bhai tum bahut achcha likh rahe ho... maine tumhe kuch ideas diye sabhya ki chudai ko le kar... public nudity aur ek doctor clinic wala idea tha... plzz un ideas ko bhi use kro.... at least sabhya ka ek lamba public mai(bus stand ya dhabe k peeche) peshab krne ka scene jaroor likho..
mai apne ideas dobara post kr rha hu.. taki tumhe dhoondne mai takleef na ho.. ye ideas tumhari story mai aaram se fit ho skte h
1. sabhya ka khulle mai mutne wala scene-
karma sabhya ko public mai mutne k liye force kare.. kisi dhaabe k peeche ya bus stand mai kone mai..
sabhya hichkichaye aur sharmaye par karma usse majboor kare.. tum scene achcha describe krte ho...sex scene k comparison mai non sex par exhibition scenes mai description details thodi jyada honi chahiye..
sath mai kuch kamuk dialogues ho jaise ..
"karma besharam tune apni maa ko bazaar mai nangi kr diya"...
"karma tune mere chutad nange kar diye h.. dekh wo admi teri maa k chutado ko dekh rha h"
sabhya ka sharma aur darna bahut zaroori h aise scene mai tension aur maza banaye rkhne k liye..
2. casual nudity scene..
karma sabhya se apne ghar mai sirf blouse pehna k kam krwaye... neeche se poori nangi kar de.... sabhya bhi pehle mana kare par usse aisi aadat pad jaye ki jb bhi mauka mile usse ghar mai nangi ho kar kam krne mai hi maza aaye...
par iss scene ko aise describe krna jaise sabhya ko nangi ho k ghar mai kam krna bilkul routine ho.... nangi gaay ka doodh nikalna.. nangi hi khana banana... nangi hi saaf safai karna..
iss story arc ko tum dheere dheere develop krna baki story arc k sath parallely... karma apni maa ko ghar mai nangi reh k kam krne ki aadat dale aur last mai sabhya k liye bilkul normal ho jaye.. nude house work..
3. spanking scenes
sabhya ek bar ghar mai nangi kam kene se mana kar de aur karma gusse mai aa k use apne ghutne par le k usse spank kare aur suki gand lal kar de... phir laal nangi gand se usse ghar mai kam krwaye... sabhya bhi dard ka natak kare par andar se wo bhi enjoy kare
4.nudity at doctor clinic
ek scene to mai describe kar chuka hu.. public mai mutne wala.. aur bhi bahut tarike k intresting scenarios ho skte h..
jaise doctor k pass check up... ye scene door k shahar k pvt clinic mai set up ho taki karma aur sabhya ko pehchane jane ka dar na ho
sabhya ko full body check up k lye doctor k pass jana pde aur wo male doctor nikle.. (iss scene ko isex na ho.. par doctor k samne exposure... jisme karma bhi part le)
sabhya ki gand par saree utha k injection lgana... jab ye ho rha ho to achanak se room mai nurse ya ward boy aa jaye.. aur sabhya sharam se laal ho jaye....
(ye scene spanking wale scene k bad ho sakta h jisse doctors aur nurses ko sabhya ki gand halki laal bhi dikhe)
shuru mai to doctor serious ho par usse bhi sabhya ko expose krne mai maza aa jaye...
starting check up k bad gynecological exam k lye usse doosre room mai le jaye.. sirf ek hospital gown mai jo peeche se khulla ho... sabhya apni gand dikhate pvt clinic k corridor mai se guzre (jisme zyada log na ho par 1-2 ward boy aur naurse sabhya ko dekh le)
doosre room mai jaa k sabhya ka gyenocological exam ek female doctor ya nurse kare aur male doctor aur karma usse observe kre..
iss scene mai description k sath dialogue ka bhi bahut role h... doctors aur nurse sabhya k sath mazaak karein... jaise usse uski badi gand k liye chidhayein..
"ohho... sabhya ji apki gand to kafi badi h"
scene k end mai sabhya ko urine sample dena ho.... par attached toilet kharab hone k kaaran... sabhya ko nurse aur doctor k samne hi baith kar bowl mai peshab karna pde... sabhya bahut sharmaye par bahar jane k dar se last mai maan jaye....
dialogues bhi important h yaha par description k sath.. "dekh karma teri maa kaise besharam ho gayi h yaha doctor sahab k samne baith kar moot rahi h" etc
mere pas aur bhi ideas h... aap apni speed se .. aur story k hisab se hi in ideas ko ad krein... meri taraf se koi jaldbaazi nahi h.. par in ideas ko add jarur krna plzz... mere hisab se inn ideas ko tumhari story k hisab se fit krne mai koi dikkar ni hogi...
the doctor scene can be like spinoff adventure of karma and sabhya
Dhanyavad...
