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Update 13
mai aur komal ek dusre se lipat kar achhe se soye..jab mai jaga to dekha komal apne mobile me kuch dekh rahi thi aur ro rahi thi....
mai-kya hua komal....
to komal ne wo message mujhe padha diya jo uske uncle ne bheja tha...(jo hospital me the germany me)...
jaise hi mai message padha mai bas chup hi raha lekin komal mere gale lagkar rone lagi....
mai-chup ho jao jo ho gaya so ho gaya ab ro kar kya fayda....
komal rote hue boli-mujhe aaj tak lagta tha mere maa papa ka accident hua hai lekin aaj pata chala unka accident nahi murder hua tha wo bhi tumhari bua ne karwaya mere dad ke paiso ke khatir....aur ab to uncle bhi nahi rahe is duniya....
mai-tum chinta mat karo mere rahte na koi tumhe aur nahi koi tumhari company ko haath laga sakta hai...
komal apnaansoo pochi aur boli-dekhna mai tere bua ki wo halat karungi ki wo is duniya me paida hone ka bhi afsos karegi....tumko kasam hai meri...ki tum apne bua ko jaan se nahi maroge.....use to mai jindagi dungi jo usne apne sapne me bhi nahi socha hoga....
mai-dekho shant ho jao...aise gussa karke kya fayda...mai hoon na mai sab sambhal lunga...
komal-nahi....ye meri dusmani hai...to mai hi use nibhaungi...
mai-tum kya meri nahi ho...
komal-haa hoo..
mai-to...mai bol raha hoon na tum bas aram karo aur dekhte jao...mai kya karta hoon unlogon ke saath...
komal-mujhe lagta hai tumko riyan ki madad leni chahiye...
mai-mujhe uski jaroorat nahi hai...
komal-fir bhi..ek baar soch lo...kyonki ab ye ladai bahut badi ho chuki hai..aur tumhare chacha aur bhai bhi pahle se jyada powerful ho chuke hai...
mai-tum kya chahti ho mai un namardo se dar jau jinki itni bhi aukat nahi ki saamne se waar kare...
komal-wo log namard hai darpok hai tabhi to pith piche war karte hai aur jab un sabko pata chalega tum jinda ho tab bhi wo tumpar piche se hi war karenge....isliye jaruri hai ki koi ho jo tumhare piche bhi sab par najar rakhe...
mai-thik hai bulao usko....
fir komal riyan ko call karke bula li...
riyan-boliye kya kaam hai....
mai abhi kuch bolta usse pahle hi komal boli-dekho riyan hume 4-5 log chahiye jo un sab par najar rakh sake har...aur unlogon ko pata bhi na chale...
riyan-mai aise 4 logon ko janta hoon inlogon ne kuch din pahle hi apna detective office khola hai wo hai to bahut hi talented ..mai unko bulata hoon...
komal-bulao...
fir riyan ne kisi ko call kiya aur ek ghante me 4 log humare samne khade the...
charo bilkul jawan jaise abhi hi school se pass hua ho...
komal-hume bachhe nahi chahiye..hume koi aisa chahiye jo kaam kar sake...
tabhi unme se ek aage aakar bola-sorry madam lekin humlog bachhe nahi hai...hum sab 20 saal ke hai..aur aap hume ek baar kaam dekar to dekhiye...100% gurrantee ke saath aapka kaam kar denge...mai aapse jhooth bhi nahi bolunga...humare pass paiso ki kuch kami hai isliye agar aapko kuch bada kaam karwana hai to paise bhi advance me dene honge taki hum us paise se naye saman kharid sake aur kaam kar sake....
komal-kitna chahiye tumhe...
ladka-mam wo to kaam par depend karega...
komal-hume kuch logon par najar rakhna hai..aur hume har wo chij pata honi chahiye jo us aadmi ko pata hai aur use pata nahi bhi hai to bhi....
ladka-mam kam se kam 5 lakh to lag hi jayega....
komal-mai tumhe 5 crore dungi....
ladka to bas mooh khol kar dekhta hi rah gaya....
