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hum tino pahuch gaye baba ji ke asram me...kaafi shant mahol tha yahan ka....jaise hi hum apni car se andar gaye humare gate ke pass ek aadmi aaya...jo sayad babaji ka sisya lag raha tha....
sisya-aapko kya kaam hai babaji se....
richa boli-hume babaji se kuch poochna hai...
sisya-aap log thoda der visram kijiye babaji abhi dhyan me magn hai...aur wo hume ek ped ke niche bane chabutre par baitha diya....
mai sisya ki taraf dekhkar poocha-waise aaplog yahan karte kya ho...
mujhe dekhkar sisya thoda mskuraya....
sisya-lagta hai aap in sab chijo par viswas nahi karte...
mai-nahi....
sisya-fir bhi aap yahan aaye hai....
mai-yahi to clear karne aaya hoon akhir ye chakkar kya hai...
sisya-aap wait ijiye babaji dyan ke baad idhar se hi gujarte hai...aapko jo bhi problem hai pooch lijiyega...
aur fir sisya wahan se chala gaya...
idhar hum tino baithe hue the...karib 25-30 minut baad babaji udhar se aane lage to richa babaji ke saamne khadi ho gayi...
richa-namaskar babaji...aapne pahchana mujhe mai kuch din pahle aai thi...
babaji ek baar gour se dekha richa ko aur bole-haan haan yaad aaya....
richa-babaji ye hai ravneet...isko bhi same sapna aata hai...tab babaji ek baar humari taraf dekha..jahan mai aur komal saath me baithe hue the....
babaji-uparwale ki leela aparam paar hai....
babaji-aap sablog mere saath chaliye....
fir hum tino babaji ke piche piche unki kutiya me chale gaye....
babaji-dekho ab mai jo bol raha hoon dhyaan se suno...mujhe pata hai tum tino apna past jan ne ke liye aaye ho...maine kuch baate is balika(richa) ko bataya tha lekin aaj tum tino yahan ho...to mai sab chije bata deta hoon...
mai-lekin aap sach hi bataoge iski kya gurantee hai...aap apne man se bhi to kuch suna sakte ho...hume pata kaise chalega ki aap sahi bata rahe ho bhi ya nahi...
babaji-ye to samay hi batayega...kyonki mere pass abhi kuch aisa to hai nahi ki mai ye proof kar sakoo baki aapki sradhha ke upar hai aap ise sach mante ho ya nahi...
mai-thik hai sunaiye...
babaji -ye kahani aaj se 1000 saal purani hai....
flasback....
yahan se kuch door par ek rajya tha madhavgadh.....whan ke raja the madhav pratap...
aur raani shanti devi....rajya me sab khushhaali thi...aur kuch din baad raja ko judwa santan hue...ek putra jiska naam tha yuddhveer...aur ek putri jiska naam tha chanchal....dono judwa the...dono ek dusre ke liye jaan dene aur lene ke liye bhi taiyaar rahte the....bachpan se hi chanchal bahut gussel aur jiddi thi....wo yudhveer ko chod kar kisi ki baat nahi maanti thi yahan tak ki apne mata pita ki bhi nahi..wahi yudhveer bahut hi masoom sa tha jo har kisi ko khush rakhne ki kosis karta tha...us rajya me dhan dhanya ki koi kami nahi thi saari praja bahut khushhaal thi....
samay ke saath rajya aur bhi vikasit hua...
shanti devi bahut pooja paath karti thi wahi raja madhav praja ki dekhbhal me lage rahte the....aur dheere dheere rajkumar yudhveer aur rajkumari chanchal bade hone lage....
kuch saal baad ......
jab rajkumar aur rajkumari bade hue to raja ne undono ko yudh vidya seekhne ke liye jungle me bhej diye...jahan ek bahut bade guru hua karte the us samay ke..jinka naam tha jwala....jwala apne samay ke ek bahut bade yodhaa the..jo rajkumar ke dada ji ke samay me senapati the...unke yudh ke kala ka gungaan door door tak faila hua tha......
