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Ab tak aap ne dekha ki garden me chai pite hue kis terha se fahed apni ammi ki gand ko bhuki nazron se tadta hae jise uske abbu ne dekh liye lekin use toka ya danta nahi fir kis terha double meaning me bano apni beti sana ko apne abbu ke bhar ko sambhalne ki baat karti hae jise shafqat sirf dekhta hi reh jata hae aur raat me sanjida pahli bar muth marti hae.
Ab aage......
Fahed apne dukati me hawa se baten kerta apne collage ja raha tha ki use laga kuch ladke ek ladki ko bus stop pe pareshan kar rahe haen to wo apni bike ghuma ker wapes bus stand me pahonchta hae to use pareshan hoti kiran dikhti hae fahed ne ab tak kiren ki rakhi bandhi hui thi jise kiran dekh ker pehchan jati hae ki ye fahed khan hi hae uski sansen aur teez ho jati haen ab kiran ko un ledkon ka der nahi sata raha tha balki fahed ki mojudgi uski sanson ka teez chalne ka sabab thi kiran ke dil aur dimag me mix feelings aur baten chal rahi thi fahed apna helmet utar ker kiran ko uper se niche tak dekhta hae jo blue dress me apne dupatte ko ek side dale mathe pe tilak lagaye kanch ki chodiyon se bhare gore hathon me ek bag ko apne sine pe dabaye hue dari hui khadi hae fir fahed un ladkon ko gusse se dekhta hua kiran se kehta hae.
Fahed: betho.
Kiran darti hui uske pas aati hae aur ji bhaiya bolti hui bike pe beth jati hae fahed un ladkon ko dekhta hua hi helmet pahenta hae aur gadi badha deta hae un ladkon me koi confuse hota hae to koi gussa aur koi normal rehta hae kiun ki fahed ke headlamp ke uper aur tail light pe KHAN likha hua tha jabki ek tilak lagai ladki use ji bhaiya bolker uske sath chali gai.
Ladka 1: bahen chod dekha.
Ladka 2: abe chor yaar.
Ladka 3: desh badal raha hae.
Aur sab fir dusri ladkiyon ke piche lag jate haen.
Jese hi bike aage badhti hae kiran der ker fahed ko paked leti hae wese to bike pe bethte hi wo fahed ki pith pe jhuk gai thi kiun ki bike hi ayesi thi aur oper se choti seat lekin ferk sirf etna tha ki dono ke jismon ke bich kiran ka bag tha thodi hi der me dono collage pahonchte haen aur kiran uter ker.
Kiran: thank you bhaiya.
Fahed: koi bhi tumhe chede ya pareshan kare to mujhe batana.
Fahed apne class chala jata hae aur kiran apne dil me uthe toofan ko sambhalti nazreen jhukaye apne clas me ja hi rahi thi ki wahi senior ladkiya use chedti haen jinhon ne kiran ke sath ragging ki thi.
Ladki : oye hoye bhaiya ki behna bahot chipak ker bethi thi.
Aur sab hansne lagti haen kiran ek nazer unko dekh ker apne class me chali jati hae lekin uska dil aur dimag uske bas me nahi tha kiun ki uska dimag fahed ko ek bhai man liya tha aur uski zuban bhi dimag ka sath deti hui use bhaiya hi bol rahi thi lekin uske dil me kuch aur hi chal raha tha jiska sath uski chut bhi de rahi thi kher kisi terha wo apne aap ko sambhalti hae aur apne books pe dhyan lagati hae.
Office me bethe shafqat ka phone bajta hae aur ek noker use khaber deta hae ki uski ammi ki tabiyat achanak kharab ho gai hae to shafqat use bolta hae ki ok unko yahan .................. hospital me lao me doctor se baat kerta hun wo mulazin ji huzur thik hae bol ker phone cat deta hae fir shafqat apne pehchan wale doctor ko call kerta hae.
Shafqat: hello sherma kesa hae tu.
Doctor sherma: han shafqat me theek hun tu suna bahot din baad yaad kiya sab theek to hae na.
Shafqat: han yaar office se fursat hi nahi milti wo zara ammi ki tabiyat kharab ho gai ahe 3 ghante ke baad me unhe tere pas launga.
D. sherma: kya hua maa ji ko aur 3 ghante ke baad kiun layega abhi aaja etna busy ho gaya hae tu ki apni maa ke liye bhi office nahi chor sakta.
Shafqat: nahi yaar tumhe to pata hae wo gaon me rahti hae unko yahan pahonchne me 3 ghante to lag hi jayenge mere bas me hota to me abhi udd ker tere hospital apnni ammi ko le aata.
D. sherma: apne pas kiun nahi rakhta tu maa ji ko.
Shafqat: tujhe to sari kahani maloom hae bhai wo manti kahan haen.
