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anandsngh12

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Bahut hi khubsurat update karan bhai.
Ritika aur sara bhi vahi pahuch gayi hain
Sara ne ab tak karan ko dekha nahi hai
kal jab ritika college jayegi to kya hoga..karan use dekh kar kaisa react karega...?
Aur jab sara ko ye malum chalega ki ritika jise chahti hai vo karan hai tab...?
Ye kamini, raichand aur jija shayad new character hain aur kafi aiyyash bhi..
Waiting next update.
 
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Update no. 35

Recap-

Kamini- or jor se chodo aapni rakhail behan ko bhaiya, Maj aane wali hu bhaiya

Riachand-mai bhi aa rha hu

Ye bol ke raichand aapni behan Kamini ke andar hi chhod jata hai or Kamini bhi isi ke sath chhod jati hai

Ab aage-

Aaj ritika bahot jaldi tyaar ho gyi thi, Pehle to vo soch rhi thi ke subha hi park mai chali jaye Jha vo or karan subha subha jaya krte the.
Par baad mai us ne college mai hi milna shi smjha. Par aaj vo subha jaldi hi tyaar ho gyi thi. Vo bas ye chathi thi ke ye samhe jaldi hi guzar jaye. Par shayad aaj ye waqt bhi uska dushman ban gya the.
Ek ek lamha us ke liye ek ek ghante ke barabar ho gya the.

Ritika- kya kro yr ye samhe hai ki nikal hi khi rha, ab mai kya kro

Tabhi ritika ka darwaja khul jata hai, darwaja khulne ki awaz se ritika ka Dhyaan us traf jata hai.
Samne darwaje par sara khadi thi.

Sara- are didi mai to aapko jagane aayi thi, par aap to tyaar ho kar bethi ho.

Sara Dhyaan se ritika ko dekhti hai

Ritika- aise kya dekh rhi hai saru

Sara(masti main) - aaj kis par bijli girane ja rhi ho didi, bahot sundar lg rhi ho

Ritika- (sharmate hue) are aisa kuch nhi hai saru,
Tu bhi na meri khichai kar rhi hai

Sara - are kyu mazak krti ho didi, aap to aaj Qayamat lg rhi ho, aaj pta nhi kitne ladke aapko i love you khege

Ritika(mai to bs ek se i love you sunna chathi hu) chal jhuti

Sara- ab ye akshay ke dialouge mujhe par mat maro, sach btao kuch khaas hai kya jo aap aapne college Jane 1 hour pehle hi tyaar bethi ho

Ritika- are nhi saru, or chal chal tu bhi tyaar ho ja tu abhi aapne school ke liye tyaar bhi nhi hui or ha aaj tere pehla din hai school ka meri nak mat krwa dena late ho kar

In dono ki yahi baate chalti rhe gi, ham chalte hain hero ki traf


Karan aaj subha deeri se utha shayad raat ko der de soya hoga. Jab karan jaga to usne dekh ke pehle lecture l
Mai Sirf 40 min hi beche hai. Isi li karan jaldi se tyaar ho gya.
But jab uska Dhyaan vivek ki traf gya to usne aapne mathe pe hath rakh liya kyuki vo mahashe to abhi bhi ghode bech kar soye hue the

Mai-(pichwade pe laat marte hue) are gadhe uth ja

Vivek(achanak hamla hone shocked hogya) kon hai kiski gand mai kide kat rhe hain

Mai- kya bola

Vivek- maaf krna mai jra mai gusse mai idhar udhar nikal jata hu

Mai- Abey mere dialogue mujhe par hi maar mar rha

Vivek- jaise ko taisa

Mai- chal chal aapne baap ko mat sikha jake tyaar hoja

Vivek- yr aaj mai to college nhi jaonga

Mai- kyu

Vivek- vo bhai vidhya ke sath ghomne ja rha hu

Mai- chal thik hai, but mujhe to jana hai aaj ka lecture important hai

Ye bol kar karan college ke liye nikal jata hai

Udhar ritika

Ritika- ab chal saru hame der ho rhi hai

Sara- are aa rhi hu didi bas 1min

Fir sara ritika ke paas aa gyi or dono Aapni Aapni manzil ke liye nikal gya

Raichand side

Raichand ek kamre mai ek kursi par betha tha uske paas hi kamini or uska pati the or sath mai hi ek ladka bhi tha or ek ladki bhi

Raichand- to aap sachme jana chathe ho

Ladki--ji papa

Raichand- thik hai beti mai tera admission us college mai krwa deta hu

Ladki- thank you papa

Ye bol kar vo ladki raichand ke gale lag jati hai or fir vha se chali jati hai

Raichand(ladki ke jane ke baad) rahul(jo ladka us kamre mai tha)

