Fantasy Karan

[The_Punisher]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section.

Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits.

And the readers who does not want to write they can also participate for the "Best Readers Award" .. You just have to give your reviews on the Posted stories in USC

"Winning Writer's will be awarded with Cash prizes and another awards "and along with that they get a chance to sticky their thread in their section so their thread remains on the top. That is why This is a fantastic chance for you all to make a great image on the mind of all reader and stretch your reach to the mark. This is a golden chance for all of you to portrait your thoughts into words to show us here in USC. So, bring it on and show us all your ideas, show it to the world.

Entry thread will be opened on 7th February, meaning you can start submission of your stories from 7th of feb and that will be opened till 25th of feb. During this you can post your story, so it is better for you to start writing your story in the given time.

And one more thing! Story is to be posted in one post only, cause this is a short story contest that means we can only hope for short stories. So you are not permitted to post your story in many post/parts. If you have any query regarding this, you can contact any staff member.


To chat or ask any doubt on a story, Use this thread — Chit Chat Thread

To Give review on USC's stories, Use this thread — Review Thread

To Chit Chat regarding the contest, Use this thread— Rules & Queries Thread

To post your story, use this thread — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader	Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff

 

[Bilal jan]

Ye sirf aap hi kr skte ho

Nhi ye mujhse nhi hoga, Mai ye nhi kr skta.

Aapke siwa us ko koi bhi khatam nhi kr skta.ab aap hi is duniya ki aakhiri umeed ho Mahaguru Dhruv

Mahaguru- nhi ye Mai nhi kr skta jo bhi ho Mai us se Yudh nhi kr skta vo bhatak gya hai use ham smjha skte hai Gupta ji

Gupta ji- nhi aap bhi jante ho ke ab vo us raste par bahot aage ja Chuka hai ab use vapas Lana namumkin hai.

Mahaguru Dhruv kuch nhi bole

Gupta ji- ab tak us ki sena sirf ham logo pr hi hamla kr rhi thi bhut ab un logo ne aam logo pr bhi chup ke hamla krna shuru kr diya hai.

Mahaguru- to ab vo din aa hi gya hai jab us ka kuch krna hi pdega pr Mai us ko maar nhi skta.

Gupta ji- ham bas yhi chate the ke aap us ke khilaf yudh Mai hamara sath de.

Is ke Baad mahaguru or us(is ka Naam aage story mai pta chalega) ki sena ke vich Mai yudh hota hai

Or ab mahaguru or vo dono amne-samne the dono aapni aapni shaktio se ek duje pr vaar kr rhe the. vo to Puri takat ke sath mahaguru pr hamla kr rha tha par mahaguru us se sirf aapna bachao kr rhe the.

Vo- kya hua mahaguru lgta ham ab tum Mai vo baat nhi rhi ab to tum mere hath se hi Maro ge or vaise bhi tum ne mere khilaf yudh Mai aa kr aapna wada to todh diya hai

Mahaguru- lgta hai tum bhul rhe ho Mene unse ye wada kiya tha ke Mai tumhe nhi Maro ga pr ye wada nhi kiya tha ke Mai tum se ladai nhi kroga. Or vaise bhi ek din sab Ko marna hai tumhe bhi marna hai.

Vo- (is baat se gussa ho kr) mujhe marne wala paida nhi hua mahaguru Mai nhi marne wala

Isi gusse Mai us se ek galti ho jati hai ke us ka thyan ladai Mai se hat gya is ka fayada mahaguru ne ootha liya or us pr aapna ek magical spell ka istmal kr liya jis se us ka shrir pathar Mai badlna shuru ho gya pr us ne pura pathar Mai badlne se pehle aapne aapne shrir se ek roshini(light) bahar nikali or us ko asman Mai chod diya or vo vha se Chali gyi mahaguru ne use pakadna chaha pr vo bahot teji se vha se Chali gyi us ke Jane ke Baad vo pura pathar Mai Badal gya pr pathar Mai badlne tak vo hasta rha or khene lga ke mera ansh mujhe vapas laye ga tab Mai or mera ansh mil ke tumhe or tumhari duniya Ko khatam krege.

Yudh ke Baad us ke shrir Ko ek purn Surakskit jga pr rkha jata hai kyuki sab Ko pta tha ke vo mara nhi hai bus us ka shrir kadh hua hai.

Us ke kuch din Baad vo shrir achanak vha se gayab ho gya kisi Ko kuch pta nhi chala ke vo kha gya.

Nice update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 2


ek shaher ke ek bahot bade ghar Mai bahot Khushiyan manai ja rhi thi us ghar ke sab log aaj bahot khush the kyuki unhe Subha hi ek phone aaya tha jis se unhe Pta chala ke is ghar ki ek website se ek file download hui hai oh sorry sorry mtlb is ghar ko ek Chirag Mila hai ji ha us ghar ki badi bahu Ko ek ladka paida hua tha.

Vo Abhi dusre shahar ke hospital Mai the or aaj sham tak hi ghar bapas aa rhe the
Is liye ghar Ko sajaya ja rha tha.doctor ne unhe rokka tha ke Abhi in Ko 2 din or hospital Mai rkha jaye par vo nhi Mane is liye doctor ne unki dekh bhal ke liye do nurses bhi sath bheji thi. Sab log bahot khush the par in sab Mai se sab se jyada ek choti bachi khush thi kyuki usko pta chala tha ke us ke papa us ke khelne ke liye ek gudda la rhe hai. Vo Baar Baar sab se time puch rhi thi kyuki uske papa ne kha tha ke vo sham ke 6 baje tak aa jayege. Us Nanhi bachi ka Chanchal man aapne liye aa rhe gudde Ko dekhne ke liye bahot beyakul ho rha tha. Us se intzaar nhi ho rha tha. Is liye vo Baar Baar ghar ke darvaje par ja ke aapne papa ka wait kr rhi thi. Us ki uksukta Ko dekh ke ghar ke baaki log bhi uksukh ho rhe the aapne Chirag Ko dekhne ke liye. Vo bhi Baar Baar in Ko phone krke puch rhe the ke kha tak pahuch gye.

