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Thriller khaamoshiya...Ek Rahasya (Completed)

DARK WOLFKING

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nice aur dhamakedaar update ..🤣🤣..maja aa gaya ..
vaishali to psycho type hai par ravi aur baad me 2 ladko ko peeta ,,car chalayi jo use chalani aati nahi 🤔 par damdaar character hai vaishali 😍..
ravi ke saath sahi kiya propose karne ke baad sidha long drive par jaana chahta tha 😁..

sab ladke ek jaise nahi hote par kuch hote hai jo pyar ka natak karke phir sex karte hai aur chhod dete hai aur rajni ke saath shayad affair tha ravi ka isliye waha kaha vaishali ne ..
 

DARK WOLFKING

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agar nisha ka khoon kiya hai to 🤔 par nisha to jyada ghar nahi aati thi 🤔..

haddi se khoon karne ka tarika sahi hai ..

vaishali ko maut ke roop me dekhkar ravi ka pyar chhu mantar ho gaya 🤣🤣🤣..
aur behen bana liya vaishali ko ..

par rajveer direct shoot karne ko bol raha hai kya ye nahi ki agar nisha ka khoon usne kiya hai to reason puchho ,ki kyo maara apni hi behen ko 🤔🤔..( isse to maine usko bewakoof kaha wo sahi hi hai ) ..
ab kya sach me rajveer shoot kat dega ya vaishali ne jo kaha usse lagta hai bhagne ka koi plan hai uske paas 🤔..
 

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agar nisha ka khoon kiya hai to 🤔 par nisha to jyada ghar nahi aati thi 🤔..

haddi se khoon karne ka tarika sahi hai ..

vaishali ko maut ke roop me dekhkar ravi ka pyar chhu mantar ho gaya 🤣🤣🤣..
aur behen bana liya vaishali ko ..

par rajveer direct shoot karne ko bol raha hai kya ye nahi ki agar nisha ka khoon usne kiya hai to reason puchho ,ki kyo maara apni hi behen ko 🤔🤔..( isse to maine usko bewakoof kaha wo sahi hi hai ) ..
ab kya sach me rajveer shoot kat dega ya vaishali ne jo kaha usse lagta hai bhagne ka koi plan hai uske paas 🤔..
agar nisha ka khoon kiya hai to 🤔 par nisha to jyada ghar nahi aati thi 🤔..

haddi se khoon karne ka tarika sahi hai ..

vaishali ko maut ke roop me dekhkar ravi ka pyar chhu mantar ho gaya 🤣🤣🤣..
aur behen bana liya vaishali ko ..

par rajveer direct shoot karne ko bol raha hai kya ye nahi ki agar nisha ka khoon usne kiya hai to reason puchho ,ki kyo maara apni hi behen ko 🤔🤔..( isse to maine usko bewakoof kaha wo sahi hi hai ) ..
ab kya sach me rajveer shoot kat dega ya vaishali ne jo kaha usse lagta hai bhagne ka koi plan hai uske paas 🤔..

Hehehe...schme...sahi kiya ravi ke sath..
Bechare ka susu bhi nikal gya...
Wese...apke samne ekdm sher aajaye to kya kroge...uske dant ginoge...use dhyan se dekhoge...uske sath selfy loge nhi na...shayd use maarne ki sochoge kuki wo sb kroge to sher aapko maar skta h...yhi rajveer kr rha hai...bewkuf n h wo...is samay vaishali kitni khtrnaak hai ye n dekh rhe ho...kya lgta h vaishali se kuch puchege wo bta degi...kaise btayegi...use draaakr...drti to wo kisi se bhi nnhi h...is samay wo jesi psycho killer hai use shoot krna hi batter hai....wrna aisa n ho jaye ki rajveer puchtaach kre...or desai mraa mile...kon jimmedar hoga...

Orrr hi baaat vaishali kya pta uska chapet close ho jaye...yaa wo kuch kaarnaama kr de...dekhte h
 
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manikmittalme07

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Bahut achhi chal rahi hai story. Abhi murder ne hi uljha rakha tha ke vaishali ka ajib character saamne aa gya. Ravi ke saath jo hua wo sahi hua. But I don't think ke isne apni behan ka murder kiya hai. Yeh ladki khatarnak jarur hai par isne aisa kuchh nahi kiya jo galat ho. Darasal yeh doosre insaan se aisa kuchh nahi chahti jo iski ichha ke virudh ho isliye isne bhai par hamla kiya. Ravi ke saath iska vyavhar uske galat iradon ki wajah se tha. Agar isne apni behan ka murder kiya bhi hai to usne koi bahut badi galti ki hogi jiski sambhavna na ke barabar hai
 

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Update 6

Mumbai....

Desai-sir ye...kya kah rhe hai aap...kuch bhi bole ja rhe hai..
Ye ghatna aaj se 5saal purani hai...us samay vaishali koi 13ya 14 sal hi rhi hogi...itni chhoti umr me koi itni shatirta ke sath khun kaise kr skta hai...orr wo apki beti hai sir..


Rajveer bs jameenn ki or muh krke desai ki baato ko sune ja rha tha..

Desai-achha mujhe ye btaiye...apko kaise shk hua ki ye khun vaishali ne kia hai.....koi sboot hai...

Rajveer-sabut to wo khud hai.....
Desai-mujhe puri baat btaiye sir...
Rajveer-hmare case me ab tk sbse shaatir mujrim kon hai...

Desai-sir ye...nisha ka murder krne wala..
Rajveer-or aajke time me...hmare aaspas sbse intelligent kon h...doc asthana ke acording...?
Desai-sir wo...vaishali....lekin wo 5saal pahle ki baat hai....
Rajveer-jis gutthi ko hmara department nhi suljha paya...usko usne ek second me suljha diya....
Desai-kyaa guthhi...

Rajveer-hua ye ki...
Mai usse mila or...
Flashback.......
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Rajveer-matlb...
Vaishali-maltb he cut his hands with water...
Rajveer-water...vaishali tum..kya bol rhi ho...water se bhla koi kaise kaat skta hai...
Rajveer ko aaj ehsas ho rha tha ki shayad asthana ne sahi hi kaha tha...

