Incest karan ki family, Ek Anokha Safar

[arib]

What a story. Fabulous, Fantastic,Mind blowing
I can't believe it
Mjy story read kr k bht Maza Aya
Pichly 9 Saal se sex stories par rha hn 700+ story read ki hen r un men sirf 80 story passand ai hen what a writer
Sex ko ek had tak explain Kia Gia hy feeling ko bre dheyan se byan Kia Gia he wwwoowwww I love you Writers

Thanks bro

 

[Siraj Patel]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section.

Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits.

And the readers who does not want to write they can also participate for the "Best Readers Award" .. You just have to give your reviews on the Posted stories in USC

"Winning Writer's will be awarded with Cash prizes and another awards "and along with that they get a chance to sticky their thread in their section so their thread remains on the top. That is why This is a fantastic chance for you all to make a great image on the mind of all reader and stretch your reach to the mark. This is a golden chance for all of you to portrait your thoughts into words to show us here in USC. So, bring it on and show us all your ideas, show it to the world.

Entry thread will be opened on 7th February, meaning you can start submission of your stories from 7th of feb and that will be opened till 25th of feb. During this you can post your story, so it is better for you to start writing your story in the given time.

And one more thing! Story is to be posted in one post only, cause this is a short story contest that means we can only hope for short stories. So you are not permitted to post your story in many post/parts. If you have any query regarding this, you can contact any staff member.


To chat or ask any doubt on a story, Use this thread — Chit Chat Thread

To Give review on USC's stories, Use this thread — Review Thread

To Chit Chat regarding the contest, Use this thread— Rules & Queries Thread

To post your story, use this thread — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader	Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff

 

[Pal bhai]

Credit goes to original writer - Huntxman
Main isme thoda changes karke likhunga....

Ye kahani sachi ghatnao aur romanchak ghatnao par aadharit hai. umid hai meri ye kahani padh kar aapko bahot hi maja aane wala hai toh chaliye ab shuru karte hai. Mere gaon ki kahani, mujhe umeed hai ki aap meri ye kahani pasnad karenge.

Kahani shuru karne ke pehle main aap sab dosto ko batana chahta hoon ki is kahani me main sab ke naam galat use kar rha hoon. Taki future me mujhe aur unhe koi bhi dikat na ho. Toh pehle main apni kahani ke sabhi character’s ke bare me aap ko bata deta hoon. Taki aap sab ko kahani jaldi aur ache se samjh aa jaye.

Raghav – Umar kairb 42 saal hai aur sharir se kafi tandrust insaan, apne gaon ke ek-lote malik hai aur gaon ke log inki bahot ijjat bhi karte hai, kyoki ye hamesha unki madat ke liye teyar rehte hai, gaon thakur jo thehre.


Mala – Umar 41 saal aur ek sushil aur sundar aurat hai aur Raghav ki jaan bhi. Iski umar to 41 hai par lagti ek ladki hi hai kyoki mast figure 36-28-38 ko maintain rakha hai abhi tak, par uska koi ghmand nahi.

Neha – Umar 22 saal aur apni maa ki tarah ek dam sexy figure 32-28-36. Haalhi me isne college complete kiya hai, usse placement bhi acchi aayi par fir bhi ghar par bethi hai..

Kyoki ye bahot ziddi ladki hai, ise jo chahiye wo pa kar rehti hai aur hamesha apne mann ki karti hai, par apne bhai ko jaan se jada chahti hai. Apne bhai par toh ye apni jaan chidkati hai.

Humari kahani ka hero Karan – Umar 19 saal, saare parivaar me kamaal ka handsome ladka, sabhi ki ijaat karne wala aur padhne me bhi topper. Hoshyaar aur amir hone par bhi koi ghamand nahi aur jab koi ise chhote malik bole wo ise bilkul pasand nahi. Apni maa aur behan ka dil or jaan sab kuchh..

Ab Mama ke parivar ke bare me bata deta hoon.

Vimal – Umar 43 saal hai par inme ghamand aur ego koot koot kar bhara hua hai. Ek number ke tharki hai, gaon ki shayad hi koi aurat hogi jo inke niche nhi aayi hogi.

Ritika – Umar 42 saal ek dam sexy aurat hai. Par makeup inki ek bahot badi kamjori hai.

