Thriller khaamoshiya...Ek Rahasya (Completed)

[Ankitarani]

2nd part :- to ab vaishu pahuch gayi hai disha ke Ghar ek kutte ke katne se bachane ke through...ye vaishu ke irade se lag rha hai wo yahi rhane wali hai..matbal murderer kahi agal bagal hi hai.. aur wahi kutta ab tanu ke Ghar me bhi aa gaya kuchh strange lag rha hai.. aur kutte ka naam chaku ...ha vaishu se yahi ummid bhi hai.... Arun bhi chal Diya Delhi job ke liye na na na wo pakka vaishu ke pass Jane Wala hai ..kya vaishu ne khud bulaya hai kyoki ek bar chaku ka hamla jhelane ke baad khud vaishu ke pichhe Jane ki himmat to nhi honi chahiye....aur idhar ek aur khun hota hai jisse picture me dharmesh sir aate hai..full on Josh me..aur raajveer sir se vaishu ke bare me sunate khun me ubal as gaya dharmesh sir ke ...very good ju hi ab kuchh Kar sakte ho...are wah arun bhi sahi jagah pahunch gaya.. matbal kuchh to jhol hai...ye Arun mahashay to full form me gana ga rhe hai..wo alag baat hai ki dusaro ko kauwa ki aawaj lag rhi hai.. matter ye karta hai ki apne ko apni aawaj koyal ki tarah lagani chahiye...keep it up... Vaisu aur tanu ko manchalo me chheda galat baat bilkul galat baat ab to marna tay hai..na lagata hai Bach jayenge kyoki Arun aakar unhe samajha rha hai..lekin ye kya Kar diye wo Arun ko hi bhaga diye..Shri Krishna ji ne ek baar kaha tha ki jab Nash manush par chhata hai pahale Vivek mar jata.... ...aur idhar college me vaishu ko adult bato ko sunane ko milta hai tanu ke fraind dwara... dharmesh sir vaishu ke chakkar me Arun ke room me aa jate hai...aur ye kya dharmesh sir ka bhi namkaran ho gaya Arun ke hatho. Aur raho jawan larke ke sath tumhe porn dikha ke Mana to kahana...are ye kya dhammu,dhamiya, dhamaki ....sabhi family ka namkaran ho gaya Oye dhammu chal baba Arun ko 151rs ka Prasad chada......,.ye vaishaali Arun ko apna bf Bata di ...sach kaha gaya hai ki 1jhoot ko dabane ke liye 100 jhoot bolana parata hai...ab ye dharmesh par vaishu ko shak ho gaya ju to gaye dhammu 12 ke bhav me....ye dharmesh sir ko achanak ye sari family related ghatana hona hatprabh Kar gayi ...aur last me wo dhamaki ( dharmesh sir ki beti nhi) wali video se dar ke bhag hi liye.. mujhe lag rha hai ki iski madad aanach Kar rhi hai...aur college me aaj phir wahi adult talk but aaj vaishu interested lag rhi hai aur Ghar par aake disha se bate bhi Kar rhi hai iss bare me...ab iss picture me nayi kitdaar aayi hai Sweta madam aur aate hi chal chal di apne bahan Neha ko waha bhejkar...ye plan bhi sahi hai....aur issi bich mla ke Ghar jakar uske bete ko chutiya banakar uske hi farmhouse par ussi ko dardnak maut de di ... Matlab wow..siharan paida Kar dene wale scenes..aur ab to vaishu ne ek talwar banawa li hai khud ke liye aur usse chhupa di hai Arun ke Ghar me... matbal dimag to hai larki me..Neha ko dekhate hi Arun ko o maaa goooo truuuuu lobe ho gaya...aur dono Milkar kirayedar union bhi baba liye.. matbal dosti ho gayi ...yani aadha pyar to usse abhi mil gaya pura ke liye abhi time hai....aur isi bich kuchh halki fulki mastiya hoti rahti hai ..aur raajveer sir side se plan banate rahate hai ....aur isi bich disha ka kidnapping ....lekin koi disha ko aise kyo kidnape karega... are kidnapper to aanchal hai matbal kuchh to massage Dena chahati hai wo vaishu ko...shayad ye ki tum mere pahuch se dur nhi ho...Neha Sweta madam ko bhejkar disha ko bacha leti hai.. aur issi bich aanchal aur Sweta madam ke bich tagadi fight hui...sabhi ko aanchal maar di thi par disha aur ek ko wo bacha ke rakhi thi matbal aanchal ka plan kuchh aur hi tha...khair issi bahane Sweta madam aur vaishu ke bich mulakat bhi hoti hai...aur issi sab ke bich cricket ka challenge disha ko Arun de deta hai ..phir rat ko bat chori Karne aaye jaha pata Chala ki Neha seats madam ki bahan hai jiske Karan vaishu Neha ko Marne ka nishchay Kar leti hai... cricket ke maidan me mast halki fulki comedy ke sath match hota hai ....aur Arun se Neha ke liye aisa tha just like duniya Jaye sali bhand me mujhe parwah hi nhi...aur finally aaj ground me hi wo Neha ko perpose Kar Diya...aur Neha udash ho gayi kyoki usse lagata hai ki Arun vaishu se pyar karta hai ya usse abhi pyar ka ahasas hi nhi hua hai...vaishu jakar Arun ko dhamaki deti hai ki wo Neha ko maar dalegi. Arun to pura tav kha jata hai iss baat par .... But lagata nhi ki vaishu Neha ko sach me marana chahti hai..kyoki vaishu planning karke ya ye sochkar nhi Marti ki usse marana hai...uska decision on the spot hota hai...Neha dar ke mare apne bahan ko bula leti hai... Sawati madam bhi ek lead ke jariye aanchal ki real identity pata laga hi leti hai...great job Swati madam .....aur idhar vaishu ki pata chal jata hai ki disha hi aanchal hai... Matlab sare readers pagal ...what the fuck wali situation ....aur disha ka Nisha ko Marne ki kahani wakai sare readers ke soch ko dhatta bata ke sabko chaunka Diya aur ek baat clear Kar di ... it's not end it's just begining of a bloodlust war...aur disha kudh ko chaku maar ke ghayal Kar leti hai taki wo mar mar ke apne papo ko prayashchit Kar sake...but Nisha ke katal ka reason sunke aur Nisha aur disha ki dosti tatha disha ka vaisu ke liye pyar dekh ke vaishu disha ko apni bahan manane lagi thi...kafi emotional scenes create ho gaya Jo asnkho me 2 bund aanshu ke la hi diye..aur yahi pata chalata hai ki vaishu apne ko coconut ki tarah show Kar rahi thi ..Bahar se hard but anadar se soft....
Sawati aur raajveer sir inko manf karke inhe nayi shuruwat Karne ki Salah dete hai but bato se hi vaishu apni mansha Bata deti hai..yani ham nhi sudharenge....
Iss part me bhi aapki story par pakad ekdam majbut thi... great job... storyline buld up wakai Kamal ka tha ..ye apko iss story ko anat Tak padane par majbur Kar dene Wala part tha.... brilliant writing skills ankitarani ji....

Ye adult baato ka jo chakkar tha...kuch scene aye hai jiske kucu adult baate thi...
Orr vaishali ka arun ko apna bf btana...disha ke paas vaishali ka sona..ye sb scene kuch or sochkr the.....ya story actually incest thi tb...
Incest build up krne ke lie ye sb tha...


Butt...bad me mujhe param satya ka gyan hua or mene ise puri trh se thriller kr diya...

Incest ka tag bhi hatwa diya...

 

[11 ster fan]

Butt...bad me mujhe param satya ka gyan hua

Ki Mai dharati par bojh hu

 

[11 ster fan]

adult baato ka jo chakkar tha...kuch scene aye hai jiske kucu adult baate thi...
Orr vaishali ka arun ko apna bf btana...disha ke paas vaishali ka sona..ye sb scene kuch or sochkr the.....ya story actually incest thi tb...
Incest build up krne ke lie ye sb tha...

Phir bhi story par pakad loose nhi hui ...I appreciate this...

 

[Jaguaar]

Disclamer-is kahani ke sabhi patra or ghatnaye kalpnik hai...kisi bhi insan ya ghatna se iska koi sambandh nahi hai...

Khaamoshiya...Ek Rahasya..
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20/01/2015
6pm ..
Nisha-Nahi yar...bahot time ho jaega...hame ab chalna chahiye...
Anchal-como on kuch nahi hoga...bs 15min me ham log nikal jayege...
Nisha-wo baat nahi hai yr...mai phle kbhi is trh ke night club me nahi aayi..