Vaishali-water se 3 trike se kaata jaa skta hai...water ki teeno form se...
Rajveer samjh to chuka tha...pr wo fr bhi puchta hai...
Rajveer-kaise..
Vaishali-pahla khud water form....

Ye dekhiye...
Vaishali rajveer ko mobike se ek vdeo dhundkr dikhaati hai...
Ye vdeo kisi social entertainment site pr thi...

Rajveer dhyan se dekhkta hai..
Usme ek ldka apple ko paani ki tej pressure ke aage laata hai or apple ekdm 2 bhago me kat jaata hai...


Vaishali-paani ki bahut patli dhaaar...or bhut jada prrsssure se....hath ko ya GALE ko kaatn bahuta mamuli si baat hai...
Vaishali ke muh se gla shabd sunkr rajveer ke pero se maano dhrti niklne ko ho gyi thi...


Rajveer khud ko smbhalta hua-orrr..
Vaishali-orr...water ki solid form...mtlb ice...ye apko smjhane ki jrurt nhi h...ki ice se to kata hi jaa skta hai...

Vaishali-teesri form mtlb gas....
Gas ko bhi...pressure ki trh se use kiya jaye to...
Rajveer khud ko bahut chhota mahsus kr rha tha aaj...

Vaishali-lekin fur bhi muje lgta hai koi bhi itni mehnat nhi krega...uske lie bht si chijo ki jrurt pdegi...islie
Vaishali- papa...usne water se nhi...bones se kaata hai

Ab rajveer ka dimak ghumne lga tha...
Uske chehre ki udi hui hwaiyaa saaf dikhai de rhi thi..
Rajveer-ab ye bones...
Vaishali-ye pani...wala koi ...itna tsnsn nhi lena chahega....iske bad ek trika hai haddi...
Haaddi se kaatna aasan h...

Rajveer-or use forensic wale kuu nhi pkd payege...
Vaishali-bilkul pakad paate agr wo log schme apni kabiliyt pr joining krte to...sb rishwat dekkr aagye hai...

Vaishali-bones ke particles milege...unhe pta bhi rhga ki ye hddi ke prticles hai...pr wo bewkuf smjhege ki hath me ya gardan me haddi to hoti hi hai .....bss ...wo log usi ko smjh lege...uspr koi inspection nahi krege...


Desai bahut dhyaan se rajveer ki baate sun rha tha...or jaise jaise rajveer usko bta rha tha..desai ki ankhe bdi hoti ja rhi thi..

Desai-brilliant....schme...hmne to kbhi socha hi nhi... Wese bhi hmara sochna normal hai...prr vaishali.....usne ye sb kaise....

Rajveer-sbse bdi baat...mai usse puch hath ka rha tha...or wo baar baar gle ko bol rhi thi...KYUU....
wo sbko bolti hai khun kr dugi...KYUU
Sbse chhupkar rhti hai...KYU...
Ek baar arun ko ghayal kr chuki hai...KYUU


Kyaa in sbse saabit nhi ho jaata ki jaise wo arun ko marne ko dodti hai wese hi usne Nisha ko maara hoga....


Rajveer-mai jaanbujhr uske paas gun lekar gya tha...lekin wo...uske mathe pr ek lakeer tak nhi dikhai di...use gun se biklul bhi dar nhi lga...

"Desai....kya ye lakshan hai ek masum ladki ke...ye sb lakshan ek gunehgaar ke hote hai...ye bat mujhe bhi hajam nhi ho rhi ki ek 14saal ki ldki kaise khun kr skti hai...ye impossibel hai...prr aj jis stage pr vaishali hai wo bhi impossible hai...

Doc asthana jaise minded doc ki hwa niklaal di us vaishali ne...kya ye impossibe nhi hai...par ye hua hai..

Or sbse bdi and most importent baat...she ATTACKED on arun....is baat ko kyu bhul rhe ho...jaanleva halma tha wo...2inch chaaku peeth me ghus chuka tha...mahino tak uska jakhm nhi bharne wala hai..

Desai-hmmm...in sb baato se lgta to aisa hi hai ki vaishali ne hi ...
Rajveer-thn do it...go and arrest her...
Desai chonkte hue-sir aap kya kah rhe ho...ye sirf aapka shak hai...sabit nhi hua hai...

Rajveer-arun pr hmla krne k lie to kr hi skte ho giraftaar....ye to sabit krne ki jrurt nhi hai...

Desai-nahi sir....aapne puri imandari or lagan ke sath apna kaam kia h...najane kitni baar aapne kaanun ko or is smaaj ko bde bde mujrimo se bchaya hai...

Ab kaanun hi aapko bli chada de...ye mai nhi hone duga....iske lie muje kaanun k khilaaf bhi jaana pde to jauga...prr mai apko betti ko giraftar krke apki image ko or apke dil ko thes nahi pahuchauga..

Rajveer apni gun nikalta hua...
"Fir mere pas ek hi rasta hai...".
Desai hairaani se-wo kya sir ..
Rajveer-agr usne dobara aisa kia to...i will shoot her...

Desai-sir ...aap apki beti ko shoot kroge..
Rajveer-mere lie meri beti ho chahe koi anjaan ldki...MAIN APNE PARIWAR KO BCHANE K KIE USE SHOOT KR SAKTA HU...

mai nahi chahta jo usne arun k sath kia wo uma ke sath bhi ho......
Desai-thik hai sir.....mai bs dua kruga ki wo aisa kuch dobara na kre. ...
Itne me hi rajveer ka phon bajta hai...

Rajveer-haa beta bolo..
Arun ghabrai hui si awaaj me-papa...aap jldi ghr aajaiye...
Rajveer-kya baat hai...
Arun-wo vaishali....vaishali ne ravi ko kidnap kr liya hai ..samne wali aunty ne use roka bhi lekin use le gyi...bol rhi thi aaj iska time pura ho gya...aap jaldi aaayiye papa...

Rajveer-tumhari dua fail ho gyi desai...wo pdos ke ek ldke ka murder krne jaa rhi hai...

Desai chonkta hua-jldi chliye sir....
Rajveer or desai ghr ki taraf bhagte hai..
Dekhte hai to ghr pr bheed lgi thi...

Ravi jo pdos ka ldka tha uski family or pdos ki kuch families aayi hui thi...andr uma logo ke sawalo ke jvaab de rhi rhi...

