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Incest Kashish Pyar ki

Which female character you want to lead the story ?

  • Pihu

    Votes: 69 31.1%
  • Chinki

    Votes: 46 20.7%
  • Shanti

    Votes: 126 56.8%
  • Sarika

    Votes: 29 13.1%
  • Taniya

    Votes: 29 13.1%
  • Others

    Votes: 10 4.5%
  • Mahi

    Votes: 17 7.7%
  • Shikha

    Votes: 12 5.4%

  • Total voters
    222

Tanmay20

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Friends ..... I have some problems so I am temporarily closing the story and it will be resumed after one or two months .... I promise to you that it will be completed

Thanks for supporting me till now ...
 
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nice update..!!
tarun ne sahi time pe jaag ke apni maa, buva aur behen ko bachaya aur tino aurton ne bhi achhese dhulayi ki unn choron ki..akhir me sabko tarun ne maar hi diya..!! shanti ko shekhar ki parwah ho rahi hai aur woh waha masti kar raha hai secretary ke sath..!! ab toh tino aurten tarun pe full fida honewali hai..!! dekhte hai yeh holi tarun ki zindagi kaise badalti hai..!!
Thanks Bhai
Jab Tak shekhar ka Sach kisi ke samne nahi aata tab Tak to wo Shanti ki Nazar me acha hi rahega na
Let's see Tarun ki jindagi me ye Holi kuch changes lati hai ya nahi
 

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Update 7

Ab Tak apne padha


Uske baad sabhi sath me breakfast karte Hain aur fir sab ready hokar car se apne gaanv ki taraf nikal jate Hain ... Tarun kafi excited tha gaanv Jane ke liye iss baat se anjan ki iss Safar se uski life me kafi changes aane wali hai ...

Aage

Wo log 10:30 am par Ghar se nikalte Hain ...Unke ghar Shimla se unke gaanv Jane me agar average speed se Chala jaye to lagbhag 14 - 15 ghante lagte the ...

Starting me Tarun car ki driving seat par baitha tha aur chinki uske sath wali seat par baithi thi aur apni chuhalbaji se wo sabhi ka man lagane ki kosis Kar rahi thi ... Charo me se Chinki ko chhod Kar Baki sabko car drive karna ache se aata tha ..

Dopahar ke wakt lunch ke liye wo ek chhote se hotel par rukte Hain aur wahi par kuch khana khakar thodi der rest karte Hain ... Aur fir se apne Safar par nikal padte Hain ... Hotel se nikalte - nikalte 4 baj jate Hain ...

Abki baar Tarun ki jagah par driving seat par Shanti baith jati hai aur Tarun peechhe wali seat par apni bahan chinki ke sath baith jata hai .. Paas ke hi ek petrol pump par wo Tanki full karwa lete Hain Taki raste me koi dikkat na ho .. Ab chinki ko neend aane lagi thi to wo Tarun ke kandhe par sar rakh Kar so jati hai ....

Unki Gaadi apni raftar se Chali ja rahi thi ab wakt ke sath dheere dheere andhera ghirne laga tha ...

9 baje ke lagbhag ek hotel dekh Kar wo Gaadi rok dete Hain .. Tarun apni bahan chinki ke gaalo par ek chhota sa kiss karke bade pyar se uthata hai aur fir sabhi sath me dinner karne chale jate Hain ...

Dinner ke baad driving ka jimma Sarika uthati hai aur Shanti ko peechhe bhej deti hai aur chinki aage aa jati hai kyunki lagbhag uske neend ka quota pura ho chuka tha ...

Ab Tarun ko bhi neend aane lagi thi to wo bhi jhapkiya lene laga tha ... Uski maa uska sar apne God me rakh Kar usko thoda so Jane ko kahti hai kyunki agli Bari uski hi thi Gaadi drive karne ..

Tarun jab apna sar Shanti ki God me rakhta hai to apni maa ke kapdo se aati bheeni bheeni khusboo badi achi lagti hai aur lagatar uski maa uske baalo me ungliya fira rahi thi jisse turant hi wo neend ki waadiyo me kho jata hai ... Shanti kabhi uske baalo me pyar se ungliya firati to kabhi uske gaalo ko Chum Kar apni Mamta ka ijhar karti ...

Shanti (man me) : kitna pyara hai Mera bachcha ... Usko sote huye dekh to lagta hai ki duniya bhar ki masumiyat iske andar samati huyi ... Kaash mere bachche ko Meri bhi Umar lag jaye .. Iski jindagi me kabhi koi taklif na aaye ...

Ab Sahar khatm ho chuka tha aur unki Gaadi ek ghaati me pravesh Kar chuki thi ... Sadak ke ek taraf khai thi to dusri taraf. Ghana jungle ... pura Rasta bilkul sunsan tha aur jhinguro ki aati awaz me to jungle waise hi khaufnak lag raha tha ... Ruk ruk Kar siyar ke rone ki awazein bhi aa rahi thi ...


