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Fantasy KD- IN Search of family(journey begins)

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Aap 100% sure hai story complete karoge tav aap story aage badhaye kyoki aapne pahle hi logo ka bharosa kho rakha hai story ke start me hi bata diya ki bas ye aapke dimag ki upaj hai jiski ending av aapne Sochi hi nahi hai bas jo man me aaye wo likhiyega ye lag raha hai or aapke pichle story me v aisa hi tha is liye story likhne se pahle story ka start or end pahle soch le bich me to badlaw hote rahenge
Fantasy bahuto ki hoti hai mereko power aa jata to mai ye kar deta wo kar deta lekin usi fantasy ko ek peper par utarna bahot mushkil hota hai fantasy me v ending kav nahi hoti kav soch ke dekhna aap amir hone ki fantasy rakhoge na to bas aap sochoge paisa jyada ho jaega to bada ghar banaunga ye wo bla bla par aage kya kav end sochna nahi milega
Ye mai aaise hi nahi kah raha maine khud story likhne ka try kiya hai on peper maine socha pahle story paper pe likhta hu us ke bad upload karunga or mai uske kai bar fail hua kyoki pahle to mai ending dhang se soch hi nahi pata tha ab likh liya hai to time nahi
Bura mat maniyega mai to khud chahta hu xforum pe story jaldi jaldi koi post kare bilkul sannata sa ho gaya hai yaha pe aaj pure din me muskil se 3 ya 4 story ka update aaya hoga hindi section me itni sari story me 5 ya 6 story dhang ki milegi warna sab bhed bakri ki tarah adultery incest ke nam pe randi rona sala insan hai ya gadha yaha pe kisi story me ek hero rahega 50 female character to kisime kisi biwi chudwa rahi hai to uska ghar wala maje lega agar is type ki ek badhiya to uske jaise 5 ekdam copy lagta hai xossip me sab tarah ki story thi romance triler horror yaha 100 me se 90 incest ke nam pe chutiyapa ya adultery ke nam pe randirona

So ...bro ...I really like your point .....yeah it's that.....ok.ok........h y sach h ki bahut se logo ki fantasy alag alag hoti unhi m s kuch tumhari hogi kuch kisiki aur ki .....ussi tarah iss story m joh h woh meri fantasy k jhaalak matra h........aur ye bhi baatata chalu ki khali iska hee nhi iske sath aane wale next 2 part k starting au ending soch rakha hu.......h 4th part ka ending abhi confirm nhi h......so don't worry......yr apun h. Na....maine shuruvat m kaha n ye story kisi aur k manoranjan se phele mere manoranjan k liye h......aur ek br ohir baata du ki iska ending maine soch diya ......aur h bhai mai.....kisi paper p likh nhi sochta ki story k aage kiya hoga.......mere dimaag m joh iss part ko leke thought h wahi iss m likhunga m..........
 
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Update 2
so guys ....let's start our journey.........


Ab tak apne pichle updt m parha ki ............
Abb aage...
pw- y dekho ye harmi sla phir is bachuwa k maare laag

launda- kon h b y dono

Launde n kaas kichte hue keh

Pw- guru ji ye joh sla mar raha h n ye bagal ke dhabe k malik k chora h

launda- Abe laure dono ke baare m puraa baata smjh nhi aata k

pw- baata rahu n guru ji ......app h..

launda- chl b laure bakwas n kar .......baata chup chap

pw- guru ji ye dusra jo h n woh baacha woh yaha pichle 1 saal s iske yaha km kr rha h ......aur mdrchd iss baachwa ko chooti chooti baatao p bahut marta h

launda- toh y yha km kiu kr raha uss bsdwle ke lnd p laat mar k naukri choor d

Pw- h maine bhi usse bahut smajhya tha ki yaha naukri chor d par pata nhi kiu ye yaha s jaata hee nhi...

launda- hmm.....matlab y choota chetan kuch chuupa rha h .....ruk m puch k aat hu.....tabtak ek packet aur mangwa

pw- rhne do n guru ji ye joh admi mr raha h n y iss sahar k sbse jaada harmi wo m se ek h



Launda- chup pe laudrakhor ......abhi y sahar m mera hramipan dekha hee nhi aur kisi aur ko ......haramiyo k raaja baana diya.....chup chap apna aapni gaand yaha tikaye rkh aur sirf akh hila k dekh k hota h aage ....aur kuch n hila ne lagne uss smnewli laundiya ko dekh k

pw bas muskra diya apni chori pkri jne par?....