Rahul- ji mama ji

Raichand- rahul mai tumhari bhi admission ussi college mai krwa rha hu,
Tumhe vha par sanjana ka khayal Rkhna hoga

Rahul- thik hai mama ji

Kamini- bhaiya aap usse vha kyu bhej rhe hain

Raichand- tu janti haina kamini vo meri ladli hai maine aajtak uski koi baat nhi tali to ab ye kaise tal deta

Kamini- aapke isi lad pyaar ki vja se sanjana ziddi or bigad gayi hai

Introduction time

Vikram rachand- ek businessman

Kavita- raichand ki biwi

Kamini- raichand ki behan

Sudhir kapoor- raichand ka jija

Rahul kapoor- kamini ka beta

Karan college pahunch gya tha vo sidha Aapni class mai chla gya

Idhar Ritika bhi karan ke baad college pahunch gyi thi. Par vo class mai nhi gyi. Usne socha ke khali lecture ke time vo karan ko surprise degi, Vaise vo thodi preshan bhi thi ke karan usko dekh ke kaisa react krega. Isi ke liye vo karan ka wait krne ke liye canteen mai ruk gyi

Udhar jad karan ki class khatam hui to usse ek msg aaya jo ki payal ka tha

Msg- hello Karan, mujhe pta hai tum class mai hoge, but yaar kya tum mujhe'**** mall se pick krne aa skte ho please

Karan ne bhi payal ko msg kr diya ke vo aa rha hai

Iske Baad karan ke paas koi bike to thi nhi, vivek ke paas thi par vo use le gya tha to karan sidha arjun ke paas gya or usse uski bike ki chabi le kr mall ki traf nikal gya.

Kuch hi der mai karan mall pahunch gya.

Vha par vo sidhe payal ki btai hui jgah par chala gya, payal use Vohi par mil gyi

Mai- or payal kaisi ho

Payal- mai to achi hu

Tabhi par piche kisi ne karan ko awaz di

To tu yha pahunch hi gya

Mai- Abey tu yha kya kr rha hai vivek

Ji ha vo awaz dene wala vivek hi tha

Vivek- are hamne hi to tumhe yha bulaya hai

Mai- kya mtlb

Payal- mai samjati hu Karan ji, aapko yha bulane ka plan ham sab ka tha, Vivek or vidhya yha movie dekhne aaye the or Mai yha kuch shopping krne aayi thi mujhe ye dono mil gye fir hamne aapko yha bulane ke liye ye plan bnaya

Mai- sale mujhe sidha phone kar deta Mai aa jata

Vivek- are fir surprise dene ka maza hi kharab ho jata

Mai- to ab ham konsi movie dekhne wali hai

Vivek- tambu Mai dhom dham

Vidhya- chup rho tum, Karan ham Deepika ki nayi movie dekhne wale hain chapaak

Payal- ha Karan ji isme kuch gar smaji tath duara ek ladki ki zindagi ko kaise nark bna diya jata hai uske bareme hai

Mai- fir to hame ye movie jaroor dekhni chaiye, hame kya sabko dekhni chaiye

Fir ham sab movie dekhne chale jate hain

Udhar Ritika

Jab Mai kafi der canteen Mai nhi Aaya to Ritika mukhe dhundhne ke liye classroom ki traf Chali gyi par Mai use vha nhi mila.
Iske Baad ritika ne mujhe pure college Mai fhundha par Mai usse khi nhi mila

Ritika-(preshan ho kar) akhir kha hai karan, khi aaj college hi na aaya ho

Jab usse Mai khi nhi mila to Ritika kafi udass ho gyi or sidhe aapne ghar chali gyi, usse to ye bhi yaad nhi rha ke usse hi Sara Ko uske school ke leke aana tha

Idhar ham sab movie dekhne ke Baad bahar aa rhe the

Vivek- or bhai ab ham chalte hai, Karan Mai vidhya co chhod kar hostel Mai milta hu tu bhi Payal Ko uske ghar chhod aa

Isi ke sath vidhya or Vivek chale gye

Mai- chalo payal Mai tumhe tumhare ghar chhod deta hu

Payal- nhi nhi Karan ji Mai Chali jaongi

Mai-are nhi Mai tumhe chhod du ga

Payal- Karan ji mera ghar aapne hostel ki ulti Disha Mai hai Mai texi se chali jaogi