Unki Gaadi sannate ko chirti huyi apne manjil ki taraf badhi ja rahi thi ki achanak se Sarika break laga deti hai .... Achanak break lagne se Tarun ki neend bhi khul jati hai aur wo uth Kar baith jata hai ..

Tarun : Kya hua bua ji sab thik to hai na ...

Sarika : wo beta samne dekho lagta hai kisi ne raste me pathar rakh Diya hai usko hateye Bina Gaadi aage kaise jayegi ... Agar hamari Gaadi chhoti hoti to kisi tarah side se nikal sakti thi aur taraf khai bhi hai to jyada side se nikalne me bhi khatra hai ...

Tarun : thik hai bua ji main ja Kar usko hata Kar aata hu ... Na Jane kisne ye badmasi ki hai ...

Shanti : nahi beta ye kisi ki chal ho sakti hai tum akele mat Jana ...

Tarun : Kya maa ab ISS veerane me kaun hoga waise bhi agar ye pathar nahi hatega to Gaadi aage kaise jayegi .. ap tension na lo main Yu Gaya aur yu aaya .. ap log Gaadi se mat utarna ..

Aur Tarun Gaadi se utar Kar pathar ko hatane lagta hai par pathar bhari tha aur kafi jaddo jehad Karne ke baad finally wo pathar ko road ke kinare Karne me safal ho hi jata hai ki tabhi uske kaano me apni bahan ki awaz sunayi deti hai ...

" bhaiyu peechhe dekho .."

Abhi wo chinki ki awaz sun peeche mudne hi Wala tha ki usse pahle hi uske sar par kisi ne jor se waar Kar Diya jisse uski palke bojhil hone lagi aur wo behoshi ke aalam me Jane laga ....

Kuch der baad kisi ke jor - jor se hasne ki awaz sun Kar uski aankhein khulne lagti hai ... Abhi usko sab kuch dhundhla dhundhla najar aa raha tha ... Par apni bahan chinki ke rone ki awaz sun wo dheere dheere se hosh me aane ki kosis Karne lagta hai ... Uske sar se khun bah raha tha aur uske hath bhi rassi se bandhe huye the aur muh par kapda bhi bandha hua tha ...

Car ki aur Chand ki mili - juli roshni me dheere dheere uski aankhein abhyashth ho rahi thi ...

Uski maa bua aur chinki teeno Gaadi se Bahar the aur 5 nakabposh log unhe ghere khade the ...

Shanti : dekhiye ap logo ko Jo bhi Lena hai le lijiye par hame chhod dijiye ... Ye mere sare jewar - jewarat aur paise kaudi sab kuch main apne man se Dene ko taiyar hu ... Please hame Jane dijiye ...

Pahla admi : wo to tumhe Dena hi hai Meri Rani ab marji se do ya jor jabardasti se ...

Sarika : Haan ab to ho Gaya na ap log ka ap sare paise aur gahne lekar chale jaiye aur hame baksh dijiye ..

Dusra admi : yaar kaluwa hamne aj Tak itni sari ladkiya aur aurte Dekhi Hain par aisa karara maal to aj Tak nahi dekha to main soch raha hu kyu na pahle inko ache se ragad ragad Kar apni pyas bujha le aur uske baad inke paise lekar inhi ke Gaadi se chalte bane ...

Tisra admi : haan be kadwe baat to tune sau take ki Kari hai ... Ye laal saree wali (Sarika) item to saale uska Kya naam hai haan sushmitwa ke tarah lagti hai be lambi surahidar gardan aur badi badi chuchi aur gadraya hua gaand ... Lagta hai iska marad iske gaand me hi din raat ghusa rahta hoga ...

Shanti : ye Kya behuda bhasa me snap sanap bake ja rahe ho chup chap paise lo aur niklo yaha se warna thik nahi hoga ... Dekho ham log Sharif Ghar ki mahilaye Hain hame aisi behudi bhasha pasand nahi ...

Pahla : yaar badi teekhi Mirchi jaan padti hai isko to pahle main hi chodunga ... Kya kaatil jawani hai Meri jaan ki ... Iski sari sharafat iske bhosde se na nikala to Mera naam kaluwa nahi ...

Chinki : dekho tum log apni aukat se jyada bol rahe ho ... Tum log mere bhaiya ko nahi jante ho wo tumhe khade khade chir denge ..

Chautha admi : yaar mujhe to ye chhamiya hi chahiye dekhne se lagta hai ki bilkul Kora kagaj hogi iske upar likhayi Karne me bada Maza aayega ... Tera Bhai to ab bachane aane se raha jab Tak wo hosh me aayega tab Tak ham yaha se ja chuke honge fir silwati rahna apne ...

Abhi chauthe wali ki baat Puri bhi nahi huyi thi ki panchwa admi bol padta hai Jo ab Tak bilkul shan't khada tha ..

Panchwa admi : Abe ganduwo bas khade khade bakchodi hi karte rahoge ya Inka raspaan bhi karoge pahle saaliyo ko tabiyat se ragadte Hain aur uske baad to jannat hi jannat hogi ... Mera Dil to ye gulabi saree wali gulabi par aa Gaya hai ...

