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Bahut umda likha hai. Realstics likhna kai bar logo ki dhairya ki pareeksha le leta hai. Magar asal life me aisa hi hota hai. Fir kahani gaon ke paridrishya par likha ja rahi hai to isme itna jaldi sex nahi parosa ja sakta. Kuchh chhoti chhoti ghatnao se ek mahol banta hai tab jakar ek bada kand hota hai. Halke halke kuchh chhoti chhoti ghatna Sunita ko mardon ki taraf kheench rahi hai aur fir vaidya ji ki dawa ka poora asar uske shareer aur dimag par ho raha hai. Aage dekhte hai Sunita ki ka mukta kahan tak badhti hai aur kya rang lati hai. Ek badhiya update ke liye thanks.
 
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Bahut umda likha hai. Realstics likhna kai bar logo ki dhairya ki pareeksha le leta hai. Magar asal life me aisa hi hota hai. Fir kahani gaon ke paridrishya par likha ja rahi hai to isme itna jaldi sex nahi parosa ja sakta. Kuchh chhoti chhoti ghatnao se ek mahol banta hai tab jakar ek bada kand hota hai. Halke halke kuchh chhoti chhoti ghatna Sunita ko mardon ki taraf kheench rahi hai aur fir vaidya ji ki dawa ka poora asar uske shareer aur dimag par ho raha hai. Aage dekhte hai Sunita ki ka mukta kahan tak badhti hai aur kya rang lati hai. Ek badhiya update ke liye thanks.
Koi bhee kahani achi ya buri jesi bhi ho ek tikha kataksha dene wala samikshak hamesha hona chahiye.
Koi bhee sanstha ( site ) tabhi unnati karti hai jaab lekhak aur vachak dono sanawad kare

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Aksar log kisi complete story ko uthate hai aur usi rang me rang kar usse aage badhate hai. Magar aapne sirf naam liya hai uski theme change kar di. Halanki yah ek bahut bada risk hai magar jis hisab se aapne ye dono lambe update likhe aur usme apna asar chhoda hai padhne wale Maan Gaye hai ki apki soch aur lekhan ekdam juda hai. Pathak sochne par majboor ho gaya hai ki akhir aage kya kya hoga aur kaise writer pesh karenge. Utsukta ka mahol ban gaya hai.
 
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Neend adhoori hee rahee.
Sunita ki aankhen khuli to chhat se baarish ki boondein ab bhi tapak rahi thin.
Raat bhar woh karwat badalti rahi thi. Kabhi Akram ki khushbu yaad aa jaati, kabhi MLA ka haath, kabhi Firangi ke lal lund ke dhakke, kabhi Bhola ki woh aakhri nazar.

Usne aankhen band karke sochne ki koshish ki —
“Sab dawai ka asar tha… bas fir saab theek ho jayega aur ye dard bhee chala jayega.”
Lekin yeh baat ab usse pehle jaisi mazbooti se nahi kahee jaa rahi thi. Jaise khud se jhoot bol rahi ho.

Woh uth kar baithi.
Saadi ka pallu theek kiya.
Pet ke neeche ab bhi halki si garmahat thi. Itni nahi ki pareshan kare, lekin itni bhi nahi ki bhool jaaye.

Aangan mein aa kar usne pehle gaayon ko chara daala.
Nayi gaayein ab bhi thodi anjaan si behave kar rahi thin.
Phir chulha jalaaya.

Thodi der mein Bablu naha kar baahar aaya.
Uske kandhe aur seene pe paani ki boondein chamak rahi thin.
Sunita ne uski taraf dekha… aur turant nazar hata li.
Pehle aisa nahi hota tha.

**Bablu:** Maa, chai?
**Sunita:** Haan… abhi nikaalti hoon.

Usne chai banayi. Roti sekne lagi.
Bablu charpai pe baith gaya.
Dono ke beech thodi si chuppi thi.
Pehle itni chuppi nahi hoti thi.

**Bablu:** Mela kaisa tha?
Sunita ke haath ek second ke liye ruke.
**Sunita:** Theek tha… bheed bohot zyada thi.
**Bablu:** Samaan laayi?
**Sunita:** Haan… thoda.

Phir dono chup ho gaye.
Bablu nashta karke kudali uthane laga.
Jaate-jaate usne kaha,
“Maa, aaj thoda late aaunga. Wahan khet me kaam zyada hai.”

**Sunita:** Theek hai. Apna dhyan rakhna. Main dopehar ko khana le aati hoon.

Woh nikal gaya.
Sunita aangan mein khadi rahi.
Uske dimaag mein ab bhi kal ki baatein ghum rahi thin.
Lekin ab unke saath ek naya khayal bhi aa raha tha —
*Ab kya hoga?*

Tabhi aangan mein payal ki awaaz aayi.
Manju aa rahi thi.
Uske chehre pe wahi halki si muskaan thi…
jaise use pata ho ki didi ki raat kaisi rahi hogi.
Manju aate hi boli,
“Didi, woh packet abhi tak pada hai kya?”