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bhai tum bahut achcha likh rahe ho... maine tumhe kuch ideas diye sabhya ki chudai ko le kar... public nudity aur ek doctor clinic wala idea tha... plzz un ideas ko bhi use kro.... at least sabhya ka ek lamba public mai(bus stand ya dhabe k peeche) peshab krne ka scene jaroor likho..
mai apne ideas dobara post kr rha hu.. taki tumhe dhoondne mai takleef na ho.. ye ideas tumhari story mai aaram se fit ho skte h
1. sabhya ka khulle mai mutne wala scene-
karma sabhya ko public mai mutne k liye force kare.. kisi dhaabe k peeche ya bus stand mai kone mai..
sabhya hichkichaye aur sharmaye par karma usse majboor kare.. tum scene achcha describe krte ho...sex scene k comparison mai non sex par exhibition scenes mai description details thodi jyada honi chahiye..
sath mai kuch kamuk dialogues ho jaise ..
"karma besharam tune apni maa ko bazaar mai nangi kr diya"...
"karma tune mere chutad nange kar diye h.. dekh wo admi teri maa k chutado ko dekh rha h"
sabhya ka sharma aur darna bahut zaroori h aise scene mai tension aur maza banaye rkhne k liye..
2. casual nudity scene..
karma sabhya se apne ghar mai sirf blouse pehna k kam krwaye... neeche se poori nangi kar de.... sabhya bhi pehle mana kare par usse aisi aadat pad jaye ki jb bhi mauka mile usse ghar mai nangi ho kar kam krne mai hi maza aaye...
par iss scene ko aise describe krna jaise sabhya ko nangi ho k ghar mai kam krna bilkul routine ho.... nangi gaay ka doodh nikalna.. nangi hi khana banana... nangi hi saaf safai karna..
iss story arc ko tum dheere dheere develop krna baki story arc k sath parallely... karma apni maa ko ghar mai nangi reh k kam krne ki aadat dale aur last mai sabhya k liye bilkul normal ho jaye.. nude house work..
3. spanking scenes
sabhya ek bar ghar mai nangi kam kene se mana kar de aur karma gusse mai aa k use apne ghutne par le k usse spank kare aur suki gand lal kar de... phir laal nangi gand se usse ghar mai kam krwaye... sabhya bhi dard ka natak kare par andar se wo bhi enjoy kare
4.nudity at doctor clinic
ek scene to mai describe kar chuka hu.. public mai mutne wala.. aur bhi bahut tarike k intresting scenarios ho skte h..
jaise doctor k pass check up... ye scene door k shahar k pvt clinic mai set up ho taki karma aur sabhya ko pehchane jane ka dar na ho
sabhya ko full body check up k lye doctor k pass jana pde aur wo male doctor nikle.. (iss scene ko isex na ho.. par doctor k samne exposure... jisme karma bhi part le)
sabhya ki gand par saree utha k injection lgana... jab ye ho rha ho to achanak se room mai nurse ya ward boy aa jaye.. aur sabhya sharam se laal ho jaye....
(ye scene spanking wale scene k bad ho sakta h jisse doctors aur nurses ko sabhya ki gand halki laal bhi dikhe)
shuru mai to doctor serious ho par usse bhi sabhya ko expose krne mai maza aa jaye...
starting check up k bad gynecological exam k lye usse doosre room mai le jaye.. sirf ek hospital gown mai jo peeche se khulla ho... sabhya apni gand dikhate pvt clinic k corridor mai se guzre (jisme zyada log na ho par 1-2 ward boy aur naurse sabhya ko dekh le)
doosre room mai jaa k sabhya ka gyenocological exam ek female doctor ya nurse kare aur male doctor aur karma usse observe kre..
iss scene mai description k sath dialogue ka bhi bahut role h... doctors aur nurse sabhya k sath mazaak karein... jaise usse uski badi gand k liye chidhayein..
"ohho... sabhya ji apki gand to kafi badi h"
scene k end mai sabhya ko urine sample dena ho.... par attached toilet kharab hone k kaaran... sabhya ko nurse aur doctor k samne hi baith kar bowl mai peshab karna pde... sabhya bahut sharmaye par bahar jane k dar se last mai maan jaye....
dialogues bhi important h yaha par description k sath.. "dekh karma teri maa kaise besharam ho gayi h yaha doctor sahab k samne baith kar moot rahi h" etc
mere pas aur bhi ideas h... aap apni speed se .. aur story k hisab se hi in ideas ko ad krein... meri taraf se koi jaldbaazi nahi h.. par in ideas ko add jarur krna plzz... mere hisab se inn ideas ko tumhari story k hisab se fit krne mai koi dikkar ni hogi...
the doctor scene can be like spinoff adventure of karma and sabhya
Dhanyavad...