Launda- ab baatisi n dikha woh sirf dikhne m laundiya h baaki andar chota mungfuli Laaga h uske niche??...


pw ko jb matlb smjh aaya toh saala baaithe baithe hee chakra k niche gir gya

aur woh launda hasta hua un dono ki taraf chal diya

launda n jaake uss admi k piche se uske gardan p apni cigrate k sulagta hu muh lg diya......

Jisse woh admi uss baache ko chor k chilane laga

admi- kaun h b

Jaise hee woh piche paltne wala tha ki uske gand p ek lat pari aur sala woh jaake samne pare gobare m apna muh ghussa liya phir turant hee jhaalate hue piche palat te hue khara hu

admi- ye kya kiya b

launda- kuch nhi chek kar raha tha ki mera ye suuta jaada garam h y tera dimag.....par sla mera sutta toh sbse jaada grm nikla strange

admi- tujhe mai abhi baata ta hu ki kon hu m

launda n usse upr s niche dekha

Admi- tere aese dekhne s kya smjhra m dar jaunga sle mera nam jaaga h.....jaaga bhai.....ssmajhb lau....

abhi iss admi n gali diya bhi nhi tha ki ek laat pari ussko sinne p

launda- glt bt yha sirf m hee gaali dunga koi aur diya toh ussi gand m sand k charwa dunga .....chl kahra ho aur aache bol joh bolna h

admi- teri jj.....


Abki ek kaas kee laat usake pet m para aur woh drd s karhane Laaga

launda- bola n mdrjd yha sirf m hee gli bol skta hu....akhri br bol rha hu

admi smjh gya ki ek aur br gli se bola toh abki br woh ek aur lt seh nhi payega

admi- tune mere ko maara kiu

launda- tune iss launde ko mra kiu

Admi- kuiki y mera naukr h aur aaj isne paata 4 plate aur 5 gls tor diya

Launda- chl paise bol aur phut l yha s

admi n usse ghura

Launda- phir saamjhau k

admi n apni gardan n m hila diya

Jaaga ko abhi ki mar yd aa gayi thi

Jaaga- 400000 hua h

Launde- abe isne kaun se hirre aur k plte aur gls tor diya

admi- isske bap n paise hara tha mere aade p jue m

launda apni piche k jeb s noto ki gadi nikala aur uss m s kuch note nikl k uss admi k taraf urra diya

launda- le beta aesa kr kuch jaada hee honge.....chal ab aache baache ki tarah dum daama k bhag l
..chal sabash ....Munna


launde ko ghurta hua woh admi waha se fut liya...

Ab tak woh baacha ek dm chup tha usse smjh nhi aa raha tha ye kaun bhaiya h joh ussko mdad bhi kr rhe uss aur ghataiya insan jaagu ko sabk sikha k bhaga bhi diya.....

bacha- app kaun h bbhaiya aur apne. Meri madad kiu ki

launda- aare kuch nhi r tere ko dekh k kisi ki yd aagayi isiliye teri mdad ki chal thik h ab apun chlta h ab tu aesa kr aur jaa kr parhai kr

launda ye keh k jaane k liye mura hee tha ki woh baacha daur k aage aagaya

launda- kiya hua kuch chahiya k ....

baache n mundi ha m hilaa diya......

......to be continued
 

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Update 2
so guys ....let's start our journey.........


Ab tak apne pichle updt m parha ki ............
Abb aage...
pw- y dekho ye harmi sla phir is bachuwa k maare laag

launda- kon h b y dono

Launde n kaas kichte hue keh

Pw- guru ji ye joh sla mar raha h n ye bagal ke dhabe k malik k chora h

launda- Abe laure dono ke baare m puraa baata smjh nhi aata k

pw- baata rahu n guru ji ......app h..