Sunita ne packet nikaala.
Dono charpai pe baith gayi.
Manju ne kaha, “Dhage ko khol.”

Packet khulte hi andar ka saaman dekh kar dono ki aankhen phati ki phati reh gayi.
Maroon ghaghra-choli, sone ke jhumke, **kamar chain**, chudiyan, payal, sindoor, black bra-panty…
aur aakhir mein **mangalsutra**.

Sunita ka chehra kas gaya.
Manju ne mangalsutra uthaya. Usne haath se tolla wazani tha.

**Manju:** Didi…
Yeh dekh ke samajh rahi ho na?
Yeh sab milake chhe lakh ke kareeb ka saaman hai.
Hum jaise logon ke liye yeh rashi samajh ke baahar hai.
Puri zindagi mehnat karein tab bhi itna paisa ektha nahi kar paayenge.

Phir usne mangalsutra ko ungli se chhua aur dheere se kaha,
**Manju:** Iska matlab yeh hai…
Jaldi hi tera vidhwa wala libaas utar jaayega.
Koi mard tujhe yeh mangalsutra pehnayega…
aur tujhe suhaagan bana dega.

Sunita ka chehra laal ho gaya. Usne nazar jhukayi.
“Pagal ke jaise mat bol Manju… aisi baatein…”
Lekin awaaz mein woh purani jor aur taakat nahi thi.

Manju ne **kamar chain** uthayi.
Chain ke dono chhor pe ek-ek chhota sone ka ball tha, aur dono ball mein chhote ghungroo lage the.
Beech se ek lamba hissa latak raha tha.

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**Manju:** Ek galti ho gayi didi.
Mohanpura ki reet ke hisaab se…
jab yeh packet kholo,
uske baad jo **pehla mard** ghar aaye,
usi ke haath se yeh kamar chain pehnani chahiye…
aur paon mein yeh payal-bichuwe bhi.

Usne thoda ruk kar kaha,
**Manju:** Maaf kar didi…
Jab main aayi thi tab Bablu yahin tha.
Lekin main aate hi woh khet chala gaya.
Ab jo pehla mard aayega… wahi pehnayega.

Sunita ne uski taraf dekha.
Aankhon mein sharm aur gussa dono the.

Tabhi aangan ke baahar se awaaz aayi.
Ek budha aadmi khada tha.
Lagbhag saath saal ka.
Gande kapde, haath mein jhadu aur tokri.
Gaon ka kachra uthane wala — **Gangu**.

**Gangu:** Bahu… aaj thoda late ho gaya.
Kachra nikal doon?

Manju ne Sunita ki taraf dekha.
Uski aankhon mein ek ajeeb si chamak thi.

**Manju:** Didi…
Yeh raha pehla mard.

Sunita ke chehre ka rang utar gaya.
Gangu aangan ke baahar hi ruk gaya.
Jhadu aur tokri haath mein the.
Woh andar aane ki himmat nahi kar raha tha.

**Gangu:** Bahu… main yahin se nikal leta hoon.
Andar nahi aana chahiye hum jaise logon ko.

Manju uth kar uske paas gayi.
**Manju:** Are kaka, aaj andar aao.
Itni der se kachra uthate ho, aaj ek pyali chai toh banti hai.

Gangu ne haath jod liye.
“Nahi bahu… hum logon ko ghar ke aangan tak bhi nahi aane dete.
Chhue se bhi paap lagta hai.”

Manju ne uska haath pakad liya.
**Manju:** Kaka, main woh Manju nahi hoon jo oonch-neech maanti ho.
Aao, baitho. Chai nashta karo.

Itni izzat dekh kar Gangu ke pair kaampne lage.
Woh aangan mein aaya to uske aankhon mein paani aa gaya.
Ek saath saal ka budha rone laga.
“Bahu… aaj pehli baar kisi ne hum jaise ko itni izzat di…
Bhagwan aapka bhala kare.”

Sunita yeh dekh kar chupchaap khadi thi.
Uske andar Manju ke liye ek ajeeb sa fakhar sa utha.
Yahi wajah thi jo woh Manju ko apni behen maanti thi.

Manju ne Gangu ko charpai pe bithaya.
Chai aur nashta diya.
Woh kampte haathon se piye jaa raha tha.

Thodi der baad Manju ne uske paas jakar dheere se kaha,
**Manju:** Kaka, ek madad karni hogi.

Gangu ne turant haath jod liye.
“Bolo bahu.”

**Manju:** Meri ungli mein kal chot lag gayi hai.
Main didi ko yeh kamar chain aur payal-bichuwe nahi pehna pa rahi.
Aap pehna doge?