Rajveer-uma kya hua...
Uma rajveer ko dekhte hi rone lgti hai..
Samne wali lady-bhaisahab ...apki beti arun ko naa jane kaha le gyi h.. mene roka to boli bahut presan kr diya hai isne...iska kaam tmaam krugi aaj...

Ek 19saal ki ldki 24saal ke ldko ko le gyi...kisi ne roka nhi use....orr kaise le gyi...

Samne wali lady-roka tha...raj or praveen ne...lekin...in dono ko peetkar bhag gyi...
Desai-kmaal hai...ek ldki....ek choti ldki 2,2 ldko pr akeli bhaari pd gyi...or wo use le gyi

Raj-uncle...wo...pta nahi usme itni furti or itni jaan kaha se aagyi....

Desai dekhta hai to raaj ki ankhe suji hui thi jaise kisi ne mukke se war kiya ho.....
Rajveer-agr kisi ko kuch b pta h... kyuu le gyi...kaha le gyi...to btao muje...hm bcha skte hai use.....
Tbhi ravi ki bahan aati h samne

"Sir...ravi use like krta tha ...ravi ne kai baar use prpose kia...bs yhi maater tha"wo ldki dr drkr bolti hai...

Rajveer-dunia me ek wohi ldki mili thi use like krne k lie....fir kya hua...
"Aaaj usne propose kia to vaishali ne smile kia...ravi ko lga wo maan gyi...ravi bola long drive pr chloge...vaishali maan gyi...lekin...car me bethte hi vaishali ne usee maarna shuru kr diya...shor shraba dekhkr raj or praveen ayae to vaishali ne baahr niklakr or car ko lock krke unhe bhut maara uske bad car lekr chli gyi...

Rajveer-use drivng nhi aati...car kaise chlayi...
"Wo sb nhi pta pr wo car chlakr use le gyi......wo use maar degi uncle...wo bahut khtrnak hai...plss uncle mere bhai ko bchalo...plss"

Wo ldki rote hue bolti hai...
Rajveer-kaha gye wo log kuch pta hai....
"Nahi uncle...kuch n ptaa"




"Hahahahahaaahaha....pyaar krega...krna pyar... Ab kya hua...."
Vaishali jor jor se haste hue bolti hai...
Samne kursi pr ravi bandha hua tha...jiske hath piche bandhe the...

Ravi-ye tujhe kya ho gya hai...mai tujhe pyar krta hu.. or tu ...kya krna chahti h ...

Vaishali-maarna...tujhe maarna chahti hu...tujhe kitna smjhaya...chhood de mera picha...chhod de...prr tu mana nhi na....ku...kya baat h...mai haa bolti or tu mere sath sb krke muje chhod deta...yhi na..."vaishali gusse se bolti hai...

Ravi-nahi yrr...kisne kaha...
Vaishali gusse me laaal hote hue-chup be sale...wrna aise jagah waar krugi ki mard kahlaane me shrm aayegi tujhe...

muje kya bewkuf smjha hai...tum jaise ghtiya log pahle ldkio ko apne pyar me fsaate ho fr sb krke use chhod dete ho...tujhe kya lga vaishali bhi aisi hogi...beta gabbar singh se paala pda hai tera.."

vaishali ki muskaan or uska pagalpan dekhkr ravi buri trh dr jata hai....

Ravi-dekh vaishali muje jaane de yr...aaj ke bad mai tujhega dekhuga bhi nhi.....

Vaihali-tu khudko nhi dekhega...tere sath do kaam hoga...ya to tera khun...ya fr...tujhe namard bnakr...tere mathe pr I AM A RAPIST likhkr chhod dugi.....

Ravi-tu pagal ho gyi h...chhod muje...maine kaha kisi ka rape kia...
Vaishali-nhi kia na...bholi bhali ldki tumjhe dekhkr smile kr de to tumhe lgta h kaam bn gya...koi ldki haske baat kre to tumhe lgta h wo tumhe line de thi h...mujse pyar krta h ..kya krega pyar krke...bol mujhse shaadi....nhai ha...fr kya bkwas h ye pyar...

salo kutto apni hawas mitaane ko pyar ka naam dete ho...shrm aani chahiye tumhe...sb jaanti hu kaise tumne rajni ko use kia or chhod diya...aaj tujhhe aisi sjaa dugi ki tum kya...tumhare jaise kai ghtiya log sudhrege....

Ravi-pyar krna kya galat hai...
Vaishali-bilkul galat nhi h...agr pyar schha h to us ldki ke maa bap ke pas jao usse shadi k lie...

na ki use log drive pr le jao...chori chuppe milo...na jaane kitni ldkiya tum jaiso ki vjh se sucide kr leti hai....pyar kia chhod diya.....uske bad us ldki ka kya...uski shadi hoti hai...uska husbend usse puchegha kaha kia sb...kya bole wo bechari...tum to use ksm dilakr ...mujhpr vishwas nhi hai kya ..ye sb bolkr sb kuch kr lete ho....fr chhod dete ho...aaj to tu nhi bchega...mrega...pkka mrega....

"Teri bliii chadhaugi mai....bliii"
Vaishali ke is rudra rup ko dekhkr ravi pasino me nhaa jata hai....
Ravi Kampne lgta hai...vaishali ki ankho me aag saf dikhai de rhi thi....

Ravi-vaishali....mai...hath jodta hu...plss chhod de...mai aaj ke bad...kbhi aisa n kruga...plsss jaane de muje...
Vaishali- drte ku ho mrne se...ale le le...mela babu ko dl lg lha hai....mele babu ne thana thaaya...

Vaishali hste hue mjaakiya andaaj me bolti hai....
Ravi-thik hai...muje maar rhi h tu..mrte hue insan ki ek akhri ichha puri n kregi...

Vaishali-jrur bolo....
Ravi-tuu itni shrif ....sidhi dikhne wali...itni age me itni khtrnak kaise bn gyi....

Vaishali-apne pyar ka chkkr chlaate wkt tumhe ldkiyo ki age n dikhti....us time to tumhare lie wo jvan rahti hai na...anyway....pta hai...samundra jitna shant hota hai....utna hi khtrnaak hota hai...hahahahaahah...hahhaha hahaha..