Anchal-to kya hua...har insan hr kaam pahli baar to krta hi hai na...or isme bura kya hai....ham koi drink nhi kar rhe...koi ladke ka chakkar nhi hai....so
Nisha-haa par...papa ko pta lga to bahut panga ho jayega...u know na...unki kitni jaan pahchan hai...or wo aksar esi jagah raid daalne aate rahte hai..

Anchal smile karte hue-chinta mat kr...aaj ke bad tujhe yaha club me aane ki jarurt hi nahi pdegi...
Nisha-matlab...
Anchal-matlb ye ki...jislie ham yha aaye hai...wo kaam khatam.. to yha anaa nhi hoga na...
Or anchal ek smile kr deti hai...
Tabhi achank club me andhera ho jaata hai.......



1am
Maine kaha na...ki jo bhi ho jaye mujhe meri beti kisi bhi keemat pr mere ghar chahiye...
Rajveer chillakr or dri hui awaj me phon pr chilla chillakr baat kr rha tha...
""Haa sir...hm puri kosis kr rhe hai...jaise hi pta lgega...ham sbse pahle aapko inform krege...pr bs aap ghar se bahr mat nikaliyega..."dusri taef se inspector ne rajveer ko samjhate hue kaha...

Rajveer-tum sb log mujhe aane se ku rok rhe ho...
"Sir ...ho sakta hai ye raghav ka kaam ho...or aapke na rhne se..wo apki family ko hurt kr skta hai..so please aap unke paas rahiyega..."
Rajveer-haa thik hai pr...
"Kyaaaaa....nahi ye nahi ho sakta.....meri beti hame chhodkr nahi jaa sakti.."
Achank rajveer ko apni biwi ke rone ki awaaj sunai deti hai...or uske hath se phon gir jaata hai....



Introduction-

Rajveer commissionor of police hai...jisse achhe achhe gunde drte hai...adha crime to inke naam se hi khtm ho gya hai...jaha bhi joining hua smjho crime ke lie musibt bn gye..
Uma-rajveer ki biwi or ek house wife
Nisha-Rajveer ki beti.....or hotel mgmt ki study kr rhi hai...kuch hi mahine me shadi hone wali thi..
Arun-rajveer ka beta...school me pdhta hai..
Vaishali- sbse chhoti beti






Ye sb introduction ke lie tha...i know bht sare questions honge aap logo ke mind me...sbke jvab update ke sath sath mil jayege...

Ye ek thriller suspanse story hogi.....aap sbko bahut pasnd aayegi...bss update me thoda bht late ho skta hai...kafi readers ke msg aate the ki koi story start kru...chahe to update hafte me ek du....jldi dene ki kosis kia krugi...baaki aaplog support krna..i promise apko nirasha nhi hogi...your...Ankita rani

Nice Updatee

Aapki story aajse padhni start ki hai.

Yeh Anchal ka uss tarah bolna aajke baad tujhe kabhi yaha nhi aana hoga yeh thoda shaq karne pe majbur karta hai.

Aur yeh kya Nisha marr gayi. Par kaisee. Kahi isme Anchal ka haath toh nhi. Aur yeh Raghav kaun. Jarur Commissioner sahab ka koi dushman hoga.

 

[Kingfisher]

Ye adult baato ka jo chakkar tha...kuch scene aye hai jiske kucu adult baate thi...
Orr vaishali ka arun ko apna bf btana...disha ke paas vaishali ka sona..ye sb scene kuch or sochkr the.....ya story actually incest thi tb...
Incest build up krne ke lie ye sb tha...


Butt...bad me mujhe param satya ka gyan hua or mene ise puri trh se thriller kr diya...

Incest ka tag bhi hatwa diya...

Jab apko param satya ka gyan hua tabhi se mene es behtarin story ko padna chod diya coz us me sand or deevapan padke incest lober bn gya tha par ab allrounder hu ... Vaise incest hoti tab bhi story hit rehti bs usme varun ka cherectar kamjor tha

 

[Jaguaar]

Update 2

Ghar me dukh ka mahol ban chuka tha...charo taraf bs rona,cheekhe hi sunai de rhi thi...

Nisha bahot sidhi or shrif ladki thi...
Jiski kisi se koi khas matlab nhi rahta tha...aaj ki tej raftar me bhi wo bhot slow chalti thi...bs pdhai me hi wo intelligent thi...islke alawa wo itni sidhi thi ki koi thoda sa ankhe dikhaye to rone lg jaye..


"Akhir kisne usko maara...kisne uski itni buri dasha ki...kyu maara usko...uski to kisi se koi dushmani bhi nahi thi...kyaa...kisi ne meri vajah se...kahi kisi gunehgar ne to aisa nhi ki...kya meri police ki nokri ki vajah se meri beti ki bali chadh gyi...."ankho me ansu lie ..ek kone me chupchap betha rajveer kuch se kuch soche jaa rha tha..


Ab nisha ke antim sanskar ko do din ho chuke the....

Ghar me kisi ne khana tak nhi khaya tha...

Rajveer khamosh betha soche ja rha tha..
Achank uske kandho pr kisi ne hath rkha...rajveer ne dekha to uski biwi uma thi...


Uma-aap hi ese rhoge to bchho ko kon smbhalega...
Vaishu ne 2din se kuch khaya nhi hai...plsss use kuch khila do...
Rajveer apne ansu pochnta hua...

"Kaha hai vaishu"
Uma-baahr park me bethi hai...
Rajveer vaishali ko bulakr jbrdsti use khana khilaata hai...


Raat me sote time rajveer ko sb kuch yaad aarha tha..
Nisha ki lash club ke basement me mili thi....

"Nisha kabhi club jaati nhi thi...jrur wo kisi ke sath gyi hogi..
Yha to use koi janta tak nhi tha...abhi pichhhle hafte hi to hostel se aayi thi...
Mushkil se 2,3mhine me wo aati hai hostel se ese me...kon uske sath esa kr skta hai

Wo club gyi hogi to...kiske sath...kahi koi ldka...
Jo bhi use wha lekr gya usi ne uska murder kia hai...muje kisi bhi trh pta lgana hoga..."
itna sochkr rajveer hadbdakr uthta hai...or mobile uthakr no. Dial krta hai..


Rajveer"ha desai......mai ye bol rha hu ki...us din ki cctv dekhi club ki..."
Desai-haa sir...mene sb chek kia...aap jis halat me the apko btana uchit nhi smjha..uske sath koi ladki aayi thi...prr chehre ko scarf se dhka tha...islie uski koi pahchan nhi hui..


Rajveer-club me scarf kon use krta hai...
Desai-wo ldki bhut hoshiyar hai sir...wo janti thi ki cctv hai ..islie scarf use kia...murder usi ne kia hai...
Rajveer-kitne time ki recording hai...
Desai-sir sham ke 5.45se 6.05
Rajveer-itne time me usne kabhi scarf nhi htaya

Desai-htaya tha sir...prrr mene kaha na wo bhut intelligent hai...jb usne scarf htaya to camera uski peeth ki trf tha...or 5min bad lite off ho gyi....uske bad 15min tak lite nhi on hui...

Rajveer-15min...itna time ku lga
Desai-jaha lite ka connection hai ...kisi ne us room me lock lga diya tha..
Rajveer-mtlb wo ldki akeli nhi thi...lite bnd uske bad...lock...koi or bhi tha sath...lite wale room ki koi photos..?

Desai-nahi sir...wha camera nhi h..

Rajveer-itni planning ke sath...ek masum ka murder...
Desai thoda bhavuk hota hua-ha sir...hme usko dhundna hi hoga...
Rajveer-par kaise ...koi sabut to dikh nhi rha hai...

Desai-ha sir...pr haar bhi n maan skte...jis trh nisha us ldki se baat kr rhi thi..lgta tha use janti h achhe se.....orrr...

Deshai bolta bolta chup ho gya.. jaise kuch saham sa gya ho

Rajveer-bolo desai jo bhi bolna h...
Desai- nisha ko mai janta hu...pr ...dekhkr lg rha tha ki...use koi jbrdsti n laya tha...wo khud aayi thi club me....

Rajveer-club me record me kuch Ho skta hai kya....
Desai-haa sir...record me aane walo ke naam hote hai..
Rajveer-thn do it fast desai...dekho nisha ke nam ke aspas kisi ldki ka naam tha kya. ..

Desai-apne aapko smbhaliye sir...aap jante hai club me mostly couple hi jaate hai...ese me aspas kisi ldki ka nam hona koi bdi baat nhi ...