Gangu dar gaya.
“Bahu… yeh hum jaise ke haath ka kaam nahi.
Humein toh…”

**Manju:** Kaka, main maang rahi hoon.
Aap kar do.

Gangu ne Sunita ki taraf dekha.
Sunita ne nazar jhukayi.
Dawai ka asar ab uske shareer mein dheere-dheere chal raha tha.
Woh virodh nahi kar paayi.

Gangu uth kar Sunita ke paas aaya.
Uske kapdon se gandi, pasine aur kachre ki bhaari bo aa rahi thi.
Woh bo aaj Sunita ke liye ajeeb tarike se garam thi.

Pehle usne **kamar chain** uthayi.
Kampte haathon se Sunita ki kamar mein pehnayi.
Ek sone ka ball uski **nabhi** mein thoda sa ghus gaya.
Doosra lamba hissa neeche latak kar seedha uski **chut** pe aa gaya.
Dono ball mein lage ghungroo ne halki si khanak di.

Jaise hi chain set hui, latakta hua ball uski chut se ragad gaya.
Sunita ke shareer mein ek tez lehree si daud gayi.

Phir Gangu ne payal aur bichuwe liye.
Woh Sunita ke paon ke paas baith gaya.
Uske gande, mote haath ne Sunita ke paon ko chhua.
Anguliyon se bichuwe pehnate waqt uski ungli Sunita ki panjali aur ungliyon ke beech se guzri.
Payal mein bhi ghungroo the.

Har sparsh ke saath Sunita ki saans tez ho rahi thi.
Gangu ke jhukne se uska jism Sunita ke nitanbon se lagbhag chipak gaya tha.
Uske dhoti ke neeche kuch sakht sa Sunita ki jaangh se ragad raha tha.
Gangu ke paurush ki gandi garmi uske kapdon ke through mehsoos ho rahi thi.

Sunita ne aankhen band kar li.
Woh sharm se mar rahi thi…
lekin shareer jawab de raha tha.
Kamar se latakta ball baar-baar uski chut se takra raha tha.

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Manju ne dheere se kaha,
**Manju:** Didi…
Kaka ke pair chhu lo.

Sunita ki aankhen khul gayi.
Woh Gangu ko “Kaka” nahi bol paayi.
Muh se nikal gaya,
“Aap ji…”

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Yeh shabd uske muh se aise nikle jaise kabhi apne pati ko bolti thi.
Gangu ka shareer lahraya.

Usne apni gandi dhoti ke fold se ek rupaye ka sikka nikaala.
Woh sikka mitti aur gandagi se sana hua tha.
Usne woh sikka Sunita ke haath mein rakha aur bola,
“Beti…
Bhagwan tumhe suhaag de.
Yeh ashirwad hai.”

Phir woh uth kar jhadu-tokri uthaye bahar nikal gaya.
Aangan mein phir se khamoshi chha gayi.

Sunita ke ek haath mein gandi sikka tha…
kamar mein chain thi (ek ball nabhi mein, doosra chut pe latak raha tha)…
paon mein payal aur bichuwe the.
Manju usse dekh rahi thi.
Sunita ne nazar nahi uthayi.


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Gangu ke jaane ke baad aangan mein kuch der tak kuch nahi bola gaya.
Sunita charpai pe hi baithi rahi.
Kamar mein chain, paon mein payal-bichuwe.
Haath mein woh ganda sikka tha.

Usne sikke ko dekha.
*Yeh main kya kar baithi…*
*Ek kachra uthane wale se paon chhuwa liye…*
*Uski bo ab bhi kapdon mein hai…*
*Aur mera jism us bo se bhi garam ho gaya.*
*Yeh latakta ball ab bhi meri chut se ragad raha hai…*

Muh se halki si siskari nikal gayi.
Chehra laal ho gaya.
Jaldi se usne woh sikka blouse ke andar thoos diya.
Stanon ke beech chala gaya.
Thandi dhatu ki chuohan se phir se lehree si uthi.

Latakta hua sone ka ball uski chut se baar-baar ragad raha tha.
Usse badi bechaini hone lagi.

Woh uth kar khadi hui aur dono haathon se kamar chain pakad kar **utarne ki koshish** karne lagi.

Tabhi Manju ne uska haath pakad liya.

**Manju:** Mat utaro didi.

Sunita ne gusse aur sharm se kaha,
“Yeh kya pehna diya tune mujhe?
Itni bhaari… aur yeh latakta hua cheez…
main nahi pehen sakti.”

Manju ne uske haath zor se pakde rakhe aur dheere se boli,

**Manju:** Ab nahi utar sakti didi.

Sunita ne uski taraf dekha.

**Manju:** Yeh chain aam nahi hai.
Mohanpura ki reet ke hisaab se…
jab yeh kamar chain pehnayi jaati hai,
toh uske saath ek shraap bhi jud jaata hai.