D. sherma: acha han lekin yaar samjhao unhe ab unki umar ho gai hae nokaron se zyada apne ghar wale khayal rakhenge.
Shafqat: tum hi samjhana hamari to sunti hi nahi haen.
D. sherma: chal theek hae aa fir dekhta hun.
Shafqat fir apne ghar phone lagata hae jahan bano aur naaz hans hans ker kuch baten ker rahi thi jese hi bano ke mobile ki ghanti bajti wo muskurate hue phone uthati hae.
Bano: salam sana ke abbu.
Shafqat: w-salam suno amma ki tabiyat kharab ho gai hae mene mulazim ko bola hae ki unhe sherma ke hospital me leaye.
Shafqat serious ho ker bolta hae jise sun ker bano ka muskurata hua chehra bhi serious ho jata hae.
Bano: haye All.... kya hua ammi ko ji me abhi nikalti hun hospital.
Shafqat: abhi na jao 3 ghante to lagenge unhe yahan aane me tum driver ke sath chali aana me bhi wahin milunga.
Bano: ji ji me pahonch jaongi All.... kher kare.
Shafqat: han bas dua karo ke sab theek hi ho chalo rakhta hun.
Phone kat-te hi naaz pareshan hoti bano se puchti hae.
Naaz: kya hua dulhan.
Bano: ammi ki tabiyat kharab ho gai hae mulazim unhe yahan laa rahe hae inhon ne kaha hae ki 3 ghante me hospital aajao.
Naaz: ya All.... apni rehmat bersa unpe bahot neek khatoon haen.
Udher office me kuch filen liye rukhsar shafqat ke room me ghusti hae use pareshan dekh.
Rukhsar: kya hua mamu sab theek to hae etna pareshan kiun haen.
Shafqat sari baat batata hae rukhsar ko to wo bhi pareshan ho jati hae
Rukhsar: All.... bhala kare nani ka aap pareshan na hon etni achi neek khatoon haen nani kuch nahi hoga unhe.
Shafqat: All.... kare ayesa hi ho wese kya kaam tha tumhe.
Rukhsar: kuch filen thi unhe check kerna tha aapne lekin rahne den baad me dekh ligyega abhi aap jaiye hospital.
Shafqat: lao do kya dekhna hae unhe aane me abhi 2-3 ghante lagenge.
Filen de ker rukhsar chali jati hae aur shafqat unko check karne lagta hae.
Jari hae........
Ab tak aap ne dekha ki garden me chai pite hue kis terha se fahed apni ammi ki gand ko bhuki nazron se tadta hae jise uske abbu ne dekh liye lekin use toka ya danta nahi fir kis terha double meaning me bano apni beti sana ko apne abbu ke bhar ko sambhalne ki baat karti hae jise shafqat sirf dekhta hi reh jata hae aur raat me sanjida pahli bar muth marti hae.
Ab aage......
Fahed apne dukati me hawa se baten kerta apne collage ja raha tha ki use laga kuch ladke ek ladki ko bus stop pe pareshan kar rahe haen to wo apni bike ghuma ker wapes bus stand me pahonchta hae to use pareshan hoti kiran dikhti hae fahed ne ab tak kiren ki rakhi bandhi hui thi jise kiran dekh ker pehchan jati hae ki ye fahed khan hi hae uski sansen aur teez ho jati haen ab kiran ko un ledkon ka der nahi sata raha tha balki fahed ki mojudgi uski sanson ka teez chalne ka sabab thi kiran ke dil aur dimag me mix feelings aur baten chal rahi thi fahed apna helmet utar ker kiran ko uper se niche tak dekhta hae jo blue dress me apne dupatte ko ek side dale mathe pe tilak lagaye kanch ki chodiyon se bhare gore hathon me ek bag ko apne sine pe dabaye hue dari hui khadi hae fir fahed un ladkon ko gusse se dekhta hua kiran se kehta hae.
Fahed: betho.
Kiran darti hui uske pas aati hae aur ji bhaiya bolti hui bike pe beth jati hae fahed un ladkon ko dekhta hua hi helmet pahenta hae aur gadi badha deta hae un ladkon me koi confuse hota hae to koi gussa aur koi normal rehta hae kiun ki fahed ke headlamp ke uper aur tail light pe KHAN likha hua tha jabki ek tilak lagai ladki use ji bhaiya bolker uske sath chali gai.
Ladka 1: bahen chod dekha.
Ladka 2: abe chor yaar.
Ladka 3: desh badal raha hae.
Aur sab fir dusri ladkiyon ke piche lag jate haen.
Jese hi bike aage badhti hae kiran der ker fahed ko paked leti hae wese to bike pe bethte hi wo fahed ki pith pe jhuk gai thi kiun ki bike hi ayesi thi aur oper se choti seat lekin ferk sirf etna tha ki dono ke jismon ke bich kiran ka bag tha thodi hi der me dono collage pahonchte haen aur kiran uter ker.
