Raj3465
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Bahut hi shandar update ap kahani aage badhaye please
Yr story aage badhau ya nahi .....kyunki mujhe lag raha hai aap logo ko koi bhi intrest nhi hai ki Mai story aage badhau ya nahi....yaha kuch chutiye wrighter ki story ko accha khada feedback mil jaata h jabki unki story mai kuch bhi dhang ka content nahi hota......ek lekhak ko kya chaiye ki uski likhi Hui story logo ko panasd aaye......story par comments aaye.....par yaha kuch aisa nhi ho raha hai....
Feedback se kisi bhi lekhak ko story likhne mai help milti hai ya usse support milta hai ki logo ko uski story ka next part ka wait hai.....khair chodo aap logo ko dhand ka content chaiye he nahi to Mai kya kar sakti hu......good bye friends .....
Aapne sahi bola ki kuch chutiya logo ko sirf bekaar si story pasand aati hi.... Jese ki aaj kal incest story pr to bahut fokas kiya ja rha hi lekin ye sab galat hi .... Mene bhi pehle 2 story likhi thi adultery unki heroine bahurani hii thi pr logo ne un story ko pasand nhi kiya jyada comment bhi nhi kiye isliye mene wo story likha hii band kr di ....halaki dono story bahut achhi thi unme drama trill sex saspance saas bahu ka jhagda sab kuch tha or logo ne jyada pasand nhi kiya isliye mene unko aage hii nhi badaya ... But abhi kuch din se mai 1 story or start ki hi usme achha response mill rha hi kuch comment or like bhi aa rhe hain iskiye 4 ya 5 din me 1 bada update dene ki koshis krta hu ... Us story ka naam hi (jalan saas bahu ki dirty politics) .... Abhi tak tumhare story sach me bahut achhi hi pr pls bhai aap usme saas bahu nanad ko add zaroor karna kushi ki ... Best of luck