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OK bhaiAaj update ke baad sadhu Baba ke sawalo ka jawab dunga.
Aur aisa main ne pahle hi bataya hai ki sare update ek bar padh kar edit karunga. To update aane mein deri hogi.
Writer bhai is kahani main bahut jhool hay...hame lagta hay is kahani ko sirf ek writer nahi balke kai writer likh rahe kyunki har jagah itne bade galtiyan hay ki hum bayan nahi kar sakte jayse ki is update main bahut he bada galti hay .....shayed kuch readers ne note kiya ki nahi pata nahi par woh galti saaf saaf samne dhik rahi hay jo ki bilkul nahi hona chahiye.Update 146
Ab tak
"Manju bua aap abhi tak fufa ji ke sath nahi gayi." Nakul ne manju bua ko apni car ke pas khada dekh ye baat kahi thi.
"tu mere sath chal raha hai samjha. Agar tu mere sath nahi aaya to main bhi nahi aaungi." manju bua boli.
"Bua aap fufa ke sath jaayiye. Main aap se kal milata hu. Please bua meri khatir aap fufa ke sath chali jaaye." Nakul ne bahut hi pyar se apni ye baat manju bua se kahi thi. Manju bua bhi nakul ki baat na tal saki aur fufa ke pas chali gayi. Rajni thakur Jaane se pahale mujhe tablet le gayi. Uske baad sabhi apne apne raste ho liye
Ab aage
Ham sab hotel pahuch gaye. Nakul ke car mein jahan pahle Manju bua ke sath suman aunty baithi hui thi. Aur ab sirf suman aunty. Car se utarne ke baad sabhi hotel ke andar chale gaye. Siwaye Nakul aur suman aunty ko chhod kar, kyoki suman aunty ko nakul se kuch baate karni thi. Rani nakul ko apne sath chalne ke liye zidd kar rahi thi, par nakul be use samjha bujha kar andar bhej diya.
"Ji aunty kahiye kya baat karni hai aapko mujhse." Nakul ki baat sun suman aunty muskura di. Suman ko is tarah muskurata dekh Nakul soch mein pad gaya kyoki use bilkul bhi andaza nahi tha ki wo kyu muskura rahi thi. Is tarah muskurata dekh Nakul bol pada "Aunty aap kuch kahegi bhi yahan aise hi muskurati rahegi."
"Main to is liye muskura rahi hu kyoki mujhe tumhare chahare ke piche ki khushi saaf dikhai de rahi hai, jise tumne bade chalaki se sabse chhupaya hua hai." suman ki baat ko sun Nakul chahare ke bhaw hi badal gaye. Jabki suman bilkul shant khadi usko dekhe ja rahi thi.
"Aap kahna kya chahati hai. Jara mujhe saaf saaf batayegi. Kyoki mujhe aapki ye baate mujhe bilkul samjh nahi aa rahi hai." Nakul apne aapko bilkul shant kar ye baat kahi thi.
"Achha to ab mujhe batana padega tumhare khush hone ki wajah ko. To thik hai. To tumhare khush hone ki sabse pahli wajah ye hai ki Kanika tumhe chuki hai, mere kahne kaha matlab ye hai ki tumne kanika ko chhuda liya hai." Jaise hi Nakul ne suman ki is baat ko suni uski aankhe badi ho gayi. Nakul ko is baat ka bilkul bhi andaza nahi tha ki suman kuch aisi baat bolegi.
"Aap ko kaise pata chala ki maine kanika ko bacha liya hai. Jabki ye baat bas 3 log hi jaante hai. Kahi aap......." Nakul khud ko sambhal nahi paya aur hdabadi mein is baat ko bol diya. Suman ka kaam ho chuka tha isliye wo chalati hui nakul ke pas aayi, hotho ko chum liya.
"Nakul jaisa tum soch rahe ho vaisa bilkul nahi hai. Main kisi se nahi mili hui hu. Main ne to bas andaza lagaya kanika ke baare aur tumhari baato ne ye sabit kar diya ki kanika ko tumne bacha liya hai."Nakul ko ab apni galati ka ehsaas hua ki ajane mein hi usne bahut badi galati kar baitha.
"Thik hai ab ye baat aap kisi ko bhi nahi batayegi ki main ne kanika ko bacha liya hai. Achha ab andar chalate sabhi ham dono ka intezar kar rahe hoge." Nakul ne kaha. Par suman ko to kuch bhi jana tha nakul se isliye usne Nakul se boli, "Par mujhe to tumse kuch aur bhi jana hai. Jisko tum abhi bhi ham sabse chhupa rahe ho."
"Dekho main apse jhuth nahi bol sakta hu. Isliye main apse chahta hu ki abhi aap mujhe kuch na puche. Chaliye ab andar chalte hai." Nakul apni baat kah andar ki taraf chal diya. Suman ko bhi nakul ki baat sahi lagi isliye wo bhi uske piche ho li.
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"Manju main tumse kuch kahana chahata hu. Agar tum bura na mano to." Manju apne pati baat sunkar use sab kuch samajh jaati hai ki tarun kisi baare use baat karna chahata. Par Manju tarun se kuch nahi boli, balki usne apna sar haan hila di. Tarun manju ki haan sunate hi khush ho gaya. Tarun Phir se manju se kaha,"Mujhe pata hai tumhe meri baat ko sunkar mujh par gussa karogi. Sayad tum yahan se chali bhi jaaogi aur tum mera chahara phir kabhi bhi nahi chahogi. Kyoki ye baat Nakul ke baare mein hai. Phir bhi main chahata hu ki tum meri baat ek baar sun lo."