Vaishali ki hsi ki awaaj sakshaat yamraaj ki hsi lg rhi thi...ravi ki awaaj bhi ladkhdaane lgi thi...
Aajtk usne itna bhyank rup kisi ka nhi dekhaa tha....
Ravi bs bhgwan se dua kr rha tha ki bs kaise bhi aaj vaishali se bchale...uske bad hr ldki ko bahan ki najar se dekhega...

Ravi kuch sochta hua-vai...vai....vaishaali.....tu muje rakhi bandhna....mai tera bhai bn jauga...plssss...muje chhod de...aa...aaj ke bad mai aisa kuch kru to...muje tu maar dena....abhi ...bss ek...ek moka de...mujhe...

Vaishali kaatil hasi ke sath ravi ke charo trf ghumti hai...
"Hmm....mera bhai bnega.....mere bhai se jaaakr puchna ...ki mera bhai bnna bhi kitna mushkil hai...abhi tk bed pr pda hai..

2inch chaaku uske peeth me ghusa diya tha....anyway...muje tera ye praposal psnd aaya...bhai bn jaa mera...

Ravi ko ummid ki ek kiran si dikhai deti hai...
Ravi-haa plss mai tera bhai....tu meri bahan....plss bahan jaane de...
Vaishali-bhai ko raakhi baandhte hai na...
Mai tujhe rankhi baandhti hu...

Vaishali ravi ke paas beth jaati hai...or uske bandhe hue hatho ko dekhkti hai...
Vaishali-ab raakhi kaha se laau...

Ravi thodi chalaaki dikhata hua-ghr...ghar hai...rakhi...mere ghr rakhi hui hai...

Vaishali muskuraati hui-bhaiyaa...kitne nighty ho aap...rakhi to bahan laati hai na...mere paas hai wese ek rakhi...

Vaishali apni jeb me haath daalti hai or jb hath nijaalti hai to ravi ke hosh ud jaate hai...
Ravi-yee...ye kya hai....
Vaishali-tumhe nnhi pta bhaiya...ye bone hai...hadddi...insan ki haddi.....

Vaishali us haddi ko dekhti hui-ab se phle ek ldka mere piche pda tha...uski haddi hai ye...prr teri kismt achhi hai...jo tune muje bahan bna liya...agr wo bhi bna leta to...shayd ye haddi uske shrir me hoti....hahahahahaah...


Vaishali ke itne bhyaank ruup ko dekhkr kisi bhi insan ka behosh hona munasib hai....
Ravi ke mathe se pasina barish bnkr tapak rha tha. ...

Vaishali-itna pasina ku aaa rha hai bhaiya..tbhi vaishali ko kuch mahsus hota hai...kuch awaaj sunai deti hai...vaishali niche dekhti hai to.....

""Chhhiii...bhaaiya ye kya...apne...pant me hi susu kr diya..."chhhee kitne gande ho aap..."" Vaishali naak pr hath rkhte hue bolti bai...
Ravi ka dr ke maare peshab nikal gya tha...

Nikle bhi kyu na ...akhir samne najaraa hi aisa tha...

Vaishali -koi baat nhi...ab mai is haddi se apke hath pr raakhi bnaati hu...
Ravi-nahi...nahi...vaishali...plss
Vaishli ravi ki baat nhi sunti or haddi ki nok se uske hath ko cheerne lgti hai..

"Aaaaaaa.....aaaaa...nahi...bchaao.....bchaaao.....maaaaaaaaaaaa"raavi ki cheekhe puri ghr me gunj jaati hai...
Vaishaki muskan lie hue...uske haath ko cheerte hue uspr koi design bnaane ki kosis kr rhi thi...

Ravi ke hath se khunn ki dhaar girne lgi thi....
Ravi to drd se cheekh rha tha...bilakh rha tha...
""Plssss vaishali jaane do...aaaaaaaa...uuuiiiii mmmaaaaa......"ravi jitna cheekhta vaishali muskan ke sath or gahrai se uske hath ki skin ko cheerti...

Rajveer-mai tumhe order deta hu desai...jaha bhi vaishali dikhayi di...shoot her...
Desai-kyaa kah rhe hai aap sir....
Rajveer-this is my order.....
Desai-okk sir...

Uma-ye kya kah rhe hai aap...vaishali ko shoot kr dege...
Rajveer-ab wo hmari vaishali nhi rhi...khunni bn chuki...nisha ko bhi usne hi mara thaa...

Uma ko ye sunta hi dhakka sa lgta hai...or wo bed pr beth jaati hai...kuch bol bhi n paatai...
Rajveer-let's go desai....

Desai-lekin kaha sir...
Rajveer-mujhe pta ha wo kaha hai...
Rajveer or desai dono nikal jaate hai....

""Bahot drd ho rha hai...plss ye mt kr vaishali..."
Ravi drd se tadapta hua bolta hai...
Vaishali-raakhi wali prmpra to nibhaani pdegi na...bs ho gya ....
Vaishali jajse jaise hath pt design bna rhi thi...ravi ki jaan nikak jaa rhi thi...
Ravi cheekhta rha...chillata rha...prr wha uski cheekh sunne wala koi nahi tha...sb bebas tha wo..
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Vaishali -orrr ye...ho gya...done...
Vaishali -dekho...achhi bni hai na...
Ravi rota hua dekhta to use hath pr khunn ke alawa kuch dikhai deta...

Ravi rota hua-ab to jaaje do..
Vaishali-aree...rakhi bandhne pr mujhe gift nahi milega ky....
Ravi rota hua-kyaaaa...kyaaa firt..
Vaishali ravi ke naajdik aakr uske kaan me araam se bolti hai..."tera jaaaann"
"Hahahahahaha"orr jor se hsne lgti hai...jiski awaaj ravi ke kaan faade jaa rhi thi...

"Vaiishaaliii"
Achank vaishali ke kaan me rajveer ki awaaj sunai pdti hai...
Vaishali-ohhh...aaaj pahli bar police time pr aayi hai...papa...bs 5min ruk jaate ...bhut mjaa arha tha...dekho...mene isko rakhi bandhi hai...
Vashali ravi ke hath ki taraf ishara krti hai...

Ravi-plsss uncle bcha lijiye muje....plsss he mar degi...ye bhut khtrnaak hai...
Rajveer ko dekhkr ravi ki jaan me jaan aati hai...