Nisha – Umar 23 saal hai. Nisha Ritika ki beti hai, ise sab dekhte hi kehte hai ki ye puri apni maa ke upar gyi hai. Kyoki jesi iski maa Ritika hai wesi hi ye hai.

Ritu Bua – Umar 39 saal hai. Behad hi sunder par afos ye vidhwa ho chuki hai. Kyoki inke pati car accident me bhagwan k pyare ho gye the. Wo bhi sirf shadi ke thik 39 din baad. Ab Karan ko apna ye sb kuch manti hai. Jab se inke pati upar wale ko pyare hue hai.

Rupa Bua – Umar 39 saal Ritu ki judwa behen aur apni do betiyo ki maa. Sita inki badi beti hai umar 25 saal hai. Sita ki shadi ho chuki hai. Dusri beti Sonam hai. Sonam abhi chhoti hai wo abhi study kar rhi hai. Sonam Neha ke sath ek hi class me study karti hai, aur wo dono ek achi dost bhi hai.

Friends abhi ke liye aap sab ke liye itne hi logo ke bare me janna kafi hai. Aage jese jese aur character aate rhegen main aap ko wese hi batata rehunga.

Aaj puri family me ek khushi ka din tha. Kyoki dono bete aur beti ka birthday jo aaj tha. Mujhe paka yaken hai ki aap soch rhe honge ki Neha ki uamar 22 saal hai aur apna hero Karan uski uamar sirf abhi 19 saal hai. Toh ek din dono birth day kese aa gya.

Wo main ab aap ko btata hoon. Kyoki in dono ka janm 11 April ko hi hua tha. In dono ke year alag alag jarur hai par brithday date same hi hai. Isliye aaj pure palace ko dhulhan ki tarah sajaya gya tha. Puri family me aaj gajab ka utsaah tha. Jo dekhte hi ban rha tha, Sabhi family member aaye hue the aur wo sab dono badiyan aur ashriwad bhi de rhe the.

Nice story Bhai

 

[Smith_15]

Nice ending
Awesome
When are you starting next story

 

[Mking]

Nice story,mere ko bhi age description thora galat lag raha hei.

 

[Prakash10]

Nice story.

 

[PS10]

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[Suku31]

Maine aaj hi kahani padna shuru kiya hai.

Bhai ye Kahani kounse zamane ki hai, aaj se 50 saal pahele bhi ladki ki shadi 18 saal se pahle nahi ki ja sakti thee aur Witer ne yahan jo likha uske anusar
Mala ne 16 saal ki umar mein Neha ko paida kar diya.
Ritika ne 12 saal ki umar mein Nisha ko paida kar diya.
Roopa Bua ne bhi 14 saal ki umar mein seeta ko paida kar diya

Bhai Zamane ko dekhte huye Characters ki age theek karo taki story real lage...

Kahani kalpanik hone ke baad bhi logically sahi hona chahiye...
Baki writers aur readers bhi in baaton ka dhyan rakhen...

Comment ke liye maafee chahunga.

I agree with you , logically not acceptable

 

[King78]

Kuch hi ghante me Neha thik ho jati hai. Neha ke bagal me Sonam bua aur Trisha ki mummy bethi hui thi.

Neha didi – Kahan hai Karan mujhe usse milna hai.

Sabhi Neha ki aur dekh rhe the.