launda- chl b laure bakwas n kar .......baata chup chap

pw- guru ji ye dusra jo h n woh baacha woh yaha pichle 1 saal s iske yaha km kr rha h ......aur mdrchd iss baachwa ko chooti chooti baatao p bahut marta h

launda- toh y yha km kiu kr raha uss bsdwle ke lnd p laat mar k naukri choor d

Pw- h maine bhi usse bahut smajhya tha ki yaha naukri chor d par pata nhi kiu ye yaha s jaata hee nhi...

launda- hmm.....matlab y choota chetan kuch chuupa rha h .....ruk m puch k aat hu.....tabtak ek packet aur mangwa

pw- rhne do n guru ji ye joh admi mr raha h n y iss sahar k sbse jaada harmi wo m se ek h



Launda- chup pe laudrakhor ......abhi y sahar m mera hramipan dekha hee nhi aur kisi aur ko ......haramiyo k raaja baana diya.....chup chap apna aapni gaand yaha tikaye rkh aur sirf akh hila k dekh k hota h aage ....aur kuch n hila ne lagne uss smnewli laundiya ko dekh k

pw bas muskra diya apni chori pkri jne par?....


Launda- ab baatisi n dikha woh sirf dikhne m laundiya h baaki andar chota mungfuli Laaga h uske niche??...


pw ko jb matlb smjh aaya toh saala baaithe baithe hee chakra k niche gir gya

aur woh launda hasta hua un dono ki taraf chal diya

launda n jaake uss admi k piche se uske gardan p apni cigrate k sulagta hu muh lg diya......

Jisse woh admi uss baache ko chor k chilane laga

admi- kaun h b

Jaise hee woh piche paltne wala tha ki uske gand p ek lat pari aur sala woh jaake samne pare gobare m apna muh ghussa liya phir turant hee jhaalate hue piche palat te hue khara hu

admi- ye kya kiya b

launda- kuch nhi chek kar raha tha ki mera ye suuta jaada garam h y tera dimag.....par sla mera sutta toh sbse jaada grm nikla strange

admi- tujhe mai abhi baata ta hu ki kon hu m

launda n usse upr s niche dekha

Admi- tere aese dekhne s kya smjhra m dar jaunga sle mera nam jaaga h.....jaaga bhai.....ssmajhb lau....

abhi iss admi n gali diya bhi nhi tha ki ek laat pari ussko sinne p

launda- glt bt yha sirf m hee gaali dunga koi aur diya toh ussi gand m sand k charwa dunga .....chl kahra ho aur aache bol joh bolna h

admi- teri jj.....


Abki ek kaas kee laat usake pet m para aur woh drd s karhane Laaga

launda- bola n mdrjd yha sirf m hee gli bol skta hu....akhri br bol rha hu

admi smjh gya ki ek aur br gli se bola toh abki br woh ek aur lt seh nhi payega

admi- tune mere ko maara kiu

launda- tune iss launde ko mra kiu

Admi- kuiki y mera naukr h aur aaj isne paata 4 plate aur 5 gls tor diya

Launda- chl paise bol aur phut l yha s

admi n usse ghura

Launda- phir saamjhau k

admi n apni gardan n m hila diya

Jaaga ko abhi ki mar yd aa gayi thi

Jaaga- 400000 hua h

Launde- abe isne kaun se hirre aur k plte aur gls tor diya

admi- isske bap n paise hara tha mere aade p jue m

launda apni piche k jeb s noto ki gadi nikala aur uss m s kuch note nikl k uss admi k taraf urra diya

launda- le beta aesa kr kuch jaada hee honge.....chal ab aache baache ki tarah dum daama k bhag l
..chal sabash ....Munna


launde ko ghurta hua woh admi waha se fut liya...

Ab tak woh baacha ek dm chup tha usse smjh nhi aa raha tha ye kaun bhaiya h joh ussko mdad bhi kr rhe uss aur ghataiya insan jaagu ko sabk sikha k bhaga bhi diya.....

bacha- app kaun h bbhaiya aur apne. Meri madad kiu ki

launda- aare kuch nhi r tere ko dekh k kisi ki yd aagayi isiliye teri mdad ki chal thik h ab apun chlta h ab tu aesa kr aur jaa kr parhai kr

launda ye keh k jaane k liye mura hee tha ki woh baacha daur k aage aagaya

launda- kiya hua kuch chahiya k ....

baache n mundi ha m hilaa diya......

......to be continued
Nice update bhai
 
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