Akhirkar vo lamha bhi aa hi gya jab un ke ghar ke bahar do car aa kr ruk gayin pehli car Mai se ek aadmi bahar aaya or sath hi Mai ek aurat bache Ko le kr bahar nikli Or dusri car Mai se ek or aadmi bahar Nikla or us ne bahar Nikal kr car ka dusra darvaja Khola or us Mai se ek aurat ko aapne hatho Mai ootha liya or ghar ki taraf chalne lga usi car Mai se 2 ladkia or nikli or unhone white color dress pehni hui thi jis se PTA chal rha tha ke ye nurse hai vo sab ghar ki traf ja rhe the Jha ek aurat hath Mai Aarti ki thali le kr khadi thi jab vo sab ghar ke darvaje pr aaye to us aurat ne in sab ki Aarti otari fir sab ghar ke aandar aa gye. Vo choti bachi bhag kr aapne papa ke paas gyi or boli

Bachi- papa papa mela gugga ka hai(papa papa mera gudda kha hai)

To us ke papa ne Jo aurat us ke hath Mai thi use paas ke ek Baad par Lita diya or ek aurat ke hath se us bache Ko liya or us bachi Ko dikane lga or bola

Papa- beta ye hai tumhara bhai

Vo ladki itni khush hui ke vo vohi pr tali bja kr nachne lgi. Tabhi ek aurat ne us se kha ke

Aurat- kajal beta tumhe to ek gudda chaiye tha na (ji ha us bachi ka Naam kajal hai)

Kajal- nhi Chachi mude to et bhai taiye ol Mai isi te tath khelogi (nhi Chachi mujhe to ek bhai chaiye or Mai isi ke sath khelogi)

Sab log kajal ki is baat paar bahot kush hue or Sara din aise hi Gujar gya

Dusre din Subha sab se pehle kajal nind se jagi. Us ka bed aapne mummy Papa ke kamre Mai hi tha. Vo bhag kr aapne aapne mummy Papa ke paas gyi Jha us ka chota bhai Abhi so rha tha. Vo pyar se us ke sar Ko sehlane lgi thi ki tabhi us ka chota bhai jag jata hai or rone lgta hai. Vo Apne bhai Ko rota dekh ke khud bhi rone lgti hai or bhag ke aapne papa ke paas jati hai or unhe kheti hai

Kajal- papa papa mela bhai lo la hai (papa papa mera bhai ro rha hai)

Us ke papa bhi jaag jate hai or aapne bete Ko rota dekh vo aapni Biwi Ko jga ke khete hai

Papa- are dekho mera beta ro rha hai lgta hai use bhuk lgi hai

Ye sun kr us Biwi aapne bache Ko dodh pilane lgti hai or vo bacha chup ho jata hai. Aapne bhai Ko chup dekh ke kajal bhi muskurane lgti hai.

Kuch time Baad sab ghar wale kajal ke papa ke kamre Mai the kajal ki maa leti hui thi or paas hi Mai vo bacha bhi so rha tha or kajal bhi aapne bhai ke paas bethi thi vo to baas usi Mai kho gyi thi use to us ke siwa kuch dikhai hi nhi de rha tha.

Chachi- bhai Sahab hame hamare Chirag ke naamkaran ke liye kal ek puja krni chaiye

Chacha- or hai bhai Sahab raat ke time hame ek party bhi krni chaiye.


Papa- tum thik bol rhe ho chote to kal Subha ham puja ki tyari krte hai. Or ha party bhi hogi uski tyari bhi tumhe hi krni hai chote or ha aaj hi sab friends or relatives Ko invention bhej do.

Us ke Baad ye Sara din party or Pooja ki tyario Mai hi Gujar jata hai.

Next day

Aaj sab Subha jaldi uth jate hai or Pooja ki tyario Mai jut jate hai.

Ab sab tyario ho chuki thi to Puja bhi shuru Hoti hai. pandit aapne mantra padhta hai. Fir puja ke ke vich mai pandit bolta hai

Pandit- yajmaan aapne is balak ka Naam kya socha hai

Chachi or maa ek sath- pandit ji ye hamare ghar ka Chirag hai is liye hame is ka Naam CHIRAG rkha hai.





Family intro

Is ghar ke mukhiya- Vihaan Aryan

Un ki wife- Anjali Aryan

Badi beti- Kajal Aryan

Beta- CHIRAG ARYAN(KARAN)

beti -Kaira Aryan

Choti beti- Sara Aryan

Bade chacha- Vivaan Aryan

Badi chachi- Aditi Aryan

Beti- Divya

Chote chacha- Ayaan Aryan

Choti chachi- Nisha Aryan

Beti- Noor Aryan


Dosto mujhe update Mai image dalni nhi aati koi bhai meri is Mai help krega

Nice update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 3

Aaj raat ghar Mai party thi is liye sab log bahot jyada exited the sab log aapne Khandan ke waris Ko Puri duniya ke samne lane ke liye bahot uksukh the. Lagbhag sab tyaria ho gyi thi ab to bas mehmano ke aane ka intzaar kiya ja rha tha.
Or kuch hi der Mai mehmaan aana bhi shuru ho gye. Party itni shandar thi ke Aisa lag rha tha ke Aryan family ne pure shaher Ko hi party Mai bula liya ho. Ghar Ko bahot ache trah sajaya gya tha


Ghar Ko kuch is tra sajaya gya tha


Or ghar ka gardan kuch is tra sajaya gya tha

To party shuru ho gyi thi sab log wait kr rhe the ke btaya jaye ke ye party kis bjah se di gyi hai. Itne Mai Vihaan Aryan stage pe aate Hain or hath Mai Mike le kr bolna shuru krte hai

Vihaan- dosto aap sab soch rhe hoge ke hamne ye party kyu rkhi hai. Baat ye hai dosto ke Aaj mere or meri family ke liye bahot khushi ka din hai. Kyuki hame hamare ghar ke waris mil gya hai. Mtlb ki Maine father ki duty sambal li hai. Thank you

Tabhi Puri mehfil Mai taliyo ki awaj gujne lgti hai Vihaan Apne bete chirag Ko hath Mai lete hai or use sab Ko dikhata hai

Magar koi is party Mai tha jise ye sab sun kr Khushi nhi hoti.



