aapki writing bahut acchhi hai brother, aapne story me conversation behad shaandar likha hai, update ki length bhi theek hai, aapne story me shabdon ka chunav bahut salikhe se kiya hai, aapki story me woh baat hai jo reader ko story se baandhe rakhti hai, aapki kahani ki sabse acchhi baat jo mujhe lagti hai woh ye hai ki aapne directly seduction par focus nahi kiya hai balki indirectly kuch aise scenes create kiye hain jo seduction par focus hote hain which was i one the best part of this story.... Let's see aage kya hota hai....hope tarun apni family ko bacha lega.... Waiting for the next update