Rajveer-badi baat hai desai...
Nisha or wo ldki...unki vajah se...kahi to list me kuch change hua hoga...kuki couples sath me jaate h...or ldki ke bad ldka...ya ldke ke bad ldki...isi sequance me chlega bs...lekin ye ldki dono sath thi...thoda bahut to change hua hoga pkka....


Desai-haa pr...itni lmbi list..
Rajveer-puri nhi.. nisha ke nam ke aaspas ki chek kro...upr niche ke bs 5 ya 7,7naam chek kro...

Desai-okk sir...dekhta hu...
Rajveer-or club ke sbhi staaf ko dekho kon chutti pr tha, kon jldi gya ,kon late gya...sb chek kro

Desai-okk sir...kl sb dekhta hu mai...
Rajveer -kal nhi abhi
Desai-sir abhi raat ke 2bje hai...
Rajveer -soryy desai...wo mai...I dont want to take risk...or club to raat me hi khulte hai na....

Desai- thik hai sir...mai jaata hu..
Rajveer -mai bhi chalta hu...

2.30am
In club
Rajveer-kya ho rha hai ye..
Rajveer chillake kahta hai..

Manager-kya btmmiji hai ye...or kon ho aap...apko andar kisne aane diya..

Desai chillakr- hey...tmeej se baat kr...police work hai..
Manager-soryy sir...aayiye..pr istime...?
Desai-ku ab kya problm hai...
Manager-nahi sir...hm bs close krne wale the..

Rajveer -bad me krna band...abhi hame yha ka record dekhna hai...kon aata hai kon jaata hai...

Manager-nisha case ke lie sir...
Desai-haa wohi.....
Manager-prrr wo to aap log kl hi le gye the..

Ye sunte hi rajveer or desai ke tote ud gye...
Desai-kon le gya...kya bkwas kr rhe ho...
Manager-sir ek ladies police aayi thi...wo case ke silsile me hmara pura record le gyi...ye bolke hi 2din bad pahucha degi...


Rajveer ke mathe me salvate pd chuki rhi...
Desai-tum koi natak to n kr rhe..
Manager-nahi saab...police ki madad krna hmara kaam h...lady police aayi thi...wo madam...ye bolkr le gyi ki case me chahiye.

Rajveer-naam kya tha uska..
Manager-naam nahi dekha sir
Rajveer-cctv me uski photos to hogi na..
Manager-haa sir jrur hogi..aayiye

Desai or Rajveer uske sath chl dete hai..

Dekhiye sir...
...
Rajveer or desai dhyan se cctv photage ko dekhne lgte h..
Bahut dhyan se dekhte hai...
Bhut mashakkt ke bad bhi unhe ek bhi lady police nhi dikhayi deti..


Desai gusse me-hame pagal smjh rkha hai kya...jaanta h police ko gumrah krne k lie kitni sja ho sakti hai tujhe

Manager-mai sach kah rha hu sir...ek min..
Or manager dusra camera on krta hai....
Ye record room ka photos tha..

Manager thoda forward krke rok deta hai...""dekhiye sir ye rhi .."
Desai or rajveer dhyan se dekhte hai...lekin isme us ldki kaa face nhi..bs side pose aarha tha..
Rajveer- dekha desai...ye ladki...hmse 2 kadam aage hai....ise pta tha ki camrea kis side hai islie ese khri hai ki camera ise n dekh ske...

Desai-haa sir...ye ladki bahut jada chalaak hai...
Rajveer-hmare sb kiye kraye pr paani fir rha hai...kya kre desai..mera sr fatne ko ho rha hai..

Desai-sir...aapne bde bde case solve kie hai...aaj phli baar aapko haara hua mahsus kr rha hu...

Rajveer-haa desai...ye case kisi or ka hota to shayd mai minto me solve kr deta...
Lekin mere jajbat muje kuch sochne
smjhne nhi de rhe .....or is baat me bhi koi shak nhi hai ki...ye ldki jitni shatir hai...utna abhi tk hme kisi case me nhi mila..

Desai-haa sir...mene bhi pahli baar kisi ldki ko itna intellegent dekha hai...bina koi sboot chhode apna kaam kie jaa rhi h..

Rajveer-saboot...do baar hm use cctv me dekh chuke hai...lekin...kya kre...isme tumhari galti hai desai...agr tum usi din is record ko dekh lete to shayd...

Desai-m really soryy sir...apki beti meri beti jaisi h...bs us din muje bhi bht dukh tha...shayd usi ke chlte itna yad n rha...
Kuch der k lie sannata chha jata hai..
Or dono club se baahr aajate h...
Gaadi me bethkr raste ki taraf jaane lagte hai...

Desai-glaa kaata gya hai...pr kisi chij se kaata hai....ye forensic wale bhi pta nahi lga paaye...uske shrir pr kisi ki fingerprint tak nhi...kamal ka dimak hai us murdrer ka...

Rajveer-tum uski tareef kr rhe ho..
Desai-nahi sir...hmara case utna asaan nhi h...bs ye bta rha hu

Desai-sir...aapne uski frnds se baat ki...kisi ko shayad kuch pta hai..
Rajveer-uski bs 3frnds ko jaanta hu mai...Rani,Riya or Rakhi...teeno se baat ki...lekin koi faeda nhi...kisi ko kuch pta nahi hai...

Rajveer-desai...kya hame...aaspas ke road pr lge cctv photage chek krne chahiye....wo log whi se aaye honge shayd kuch pta lag jaye....
Desai-haa sir...kar skte hai..

Dec 2015.....
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Dec 2016
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Dec 2017

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2020
Bahot menhnat ki ....lekin hath bs nirasha lgi...
Murdrer ne itni sfaai se murder kia tha ki police ke 2 saal tak dant khatte rhe. .
2 saal bad is case me kisi ko khas intrest nhi rha...or ab ...ye case lgbhag close ho chuka tha



Lekin ek shaks tha...jiske dimak me ye ab bhi taaza tha...jiski nind ab tk nisha ki mot ne khrab ki hui thi...aaj bhi wo us khuni ko dhund rha tha...na police....na koi support bs ..akele lga hua...or use pta tha ki...ek n ek din...wo jrur kaamyag hoga.....

Next update will be soon....

Awesome Updateee

Yeh murder jarur uss Anchal ne hi kiya hai lekin kyon kiyaa. Aakhir aisi kya dushmani thi Nisha see.

Aur badi chalaki se kiya har jagah se khud ko hide kiya aur club se records bhi le gayi.

Lekin ek baat samaj nhi aayi Manager ne toh uska chehra dekha hi hoga toh kya uss Manager se uska sketch nhi banwa sakee.

Aur yeh kaun hai jo uss khooni ko dhund raha hai.

Jarur Nisha ka bhai hoga yaa phir koi aisa jo usse pyaar karta ho. Aur uski maut ke gunhegaar ko saza dilwana chahta ho.

 

[Jaguaar]

Update 3
2020
After 5yr...in police station...

Rajveer-desai...jra wo...akram wali file dena...
Desai dhundne lgta hai...
Desai file dhundkr rajveer ko deta hai...
Rajveer- kaha hoga ye akram....

Desai-Jb se jail se bhaaga hai..iska kuch ata pta nhi h...1saal se kisi ne ise dekha tk nhi...logo ka kahna hai ki ya to wo mr gya ya fr desh chhod diya hoga...

Rajveer sigrate jlaakr ek kash lgake muh se dhua chhodte hue-hmmm....
Sahi salamt hota to...ab tk hmare kbje me hota...bhla kisi ki kya mjaal ki hmare samne tik ske..

Mumbai police is best police....
Desai-haa sir...mumbai police best hai...aajtak hmne kisi ko nhi chhoda...bss..
Ek ko chhod diya...


Rajveer kuch sochte hue-desai...us case ko mt yad dilao...tum jaante ho na...kitni mehnt ki thi hm sbne...
Rajveer kursi se uthkr desai ke paas jaata hai...or uske kandhe pr haath rkhkr..

"Desai...hm sb kuch nhi h ..hmse kahi jaada intelligent log mojud h....hr sher ka ek swa sher hota h...wo to bs...khud ko motivate krne k lie ...khud ki tareef krni pdti hai..."

Desai-nahi sir....ek khuni kanoon se intelligent nhi ho skta ...or hona bhi nahi chahiye...aisa hone lge to...aam insano ka to jeena mushkil ho jayega...

Rajveer-Tum thk kahte ho desai...bahut si baate aisi hai...jo us case ke bare me muje jvaab nhi mile the..
Desai utsukta se-wo kya sir..

Rajveer marker uthakr white board pr likhta hai. .

