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Thriller khaamoshiya...Ek Rahasya (Completed)

DARK WOLFKING

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kya disha badlaa le rahi hai 🤔..par jin logo ka khoon kiya unka criminal background nahi mila rajveer ko 🤔..

kya nisha ki maut se disha ko sadmaa laga jisse wo khoon karne lagi 🤔🤔...yaa koi aur reson 🤔🤔..

aur disha ne shweta ki clue kyu diya us tak pahuchne ka 🤔🤔..

aur wo mujrim shayad abhi tak mila nahi tha to usne kiya ho ye sab 🤔🤔..
 

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Superb story line hai... twists aise ki aap soch bhi nahi sakte ki aage yeh bhi hone wala hai....actually lead characters do ladki hai aur dono ko hi insaani khoon pasand hai... isliye khaufnaak tarike se katl karti phirti hai.. :D
Baaki kahani ko padhiye... sab pata chal jayega ... :approve:
Naina ni wo bde writter hia..shayd unhe ye kahani pasand nhi ayegi...
 

Ankitarani

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Pretty emotional update dear :verysad:
To disha apni saheli ko bhabhi banane ki full taiyari me thi :hehe:
To nisha ka ek chalta firta human bomb ban jana hi wajah thi uske murder ki
Really disha :innocent: hai bilkul hamari vaishu ki tarah :love:
Hmm thanks....ab dekhe kya hota hai aage..asli action to ab aayega kahani me
 

Ankitarani

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nice aur shocking update ...isliye disha bomb blast ki khabar sunke darr jaati hai ..

nisha aur vijay ek dusre se pyar karte the par kismat me unka milna nahi likha tha 😔😔..

jab nisha ka khoon hua tab ek mujrim faraar tha 🤔 shayad usne hi aisa kiya ho 🤔...
Hmmm...islie drti hai wo.....dekhte hai aage kya hoga...
 

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disha ki kidnapping train me huyi thi to kya anchal koi aur ladki hai ??
Anchal disha hi hai sir ji..ye nam nisha ne hi diya tha use...aage aayega sb...rahi train ki bat to...agr inka khun krne ka trika sbko smjh aane lge to ye kaheki disha....ye vaishali se bhi bahut aage ki cheej hai...ye sb isi ne kiya hai...shweta se fight bhi isi ne ki thi...or shweta bchakar hhi isi ko laayi thi...sb aatega kuch updates me..
 

Naina

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Update 28

6saal pahle....
Chandigarh ....
"Ufffffff kon"
Pahchano kon..
"Ohhh disha..."
Haa nisha...
Nisha-kyaa disha...hmesha late ho jaati ho...
Disha-are koi baat nhi...bolo kyaa chahiye meri nisha ko...
Nisha-to kya dilayegi meri disha....
Disha-birthday meri nisha ka hai...to gift bhi meri nisha legi na...
Nisha-nisha ka bday ho ya disha ka bday baat to ek hi hai na...
Disha-haa kyuki hm dono ek hai..do jism ek jaan...hahahha.....chlo ab jldi....

Nisha or disha dono shopping mall me ghus jaate hai...or bht saree shopping krte hai...
Nisha-disha...mujhe itna nhi chahiye tha.....
Disha-koi baat nhi dear...keep this....and happy bbday...
Nisha-thanks yrrr....tu hmesa itna khrcha kuu krti hai...
Disha-its okkk na...
"Oye hoye...kharcha to hm bhi kr denge..bs hmaari ho jao ek baar"
Pichhe se kuch mnchle unhe chhed rhe the....

Disha-chlo yha se..
Nisha-tum in lafango se itna drti ku ho...ek kaan ke niche lgaana chahiye na....
Disha chhod na yaar....
Nisha-kaash koi heri hota ...jo inki bahut dhulaai krta...
Itne me hi unme se ek ldka unke aage aakr girta hai...

Nisha-upps ise kya hua ...
Nisha or disha pichhe mudkr dekhte hai to piche ek ldka unki dhulai kr rha tha...
Nisha uchhlti hui-wow hero aagya...
Disha-hero nhi mere bhaiya..hai...ab dekho...inko inki okaat yaad aajaegi...
Vijay un dono ko bht buri trh maarta hai...dono ki haalt khraab ho jaati hai......