Neha didi – Kya hua kahan hai Karan, aap log aise kyo dekh rhe hai. Sonam tu bta kahan hai mera Karan khan hai wo.
Bua – Tu aram kar wo thik hai.
Neha didi – Nhi mujhe abhi milna hai usse.
Ye kehte hi wo uthne lagti hai sahi usko mana karte hai. Nhi mujhe abhi ke abhi milna hai. Jahan mummy papa aur Sital didi ice ki taraf dekh rhe the. Neha ki ahat sun kar mummy Neha ke pass ja kar use apne gale se laga leti hai.
Mummy – Tu kyo uthi tu toh thik hai naa.
Neha didi – Main thik hoon, pehle aap ye bato ki mera Karan khan hai.
Mummy uski baat ka koi jawab nhi deti hai.
Neha didi – Mummy aap sab ki khamoshi meri jaan nikal rhi hai please koi kuch bato mujhe.
Mummy se Neha lipat jati hai aur mummy se rote hue bolti hai.
Mummy – Mera janu thik nhi hai. Wo kab se andar hai aur koi bhi bahar nhi aa rha hai.
Neha ye sun rone lagti hai aur dono whin beth jate hai. Aise hi ek ghanta aur nikal jata hai. Sabhi ab ghabrane lagte hai. Sabhi nurse aur doctor bhag doud kar rhe the par koi bhi kuch nhi bol rha tha. Kuch der me icu ka gate khulta hai.
Sabhi ek sath bole – Karan ab kaisa hai ?
Doctor – Sorry sir, ab wo shayad hi bach payega. Bahot khoon nikal chuka hai aur pet me gehra ghaav hua hai.
Mummy – Toh hum sab apna khoon de dete hai.
Doctor – Madam jitni koshish karni thi maine kar li hai. Ab bhagwan ki marji hai.
Neha ye sun kar gir padti hai aur rone lagti hai. Sabhi use sambhal rhe the. Dhire dhire time nikal rha tha. Karan ki dhadkan bhi ab kamjor pad rhi thi. Neha man me main tumse pyar karne lagi hoon Karan please wapis aa jao apni Neha ke pass. Mere pyar ki kasam hai please aajao.
Agar tujhe kuch hua toh main khud ko kabhi bhi maaf nhi karungi. Tum kha karte the na ki agar mujhe jisi ladki mili toh sidha shadi kroge. Itna pehle chord kar jaoge toh hum dono ki shadi kese hogi. Tumhari Neha tumhare begar ek pal bhi tumhare begar nhi reh skati. Please wapis aa jao, tabhi docto aata hai.
Papa – Kya hua doctor.
Doctor – Sir main samjh nhi paa rha aisa case me humesha patient ki death hoti hai. Par pata nhi Karan me kya hai. Jo Karan ko dhire dhire wapis le kar aa rhi hai. Agar aisa kuch der aur chala toh Karan jaldi hi hosh me aa jayega.
Ye sunte hi sab ke sab khush ho jate hai. Neha ki aur dekhte hai jo Karan ko dekhne me apni hi dhun me khoyi hui thi. Aise hi time aur nikal jata hai. Ab raat se subah aur subah se dophar ho jati hai. Tabhi Karan ko hosh aata hai aur Neha didi keh kar chilata hai.
Nurse use shant karti hai aur bahar aa kar bolti hai.
Nurse – Aap me se Neha kon hai, please andar aayie aapko Karan bula rha hai.
Sabhi khush ho kar bole – Kya Karan ko hosh aa gya.
Neha bhag kar andar jati hai aur andar jate hi Karan ko apni bahon leti hai.
Karan – Kya hua didi aap kyo ro rhi ho, aao thik toh ho naa.
Neha didi – Nhi main thik nhi hoon. Kyoki tum thik nhi hi, tumne mujhse vada kiya tha ki tum mujhe bina btaye khin par nhi jaoge. Fir mujhe chord kar tum itni door kese ja skate hi. Kya kaha tha tumne mujhe ki main teri jindgi hoon. Main teri hi aatma hoon.
Karan aur Neha do jism ek jaan hai. Neha apne Karan ko kass kar apni bahon me bhar leti hai. Fir sab ek ek karke Karan se milte hai.
Neha whin rhe kar sabko jaldi jaldi aage nikalne ko bolti hai. Kyoki ab Neha ko akele Karan ke sath time spend karna tha. Fit Neha Karan ke pass beth jati hai par tabhi doctor aa jata hai.
Doctor – Aap bhi bahar jayie please.
Neha didi – Nhi main Karan ke sath hi rukungi aap tension mat lo koi preshani nhi hogi.
Doctor – Madam hum isse nind ka injection denge toh aap isse kese baat karegen.
Neha didi – Aap ko jo karna hai kariye, main bs yahan baithungi.
Doctor samjh jata hai ki ye pyar ka mamla hai isliye wo kuch nhi bolta. Fir wo Karan ko injection de kar whan se Nikal jata hai. Idhar Karan ko ab nind aane lagti hai. Fir wo dhire dhire nind ke aagosh me chala jata hai.
Neha ne Karan ke hatho ko kass kar pakada hua tha, fir wo Karan ke chehre ko dekhti hai aur apna sir Karan ke bed par rkh kar wo bhi so jati hai.
Kafi time nikal chuka tha par Neha abhi tak vapis nhi ayi thi toh sabhi uth kar dekhte hai. Unhone dekha ki kese Neha Karan ke hatho ko pakad kar so rhi hai.
Mummu – Ye ladki bhi na abhi tak bachi hi hai. Jese bachpan me soti thi dekho aaj bhi wese hi so rhi hai.
Papa – Haan tum thik keh rhi ho, bachpan me toh ek pal ke liye bhi Karan ko ankho se door nhi karti thi. Yaad hai wo din jab Karan ko humne uske mama ke ghar bhej diya tha.
Ritu bua – Haan yaad hai kese isne kahana pina chord diya tha, aur jidd karne lagi thi ki mujhe Karan ke pass jana hai. Akhir me hum iski jidd ke aage haar gye the aur ise bhi mama ke ghar le kar gye the.
Rupa bua – Wo din yaad hai maine jab Karan par hath uthaya tha uski sharaton ko le kar.
Ritu bua – Are baap se baap us din ko kon bhul skata hai. Pure ghar me bhukam aa gya tha.
15 saal pehle..
Karan khelte hue Rupa bua ke room me chala jata hai jhan bua make up kar rhi thi. Kuch saman lene ke liye uthi thi Karan ne piche se aa kar unki chair ko side kar diya. Jab bua wapis chair par bethne lagi toh wo sidha jameen par giri. Karan side me khada hasne lagta hai. Bua Karan ki is harket se gusse se lal ho jati hai.