"Wo ye desai ....ki...
No 1-ye bs movies me hota hai...wrna india me itni intelligent ldki nhi hoti...
I mean hoti hai...prrr wo ese kaam me involve n hoti...jis trh se wo sb kia gya tha..wo kisi aam aadmi ka kaam n tha...wo koi peshewar khuuni kr skta hai...or india me...peshewar khuuni ...ldki.....baat kuch hajam n hoti...yha india ki ldkia bs 3 baate sochti h...


Desai-wo kya sir ..
Rajveer-shadi karke kaise priwar chlayegi.
Use sundr kaise dikhnaa hai ....orr jo pdhai krti hai unhe success kaise hona hai...
Lekin is trh ka case ab tk samne nhi aaya...

Rajveer white board pr or likhta hai...

"Tumhe yaad hai desai...postmaartem me...forensic lab me ye tak pta n lga tha ki...glaa kaata kis hathiyar se gya hai..."

Rajveer-tum bhi achhe se jaante ho...ki hr chij apne andr ke kuch particle thoda bht chhodti h...agr wo kahi bhi touch ho to...
Desai-ha sir...
Rajveer-forensic lab me btaya gya ki...wha kisi lohe...steel...kanch...lkdi....pathhar...kisi bhi chij ka koi surag nhi mila...mtlb gle kisi bhi chij ne nhi kaata gya...lekin...kta hua saaf dikh rha hai ...doctors ne btaya ki bs...gle pr nisha ke hi hath ke nishan the...jo usne khud ko protect krne k lie use kie the.....


Desai bdi dhyan se sun rha tha...
Desai-iska mtlb usne sucide kia tha..
Rajveer-sucide....murder ki trh...
desai murder sucide ki trh kia jaata hai...na ki sucide murder ki trh.. or wo sucide kyu kregi bhla...club ki lite bnd krke...koi bhi logic nhi hai desai...
Desai-sir...beti kis hostel me thi..
Rajveer-Chandigarh...lekin isse kya lena dena...
Desai-ho sakta hai ki...hostel se hi koi connection ho...
Rajveer-wha mene pta to kia tha...kuch n pta lg paya...lekin chandigar yha se bhut dur hai...murder yha hua hai...chandigarh se koi mtlb nhi hai....


Desai-sir kabtak is case me uljhe rhege...jb bhi is case ke bare me sochta hu sr drd hi hota hai...
Rajveer-tumhara bs sr drd hota hai desai...mere sr ke sath dil me bhi drd hota hai ..

Desia-mai samjh skta hu sir...lekin...is case ke bare me jb sochte hai...kuch n milta...bs ulajh kr rah jaate hai.....

Rajveer-nahi desai.....aisa nahi hai...galti hm hi kr rhe hai kahi...kuch to miss kr rhe hai.....
Baat sirf meri beti ki nhi h...mai nahi chahta ki ese shaatir criminal smaaj me rhe...ye pure smaaj k lie khtra hai...


Desai- haa sir...or islie hm mahine me ek bar to is case pr najr maarte hi hai...wo bhi unofficialy...

Rajveer-officialy to ab kuch kr hi n skte...lekin...ese kbhi kbhi discuss krne se...shayd kuch smjh aajaye....




Delhi
8march2020

Morning
8am
""Bhabhiiiiiiiii....ye kyaa kiya apne....mummy dekho bhabhi ko...sone nhi deti hai...."

Disha khud ke upr paani daalne se ...cheekhti hui bolti hai...

Preity muskurati hui-apko kya lgta hai madam....mai subah subah uth jau or tumhe sone du...
Disha muh sa bnate hue-whatt....to kya...ye apki sasural hai...apko yha jaagna hi hoga...

"Ji nahi ye bhi hmari bahu ka ghar hi hai...kbhi sasural mt bolna..."
Darvaje pr khadi malti dono ko dekhte hue bolti hai...

Disha-haa thik hai...par mujhe to sone do na...
Preity-madam 9baj rhe hai...ye konsa time hai sone ka...
Disha geeli chadar ko niche fekti hai...or dusri chadar uthake niche farsh pr bichakr let jaati hai...
"Aaj sunday hai..."


Malti-ye ldki hmesha apni hi karti hai...chlo beti...apna kaam krte hai...sone do ise...
Preity-aaj khana nhi dugi isko...
Disha-I dont need...mai khud se bna lugi...or aapse tasty bnaati hu...

Preity kaam krne lgti hai...or bathroom me jaise hi jaati hai...
Uffff
Bathroom me
Vijay naha rha tha...pura nanga...
Preity ekdm se dekhkr gate bnd kr deti hai...
Preity-apko sharm nhi aati kya...kmsekm gate to band kr lete..
Vijay-are...tum to aise ghbra rhi ho jese muje pahle kbhi nanga dekha hi na ho...

Pretiy drvaje pr kaan lgaakr dhire se bolti hai...
"Dekha hai...2saaal se dekh rhi hu...lekin ...meri jagah koi or hota to..."
Vijay-kon ho sakta hai...mummy hmare kamre me aati nhi...papa office hai..disha so rhi hoti h istime...or tannu istime coaching me hoti hai...so..."

Preity-very funny....
Or achank gate khulta hai vijay preity ko andr kheech leta hai..
Preity-kyaa kr rhe ho...chhodo muje...koi bhi aaskta hai...
Vijay nanga hi preity ko apni Banho me bhr leta hai...or uski gardan pr kiss krne lgta hai...
Preity-kyaa kr rhe ho...mai geeli ho jaugi...
Vijay-to ho jao na jaan....chlo kpde nikalo...
Preity-tum pagal ho gye ho kya....chhodo muje...

Preity jor lgakr chhutne ki kosis kr rhi thi..
Lekin vijay ki majbut banho se niklana bahut hi mushkil tha...

Akhir vijay ek gym trainer tha...
Uska khud ka gyn tha...ab trainer hai to...body to achhi khaasi hogi hi...
V shape kamar...or 22inch biceps....
Chest bahr ki taraf or pet andr...
Aisi body ki...pdos ki kai ldkiya use dekhkr aah bharti rhi...

Jaha se bhi niklta tha logo ki najar uspr tik jaati thi...
Har jagah centre of attrecttion rahta tha...
Preity-plss presan mt kro...aah...mummy aajayegi...
Vijay bina kuch sune bs preity ke gardan ko choome jaa rha tha...
Ab preity bhi bahakne lgi thi...or uske hath ab vijay ki kamar pr jaa chuke the...
Vijay gardan ke bad....preity ke honto ko anguthe se sahlata hai...
Preity ke shriir me bijli si dod gyi...preity ab apne honth vijay ke honto or rakhti hai....

"Preity......kaha hai beta..."
Achank preity ke kaano me malti ki awaaj pdti hai...
Prety khud ko smbhalti hui-vijay...mummy aarhi hai...
Or preity bathroom se baahr nikal jaati hai...

Vijay nahadhokar apne gym me pahuch jata hai...

Gym me vijay ne tshirt or lower pahna tha or kisi ko kuch bta rha tha..
Samne exersice kr rhi 2ldkiya aaps me baate kr rhi thi...
1st-yaar ye vijay sir hitne hot hai na..
2nd vijay ko dekhti hui-kya tu bhi...
1st-haa yar...dekh kitni ksi hui body...kya dole shole hai...inki wife ke to bde mje honge..

2nd-mai to sochti hu ki...inka..wo..
kaisa hoga ..
1st-sahi kaha....soch ye nange kaise lgege....
2nd-line maar..kaam ho gya to dekh lena kaise dikhege nange ye...
1st-kitni to line di hai inhe...lgta hai jaada hi patnivrata hai...

Or dono is baar pr hsne lgti hai...
2nd-ek baat bta...jb wo tujhe training
de rhe the....kuch to feel kia hoga na tune...

1st-kuch kya...lower me ubhar to saaf dikhai deta hai....maine to bahut chance diye...kai baar unko touch bhi kia pr..wo kuch responce hi nhi dete...

2nd-Delhi ki hjaro ldkiya marti hai inpr...wo tujhe hi kyuu line de...tujhme hai hi kya..
1st-saaali...tujhse to achhi hi hua...tu to chusa hua aam h...orr..
2nd-haa bhai....or tere to aam hi ab chusne layak hue hai...hahaha..



Mumbai...
6am...
"Good morning papa..."
Rajveer park me betha newspaper padh rha tha...
Rajveer-very good morning beta...aaj jaldi...koi khas baat...

Arun -haa papa...maine socha hai ki...ab mai bhi jldi utha kruga....akhir jldi uthne se sehat achhi rhti hai na...
Rajveer-ooho....kya bat h...aaj achank sehat ki chinta.....
Arun-haa papa...aaajse mai roj jaldi uthuga...
Rajveer-hmm...vashali uthi.....