Jab tak **agla bada mela** na aaye…
ya koi mard tujhe apna **mangalsutra** na pehnaye…
tab tak yeh chain tere kamar se nahi utregi.

Agar zabardasti utarne ki koshish ki…
toh tera beta 40 din ke andar kuch ka kuch ho sakta hai.

Sunita ka chehra phika pad gaya.
Uske haath kaampne lage.

**Manju:** Isliye ab isse mat utarna.
Chahe kitna bhi bhaari lage,
chahe kitna bhi sharm aaye…
pehne rehna.

Main ne tujhe pehle isliye nahi bataya,
kyunki pehle yaad nahee aaya ab yaad aagaya mere chachi ne uttara tha taab unka beta baadh me beh gaya tha.

Ab jo ho gaya… woh ho gaya.

Sunita dheere se charpai pe baith gayi.
Uske dimaag mein sirf ek hi baat ghumne lagi —

*Ab yeh chain nahi utar sakti…*
*Bete ko kutch ho jaaye uska dar…*

Latakta hua ball ab bhi uski chut se halka-halka ragad raha tha.
Lekin ab woh utarne ki himmat nahi kar paayi.



manju : Kuch der chup rahi. Phir boli,
“Didi…
Tera chehra dekh.
Itne dinon baad pehli baar tera dard kam lag raha hai.
Sach mein kam hua hai na?”

Sunita ne uski taraf dekha.
Man hi man usne mehsoos kiya — dard sach mein kaafi kam ho gaya tha.
Chehre pe thodi si raahat aa gayi, chahe woh chahe ya na chahe.

Manju ne uska haath pakda.
“Main tujhe bigaadna nahi chahti didi.
Bas itna kehti hoon…
Ab tu pehle jaisi maat reh ab .
Aur main dekh sakti hoon tere andar badalav aa rahe hai.”

Bas itna kah kar woh chup ho gayi.
Thodi der baad Manju uth khadi hui.
“Chal, kapde leke nadi chalte hain.
Aaj dhoop bhi sahi hai.”


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Nadi ghat pe pahunchte hi kuch auratein pehle se kapde dho rahi thin.

Jaise hi Sunita ne pair paani mein rakhe,
uski payal aur bichuwe ne **chan-chan-chan** ki awaaz ki.
Kamar chain ke ghungroo bhi saaf khanak uthaye.

Pehli aurat ne aankhen faad kar seedha bol diya,

“Arre dekh toh…
ye maharani kon aagayi yaha pe
Kal tak toh vidhwa ban ke ghum rahi thi,
aaj yeh sone ki chain kahan se latak rahi hai?”

Doosri aurat ne uski kamar pe ghoorte hue kaha,

“Itna bhaari sona…
humari to do-do jindagi nikal jaaye tab bhi itna nahi jama hota.
Seedha bata, kaun sa mard tujhe pehena ke bheja hai?”

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Tabhi **Raziya** (Bulla ki begam) ne saamne se awaaz di,

“Suman…
yeh sab tujhe MLA Jadhav ne diya hai kya?
Kal se Mohanpura se hi toh aayi hai na?”

Doosri auratein turant uske saath ho gayi,

“Haan Raziya behen,
tabhi toh kahu 3 din aur 2 raath ye kaha thee ab tum se paata chala kee ye
do raat guzaar ke aayi hai Mohanpura se.
Itna sona muft mein nahi milta.”

Manju ka chehra taan gaya.
Woh beech mein kud padi.

**Manju:** Arre Raziya,
tu apna muh bandh rakh.
Pandit ka lund liye hue hai na aaj taak tune?
Phir kyun nahi pehenti sona?
Panditayan ban ke ghum.

Phir usne us budhiya ki taraf dekha jo “netaji phaans liya” bol rahi thi,

**Manju:** Aur tu panditayan?
Bhool gayi tera beta kiski den hai?
Bolun kya?
Gangu kaka ki.
Uske 12 inch ka leke uchalti thi na tu?
Ab muh utha ke baat karti hai?

Budhiya ka chehra peela pad gaya.

Manju ne aankhen ghumakar saari auraton ko dekha aur boli,

**Manju:** Yahan koi aisi aurat nahi baithi
jo Bhola ke table mein leti na ho.
Mera muh mat khulwa.
Agar koi ispe ungli uthayega,
toh main khol ke rakh dungi
kis-kis ke ghar se raat ko kaun nikalta hai.

Usne Sunita ki taraf ishara karke kaha,

**Manju:** Agar koi isko rakhega,
toh kya uska beta mar gaya hai?

Tum log usko dekh ke muh mein paani kyun laati ho?
Tumhari saari ka pallu kyun girta hai Bablu ko dekh ke?
Ab zyada mat bolo.

Ghat pe ek second ke liye complete silence ho gaya.



Sunita ke aankhon mein paani aa gaya tha.
Logon ki gandi soch dekh kar uska dil bhari ho gaya.
Lekin kaheen na kaheen woh Manju ki bebaaki ki kayal bhi ho gayi thi.