Mai- acha thik hai par Mai aapko texi Mai bitha kar aata hu

Payal- acha thik hai

Fir karan Payal Ko texi Mai bitha kar aapne hostel ki traf Nikal jata hai

Idhar Sara

ritika kafi samhe intzaar krne ke Baad bhi ritika Sara Ko Lene nhi aayi

To Sara kisi texi wale Ko dhondne lgi par aas paas koi texi nhi thi is liye Sara thoda aage badhne lggi
Chalte chalte Sara aapne school se kafi aage aa gyi thi

Tabhi kuch ladko ki najar Sara pe padhi

Ladka1- kya maal hai yr

Ladka2 hai yr chal Jake thode maze lete hain

Ladka3- chal jaldi fir

Itne Mai hi ye tino Sara ki traf chal padte hain

Ladka3- are jaan kha ja rhi ho hame bhi sath le chalo

Sara ladke ki is baat Ko ignore krke aage badti Rehti hai

Ladka1-are chamkchalo hame bhi le chalo sath mai, chalo maze krege

Ladko2- are ye chhodo sidhe sidhe pucho ke kithe paise le gi hame Khush krne ke

Sara ladke2 ki baat sun leti hai.ab us se rha nhi jata or vo aake sidhe use thappad maar deti hai

Sara- ghar Mai maa behan nhi hai kya

Ladka3- maa behan to hai par tere jaisi nhi hai


Ye bol kar tino Sara preshan krne lgte hai
Aas paas koi tha bhi nhi.

Par tabhi ladka3 ke muah pe ek thappad padta hai or ek awaz aati hai

Ladki se dur rho

Ladka2 uski traf bdne lgta hai hai, or jaise hi ladka2 mukka marne ke liye hath uthata hai usse pehle hi ho shaks ladke2 ki Gaal par mukka Marta hai fir isi trah vo in tino Ko maar maar kar cha se bhaga deta hai

Iske Baad vo ladka Sara ke paas jata hai

Sara- thank you

Shaks- koi baat nhi, AAP yha par Akeli, sath mai koi nhi hai kya

Sara- ji nhi vo Mai ghar ja rhi thi, vaise AAP kon hain

Shaks- mera Naam Karan hai

Sara- thanks Karan ji meri help ke liye

Karan- koi baat nhi, miss ?

Sara- oh sorry, Mai Sara hu

Karan- acha Sara ji chaliye Mai aapko aapke ghar chhod deta hu

Sara- AAP kyu takleef kr the hain mujhe texi mil jaye gi

Karan- pehle mil gyi thi, nhi na to chaliye mere sath
 

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Update no. 35

Recap-

Kamini- or jor se chodo aapni rakhail behan ko bhaiya, Maj aane wali hu bhaiya

Riachand-mai bhi aa rha hu

Ye bol ke raichand aapni behan Kamini ke andar hi chhod jata hai or Kamini bhi isi ke sath chhod jati hai

Ab aage-

Aaj ritika bahot jaldi tyaar ho gyi thi, Pehle to vo soch rhi thi ke subha hi park mai chali jaye Jha vo or karan subha subha jaya krte the.
Par baad mai us ne college mai hi milna shi smjha. Par aaj vo subha jaldi hi tyaar ho gyi thi. Vo bas ye chathi thi ke ye samhe jaldi hi guzar jaye. Par shayad aaj ye waqt bhi uska dushman ban gya the.
Ek ek lamha us ke liye ek ek ghante ke barabar ho gya the.

Ritika- kya kro yr ye samhe hai ki nikal hi khi rha, ab mai kya kro

Tabhi ritika ka darwaja khul jata hai, darwaja khulne ki awaz se ritika ka Dhyaan us traf jata hai.
Samne darwaje par sara khadi thi.

Sara- are didi mai to aapko jagane aayi thi, par aap to tyaar ho kar bethi ho.

Sara Dhyaan se ritika ko dekhti hai

Ritika- aise kya dekh rhi hai saru

Sara(masti main) - aaj kis par bijli girane ja rhi ho didi, bahot sundar lg rhi ho

Ritika- (sharmate hue) are aisa kuch nhi hai saru,
Tu bhi na meri khichai kar rhi hai

Sara - are kyu mazak krti ho didi, aap to aaj Qayamat lg rhi ho, aaj pta nhi kitne ladke aapko i love you khege

Ritika(mai to bs ek se i love you sunna chathi hu) chal jhuti

Sara- ab ye akshay ke dialouge mujhe par mat maro, sach btao kuch khaas hai kya jo aap aapne college Jane 1 hour pehle hi tyaar bethi ho