Arun-nahi papa...pr mai uthaata hu use...
Arun vaishali ke kamre ki trf chal deta hai...
Arun jaise hi vaishali ke gate ko knock krta hai...gate khud se khul jaata hai...

Or samne ka njaara dekhkr arun ki ankhe fat jaati hai...
Deewar pr har trf chadar ltki hui thi...
Arun charo trf najre ghumakr dekhta hai...deewar ka ek kona tak nhi dikh rha tha...
"Ye kya hai....ye akhir....chadar ...yha kyu hai...kya isne inhe sukhaya hua hai...ye kya krti hai kuch samjh nhi aata..."

Arun itna ajib najara dekhkr soch me pd jaata hai...tbhi achank vaishali uth jaati hai...or arun ko dekhkr chiilla deti hai..
"Arun.... Ye kya bkwas hai...tu yha kya kr rha hai...."

Arun piche mudta hua-hey...mai bs tujhe jagane aaya tha...prrr ye sb...ye chadar ese kuu ltkaayi hai...
Vaishali-ye mera kmra hai...mai jo bhi kru...tujhe kya.....get out of my house...
Arun-teri problm kya hai...tu hmesa chillati ku rhti hai.....kbhi pyar se baat n kr skti kya...
Vaishali-pyaar ......my foot...you get out wrna mai sr fod dugi tera...

Arun-hey...look...mai tera bhai hu.....tu normal sisters ki trah kuu nhi rahti hai...
Vaishali bed se uthkr arun ke samne aakr uske coller pkd leti hai...

Vaishali-mera koi bhai...koi baap ...koi maa nhi hai...smjha tu...m alone...totally alone...khun kr dugi sbka...wrna nikal ja yha se...

Arun vaishali ki ankho me gussa dekhkr dr jaata hai...or bina kuch kahe kamre se baahr aajata hai.....
Arun jaanta tha ki vaishali bahut gusse wali hai...pr aaj uska gussa itna bhyank tha....arun ne socha bhi nhi tha...

Bahar use uma dikhai deti hai...
Uma-kya hua...tu itna gusse me ku hai...
Arun-iski problm kya hai mom...ye kbhi pyar se baat ku n kr skti....

Uma-kya kru beta...usne to presan kr diya hai sbko...kisi se bnakr nhi rakhti...hmesa gusse me rhti hai...pta ye iska gussa ise kaha le jayega...


At breakfast table...

Rajveer-kyaa baat hai...itna sannata ku hai...
Uma vaishali ki taraf ishara krti hai...
Rajveer-kya hua vaishu...
Vaishali-mujhe aajtk kuch hua hai kya...jo ab hoga.....


Arun-hmesha ulta jvaab hi rahta hai iska...
Rajveer-kya baat hai beta....ku hmesa gusse me rhti ho...kuch problm hai to hme btao...hm tumhare parents hai....
Vaishali-kya yha mujhe koi khana khane dega..yaa fr mai chalu...

Arun-ek bahan ko bhgwan ne chheen lia...or ek ye hai....kbhi kbhi lgta hai...ki...meri koi bahan hi nhi hai...na kbhi pyar se baat...na hasna ...na bolna...

Vaishali-pyaar chahiye tujhe...ye le...
Vaushali apne khaane ko arun ki plates me daal deti hai...
Vaishali-kha pyar...apne hisse ka khana tujhe de diya...or kitna pyar chahiye...

Or vaishali uthkr jane lgti hai...
Rajveer-vaishu...ye kya btmeeji hai.....akhir tumhe chaiye kya...
Vaishali rukkar-bs 3chije chahiye...de sakte ho aap...

Rajveer-kya...
Vaishali palatkr dining table pr haath markr.

Pahla-i dont want anybody come in my room...dusra mujjhe koi swal jvab nhi chaiye....or teesra..aagr aap ye nhi kr skte to..mujhe baahr nikal dijiye ghr se...baahr job krugi or araam se rhugi.....
Or itna kahkr vaishali apne kamre ki trf chl deti hai...

Rajveer-iske kamre me kon gya tha...
Arun-papa...mai...prr ...mene to bs itna pucha ki...ye kya kia hua hai..

Rajveer-matlb..
Arun-uske kamre me hr diwar pr chaadar latki hui hai...wo mujhe ajib lga...
Rajveer-paagal hai wo...wo ajib to uske kam bhi ajib...uske kamre me koi nhi jayega...smjhe...

Arun-ji papa.....prr aisa kya hai...wo rokti ku hai sbko...
Uma-kyuki use sfaai bahut pasand hai...uske kamre me koi jaaye uska farsh ganda ho jaye use biklul achha nhi lgta ...

Arun-prrrr maine pucha to boli ki...mera koi nhi hai...mai sbka khun kr dugi....
Rajveer-what .....lgta hai kisi psycatrist ko dikhana pdega...iski dimaaki halat muje thk nhi lgti...

Mai jldi hi doc se meating fix krta hu...or dikhaate hai isko...




Next update will be soon...

Superb Update

Toh aur 3-4 characters add hogye.

Vijay Preity Disha aur Malti.

Nanad bhabhi ke beech nokjhok Vijay Preity ka romance padh ke achha laga.

Par yeh log hai kaun. Itna toh pakka hai inka rishta Rajveer and family se jarur hai.

Yeh Vaishali ka aisa behave kahi Nisha ki maut ke wajah se toh nhi. Aur apni family se naraz se kyoki wohlog uski didi ko insaaf nhi dila paaye.

Yaa phir kisi ke behkaave mein aake aisa kar rahi ho.

 

[Jaguaar]

Update 4

Mumbai...
10pm
""Hello doc asthana...kaise hai aap"
Rajveer ashtana ki awaj sunte hi apna swal karta haiii

Asthana-mai thik hai aap kaise hai commissioner sahab....aaj kaise yaad kiya...
Rajveer-ab doctore or police ko koi khushi me to yad karta nhi hai...
Ashtana-haha...bilkil sahi kaha...to kahiye...kya sewa kr skta hu...

Rajveer-asthana mai chahta hu ki...ek bar aap meri beti ko dekhle....wo bhut gusse me rahti hai...hmesha...

Asthana-to fir le ayiye use..
Rajveer-usko laana asan nhi hai...apko hi takleef uthani hogi....achha hoga aap hi aajayege to.

Ashtana-thik hai...to sham me milte hai....
Rajveet-sure .....mai adrrss send kr deta hu...aap ajaiyega..
Rajveer apna adress asthsna ko send kr deta hai..

Rajveer-sham me doc asthana aaayege...koi bhi vaishali ko mt btana ..
Arun and uma-hmm thik hai...



Sham 7bje...
"Chaye to bahut achhi bnai hai bhabhi ji aapne"
Uma-shukriya bhaisahab....
Ashtana-rajveer sir se kaafi pahle se mere achhe tallukaat the...kai bar muje chaye pr invite bhi kia...prr bs kaam ke pressure ki vajah se aa nhi ska...wese kabtak aajayege rajveer...

Uma-ji bs...aane me hi honge...
Aap muje thoda btayegi...apki beti ke bare...
Uma-wo hmesa gussa krti hai...kisi se pyar se baat n krti.. ..
Ashtana-hmm...kisi pandit ya tantrik ko dikhaya...
Uma-bhaisahab...aap is sbme believe krte hai...

Itne me hi Arun aajata hai..or aakr beth jata hai...
Asthana-kyuuu..pdhne likhne ka mtlb bhgwan ko thukra dena hota h kya....hmara pesha apni jagah...or shradhha apni jagah...anyway...phle hm dekhte hai...wo sb baad me...



Uma- ye mera beta hai...Arun
Asthana-hello arun...kaise ho...
Arun-namste sir...achha hu..
Asthana-tumhe vaishali ke andr kuch ajib lga...

Arun-wo puri hi ajib hai...use hm smjh nhi paate...pure din apne kmre me rahti h....koi kuch bolta hai to...ldai krti hai...
Ashatna-Hmm...bulao use...
Uma vaishali ko call krke bahar aane ko kahti hai...


Vaishali-kya hua mom..
Uma-beta ye doc sahab hai..
Asthana-hello beta...
"To"
Vaishali doc ko ignore krkr uma ki baat ka jvab deti hai..uska ye behavour sbko ajib lga...

Uma-beta doc uncle ne kuch bola aapko..
Vaishali doc ki taraf-hello uncle...
Asthana thoda smile krte hue-kaisi ho beta ...

Vaishali-achhi nhi hu...
Asthana-kyuu kya hua...
Vaishali-aap doc hai na...aap pta kijiye...