Aur fir Pancho admi teeno ke kapdo ko nochne khasotne me lag jate Hain ... Ab panch Jawan mardo ke samne 2 aurte aur ek ladki Kya Kar sakte the .... Pancho hawashi darindo ne ab Tak Shanti aur Sarika ki saree ko unke jism se alag Kar Diya tha ... Ab blouse me kase unke bade bade mammo ko dekh unke muh se laar tapakne lagti hai ... wo log apne hatho apne ubharo ko dhakne ki nakam kosis Kar rahi thi ..

Idhar teeno maa beti ki to jaise jaan hi halak Tak aa gayi thi ... Shanti aur Sarika ko apni parwah to nahi thi par apni ladli chhoti bachchi ki chinta unhe sataye ja rahi thi .... Unhe ye bhi chinta thibki na Jane Tarun ko kitnna gehra chot laga hai aur wo kis haal me hoga ... Wo uparwale se man hi man fariyad Karne lagti Hain ki wo kisi tarah se unki ijjat baksh de ya to unki jaan hi le le ...

wo log hawas me itne andhe ho chuke the ki unhe koi hosh hawas hi nahi rahta ... Wo darinde apni kaam vasna ki aag me bilkul andhe ho chuke the aur janwaro jaisa bartav Kar rahe the ....



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Kya Tarun apni family ko bacha payega aur agar haan to kaise ????

ya fir wo wahsi darinde uski maa, bahan aur bua ki ijjat ko uske samne hi taar - taar Kar denge ??????

Wo jis Khushi ki talash me Safar par nikle the wo kahi matam me to nahi badal jayega?????


Janne ke liye padhte rahe ...
Achche khase safer ki maa bahen kerdi inn gundo n or yeh gunde h kon inki mansa sirf izzat loot ker paise leke jaan h yaa yeh kisi k kehne per aisa ker rehe h dekhte h Tarun kich ker payega ya nahi
Badhiya update bhai
 

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Achche khase safer ki maa bahen kerdi inn gundo n or yeh gunde h kon inki mansa sirf izzat loot ker paise leke jaan h yaa yeh kisi k kehne per aisa ker rehe h dekhte h Tarun kich ker payega ya nahi
Badhiya update bhai
Thanks Bhai
Suruat me to unki mansha sirf unhe lutne ki thi par baad me wo neeche wale dimag se sochna chalu Kar dete Hain aur sab kuch pane ke chakkar me nikal liye

Keep reading bhai
 

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Update 8

Ab Tak apne padha

wo log hawas me itne andhe ho chuke the ki unhe koi hosh hawas hi nahi rahta ... Wo darinde apni kaam vasna ki aag me bilkul andhe ho chuke the aur janwaro jaisa bartav Kar rahe the ....


Aage


"Bas bahut hua .. aj tum haramiyo ki maut tumhe yaha khinch layi hai .. Jara pichhe mud Kar apni maut se to ru-b-ru ho lo "

Jaise hi sabhi ne ye kadakdar awaz suni to awaz ki disha me dekhne lagte Hain ye koi aur nahi Tarun tha jiski aankho me to jaise angare jal rahe the aur wo gusse me kaanp raha tha ..

Jo gunda chinki ke sath badtamizi Kar raha tha wo bakiyo se thoda aage tha usne jaldi se chaku nikal Kar Tarun par waar karna chaha par tarun bend ho jata hai aur uske pet me ek jor ka ghusa Marta hai jisse wo apna pet pakadkar jameen par let jata hai uski to jaan hi halak me aa gayi thi

Apne sathi ki aisi dardnak halat dekh 2 gunde ek sath aage badhte Hain ... Idhar ab Tak dono aurte bhi sambhal chuki thi aur samne Tarun ko aise bekhauf ladte dekh unka bhi Josh badh jata hai ....

Baki ke Do gunde unke pass to the par unka dhyan Tarun ki taraf hi tha ishi baat ka fayda utha Kar dono dheere dheere gundo ke faile huye pairo ke beech apna paon adjust Kar jor se apne ghutno ka waar unke Ando par Kar deti Hain .... Jiska result ye hota hai ki wo dono bhi apne Ando ko pakad Kar jameen par let Kar karah rahe hote Hain ...

Jo gunde Tarun ki taraf badh rahe the unhone bhi apna chaku nikal liya tha aur dono ek hi baar Tarun par chaku chalate Hain ek se to Tarun kisi tarah Bach jata hai par dusre wale ki chaku uske baanh ko chhuti huyi nikal jati hai jiske parinamswarup uske muh se ek dardnak chikh nikal jati hai ...

Tarun ek step peeche jakar ek jabardast sa kick maar deta hai jisse ek gunda fir ja girta hai ab sirf dusra Wala gunda hi khada tha sahi salamat awastha me ....