Ek haveli Mai kuch log Bethe the. Or baate kr rhe the. Chale sunte hai kya baate ho rhi hai

Aapko pta hai ke vo kha gye

Nhi ham nhi jante vo kha gye.

To fir hame un Ko dhodna hoga is se pehle ki mahaguru or un ke log unhe dhond le

Nhi ham unhe nhi dhond skte or na hi mahaguru unhe dhond skte hai. Unhe to sirf un ka ansh hi Khoj skta hai.

To kya ham yha hath par hath rakh kr Bethe rhe

Nhi ham unhe to nhi dhond skte hai. Pr ham un ke ansh Ko dhond skte hai. Or vo is samhe kisi aam insani ghar Mai janam bhi le Chuka hoga ya fir Lene wala hoga.


Dusri taraf

Ek bahot hi Budha aadmi behta kuch soch rha tha us Ko dekh ke Aisa lag rha tha jaise vo lagbhag 150 saal ka ho kyuki unki dari hi bahot badi thi or Puri white thi or Sar ke Baal bhi or Sar pr topi (cap)thi. Tabhi ek aadmi us ke paas aaya

Mahaguru aaj us Ko gayab hue lagbhag ek saal hone wala hai or Abhi tak ham us Ko dhond nhi paye.

Tabhi mahaguru ne ankhen kholi or bole.

Mahaguru- hame to pehle hi kha tha us Ko khojna aapke bas ki baat nhi hai Bikram ji. Or use na khojna hi budhimani hai kyuki us ki Khoj Mai samye bearth Jaya hoga.

Bikram ji- to ab aap hi Marg dikha skte hai mahaguru ke ab ham kya kre.

Mahaguru- aap us ki Khoj smapat ke dijiye.

Bikram ji- jaisa aap khe mahaguru.

Mahaguru- aapke kuch or prshn(questions) hai Bikram ji

Bikram ji- mahaguru us ke ansh ka kya hoga.

Mahaguru- (kuch soch kr) vo sab aap samye par chod dijiye

Ab Bikram ji mahaguru se koi sawal nhi puchte or vha se Jane ki ijajat mangte hai.

Bikram ke Jane ke Baad mahaguru fir se aapni soch Mai kho jate hai.


Or idhar Aryan family ki party bhi khatam ho jati hai. Sab mehmaan chale gye the. Or Aryan family bhi aapne ghar sone Chali gayi thi

Ek Ghar Mai ek aadmi ek kurshi par betha tha vo bahot gusse Mai lg rha tha. Or chilla chilla kr kuch aadmi se baat kr rha tha(chaliye ham hamari buri aadat shuru krte hai dusro ke Ghar ki jasosi ki)

Aadmi1- (chilla kr) tumne mujhe ye kyu nhi btaya ke Vihaan Aryan baap bnne wala hai (ji hai ye vohi aadmi hai jo party Mai aaya tha)

Aadmi2- sir ye to hame bhi nhi pta tha ke Vihaan Aryan ke ghar bacha paida hone wala tha or sir hamne aapko ye khabar bhi di thi ke Vihaan Aryan or us ki wife 1 saal se gayab the.

Aadmi1- to Maine tum logo Ko use dhonddne Ko bola tha.

Aadmi3- (ghabra kar) sir hame Puri koshish ki thi un Ko dhonddne ki

Vo itna hi bola tha ke Goli chalne ki awaj aayi

Aadmi1 ne aadmi3 Ko maar diya tha us ke Baad vo rukka nhi us ne baki sab Ko bhi maar diya.

Aadmi1- lgta hai ab ye kaam mujhe hi krna pdega, Vihaan Aryan tu bahot khush ho rha haina ke tu baap ban gya (itna bol kr vo jor jor se hasne lgta hai)

Aadmi1 ek phone krta hai

Aadmi1- tumhare liye ek kaam hai Vicky

Vicky- ji raichand sahab boliye

Raichand- kal tum mujhe......... Place pr milna

Vicky- jaisa aap khe

Us ke Baad vo call cut kr deta hai or ek shatani hasi ke sath so jata hai.

Agli Subha

Aaj Subha sab se pehle badi chachi nind se jagti hai or nahane ke Baad ja kr breakfast bnane lgti hai.(chalo in ko khana bnane dete hai chalte hai dusri traf)

Choti chachi ke room Mai
Chacha Abhi tak so rhe hain par Chachi jag gyi hai or vo aabhi aapne jogging dress Mai thi baat ye hai ke choti chachi Ko kasrat or yoga ka bahot shock tha is liye vo roj Subha ghar ke gardan Mai jogging or yoga krti thi or aaj bhi vo vahi ja rhi thi.

Or isi trah ek ghanta beet jata hai. Sab ghar ke log tyar ho kr Khane ki table par Bethe the or khane ka wait kr rhe the. Bus Anjali or kajal Ko chod kr kyuki Anjali to aapne kamre Mai aaram kr rhi thi or Chirag ussi ke paas tha or kajal us ke sath khel rhi thi.
Kabhi vo use hasane ke liye aapne face se alag alag shakle bnati kabhi use gudgudi krne lgti. Kajal ka itna pyar dekh kr kajal ki maa Ko bahot acha lg rha tha.

Idhar Raichand or Vicky.......... Par milte hai

Vicky- btaiye sir Mai aapke liye kya kar skta ho

Raichand- ........

Vicky- ji sir aapka kaam ho jaiye ga

Uske Baad Vicky vha se challa jata hai or fir ek jga par ja kr kisi Ko phone krta hai

Vicky- tum sab yha aa jao

Fir usne call cut kr diya. Thodi der Baad kuch log vha par aata hai vo unhe plan smjha kar bhej deta hai

Raat ke samye jab Aryan family Mai sab log chain se so rhe the tab unhe kya pta tha aage un ke sath kya hone wala hai.

Ghar ke andar to sabhi so rhe hai to chaliye unhe disturb nhi krte bahar chalte hai are ye kya gatekeeper to sab ke sab behosh pde hai.