Vaishali ke is" to the point" jvab se doc ki bolti bnd ho jaati hai...
Doc-beta muje aapse baat krni h...akele me...kya hm aapke room me chle..

Vaishali-agr aapko apki sehat se pyar h to....us room ke bare me sochna bhi mt...
Uma-vaishali.....ye kya btmeeji hai....
Vashali-time is over...mujhe pdhna hai..mai jaa rhi hu....

Uma-ruko vaishali....tumhe meri ksm...tumhe inse baat krni hogi...
Vaishali wapas mudti h...

Vaishali-agr kasam se kuch hota to...aadlat me mujrim ko uski maa ki kasam dekar hi pucha jaata sab.....anyway...okkk mai taiyar hu...lekin mere room me nhi...
Uma-haa tum log mere room me chle jao..

Asthana or vaishali room ki taraf chle jaate hai...

Arun-mom mujhe to bahut dya aarhi h..
Uma-nahi beta...wo thik ho jayegi...
Arun-mom..vaishali ke lie nhi...doc uncle k lie...vaishali uska kya haal kregi...
Uma-chup beth...


Vaishali ke samne ab asthana betha tha...
Asthana-haa beta mai puch rha tha ki...

"Meri age 19 saal hai...graduation ka 1st yr hai...mujhe khane me chicken pasand hai...meri best frnd ka naam neetu hai...bs ek hi frdn hai...
ghr pr muje koi achha nhi lgta...bs koi nhi...koi bolta h to mn krta hai...ki...uska khuun kr du...Mujhe koi drawna sapna nhi dikhta...

mai ekdm normal hu...meri sath esi koi ghtna nhi hui jisse mai sad hu...infect mai bhut khush hu...mere aaspas ka mahol bht achha hai...pr mai apne me rhna chahti hu...."

Jo asthana puchne wala tha...wo sb vaishli ne uske bolne se pahle hi bta diya...
Asthana smile krte hue-hmmm...kaafi intelligent ho...



Vaishali-aapke kahne se koi bewkuf intelligent ya koi intelligent bewkuf n ho skta...jo hai wo hai...
Asthana -beta bs mai bta rha tha...
Vaishali-jo mai hu wo muje b pta hai...btane ki jrurt nhi h...jo nhi hu wo btaiye...


Asthana-jo nhi ho...wo kaise bol skta hu...
Vaishali-to fir hmara interview over...
Ashtana-ek last que....
Vaishali-boliye...

Asthana-agr mai wo kru jo tumhe pasand nhi...to tum kya krogi...
Vaishali smile krte hue-fir mai wo krugi...jo aapko pasand nhi...

Asthana-thank u beta....aap ja skti ho..
Vaishali-mai mere ghr me hu sir...
Asthana ko jaise apni bewkufi ka ahsas hota hai ..or chupchap kmre se baahr niklata hai...
Samne dekhta hai ki rajveer bhi aa chuka tha...

Rajveer-kya hua asthana...
Ashthana hasta hua bethta hai...
Asthana-tumhari beti ne nahut bejti krdi yr...
Rajveer-soryy yr...wo bs...
Asthana-koi baat nhi....
Rajveer-Kya baat hui....kya pta lga..
Asthana-usne aap logo ke lie ek msg diya hai...

Rajveer-kya msg..
Asthana-wo aap logo se bahut pyar krti hai...
Sbhi hairan hote hue...
Rajveer-kya bat kr rhe ho yr...sbka to khun krne ki baat krti rahti h...anyway...btao kya hua..

Asthana-muje ye smjh me nhi aarha...ki aapki beti ko psychology ke bar me itna kaise pta...
Rajveer-asthana...wo b.sc kr rhi ...with physics...psychology se uska koi rishta nhi hai...
Asthana -nhi...she has alot knowledge about psychology...

Rajveer- ye sb chhodo ye btao ki....baat kya hui...
Ashtana-she is bery brilliant...infect muje kahna chaiye itni km umr me itni sharp...maine kbhi koi n dekha....mrere swaal puchne se pahle ....usne mere saare swalo ke jvab de diye.....

Uske dimak ko treck kr paana...mere lie bhut mushkil ho gya tha...lag rha tha jaise pahli baar kisi case me mai haaruga...but...apki beti ne aisa hone nhi diya...
Rajveer-paheliya mt bujhao...hme saaf saaf btao

Ashtana-mene last que usse pucha...ki agr mai wo kaam kru jo use nhi psnd to wo kya kregi....
Rajveer-usne kaha hoga tumhara khun kregi...

Asthana -nahi....pahli bar mene uske face pr smile dekhi.....or fr wo boli ki...fr wo wo kregi jo muje nhi psand...

Rajveer-iska kya mtlb hua...
Asthana-iska matlb...

Uski smile ka mtlb ye tha ki wo jaan chuki ki thi maine ye swal ku kia hai....
Islie mene bola tha ki use bht knowledge h psychology ke bare me....
Ashatna apni bat ko aage bdhata hai...
usi smile me...ye sndesh tha ki ki wo aapko mere dwara ye msg dena chahti h ki....wo thk h...use koi pro nhi h...or ap log bhi uski tnsn n lo...

Rajveer-smile se ..kaise pta lg skta hai yr...simle normal hoti hai...
Asthana-normal logo ke lie normal hoti hai...mere ya..vaishali jaise ke lie nhi..
Rajveer-matlb vaishali normal nhi hai..
Asthana-phle bhi bta chuka hu...wo agr wo hmari team me aajye to hmara hospital desh ka sbse achha hospital ban skta ha


Rajveer-mujhe aapki baate smjh nhi aarhi ..anyway...aap is sbke bare me jada jante hai ....islie aapki baat pr wishwas kr lete h...

Asthana-or wo jo khun krne ko kahti h...bs draati rhti h...aap log usse itna mt dro...bss jo use psnd nhi aap wo mt kro...wrna fr wo esa kregi jo aapko psnd nhi..

Rajveer-hmm...thk hai...
Ashthana- lekin ek baat hai...jitni knowledge hme degree lekr hui h...use itni km aage me ussse jaada knowledge hai....agr wo nhi chahti to to mai use smjh n paata...usne khud hi isme meri help ki...
Asthana-lekin drne ki koi bat nhi...wo ekdm thk h...
Ashtana-ab mai chalta hu...okk bye...


Delhi...
1pm...
college canteen.....
Reena-kbhi krwakr dekhna jaan...kitna mjaa ayega....
Tannu-tujhe ye sbke alaawa koi baat nhi sujhti kya.....
Reena-ek baar krwa legi na....tujhe bhi yhi sb achha lgega....

Tannu-kyu....tuune kitno se kra liya hai...
Reena-sach bolu to...is bf ko lgakr...ab tk 5se...
Tannu apne muh pr hath rkhte hue-haaa...5...abhi bs 19saal ki hai tuu...orr 5..

Reena-jb ldki ko bra ki jrurt pdne lga na to age matter n krti....
Tannu-tujhe pkka aids hoga...
Reena-condom hai na...hahahah.....

Tannu-tu mujhe bhi bigaad degi...tere sath rhna thik nhi ...
Reena-meri jaan ajkl sb bigde hue hai...kiske pas jayegi...
Tannu-meri didi hai na...wo bht achhi h...meri Disha didi...

Reena-haaye...tere bhaiyya bhi to achhe haii....ufffff...kyaa body hai unki...teri bhabhi ke to mje hai yr....
Tannu-bhabhi jitni pdhai kr...tujhe bhi ese hi husbend mil jaayege...

Reena-yrr apne bhaiya se baat krna...mere bare me...
Tannu-ohh hello...unki age 29or tu...19...10saal ka farak...or waise bhi...wo married hai...

Reena-to kya hua...muje age se koi frk nhi h...bs unka ....wo...mota or lmba hona chhaiye...
Tannu-reena...wo mere bhaiya hai...esa to mt bol mere samne yr...
Reena-okk ok...soryy baba...

Superb Updatee

Yeh Vaishali ne toh psychiatrist ko bhi maat de diya. Aakhir yeh chiz kya hai. Aur yeh aisa kyo kar rahi hai.

Yeh Reena toh bahot badi wali nikli. 19 ki age mein 5 se karwa liya. Aur ab apni dost ko bhi usi line mein laa rahi hai. Dost ko hi bol rahi hai uske bhai se uski setting karwaaye

 

[Jaguaar]

Update 5

Delhi
Disha apne kmre me bethi hui kuch soch rhi thi..
Tbhi uske pas uski chhoti bahan tannu aati hai...
Tannu-didi...kyaa kar rhi ho...
Disha kisi sapne se jaagti hai jaise..
Disha-kuch nhi...or bta...kaisa chl rha hai college..
Tannu-thik hi hai didi....prr kuch khas mjaa nhi aata..