Nisha-ye tumhare bhaiya...
Disha-haa mere bhaiya hai......
Vijya unki pitaai krta hai or wo dono bhaag jaate hai...

Vijay unke paas aata hai...nisha use dekhti hi rah jaati hai...
Disha-hyy bhaiya....aap yha kaise...
Vijay-kisi kaam se aaya tha....
Disha-prr btaya bhi nhi....
Vijay-haa bs...mai aane wala tha hostel....fr yhaa tumhe dekha to..
Disha-anyway...bhaiya ye hai meri best frdn nisha hai...

Nisha or vijay hath milaate hai...
Vijay-achha lga aapse milkr
Nisha-same to u...
Vijay-socha tha hostel aaunga prr ab kyaa kruga wha jaakr tum yhi mil gyi...

Disha-haa wo to hai to...so...wese aaj meri frdn ka happy wala bday hai..
Vijay-ohh...happy bday nisha.........
Nisha-thank u....
Vijay-aao kuch khaate hai...
Ye teeno bethkr thoda khaana pinaa khaate hai...

Or ye vijay fr chlaa jaata hai...
Nisha ka phon bjta hai...
Nisha-are wahh...meri pyaari bahan ka phon...mummy ke phon se whi krti mujhe calll..

Nisha-hello..
Vaishali-hello didi...happy bday...
Nisha-thank uu babu...umaaah...kaisi hai meri gudiya...
Vaishali-achhi hu...kb aaogi aap...
Nisha-mai jldi augi...tum school time se jaana okkk...
Vaishali-haa didi miss uu..
Neha-miss u too vaishu...or arun kaha hai...
Vaishali-wo nhi...bs mujhse bat kro...aap bs meri didi ho...uski nhi...

Nisha-achaa...okay mai sham ko call krugi...abhi thoda kaam hai...
Vaishali-okk didi bye....
Nisha-bye babu...
Nisha phon rkh deti hai..

Disha-babut pyar krti ho apni bahan se. ..
Nisha-jaan se bhi jaada.....


Evening...
Disha orr vijay video call pr baat kr rhe the...
Tbhi disha ko bahr se koi awaaj deta hai...
Disha-ohhh nisha...ise pkd...
Or disha mobile nisha ko dekar jldi se bhaag jaati hai...
Nisha mobile me dekhti hai to samne vijay tha...

Vijay-hye...
Nisha-hye...
Vijay-kaisi ho ao
Nisha-achhi hu...aap
Vijay-mai bhi thik hu...
Nisha-wese aapne achha maara un ldko ko...
Vijay-wo ap logo ko presan kr rhe the to...maarna to pdta na.
Nisha-thnks...
Vijay-welcm...
Itne me disha aajati
Disha-oye kya baat ki mere bhaiya se...
Nisha-nahi aise hi norml..
Disha thoda bahut vijay se baat krti hai or phon rkh deti hai...

Disha-nisha ek baat kahu...
Nisha-bolo na...
Disha-tumhe bhaiya kaise lgte hai...
Nisha-achhe hai kyu...
Disha-meri bhabhi bnogi...
Nisha thodi presaan si ho jaati hai...
Nisha-ye kyaa bol rhi ho tum....

Disha-dekho nisha....mai tmhare liye achha chahti hu...or tumse dur bhi nhi hona chahti ...bhaiya bahut achhe hai....agr tum chaho to...
Nisha kuch nhi bolti
Disha-bolo na...
Nisha-mai mmy papa ki mrji ke bina aisa kuch nhi krugi
Disha-to kisne kaha mummy papa ki mrji ke bina shadi krkne ko...are unse baat krege...prr tumhe thik lge to...tb tk tum log ek dusre ko jaan lo...

