Aaryapatel
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Dekhke mujhe acchha laga , aap jaise aur bhi readers hai jo bina id ke padhte hain , mai to kehta hun sabhi ko id banani chahiye apne fav writers ko support karne ke liyeTharkiPo
I don't know how to tell this but mai itna zarur kahunga ki tumhari story ne mujhe majboor kar diya ki mai Xforum pe account banau aur apki tareef karu , really this story is too good and perfect according to my taste
Things that made me like your story too much :-
1 :- Perfect blend of characters , aur apne har kirdar ko utni ahamiyat di hai jitni use milni chahiye , aur apne karma ko hamesha HERO rakha hai aur ussi ne saari aurton ko sabse pahle taste kiya ye mujhe sabse accha laga
2:- Apne har lady character ke liye ek PornStar chuni aur usi ki images and GIF use ki (for ex; maa ke liye lisa ann) . ye mujhe bahot pasand aaya aage bhi aise karte rahna
aur agar aap ke paas samay ho to ek baar bata dena kis-kis caharcter ke liye kaunsi pornstar use kar rhe ho,name with list, Thank you in advance
3:- Apne photos aur Gif har scene ke according use ki wo bhi bahot acchi similarity ke saath aur har baar new use ki kabhi repeat nhi ki , i want to say thank you for this ki aap apna itna time lagate hai GIF aur Images dhundne me aur itni mahnat karte hain
4:- Apne isme Group Sex bahot acche se daala hai aur Karma ko hamesha Top male dikhaya , Sex me sabse accha apne Karma ko dikhaya hai jo ki bahot accha laga
5:- The slow and lustful corruption of Mother was the best thing i liked , aur maa aur karma ke dialogues kaafi acche hain aur un dono ke bich ka pyaar bahot accha laga
aur usse badhi baat ki Maa sabse jyada pyaar aur Karma se karti hai aur Karma aur karma ke papa ke alawa kisi aur se chudi bhi nhi hai.
*aur bhi bahot kuch hai batane ke liye lekin abhi utna time hai nhi mere paas*
lekin mai apne kuch suggestion dena chahunga aage ki story ke liye abhi tak jo story hai wo to hai hi ekdum top class lekin aage bhi story aisi hi rahe uske liye mere kuch suggestion hain:-
1:- Sabse pahle to ye ki Maa ko sirf karma aur uske pita hi chode aur koi nhi aur maa ka karma ke prati pyaar aur badhe lekin agar aap chahe to anuj ko bhi add kar skte hain lekin Karma ko hi fav. rakhna
2:- Jaisa khula open sex ka environment apne bua ke pariwar me banaya vaise karma ke apne pariwar me abhi mat banana , abhi Riski aur chup-chup ke hi chudai rakho , usme jyada maza aata hai
3:- Anjali aur Maa ke liye Karma ka sabse jyada pyaar ho aur Anjali ko Karma ke alawa koi aur haath na lagaye
4:- Ho ske to aap body mesurements bhi describe kariye aur dick size bhi
5:- Baaki aap constant update dete rahe aur mujhe time se koi dikkat nhi hai , bas mai ye chahta hu ki ek do saal baad mai jab ye story padhu to isme 100-200 updates aur judh jaye aur us waqt bhi ye story chalti rahe
And Lastly thank you for your story , keep going , aur updates dete rahe
Bhai khairiyat toh hai na , koi baat toh nahi ho gayi , ummid karta hun aap bhale chnge hogeUPDATE 106X