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JarVyu

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At another planet
Aik Andheri gufa me mashal liye Nalini khadi thi aur uske samne ek mrit sharir pada hua tha aur ek ladki sir jukaye khadi thi.
Nalini: vaishali, main iss pure grah par sirf tumpar bharosa kar sakti hu
Vaishali: badi raani maa aap chinta na kare hum apni jaan dekhar bhi inki raksha karenge.
Nalini: yeh lap lo aur ise samay- samay par sharir par lagana sharir kyuki jab Tak sharir sahi-salamat hai uski rooh jinda rahegi hogi agar sharir nasht hota hai toh rooh mar jayegi.
Vaishali: ham jante hai raani maa
Nalini: thik hai ab jao hum yaha se puri kosis karenge Marthand ko eske baare me kabhi pata na chale.
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At vip room hospital
(Jaisa ki aapko pata hai Mohini aur Suhani ke aane par Mritjoy niche khud Gaya tha aur Monu ko vapas body me jaane ko kah diya tha ab uske baad)

Harsh sofe par betha hua tha aur uske aage jhuk kar bed sahi kar rahi thi.
Piche se Shalini ki gaand ko dekhakar harsh se Raha nahi gya aur usne piche se Shalini ko pakd liya.

Pahle toh Shalini dar gayi fir use samaj AA Gaya aur apne aap ko chudwa the hue boli ' kya kar Raha hai harsh' aur harsh ko piche dhakel diya.

'apko pyar kar Raha hu' harsh ne uske boobs ki taraf dekhate hue kaha

' harsh yeh sab karne ke liye yeh sahi time nahi hai' Shalini ne hath aage kar rukane ka ishara karte hue kaha

'sali kal toh bade maje se chudwa rahi thi Aaj kya ho gaya' harsh irritate hote hue bola

' harsh samajne ki kosis karo 1 din se uppar ho chuka hai monu ko abhi Tak hosh nahi aya hai main abhi yeh sab nahi kar sakati' Shalini ne apna pallu sahi karte he kaha

Harsh ko Shalini ki baate sun gussa aa gya ' sali bol toh ese Rahi hai jaise badi savi savitri ho' achanak se Shalini ki chut ko pakad kar bola ' randi mujhe pata hai Teri is chut ko sirf land se matlab hai' aur Shalini ko pakadne ke liye aage badne laga

Monu Jo apni body me se yeh sab dekh Raha tha ab usse Raha nahi gya usne jaldi se apni maa ka right hand pakada ur dusre hi second voh Shalini ke sharir me tha.

Harsh ko aage badta dekh usne ek jor ka tamacha Harsh ke gaal par rakh Diya aur chillate hue bola (Shalini ki awaj me) ' eik baar mana kar diya na samaj me nahi aata'

Harsh ko es ki ummid nahi thi voh kuch kar pata use pahle hi Shalini(Monu ne) use jor se dhakka diya aur pichhe ki taraf jor se gir gaya

'sali randi tujhe toh me dekh lunga' harsh ne lagbhag chillate hue kaha

Harsh ki baat sun monu ko aur jor se gussa aa gya usne table par rakha jar 🫙
Usko Marne ke liye utha liya par voh mar pata usse pahle hi Mritjoy vaha pahuch Gaya aur usne jar ko niche Jamin par padak diya.

Shalini ke is roop ko dekh kar harsh saham gya usne Shalini ko ese kabhi bhi nahi dekha tha
Voh vaha shalini ko galiya dete hue bhag gya
Mritjoy monu ko Shalini ke sharir se nikala aur harsh ke piche bhaga
Vahi Shalini abhi Jo kuch bhi hua usko samajne ki kosis kar rahi thi.

Harsh gusse me tha aur voh abhi car chala raha tha Monu aur Mritjoy dono car ke pichhe seat par bethe the.
Monu -'ham yaha kya kar rahe hai'
Mritjoy- tumne jo rayta fellaya hai use sametne aye hai.
Monu- 'maine kuch nahi Kiya ye sala meri maa ke sath voh sab kar raha tha
Mritjoy - ' haa toh konsa pehli baar kar Raha tha'
Voh dono bahas kar hi rahe the ki unhe harsh ki aawaj ayi
Harsh- ' saali randi ko main chodunga nahi'

Mritjoy ne jhat se harsh ka right hand pakda aur dusre hi second voh uske ander tha. Mritjoy ne car ki speed bada di.
Monu- tum kya karne Wale ho
Mritjoy- joh tum karne Wale the.

Mritjoy ne car ko divider se tok diya car gumti hue aage jaker Nadi me gir Kai
Mritjoy man me (Mrityini me tumhare ek or kadam najdeek aa gya hu pichali baar tumhe chhor Diya tha iss baar hisab hoga)

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AT haveli
Mohini: mujhe abhi bhi Shalini par Shak hai
Suhani : abhi toh tumhe milwaya hai fir bhi Shak hai
Mohini: haa voh jangle me joh tumhara picha kar rahe the voh police ke liye Kam karate the aur koi tumhare bete ki bhi chhan been kar rha hai
Suhani : toh ab hum kya kare
MOhini: mere pass ek plan hai
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Aage ki kahani next update me
( Sorry guys for delay. I just moved to new house so I quite busy in arrangements)
 
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dev61901

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Bahut badhiya update bro

Ab ayega na maja or dusra planet wala concept to bilkul hi hatke lag raha ha

Ab suhani devi ko lagbe wala ha tagda jhatka kyonki bure kam ka natiza bura hi hota ha kahan ye monu ko marne chali thi kahan uske pote ka hi lagta ha kriyakaram kar diya mritjoy ne to badle ki shuruwat ho gayi ha ab dekhte han ki ir kitna tadpata ha mritjoy suhanidevi or uski family ko

waiting for next update
 

JarVyu

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Bahut badhiya update bro

Ab ayega na maja or dusra planet wala concept to bilkul hi hatke lag raha ha

Ab suhani devi ko lagbe wala ha tagda jhatka kyonki bure kam ka natiza bura hi hota ha kahan ye monu ko marne chali thi kahan uske pote ka hi lagta ha kriyakaram kar diya mritjoy ne to badle ki shuruwat ho gayi ha ab dekhte han ki ir kitna tadpata ha mritjoy suhanidevi or uski family ko

waiting for next update
Agle update ka besabri se intezar rahega
Thanks bro, mritjoy ka another planet se connection hai
Next update on 12 may

I started new story please read.......
 

Riky007

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जबर्दस्त

तो मेजोरिटी उस दूसरे ग्रह का है और नलिनी उसकी मां है, जो शायद शालिनी की तरह ही फंसी हुई है, और अपने बेटे को बचाने के लिए वो भी सब कर रही है, बस मेजोरिटी को पता नही।

देखते हैं हर्ष बचता है या सुहानी देवी को झटका लगता है।
 

JarVyu

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जबर्दस्त

तो मेजोरिटी उस दूसरे ग्रह का है और नलिनी उसकी मां है, जो शायद शालिनी की तरह ही फंसी हुई है, और अपने बेटे को बचाने के लिए वो भी सब कर रही है, बस मेजोरिटी को पता नही।

देखते हैं हर्ष बचता है या सुहानी देवी को झटका लगता है।
Thanks brother
Aur nalini aur Shalini ke baare me main sirf itna kahunga ki ek victim hai aur dusri mastermind
 
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