Bua Karan ko marne ke liye khadi ho kar usko pakadne ke liye bhag rhi hoti hai. Par Karan bhi bhag nikalta hai par Karan apne chhote chhote kadmo se kab tak bachta, akhir wo aagan me pakada jata hai. Usi time Neha sidhiyo se niche aa rhi hoti hai.
Rupa bua – Aaj kal teri sharaat bahot badh gyi hai. Ruk aaj tujhe main batati hoon. Fir bua ek thapad pyaar se Karan ko marti hai.
Karna ko marta dekh ab Neha gusse me aa jati hai.
Neha – Bua aapne ye acha nhi kiya, aaj ke baad aap mere Karan se baat nhi kar sakti. Mere Karan ke pass bhi nhi aane dungi main aapko.
Rupa bua – Aise bol rhi hai jese main koi gair hoon.
Neha – Haan ho aap gair kyoki aap ne Karan ko mara aur jo Karan ko marege wo mera dushman hai.
Idhar sab log in dono ki baaten sun rhe the, Rupa bua aur maje lete hue boli.
Rupa bua – Agar itni hi fikar hai tujhe toh badi ho kar shadi kar lena.
Neha – Haan main toh sirf Karan se hi shadi karungi.
Rupa bua – Acha toh tu apne bhai ko hi apna pati banayegi.
Neha – Haan.
Rupa bua – Aise hi hota hai gudiya.
Neha – Nhi aap jhuth bol rhi ho, kyoki aap meri dushman ho main mummy se puchti hoon.
Neha – Mummy kya main Karan se shadi kar skati hoon.
Mummy – Nhi beti tum nhi kar skati kyoki tum bhai behen ho aur tum rkhi bhi bhandti ho.
Neha – Thik hai ab se main Karan ko rakhi nhi bhandhugi aur fir Karan se shadi karungi.
Sab ko Neha ki jidd ke bare me pata tha. Isliye mummy ne haan keh kar baat ko whin par khatam kar diya. Par Neha ne sach me us din se Karan ko rkhi nhi bandhi aur na hi Sonam ne rkhi bandhi. Ab Sital didi hi Karan ko rakhi bhandti hai.
Present Day..
Rupa bua – Kitni jidi thi ye bachpan me.
Ritu bua – Haan par bahot hi pyari thi.
Papa – Wese yaad hai jab Sonam bhi rkhi nhi bandhi thi toh Neha puchti hai ki kya tum bhi mere Karan se shadi karogi. Toh Sonam ne bhi haan keh diya tha. Kyoki Sonam Neha ke sabse karib thi toh wo khushi se maan gyi thi. Fir Neha ne chila kar sab ko bataya tha ki main aur Sonam Karan se shadi kargen.
Idhar Sonam un sab ki baten sun kar khush ho jati hai. Udhar college me Aadil aur Kiran ne sab ko Karan ke sath hue hadase ke bare me bata diya tha. Nisha ko jab ye baat pata chali toh wo Simran ko bahot hi gusse se dekhne lag gyi.
Par Simran Nisha ke gusse ko samjh nhi payi. Nisha apne mann me soch rhi thi ki jarur Karan ki halat ke piche in dono ka hi hath hai. Fir wo college ke baad sidha hospital me chali jati hai. Karan ke paap Nisha ko jhat se pechan jate hai.
Papa – Neha beti tum yahan.
Nisha – Uncle wo Karan se milne aayi thi.
Papa – Thik hai jao beta wo abhi abhi wo hosh me aaya hai.
Fir Nisha room ke andar jati hai jahan par Karan bed par leata hua tha. Nisha ko dekhte hi Karan hi bola.
Karan – Are Nisha aayo betho.
Nisha – Kese ho Karan ab ?
Karan – Main thik hoon, wese tum akeli kyo aayi ho tumhara boyfriend aur Aarif khan par hai.
Nisha – Use mera boyfriend mat kehiye please wo ek number ka ghatiya aur gira hua insaan hai.
Karan – Are ladai ho gyi hai kya ? Koi baat nhi main baat karta hoon usse tum fikar mat karo.