Tabhi ek saya ghar ke gate se andar aata hai. Vo andar aa kr kuch soch rha hai. Fir vo sidiya chadne lgta hai. Vo pehla room kholta hai to Usme chote chacha Chachi so rhe the. Vo darvaja band kr deta hai is ke Baad dusre kamre ke paas jata hai us kamre ka darvaja band tha is liye vo khidki khol kar Ander dekhta hai andar bade chacha or badi chachi so rhe the. Un Ko dekh kr vo khidki band kr deta hai. Fir tisra Kamra kholta hai to us Mai koi bhi nhi tha. Aage ja kr use ek kamre Mai se kuch light dikhti hai vo us taraf jata. Or darvaja kholne ki koshish krta hai par ye kya darvaja andar se band hai to vo khidki kholta hai or andar dekhta hai ke Vihaan or us ki Biwi soye hai paas Mai ek bacha hai dusre bed pe kajal so rhi hai. khidki kholi thi par vo choti hone ke Karan vo us se andar nhi ja skta tha. Vo kuch sochne lgta hai tabhi use ek or khidki dikhti hai ji kholi hai or kafi badi bhi hai. Par vo ghar ke bahar ki taraf thi jis se sunlight kamre ke andar aaye. Us ne kuch socha fir vo ghar ki chat pr gya vha us ne ek Raasi(vo Raasi vo aapne sath laya tha) Ko kisi chej se bandha fir dusre sire se aapne aapko bandha fir vo Dheere dheere us Raasi ki madat se chat se niche ootra or us khidki ke paas aa kr us ne vo khidki kholi or us ke andar gya. Andar aa kr usne vo Raasi khol di.
Fir vo bed ki taraf gya. Sab log vha gehhri nind Mai so rhe the. Tabhi usne aapni pocket se ek rumal Nikal liya fir us ne us pr ek kuch Pani jaisa dala. Fir us ne vo rumal bache ke face pe rakh diya. Shayad ye behosh krne wali medicine thi. Or vaise hi us ne vo rumal baari baari sab ke face par rakh diya. Or fir unne aapne bag Mai se ek kapda Nikal liya. Usne us bache Ko us kapde Mai bandh diya or fir vo kapda usi rassi se bandh ke rassi ki madat se us bache Ko usi khidki ki madat se bahar nikala fir vo khud us rassi ki madat se niche aaya vha niche ek or aadmi khada tha. Vo us se bola

Boss ab kya krna hai

Boss- sab se pehle tum upar ja kr is rassi Ko le kr ao fir sab darvaje band krke yha se chale jana.or jaise hamne plan kiya tha tum sab dusre shahar chale jana.

Fir vo aadmi us bache Ko le kr chala jata hai.








Mai special thanks khehna chatha ho stone cold bhai Ko jin ki bja se Mai is update Mai pics add kr paya

Thank you stone cold bhai

Nice update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 4.

After 20 years

Ek ladka bus se ootarta hai. Or chal kr bus stand ke bahar ki taraf jata hai.abhi vo bahar hi aaya tha ke use ek auto wala dikhta hai jo us ki traf face krke kuch bol rha tha.

Autowala- kha Jana hai sahab.

Ladka- mujhe ............is collage ke hostel Mai le chalo.

Autowala- thik hai sahab

Fir vo ladka us auto wale ke sath chal padta hai. Jaise jaise vo Shahar ke andar tak ja rha tha Herat se us ki ankhen badi Hoti ja rhi thi. Aisa nhi hai ke usne pehle kabhi ghar nhi dekhe the par itni badi badi buildings vo pehli Baar dekh rha tha. Vo Abhi Herat se sab dekh hi rha tha ke autowala bola

Autowala- sahab aapka hostel aa gya

Fir vo ladka auto se bahar aa kar us Ko paise de deta hai. Or hostel ki andar ki taraf jata hai. Andar aate hue use kuch ladke dikte hai jo uski age ke hi lag rhe the vo unhe ignore maar kr aage jata hai. Raste mai hi use ek Kamra dikhta hai us par office likha tha. To vo us taraf chal PDA.

May I come in sir

Sir- yes come Btaiye Mai aapki kya madat kr skta hu.

Sir Mai is collage mai new student hu is liye mujhe hostel Mai rehne ke liye ek room chaiye

Sir- aapna ID dikao

Ji sir ye lijiye

Sir-(id or najar dalte hue) thik hai aapna Naam btao

Mai ho KARAN



Sir- pura Naam btao

Karan- yhi mera pura Naam hai

Sir-(ek tirshi najar se Karan Ko dekhte hue) thik hai tumhara room no hai 86

Ab se Karan Ko Mai likhoga

Fir Mai office se nikalta hu or aapna saman oothata hu jo Maine office ke bahar hi rkha tha. Fir Mai saman le kr sidiya chadne lga or ahkir Mai 3rd floor pr pahunch hi gya. Fir mai aapne room ki taraf gya or usse kholna chaha par vo nhi Khola to Maine room nock kiya to ek ladke ne room ka darvaja kholna.

Ladka- kon ho tum

Mai- Mai ek new student hu mujhe ye room diya gya hai rehne ke liye

Ye sunte hi us ladke mujhe andar Jane ke liye rasta diya Kamra thikthak tha jyada bada bhi nhi tha or jyada chota bhi nhi or us Mai 4 bed the.

New entry


Vivek- ye bhi Karan ke sath uski class Mai hai

Arjun- ye Karan ka sinior hai

Akshay- ye bhi Karan ka sinior hai

Is smaye kamre Mai sirf ek ladka hi tha

Ladka-(Karan ki taraf hath badate hue) hello mera Naam hai Vivek Mai tumhara room mate hu. Or 2 ladke or hai or vo Abhi bahar gye hai.

Karan- (Vivek ke sath hath Mila kar)mera Naam Karan hai or Mai ek new student hu. Or Maine .......... Class Mai Admission liya hai

Arjun- to fir tum mere hi class Mai ho or baki dono room mates hamare sinior hai. To fir Mai tumhe yha ke bareme bta deta hu. Dekho ye jo 2 bed hai vo dono siniors ke hai or ye wala mera hai or is ke ooper wala tumhara.