Jo baat Manju karti thi,
woh khul ke karti thi.
Bina kisi mukhote ke.
Baaki auratein izzat aur samman ka mukhota pehen ke wahi sab karti thin
jo Manju khul ke karti thi.

Aur kaheen andar hi andar…
Sunita ke andar jo vidhwa hone ka dosh aur sukh milne pe khud ko galat thairane wali deewar thi,
woh ab bohot kamzor pad chuki thi.
Ek aur dhakka…
aur yeh Sunita naya Sunita ban jaayegi.

usane kapdon ko uthaya aur dono nikal gayi ghar kee aur

aur ghat pe abhi kutch Auratein usnki taraf dekh rahi thin.
Kuch ki aankhon mein seedhi jalan thi,
kuch ki aankhon mein daar manju ka ,
kuch ki aankhon mein seedha ghin aur ersya.


Kapde dho kar jab woh wapas aa rahi thin, toh Bulla ki dukaan se guzarna pada.

Sunita ke paon se **chan-chan-chan** ki awaaz aa rahi thi.
Kamar chain ke ghungroo bhi saath-saath khanak rahe the.

Kuch manchale pehle se baithe the.
Ek ne Sunita ko dekhte hi aankhen faad kar kaha,

“Arre madarchod…
aaj toh mahaul hi kuch alag hai.
Dekho na iski chaal…
jaise koi randi pehli baar sona pehen ke nikalii ho.”

Doosra bola,

“Yeh ghungroo toh seedha lund pe maar rahe hain.
Itna sona pehen ke ghumegi toh mard log iske peeche paagal ho jaayenge.”

Bulla ne peeche se apne lund ko zor se dabaya.
Uske chehre pe hasi thi, lekin aankhon mein saaf **jalan aur gussa** tha.

Woh bhari awaaz mein bola,

“Chal to dekh lo…
Andar kya hai woh bhi dekhne ka mann karta hai aajkal.
Yeh ghungroo toh jaise bula rahe hain…
‘Aaja, aaja, aaj free mein milungi’.”

Phir usne thoda aur tezz kaha,

“Kal tak toh vidhwa ban ke ghum rahi thi,
aaj MLA ka sona pehen ke nikalii hai.
Samajh lo baat…
do raat Mohanpura mein guzaar ke aayi hai.
Ab yeh gaon ki nahi rahi.”

Manju ne uski taraf ghur kar dekha aur seedha bol diya,

“Oye Bulla, zubaan sambhal ke.
Zyada mat ukhad.
Teri begam Raziya pe dyan de ,
woh bhi raaj khol doon kya?”

Bulla ki hasi thodi thandi pad gayi,
lekin uska haath ab bhi apne dhoti pe hi tha.
Uske dimaag mein ek hi baat ghum rahi thi —

*Kal tak yeh chain nahi thi…
aaj yeh sab kahan se aa gaya?
MLA saale ne isko le liya…
mere hote hue.*

Sunita ne tez kadam badha diye.
Har kadam pe latakta ball uski chut se ragad raha tha.
Lekin uske kaanon mein Bulla ki baatein ghumti rahi.

“Ab yeh gaon ki nahi rahi…”
yeh line uske dimaag mein baar-baar baj rahi thi.



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Wapas aate-aate baat gaon mein fail chuki thi.

ab tak pure Mandawa mein ek hi baat ghum rahi thi —

**“Sunita MLA Jadhav ki rakhel ban gayi hai.
Do raat uske saath guzaar ke aayi hai.
Isliye itna sona pehen ke ghum rahi hai.”**


Kapde sukha kar Sunita ne Babalu ka khana bandha.
Thali mein roti, sabzi, achar.
Pallu theek kiya.

Kamar pe bhaari sone ki chain pehle se bandhi thi.
Ek ball uski nabhi mein daba hua tha.
Doosra lamba hissa neeche latak kar seedha uski chut pe baar-baar ragad kha raha tha.
Har kadam pe woh ball uski geeli silwaton ke beech se ghis raha tha.
Paon mein payal aur bichuwe the, chhote ghungroo lage hue.

Jaise hi woh khet ki taraf nikal padi,
har kadam pe **chan-chan… chan-chan…** ki awaaz nikalne lagi.
Saath hi kamar chain ke ghungroo bhi khanak rahe the.

Chaupal se guzarti toh pehle se baithe mardon ki nazar uspe aa gayi.

Ek bola,
“Aaj toh chal mein hi kuch alag hai…
dekh ke hi lund khada ho jaaye aisa.
Yeh ghungroo seedha lund pe maar rahe hain.”

Doosra hanske bola,
“Kapde bhi naye lag rahe hain…
aur yeh latakti hui chain…
jaise keh rahi ho — ‘aaja, aaj andar dekh le’.”