Nisha-mummy papa ne ldka dekh liya hai..kuch hi din me wo log meri shadi bhi kr denge ..
Disha-comon...mummy papa ko mai mnalungi....wha se shadi ht skti hai...bhaiya bahut achhe hai yar....mere hisaab se tum dono ki jodi best rhegi.....


disha-tumhate mmy papa ek bar bhaiya ko dekh leneg to...wha se rishta cancel kr denege...bhaiyaa unhe jrur psnd aayege...
Nisha-prrrr
Disha-sch bta...tujhe wo ldka psdn hai kya...

Nisha-chashmish hai....i hate him...
Disha-to fr wha se rishta cancel....or yha done...kyuu..
Nisha kuch nhi bolti...
Disha-hehe chashmish cancel...dekho nisha tum or bhaiya baate kro...agr tumhe thk lge to hm log papa mummy se bhi baat kr lege....

Nisha-nahi yaarrr ..
Disha-oye hoye...ye shrm ye hyaa...ye to kuchh orr hi byaa kr rhi hai...
Nisha disha ki baat se shrma jaati hai...
Disha-okay fr....

Disha nisha ka mobile uthaati hai...or usse vijay ke paas ek msg ke deti hai...
Disha-ye lo...tum dono ka no ek dusre ko exchange ho gya...ab smjhlo ek dusre ko...agr thik lge to achha...wrna koi baat nhi...frrrr chashmish jindabaad....heheheh
Or dono hasne lgti hai......

Nisha-aouchh....disha...tumhare ye naakhuun mere jaan lekar rahege...inhe kaat kuu nhi leti...
Disha apne bdhaye hue 3naakhuno ko dekhkr-ye faishion hai dear....
Nisha-mujhe hmesha chubh jaate hai ye...unhe kaato...


Fir nisha or vijay baate krne lgte hai...ek do baar milte bhi hai...ek dusre ko smjhte hai....is trh se dono me njdikiya bdhne lgi thi.....
Nisha ko vijay bahut achha lgne lga tha...uski baate uska behaviour....sb nisha ko best lga tha....ab vijay or nisha ek dusre se bahut pyaar krne lge the....roj subah uthkr jb tk nisha vijay ki awaj nhi sul leti tb tk use sbr nhi hota tha...yhi haal vijay ka tha...lekin in dono ke bdhte pyar se sbse jaada khush disha thi...kuki disha ko uski best frdn...uski bhabhi ke roop me milne wali thi......

Aise hi baate chlte chlte kai mahine gujar gye...is bich in dono ka pyar bs bdhne prr hi tha...vijay ko kai ldkio ke prpose aate the...prr vijay ka pyar koi dikhawa nhi tha...wo bs nisha se pyar krta tha...nisha bhi vijay ke alawa kisi ldke ke bare me sochti tk nhi thi...

Ek din...
Vijay or nisha ek coffee shop me milte hai....
Nisha-vijay...hme ab ghr baat krni chahiye...mujhe ese ghumna firna....bf ye sb psnd nhi...hmare rishte ko ek naam dena chahti hu mai...
Vijay-haa nisha krege hm log baat...
Nisha-wo chashmish se papa shadi kraane ki bol rhe hai...

Vijay-okay...is baar baat krte hai hm log....tum jb is baar ghr jaogi to baat krna okk...mere parents to maan hi jayege ..
Nisha-mujhe dr lgta hai papa se...
Vijay nisha ka hath pkd leta hai....
Vijay-kyuki tum babut sidhi or achhi ho...islie tumhe dr lgta hai...prr tumhe papa tumhe bht chahte hai...wo tumhe smjhege .....tum baat krna ...or agr papa bolte hai to mai bhi aajauga unse milne....
Nisha-okay...mai baat krti hu is bar.....



Or is trh kuch din or beet jaate hai....
Nisha ko ab apne ghr jaana tha...
Disha-nisha aram se jaana....or baat krte jaana call pr...
Nisha apna saman bandhte hue-haa yar.....dont wryy...
Disha-orr mujhe jld hi tumhari nanad bnne ki khushkhbri sunana...
Nisha bs shrma jaati hai......

Nisha apne ghr chli jaati hai...or yha disha hostel me rah jaati hai...