Karan- thik hai Vivek ji

Vivek- are bhai itni ijjat mat de hajam nhi hogi bas tu mujhe Vivek hi bula.

Karan- thik hai Vivek bhai.

Fir room ki setting Mai raat ho jati hai. Itne Mai dono senior bhi aa jate hai.

Ladka- Vivek ye naya ladka kon hai

Vivek- Arjun bhai ye hamara Naya room partner hai

Akshay- ohh welcome bhai welcome kya Naam hai tumhara

Karan- ji mera Naam Karan hai.

Arjun- nice to meet you Karan. Hope Vivek ne tumhe sab kuch bta diya hoga

Karan- ji bhai Vivek ne mujhe sab kuch bta diya tha.

Arjun- acha good

Akshay- konsi class Mai admission liya hai Karan tumne

Karan- ji maine ..... Class Mai admission liya hai

Arjun- oh to tum hamare junior ho

Isi trah kuch or bate Hoti hai

Arjun- ab hame so Jana chaiye.

Fir sab log sone chale jate hai.

Raat ke 12 baj gye the room no 86 Mai sab log so chuke the sivaye Karan ke. Kyuki vo aapni purani zindagi yaad kr rha tha. Sach khe to use aapne ghar ki yaad aa thi thi.

Zabardast update

 

[Smith_15]

Update please

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 5.

Recap- raat ke 12 baj gye the room no.86 Mai sab log so chuke the sivaye Karan ke kyuki vo aapni purani zindagi yaad kr rha tha. Sach khe to use aapne ghar ki yaad aa rhi thi

Ab aage-

Karan yhi sab soch rha tha ke usko pta hi nhi chala ke kab uski ankho se ansho aa gye.or pta nhi rote rote kab use nind aa gyi.

Next day

Subha sab se pehle Karan jagta hai usne clock ki taraf dekha to Abhi 5 baj rhe the. Ab ye Karan ki bachpan se hi aadat rhi hai. Vo Subha jaldi hi jag jata hai or kasrat krta hai. Vo hostel ke ground Mai jata hai ground kuch jyada bada nhi tha is liye Karan bahar jata hai.thodi hi dur use ek ground dikhta hai vo us Mai chala jata hai vha vo kasrat krta hai or yoga bhi krta hai. Isi trah time Gujar jata hai.ab Subha ke 8 baj gye the. Room no 86 Mai sab jag gye the or tyar bhi ho gye the. But abhi collage Jane Mai time tha is liye vo log Karan Ko aapne sath le jate hai ghomane ke liye.

Back to Karan

Aaj mera pehla din tha collage ka is liye Mai bahot exited tha.
Is liye jaldi tyar ho gya tha or mere sath baki teno bhi tyar ho gye the.

Vivek- to bhai tyar haina aaj tera first day hai collage mai.

Mai- ha bhai zindagi Mai pehli Baar itne bade collage mai jaoga.

Arjun- to chalo

Fir ham sab collage ke liye Nikal jate hai, collage paas Mai hi tha. Isliye jaldi pahunch gye.
Hum sab collage ke ander gye collage jitna bada bahar se lag rha tha andar se usse bhi bada tha. Sab students aapni aapni classes ki taraf ja rhe the kyuki pehli class ka time ho gya tha.

Vivek- chal bhai aaj tujhe ek bomb dikhata ho

Mai- chal bhai dekhte hai kaisa bomb hai

Fir ham dono aapni class Mai aa gye. Abhi teacher nhi aaya tha to sab students aapse Mai Masti kr rhe the.

Mai- are bhai ye kya Ajeeb baat hai

Vivek- kyu kya hua

Mai- sari class hi ulti hai kya last table Mai kuch ladke aapas Mai guse pade hai or ye sab se pehle table bilkul Khali hai.

Vivek- oh acha ye, are bhai pehle table pe kon bethta hai

Mai- kya mtlb students bethte hai

Vivek- are yr, pehle table pe toppers bethte hai or yha koi topper hai hi nhi sale sab ke sab harami hai.sivaye ek ladki Ko chod kr.

Mai- to kha hai vo ladki

Vivek- lgta hai aaj chutti pe hai

Mai- chal chod na bhai

Fir Vivek bhi second last wale table ki taraf Jane lga to Maine use pakad liya

Mai- are kha ja rha hai bhai

Vivek- or kha aapni seat ki taraf, Mai last table pr hi bethta hu.

Mai- nhi bhai Mai to pehle table par hi bethoga

Vivek- thik hai aaj tere liye ye qurbani bhi de hi deta hu.

Fir ham table pr Beth gye.

Abhi ham Bethe hi the ke ek teacher class Mai aayi.

Sab students- Gooddddddddd morningggggggggggg maammmmm(jaise hamare school or collage mai student Bolte hai vaise hi

Ma'am- Beth jao bacho

Ham sab Beth gye or Vivek nhi vo to khi or hi khoya tha

Mai- (dheere se) are bhi Beth ja

Fir vo hosh Mai say or beth gya

Vivek- Maine tujhe bola tha na ke ek bomb dikata ho yhi hai vo bomb

Savita ma'am


Mai- kya yr tu bhi, mujhe ye sab acha nhi lgta

Ma'am- Hello students Mai aap sab ki teacher savita.

Piche se ek ladka chup ke- hello Savita bhabhi.

Sab students hasne lge or Mai smjh gya ke ye class kaisi hai. Ma'am bichari ka face rone jaisa ho gya tha fir bhi unse aapne aap Ko sambhala or kha

Savita ma'am ki najar mujhe pe gyi- tum naye student lgte ho aapna intro do

Ab sab se aage ham the to is liye jaldi najar pad gyi thi maam ki .

Mai- hello dasto mera Naam Karan hai, Mai is shahar Mai Naya hu or umeed krta hu ke mera ye saal aap sab ke sath bahot acha jayega.

Is ke Baad baki sab teacher ne bhi mera intro hi liya. Or kuch khaas nhi hua or collage ke Baad ham sab hostel ke liye chale gye

Zabardast update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update no. 6

Recap- iske Baad baki sab teacher ne bhi mera intro hi liya or kuch khaas nhi hua or us ke Baad ham sab hostel ke liye chale gye.