Idhar ab chinki, Shanti aur sarika ne bhi morcha sambhal liya tha aur jameen par pade huye gundo ke upar apne sandalo se waar Kar apne dabe huye gusse ko Bahar nikal rahi thi .... Chinki ke sath Jo gunda badtamizi Kar raha tha uske hatho se chaku chhitak Kar dur ja gira tha chinki chaku ko lekar uss gunde ki dono aankho me bari Bari se chaku ghop deti hai jisse wo tadap Kar jor jor se dard se chikhe ja raha tha ...

Tarun ne ek punch uss gunde ke chaku wale hath par maar Diya jisse uske hath se chaku chhitak Kar dur ja gira ... Ab Tarun ne furti dikhate huye uss gunde ki gardan daboch li aur pakad Kar jor se ghuma diye jisse uski gardan tut jati hai aur Chand lamho me hi uske pran pakheru udd jate Hain ...

Kuch der pahle Jo log hawas ka nanga nach Karne par tule the ab wo bilkul thande pad chuke the ...

Tarun ne sabhi gundo ko ghaseet Kar khai me gira diye ... Chunki khai kafi gehri thi isliye upar se dikhne ke koi chances nahi the ... Aur Baki ka kaam to jungli janwaro me Kar hi Dena tha unhe bin mange hi bhar pet khane ko Jo Milne Wala tha ...

Ab Tak dono mahilao ne bhi apni saree pahan li thi ...

Chinki bhag Kar aati hai aur Tarun ke Gale lag jati hai ...

Chinki (sisakte huye) : bhaiyu agar ain wakt par tumhe hosh na aata to na Jane hamara Kya hota ...

Tarun : kuch hua to nahi na Meri cutie pie ... Main apni gudiya ko kaise kuch hone deta ...

Sarika : beta tumhare hath to bandhe huye the aur tumhare sar par chot bhi lagi thi to kaise tumne ye sab Kiya ..

Tarun : bua ji unhe laga hoga ki main behosh hu isliye unhone shayad Mera hath jor se nahi bandha hoga aur unka irada sirf hame lutna raha hoga par kahte Hain na ki lalach buri Bala hai aur wo apne lalach ke wajah se apni jaan se bhi chale Gaye .. chaliye ab jaldi jaldi Gaadi me baithiye ... Hame jald se jald yaha se nikalna chahiye ... Baki ke sawal jawab ab raste me karte rahiyega ...

Thode hi der me sabhi Gaadi me baith jate Hain ... Chinki ne Tarun ki baanh par apna dupatta bandh Diya tha ... Jabki Shanti Tarun ke sar par first aid kit se cream nikal Kar uske sar par lage chot me laga rahi thi ...

Thodi der me hi unki Gaadi ghaati ko cross Kar chuki thi aur wo ek city me enter ho rahe the ab raat ka andhera bhi dheere dheere chhat raha tha aur nayi subeh unka intjar Kar rahi thi ..

Wo ek hospital ke paas Gaadi rokte Hain Jahan Tarun ki malham Patti hoti hai aur wo fir se Gaadi me baithe hote Hain ... Teeno washroom jakar apna huliya thik Kar leti hai .... Thodi der me sabhi fir se Gaadi me the ...

Shanti : beta ek baat Meri samajh me nahi aaya ham log itne der uss jungle me rahe par ek bhi Gaadi waha se pass nahi huyi ..

Tarun : ham uss ghati me lagbhag 1 - 2 baje raat ko pahunche the aur uss wakt shayad hi koi Gaadi waha se gujarti ho aur ye ittefak bhi ho sakta hai ... Ab chhodo uss baat ko aur usko ek bura sapna samajh Kar bhul jao .. Aur ham yaha jis kaam se aaye Hain bas usko enjoy karo ...

Shanti : kaise bhul jaun beta ab bhi wo sare scene mere aankho ke aage tair jate Hain ... Agar koi anhoni ho jati to main tumhare papa aur Baki ke gharwalo ko Kya jawab Deti ..

Sarika : bhabhi ab uss wakiye ko yaad Kar ke Kya fayda ... Usko soch Kar Gam ke siwaye aur kuch nahi milega ...

Chinki : haan mumma bua aur bhaiyu sahi kah rahe socho ki ye sab kuch hua hi nahi aur waha iss baat ka koi jikra bhi mat karna ...

Uske baad koi kuch bhi nahi bolta ... Ek dhabe ke paas pahunch Kar sabhi chai pite Hain aur fir 9:30 am Tak wo apne gaanv wale Ghar ke samne khade the ...

Gaadi ki horn ki awaz sun Kar Tarun ke dada Ghar ke Bahar nikalte Hain aur samne sabko dekh fule nahi samate ..

Tarun aur Baki sabhi log unke Pao ko chhu Kar aashirwad lete Hain ... Iss umra me bhi Tarun ke dada ji kafi fit aur healthy lagte the aur unki kadakdar muchh ke to Kya hi kahne ..

Rajesh (Tarun ke dada) : beta tumhare sar aur baanh me ye Patti kaisi ..