Ritika- are nhi saru, or chal chal tu bhi tyaar ho ja tu abhi aapne school ke liye tyaar bhi nhi hui or ha aaj tere pehla din hai school ka meri nak mat krwa dena late ho kar

In dono ki yahi baate chalti rhe gi, ham chalte hain hero ki traf


Karan aaj subha deeri se utha shayad raat ko der de soya hoga. Jab karan jaga to usne dekh ke pehle lecture l
Mai Sirf 40 min hi beche hai. Isi li karan jaldi se tyaar ho gya.
But jab uska Dhyaan vivek ki traf gya to usne aapne mathe pe hath rakh liya kyuki vo mahashe to abhi bhi ghode bech kar soye hue the

Mai-(pichwade pe laat marte hue) are gadhe uth ja

Vivek(achanak hamla hone shocked hogya) kon hai kiski gand mai kide kat rhe hain

Mai- kya bola

Vivek- maaf krna mai jra mai gusse mai idhar udhar nikal jata hu

Mai- Abey mere dialogue mujhe par hi maar mar rha

Vivek- jaise ko taisa

Mai- chal chal aapne baap ko mat sikha jake tyaar hoja

Vivek- yr aaj mai to college nhi jaonga

Mai- kyu

Vivek- vo bhai vidhya ke sath ghomne ja rha hu

Mai- chal thik hai, but mujhe to jana hai aaj ka lecture important hai

Ye bol kar karan college ke liye nikal jata hai

Udhar ritika

Ritika- ab chal saru hame der ho rhi hai

Sara- are aa rhi hu didi bas 1min

Fir sara ritika ke paas aa gyi or dono Aapni Aapni manzil ke liye nikal gya

Raichand side

Raichand ek kamre mai ek kursi par betha tha uske paas hi kamini or uska pati the or sath mai hi ek ladka bhi tha or ek ladki bhi

Raichand- to aap sachme jana chathe ho

Ladki--ji papa

Raichand- thik hai beti mai tera admission us college mai krwa deta hu

Ladki- thank you papa

Ye bol kar vo ladki raichand ke gale lag jati hai or fir vha se chali jati hai

Raichand(ladki ke jane ke baad) rahul(jo ladka us kamre mai tha)

Rahul- ji mama ji

Raichand- rahul mai tumhari bhi admission ussi college mai krwa rha hu,
Tumhe vha par sanjana ka khayal Rkhna hoga

Rahul- thik hai mama ji

Kamini- bhaiya aap usse vha kyu bhej rhe hain

Raichand- tu janti haina kamini vo meri ladli hai maine aajtak uski koi baat nhi tali to ab ye kaise tal deta

Kamini- aapke isi lad pyaar ki vja se sanjana ziddi or bigad gayi hai

Introduction time

Vikram rachand- ek businessman

Kavita- raichand ki biwi

Kamini- raichand ki behan

Sudhir kapoor- raichand ka jija

Rahul kapoor- kamini ka beta

Karan college pahunch gya tha vo sidha Aapni class mai chla gya

Idhar Ritika bhi karan ke baad college pahunch gyi thi. Par vo class mai nhi gyi. Usne socha ke khali lecture ke time vo karan ko surprise degi, Vaise vo thodi preshan bhi thi ke karan usko dekh ke kaisa react krega. Isi ke liye vo karan ka wait krne ke liye canteen mai ruk gyi

Udhar jad karan ki class khatam hui to usse ek msg aaya jo ki payal ka tha

Msg- hello Karan, mujhe pta hai tum class mai hoge, but yaar kya tum mujhe'**** mall se pick krne aa skte ho please

Karan ne bhi payal ko msg kr diya ke vo aa rha hai

Iske Baad karan ke paas koi bike to thi nhi, vivek ke paas thi par vo use le gya tha to karan sidha arjun ke paas gya or usse uski bike ki chabi le kr mall ki traf nikal gya.

Kuch hi der mai karan mall pahunch gya.

Vha par vo sidhe payal ki btai hui jgah par chala gya, payal use Vohi par mil gyi

Mai- or payal kaisi ho

Payal- mai to achi hu

Tabhi par piche kisi ne karan ko awaz di

To tu yha pahunch hi gya

Mai- Abey tu yha kya kr rha hai vivek

Ji ha vo awaz dene wala vivek hi tha

Vivek- are hamne hi to tumhe yha bulaya hai

Mai- kya mtlb

Payal- mai samjati hu Karan ji, aapko yha bulane ka plan ham sab ka tha, Vivek or vidhya yha movie dekhne aaye the or Mai yha kuch shopping krne aayi thi mujhe ye dono mil gye fir hamne aapko yha bulane ke liye ye plan bnaya

