Incest Katha Chodampur Ki

[Gokb]

Wah kya garam update diya hai.maja agaya padhkar.ab karma jab ghar jayega to maja ayega

 

[Masterji100]

Bro, I think you are the best judge what is good for story.

I think the story is going fine.
Since you have included most people in group sex everyone is feeling it's fast.

You can invest in solo scenes where characters can discuss about their past like how they had such encounters at their home
For example Karma ki maa ka scene ho Sakta hai.. jahaan woh Bata Sakti hai ki kaise unke Jawani mein kya kya hua that in their family.

There is a scene na where Bua says how she wanted everyone to be involved.
Bua bhi bol Sakti hai why unko aise tharak lagi thi..
I think that can be a good angle.

Rimjhim ki shaadi hai toh she can have 1st taste with karma and followed by her father and all.

Baap beti wale scenes bhi aapko zyaada include karna chahiye..

Mujhe toh aapka narration sahi Laga hai. So aap jaisa theekh Lage waise karein..
Hope aapke updates regular rahenge.. aapke story ne humein aur laalchi Bana diya hai?

 

[Nasn]

Bro, I think you are the best judge what is good for story.

I think the story is going fine.
Since you have included most people in group sex everyone is feeling it's fast.

You can invest in solo scenes where characters can discuss about their past like how they had such encounters at their home
For example Karma ki maa ka scene ho Sakta hai.. jahaan woh Bata Sakti hai ki kaise unke Jawani mein kya kya hua that in their family.

There is a scene na where Bua says how she wanted everyone to be involved.
Bua bhi bol Sakti hai why unko aise tharak lagi thi..
I think that can be a good angle.

Rimjhim ki shaadi hai toh she can have 1st taste with karma and followed by her father and all.

Baap beti wale scenes bhi aapko zyaada include karna chahiye..

Mujhe toh aapka narration sahi Laga hai. So aap jaisa theekh Lage waise karein..
Hope aapke updates regular rahenge.. aapke story ne humein aur laalchi Bana diya hai?

,??????

 

[Himalaya rahel]

Jabarjust bhai

 

[TharkiPo]

मस्त अपडेट है दोस्त

Thanks

 

[TharkiPo]

Wah kya garam update diya hai.maja agaya padhkar.ab karma jab ghar jayega to maja ayega

Thank-you dost

 

[TharkiPo]

Bro, I think you are the best judge what is good for story.

I think the story is going fine.
Since you have included most people in group sex everyone is feeling it's fast.

You can invest in solo scenes where characters can discuss about their past like how they had such encounters at their home
For example Karma ki maa ka scene ho Sakta hai.. jahaan woh Bata Sakti hai ki kaise unke Jawani mein kya kya hua that in their family.

There is a scene na where Bua says how she wanted everyone to be involved.
Bua bhi bol Sakti hai why unko aise tharak lagi thi..
I think that can be a good angle.

Rimjhim ki shaadi hai toh she can have 1st taste with karma and followed by her father and all.

Baap beti wale scenes bhi aapko zyaada include karna chahiye..

Mujhe toh aapka narration sahi Laga hai. So aap jaisa theekh Lage waise karein..
Hope aapke updates regular rahenge.. aapke story ne humein aur laalchi Bana diya hai?

Thankyou so much brother...and yes i will try to include all the things you said...as I also have them in mind but as you know story is going as Karma's point of view so we're only seeing what's happening in front of Karma bua's encounter has been told.. Maa's history will be told when she'll be back in the episodes.....jo bhi chahiye sab milega as abhi story bahut baki hai...sare angles cover honge

 

[TharkiPo]

Jabarjust bhai

Thanks

 

[kabir singh]

Hot update bhai
do bando ki rasleela hi badia lagti hai

 

[kishan naik]

Bhai Mera dimand hai kaya apki stories Mai seal pack chut Bina ball wali ekdam kachhi Kali ur usko tell lagakar karma marega