Tarun : dada ji wo Kya hai na ki Gaadi chalate chalate achanak se jhapki lag gayi to sar steering se takra gayi thi bakiyo ne to seat belt lagaya huwa tha Maine hi nahi lagaya tha tha isliye aisa ho Gaya ... Ek aid hai na ki najar hati to durghatna ghati wahi wali baat hai ...

Rajesh : beta dhyan se chalana chahiye tha na .. khair Chalo andar ..

Sabhi ghar ke andar aate Hain ...

Chinki : dada ji Meri pyari dadi najar nahi aa rahi kaha Hain wo ..

Rajesh : aur kaha hogi bas jab dekho tab bhagwan ko rishwat Dene me lagi rahti hai .. puja ghar me hi hogi wo jao mil lo warna mere se baad me shikayat karegi ki Maine uski ladli ko usse Milne nahi Diya ...

Ab thoda Tarun ke gaanv wale Ghar ke bare me thoda jaan lete Hain ..


Tarun ka gaanv ka Ghar jyada aalisan to nahi tha par uske andar lagbhag sukh suwidha ki har chije maujud thi ... Ghar to do manzila hi tha par room kafi bade bade aur unche unche the ... Ground floor par 4 room the jisme se ek room me Tarun ke dada dadi rahte the ... Ek room ko unhone store room banaya hua tha, ek guest room tha to ek room ko dadi ji ne puja room me tabdil Kiya hua tha ... Ghar me washroom sirf do the ek ground floor par to dusra first floor par ... Kitchen bhi ground floor par hi tha ...

First floor ke rooms me jyadatar tale hi lage hote the wo tabhi use me aate the jab Ghar me koi mehman ya Tarun ya bua ki family aati thi ... Second floor ke upar me ek sapat chhat thi jiske Charo taraf railing di huyi thi aur bich me ek room bana hua tha ... Bachpan me Tarun aur Ghar ke bachche wahi cricket ya badminton khela karte the ..

Kuch der me chinki apni dadi ko puja room se Bahar lekar aati hai .. Dadi ji sabki ko pyar se aashirwad deti hai aur Tarun ki halat dekh usse uska karan puchti hai to Tarun wahi sab Bata deta hai Jo usne apne dada ji ko bataya tha ..

Dada ji : are bhagyawan ye bheema kaha Chala Gaya ye nahi ki Ghar me mere bachche aaye Hain to koi khatirdari kare ...

Bheema : ye unke ghar ka naukar hai. Age 45 years. Sareer se hatta katta hai ... Uski wife kajri bhi Tarun ke Ghar kitchen ka Sara kaam kiya karti hai ... Bheema unka sabse wafadar admi hai Jo ki unke kheti Bari se lekar Ghar ke sare bade chhote kaam dekha karta hai ... Uski ek beti hai Jo kabhi kabhar apni maa ke sath aa Kar unke Ghar ka kaam kiya karti hai aur wo log Tarun ke ghar ke paas hi ek Ghar me rahte the Jo ki Tarun ke dada ne hi unke liye banwaya tha ..

Dadi ji Bahar nikal Kar usko awaz deti hai awaz sunte hi ek aurat daudti huyi unke pass aati hai .. uska rang genhuwa tha aur sareer average type ka tha ... Andar aate hi jaise hi uski najar sabke upar padti hai wo Khushi se chehak uthti hai ...

Kajri : are Malkin ap log kab aaye ...

Shanti aur Sarika : bas Abhi hi aaye Hain ..

Kajri : (chinki ko dekhte huye) ye to Meri gudiya Rani hai aur (Tarun ki taraf dekhte huye) ye to chhote Malik hi Hain na ...

Tarun : kaki Maine kitni baar apse kaha hai ki main koi Malik walik nahi hu apke bete jaisa hu to beta hi kaha karo ya naam se bula liya karo ...

Kajri : ji beta ji aage se galti nahi hogi ... Ap log baithiye main Abhi turant kuch khane pine ka lekar aati hu ...

Thode hi der me sabhi sath me chai pi rahe the ...

Shanti : kajri .. laajo kaha hai dikh nahi rahi ...

Kajri : chhoti Malkin wo apne bapu ko khana pahunchane gayi hai khet me aati hi hogi ...

Dadi ji : beta pihu aur taniya nahi aayi sath, na hi damad ji ya shekhar dikh raha ..

Chinki : Dadi ji Jo yaha aayi hai uski to fikra hi nahi Apko aur Jo nahi aaye unke liye puchhe ja rahe ... Tabhi to main kahti hu ki kisi ko kadra hi nahi Meri unhuhuhu .. jao main apse baat nahi karungi ap bhi unn khadus dadiyo jaisi nikli mujhe apse to ye ummid nahi thi :beee: ..

Sarika : lo maa dekh lo apni ladli ko
.. ab to ye Ruth gayi manao isko ...

Shanti : nahi maa ji ye sab iski nautanki hai apke hi laad Pyar ne isko bigad Diya hai ...

Dada ji : kaun kahta hai Meri bachchi bigad gayi hai ye to kitni pyari hai ...

