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mera naam hai al miramber val vishambhar ravnit....miramber mera dada ek number ka aiyass raja tha......aur jab samay badla to politician ban gaya. usne life khub enjoy kiya aur aiyaasi karte karte mar gaya......vishambhar mera baap...ye bhi ek neta hai saath hi saath iske bussiness bhi hai vine aur rum(daru) ke ....aur petroleum refinery bhi hai iske.... kul milakar iske pass athah paise hai...ye bhi ek number ka aiyass hai...aur fir iska beta mai...ravnit....
introduction:-
mai-ravnit lekin log mujhe ravan bulate hai..kyon bulate hai pata chal jayega...
mai jab chota tha tab se videsh me padh raha hoon lekin jis desh me gaya waha kand kiya isliye har do saal tin saal me mere desh badalte rahe hai...bich bich me mai india bhi aa jata hoon yahan ek shahar hai chandanpur wahi humara mahal hai jo ek bahut hi bade jagah me bana hua hai...ye ghar koi 7 star hotel se kam nahi hai...poorane jamane ka bane is ghar me har wo nayi facility hai jo duniya me milti hai...ek bahut bada garden hai saath do swimming pool ek basketball ground ek tennis ground...aur bhi bahut kuch hai....
mere dada dadi ab is duniya me nahi hai....
mera baap vishambhar-age 45 saal...
iski pahli bibi thi meri maa jo ab is duniya me nahi hai...iske alawa iski do biwi aur hai matlab meri do sauteli maa hai...
pahli-nilima-age-45 saal
iski ek beti hai-riya-age 28 saal
dusri bibi hai anita-age 40 saal
iski ek beti hai-richa age 24 saal
mera age hai 20 saal...ab aap soch rahe honge ki meri maa iski pahli bibi kaise hui...to mere aiyas baap ne mere maa se shaadi se pahle hi in dono ko pregnant kar diya tha aur shaadi ki thi meri maa se....lekin mere maa ke marne ke baad isne is dono se shaadi kar li aur iske beti ko apna liya.....
aaj mai Australia se apne private plane se india aa raha tha....kyonki aaj hi mujhe mere uncle ka phone aaya tha ki mere baap ko heart attack aaya hai....ab baap ko heart attack aaya hai to jana to padega....humara plane seedha radhabai airport par utra...ye radha bai mere dadi ka naam tha unke naam par hi ye airport hai.....mai airport par utra hi tha ki meri black colour ki rolls royce phantom khadi thi aur ek aadmi doudta hua mere pass aaya....
aadmi-chote malik chaliye car khadi hai....
mai-kya re budhau abhi tak mara nahi tu...
aadmi-nahi malik....ye bol kar usne apne daat dikha diye....
ye aadmi lagbhag 45-46 saal ka hai ujda chaman..bas kuch 2-4 bal bache hai sar par....jise humesha sambhal kar rakhta hai ye....iska naam hai gulshan....lekin mai ise budhau hi bulata hoon....
mai chalta hua gaya aur car me baith gaya....udhar se budhau bhi doud doud kar mera sara saman car me rakha aur fir driver seat par baith gaya....aur car start kiya.....
mai-lagta hai tu kuch bhool gaya hai...
gulshan-are nahi malik...aapki daru rakhi hui hai seat par....
mai apna scoth vhiski ki dhakkan udaya aur mooh me laga ke pina chalu.....
gulshan ne bhi car chalana suru kar diya....
gulshan-malik aap abhi sharab pi rahe ho aur wahan aapke dad hospital me hai...
mai-mera baap hospital me hai to tera gaand kyon sulag raha hai be....wo mar jayega to bhi teri noukari nahi jayega tu apna kaam kar....
gulshan chup ho gaya ....aur mai daru pita hua ghar pahucha....
mai jaise hi ghar pahucha aur car se utra mere uncle ne mujhe gale laga liya....
uncle-aa gaya mera sher ....
mai-mujhe kyon bulaya....
uncle-beta tere dad ki tabiyat kharab hai....
mai-mai kya doctor hoon jo thik kar dunga use....kaam ki baat batao..mujhe yahan kyon bulaya....
uncle-beta pahle andar chal baat karenge....
tabhi maine apne uncle ko dhakkaa de diya....aur thode uche awaz me bola....mujhe kyon bulaya yahan....