ab jwala budhe ho gaye the lekin yudh me unka koi mukabla nahi tha...aur raja chahte the ki unke putra aur putri bhi unse hi yudh vidya seekhe...jwala apne putra ke mrityu ke baad yudh se viram le chuke the....aur wo jungle me ekant me rahte the...jab raja ne bahut vinti ki unse apne bete aur beti ke yudh kala ke liye.....
jwala ne raja se ye shart rakhi ki wo rajkumar aur rajkumari ko ek hi shart par yudh vidya sikhayenge agar raja gurudakhsina me rajkumar ki shaadi unki poti se karwa dega...kyonki jwala ek yudh me apne bete ko kho chuka tha aur uski ek matra poti thi..jiska naam tha rima(riya)...aur uski mata thi nilima....
lekin raja apne putra ke shaadi ka vachan bahut saal pahle hi apne ek mitra ko de chuke the jo padosi raj ke raja hue karte the..lekin samay ke saath unka rajya shaitano ke hamla ke saath smapt ho gaya tha aur raja bhi mar chuka tha lekin unka parivar ab isi rajya me dusre mahal me rahta tha...kyonki raja dosti ho ya dusmani dil se nibhate the....
raja-aapki baat sahi hai lekin maine apne bete ki shaadi vina(richa) ke saath tay kar diya hai bachpan me hi...ye to aap bhi jante ho...
jwala-dekhiye maharaj meri ek hi poti hai...aur maine ab sastra na uthane ki kasam bhi khayi hai kyonki agar mai ye kasam tod dunga to aaj nahi to kal mujhe fir kisi na kisi se yudh karna hi padega...aur ab mai budha ho gaya hoon agar mujhe kuch ho gaya to meri bahu aur poti ka kya hoga...
raja-thik hai agar aapki yahi ichha hai to ye hi sahi..mai aapko bhi vachan deta hoon jab aap rajkumar ko saari yudh kala sikha denge uske baad mai iski shaadi rima aur vina dono se kara dunga...
jawal-thik hai...mai taiyar hoon..kal se aapke putra aur putri ki sikhsha prarambh ho jayega....
hum tino pahuch gaye baba ji ke asram me...kaafi shant mahol tha yahan ka....jaise hi hum apni car se andar gaye humare gate ke pass ek aadmi aaya...jo sayad babaji ka sisya lag raha tha....
sisya-aapko kya kaam hai babaji se....
richa boli-hume babaji se kuch poochna hai...
sisya-aap log thoda der visram kijiye babaji abhi dhyan me magn hai...aur wo hume ek ped ke niche bane chabutre par baitha diya....
mai sisya ki taraf dekhkar poocha-waise aaplog yahan karte kya ho...
mujhe dekhkar sisya thoda mskuraya....
sisya-lagta hai aap in sab chijo par viswas nahi karte...
mai-nahi....
sisya-fir bhi aap yahan aaye hai....
mai-yahi to clear karne aaya hoon akhir ye chakkar kya hai...
sisya-aap wait ijiye babaji dyan ke baad idhar se hi gujarte hai...aapko jo bhi problem hai pooch lijiyega...
aur fir sisya wahan se chala gaya...
idhar hum tino baithe hue the...karib 25-30 minut baad babaji udhar se aane lage to richa babaji ke saamne khadi ho gayi...
richa-namaskar babaji...aapne pahchana mujhe mai kuch din pahle aai thi...
babaji ek baar gour se dekha richa ko aur bole-haan haan yaad aaya....
richa-babaji ye hai ravneet...isko bhi same sapna aata hai...tab babaji ek baar humari taraf dekha..jahan mai aur komal saath me baithe hue the....
babaji-uparwale ki leela aparam paar hai....
babaji-aap sablog mere saath chaliye....
fir hum tino babaji ke piche piche unki kutiya me chale gaye....
babaji-dekho ab mai jo bol raha hoon dhyaan se suno...mujhe pata hai tum tino apna past jan ne ke liye aaye ho...maine kuch baate is balika(richa) ko bataya tha lekin aaj tum tino yahan ho...to mai sab chije bata deta hoon...
mai-lekin aap sach hi bataoge iski kya gurantee hai...aap apne man se bhi to kuch suna sakte ho...hume pata kaise chalega ki aap sahi bata rahe ho bhi ya nahi...