Desai or rajveer dekhte hai ki ravi ka hath se khun bah rha tha.....
Rajveeer apni gun nikaal leta hai...or vaishali ki taraf aim krta hai...

Rajveer-tumne iski nas kaat di...
Vaishali-nahi papa...rakhi baandhi hai...aaj se ye mera bhai bn gya na...
Desai uski is hrkt ko dekhkr dr jaata hai...
Rajveer-tumhe maarne ke alwa ab koi chara nhi bcha...

Vaishali sad hote hue-kyaaa aap muje maarege....
Or achank hs deti hai...hahahaha...
Muje marege.......muje marna itna asaan nhi hai papa......hahahahaha...

Vaishali ki awaaaaj...pure kmre me gunj rhi thi...desai ke bhi maathe pr psina aachuka tha.....

Rajveer-your game is over...mai apni beti ke pyar k lie kisi ki mot se soda nhi kr skta....apni beti ke lie...smaaj ko khtre me nhi daal sakta...tum sbke lie khtra ho...muje maaf krna...rajveer ki ankho me aanu aa chuke the...kyuki jis beti ko paalposkat bda kia...wo aaj usii ko shoot krne jaa rha tha...shayd or koi rasta bhi n tha...bye vaishali...
"M SORYYYY"


Next update will be soon...
nice nad superb update....
 
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Bahut achhi chal rahi hai story. Abhi murder ne hi uljha rakha tha ke vaishali ka ajib character saamne aa gya. Ravi ke saath jo hua wo sahi hua. But I don't think ke isne apni behan ka murder kiya hai. Yeh ladki khatarnak jarur hai par isne aisa kuchh nahi kiya jo galat ho. Darasal yeh doosre insaan se aisa kuchh nahi chahti jo iski ichha ke virudh ho isliye isne bhai par hamla kiya. Ravi ke saath iska vyavhar uske galat iradon ki wajah se tha. Agar isne apni behan ka murder kiya bhi hai to usne koi bahut badi galti ki hogi jiski sambhavna na ke barabar hai
Thanks for coment...hmm...ab tk wese to galta walo hi peeta hai isne...prr ek baat iske bhai ne glti se iski jeans utha li thi...uspr usko usne ghayal kr diya tha...kya ye sahi hai..?..
Haa ye to hai...nisha ko isne maara hai to bdi vajah ho sakti hai...pr sochna ye hai..ki 5saal pahle bhi kya ye esi hi psycho hogi...dekhte hai kyaa hoga...
 

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Update 6

Mumbai....

Desai-sir ye...kya kah rhe hai aap...kuch bhi bole ja rhe hai..
Ye ghatna aaj se 5saal purani hai...us samay vaishali koi 13ya 14 sal hi rhi hogi...itni chhoti umr me koi itni shatirta ke sath khun kaise kr skta hai...orr wo apki beti hai sir..


Rajveer bs jameenn ki or muh krke desai ki baato ko sune ja rha tha..

Desai-achha mujhe ye btaiye...apko kaise shk hua ki ye khun vaishali ne kia hai.....koi sboot hai...

Rajveer-sabut to wo khud hai.....
Desai-mujhe puri baat btaiye sir...
Rajveer-hmare case me ab tk sbse shaatir mujrim kon hai...

Desai-sir ye...nisha ka murder krne wala..
Rajveer-or aajke time me...hmare aaspas sbse intelligent kon h...doc asthana ke acording...?
Desai-sir wo...vaishali....lekin wo 5saal pahle ki baat hai....
Rajveer-jis gutthi ko hmara department nhi suljha paya...usko usne ek second me suljha diya....
Desai-kyaa guthhi...

Rajveer-hua ye ki...
Mai usse mila or...
Flashback.......
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Rajveer-matlb...
Vaishali-maltb he cut his hands with water...
Rajveer-water...vaishali tum..kya bol rhi ho...water se bhla koi kaise kaat skta hai...
Rajveer ko aaj ehsas ho rha tha ki shayad asthana ne sahi hi kaha tha...

Vaishali-water se 3 trike se kaata jaa skta hai...water ki teeno form se...
Rajveer samjh to chuka tha...pr wo fr bhi puchta hai...
Rajveer-kaise..
Vaishali-pahla khud water form....

Ye dekhiye...
Vaishali rajveer ko mobike se ek vdeo dhundkr dikhaati hai...
Ye vdeo kisi social entertainment site pr thi...

Rajveer dhyan se dekhkta hai..
Usme ek ldka apple ko paani ki tej pressure ke aage laata hai or apple ekdm 2 bhago me kat jaata hai...


Vaishali-paani ki bahut patli dhaaar...or bhut jada prrsssure se....hath ko ya GALE ko kaatn bahuta mamuli si baat hai...
Vaishali ke muh se gla shabd sunkr rajveer ke pero se maano dhrti niklne ko ho gyi thi...


Rajveer khud ko smbhalta hua-orrr..
Vaishali-orr...water ki solid form...mtlb ice...ye apko smjhane ki jrurt nhi h...ki ice se to kata hi jaa skta hai...

Vaishali-teesri form mtlb gas....
Gas ko bhi...pressure ki trh se use kiya jaye to...
Rajveer khud ko bahut chhota mahsus kr rha tha aaj...

Vaishali-lekin fur bhi muje lgta hai koi bhi itni mehnat nhi krega...uske lie bht si chijo ki jrurt pdegi...islie
Vaishali- papa...usne water se nhi...bones se kaata hai

Ab rajveer ka dimak ghumne lga tha...
Uske chehre ki udi hui hwaiyaa saaf dikhai de rhi thi..
Rajveer-ab ye bones...
Vaishali-ye pani...wala koi ...itna tsnsn nhi lena chahega....iske bad ek trika hai haddi...
Haaddi se kaatna aasan h...

Rajveer-or use forensic wale kuu nhi pkd payege...
Vaishali-bilkul pakad paate agr wo log schme apni kabiliyt pr joining krte to...sb rishwat dekkr aagye hai...

Vaishali-bones ke particles milege...unhe pta bhi rhga ki ye hddi ke prticles hai...pr wo bewkuf smjhege ki hath me ya gardan me haddi to hoti hi hai .....bss ...wo log usi ko smjh lege...uspr koi inspection nahi krege...