Chinki : thank you dada ji ek ap hi to ho jinhe Meri kadra hai ... Ab Dadi se maine katti Kar li hai ... Dada ji Holi me main apke group se hu ...

Dadi ji : ye ladki bilkul nahi badli hai ab bhi wahi bachpana par yehi to iski khasiyat hai ...

Tarun : Dadi ji pihu Didi to sasural me hi manayengi Holi aur taniya aur Baki sabhi log Holi ke pahle wale din aa jayenge ..

Dadi ji : kaash pihu bhi sath hoti to kitna Maza aata ...


Tarun ke dada ji ne 2 - 3 din pahle hi unke liye first floor ke rooms ki saaf safayi karwa di thi to unlogo ne pahle apne saman set kiye aur sath me breakfast karke sone chale gaye kyunki unka Safar hi kafi exhaustive tha to rest karna bhi to behad jaruri tha ...
Gundo n kabhi socha hi nahi hoga ki unke saath aisa ho jayega aaye thai lootne or qismat dekho apni jaan hi lita bethe or aise longo k saath hona bhi yahi chahiye tha
Chinki jaha bhi jaati h chaa jati h
Badhiya lovely update bhai
 

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Update 8

Ab Tak apne padha

wo log hawas me itne andhe ho chuke the ki unhe koi hosh hawas hi nahi rahta ... Wo darinde apni kaam vasna ki aag me bilkul andhe ho chuke the aur janwaro jaisa bartav Kar rahe the ....


Aage


"Bas bahut hua .. aj tum haramiyo ki maut tumhe yaha khinch layi hai .. Jara pichhe mud Kar apni maut se to ru-b-ru ho lo "

Jaise hi sabhi ne ye kadakdar awaz suni to awaz ki disha me dekhne lagte Hain ye koi aur nahi Tarun tha jiski aankho me to jaise angare jal rahe the aur wo gusse me kaanp raha tha ..

Jo gunda chinki ke sath badtamizi Kar raha tha wo bakiyo se thoda aage tha usne jaldi se chaku nikal Kar Tarun par waar karna chaha par tarun bend ho jata hai aur uske pet me ek jor ka ghusa Marta hai jisse wo apna pet pakadkar jameen par let jata hai uski to jaan hi halak me aa gayi thi

Apne sathi ki aisi dardnak halat dekh 2 gunde ek sath aage badhte Hain ... Idhar ab Tak dono aurte bhi sambhal chuki thi aur samne Tarun ko aise bekhauf ladte dekh unka bhi Josh badh jata hai ....

Baki ke Do gunde unke pass to the par unka dhyan Tarun ki taraf hi tha ishi baat ka fayda utha Kar dono dheere dheere gundo ke faile huye pairo ke beech apna paon adjust Kar jor se apne ghutno ka waar unke Ando par Kar deti Hain .... Jiska result ye hota hai ki wo dono bhi apne Ando ko pakad Kar jameen par let Kar karah rahe hote Hain ...

Jo gunde Tarun ki taraf badh rahe the unhone bhi apna chaku nikal liya tha aur dono ek hi baar Tarun par chaku chalate Hain ek se to Tarun kisi tarah Bach jata hai par dusre wale ki chaku uske baanh ko chhuti huyi nikal jati hai jiske parinamswarup uske muh se ek dardnak chikh nikal jati hai ...

Tarun ek step peeche jakar ek jabardast sa kick maar deta hai jisse ek gunda fir ja girta hai ab sirf dusra Wala gunda hi khada tha sahi salamat awastha me ....

Idhar ab chinki, Shanti aur sarika ne bhi morcha sambhal liya tha aur jameen par pade huye gundo ke upar apne sandalo se waar Kar apne dabe huye gusse ko Bahar nikal rahi thi .... Chinki ke sath Jo gunda badtamizi Kar raha tha uske hatho se chaku chhitak Kar dur ja gira tha chinki chaku ko lekar uss gunde ki dono aankho me bari Bari se chaku ghop deti hai jisse wo tadap Kar jor jor se dard se chikhe ja raha tha ...

Tarun ne ek punch uss gunde ke chaku wale hath par maar Diya jisse uske hath se chaku chhitak Kar dur ja gira ... Ab Tarun ne furti dikhate huye uss gunde ki gardan daboch li aur pakad Kar jor se ghuma diye jisse uski gardan tut jati hai aur Chand lamho me hi uske pran pakheru udd jate Hain ...

Kuch der pahle Jo log hawas ka nanga nach Karne par tule the ab wo bilkul thande pad chuke the ...

Tarun ne sabhi gundo ko ghaseet Kar khai me gira diye ... Chunki khai kafi gehri thi isliye upar se dikhne ke koi chances nahi the ... Aur Baki ka kaam to jungli janwaro me Kar hi Dena tha unhe bin mange hi bhar pet khane ko Jo Milne Wala tha ...

Ab Tak dono mahilao ne bhi apni saree pahan li thi ...

Chinki bhag Kar aati hai aur Tarun ke Gale lag jati hai ...