Ab aage

To hostel aane ke Baad kuch khaas nhi hua aaj ka Sara din collage ki setting Mai hi Nikal gya jaise collage ke liye books Lene or baki ke jaroori ke saman khridne Mai chala gya.

Next day

Mai- chalo bhai log collage nhi Jana kya

Vivek- sone de na yr Abhi to bahot time hai

Mai- koi time nhi hai bhai 9 baj gye hai

Ye sunte hi tino aise bhage jaise piche koi saand piche pdha ho
Thodi der Mai hi sab tiyar ho gye Jane ke liye.

Vivek- to chale bhai

Mai- ha chalo Maine kha roka hai

Arjun- or bta yr kal tujse pucha hi nhi koi lafda to nhi hua na collage Mai aager kuch ho to Darna nhi sidhe akshay ka Naam le Dena kyuki aapne Ko to koi yha jyada Janta hi nhi

Akshay- are kyu mere baap ka collage hai kya bhai

Arjun- nhi re tera us teacher ki ladki ke sath chakar haina to tu to collage ka damad hua to koi aapne damad Ko kuch Kaheta hai kya

Akshay- kya yr tu bhi na

Vivek- are bhai pehle kyu nhi btaya mera bhi uski behan pr Dil aaya hai hamara bhi taka bhidado

Arjun- are ha bhai aapne dost ke kaam nhi aaye ga to kya fayada Dosti ka


Mai- (Mai smjh gya ke ab ye Vivek ka fuddu katte ge is liye Mai bola)are kya baate le kr Beth gye chalo na yr collage

Akshay- ha chalo

Fir ham sab collage Mai aa gye aaj fir aapni class Mai gya to vohi bura haal tha class ka sab students Masti kr rhe the.
Lekin aaj ek baat alag thi Sabse pehle table pr ek ladki bethi thi

Mai- chal yr bethte hai

Vivek- are aaj Mai tere sath aage nhi betho ga nhi to kal ki tra Sara time teachers ki Bak bak suni pdegi. Mai to piche Masti kroga Mai to Kaheta hu tu bhi chal

Mai- nhi bhai Mai aage hi thik hu.

Fir Mai aage ke ek table pr Beth gya.

Tabhi teacher class Mai aayi.

Sabhi students- Gooddddddddd morningggggggggggg maammmmmmm

Savita ma'am- good morning bacho

Fir hamari class shuru Hoti hai or ma'am black board pr kuch likhti hai or

Ma'am- kisi Ko iska answer pta hai

Kisika hath ooper nhi hua siwaye usi ladki ke jo aage bethi thi

Ma'am- (sari class ki taraf dekh ke) yha is ladki ke siwa kisi Ko is ka answer nhi pta.

Saari class chup rhi

Ma'am- to ab Payal tum hi is ka answer do.

Fir payal us question ka answer deti hai.

Fir kuch classes ke Baad mera or vivek ek lecture Khali tha to is liye ham dono canteen Mai aa gye

Kuch kahne ka order dene ke baad

Mai- vaise Vivek bhai collage Mai sab thik hai. Maine to suna tha ke collage Mai ragging bhi Hoti hai ladko Mai ladai jhagde bhi hote hai. Or bhai ye kya hamari sari class Mai sirf ek ladki hi aasi hai jo padhai Mai thyaan deti hai ye kya locha hai??

Vivek- bhai is ki ek hi reason hai or vo hai yha ke principal Sanjay Singh unhi ki bja se ye collage aaj city ka best college hai or vo yha sab kuch aapne control Mai rkhte hai. Or hamari class aasi is vja se hai kyuki principal sir ne yha ki har class ke 3 section kr rkhe hai, section A Mai sab se jyada smart students, section B Mai average Students or section C Mai harami maal or ham section C Mai hai.

Mai- to fir payal us class Mai kyu hai us Ko to Section A Mai hona chaiye.

Vivek- ab bhai is ka to mujhe bhi nhi pta ye sab to principal hi jante hai ya fir payal janti hogi

Fir ham aapne class Mai aaye or bache hue lecture lga liye

Fir ham hostel ke liye Nikal gye.


Boss hame us ka pta chal gya hai ke vo kha hai

Boss- kya mujhe tum se ye umeed nhi thi ke tum use dhond loge. Vaise vohi hai na

Ji boss

Boss- aaj itne saalo Baad tum kamino ne koi achi khabar sunai hai.

Sukriya boss

Boss- jao or usse ahsaas dikao ke vo kon hai or yaad rkhna us ke samne mat Jana.

Dusri taraf

Vo kaisa hai?

Ji vo thik hai Magar ek preshani hai

Kyu kya hua


Ji unko pta chal gya hai us ke bareme or vo ye bhi Jaan gye hai ke vo kha hai.

(Kuch soch kr) acha jo Mai Kaheta hu vo suno-...................................

Ji Mai isi kaam pe lag jata hu

Nice update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update no.7


Recap-

(Kuch soch ke)acha jo Mai kheta hu vo suno-

Ji Mai is kaam pe lag Jata hu

Ab aage-

Aaj Subha Mai hamesha ki jaldi uth gya. Or hamesha Jha jata Tha usi ground ki taraf chal pda. Vaise hamesha itni Subha ye rasta sunsaan hi Hota Hai Aaj bhi kuch vaisa hi Tha. Mai hamesha ki trah jogging krte hue ha rha Tha. jab Main park Mai pahuncha to kuch jayada log nhi the vha, hamesha ki trah. Pehle to Mai jogging krta hu. To usi pe lag gya are bhai jogging krne

Vaise is samhe karan bahot smart lag rha tha.vaise Karan hai bhi bahot handsome. Face bhi bahot attractive hai. Uski ankhen Blue hai. Hoth thode red hai. Face to ekdam doodh ki trah white uper se six pack body hai.

Isi vja se Is samhe park Mai jitni bhi ladkia or aurte thi un sab ka thyaan Karan ki Traf hi Tha. in kuch dino Mai jo ladkia kabhi kabhi park Mai aati thi vo bhi ab roj roj aane lgi thi Karan ko dekhne or kisi bahane se us se baat krne. Vaise Karan Hai bhi bahot handsome to Jo Ladki us ko ek baar dekh le vo use kabhi bhul nhi skti.