babaji-ye to samay hi batayega...kyonki mere pass abhi kuch aisa to hai nahi ki mai ye proof kar sakoo baki aapki sradhha ke upar hai aap ise sach mante ho ya nahi...
mai-thik hai sunaiye...
babaji -ye kahani aaj se 1000 saal purani hai....
flasback....
yahan se kuch door par ek rajya tha madhavgadh.....whan ke raja the madhav pratap...
aur raani shanti devi....rajya me sab khushhaali thi...aur kuch din baad raja ko judwa santan hue...ek putra jiska naam tha yuddhveer...aur ek putri jiska naam tha chanchal....dono judwa the...dono ek dusre ke liye jaan dene aur lene ke liye bhi taiyaar rahte the....bachpan se hi chanchal bahut gussel aur jiddi thi....wo yudhveer ko chod kar kisi ki baat nahi maanti thi yahan tak ki apne mata pita ki bhi nahi..wahi yudhveer bahut hi masoom sa tha jo har kisi ko khush rakhne ki kosis karta tha...us rajya me dhan dhanya ki koi kami nahi thi saari praja bahut khushhaal thi....
samay ke saath rajya aur bhi vikasit hua...
shanti devi bahut pooja paath karti thi wahi raja madhav praja ki dekhbhal me lage rahte the....aur dheere dheere rajkumar yudhveer aur rajkumari chanchal bade hone lage....
kuch saal baad ......
jab rajkumar aur rajkumari bade hue to raja ne undono ko yudh vidya seekhne ke liye jungle me bhej diye...jahan ek bahut bade guru hua karte the us samay ke..jinka naam tha jwala....jwala apne samay ke ek bahut bade yodhaa the..jo rajkumar ke dada ji ke samay me senapati the...unke yudh ke kala ka gungaan door door tak faila hua tha......
ab jwala budhe ho gaye the lekin yudh me unka koi mukabla nahi tha...aur raja chahte the ki unke putra aur putri bhi unse hi yudh vidya seekhe...jwala apne putra ke mrityu ke baad yudh se viram le chuke the....aur wo jungle me ekant me rahte the...jab raja ne bahut vinti ki unse apne bete aur beti ke yudh kala ke liye.....
jwala ne raja se ye shart rakhi ki wo rajkumar aur rajkumari ko ek hi shart par yudh vidya sikhayenge agar raja gurudakhsina me rajkumar ki shaadi unki poti se karwa dega...kyonki jwala ek yudh me apne bete ko kho chuka tha aur uski ek matra poti thi..jiska naam tha rima(riya)...aur uski mata thi nilima....
lekin raja apne putra ke shaadi ka vachan bahut saal pahle hi apne ek mitra ko de chuke the jo padosi raj ke raja hue karte the..lekin samay ke saath unka rajya shaitano ke hamla ke saath smapt ho gaya tha aur raja bhi mar chuka tha lekin unka parivar ab isi rajya me dusre mahal me rahta tha...kyonki raja dosti ho ya dusmani dil se nibhate the....
raja-aapki baat sahi hai lekin maine apne bete ki shaadi vina(richa) ke saath tay kar diya hai bachpan me hi...ye to aap bhi jante ho...
jwala-dekhiye maharaj meri ek hi poti hai...aur maine ab sastra na uthane ki kasam bhi khayi hai kyonki agar mai ye kasam tod dunga to aaj nahi to kal mujhe fir kisi na kisi se yudh karna hi padega...aur ab mai budha ho gaya hoon agar mujhe kuch ho gaya to meri bahu aur poti ka kya hoga...
raja-thik hai agar aapki yahi ichha hai to ye hi sahi..mai aapko bhi vachan deta hoon jab aap rajkumar ko saari yudh kala sikha denge uske baad mai iski shaadi rima aur vina dono se kara dunga...
jawal-thik hai...mai taiyar hoon..kal se aapke putra aur putri ki sikhsha prarambh ho jayega....
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Very nice update ..........
Keep it up bro ........
Keep it up bro ........
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wow dear ye baba to kuch waisa hi bata raha hai jo kuch richa ne ravneet k bataya tha
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