uncle-beta ab se tum yahi rahoge aur tere aage ki padhayi bhi yahi hogi....mai jaa raha hoon mujhe kuch kaam hai jab daru ka nasha utar jaye ya man kare mujhse baat karne ka tab aa jana mere pass...ye bolkar wo mere bagal se nikal gaye....
mai daru pite hue apne ghar me ghusa.....is ghar ko dekh kar hi mujhe ek chid hota hai is ghar se....mai daru mooh me lagaye hue andar ghusa aur seedhiyon se chadhkar apne room ki taraf ja hi raha tha ki mujhe riya dikh gayi....
riya-aa gaya bewda...dad bimar hai aur ise pine se time mile tab na....
mai gusse me use bola-tere choot me kyon khujli ho rahi hai jab mai pi raha hoon....
riya gusse me boli-jawan sambhal ke baat karo tum ghar me ho koi randikhana me nahi....
mai uski ankhon me dekhte hue bola-ye baat apni maa ko samjha ki ye ghar hai koi randikhana nahi samjhi.....
riya to gusse se bilbila gayi...aur mujhe marne ke liye haath uthaya ki maine uska haath pakad liya...
mai-apni aukat me raho...nahi to aisa na ho ki baaki ki jindagi bina haath ke gujarna pade....ye bolkar mai use dhakka de diya..wo bhi galiyan dete hue wahan se nikal gayi....mai pite pite room me gaya aur bed par pad gaya.....bed par girte hi nashe se mera ankh band hone laga.....aur mujhe poorani baat yaad aane laga....
flashback..........
ye aaj se 3-4 saal pahle ki baat hai ...mai us samay germany me padhai kar raha tha..aur exam khatm hote hi mai india lout raha tha....
mai mast plane me gana sunte hue utra ki gulshan doudte hue mere pass aaya....
gulshan-arey chote malik aap aa gaye....aapke liye sahab ne naya gadi diya hai....mai jab samne dekha to ek golden colour ki lotus khadi thi.....
mai bahut khush hua aur bola-waah mai chalaunga ise....
gulshan-nahi malik pahle mai aapko ghar pahucha doo uske baad ye gaadi aapki....
mai-thik hai budhau...
gulsan-aap mujhe budhau kyon bulate hai...
mai-sar pe baal nahi aur jawano wali chal nahi...budha na bulau to kya bulau....
gulshan-aap jo bhi bula lo malik....
aur fir humdono ghar aa gaye.....
ghar aate hi mere dad aur uncle ne mujhe gale laga liya...meri souteli maye mujhse baat nahi karti thi ....isliye mai bhi bachpan se unse door hi rahta hoon....aur samay ke saath doriyan badhti hi chali gayi thi...ab to hum ek chat ke niche rahte the fir bhi baat nahi karte the...waise mera man to hota tha unlogon se baat karne kaa lekin kabhi himmat juta kar unke room tak jaa hi nahi paya.....khair humsab khana khaye aur mai apne room me chala gaya....thaka hua tha to achhe se soya...raat ko 10 baje nind khula aur socha ki kyon naa aaj maa se baat kiya jaye...souteli hai to kya hua hai to maa hi....ye sochkar mai apne room se nikla aur sabse pahle nilima ke room ki taraf chal diya...abhi mai unke room tak pahucha hi tha ki mujhe unke room se nilima ke hasne ki awaz aayi ..mai to khush ho gaya ki nilima achhe mood me hai...aur mai josh me turant darwaza khol diya...aur jaise hi mai andar ka scene dekha mai to khada hi rah gaya.....kyonki andar nilima has rahi thi aur ek anjan aadmi uski chuchi ko choos raha tha...saath hi door se pata chal raha tha ki nilima sarab ke nase me hai.....mujhe dekhte hi wo aadmi to ruk gaya lekin nilima itne nashe me thi ki wo us aadmi ko kiss karne lagi.....mai gusse me wahi table par rakhe bottle ko uthaya aur us aadmi ke sar par mara channnnnn se poora botal uske sar par toota aur wo wahan se bhagne laga.....mai usko doudaya aur wo doudta hua dusre room me ghusa jo meri dusri maa anita ka tha....wahan bhi wahi halat thi..anita sarab ke nashe me adhi nangi khadi thi...aur ek aur aadmi wahan khada tha...use bhi mere gusse me bhari laal ankhe dikh gayi..aur wo dono wahan se bhag gaye...lekin mai wahan pade ek bottle ko khola aur ek baar me poora pi gaya fir dusra fir tira piya aur sedhiyon se niche utarne laga...lekin ladkhada kar gir gaya aur niche aa gaya...mujhe chot to nahi aayi kyonki seddhiyon par makhmal ke mat the...lekin niche richa aur riya khadi thi....dono ne bola-saram nahi aati tujhe raat virat daru pi kar ludhak rahe ho piyakkad kahi ka.....aur dono udhar se chali gayi....mujhe jab ek do noukaron ne jamin par pade dekha to sofe par lakar leta diya...aur mai so gaya...agli subah ko mera baap mere pass aaya....