"Thik hai. Kaho kya kahna chahate ho Nakul ke baare mein." manju ne kaha.
"Sayad tumhe ye nahi pata ki ye hamara nakul nahi balki koi baharupiya hai. Jo nakul ki jagah yahan aaya hua hai, kyoki uska khoon ho chuka hai. Sayad tumhe ye bhi nahi pata ki Nakul ko paise ke liye jaan mar diya. Aur use khai mein fek diya." Manju Tarun ki baat suna kar uske chahare sock ke bhaw aa jaate hai. Manju ke chahare ke bhaw ko dekh kar tarun bahut khush hota hai par apne chahare pe khushi koi bhaw nahi aane diya.
"Tum ye kya kah rahe ho. Tumhare pas iska kya sabut hai ki wo meri bhabhi Padamani ka beta nakul nahi hai. Wo mera bhatija nahi hai." Manju ne kaha.
"Haan wo tumhara bhatija nahi hai. Aur nahi tumhari bhabhi Padamani ka beta hai. Agar vishwas na hot apni bhabhi Rajani se puch lo." Tarun ne bade atamvishwas ke sath apni baat apni biwi manju se kahi thi. Manju ne jab apne pati ke muh se rajni ka naam suna to use Rajni ki us din ki kahi baat yaad aa gayi jab wo yahan Nakul aur apne beti priya ke sath aayi thi.
"Thik hai main rajni bhabhi nakul ke baare baat kar sach jaane ki koshish karungi. Tab tak tum nakul se kuch nahi kahoge samajhe." phir bistar ek taraf let gayi. Tarun ne bhi Phir kuch nahi kaha aur manju ke bagal mein ja kar so gay.
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Nakul ne jab apne room door open karta hai to samane Rani ek bahut hi hot and sexy pink colour ki nighty pahni hui thi. Jo Rani ke gand ko bahut muskil se dhak raha tha. Nakul Rani ko is tarah ki dress mein dekh kar uska lund pant ke andar ekdam sakht ho gaya tha. Nakul to bas rani ke husan ko hi dekhta rah gaya tha, door par khade khade.
"Bhaiya aap andar bhi aaoge ya phir wahin khade khade mujhe bas dekhate hi rahoge." Rani ki baat sun Nakul andar aa gaya aur door lock kar diya.
"Rani tumne kuch khane ke liye order kar do. Jab tak main bathroom se fresh ho kar aata hu." Nakul ne kaha
"Thik hai bhaiya." Rani bed par baith gayi aur phone utha kar khane ka orders karne lagi.
Wahi baki sab bhi apne apne room mein khana managwa kar khaya aur so gaye. Rani aur nakul ne bhi khana kha kar bed par so gye. Par khana khane ke dauran Nakul ki halat bahut hi kharab thi, usne khud ko badi muskil se rok paya tha. Ye baat rani ko bhi malum thi aur khush bhi thi Kyoki uska plan kamayab jo ho gaya tha.
Point out karo broWriter bhai is kahani main bahut jhool hay...hame lagta hay is kahani ko sirf ek writer nahi balke kai writer likh rahe kyunki har jagah itne bade galtiyan hay ki hum bayan nahi kar sakte jayse ki is update main bahut he bada galti hay .....shayed kuch readers ne note kiya ki nahi pata nahi par woh galti saaf saaf samne dhik rahi hay jo ki bilkul nahi hona chahiye.
Bhai mene bhi puri story padi hai kuch minor galtiya hai ..usko chodkar etni galtiya nhi dikhi mere ko agar aise bariki se dekhe to har ek story me galtiya mil jayegi vaise bhi Ayush2017 bhai ki 3 story running me hai to update ko notout karna muskil hota hai ...Writer bhai is kahani main bahut jhool hay...hame lagta hay is kahani ko sirf ek writer nahi balke kai writer likh rahe kyunki har jagah itne bade galtiyan hay ki hum bayan nahi kar sakte jayse ki is update main bahut he bada galti hay .....shayed kuch readers ne note kiya ki nahi pata nahi par woh galti saaf saaf samne dhik rahi hay jo ki bilkul nahi hona chahiye.
Update 124 pade phir update 146 aapko pata chal jayegaPoint out karo bro
Kam se kam main thik to kar saku
Yeh paden Update 124 main manju ke pati ne kya kaha guse main phir update 146 main manju ke pati ne kya kaha...aapko pata chal jayega yeh badi mistake hay ya choti....hum sabhi kahani ko badi dhayan se padte isi liyea hame sab yaad rahta hay or yehi karan hay hame galtiya milne ka ab kash ham bhe aaplogon ki tarha bas masti ke liyea pard ke bhool jaye, par kya karen yeh hamare DNA main hay jab hum koi kahani parte hay toh hum khud ba khud usko mehsoos karne se rook nahi pate hay or isi liyea kahani hame kisi jayse ki koi movie dhek rahe or jab koi galti ati hay toh halat waise hi hoyi hay jayse koi DVD phas gayi ho chalte hoe...kya aap 2 nav par ek saath savari kar sakte hay? aap hamara matlab samaj gaye hoge yeh uska javab hay jo aapne kaha hay writer sahab ke liyea.Bhai mene bhi puri story padi hai kuch minor galtiya hai ..usko chodkar etni galtiya nhi dikhi mere ko agar aise bariki se dekhe to har ek story me galtiya mil jayegi vaise bhi Ayush2017 bhai ki 3 story running me hai to update ko notout karna muskil hota hai ...
Update 124 pade phir update 146 aapko pata chal jayega