Krib 4 din baad nisha disha ko call krti hai...
Disha-haaa nisha....bolo
Nisha-yrrrr yrrrr....ek problm ho gyi...
Disha-haaa bolo na.....
Nisha-mai yha aane se ek din phle hospital gyi thi.....prr report nhi laa ski...
Disha-whatt....hospital...kyuu kyaa hua tha...kyuu gyi thi...
Nisha-are bs pet me thoda drd tha...or kuch nhi...
Disha-to btaya kyuu nhi tumne.....
Nisha-are aisi koi baat nhi thi ...normal tha...
Disha-ab tk thk ho na...
Nisha-haaa ab thk hu...
Disha-to report ka kya krna fr...
Nisha-are le aao na...pta lg jayega ki kesa pain tha....
Disha-okkk...mai le aaugi...


disha phon krhkr hospital ki taraf chl deti hai...
Raste me dhuul jaada udne ki vajah se disha apne muh pr ek rumaal bandh leti hai....
Or hospial jaati hai...
Disha reception pr-wo...nisha naam ki report...
Recetionist use ajib trh se dekhti hai...or use ek lifaafa de deti hai...
Disha lifafa lekr chl deti hai..
Or hostel aakar khana pina khakr araam se wo report dekhne beth jaati hai...
"Work done...5inches of explosive has been fit in nisha's body...after 7,8 days exectly 8pm it will blast..and the whole family of nisha will be die...."

Ye pdhkr disha ki ankhe ft jaati hai...
Disha-whattt ye...ye kya hai...
Disha presaan ho jaati hai...use kuch smjh nhi aata....
"Hey bhgwan...nisha ki body me bomb....ye kya hai...mai kyaa kru...".disha buri trh ghbra jaati hai....use kuch sujhtaa nhi hai...or ftaft vijay ko call krti hai...
Vijay-haa disha...
Disha-bhaiyya...bhaiya...wo nisha..
Disha drti drti or ghbraayi hui bolti hai...
Disha-bhaiya....wo...nisha ki body me bomb bai...koi usko maarna chahta hai..bs ukso nhi...uski puri family ko maarna chahta hai.

Vijay-disha ye tum kya kah rhi ho...
Disha-mai sch kah rhi hu bhaiya.....
Disha fr vijay ko sb baat btaati hai...

Vijay-disha hosh se kaam lo...kuch krna hoga hme.
Disha-kyaa kru bhaiya...
Vijay-mai aata hu...tum ek kro...jldi se abhi mumbai ke lie niklo...mai wha us hospital ki receptionist se puchhta hu...
Disha-mujhe bahut dr lg rha hai bhaiya...

Vijay-disha....tuhhara ye dr nisha ki jindgi se bda nhi ho sakta...plss smbhalo khud ko...jao jldi....2 din hai....mai hosital se pta krta hu uska kya kiya jaa skta hai....
Disha-okk bhaiya mai jaati hu...

Disha jldi se mumbai ke lie nikal jaati hai...
Idhar vijay smjh chuka tha ki ye koi aisa waisa kaaam nhi...kuch bda plan hai..is trh vijay wait krta hai...

Ki jaise hi receptionist bahar aati hai...vijay use behosh krke bdi hoshiyari se gaadi me bithakr kahi dur le jaata hai...

Idhar disha train me beth chuki thi.....
Kuch der bad us recetionist ko hosh aata hai.
Receptionist-kko ho tum...mujhe yha kuu laye....

Vijay-jo puchu sch sch btaana....wrna aaj hi tum gyi.....
Receotionist-kyaa ...
Vijay-nisha ke bare me...
Receptionist nisha ka baam sunte hi ghbraa jaati hai. ...

Vijay ek mukka uske muh pr maarta ha...
Receptionist-btaati hu sb.....mujhe bs itna pta hai ki....uske pet me bomb fit kiya gya hai...
Vijay-kisne kiya...
"Ye sb mujhe nhi pta..."
Vijay -jo bhi pta bai sb bta....
"Mene andar ek doc ko phon pr baat krte suna tha ..wo ek chemical bomb hai...jo kisi nyi technic se bna hai....wo kisi ki sanso se conect kiya jaata hai...or agr uske sath chedchaad ki to wo ft jayega....wrna wo bs usme fit kiye gye time ke acording ftega...."