mera baap-mai aaj dubai jaa raha hoon lekin tum apni maa ke saath mandir chale jana...
mai-mai nahi jane wala unlogon ke saath kahi....
dad-beta aaj tere maa ki barsi hai....aaj to chale jana....
mai gusse me bola-haan haan wo to sirf meri maa hai na teri to kuch hai hi nahi....
is baat pe mere baap ne kuch nahi bola aur wo wahan se chala gaya...
dopahar ko tin gadi nikli humare ghar se do gadiyon me meri do maa aur ek gaadi me mai...aur hum tino chal diye mandir ki ore ki achanak raste me driver ne gaadi roki .....
mai-ab kyon gadi roka....
driver ne aage ishara kiya-aage 25-30 gunde khade the...unke saath wo dono aadmi bhi the jo subah mere soutele maa ke saath the....mera gusse se to khoon khoul utha...mai gaadi se nikla saath hi nilima aur anita bhi nikli.....
anita-ye kya natak hai tumhara....
wo aadmi bola-achha mera natak hai raat ko party me daru tune pi...ghar bhi mujhe tu le gayi aur ye ladka mere sar par marta hai..ise pata bhi hai mai is city ka SSP hoon..tabhi dusra bola-mai dhanchad furnitures ka malik hoon....
is bachhe ko to humlog chodenge nahi....tumdono hat jao isi me bhalai hai....
meri dono maa dar ke piche hat gayi....lekin mere andar to jaise aaj bhoot sawar tha...ki tabhi 3-4 gunde jinke hath me lohe ka rod tha lekar wo mere taraf douda....mai bhi gusse me unke taraf douda...ek mustande ne jaise hi rod se mere ko mara maine apne haath se rod ko pakad liya aur ek laat uske tatto par mara ...wo wahi chikhta hua baith gaya aur rod mere haath me aa gaya....mai bina kisi raham ke dhaddd se rod uske sar par mara jisse phattttt se uska sar foot gaya aur khoon idhar udhar bahne laga...aur fir mai paglo ki tarah rod ko chalane laga...dhammm dhammm jo mila..uske sar pe mara...aur ek ke pass talwar tha uske sar par mara aur uska talwar bhi chin liya.....5-10 rod mujhe bhi lage lekin mere upar to pagalpan tha.....aur 10 minut ke andar....wahan us road par...20-25 log adhmare pade hue the sabke sar se khoon bah raha tha.aur bahut ke haath pair kat kat kar jamin par bikhra hua tha.....aur mera dress jo white tha ab laal ho chuka tha.....ye dekhkar dono aadmi bhi kaampne lage.....
mai -mera naam ravnit hai ...ravnit...matlab jo ravan ke atit se bura ho wo hota hai ravnit.........saale aaj mai tujhe wo mout dunga wo mout dunga...ki is sahar ka koi bhi aadmi mere maa ke karib aane se pahle bhi 100 baar sochega....ye bolkar dhaddd se mai talwar chalaya aur ssp ka haath kat gaya..ye dekhkar dusra bhaga mai talwar fek kar use mara aur jisse talwar uske pair ko khaccccc se kat ta hua aage gira aur wo bhi gir gaya...un dono ki chikh itni byanak thi ki shaitan ki bhi rooh kaamp jaye...meri dono maa to dar se kaamp rahi thi...lekin mai aage badha..aur ek ek karke un dono ke pahle dono haath aur pair uda diya...fir apne hi car ko undono ke upar chadha kar nikal gaya....uske baad mandir me pooja kiya aur aa gaya lekin ye ladai ki baat dekhte dekhte poore sahar me fail gaya ki vishmabhar ke bete ne ravan ki tarah yahan ke sssp aur bussiness man ko berahmi se maar dala.....ye baat mere uncle aur dad tak pahuchte hi unhone mujhe australia bhej diya....aur yahan ka matter sara rafa dafa karwa diya.....
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