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jab nayi story suru karo to umang tarang bahut hoti hai jo dhere dhere ghat jati hai 
kamdev99008
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Update 15
mai subah so kar utha to riyan mere saamne tha....
mai-itni subah subah.... kya baat hai...
riyan-aapko germany jana chahiye...
mai-kyon...
riyan-aapko ek baar jana chahiye wahan par richa hai...
mai riyan ko ghoorte hue bola -to mai kya karoon richa hai to...
riyan-aap jao to sahi ..mujhe sure to pata nahi hai lekin lagta hai koi richa ko fasana chahta hai...
mai-to...
riyan-wo aapki bahan hai...
mai-to...
riyan-aapke kuch dusman bhi wahan hai jiske baare me aapko pata karna hai...kyonki agar aapko apne parivaar ko kamjor banana hai to ye sab to karna hi padega.. ..aur kahte hai na kisi ped ko barbaad karna hai to unki jade kaat dalo ped apne aap mar jayega...aapki bua ki bhi jade germany me hi hai aap use kaat do to wo tadapne lagegi...fir maza aayega. is revenge game me...
mai-thik hai mai aaj hi jata hoon tum yahan sab par najar rakhna...
riyan-ok....
fir mai apne kapde pack kiye aur payal ko bata kar chal diya Germany ....ye mere liye koi naya desh nahi tha yahan mai bachpan me kuch saal padh chuka hoon...mujhe bas ab yahan apne bua ke baare me pata karna tha ki yahan usne kya kya gul khilaye hai...
mai dopahar me yahan se nikla aur 8 ghante baad mai germany pahuch gaya ...wahan abhi bhi subah hi ho raha tha....
mai jaise hi airport par utra mujhe greg mila...ye bachpan me mere saath padhta tha...
greg haste hue bola-welcome back brother....ab kya hua tumhare baap ne fir se tumko yahan bhej diya...
mai-nahi mai is baar kuch kaam se aaya hoon....
greg-koi baat nahi ghar chal kar baat karte hai...
aur humdono mere ghar aa gaye...yahan par humara bhi ek ghar tha...fir maine use poori kahani sunayi...
greg-sorry brother mujhe nahi pata tha ye sab...bolo mai kya help kar sakta hoon...
mai-mujhe mrs sharmila ke bare me jan na hai...
greg-ho jayega...
mai-thik hai...uske baad wo chala gaya aur mai sochta raha ab kya karna hai...aur fir chal diya baar daru pine....abhi mai daru pi hi raha tha ki mujhe ek table par richa dikh gayi...jo daru pi rahi thi aur apne ashoon bhi...mai man me socha-saale sabhi amir lagta hai yahi aate hai...
mai socha ek baar usse mil loon fir socha bhaad me jaye wo...jab bhi mujhe dekhti thi to mujhe piyakkad bolti thi...aabhi khud hi nashe me dubi hui hai..aur mai baar se nikal gaya...aur apne room me akar so gaya...
dusre din greg mere pass aaya...
greg-yahan unka bussines toufique sambhalta hai...bahut hi powerful aur dangerous aadmi hai wo...
mai-kya tum mujhe mila sakte ho usse...
greg-mai kosis kar sakta hoon guarantee nahi de sakta...
mai-thik hai kosis karo...idhar mujhe aaj bhi yahan koi kaam nahi tha to socha thoda ghoom leta hoon...isliye car lekar ghoomne laga ...ghoomte ghoomte achanak ek budhaa...aghori type ka mere car ke samne aa gaya..mai ne turant hi break mara..aur jaise hi car se nikla..wo budha yodhaa yodhaaaaaa chillate hue mera haath pakad liya....
is baar main soch liya agar mai ise choda to ye mar jayega....isliye use pakda aur pakad kar apne car me dala....aur jaise hi use mai car me baithaya ...boommmmmmmmmmmmmm ..... mera car blast ho gaya...aur mai udta hua thoda door jakar gira.....
turant wahan police aa gayi...ambulance aa gaya aur mujhe hospital le gaya...mujhe jyada chot to aaya nahi tha kyonki mai car ke bahar tha...to shaam tak mai discharge hokar ghar aa gaya lekin mere dimag me ye baat ab hazam hi nahi ho pa raha tha ki ye chakkar kya hai....aghori aata hai mujhe yodhaa yodhaaa bolkar chillata hai aur mar jata hai..mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha...
to be continued in night...
mai subah so kar utha to riyan mere saamne tha....
mai-itni subah subah.... kya baat hai...
riyan-aapko germany jana chahiye...
mai-kyon...
riyan-aapko ek baar jana chahiye wahan par richa hai...