Desai bahut dhyaan se rajveer ki baate sun rha tha...or jaise jaise rajveer usko bta rha tha..desai ki ankhe bdi hoti ja rhi thi..

Desai-brilliant....schme...hmne to kbhi socha hi nhi... Wese bhi hmara sochna normal hai...prr vaishali.....usne ye sb kaise....

Rajveer-sbse bdi baat...mai usse puch hath ka rha tha...or wo baar baar gle ko bol rhi thi...KYUU....
wo sbko bolti hai khun kr dugi...KYUU
Sbse chhupkar rhti hai...KYU...
Ek baar arun ko ghayal kr chuki hai...KYUU


Kyaa in sbse saabit nhi ho jaata ki jaise wo arun ko marne ko dodti hai wese hi usne Nisha ko maara hoga....


Rajveer-mai jaanbujhr uske paas gun lekar gya tha...lekin wo...uske mathe pr ek lakeer tak nhi dikhai di...use gun se biklul bhi dar nhi lga...

"Desai....kya ye lakshan hai ek masum ladki ke...ye sb lakshan ek gunehgaar ke hote hai...ye bat mujhe bhi hajam nhi ho rhi ki ek 14saal ki ldki kaise khun kr skti hai...ye impossibel hai...prr aj jis stage pr vaishali hai wo bhi impossible hai...

Doc asthana jaise minded doc ki hwa niklaal di us vaishali ne...kya ye impossibe nhi hai...par ye hua hai..

Or sbse bdi and most importent baat...she ATTACKED on arun....is baat ko kyu bhul rhe ho...jaanleva halma tha wo...2inch chaaku peeth me ghus chuka tha...mahino tak uska jakhm nhi bharne wala hai..

Desai-hmmm...in sb baato se lgta to aisa hi hai ki vaishali ne hi ...
Rajveer-thn do it...go and arrest her...
Desai chonkte hue-sir aap kya kah rhe ho...ye sirf aapka shak hai...sabit nhi hua hai...

Rajveer-arun pr hmla krne k lie to kr hi skte ho giraftaar....ye to sabit krne ki jrurt nhi hai...

Desai-nahi sir....aapne puri imandari or lagan ke sath apna kaam kia h...najane kitni baar aapne kaanun ko or is smaaj ko bde bde mujrimo se bchaya hai...

Ab kaanun hi aapko bli chada de...ye mai nhi hone duga....iske lie muje kaanun k khilaaf bhi jaana pde to jauga...prr mai apko betti ko giraftar krke apki image ko or apke dil ko thes nahi pahuchauga..

Rajveer apni gun nikalta hua...
"Fir mere pas ek hi rasta hai...".
Desai hairaani se-wo kya sir ..
Rajveer-agr usne dobara aisa kia to...i will shoot her...

Desai-sir ...aap apki beti ko shoot kroge..
Rajveer-mere lie meri beti ho chahe koi anjaan ldki...MAIN APNE PARIWAR KO BCHANE K KIE USE SHOOT KR SAKTA HU...

mai nahi chahta jo usne arun k sath kia wo uma ke sath bhi ho......
Desai-thik hai sir.....mai bs dua kruga ki wo aisa kuch dobara na kre. ...
Itne me hi rajveer ka phon bajta hai...

Rajveer-haa beta bolo..
Arun ghabrai hui si awaaj me-papa...aap jldi ghr aajaiye...
Rajveer-kya baat hai...
Arun-wo vaishali....vaishali ne ravi ko kidnap kr liya hai ..samne wali aunty ne use roka bhi lekin use le gyi...bol rhi thi aaj iska time pura ho gya...aap jaldi aaayiye papa...

Rajveer-tumhari dua fail ho gyi desai...wo pdos ke ek ldke ka murder krne jaa rhi hai...

Desai chonkta hua-jldi chliye sir....
Rajveer or desai ghr ki taraf bhagte hai..
Dekhte hai to ghr pr bheed lgi thi...

Ravi jo pdos ka ldka tha uski family or pdos ki kuch families aayi hui thi...andr uma logo ke sawalo ke jvaab de rhi rhi...

Rajveer-uma kya hua...
Uma rajveer ko dekhte hi rone lgti hai..
Samne wali lady-bhaisahab ...apki beti arun ko naa jane kaha le gyi h.. mene roka to boli bahut presan kr diya hai isne...iska kaam tmaam krugi aaj...

Ek 19saal ki ldki 24saal ke ldko ko le gyi...kisi ne roka nhi use....orr kaise le gyi...

Samne wali lady-roka tha...raj or praveen ne...lekin...in dono ko peetkar bhag gyi...
Desai-kmaal hai...ek ldki....ek choti ldki 2,2 ldko pr akeli bhaari pd gyi...or wo use le gyi

Raj-uncle...wo...pta nahi usme itni furti or itni jaan kaha se aagyi....

Desai dekhta hai to raaj ki ankhe suji hui thi jaise kisi ne mukke se war kiya ho.....
Rajveer-agr kisi ko kuch b pta h... kyuu le gyi...kaha le gyi...to btao muje...hm bcha skte hai use.....
Tbhi ravi ki bahan aati h samne

"Sir...ravi use like krta tha ...ravi ne kai baar use prpose kia...bs yhi maater tha"wo ldki dr drkr bolti hai...

Rajveer-dunia me ek wohi ldki mili thi use like krne k lie....fir kya hua...
"Aaaj usne propose kia to vaishali ne smile kia...ravi ko lga wo maan gyi...ravi bola long drive pr chloge...vaishali maan gyi...lekin...car me bethte hi vaishali ne usee maarna shuru kr diya...shor shraba dekhkr raj or praveen ayae to vaishali ne baahr niklakr or car ko lock krke unhe bhut maara uske bad car lekr chli gyi...

Rajveer-use drivng nhi aati...car kaise chlayi...
"Wo sb nhi pta pr wo car chlakr use le gyi......wo use maar degi uncle...wo bahut khtrnak hai...plss uncle mere bhai ko bchalo...plss"

Wo ldki rote hue bolti hai...
Rajveer-kaha gye wo log kuch pta hai....
"Nahi uncle...kuch n ptaa"




"Hahahahahaaahaha....pyaar krega...krna pyar... Ab kya hua...."
Vaishali jor jor se haste hue bolti hai...
Samne kursi pr ravi bandha hua tha...jiske hath piche bandhe the...