Teesra dheere se, lekin saaf awaaz mein bola,
“Kal hi toh Mohanpura gayi thi Manju ke saath…
MLA ke farmhouse pe.
Do raat guzaar ke aayi hai.
Samajh lo baat…
ab yeh gaon ki nahi rahi.”

Sunita ne nazar nahi uthayi.
Bas tez kadam badhaye.
Lekin har kadam pe latakta ball uski chut se ragad raha tha.
Uske apne hi shareer mein garmi fail rahi thi.
Chut ke beech se halki si geelapan nikalne laga tha.
Woh jaan-bujh kar pair tez nahi rakh pa rahi thi,
kyunki jitna tez chalti, utna hi woh ball uski chut ko ragadta.

Thodi door **Bhola** khada tha.
Usne Sunita ko aate dekha.

Pehle uski nazar paon ki payal pe gayi…
phir kamar pe bandhi bhaari sone ki chain pe…
phir us latakte hue ball pe jo seedha uski chut ke upar se guzar raha tha.

Bhola ka lund dhoti ke andar ek dum sakht ho gaya.
Uske chehre pe hasi nahi thi.
Sirf **ersya, gussa aur bhook** thi.

Man hi man uske andar awaaz aayi—

*Firangi jaisa ek din tere pe bhi chadunga.
Is kamar chain ko pakad ke hi pelunga.
Is latakte ball ko pakad ke teri chut faadunga.
Aur tujhe apni dudharu gaay banaunga.
Mera bachhada paida karke.
Roz subah-shaam doodh nikalunga.
Lekin ab yeh MLA saala beech mein aa gaya…
saale ne pehle hi haath maar diya.*

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Usne kuch nahi kaha.
Bas dekhte raha jab tak Sunita nazar se door nahi ho gayi.
Uske muh se halki si geeli saans nikal gayi.
Dhoti ke andar uska lund ab bhi poora khada tha,
tent bana hua.Khet mein Babalu kaam kar raha tha.
Paseene se bheega hua.
Sunita ne khana nikala.
Dono ped ki chhaon mein baith gaye.
Babalu ne pehle normal nazar se dekha,
phir uski nazar Sunita ki kamar pe atak gayi.
Uske haath mein roti ruki hui reh gayi.

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Babalu: Maa…
yeh… yeh kya pehen rakha hai?
Woh thoda sa aage jhuk kar chain ko ghoorne laga.
Babalu: Kamar mein yeh itni bhaari chain…
paon mein payal… bichuwe…
door se hi awaaz aa rahi thi.
Kal tak toh kuch nahi tha.
Uske chehre pe saaf surprise aur hairani thi.
Jaise kisi gareeb ghar mein achanak itna sona dekh liya ho.
Sunita ne bina nazar uthaye kaha,
“MLA sahab ne kal ek packet diya tha.
Usme yeh sab tha.
Unhone kaha… achha shagun hota hai, mana mat karna.”
Babalu ab bhi chain ko dekhe jaa raha tha.
Phir usne thoda soch kar kaha,
Babalu: Maa…
aap samajh rahi ho na?
Poore gaon mein kya kahenge log?
Yeh toh lakhon ka sona hai.
Humari do-do pidhiyaan nikal jaaye tab bhi itna nahi kharid payenge.
Itna bhaari pehen ke kaise ghumogi?
Utaar kyun nahi deti?
Sunita ne ab uski taraf dekha.
Awaaz mein halki si gambhirta aa gayi thi.
Sunita: Beta…
yeh sab jo mil raha hai…
Adhyaksha pad, doodh collection, paise…
yeh in gehnon ki wajah se mil raha hai.
Agar main inhe utaar dungi…
toh kaheen upshakun na ho jaaye.
Aur jo mil raha hai, woh sab chala na jaaye.
Isliye ab yeh pehen ke rakhna hi padega.
Babalu kuch der chup raha.
Uske dimaag mein baat baithti jaa rahi thi.
Phir usne poocha,
“Sirf chain-payal?
Kuch aur bhi diya kya?”
Sunita thoda ruki, phir boli,
“Haan…
ek shagun ka lifafa bhi tha.
Do lakh ekhattar hazaar ka.
Woh toh main bhool hi gayi thi.
Aaj subah packet kholte waqt nikaala.”
Babalu ki aankhen thodi aur badi ho gayi.
Phir Sunita ne aage kaha,
“Kal Mohanpura mein baat hui hai.
Mujhe Nari Shakti Mahila Morcha ki Adhyaksha banaya jaayega.
Aur Jadhav Milk Co-op ka Mandawa doodh collection bhi mere aur tere haath mein aayega.
Saath mein vidhwa pension aur Kisan Samman Nidhi mil kar saalana dedh lakh ke kareeb ho jaayega.
Collection ke liye shed, zameen aur chil-lar sab vahi denge.”
Babalu ka haath bilkul ruki gaya.
Roti usne neeche rakh di.
Uske dimaag mein turant hisab daudne lage.
15 lakh ka collection setup…
Dedh lakh saalana alag…
Doodh collection ka paisa alag…
Aur aaj hi do lakh ekhattar hazaar…
Toh aane wale 8 mahine mein Dussehra tak tractor, jeep aur Bullet bhi le sakta hoon.
Aur paas ka khet bhi khareed sakta hoon.
Uske dost shehar mein rehte the.
Kuch gaon ke rauskhdar Bullet aur Jeep mein ghumte the.
Ab uske dimaag mein bhi wahi sapne ghumne lage.
Sunita dekh rahi thi.
Usne jaan-bujh kar sirf paise aur pad ki baat ki thi.
Asli baat usne nahi batayi —
ki woh ₹2,71,000 usne raat ko MLA ka lund pakad kar mutane mein help karne ke baad liye the.
Usne mana bhi kiya tha, lekin MLA ne “shagun” ka bahana bana kar uske haath mein thama diya tha.
Yeh baat usne Manju ko bhi nahi batayi thi.
Thoda sa ruk kar Sunita ne dheere se kaha,
“Beta, aage jaake mujhe Mahila Morcha aur gaon ki zimmedari sambhalni hogi.
Isliye baar-baar Mohanpura jaana padega.
MLA ji ki wife se meeting honi hogi… kabhi-kabhi rukna bhi padega.
Uska allowance aur party ki car bhi milegi.
Aur tujhe Doodh Sangh ka Pradesh Adhyaksha banaayenge.
Tujhe bhi bahar ghumna padega.
Hotel, khana, sab Doodh Sangh dega.”
Itna keh kar usne bete ki aankhon mein dekha.
Ab yeh zyada sawaal nahi karega…
aur ghar jaake Manju se bhi nahi poochhega.
Khana kha kar Babalu phir kaam mein lag gaya.
Lekin uske chehre pe ab pehle jaisi simple thakaan nahi thi.
Kuch naya, bhookha sa khayal aa chuka tha.
Sunita ghar ki taraf nikal padi.
Thodi der baad Babalu bhi tools uthakar khalihan se hota hua ghar jaane laga.