komal-lekin yaad rahe agar tumhari ek bhi baat galat nikli ya tumne hume dhokha dene ki kosis ki to agle din uparwale ko yaad karlena...aur yahan sign karo...
ladka-ye kya hai...
komal-ye legal paper hai jisme likha hai agar tumne humse cheat kiya ya humara kaam nahi kar paye to tumhe maine jitna paisa diya hai usse 5 times tumse vasole jayege....ab ye kaam karne ke pahle soch lo....
is baat par charo ladko ne ek dusre ko dekha aur apas me kuch baat bhi ki....aur fir ow ladka aage aaya...
ladka-hume manjoor hai....
komal-good...ab apna naam likh kar charo is file par sign karo...
fir charo ne apna naam likha....aur uspar sign kiya....
ye charo the...
aman , karim , dev , aur rishi...
aman hacking expert tha..to wahi karim field work karta tha...dev technology expert tha..aur rishi tha in sab ka leader jo sara planning karta tha ...
komal ne unko ek list diya....
komal-mujhe 3 din ke andar in sab ki kundali chahiye...ye log kahan jate hai kya khate hai kya pite hai ...kahan sote hai kiske saath sote hai...inki kamjori...inka support har chij ....tumhe aur paise chahiye to wo bhi milega...lekin mujhe sab jaankari chahiye ab kaam par lag jao...aur fir charo teji se wahan se nikal gaye...
mai chupchap baithkar ye sab dekh raha tha...
riyan-mujhe lagta hai ab david ko bhi bula lena chahiye...
mai-david ko kyon...
riyan-kyonki usne aapke saath hi bahut saalo tak padhai ki hai..aur ba wo lawyer ban gaya hai...is field me lawyer to chahiye hi chahiye...
mai-thik hai usko bhi bula lo...
riyan ne david ko bhi call kar diya..wo abhi switzerland me tha...bola kal tak aa jayega...
ye david mere se tin saal senior tha school me humare saath padhta tha...isse mai bachpan me bahut lada hoon aur ladai ne hi humari dosti karai thi...
riyan-ab aage ka kya plan hai...
mai-dekho ye plan banana uspar kaam karna ye tumlog karo....mai to bas 3 din bitne ka intezar kar raha hoon...
riyan-thik hai mai chalta hoon aur haan komal ji ki surakhsha ke liye humne do bodyguard bhi laga diye hai....ye dono humesah aap dono ki safty dekhenge...fir do log andar aaye...
mai-ye dono hai kya...
riyan-haan...
mai-dekho tum dono ka kaam hai komal ki safety..mai apna dekh lunga...
guard-ye sir...
mai-naam...
pahla-tony ...
dusra-roy...
mai-dekho tony , roy tum dono komal ki safety ka dhyan rakho jab bhi ye kahi bahar jati hai to...
dono-yes sir...
mai-ab ja sakte ho...
dono bahar chale gaye...
riyan-ye dono trained fighter hai...ab mai chalta hoon...
mai-thik hai jao...
aur wo bhi chala gaya...
komal-tumne apne liye guard kyon nahi liya...
mai-sher akela chalat hai jhund me to chote mote janwar chalte hai...
komal kuch nahi boli....
aur mai fir se apne room me jakar so gaya ..kyonki mai jaga rahta hoon to mera khoon khoulta rahta hai..agar komal na hoti to kab ka un sab se ladne jaa chuka hota...
khair isi tarah do din aur nikal gaye...ab bacha tha akhiri din....aur aaj hi rishi humare pass aaya...usne hume bahut kuch bataya jinme kuch to mujhe pata tha lekin kuch bahut hi shocking tha mere liye...fr wo chala gaya...
aaj raat mai jab soya to mere ankhon se nind gayab tha....komal mere chati par sar rakhkar so rahi thi...mujhe pata tha uske dil me bhi dher sara gussa bhara hua hai..lekin ab jo karna hai mujhe hi karna hai...isliye mai bhi ankh band karke so gaya......
mai aur komal ek dusre se lipat kar achhe se soye..jab mai jaga to dekha komal apne mobile me kuch dekh rahi thi aur ro rahi thi....