Ravi-ye tujhe kya ho gya hai...mai tujhe pyar krta hu.. or tu ...kya krna chahti h ...

Vaishali-maarna...tujhe maarna chahti hu...tujhe kitna smjhaya...chhood de mera picha...chhod de...prr tu mana nhi na....ku...kya baat h...mai haa bolti or tu mere sath sb krke muje chhod deta...yhi na..."vaishali gusse se bolti hai...

Ravi-nahi yrr...kisne kaha...
Vaishali gusse me laaal hote hue-chup be sale...wrna aise jagah waar krugi ki mard kahlaane me shrm aayegi tujhe...

muje kya bewkuf smjha hai...tum jaise ghtiya log pahle ldkio ko apne pyar me fsaate ho fr sb krke use chhod dete ho...tujhe kya lga vaishali bhi aisi hogi...beta gabbar singh se paala pda hai tera.."

vaishali ki muskaan or uska pagalpan dekhkr ravi buri trh dr jata hai....

Ravi-dekh vaishali muje jaane de yr...aaj ke bad mai tujhega dekhuga bhi nhi.....

Vaihali-tu khudko nhi dekhega...tere sath do kaam hoga...ya to tera khun...ya fr...tujhe namard bnakr...tere mathe pr I AM A RAPIST likhkr chhod dugi.....

Ravi-tu pagal ho gyi h...chhod muje...maine kaha kisi ka rape kia...
Vaishali-nhi kia na...bholi bhali ldki tumjhe dekhkr smile kr de to tumhe lgta h kaam bn gya...koi ldki haske baat kre to tumhe lgta h wo tumhe line de thi h...mujse pyar krta h ..kya krega pyar krke...bol mujhse shaadi....nhai ha...fr kya bkwas h ye pyar...

salo kutto apni hawas mitaane ko pyar ka naam dete ho...shrm aani chahiye tumhe...sb jaanti hu kaise tumne rajni ko use kia or chhod diya...aaj tujhhe aisi sjaa dugi ki tum kya...tumhare jaise kai ghtiya log sudhrege....

Ravi-pyar krna kya galat hai...
Vaishali-bilkul galat nhi h...agr pyar schha h to us ldki ke maa bap ke pas jao usse shadi k lie...

na ki use log drive pr le jao...chori chuppe milo...na jaane kitni ldkiya tum jaiso ki vjh se sucide kr leti hai....pyar kia chhod diya.....uske bad us ldki ka kya...uski shadi hoti hai...uska husbend usse puchegha kaha kia sb...kya bole wo bechari...tum to use ksm dilakr ...mujhpr vishwas nhi hai kya ..ye sb bolkr sb kuch kr lete ho....fr chhod dete ho...aaj to tu nhi bchega...mrega...pkka mrega....

"Teri bliii chadhaugi mai....bliii"
Vaishali ke is rudra rup ko dekhkr ravi pasino me nhaa jata hai....
Ravi Kampne lgta hai...vaishali ki ankho me aag saf dikhai de rhi thi....

Ravi-vaishali....mai...hath jodta hu...plss chhod de...mai aaj ke bad...kbhi aisa n kruga...plsss jaane de muje...
Vaishali- drte ku ho mrne se...ale le le...mela babu ko dl lg lha hai....mele babu ne thana thaaya...

Vaishali hste hue mjaakiya andaaj me bolti hai....
Ravi-thik hai...muje maar rhi h tu..mrte hue insan ki ek akhri ichha puri n kregi...

Vaishali-jrur bolo....
Ravi-tuu itni shrif ....sidhi dikhne wali...itni age me itni khtrnak kaise bn gyi....

Vaishali-apne pyar ka chkkr chlaate wkt tumhe ldkiyo ki age n dikhti....us time to tumhare lie wo jvan rahti hai na...anyway....pta hai...samundra jitna shant hota hai....utna hi khtrnaak hota hai...hahahahaahah...hahhaha hahaha..

Vaishali ki hsi ki awaaj sakshaat yamraaj ki hsi lg rhi thi...ravi ki awaaj bhi ladkhdaane lgi thi...
Aajtk usne itna bhyank rup kisi ka nhi dekhaa tha....
Ravi bs bhgwan se dua kr rha tha ki bs kaise bhi aaj vaishali se bchale...uske bad hr ldki ko bahan ki najar se dekhega...

Ravi kuch sochta hua-vai...vai....vaishaali.....tu muje rakhi bandhna....mai tera bhai bn jauga...plssss...muje chhod de...aa...aaj ke bad mai aisa kuch kru to...muje tu maar dena....abhi ...bss ek...ek moka de...mujhe...

Vaishali kaatil hasi ke sath ravi ke charo trf ghumti hai...
"Hmm....mera bhai bnega.....mere bhai se jaaakr puchna ...ki mera bhai bnna bhi kitna mushkil hai...abhi tk bed pr pda hai..

2inch chaaku uske peeth me ghusa diya tha....anyway...muje tera ye praposal psnd aaya...bhai bn jaa mera...

Ravi ko ummid ki ek kiran si dikhai deti hai...
Ravi-haa plss mai tera bhai....tu meri bahan....plss bahan jaane de...
Vaishali-bhai ko raakhi baandhte hai na...
Mai tujhe rankhi baandhti hu...

Vaishali ravi ke paas beth jaati hai...or uske bandhe hue hatho ko dekhkti hai...
Vaishali-ab raakhi kaha se laau...

Ravi thodi chalaaki dikhata hua-ghr...ghar hai...rakhi...mere ghr rakhi hui hai...

Vaishali muskuraati hui-bhaiyaa...kitne nighty ho aap...rakhi to bahan laati hai na...mere paas hai wese ek rakhi...

Vaishali apni jeb me haath daalti hai or jb hath nijaalti hai to ravi ke hosh ud jaate hai...
Ravi-yee...ye kya hai....
Vaishali-tumhe nnhi pta bhaiya...ye bone hai...hadddi...insan ki haddi.....

Vaishali us haddi ko dekhti hui-ab se phle ek ldka mere piche pda tha...uski haddi hai ye...prr teri kismt achhi hai...jo tune muje bahan bna liya...agr wo bhi bna leta to...shayd ye haddi uske shrir me hoti....hahahahahaah...


