur chhoti ladki thi.
Ajay: iski age 25 saal hai,ye ek company mi job karta hai,dekhne mai acha hai.
Avni: ye 23 saal ki hai,MBA kar rahi hai,dekhne mai kafi sundar hai.
Aryan to shocked tha. Use yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki uski behan apne cousin ke saath hi ishq lada rahi hai.
" unki baato se to aesa lagta hai ki wo sex bhi kar chuke honge,aur parso phir hotel jaane ki baat ho rahi hai,mujhe to yakin hi nahi ho raha hai ki- kaha to mai apni hi behan ko thokne ke chakkar mai tha aur kaha wo khud apne bhai se chud rahi hai,chahe khud ka saga bhai muth maar maarke mar jaye". Aryan gusse m khud se keh raha tha. Use ye sochkar gussa aa raha tha ki uski Ashu ko kisi aur ne haat kese lagaya. Wo khud nahi samjh pa raha tha ki wo aesa kyu soch raha hai jabki wo bhi to khud use chodna chahta hai.
" Bas Ashu jitne maze tumhe lene the tum le chuki,m wada karta hu ab tum sirf chudogi to Aryan sharma se,mere siwa tumhe chodna to door koi touch bhi nahi karega". Aryan ko gussa to aa raha tha but ab use Ashu ko chodne ki ummid bhi nazar aane lagi thi.
"Ab tum dekhti jao Ashu darling,ki kese tum apne bhai ke neeche aati ho. Parso tumhe milne jaana hai na mai dekhta hu kese jaaogi tum."
Aryan planning karta krta so gaya.
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Sorry bhaiyo,mujhe pata nahi tha but ab pata chal gaya hai ki incest reader kya padhna pasand karte hai,isliye mene kahani ka plot change kar diya hai,update 6 bhi edit kar diya,ek baar phir se sorry