Mai- sale mujhe sidha phone kar deta Mai aa jata

Vivek- are fir surprise dene ka maza hi kharab ho jata

Mai- to ab ham konsi movie dekhne wali hai

Vivek- tambu Mai dhom dham

Vidhya- chup rho tum, Karan ham Deepika ki nayi movie dekhne wale hain chapaak

Payal- ha Karan ji isme kuch gar smaji tath duara ek ladki ki zindagi ko kaise nark bna diya jata hai uske bareme hai

Mai- fir to hame ye movie jaroor dekhni chaiye, hame kya sabko dekhni chaiye

Fir ham sab movie dekhne chale jate hain

Udhar Ritika

Jab Mai kafi der canteen Mai nhi Aaya to Ritika mukhe dhundhne ke liye classroom ki traf Chali gyi par Mai use vha nhi mila.
Iske Baad ritika ne mujhe pure college Mai fhundha par Mai usse khi nhi mila

Ritika-(preshan ho kar) akhir kha hai karan, khi aaj college hi na aaya ho

Jab usse Mai khi nhi mila to Ritika kafi udass ho gyi or sidhe aapne ghar chali gyi, usse to ye bhi yaad nhi rha ke usse hi Sara Ko uske school ke leke aana tha

Idhar ham sab movie dekhne ke Baad bahar aa rhe the

Vivek- or bhai ab ham chalte hai, Karan Mai vidhya co chhod kar hostel Mai milta hu tu bhi Payal Ko uske ghar chhod aa

Isi ke sath vidhya or Vivek chale gye

Mai- chalo payal Mai tumhe tumhare ghar chhod deta hu

Payal- nhi nhi Karan ji Mai Chali jaongi

Mai-are nhi Mai tumhe chhod du ga

Payal- Karan ji mera ghar aapne hostel ki ulti Disha Mai hai Mai texi se chali jaogi

Mai- acha thik hai par Mai aapko texi Mai bitha kar aata hu

Payal- acha thik hai

Fir karan Payal Ko texi Mai bitha kar aapne hostel ki traf Nikal jata hai

Idhar Sara

ritika kafi samhe intzaar krne ke Baad bhi ritika Sara Ko Lene nhi aayi

To Sara kisi texi wale Ko dhondne lgi par aas paas koi texi nhi thi is liye Sara thoda aage badhne lggi
Chalte chalte Sara aapne school se kafi aage aa gyi thi

Tabhi kuch ladko ki najar Sara pe padhi

Ladka1- kya maal hai yr

Ladka2 hai yr chal Jake thode maze lete hain

Ladka3- chal jaldi fir

Itne Mai hi ye tino Sara ki traf chal padte hain

Ladka3- are jaan kha ja rhi ho hame bhi sath le chalo

Sara ladke ki is baat Ko ignore krke aage badti Rehti hai

Ladka1-are chamkchalo hame bhi le chalo sath mai, chalo maze krege

Ladko2- are ye chhodo sidhe sidhe pucho ke kithe paise le gi hame Khush krne ke

Sara ladke2 ki baat sun leti hai.ab us se rha nhi jata or vo aake sidhe use thappad maar deti hai

Sara- ghar Mai maa behan nhi hai kya

Ladka3- maa behan to hai par tere jaisi nhi hai


Ye bol kar tino Sara preshan krne lgte hai
Aas paas koi tha bhi nhi.

Par tabhi ladka3 ke muah pe ek thappad padta hai or ek awaz aati hai

Ladki se dur rho

Ladka2 uski traf bdne lgta hai hai, or jaise hi ladka2 mukka marne ke liye hath uthata hai usse pehle hi ho shaks ladke2 ki Gaal par mukka Marta hai fir isi trah vo in tino Ko maar maar kar cha se bhaga deta hai

Iske Baad vo ladka Sara ke paas jata hai

Sara- thank you

Shaks- koi baat nhi, AAP yha par Akeli, sath mai koi nhi hai kya

Sara- ji nhi vo Mai ghar ja rhi thi, vaise AAP kon hain

Shaks- mera Naam Karan hai

Sara- thanks Karan ji meri help ke liye

Karan- koi baat nhi, miss ?

Sara- oh sorry, Mai Sara hu

Karan- acha Sara ji chaliye Mai aapko aapke ghar chhod deta hu

Sara- AAP kyu takleef kr the hain mujhe texi mil jaye gi

Karan- pehle mil gyi thi, nhi na to chaliye mere sath
To ab karan ritika ke ghar ja raha,
ab to ritika ko surprise milega
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