Kiran: thank you bhaiya.
Fahed: koi bhi tumhe chede ya pareshan kare to mujhe batana.
Fahed apne class chala jata hae aur kiran apne dil me uthe toofan ko sambhalti nazreen jhukaye apne clas me ja hi rahi thi ki wahi senior ladkiya use chedti haen jinhon ne kiran ke sath ragging ki thi.
Ladki : oye hoye bhaiya ki behna bahot chipak ker bethi thi.
Aur sab hansne lagti haen kiran ek nazer unko dekh ker apne class me chali jati hae lekin uska dil aur dimag uske bas me nahi tha kiun ki uska dimag fahed ko ek bhai man liya tha aur uski zuban bhi dimag ka sath deti hui use bhaiya hi bol rahi thi lekin uske dil me kuch aur hi chal raha tha jiska sath uski chut bhi de rahi thi kher kisi terha wo apne aap ko sambhalti hae aur apne books pe dhyan lagati hae.
Office me bethe shafqat ka phone bajta hae aur ek noker use khaber deta hae ki uski ammi ki tabiyat achanak kharab ho gai hae to shafqat use bolta hae ki ok unko yahan .................. hospital me lao me doctor se baat kerta hun wo mulazin ji huzur thik hae bol ker phone cat deta hae fir shafqat apne pehchan wale doctor ko call kerta hae.
Shafqat: hello sherma kesa hae tu.
Doctor sherma: han shafqat me theek hun tu suna bahot din baad yaad kiya sab theek to hae na.
Shafqat: han yaar office se fursat hi nahi milti wo zara ammi ki tabiyat kharab ho gai ahe 3 ghante ke baad me unhe tere pas launga.
D. sherma: kya hua maa ji ko aur 3 ghante ke baad kiun layega abhi aaja etna busy ho gaya hae tu ki apni maa ke liye bhi office nahi chor sakta.
Shafqat: nahi yaar tumhe to pata hae wo gaon me rahti hae unko yahan pahonchne me 3 ghante to lag hi jayenge mere bas me hota to me abhi udd ker tere hospital apnni ammi ko le aata.
D. sherma: apne pas kiun nahi rakhta tu maa ji ko.
Shafqat: tujhe to sari kahani maloom hae bhai wo manti kahan haen.
D. sherma: acha han lekin yaar samjhao unhe ab unki umar ho gai hae nokaron se zyada apne ghar wale khayal rakhenge.
Shafqat: tum hi samjhana hamari to sunti hi nahi haen.
D. sherma: chal theek hae aa fir dekhta hun.
Shafqat fir apne ghar phone lagata hae jahan bano aur naaz hans hans ker kuch baten ker rahi thi jese hi bano ke mobile ki ghanti bajti wo muskurate hue phone uthati hae.
Bano: salam sana ke abbu.
Shafqat: w-salam suno amma ki tabiyat kharab ho gai hae mene mulazim ko bola hae ki unhe sherma ke hospital me leaye.
Shafqat serious ho ker bolta hae jise sun ker bano ka muskurata hua chehra bhi serious ho jata hae.
Bano: haye All.... kya hua ammi ko ji me abhi nikalti hun hospital.
Shafqat: abhi na jao 3 ghante to lagenge unhe yahan aane me tum driver ke sath chali aana me bhi wahin milunga.
Bano: ji ji me pahonch jaongi All.... kher kare.
Shafqat: han bas dua karo ke sab theek hi ho chalo rakhta hun.
Phone kat-te hi naaz pareshan hoti bano se puchti hae.
Naaz: kya hua dulhan.
Bano: ammi ki tabiyat kharab ho gai hae mulazim unhe yahan laa rahe hae inhon ne kaha hae ki 3 ghante me hospital aajao.
Naaz: ya All.... apni rehmat bersa unpe bahot neek khatoon haen.
Udher office me kuch filen liye rukhsar shafqat ke room me ghusti hae use pareshan dekh.
Rukhsar: kya hua mamu sab theek to hae etna pareshan kiun haen.
Shafqat sari baat batata hae rukhsar ko to wo bhi pareshan ho jati hae
Rukhsar: All.... bhala kare nani ka aap pareshan na hon etni achi neek khatoon haen nani kuch nahi hoga unhe.
Shafqat: All.... kare ayesa hi ho wese kya kaam tha tumhe.
Rukhsar: kuch filen thi unhe check kerna tha aapne lekin rahne den baad me dekh ligyega abhi aap jaiye hospital.
Shafqat: lao do kya dekhna hae unhe aane me abhi 2-3 ghante lagenge.
Filen de ker rukhsar chali jati hae aur shafqat unko check karne lagta hae.
Jari hae........
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