Vaishali ke itne bhyaank ruup ko dekhkr kisi bhi insan ka behosh hona munasib hai....
Ravi ke mathe se pasina barish bnkr tapak rha tha. ...

Vaishali-itna pasina ku aaa rha hai bhaiya..tbhi vaishali ko kuch mahsus hota hai...kuch awaaj sunai deti hai...vaishali niche dekhti hai to.....

""Chhhiii...bhaaiya ye kya...apne...pant me hi susu kr diya..."chhhee kitne gande ho aap..."" Vaishali naak pr hath rkhte hue bolti bai...
Ravi ka dr ke maare peshab nikal gya tha...

Nikle bhi kyu na ...akhir samne najaraa hi aisa tha...

Vaishali -koi baat nhi...ab mai is haddi se apke hath pr raakhi bnaati hu...
Ravi-nahi...nahi...vaishali...plss
Vaishli ravi ki baat nhi sunti or haddi ki nok se uske hath ko cheerne lgti hai..

"Aaaaaaa.....aaaaa...nahi...bchaao.....bchaaao.....maaaaaaaaaaaa"raavi ki cheekhe puri ghr me gunj jaati hai...
Vaishaki muskan lie hue...uske haath ko cheerte hue uspr koi design bnaane ki kosis kr rhi thi...

Ravi ke hath se khunn ki dhaar girne lgi thi....
Ravi to drd se cheekh rha tha...bilakh rha tha...
""Plssss vaishali jaane do...aaaaaaaa...uuuiiiii mmmaaaaa......"ravi jitna cheekhta vaishali muskan ke sath or gahrai se uske hath ki skin ko cheerti...

Rajveer-mai tumhe order deta hu desai...jaha bhi vaishali dikhayi di...shoot her...
Desai-kyaa kah rhe hai aap sir....
Rajveer-this is my order.....
Desai-okk sir...

Uma-ye kya kah rhe hai aap...vaishali ko shoot kr dege...
Rajveer-ab wo hmari vaishali nhi rhi...khunni bn chuki...nisha ko bhi usne hi mara thaa...

Uma ko ye sunta hi dhakka sa lgta hai...or wo bed pr beth jaati hai...kuch bol bhi n paatai...
Rajveer-let's go desai....

Desai-lekin kaha sir...
Rajveer-mujhe pta ha wo kaha hai...
Rajveer or desai dono nikal jaate hai....

""Bahot drd ho rha hai...plss ye mt kr vaishali..."
Ravi drd se tadapta hua bolta hai...
Vaishali-raakhi wali prmpra to nibhaani pdegi na...bs ho gya ....
Vaishali jajse jaise hath pt design bna rhi thi...ravi ki jaan nikak jaa rhi thi...
Ravi cheekhta rha...chillata rha...prr wha uski cheekh sunne wala koi nahi tha...sb bebas tha wo..
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Vaishali -orrr ye...ho gya...done...
Vaishali -dekho...achhi bni hai na...
Ravi rota hua dekhta to use hath pr khunn ke alawa kuch dikhai deta...

Ravi rota hua-ab to jaaje do..
Vaishali-aree...rakhi bandhne pr mujhe gift nahi milega ky....
Ravi rota hua-kyaaaa...kyaaa firt..
Vaishali ravi ke naajdik aakr uske kaan me araam se bolti hai..."tera jaaaann"
"Hahahahahaha"orr jor se hsne lgti hai...jiski awaaj ravi ke kaan faade jaa rhi thi...

"Vaiishaaliii"
Achank vaishali ke kaan me rajveer ki awaaj sunai pdti hai...
Vaishali-ohhh...aaaj pahli bar police time pr aayi hai...papa...bs 5min ruk jaate ...bhut mjaa arha tha...dekho...mene isko rakhi bandhi hai...
Vashali ravi ke hath ki taraf ishara krti hai...

Ravi-plsss uncle bcha lijiye muje....plsss he mar degi...ye bhut khtrnaak hai...
Rajveer ko dekhkr ravi ki jaan me jaan aati hai...

Desai or rajveer dekhte hai ki ravi ka hath se khun bah rha tha.....
Rajveeer apni gun nikaal leta hai...or vaishali ki taraf aim krta hai...

Rajveer-tumne iski nas kaat di...
Vaishali-nahi papa...rakhi baandhi hai...aaj se ye mera bhai bn gya na...
Desai uski is hrkt ko dekhkr dr jaata hai...
Rajveer-tumhe maarne ke alwa ab koi chara nhi bcha...

Vaishali sad hote hue-kyaaa aap muje maarege....
Or achank hs deti hai...hahahaha...
Muje marege.......muje marna itna asaan nhi hai papa......hahahahaha...

Vaishali ki awaaaaj...pure kmre me gunj rhi thi...desai ke bhi maathe pr psina aachuka tha.....

Rajveer-your game is over...mai apni beti ke pyar k lie kisi ki mot se soda nhi kr skta....apni beti ke lie...smaaj ko khtre me nhi daal sakta...tum sbke lie khtra ho...muje maaf krna...rajveer ki ankho me aanu aa chuke the...kyuki jis beti ko paalposkat bda kia...wo aaj usii ko shoot krne jaa rha tha...shayd or koi rasta bhi n tha...bye vaishali...
"M SORYYYY"


Next update will be soon...
By God kya khatarnaak update diya he ankita ji. Mere rongate khade ho gaye. Vaishali ka kya khatarnaak rup dikhaya he. Kya wo mentali disturb he ya fir bachpan se hi aisi he. Rajveer ke liye kitana kathin kaam he ye. Ek beti ko khone ke baad dusari beti par khud goli chalana. Ufff.

Waiting 4 next update
 

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Thanks for coment...hmm...ab tk wese to galta walo hi peeta hai isne...prr ek baat iske bhai ne glti se iski jeans utha li thi...uspr usko usne ghayal kr diya tha...kya ye sahi hai..?..
Haa ye to hai...nisha ko isne maara hai to bdi vajah ho sakti hai...pr sochna ye hai..ki 5saal pahle bhi kya ye esi hi psycho hogi...dekhte hai kyaa hoga...
Eagerly waiting dear
 
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