Khalihan ke doosre kone se use dabi-dabi siskari sunai di.

Babalu ruka.
Hawa mein ek bhaari, khatti-meethi bo tair rahi thi — paseena, chut ka paani aur kuch aur.
Dheere se bhus ke dher ke peeche gaya.



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Raziya zameen pe chit leti thi.
Kurta gale tak sarakaya hua tha .
Dono stan bahar the — bade, naram, upar ki skin chamak rahi thi paseene se.
Kaale nipple tan kar khade the, thodi si laar bhee thee unpe.
Salwar ek pair mein atki hui thi.
Jaanghen poori tarah faili hui thin.
Uski chut ke baal geele the, chipke hue.

Pandit Batuknath unke beech jhuke hue the.
Dhoti kamar ke upar uthayi hui.
Unka mota, kaala lund Raziya ki chut mein poora dhasa hua tha.
Jhant geele the, chut ke paani se chipke hue, chamak rahe the.

Woh jor-jor se pel rahe the.

Thap… thap… thap…

Har dhakke ke saath Raziya ki gaand zameen pe patakti.
Bhus kuch-kuch awaaz karta.
Uske stan hil-hil kar uske muh tak aa jaate.
Nipple hawa mein kaampte.

Neeche se chap-chap-chap ki geeli awaaz aa rahi thi.
Lund andar-bahar hote hue chut ka paani baahar nikaal raha tha.
Woh paani uski gaand aur jaanghon pe fail gaya tha, zameen ko geela kar raha tha.

Hawa mein bo aur tez ho gayi — khatti, garam, bhaari.

“Ahh… saale… poora andar… jor se pel… ahh…”

Raziya ki awaaz bhi geeli thi.
Gale se aa rahi thi.

Pandit ji ne uski dono jaanghen aur faila di.
Apna lund bilkul baahar nikaala — geela, chamakta hua, nason se bhara, upar se safed jhaag laga hua.
Phir ek jhatke mein daboch diya.

Raziya ki chut ne usko nigal liya.
Uske muh se lambi, kaampi hui siskari nikal gayi.

“Ufff… maadar… itna mota… ahh…”

Pandit ji ab tez ho gaye.
Gaand sikud-sikud kar pel rahe the.
Kabhi poora baahar nikaalte, kabhi jadh tak andar dhasa dete.
Unke jhant Raziya ki chut pe gile-gile patak rahe the.
Awaaz aur bhaadh gayi — chap-chap-thap.

Babalu ka lund dhoti ke andar poora tan kar khada ho gaya.

Uske andekos sakht ho gaye, bhaari pad gaye.