Chinki (sisakte huye) : bhaiyu agar ain wakt par tumhe hosh na aata to na Jane hamara Kya hota ...

Tarun : kuch hua to nahi na Meri cutie pie ... Main apni gudiya ko kaise kuch hone deta ...

Sarika : beta tumhare hath to bandhe huye the aur tumhare sar par chot bhi lagi thi to kaise tumne ye sab Kiya ..

Tarun : bua ji unhe laga hoga ki main behosh hu isliye unhone shayad Mera hath jor se nahi bandha hoga aur unka irada sirf hame lutna raha hoga par kahte Hain na ki lalach buri Bala hai aur wo apne lalach ke wajah se apni jaan se bhi chale Gaye .. chaliye ab jaldi jaldi Gaadi me baithiye ... Hame jald se jald yaha se nikalna chahiye ... Baki ke sawal jawab ab raste me karte rahiyega ...

Thode hi der me sabhi Gaadi me baith jate Hain ... Chinki ne Tarun ki baanh par apna dupatta bandh Diya tha ... Jabki Shanti Tarun ke sar par first aid kit se cream nikal Kar uske sar par lage chot me laga rahi thi ...

Thodi der me hi unki Gaadi ghaati ko cross Kar chuki thi aur wo ek city me enter ho rahe the ab raat ka andhera bhi dheere dheere chhat raha tha aur nayi subeh unka intjar Kar rahi thi ..

Wo ek hospital ke paas Gaadi rokte Hain Jahan Tarun ki malham Patti hoti hai aur wo fir se Gaadi me baithe hote Hain ... Teeno washroom jakar apna huliya thik Kar leti hai .... Thodi der me sabhi fir se Gaadi me the ...

Shanti : beta ek baat Meri samajh me nahi aaya ham log itne der uss jungle me rahe par ek bhi Gaadi waha se pass nahi huyi ..

Tarun : ham uss ghati me lagbhag 1 - 2 baje raat ko pahunche the aur uss wakt shayad hi koi Gaadi waha se gujarti ho aur ye ittefak bhi ho sakta hai ... Ab chhodo uss baat ko aur usko ek bura sapna samajh Kar bhul jao .. Aur ham yaha jis kaam se aaye Hain bas usko enjoy karo ...

Shanti : kaise bhul jaun beta ab bhi wo sare scene mere aankho ke aage tair jate Hain ... Agar koi anhoni ho jati to main tumhare papa aur Baki ke gharwalo ko Kya jawab Deti ..

Sarika : bhabhi ab uss wakiye ko yaad Kar ke Kya fayda ... Usko soch Kar Gam ke siwaye aur kuch nahi milega ...

Chinki : haan mumma bua aur bhaiyu sahi kah rahe socho ki ye sab kuch hua hi nahi aur waha iss baat ka koi jikra bhi mat karna ...

Uske baad koi kuch bhi nahi bolta ... Ek dhabe ke paas pahunch Kar sabhi chai pite Hain aur fir 9:30 am Tak wo apne gaanv wale Ghar ke samne khade the ...

Gaadi ki horn ki awaz sun Kar Tarun ke dada Ghar ke Bahar nikalte Hain aur samne sabko dekh fule nahi samate ..

Tarun aur Baki sabhi log unke Pao ko chhu Kar aashirwad lete Hain ... Iss umra me bhi Tarun ke dada ji kafi fit aur healthy lagte the aur unki kadakdar muchh ke to Kya hi kahne ..

Rajesh (Tarun ke dada) : beta tumhare sar aur baanh me ye Patti kaisi ..

Tarun : dada ji wo Kya hai na ki Gaadi chalate chalate achanak se jhapki lag gayi to sar steering se takra gayi thi bakiyo ne to seat belt lagaya huwa tha Maine hi nahi lagaya tha tha isliye aisa ho Gaya ... Ek aid hai na ki najar hati to durghatna ghati wahi wali baat hai ...

Rajesh : beta dhyan se chalana chahiye tha na .. khair Chalo andar ..

Sabhi ghar ke andar aate Hain ...

Chinki : dada ji Meri pyari dadi najar nahi aa rahi kaha Hain wo ..

Rajesh : aur kaha hogi bas jab dekho tab bhagwan ko rishwat Dene me lagi rahti hai .. puja ghar me hi hogi wo jao mil lo warna mere se baad me shikayat karegi ki Maine uski ladli ko usse Milne nahi Diya ...

Ab thoda Tarun ke gaanv wale Ghar ke bare me thoda jaan lete Hain ..


Tarun ka gaanv ka Ghar jyada aalisan to nahi tha par uske andar lagbhag sukh suwidha ki har chije maujud thi ... Ghar to do manzila hi tha par room kafi bade bade aur unche unche the ... Ground floor par 4 room the jisme se ek room me Tarun ke dada dadi rahte the ... Ek room ko unhone store room banaya hua tha, ek guest room tha to ek room ko dadi ji ne puja room me tabdil Kiya hua tha ... Ghar me washroom sirf do the ek ground floor par to dusra first floor par ... Kitchen bhi ground floor par hi tha ...