mai-kya hua komal....
to komal ne wo message mujhe padha diya jo uske uncle ne bheja tha...(jo hospital me the germany me)...
jaise hi mai message padha mai bas chup hi raha lekin komal mere gale lagkar rone lagi....
mai-chup ho jao jo ho gaya so ho gaya ab ro kar kya fayda....
komal rote hue boli-mujhe aaj tak lagta tha mere maa papa ka accident hua hai lekin aaj pata chala unka accident nahi murder hua tha wo bhi tumhari bua ne karwaya mere dad ke paiso ke khatir....aur ab to uncle bhi nahi rahe is duniya....
mai-tum chinta mat karo mere rahte na koi tumhe aur nahi koi tumhari company ko haath laga sakta hai...
komal apnaansoo pochi aur boli-dekhna mai tere bua ki wo halat karungi ki wo is duniya me paida hone ka bhi afsos karegi....tumko kasam hai meri...ki tum apne bua ko jaan se nahi maroge.....use to mai jindagi dungi jo usne apne sapne me bhi nahi socha hoga....
mai-dekho shant ho jao...aise gussa karke kya fayda...mai hoon na mai sab sambhal lunga...
komal-nahi....ye meri dusmani hai...to mai hi use nibhaungi...
mai-tum kya meri nahi ho...
komal-haa hoo..
mai-to...mai bol raha hoon na tum bas aram karo aur dekhte jao...mai kya karta hoon unlogon ke saath...
komal-mujhe lagta hai tumko riyan ki madad leni chahiye...
mai-mujhe uski jaroorat nahi hai...
komal-fir bhi..ek baar soch lo...kyonki ab ye ladai bahut badi ho chuki hai..aur tumhare chacha aur bhai bhi pahle se jyada powerful ho chuke hai...
mai-tum kya chahti ho mai un namardo se dar jau jinki itni bhi aukat nahi ki saamne se waar kare...
komal-wo log namard hai darpok hai tabhi to pith piche war karte hai aur jab un sabko pata chalega tum jinda ho tab bhi wo tumpar piche se hi war karenge....isliye jaruri hai ki koi ho jo tumhare piche bhi sab par najar rakhe...
mai-thik hai bulao usko....
fir komal riyan ko call karke bula li...
riyan-boliye kya kaam hai....
mai abhi kuch bolta usse pahle hi komal boli-dekho riyan hume 4-5 log chahiye jo un sab par najar rakh sake har...aur unlogon ko pata bhi na chale...
riyan-mai aise 4 logon ko janta hoon inlogon ne kuch din pahle hi apna detective office khola hai wo hai to bahut hi talented ..mai unko bulata hoon...
komal-bulao...
fir riyan ne kisi ko call kiya aur ek ghante me 4 log humare samne khade the...
charo bilkul jawan jaise abhi hi school se pass hua ho...
komal-hume bachhe nahi chahiye..hume koi aisa chahiye jo kaam kar sake...
tabhi unme se ek aage aakar bola-sorry madam lekin humlog bachhe nahi hai...hum sab 20 saal ke hai..aur aap hume ek baar kaam dekar to dekhiye...100% gurrantee ke saath aapka kaam kar denge...mai aapse jhooth bhi nahi bolunga...humare pass paiso ki kuch kami hai isliye agar aapko kuch bada kaam karwana hai to paise bhi advance me dene honge taki hum us paise se naye saman kharid sake aur kaam kar sake....
komal-kitna chahiye tumhe...
ladka-mam wo to kaam par depend karega...
komal-hume kuch logon par najar rakhna hai..aur hume har wo chij pata honi chahiye jo us aadmi ko pata hai aur use pata nahi bhi hai to bhi....
ladka-mam kam se kam 5 lakh to lag hi jayega....
komal-mai tumhe 5 crore dungi....
ladka to bas mooh khol kar dekhta hi rah gaya....
komal-lekin yaad rahe agar tumhari ek bhi baat galat nikli ya tumne hume dhokha dene ki kosis ki to agle din uparwale ko yaad karlena...aur yahan sign karo...