Mai jogging krte hue kuch soch rha Tha is liye Mera thyaan aage nhi Tha. Yahi meri galti thi kyuki Isi vaja se Mera thyaan aage nhi gya or Mai aage kisi Ladki se takra gya. Tabhi mujhe hosh aaya or Mai ye kya dekhta hu ke samne ek ladki jameen par padi hai. Tabhi vo ladki khadi hone lagi Abhi tak us ne mujhe dekha nhi tha kyuki jab ham aapas Mai takraye tab vo mere aage khadi thi uska face samne ki taraf tha. Jab vo palti to bahot gusse Mai lag rhi thi.
Ladki-(aapne kapde saaf krte hue) tumhe najar nhi aata kya

Mai- sorry vo mera thyaan nhi tha

Tabhi Karan Ke sorry bolne par us ladki ne Karan Ko dekha. or Karan Ko dekhte hi uski ankhen Sidhi Karan ki ankhon se ja mili Vo to uski ankhon Mai dekhte hi khi kho gyi


Jab kuch time vo kuch na boli tab maine use kha

Mai- ji dikhye hamari galti thi ham kuch soch rhe the hame maaf kr dijiye


Tabhi vo ladki hosh Mai aa gyi or boli

Ladki- ji koi baat nhi galti to sab se Hoti hai. Koi janbuj ke to nhi krega(is Baar us ladki ki awaaz Mai narmaai thi)

Mai- thank you miss.

Ladki- Ritika

Mai- thank you miss. Ritika mujhe galat na smjhne ke liye.

Ritika- are isme thanks ki kya baat hai

Mai- chalo bye Mai fir chalya hu

Ritika- are aapna Naam to bta do.

Mai- mera Naam Karan hai

Ritika- nice to meet you Mr. Karan. Or btaiye kya krte hai aap.

Mai- ji Mai............ collage Mai student hu.

Ritika- (bahot khush or hairaan hote hue)kya sach Mai

Mai- ji ha vaise Is Mai hairaan hone wali kya baat hai

Ritika- are kyuki Mai bhi usi collage Mai hu

Mai- par maine to aapko kabhi dekha hi nhi

Ladki- kyuki maine Abhi us collage Ko Join kiya hai aaj hi mera pehla din hai us collage Mai Jane ka.

Mai- itni deeri se kyu collage ja rhe ho collage Ko shuru hue to kitna time ho gya.

Ritika- vo kyuki Mai kal hi is city Mai aayi hu.

Mai- oh acha ji.

Ritika-hmm

Mai- or aap kis city se ho


Ritika- ji vo Mai ....... City se hu

Mai- ok ji, thik hai to milte hai collage Mai

Ritika- thik hai Karan ji

Fir Mai park se hostel ki taraf chala gya. Mere vha se Jane ke Baad

Ritika- are kya Kiya Ritika tune Kam se Kam uska number to le hi leti(Kuch soch ke) chalo kuch nhi hota mere hi collage Mai hai Baad Mai le lu gi.

Itne Mai main hostel pahunch gya.or Mene jate hi kya dekha sabhi log Abhi tak so rhe hai.

Mai(Vivek ke pichbade pe par marte hue) are Jana nhi hai kya collage

Vivek-are bhai Abhi to bahot time PDA hua hai.

Mai- chal yr uth ja aaj collage jaldi chalte hai.

Vivek- chal thik hai yr or arjun or Akshay Ko bhi jga de

Fir mai un Ko bhi jga diya. Fir ye sab tiyaar hone chale gye.

Chalo ab inhe tyaar hone dete hai or chalte hai dusri taraf

To karye sampan ho gya

Ji nhi par hamari yojna shuru ho gyi hai. Or ab jyada samhe nhi lgega Un logo ke vha pahunche se purb hi ham aapna karye sampurn kr lenge.

Thik hai Lekin ye karye jitni jaldi ho sake utna Uttam hai kyuki ham unhe jyada samhe nhi rok skte

Aap befir rhe ham ye karye sampan kr ke hi rhenge.

Or fir vo vha se chala jata hai.


Sorry dosto update der se aayi hai kyuki kal Mai update pura nhi kr paya tha or aaj ek problem Mai fas gya tha. Or problem bhi aisi thi jise khatam kre bina mera kaam nhi chal rha tha. To Sara time usi Mai Nikal gya.

Nice update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update on. 8

Recap-

Aap befikr rhiye ham ye karye sampan kr kr hi rhenge

Is ke baad vo vha se chale jate Hai.

Ab aage-

Un Sab ke Jane ke baad vo shaks kuch soch rha Tha. Aaiye dekhte Hai vo kya soch rha Hai.
Shaks-(abhi uska karye sampan nhi hua Hai agar vo karye sampan hone se purv unko vo mil gaya to Anarth ho jayega. Is baar to ham kuch Kar bhi nhi skege.lgta Hai ab mujhe or jyada sankhya Mai logo ko in unSab ko rokne ke liye bhejna hoga)

Dusri taraf

Aaj ham Sab dost collage jaldi pahunch gye the kyuki Aaj Mera Mann nhi lga park Mai is liye vha se jaldi aa gya. Or aake krta bhi kya is liye Sab ko le kr jaldi hi collage pahunch gya. Arjun or Akshay to canteen Mai hi Beth gye Lakin Mai Vivek se bola

Mai- chal bhai ham jra aapni class ka chakar lga kr aate Hai.

Vivek- kya yr is time class Mai. Vaise bhi Aaj tu hame jaldi collage le aaya uppar se ab class Mai Jane ke liye bol rha Hai (usne sikayat krne wale andaj Mai kha)

Mai- aare chal na notanki itni notanki mat Kiya Kar. Or Akshay ki Sali ke piche jra Kam bhaga kr aagar sir ko pta chala na to Tera kaam tamaam ho Jayega.

Vivek - are haata Sawan ki khata
Hame mitade jamane Mai dam nhi
Jamana hamse Hai ham jamane se nhi

Mai- abe chal notanki ab notanki ke sath sath filmo ke dialog bhi chori karne lg gya Hai tu.