Vijay-usse phle use disconnect krne ka trika
"Mene bs ye kahte suna tha ki...ise htaane ka koi trika nhi hai...agr jisme ft kiya gya hai...uski sanse ruk jaye to wo bomb khud b khud defuse ho jayega...or chemical ka bna hone ke kaaran wo body me gul jayega...jo kisi ko postmartem ke time bhi nhi milega iske alawa or koi raasta nhi hai..."

Vijay-bkwas bnd kr...kuch to jrur hoga...or vijay use bandhkr us doc ke ghr me jaise taise ghus jaata hai...
Doc soya tha.......vijay gate bnd krke us doc ko dboch leta hai....

Doc -kon ho tum kyaa chahiye...
Vijay us doc ko pahle bahut maarta hai..
Vijay-ab bta....us bomb ko defuse krne ka kya trika hai...
Vijay-kyuu kiya ye sb tumne...
Doc-mujhe nhi pta ...bs ek aadmi aaya tha...usne ye sb bola or pese diye...or bola nhi kiya mene ye kaam to wo mujhe maar dalega...
Vijay-bomb ko kese nikaala jaye wo bta...
Doc-koi trika nhi hai...agr wo ldki mr jaaye to hi wo defuse ho skta hai...wo uski sanso se juuda hai...

Ab vijay ke pero tle se jmeen khisak gyi thi...

Vijay us doc ko behosh krke use bhi us receptionist ke paas bandh deta hai...
Vijay ek jagah bethkr rone lgta hai...wo smjh chuka tha ki uski nisha ab usse dur jaane wali hai......
Tbi disha ka phon aata hai.....

Disha-kyaa bhaiya ...kya hua...
Vijay rota hua-disha hm use nhi bcha paayege ..
Disha-bhaiya kyaa hua...kyu kah rhe ho aisa...
Vijay-disha...uske mrne ke baad hi wo bomb defuse ho sakta hai...hm use nhi bchaa skte...vijay jor se rone lgta hai...
Disha-kyuu nhi bhaiya...hm to kuch to kr skte hai na...plsss btaiye...
Vijay-nhi kr skre disha....kuch nhi kr skte.....
Disha-bhaiya...hm use hospital ke jayege.....orr fr...uska operation se bomb nikal sakta hai...

Vijay-disha wo...us bomb ke sath chhedchaad ki to wo blast ho jayega....hmari nisha ab humen bomb bn chuka hai...
Disha-nhi bhaiya aiss nhi ho sakta....plss kuch to btao...
Vijay-rota hua...uska koi solution nhi hai....wo bomb uski sanso se connect hai....sans bnd hone prr hi bomb khud defuse ho jayega...


Disha ko ye sb sunkr jhtkaa lgta hai...or disha bina kuch bole phon rkh deti hai....
Ab disha pagal jaise hone ko ho jaati hai...
Use smjh nhi aarha tha ki wo kyaa kre....



Next update will be soon
gunde ched khani kare aur sahi waqt, ain mauke pe hero entry le..
Oh ho kya planning hai dono bhai bahan ki :what1: bahot khub... :D
Oh toh nisha ke pariwar ko bachane ke liye nisha ki bali chadha di in dono ne aur yahin suru huyi woh khooni silsila unlogo ki khoj mein ki akhir woh log koun the jinki wajah se nisha maari gayi..
matlab disha galat hoke bhi sahi thi :D
ab aage kya... Kya disha badla le payegi akhir abhi khud apni jindgi aur maut se lad rahi h :dazed:
Khair.. mujhe kya... tulshi is mein bhaanti bhaanti ke log :D
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill :yourock: :yourock:
 

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Naina ni wo bde writter hia..shayd unhe ye kahani pasand nhi ayegi...
aise kaise pasand nahi karenge woh
revo bhi denge woh...
par badle mein ju ko bhi unki story padhni hogi aur revo bhi dene honge :approve: are writer logis ek dushre ko support karne chahiye :approve: aur aap dono hi xp se hi writers ho :approve:
 
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