ladka-ye kya hai...
komal-ye legal paper hai jisme likha hai agar tumne humse cheat kiya ya humara kaam nahi kar paye to tumhe maine jitna paisa diya hai usse 5 times tumse vasole jayege....ab ye kaam karne ke pahle soch lo....
is baat par charo ladko ne ek dusre ko dekha aur apas me kuch baat bhi ki....aur fir ow ladka aage aaya...
ladka-hume manjoor hai....
komal-good...ab apna naam likh kar charo is file par sign karo...
fir charo ne apna naam likha....aur uspar sign kiya....
ye charo the...
aman , karim , dev , aur rishi...
aman hacking expert tha..to wahi karim field work karta tha...dev technology expert tha..aur rishi tha in sab ka leader jo sara planning karta tha ...
komal ne unko ek list diya....
komal-mujhe 3 din ke andar in sab ki kundali chahiye...ye log kahan jate hai kya khate hai kya pite hai ...kahan sote hai kiske saath sote hai...inki kamjori...inka support har chij ....tumhe aur paise chahiye to wo bhi milega...lekin mujhe sab jaankari chahiye ab kaam par lag jao...aur fir charo teji se wahan se nikal gaye...
mai chupchap baithkar ye sab dekh raha tha...
riyan-mujhe lagta hai ab david ko bhi bula lena chahiye...
mai-david ko kyon...
riyan-kyonki usne aapke saath hi bahut saalo tak padhai ki hai..aur ba wo lawyer ban gaya hai...is field me lawyer to chahiye hi chahiye...
mai-thik hai usko bhi bula lo...
riyan ne david ko bhi call kar diya..wo abhi switzerland me tha...bola kal tak aa jayega...
ye david mere se tin saal senior tha school me humare saath padhta tha...isse mai bachpan me bahut lada hoon aur ladai ne hi humari dosti karai thi...
riyan-ab aage ka kya plan hai...
mai-dekho ye plan banana uspar kaam karna ye tumlog karo....mai to bas 3 din bitne ka intezar kar raha hoon...
riyan-thik hai mai chalta hoon aur haan komal ji ki surakhsha ke liye humne do bodyguard bhi laga diye hai....ye dono humesah aap dono ki safty dekhenge...fir do log andar aaye...
mai-ye dono hai kya...
riyan-haan...
mai-dekho tum dono ka kaam hai komal ki safety..mai apna dekh lunga...
guard-ye sir...
mai-naam...
pahla-tony ...
dusra-roy...
mai-dekho tony , roy tum dono komal ki safety ka dhyan rakho jab bhi ye kahi bahar jati hai to...
dono-yes sir...
mai-ab ja sakte ho...
dono bahar chale gaye...
riyan-ye dono trained fighter hai...ab mai chalta hoon...
mai-thik hai jao...
aur wo bhi chala gaya...
komal-tumne apne liye guard kyon nahi liya...
mai-sher akela chalat hai jhund me to chote mote janwar chalte hai...
komal kuch nahi boli....
aur mai fir se apne room me jakar so gaya ..kyonki mai jaga rahta hoon to mera khoon khoulta rahta hai..agar komal na hoti to kab ka un sab se ladne jaa chuka hota...
khair isi tarah do din aur nikal gaye...ab bacha tha akhiri din....aur aaj hi rishi humare pass aaya...usne hume bahut kuch bataya jinme kuch to mujhe pata tha lekin kuch bahut hi shocking tha mere liye...fr wo chala gaya...
aaj raat mai jab soya to mere ankhon se nind gayab tha....komal mere chati par sar rakhkar so rahi thi...mujhe pata tha uske dil me bhi dher sara gussa bhara hua hai..lekin ab jo karna hai mujhe hi karna hai...isliye mai bhi ankh band karke so gaya......
brego4
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hmm to ye rishi ne kya bataya ye aage chal kar ravneet ke kaam aayega
Rocky2602
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wonderfull lekin ab sona mat dusman masti kar rahe pahle unhe rulana hai koi rahem nahi karna