Vivek- ab chal Yr tere bhasan se Pak gya hu or ab se uska naam ijjat se Lena Akshay ki Sali nhi balki bhabhi Hai Teri Or babhi Maa samaan hoti Hai maal samaan nhi.

Mai-(hath jod ke) are chal mere baap thik Hai Aaj se use bhabhi hi khoga.

Vivek- good chal chalte Hai class Mai Teri khuwaish bhi puri kr dete Hai.

Or ham class ki traf chal pade. lakin ham jaise hi class Mai pahunch heraan reh gye. Kyuki jis samhe log collage jane ke bareme sochte Hai us samhe Mai ye Payal class Mai bethi padh rhi Hai.



Tabhi mere dimag Mai aaya ke ye ladki kitni padakho hai ise to A section se aage koi section Hota to usme Rhena chaiye Tha ye yha C section Mai kya kr rhi hai.fir maine ye baat dimag se Nikal di or class Ko dekh ke vapas canteen ki traf chal pda.

Mai-(sab ke sath bethte hue) bhai aapto yha senior ho aapko to yha sab pta hoga.

Arjun- ha yr lakin tu aise kyu puch rha hai.

Mai- vo baat ye hai bhai ki Mai C section Mai hu ye baat to Mai smjh gya kyuki mere marks Kam hai. Hamare class Mai ek Payal Naam ki ladki hai vo study Mai bhi bahot achi hai Fir bhi vo C section Mai kyu hai.

Akshay- yr ye to hame bhi nhi pta. Balki ye to hamne pehli Baar suna hai ke ek itni smart ladki Ko Section C Mai rkha gya hai.

Mai- kuch to baat hogi bhai tabhi to collage ne use section C Mai rkha hai

Vivek- chal chod na bhai kha tu us ladki ki baat Ko le kr Beth gya. Dekh tu ja kr samose le kr aa mai cold drink le kr aata hu

Mai- chal thik hai bhai

Fir Mai or Vivek chale gye nasta lane or fir isi trah baato Mai pehli class ka samhe ho gya is liye Arjun or Akshay aapni class ki traf chal pade or Mai or Vivek aapni class ki taraf. Class Mai pahunchne par Mai hamesha ki traha aage Beth gya or ab to Vivek bhi mere sath aage bethta tha. Or aaj bhi ham aage Beth gye. Tabhi ek teacher class Mai aaya. Lekin pehli class to hamesha hamari Savita ma'am leti hai Lekin aaj un ki jga ye aadmi kyu aa rha hai.

Tabhi sab students use khade ho kr good morning kahete hai

Teacher- ha ha morning, to or nikammo kaise ho. Aaj tumhari ma'am chuti par hai or is liye mujhe tum jaise nikammo ki class Lene Ko kha hai. Tabhi uska thyaan aage ke table pr gya jis par sirf teen students hi Bethe the baki ke table Khali the.

Teacher- tum nikammo Ko pta nhi hai kya meri class Mai jha tumhara roll number aaye tum Ko vohi bethna hai. Chalo aapne aapne roll number par betho.

Fir sari class aapne aapne roll number par Beth gyi Lekin ek pangga ho kya or vo ye ke Vivek bilkul piche chala gya or Mai Sabse aage aa gya. Us par se mere sath ek ladki ka roll number aya Or Mai ja kr us ladki ke sath Beth gya. Lekin Abhi tak Mene us ladki ki traf nhi dekha tha kyuki ladkio se Mai thoda sharmata hu is liye Mai aapna face dusri traf kar ke betha tha. Tabhi teacher mujhe bola

Teacher- are suniye Sarkar aapmai mujhe bada attitude lgta kyuki jab tak Mai bola nhi tabtak Sarkar samne ki traf dekh bhi nhi rhe the.

Mai- sorry sir

Teacher-(mera mazak udate hue) are sorry kis baat ka akhir dikhta to Mai suaar jaisa hi hu na to kyu meri taraf dekho ge tum to aaspass ki hariaali Ko hi taddo ge

Mai-(dheere se) right sir.

Teacher-ab sidha face krke Beth ja

Lakin Mene jab right sir bola to paas Mai bethi us ladki ne sun liya tha or vo is baat pe muskura bhi rhi thi.

Tabhi vo teacher bola

Teacher- sab students aapni attendance do

Fir class Mai attendance shuru ho gyi Mene bhi aapni attendance di uske Baad ek ladki boli.

Ladki- present sir

Tabhi mere thyaan us traf gya or Mai kya dekhta hu ke Payal mere sath bethi hai.

Iske Baad saari class ki attendance li teacher ne. Vaise Mai ab Payal ke sath betha tha or mere dost Sabse piche betha hai or Mai is sir ke bareme jaanta bhi nhi tha is liye maine na chate hue bhi Payal se puch hi liya.

Mai- ji kya aap janti hai ke ye sir kon hai

Payal-(pehle to vo shock hui kyuki maine use ji kha tha) ye hai hamare collage vice principal
Sir Kulwant singh



Ye bahot garm sohbhao ke hai agar koi student inke pith ke piche v unko kuch galat bol de or ye unhe PTA chal jaye to ye us student Ko aisi sja dete hai ke vo student hi kya uske mom dad bhi kamp jate hai

Payal ki ye baat sun ke mujhe kuch fark nhi pdha.

Mai- acha thik hai Payal ji

Payal- (badi masumiyat se) vaise aapka Naam kya hai

Mai- ji mera Naam Karan hai.

Payal- to Karan ji kha se ho aap

Mai-(is sawal ko badalte hue) meri shodiye samne dekhiye khi ye teacher hame bahar na Nikal de

Fir ham chup ho gye or Kulwant sir ka lecture sunne lge. Vaise lecture bhi kis baat ka tha vo to jaise hamare maje Lene aaye the jab Dil krta kisi Ko khada krke uski fuddu kat dete. Sikar hai uper wale ka kyuki Mai us teacher ke hathe nhi chada.

Or iske Baad hamne or classes bhi attend ki
ab collage ki shuti ka time tha to ham sab hostel ja rhe the. tabhi ek awaz aayi

Karan rukoooooooo

Nice update