Disha-padhne jaaati hai ya mja krne..
Tannu-dono didi....mje me hi to pdha jaata hai na...

Tbhi preity 2 colddrink lekar kmre me aati hai...
Preity-ye lo mja...cold drink piyo or mje kro....
Tannu-wow bhabhi thanks..muje wese bhi pyas lgi thi..
Disha-bhabhi mai aapse nraaj hu....

Preity-aare..ku nraj ku...
Disha-orr kya...subah subah utha deti ho...
Preity-us time 9bje the .....use subah nhi...dopahar kahte hai...

Disha-mujhe sona pasand hai.....
Preity-itna sovgi to tumhari sundarta kam ho jaayegi...fr shadi kaise hogi...
Disha pyar se preity ko hug krti hai...
Disha-mujhe nhi krni shadi...mujhe meri bhabhi ke pas rahna hai...ya fir aapko dahej me le jaaugi...

Tannu tbhi preity ki god me let jaati hai...
Tannu-nahi...bhabhi ko mai le jaugi dahej me...

Preity-arree...mai kisi ke sath nhi jaugi...mujhye yha papa mummy ka bhi to khyal rkhna hai...

Tannu shrarti andaj me-papa mumy ka yaa bhaiyya ka....hehehe...
Preity haste hue-tumhe bahut pta hai h..
Or tannu ko gudgudi krne lgti hai...
Kmre me...hsne ki awaaj dod jaati hai...


Is family ke mukhiya hai..mr Rajesh..
Rajesh ek bank me job krte hai....inki age lagbhag 50hogi...
Malti-Rajesh ki wife...age 45 housewife hai...
Vijay-inka bda beta...age 29..ek gym trainer hai...
Preity-vijay ki wife...age 28
Disha-beti...iski age 27hai...study cmplt ho chuki h...ab ghr pr rahti hai...job me inhe koi intrest nhi hai...
Tannu-sbse chhoti beti...age 19year...graduation 1st yr hai...

Is family me sbhi me aaps me bahut pyar prem hai..sb ek dusre ke sath khushi khushi has khelkr rahte hai...




Mumbai-
Arun kpdo ke dher se ek nyi jeans uthaata hai...
"Are ye...kiski jeans hai....color to bahut achha hai....shayd vaishali ki hogi..." Arun jeans ko hath me lekar soch hi rha tha ki achank piche vaishali aajati hai...

Vaishali chillate hue-teri himmat kaise hui...meri jeans ko hath lgaane ki..
Arun-mai to bs...
Vaishali-tunjhse kaha tha na mere hr chij se dur rha....mrne ka jaada shok hai kya...
Arun-vaishali tu itni kadwi baate ku bolti hai...mai bhai hu tera yr...

Vaishali-haa hu mai kadwi....ab jaada mujhse bkwas ki na to aaaj arthi uthegi teri....nikal yha se...get out...
Vaishali jaise cheekhti hui...darvaje ki trf hath krke bolti hai...

Arun-teri problm kya hai...kya smjhti hai khudko...koi sherni hai tu...ek thappd pd gya to abhi sudhr jaegi tu....arun bhi is bar gusse me tilmilake bolta hai...

Vaishali laal hote hue-lagta hai teri jindgi puri ho gyi....ruk tu abhi..
Or vaishali kichen ki taraf bhaagti hai...
Arun-ab ye kaha chli gyi....
1min bad vaishali hath me chaaku liye aati hai...

Jise dekhkr arun ke hosh ud jaate hai...
Vaishali-kyaa kr rhi hai..
Vaishali -tera khunn...
Vaishali arun ki trf bhaagti hai..
Arun bhi darkar mom mom chillata hua bhagne lgta hai...vaishali ne fekkar chaku maara jo sidha arun ki peeth me ja ghusa...
or arun drd se karah utha...


Itne me uma aajati hai arun ko farsh pr leta dekhti hai to usko uthaane ko bhagti hai...lekin ye kya arun ki peeth me chaaku ghusa hua tha...Uma chaaku dekhte hi cheekh padti hai...


Or aram se drte drte chaaku nikaalti hai...rahul drd se bilbila rha tha...uma jaldi se doc ko call krke doc ko bulaati hai...

Abhi tk vaishali wahi khdi thi...uski ankho me angarey abhi bhi dikhayi de rhe the...
Doc aakr rahul ko ptti bandhta haai...

Uma-vaishali...kya chahti ho tum...ye lo chaaku...agr marna hi hai to hm sbko maar do ..pr aise mt tdpao...kya ho gya hai tumhe...

Use kuch ho jaata ....tum jail chli jaati ,kya rah jaata hmara...beolaad krna chahti ho hme...

Vaishali chupchap khdi sun rhi thi....
Uma -bolo jvab do...kya chahti ho tumm....
Arun bhi bed pr leta hua sb sun rha tha...
Uma-bolti kyu nhi ho kuch...

Arun bed se uthtne ki kosis krta hai...
Uma arun ki awaj sunkr use pkdne chli jaaati hai...

Arun-nhi mom...mai thik hu...
Arun vaishali ki trf chl deta hai....
Uma-nahu arun....uske pas mt jao..
Arun-nhi mom ise krne do jo krna hai...
Arun ko bed ke paas hathoda rkha dikhta hai...hathoda uthakr ...wo vaishali ki tarad badhta hai...

Uma ye sb dekhkr dr jaati hai..
Uma-arun...kya kr rhe ho...
Arun vaishali ke paas jaakr
Arun-ye lo vaishali....krdo mera khun...yhi chahti ho na tum...

Arun vaishali ke hath me hathoda deta hai...or khud uske samne beth jaata hai...
Arun-lo vaishali...maar do mujhe...
Vaishali kuch nhi bolti...bas chupchap...hathoda lie khdi hui thi...

Arun-comon vaishali....maardo...
Vaishali hathode ko fekti hai or apne kmre me chli jaati hai...

Rajveer ko phon pr sb pta lgta hai...wo 1ghnt me ghr aajata hai...
Uma rajveer ko sb btatai hai...

Rajveer-hme isko ab mental hospital me admit krana hoga...
Uma hairaani se-kyaa...nhi...aap aisa soch bhi kaise sakte ho...

Rajveer-to kya kre...yha kisi din wo kisi ko maar degi fr kya hoga...
Rajveer-maine soch liya hai...use prso mai mental hospital me admit krauga...bhgwan ne chaha to ye thk ho jayegi....wha achha ailaaj hota hai is sbka...
Itna kahkr rajveer duty ke kie nikal pdta hai..
Or uma ek hi jagah bethkr rone lgti hai....


Desai-sir aap aachank kaha chle gye the...
Rajveer-ghr gya tha...wo...vaiishali ne arun ko chaaku se maarne ki koisis ki...wo ghayak hai....

Desai hairan hote hue-kyaa....aise kaise sir...wo esa kaise kar skti hai...
Rajveer-mai ab use or nhi jhel skta....ab uae mental hosital me bhrti kraauga...

Desai sad hote hue-ye kya hota jaa rha hai sir ...apke priwar me...tension pr tension aarhhi hai...khushi to jaise nraaj hi ho gyi hai aap logo se....

Rajveer kuch nhi bola ro ashtana ka no dial kia...
Asthana-ha boloye sir...
Rajveer-vaishali ne arun ko marne ki kosis ki...arun ghayal hai..
Asthana-whattt.....aisa kaise ho skta hai...
Rajveer-ye hua hai...ap to bole the ki wo thik hai...?koi theenk insan esi harkt krega?

Asthana-commissinor sahab...mai ab bhi daave k sath bolta hu...ki she is absolutely fine..."balki mai apni life me itni tallanted ldki se kbhi nhi mila..."
"Mai apni life me itni tallanted ladki se nhi mila"
Ye line jb rajveer ne suni to uske rongte khde ho gye...

Kyuki yhi line rajveer kai baar...desai se us ldki ke bare me bol chuka tha,jisne Nisha ka murder kiya tha....
"Kyaa bole asthana tum...dobara bolna...kya tum mjak kr rhe ho...tumhare 35saal ke career tum kisi esi ldki se nhi mile...asthana tum ek 19saal ki ldki ki baat kr rhe ho...wo abhi bahut chhoti hai...

Asthana-mai janta hu...believe me yr...tum is shahar se sbse bde psychatrist se baat kr rhe ho...mai tumse aisa mjak ku kruga...

Rajveer-to kya mai is baat ko seriusly lu...
Asthana-pese lutaane ka shok hai to kisi or doc se consult kr skte ho.....chahe tum mujhe ek bhi rupya mt to...prrr trust krna hoga...
Rajveer ke dimak ki ab saari bttiya gul ho chuki thi..