mai riyan ko ghoorte hue bola -to mai kya karoon richa hai to...
riyan-aap jao to sahi ..mujhe sure to pata nahi hai lekin lagta hai koi richa ko fasana chahta hai...
mai-to...
riyan-wo aapki bahan hai...
mai-to...
riyan-aapke kuch dusman bhi wahan hai jiske baare me aapko pata karna hai...kyonki agar aapko apne parivaar ko kamjor banana hai to ye sab to karna hi padega.. ..aur kahte hai na kisi ped ko barbaad karna hai to unki jade kaat dalo ped apne aap mar jayega...aapki bua ki bhi jade germany me hi hai aap use kaat do to wo tadapne lagegi...fir maza aayega. is revenge game me...
mai-thik hai mai aaj hi jata hoon tum yahan sab par najar rakhna...
riyan-ok....
fir mai apne kapde pack kiye aur payal ko bata kar chal diya Germany ....ye mere liye koi naya desh nahi tha yahan mai bachpan me kuch saal padh chuka hoon...mujhe bas ab yahan apne bua ke baare me pata karna tha ki yahan usne kya kya gul khilaye hai...
mai dopahar me yahan se nikla aur 8 ghante baad mai germany pahuch gaya ...wahan abhi bhi subah hi ho raha tha....
mai jaise hi airport par utra mujhe greg mila...ye bachpan me mere saath padhta tha...
greg haste hue bola-welcome back brother....ab kya hua tumhare baap ne fir se tumko yahan bhej diya...
mai-nahi mai is baar kuch kaam se aaya hoon....
greg-koi baat nahi ghar chal kar baat karte hai...
aur humdono mere ghar aa gaye...yahan par humara bhi ek ghar tha...fir maine use poori kahani sunayi...
greg-sorry brother mujhe nahi pata tha ye sab...bolo mai kya help kar sakta hoon...
mai-mujhe mrs sharmila ke bare me jan na hai...
greg-ho jayega...
mai-thik hai...uske baad wo chala gaya aur mai sochta raha ab kya karna hai...aur fir chal diya baar daru pine....abhi mai daru pi hi raha tha ki mujhe ek table par richa dikh gayi...jo daru pi rahi thi aur apne ashoon bhi...mai man me socha-saale sabhi amir lagta hai yahi aate hai...
mai socha ek baar usse mil loon fir socha bhaad me jaye wo...jab bhi mujhe dekhti thi to mujhe piyakkad bolti thi...aabhi khud hi nashe me dubi hui hai..aur mai baar se nikal gaya...aur apne room me akar so gaya...
dusre din greg mere pass aaya...
greg-yahan unka bussines toufique sambhalta hai...bahut hi powerful aur dangerous aadmi hai wo...
mai-kya tum mujhe mila sakte ho usse...
greg-mai kosis kar sakta hoon guarantee nahi de sakta...
mai-thik hai kosis karo...idhar mujhe aaj bhi yahan koi kaam nahi tha to socha thoda ghoom leta hoon...isliye car lekar ghoomne laga ...ghoomte ghoomte achanak ek budhaa...aghori type ka mere car ke samne aa gaya..mai ne turant hi break mara..aur jaise hi car se nikla..wo budha yodhaa yodhaaaaaa chillate hue mera haath pakad liya....
is baar main soch liya agar mai ise choda to ye mar jayega....isliye use pakda aur pakad kar apne car me dala....aur jaise hi use mai car me baithaya ...boommmmmmmmmmmmmm ..... mera car blast ho gaya...aur mai udta hua thoda door jakar gira.....
turant wahan police aa gayi...ambulance aa gaya aur mujhe hospital le gaya...mujhe jyada chot to aaya nahi tha kyonki mai car ke bahar tha...to shaam tak mai discharge hokar ghar aa gaya lekin mere dimag me ye baat ab hazam hi nahi ho pa raha tha ki ye chakkar kya hai....aghori aata hai mujhe yodhaa yodhaaa bolkar chillata hai aur mar jata hai..mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha...
to be continued in night...
kamdev99008
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bahut badhiya............ab ped ki jad katne germany pahunch gaya
lekin bhai...update bahut kam ho gaye ab...........man nahin bharta
lekin bhai...update bahut kam ho gaye ab...........man nahin bharta
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Awesome story bhai....
Maza aagya padh ke....
Ye mera 1st comment hai aapke story par....
Ye story aaj dikha toh padha pura....
Ekdum faadu story hai bhai....
Waiting for next update....
Maza aagya padh ke....
Ye mera 1st comment hai aapke story par....
Ye story aaj dikha toh padha pura....
Ekdum faadu story hai bhai....
Waiting for next update....
Raja thakur
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