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Pet ke neeche garam, geeli garmi fail gayi.
Dhoti ke kapde se uska lund ragad kha raha tha.
Uske apne muh se halki si geeli saans nikal gayi.

Woh chahte hue bhi nazar nahi hata pa raha tha.

Raziya ne ab dono haath se Pandit ji ki gaand pakad li.
Ungliyan unki gaand ke maans mein ghus gayi thin.
Khud bhi kamar utha kar unke lund ko andar khinchne lagi.

“Aur tez… chod… aaj poora jhaad… ahh…”


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Pandit ji ne uske stanon ko zor se daboch liya.
Nipple ko ungliyon se masalte hue pelte rahe.
Raziya ke stanon se paseene ki boondein nikal kar uske pet pe gir rahi thin.

Babalu ne apne lund ko dhoti ke upar se dabaya.
Sakht tha, garam tha, thoda sa geela bhi ho chuka tha.
Uske pair kaampne lage.

Itna dekh kar uske dimaag mein sirf ek hi baat ghum rahi thi —
yeh awaaz, yeh bo, yeh geeli chap-chap.

Woh aur der rukta toh shayad khud haath laga baithta.

Himmat karke dabe paon peeche hat gaya.

Khalihan se nikalte hue bhi uske kaano mein Raziya ki siskari aur lund ki geeli awaaz ghumti rahi.
Naak mein ab bhi woh khatti bo thi.
Dhoti mein lund ab bhi poora khada tha, tent bana hua.
Bar-bar haath se theek kar raha tha, lekin kam nahi ho raha tha.

Pehli baar usne kisi ki chut mein lund jaate hue itne kareeb se dekha tha.
Woh nazaara, woh awaaz, woh bo…

ab uske dimaag mein gaad diya gaya tha.

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Miss archana aapne to khalihan 2.0 kahani m 4 chand laga diye. Aap sabhi character se sunita ko masalwa dena lekin chudai sirf bablu bete se hi karwana. Tabhi maza aayega... Baki aapki kahani aapki marzi...
 

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Miss archana aapne to khalihan 2.0 kahani m 4 chand laga diye. Aap sabhi character se sunita ko masalwa dena lekin chudai sirf bablu bete se hi karwana. Tabhi maza aayega... Baki aapki kahani aapki marzi...
 
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Miss archana aapne to khalihan 2.0 kahani m 4 chand laga diye. Aap sabhi character se sunita ko masalwa dena lekin chudai sirf bablu bete se hi karwana. Tabhi maza aayega... Baki aapki kahani aapki marzi...
Sabse pehle, AAP ka dil se aabhari hoon hum dono husband-wife. ❤️

Main Miss nahi hoon, main ek shaadi-shuda aurat hoon. Mere pati Mr. Mahesh aur main dono milkar kahani likhte hain.

Aur mujhe maaf kijiye ga, “Khet Khalihaan” se humne jaan-boojhkar “Khet” ko alag rakha hai. Ye sirf naam badal kar banaya gaya version nahi hai, balki ek alag version hai, jiske liye maine likhit anumati bhi li hai.

Ho sakta hai aage jaakar aapko ye kahani pasand na aaye. Isliye mera sirf itna sujhav hai ki aap apne vivek se sochiye ki aapko is kahani ke saath jude rehna hai ya nahi.

Aapke samay aur support ke liye dil se shukriya. ❤️
 
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Yah update bhi kahani ko aage badhate hue bahut hi shandar aur logically likha gaya hai. Maa bete ke beech mukharta ya kahe ki batcheet badhi hai. Manju ka kirdar aapne bahut soch samjh kar ek majboot sahyogi ka gadha hai jo ki iss kahani ka Sunita ka majboot pahlu hai.
Gaon me baaten ya afwah jungle me aag ki tarah failti hai aur yahi aapne bahut shandar aur jivant tareeke se dikhaya hai. Ghat par aurton ke taano ka jawab Manju dwara dilwa kar ek majboot saheli ke kirdar ko jivant kar diya hai. Sunita aur Manju ke ghar se ghar aate waqt Bulla halwai ki dukan par jo baate Hui hai uska Sunita ne khud jawab diya yah achha balance banaya hai magar wahan ke same diloge chaupal par mardon dwara repeat karna sahi nahi laga aap achhe writer hai diloge repeat karoge to wo maja nahi aata. Baki Bablu ko jawani ki umang Raziya aur Pandit ka khel dekh kar uth chuki hai. Aage dekhte hai yah jawani ki peeng kya rang laati hai. Sunita ko ek budhe ke hatho payal, bichhiya aur kamar ko chain jise hamare Rajasthan me Taagdi bolte hai bandhwana yah scene bahut damdar likha hai. Abhiangalsutra ka rahasya baki hai use kiske hatho bandhwaoge. Ek behad shandar aur kamukta liye hue update ke liye apka bahut bahut Dhanyavad..
 
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