Nisha – Nhi nhi aapne us ghatiya insan se koi baat nhi karni. Wese bhi main usse baat karti kyoki uska pura sach mere samne aa gya hai.
Karan – Aisa kya kiya usne ?
Nisha – Kya kiya sabhi ko hawas ki najaro se dekhta hai wo.
Karan – Khain usne tumhare sath kuch.
Nisha – Nhi abhi tak usne kuch nhi kiya par aage shayad karle.
Karan – Matalb kya hai tumhara ?
Nisha – Aapko main sab kuch bata dungi par pehle aap thik ho jaiye.
Idher Neha gusse me Nisha ko dekh rhi thi, kyoki wo dusri taraf thi use kuch sunayi nhi de rha tha. Jab wo andar aati hai toh usse sirf itna hi sunta hai.
Nisha – Acha aap apna khayal rkhiye please. Ab main chalti hoon bye get well soon.
Karan – Bye thanks.
Nisha fir whan se nikal jati hai. Neha Nisha ko jate hue dekhti hai aur fir wo Karan ke pass kar bolti hai.
Neha didi guse me – Kon thi ye ?
Karan – Bs friend thi jo mujhse milne ke liye aayi thi.
Neha didi – Jhuth mat bolo koi friend aap keh nhi bolti.
Karan – Ye aise hi bolti hai sab ko respect deti hai.
Neha didi – Haan haan sirf yehi ek respect karti hai kya main nhi karti.
Karan – Aap aur respect me 36 ankara hai.
Fir Karan hasne lagta hai, Neha ye baat sun kar uske dil par bahot dhuk aata hai. Uski ankho me ansu nikl aate hai. Karan jese hi dekhta aur uska hasna band ho jata hai.
Karan – Didi aap royo mat karo. Main toh aise hi majak kar rha tha. Aap toh sab ko respect deti ho. Aap bahot hi achi ho please ab rona band karo please.
Neha didi rote hue boli – Nhi ji main sach buri hoon.
Karan Neha didi ko gale se laga leata hai.
Karan – Nhi didi aap sabe se achi ho, aap rona band kar please. Aap ke chehere par smile thik lagti hai asnu nhi.
Neha didi fir rona band kar deti hai aur alg ho jati hai.
To be continued.. agar aap ye kahani padhte rehna chahte hai, to please apna feedback jarur dijiye.

Super story bro

 

[Siraj Patel]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words tak ho sakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. . Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writers ko Awards k alawa Cash prizes bhi milenge jinki jaankaari rules thread mein dedi gayi hai, Total 7000 Rupees k prizes iss baar USC k liye diye jaa rahe hain, sahi Suna aapne total 7000 Rupees k cash prizes aap jeet shaktey hain issliye derr matt kijiye or apni kahani likhna suru kijiye.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 28th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar shakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Rules Check karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Rules & Queries Thread

Contest ke regarding Chit Chat karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Chit Chat Thread

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Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	3000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	1500 Rupees + Award + 3000 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP	750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader	750 Rupees Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff