Fantasy Karan

[King of light]

Good update bhai
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Bhai agar ane wale wakt me Karan se wo update relat Kate ga to koi Baar Nahi
Par mujhe Aisha lagta hai agar Mai koi story padhta hu to uss me Jo dost ate hai thik hai Karan or uss ke dost ke dosti par agar Kuch hai to thik hai app samjha rahe hai na Mai Khana kya Chahta hu
Matab ki
Ye Karan ke story hai iss me aap kise dusre ke story add karoge to utna maja Nahi ata hai
Jo bhi add karo usse Karan ka connection hona Chahiye past future ya present me.
Mai aisa mujhe lagata hai ye aap ki story hai app jaisa chahye waisa likhe
Kuch Jada bole diya hou to sorry..

Ha bhai Mai smjh rha hu. Bhai story mai hero hi mukhye kirdaar Main hai. Par uska dost bhi is story mai bahot maiyne rkhta hai jo aapko aage pta chalega

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[King of light]

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

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[King of light]

Yar tum asa karo story ka name change kar ka vivek rakh do mujha to sala yeh vivek hi hero lag raha ha har update ka 50%vivek par hota hy jaisa woh hero ka dost ni khud hi hero ho

Thanks bhai aapke review ke liye

Bhai har Insaan Aapni zindagi ka hero hota hai. Har Insaan ki zindagi ki ek Kahaani hoti hai or bhai kha tak vivek ka sawal hai vo is story ke un characters mai se hai jo shuru se end tak story mai rahnege or bhai har update ka 50% vivek par nhi hota. Fir bhi jab koi hamara best friend hota haina bhai vo bhi college mai to vo hamre sath hamre ghar walo se bhi jyada samhe rehta hai jis se uska mahatve bhi bahot badh jata hai. Ab aisa to ho nhi skta na ke aap college jao or aapki aapke best friend se koi baat na ho jabki vo aapke sath aapke room Mai rehta ho

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[King of light]

Jabardast & Gajab update bro


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nice update
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Nice update

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[Badshah Khan]

Nice update bhai

 

[Zas23]

Update no.19

Recap

Abhi raat ho gyi thi ab ham sab Apne aapne bed par lete hue the.sab so rhe the par Mai jag rha tha or soch rha tha ke maine jo sab plan kiya tha vo sab to bekar ho gya.maine to jo socha bhi nhi tha vo sab ho rha hai. Ab mujhe aage kya karna chaiye.mai yahi sab soch rha tha ke ab aage kya yahi sab sochte hue mujhe kab nind aa gyi pta hi nhi chala.

Ab aage

Aaj subha firse mai aapne daily exercise ke liye park chala gya. Aaj mosaam bahot Suhana tha.park bhi aaj is khushnuma mousam Mai or bhi khubsurat lag rha tha



Is khubsurati ko dekh kar to mai is mai khone lga kyuki shayad aaj subha thodi barish hui thi is liye pedh podhe bhi bahot sundar lag rhe the. Or in pedh podho mai se chidyo ke chekne ki awaze Aa rhi thi aisa lag rha tha tha ke shayad chidya bhi barish hone ke khushi mai gunguna rhi ho or baki chidya uska sath de rhi ho. Aaj mai thoda jaldi Aa gya tha lekin fir bhi kuch lag the park mai shayad vo bhi is khubsurat kudrat ka anand le rhe the. Maine socha tha ke aaj Ritika bhi aayi hogi Magar maine dekha ke vo aaj bhi nhi aayi hai. Mujhe kuch galat hone ka abaas hone lga

Mai- 2 din ho gye Ritika kyu nhi aa rhi. Khi kuch problem to nhi haina. Call krke pucho.nhi rehne deta hu aaj collage aaye gi to tab puch lunga. Iske Baad maine kuch exercise ki or hostel chala gya or vha se tyaar ho kar college ke liye Nikal gya.
College Pahunch kar Vivek to class Mai chala gya par Mai canteen ki traf chal pda kyuki maine Payal Ko pehle hi khe diya tha ke kal tum mujhe canteen Mai milna. Kuch hi der mai main canteen ke samne pahunch gya.

Payal bhi mujhe Canteen ke samne hi mil gyi or ham chal diye chat ki traf. Chat par pahunch kar Payal ne kha

Payal- karan ji mujhe to bahot tension ho rhi hai us ladke ke liye khi vo log use kuch kar na de

Mai- Payal kal jo hamne suna usse ye to pta chal gye ke unka plan kya hai or vo ladki bhi unke sath hi milli hui hai. Isliye. Mujhe nhi lgta jab tak uska plan kamyab nhi ho jata vo log us ladke ko kuch khege

Payal- ji ha par hamme us ladke Ko bachna hai. Is liye hame jaldi kuch karna hoga kab tak vo safe rhega kuch to karege hi vo log.

Mai- mai janta hu hamare Paas Waqt kam hai. Hame jaldi kuch karna hoga. Isliye maine kuch socha hai

Payal- to mujhe bhi to bataiye Apne kya socha hai

Mai- to suniye

Dusri traf

Ritika- mummy Mai college ja rhi hu.

R mummy- are ruk beta tujhse kuch baat krni hai

Ritika- (udaas mann se) ha bolo mummy mujhe thodi jaldi hai

R mummy- to sun aaj tu Sara din mere sath rehna. Ham Sara sheher ghume ge.

Ritika- nhi mummy aaj mujhe college Jana hai. Mujhe jaroori kaam hai.

R mummy- aaj mat ja na

Ritika- nhi mom Mera jana jaroori hai

R mummy- tu nhi maane gi to chal Mai tujhe sidhe hi batati hu. Thik hai tu college ja par tujhe aapna wada yaad haina tu Karan se nhi milegi.
Yaad haina

Ritika-(udaas man se)ji mummy yaad hai

R mummy- to thik hai ja

Fir Ritika college ke liye nikal jati hai. Sare raste vo Karan ke bareme hi soch rhi thi. Pta nhi aisi kya kasis thi Karan Mai jo har ladki us ki traf attract ho jati thi. Or hamara Karan to shakt londo ka bhi shakt Londa tha vo kisi ladki Ko aapne aas paas aane hi nhi deta tha. Tabhi to sala aaj tak Singal hai.
Idhar Ritika college pahunch gyi thi ye vohi samhe tha jab Karan bhi college Mai aaya tha or Payal ko dhondte hue canteen Mai chala gya tha. Isi samhe Ritika bhi college Mai aa gyi thi or aate hi use Karan ke darshan ho gye. Uske dekha ke Karan khi teji se ja rha hai ye dekh ke vo bhi aapne aap Ko rok na saki or Karan ke piche chalne lgi. Usne dekha ke Karan canteen ke paas ja kar kisi ladki ke Mila hai or baate kar rha hai.



Ye dekhte hi ritika ka chehre ke rang badalne lge chehra abhi kuch der Pehle karan ko dekh ka khil gya tha ab uspe hassi ki jgga gusse havi ho gya tha

Ritika-(gusse mai) ye Karan kis ladki ke paas khada hai. Or ye chudel kon hai jo mere Karan par Dore dal rhi hai. Mera Karan to Bhola hai jaroor is ladki ne hi koi Jaadu kiya hoga uske ooper.
Aapne mann Mai ye sab soch kar Ritika Karan ki traf jane lgi. Abhi kuch kadam hi aage bhadaye the ke vo vohi ruk gyi or kuch sochne lgi

Ye sab dekh kar ritika anadar uske dil or vivek ke anadar jung shuru ho gyi thi. Jisme vivek bola

Ritika ka vivek- tu kis hak se Karan ke paas ja rhi hai.

Ritika ka dil- hak ki kya baat kar rhe ho Karan mera dost hai.

Vivek- ha Karan tera dost hai, Abhi tak aage kya pta ho na ho. Ab tu use vha us ladki se baat krne se rokne ja rhi thi kis hak se tune to Aapni Maa ko usse dosti todne ka wada kiya hai to ab kaisa hak

Dil- ha Maine mummy se wada kiya hai par Mai use psnd krti hu vo kisi or ke sath kaise ho skta hai. Mai ja kar use khe do gi ke tum aaj ke Baad is ladki se baat mat krna

Vivek- tum usse ye sab kis hak se kho gi or vo teri baat kyu maane ga

Dil- voo voo

Ritika ke andar chal rhi is halchal mai ritika ka vivek jit jata hai
Ritika rote hue vapas palat jati hai or Aapne ghar chali jati hai. Itne Waqt mai payal or karan vha se chale gye the.

Idhar chat par

Karan- ab smjh gyi na aapko kya krna hai

Payal- ji

Karan- ye sab Kal hi ho jana chaiye. Kyuki mujhe nhi lgta vo log jyada samhe rukne wale hai.

Idhar chat par ye sab baate ho rhi thi or idhar hamare vivek sahab class Mai bethe the. Samne teacher padha rha tha or yha piche bethe hamare shahabjade mobile Mai lage hue chat Kar rhe the

Chaliye dekhte hai kis se baat ho rhi hai

Vivek- are janu tum tansion kyu leti ho kal chale ge na ham dono

Online- aap roj hi aise kahete ho par kabhi ghumne nhi le jate. Jaiye mai aapse baat nhi krti

Vivek- are meri sweeti aise gussa nhi hote ham kal chale ge na

Online- pkka

Vivek- ha pkka ab gussa mat hona. Nhi to jaldi budhi ho jaogi

Online- youuu

Vivek- are sorry sorry mazak tha. Or btao kya kar rhi ho

Online- mera lecture free tha to canteen Mai hu

Vivek(kuch soch kar) acha tum canteen mai hona to Jara dekhna kya karan vha hai

Online- nhi yha karan nhi hai

Vivek- sahi se dekh kar btao

Online- maine achi tarah dekha hai Infact canteen mai to kuch hi students hai

Vivek- Acha thik hai Jaan chalo Baad mai baat krta hu bye

Online- bye

Vivek(mann mai) Sala ye Karan ko ho kya gya class Mai hi nhi Aa rha or uske sath wali ladki bhi to nhi aayi. Karan to mere sath hi college aaya tha or vo ladki bhi kabhi chutti nhi krti, ho na ho jaroor in dono ke vich kuch lafda chal rha hai jo mujhe nhi pta. Aaj mai is karan ki class le hi leta hu. Sale ne mujhe bhi nhi bataya ke is ne bhi jhande gaad diye hai. Is lecture ke baad ja kar dhondte hu usse.

Dusri taraf

Ek kamre mai bahot andhera tha koi khidki nhi thi is kamre mai Sirf ek darvaja tha jo ki abhi band tha. Darvaja band hone ki vja se vha roshni bhi nhi ja rhi thi jiski vja se vaha kuch dikhai nhi de rha tha.
Ham sab abhi is kamre ke bareme padh hi rhe the ke vo darvaja khulta hai
vohi purani filmo wali classic awaz mai

Darvaja khulne se andar kuch roshini jati hai jisse kuch kuch dikne lgta hai. Ab Darvaja puri tarah khul gya tha or andar sab saaf saaf najar aa rha tha. Dekhne se to vo ek basement lag rha tha. Chaliye andar dekhte hai kya hai.
Vha par kuch purana Samaan padha tha ek bed tha Paas mai hi chair thi or uspe ek aadmi bandha tha
Kyaaaa ha bhai uspe ke aadmi bandha tha.

Abhi mai bandhe aadmi ko dekh kar shock mai hi tha ke darvaje se koi anadar aane lga vo koi Mota sa aadmi tha uske hath mai ek pani ka glass tha vo chalta hua us bandhe aadmi ke Paas jata hai or uske Paas pahunch kar usse dekhne lgta hai.

Mota aadmi- kitni badbo Aa rhi hai sale maise
Ye kahete hi vo Mota aadmi us bandhe aadmi ke chehre par pani marta hai or us bandhe aadmi ko hosh aane lgta hai. Pure hosh mai aane ke Baad vo aadmi us mote aadmi ko badi ajeeb si najar se dekhne lgta hai

Mota aadmi- aabe aise kya ghur rha hai be
ab ye mat khe dena
MAI KHA HU

Sorry dosto update deeri se aayi. Vo kya hai ke mere dimag mai update to tha par kaise likho ye soch rha tha kai baar to maine likhi hui update hi delete Kar di kyuki mujhe vo psnd hi nhi Aa rhi thi. Hope ab achi likhi gyi ho ye mujhe aap sab jaroor batana

Good Night

Nice update

 

[Zas23]

Update no. 20

Recap-

Mota aabmi- abe aise kya dekh rha hai be ab ye mat khe dena
Mai kha hu

Ab aage

Abhi tak vo aadmi puri tarah hosh mai aa gya tha par bola abhi tak kuch nhi tha. Tabhi vo mota aadmi bola

Mota aadmi- abe oye chingor chal tujhe boss ne bulaya hai.

Ye mota bhi shayad aadhe dimag ka hi tha kyuki vo aadmi abhi bandha tha. use bina khole vo mota bahar ki traf Jane lga. Jab kuch der vo aadmi bahar nhi aaya tab vo mota firse room mai vapas aaya or bola

Mota aadmi- kyu be chingor sunai nhi deta hai kya tujhe bola na bahar aa

Bandha aadmi(katilana hassi ke sath) kyu be mote andha hai kya dikhta nhi hai mai bandha hua hu. Chal khol mujhe.

Is baat par mote aadmi kuch nhi bola or usse kholne lga.

Mota aadmi- chal ab

Ab vo aadmi khul chuka tha is liye ab vo khada hone ki koshish karne lga par itne dino se bandhe hone ke karan se usse khada bhi nhi hua ja rha tha. Ye sab dekh kar Mota aadmi bola

Mota aadmi- chal be kya hua,

Shayad is mote ko smjh nhi Aa rha tha ke vo khada nhi ho pa rha hai. Jab kafi der vo aadmi khada nhi hua to us mote ko gussa aane lga. To vo Mota aadmi gusse mai uske Paas gya or bola

Mota aadmi- are jaldi chal dekhega nhi boss teri item ka kaise maza leta hai.

Abhi us mote ne itna hi bola tha ke uske kaan ke niche ek thappad padta hai. Ye tapped itni jor se tha ke us mote ki sitti pitti gum ho jati hai.
Ye thapped usi aadmi ne mara tha jo kuch der pehle badha hua tha. Us aadmi ne aapni bachi-kuchi takat lga kar ye thapped us mote ko mara tha.
Aapne thapped pada dekh kar us mote ko bahot gussa aane lga. Vo gusse mai us aadmi ko marne ke liye aage badta hi hai ke piche se ek awaz aati hai

Ruk Ja majnu

Ye awaz darvaje ki traf se aayi thi jha par koi khada tha.

aawaz sun ke vo Mota aadmi(majnu) vohi rok jata hai.or side mai khada ho jata hai.
Ab vo aadmi jo darvaje ke paas khada tha vo chal kar aage aane lga or us majnu ke Paas Aa kar bolne lga

Aadmi- kyu majnu tere ko bola tha na is ko kuch bhi nhi hona chaiye. Fir bhi tu ise marne wala tha,

Is baat par Majnu kuch nhi bola

Aadmi- majnu tujhe itna smjh nhi aaya ke vo itne dino se bandha hai chalega kaise (fir us bandhe aadmi ki traf dekh kar bola)

Aadmi- chal majnu tu ja mujhe is se kuch baat karni hai.

Fir majnu bahar ki traf chala jata hai par vo jate samhe bhi bandhe aadmi ko aise dekh rha tha jaise abhi usko kacha hi kha jayega. Us mote ke jane ke Baad vo aadmi bola

Aadmi- kyu aryan shahab koi takleef to nhi ho rhi na yha

(Ji ha us bandhe aadmi ka Naam aryan tha)

US aadmi ki is baat par aryan kuch nhi kaheta. Aryan ko kuch na kahete dekh kar vo aadmi fir se kaheta hai

Aadmi- are aayan shahab kuch to boliye, chaliye chodiye lgta hai aapka mood nhi hai hamse baat krne ka chalo ham hi bta dete hai ke ham yha kyu aaye hai. Dekh bhai hamne jo sab tumse kha tha karne ko vo to tumne kiya bas ab akhiri kaam bacha hai Tumhare signature un papers par. Ha manta hu hamne tumhe bahot takleef di hai par ab chinta mat kro tumhari takleef khatam hone wali hai. Kyuki kal vo papers aane wale hai or ab vo property puri tarah se tumhare Naam par hai. Tumhari behan ne signature jo kr diye un par. Ab bas aap ham par ek ahsaan kar dijiye bas kal aap un papers par signature kar dena. Uske Baad aap bhi free or ham bhi free.

Inta bol kar vo aadmi aryan ki traf dekhna lga. Jo ki abhi kuch bol nhi hai tha. Shayad vo bolna nhi chatha tha ya fir usme bolne jitni takat nhi bachi thi.(kher hame to ye nhi pta)

Jab us aadmi ko Aapni baat ka javab nhi milta to vo smjh jata hai ke ye abhi bolne ki satithi mai nhi hai is liye vo usse bina bandhe hi us basement se bahar chala jata hai or bahar se us darvaje par tala lga kar chala jata hai.

Vaise aryan ko bandhne ki jaroorat bhi nhi thi kyuki basement mai koi khidki to thi nhi or aryan ki halat bhi achi nhi thi.

Dusri traf

Maine or payal ne ye plan bna liye tha ke kal hame kya karna hai. Ham ab bhi chat par hi the. Ham dono mai plan discuss hone ke Baad payal ne mujhse kha

Payal- karan ji mujhe lgta hai ab hame niche chalna chaiye. Aaj sara din hamne koi lecture nhi attend kiya.

Mai- aap thik khe rhi hai payal par mujhe lgta hai abhi niche jana thik nhi hoga kyuki abhi jo lecture chal rha hai usko khatam hone mai abhi 20 min baki hai. Ham next lecture attend krege

Payal- ji thik hai

Fir ham kuch der chup rhe. Par shayad mujhse ye chupi bardasht nhi hui or mai bola

Mai- payal ji vaise aapne kabhi mujhe aapne bareme bataya hi nhi

Payal karan ka ye sawal sun kar ghbra jati hai. Fir bhi himmat karke bolti hai

Payal- boliye karan ji aapko kya jaanna hai

Karan- vaise mujhe jayada kuch nhi puchna bas aapki life ke bareme jaanna hai.

Payal- karan ji meri life mai kuch jayada janne ko nhi hai. Bachpan se hi akeli rhi hu kabhi koi dost nhi mila. Sara din ghar par hi rehti thi. Par ha study mai main bahot achi thi.

Ye study sun kar maine dimag ki batti jal jati hai

Mai- vaise payal aap bahot smart ho study mai fir aap section C mai kyu ho aapko to section A mai hona chahiye tha

Ye sawal sun kar payal thoda uncomfortable ho jati hai fir bhi bolti hai

Payal- vo mujhe nhi pta karan ji

Karan (heraan ho kar) ye aap kya khe rhi hai payal aapko nhi pta. Vaise aapko iske khilaaf shikayat karni chaiye thi principal sir ko

Payal- nhi karan ji mujhe in sab baato mai nhi uljana. Mai jo bhi section main hu mai vha study Kar lu gi vaise bhi mai class Mai study nhi karti mai self study par jyada bishwas karti hu

Mai- jaisi aapki aicha payal

Payal- vaise aap bataiye aapko life ke bareme. Yha aane se Pehle kha rhete the aap kya krte the

Mai Sach to nhi bta skta tha par ab tak iske bareme kya bolna hai ye maine soch liya tha

Mai- mai ****** shahar se hu isse pehle mai study ke sath sath aapne papa ki help bhi karta tha kheto main

Payal- kya aapke papa kisaan hai

Mai- hanji

Payal- good mujhe bahot ache lagte hai kisaan kyuki inke dil bahot saaf hote hai.

Mai- aapne Sach kaha payal gareeb ka dil hamesha se hi ameer se bada rha hai. Isko smjana ke liye mai aapko ek udharan deta hu jaise aapne dekha hoga jab ham sabji wale se kuch sabji kharidte hai to vo hame kuch dhaniya bhi free mai de deta hai par jab ham kisi bade shopping mall mai shopping krte hai to vo mall wale hamse us bag ke paise bhi le lete hai jo hame saman sath le Jane ke liye dete hai

Payal- aapne thik kha karan ji

In sab baato mai hamare 20 min nikal jate hai.

Mai- vaise payal ji ab hame chalna chaiye next lecture shuru hone hi wala hai. Ye na ho ke in sab baato mai ye lecture bhi nikal jaye

Payal- to chaliye karan ji

Fir ham dono niche class ki traf Jane lgte hai. Abhi ham dono class ke andar ki traf Jane hi lge the ke darvaje se andar jate samhe mai kisi se takra gya. Jab maine dekha ye kon hai to pta chala ki vivek hai. Uske face par mujhe thoda gussa najar aaya. Abhi vo kuch bolne hi wala tha ke piche se teacher ki awaz aayi jo abhi class mai enter hone wale the darvaje par khade the

Teacher- ye sab kya chal rha hai cholo sab Aapni Aapni jgah par

Ham tino- sorry sir

Fir ham Timo Aapni seat par aa kar Beth gye. Fir shuru ho jati hai class. Isi tarah hamari class chslti rehti hai. Sari classes khatam hone ke baad mai vivek ko sath le kar chal diya hostel ki traf.
Raste mai vivek ne mujhse koi baat nhi ki. Mujhe bhi lga ke shayad vivek mujhse gussa hai. Maine socha hostel pahunch kar isse baat kroga. Par jab ham hostel pahunche to pta chala ke arjun or akshay ne movie ka plan bnaya tha raat kar. Iski bja se ham sab shaam ko hi nikal gye movie ke liye. Kuch samhe to ham sab ghume fir movie ka time hone ke Baad movie Dekhi. Is bech maine bahot koshish ki vivek se baat krne ki par koi moka hi nhi mila jab ham dono bast kar ske.
Isi trah movie dekh kar ham sab hostel aa gye vaise hostel pahunch kar pta chala ke hostel ke darvaje band ho gye hai to hame diwar ke kud kar Jana pada
Fir ham aapne room Mai pahunch gye ham dab itna thak gye the ke bed par girte hi so gye. Aaj to vivek ne vidhya se bhi baat nhi ki iske liye to mai uski daad donga.

Chaliye ab inhe sone dete hai or ham bhi sone chalte hai


Good night

Nice update