Uske dimak me bahut kuch chalne lga tha...
Lekin jo uske dimak me chal rha rha...wo nahi chahta tha ki wo sch ho...
Rajveer gumsum sa apni chair pr beth jaata hai...
Bahut der tk wo palke bhi nahi jhapak rha tha...
Desai samne betha uske manobhav ko smjhne ki kosis kr rha tha...
Desai-kya hua sir...any problm....
Rajveer ekmd jaise nind se jaagta hai...

Desia...haa...haa...desia...kya hme asthans ki baat pr vichar krna chahiye...
Desai-sr wo ek jaanemaane psychatrist hai....unke tallent pr shk krna sahi nhi hoga...wese wo kya bole..


Rajveer-ye mai tumhe kl btauga....abhi muje bht kuch krna hai...
Rajveer jaise dimak me koi planning krta haai...or fr se soch me pd jaata hai.....
Rajeev sham me ghar pahuchta hai..
Bed pr arun ko lete dekhta hai...
Rajveer-kaise tbiyt hai beta ab...
Arun-batter hai papa...
Rajveer-hmmm


Arun-papa...vaishali ko mental hospital mt bhejo...wo chhoti hai....naadani me ye sb kr rhi hai.....dhire dhire smjh jayege sb...
Arun ankho me aansu lie rajveer ko kahta hai...

Rajveer-pro to yhi hai...ki jaise jaise wo bdi ho rhi h...sudhne ki jagah...bigadti jaa rhi hai...jaldi hi koi kadam uthana hoga...kahi aisa na ho jaye ki...mujhe hi use arrest krna pde...

Arun-papa plsss..
Rajveer-tum abhi araam kro...is bare me baad me baat krege...
Rajveer arun ko dilasa dekkr bahar aakr beth jaata hai...or aapni planiig ke bare me sochne lgta hai....

RAJEEV KE MAN ME EK DAR THA...BS WO DR SACH NA HO JAYE..

Yhi rajveer soch sochkr preshan tha.....
Rajveer 1 ghnte tk sochne smjhne ke bad...finally apni gun uthaata hai or vaishali ke kmre ki taraf chal deta hai...


Vaishali andr letkar koi book pdh rhi thi..
Rajveer-vaishali...vaishali gate kholo...
Vaishali-kya hua papa...kya baat h..
Rajveer-mujhe tumse baat krni hai...
Vaishali khdi hokr gate khelti hai ...or samne rajveer ko khda dekhti jai...

Rajveer ke hath me gun thi...
Rajveer note krta hai ki gun dekhne ke bad bhi...vaishali ekdm normal thi..
Vaishali-baat krne aaye hai ya muje maane...

Rajveer gun ko load krta hua-jrurt pdi to maar bhi duga....
Vaishali rajveer ki gun ko pkdkr apne mathe pr rkhti hai....
Vaishali-soch kyuu rhe ho fr aap...chlaiye goli....mujhe bhi jeene me koi khaas intrrst nhi hai...

Rajveer gun ko apni jeb me rkhta hai...
Rajveer-filhal mujhe tumse ek help chahiye...
Vaishali hairaani se-kya help....
Rajveer-ek case me...arun ne btaya ki...tum achhse se soch leti ho...to socha tumse hi puchu...kya aandr aa skta hai...
Vaishali-mere kmre me kisi ko aane ki ijajat nhi hai...

Rajveer-to fr mere kmre me chlo
Vaishali-agar mai mna kru to...
Rajveer-kar skti ho......lekin mujhe koi mil nhi rha jisse mai salah kr sku.....tum isme meri help krogi to achha hoga..

Vaishali-apka beta hai na...wese bhi...meri umra abhi khelne kudne ki hai...mujhe aapke ye case vase ke bare me koi jaankari nhi...

Rajveer-plssss....vaishali...help me...
Vaishali-bs ek salah chaliye na...uske lie kmre me jaane ki koi jrurt nhi h...yhi boliye...

Rajveer-okk....ek sucide case hai...ek ldka 20saal ka....kisi se pyar krta tha...us ldki ne use cheat kia...to usne sucide kr lia...
Vaishali-to...

Rajveer-lekin...kis hathiyar se usne apne haath ki nase kaati...ye forensic report me bhi pta nhi lg paaya....
Vaishali-itni si bat...ye log rishwat dekhkr bhrti hote hai kya foresic me...
Rajveer vaishali ki taraf hairani se dekhta hua....
"Kya tum jaanti ho...aise kya chij ...kya hathiyar hai...jo forensic wale na pkd paaye ho..."

Vaishali-aisi koi chij nhi hoti...bss...frk hai dekhne ka...
Rajveer-ek insan ek book ko pdhkr 34%laata hai...to dusri usi ko pdhkr 99% aisa kyu...
Rajveer ko pahli bar lag rha tha ki wo apni beti ya kisi 19saal ki ldki se nhi blki kisi proffesional ya apne senior se baat kr rha haai...

Rajveer-hm...smjh gya...to usne apna haath kaise kaata hoga...
Vaishali-agr aap andhere me black kpde pahnkr jaoge to...mushkil hi koi apko dekh payega...same ese hi ye sucide hai...jo chij already hmari body me hai...use se kaata jaye to forensic wale uspr dhyan n dege ...kuki wo to hmari body me already hai...
Rajveer-to kisse kaata hoga...
Vaishali-paanni se.........
Rajveer ka dimak ghum gya sunkar rajveer-matlab...
Vaishali-malb...he cut his hand with WATER......


Next day 12am..
"Hello sir...aap aaye nhi aaj..."
Desai ne presan sa hokr Rajveer ko call kiya...
Rajveer thoda gbraya hua sa-nahi.. desai mai so n paaya raat me...

Desai-kya baat hai sir....any problm...
Rajveer-haa desai...sb brbad ho gya...
Desai presan hota hua-kya baat hai sir...plss btaiye kyaa hua...
Rajveer-phon prr nhi...tum mujhe gupta coffe shop pr milo..
Desai ftaft gadi nikalkr coffe shop pahuchta hai...

10min baad rajveer bhi aajata hai...
Desai rajveer ko dekhkr hi haraan ho gya...
Rajveer ki ankho me nind saaf dikhayi de rhi thi...sath ankho me drd or thkaawat dekhkr desai ne andaja lga kia ki baat koi gahri hai..
Rajveer aakr chupchap desai ke paas beth jaata hai...

Desai-kyaa baat hai sir...kya hua...
Rajveer-Nisha ke murdrer ka pta lg gya hai...
Desai hairaan hota hua-kyaaa...kon...kon hai wo btaiye sir...

Rajveer-wo hai....VAISHAALI...



Next update will be soon...

Awesome Updatee

Yeh kyaaa dhamaka kardiya aapnee. Ek behen ne dusri behen ko maardiyaa. Aur woh bhi paani se gala kaata but how is this possible. Paani se toh dubaa ke maara jaa sakta hai par usse gala kaise kaata. Kahi Baraf se toh nhi.

Hum abhi tak soch rahe the Anchal ne Nisha ko maara aur yeh toh aapne puri kahani ko hi ghuma diya.

Hosakta hai Rajveer ko koi galatfehmi hui ho. Kyoki jab Nisha ki maut hui uss waqt toh Vaishali 14-15 saal ki hi hogi.

 

[Ankitarani]

Awesome Updatee

Yeh kyaaa dhamaka kardiya aapnee. Ek behen ne dusri behen ko maardiyaa. Aur woh bhi paani se gala kaata but how is this possible. Paani se toh dubaa ke maara jaa sakta hai par usse gala kaise kaata. Kahi Baraf se toh nhi.

Hum abhi tak soch rahe the Anchal ne Nisha ko maara aur yeh toh aapne puri kahani ko hi ghuma diya.

Hosakta hai Rajveer ko koi galatfehmi hui ho. Kyoki jab Nisha ki maut hui uss waqt toh Vaishali 14-15 saal ki hi hogi.

Ohhh apne ye story pdhni shuru kr di...
But wait wait...
Ek baat apko bta du...isme bahut suspanse hai...
Kahani ke last tk suapanse hai isme...apko lgega ki yhi sch hai...agle update me lgega ki ye to kuch or hai...

Agr apko supanse psnd hai to muje khushi hogi ap pdhege...lekin agr suspase psnd nhi h to apka mja kharab ho skta h...

Kuki kuch reader suspanse k vjh se chhodke bhag gye the ise...

Baki suspanse had ae jaada h isme...

Or ha...vaishali nw khud kaha ki us ne mara nisha ko...