First floor ke rooms me jyadatar tale hi lage hote the wo tabhi use me aate the jab Ghar me koi mehman ya Tarun ya bua ki family aati thi ... Second floor ke upar me ek sapat chhat thi jiske Charo taraf railing di huyi thi aur bich me ek room bana hua tha ... Bachpan me Tarun aur Ghar ke bachche wahi cricket ya badminton khela karte the ..

Kuch der me chinki apni dadi ko puja room se Bahar lekar aati hai .. Dadi ji sabki ko pyar se aashirwad deti hai aur Tarun ki halat dekh usse uska karan puchti hai to Tarun wahi sab Bata deta hai Jo usne apne dada ji ko bataya tha ..

Dada ji : are bhagyawan ye bheema kaha Chala Gaya ye nahi ki Ghar me mere bachche aaye Hain to koi khatirdari kare ...

Bheema : ye unke ghar ka naukar hai. Age 45 years. Sareer se hatta katta hai ... Uski wife kajri bhi Tarun ke Ghar kitchen ka Sara kaam kiya karti hai ... Bheema unka sabse wafadar admi hai Jo ki unke kheti Bari se lekar Ghar ke sare bade chhote kaam dekha karta hai ... Uski ek beti hai Jo kabhi kabhar apni maa ke sath aa Kar unke Ghar ka kaam kiya karti hai aur wo log Tarun ke ghar ke paas hi ek Ghar me rahte the Jo ki Tarun ke dada ne hi unke liye banwaya tha ..

Dadi ji Bahar nikal Kar usko awaz deti hai awaz sunte hi ek aurat daudti huyi unke pass aati hai .. uska rang genhuwa tha aur sareer average type ka tha ... Andar aate hi jaise hi uski najar sabke upar padti hai wo Khushi se chehak uthti hai ...

Kajri : are Malkin ap log kab aaye ...

Shanti aur Sarika : bas Abhi hi aaye Hain ..

Kajri : (chinki ko dekhte huye) ye to Meri gudiya Rani hai aur (Tarun ki taraf dekhte huye) ye to chhote Malik hi Hain na ...

Tarun : kaki Maine kitni baar apse kaha hai ki main koi Malik walik nahi hu apke bete jaisa hu to beta hi kaha karo ya naam se bula liya karo ...

Kajri : ji beta ji aage se galti nahi hogi ... Ap log baithiye main Abhi turant kuch khane pine ka lekar aati hu ...

Thode hi der me sabhi sath me chai pi rahe the ...

Shanti : kajri .. laajo kaha hai dikh nahi rahi ...

Kajri : chhoti Malkin wo apne bapu ko khana pahunchane gayi hai khet me aati hi hogi ...

Dadi ji : beta pihu aur taniya nahi aayi sath, na hi damad ji ya shekhar dikh raha ..

Chinki : Dadi ji Jo yaha aayi hai uski to fikra hi nahi Apko aur Jo nahi aaye unke liye puchhe ja rahe ... Tabhi to main kahti hu ki kisi ko kadra hi nahi Meri unhuhuhu .. jao main apse baat nahi karungi ap bhi unn khadus dadiyo jaisi nikli mujhe apse to ye ummid nahi thi :beee: ..

Sarika : lo maa dekh lo apni ladli ko
.. ab to ye Ruth gayi manao isko ...

Shanti : nahi maa ji ye sab iski nautanki hai apke hi laad Pyar ne isko bigad Diya hai ...

Dada ji : kaun kahta hai Meri bachchi bigad gayi hai ye to kitni pyari hai ...

Chinki : thank you dada ji ek ap hi to ho jinhe Meri kadra hai ... Ab Dadi se maine katti Kar li hai ... Dada ji Holi me main apke group se hu ...

Dadi ji : ye ladki bilkul nahi badli hai ab bhi wahi bachpana par yehi to iski khasiyat hai ...

Tarun : Dadi ji pihu Didi to sasural me hi manayengi Holi aur taniya aur Baki sabhi log Holi ke pahle wale din aa jayenge ..

Dadi ji : kaash pihu bhi sath hoti to kitna Maza aata ...


Tarun ke dada ji ne 2 - 3 din pahle hi unke liye first floor ke rooms ki saaf safayi karwa di thi to unlogo ne pahle apne saman set kiye aur sath me breakfast karke sone chale gaye kyunki unka Safar hi kafi exhaustive tha to rest karna bhi to behad jaruri tha ...
Nice and superb update....
 

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Gundo n kabhi socha hi nahi hoga ki unke saath aisa ho jayega aaye thai lootne or qismat dekho apni jaan hi lita bethe or aise longo k saath hona bhi yahi chahiye tha
Chinki jaha bhi jaati h chaa jati h
Badhiya lovely update bhai
Thanks Bhai
Agar unka maksad sirf lutna hota to wo Aram se lut Kar chale jate par unhe to sare maze chahiye the to unhe Khali hath duniya se Jana pada 😂
 
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