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Karan nu ajje vi poori tarah samajh nahi aa reha si ke ho ki reha aa, par sab ton pehla usne apna phone kadd ke account dubara check kita. Te balance screen dekhi ta us kolo apni khushi sambi nahi ja rahi si.
“Bhen di Lun sala mainu te halee tak v yakeen nahi ho reha aa ke rab mere te ina mehrbaan kime ho gya aa,” Karan ne apne mann vich socheya. Is time usde account vich 50 lakh ton vi vadh rakam si. Usne apni poori zindagi vich kade ina paisa nahi dekhya si.
Ine paise milan di khushi vich Karan ina rujh gya si ke usne ih miss hi kar dita si ke system da ik nava feature vi unlock ho gya si. Balance ton nazar hatde hi usda dhyaan wapas apne saamne khuli neeli screen wal gaya ta usnu new function bare pata laga.
“Eh ki aa… Harem function?” Karan ne sochya.
Usne kujh keha vi nahi si ke system khud hi usnu samjhaun lag peya.
Harem Function: Eh function di madad nal user aurtan nu pane wal attract karke apne Harem vich shamil kar sakda aa, jiniyan v aurtaan harem vich hon giyan, ona te kharch hoyi rakam te normal cashback ton ilawa special bonus cashback vi tuhanu dita jawe ga.
Karan ih sun ke pal layi sunn jeha ho ke reh gaya. Usne socheya si ke ih system bass usnu sohni lagi kudi ja aurat te paise kharchan te usnu inaam dawe ga. Par is system ta isto v aage nikliya.
“Oh teri di…” Karan ne apne mann vich hi keha. Usnu system har vele koi na koi nama jhatka de reha si, jithe Karan is time apne hi soch vich si. Par cash counter te khadi kudi te usde nal khadi Jasmeen usnu ida bina kuj bole te bina kise harkat kahda dekh ik duji wal sawal bharian nazra nal dekh rehian si.
“Sir… tusi theek ta ho?” Jasmeen ne aakhir vich himmat karke puch hi liya.
Eh gall sun ke Karan jaldi nal hosh vich a gya. Oh jaldi nal khud nu sambaleya te payment desk wali kudi te hathon packaged item wala bag fadh ke Jasmeen wal vadha ditta.
Jasmeen ne bag fadh ta liya par oh kuj boldi usto pehla hi Karan usnu bag fadah ke store cho bahar nikal aeya. Bahar ke usne system de bare sochan nal hi usdian akhan aage screen khul gayi.
Phir usne screen te YES wala button daba dita, taaki draw shuru ho jaave. Te fer usdi nazar ik hor cheez te gayi — Extreme Lottery ticket. Usne draw layi haan te kar diti si par oh ih dua v kar reha si ke kujh vadhiya nikal jawe, nahi ta usdi ticket barbaad ho jani si.
Congratulations! Tusi “Extreme Memory Recall” draw kita aa!
Extreme Memory Recall: User hun apni zindagi da har tajurba, har gall, har chhoti ton chhoti detail bilkul saaf yaad rakh sakda aa.
Congratulations! Tusi “Vehicular Mastery” draw kita aa!
Vehicular Mastery: User har tarah de vehicle — car, bike, itho tak ke jahaz v kise natural master vang chala sakda aa!
Congratulations! Tusi ik “Jaguar XF” jeeti aa!
Jaguar XF: Hun eh exotic car tuhadi aa. Eh tuhanu bahar parking vich khadi mil jawegi!
Congratulations! Tusi “JPR Talent House” agency jiti aa, hun tuci us agency de name malik ho!
JPR Talent House: Mohali based ik chhoti par promising talent te acting agency aa, hun oh poori tarah user de naam te transfer ho chukki aa. Zaroori documents car vich maujood ne, address de naal.
Ina sab kujh sun ke Karan te paer punje nahi lag rahe si. Ajj tak di zindagi vich usnu ini khushi kadi nahi hoyi si. Usdi bekar zindagi ne ik dum 360 degree turn le liya si.
Oh mall ton bahar nikal aeya c, te parking wal jaa reha si. Te saariyan gaddiyan vich ik hi car si jo bilkul vakhri, mehngi, te unique dikh rahi si. Te us gadi nu dekh ke oh smajh gya si ke ih usdi hi car aa.
Isto pehla ke usde dimag vich ih gal aundi ke jabi kithe aa…ki system di aawaz pehla hi aa gayi,”gadi di chabi tuhdi pent di jeb vich aa.” Te jida hi Karan apni jeb vich hath paeya te usda hath vich chabi a gyi.
“FFFFUUUCCCKK…” Karan ne hauli jahi cha vich huuuuu kita te seedha car wal tur peya. Par car tak pahunchan ton pehla kise ne usdi shirt halki jahi khich lyi. Ohne mud ke vekhya ta Jasmeen usde magar khadi si.
Usde hath ch ik mudi hoi chhoti jehi parchi si. Ohne oh parchi Karan de hath ch thama ditti, par oh usdi himmat nahi pe rahi si ke oh Karan dian akhan ch akhan paa ke vekh sake.
Karan ne pichhe store wal nazar maari ta usde do-tinn colleagues luk ke ohna dono nu dekh ke has rahe san. Te ina kafi si Karna de samjhan layi ki, ohna ne hi Jasmeen nu himmat de ke us kol pejya aa.
Karan ne parchi khol ke vekhi, ta uste usda number te naam likhya hoeya si.
Odo hi system di aawaz fer toh usde dimag vich goonj payi.
Harem Members: 1
Name: Jasmeen
Age: 20
Affection: 5%
Karan ikdam khadh hi gaya. Usne dubara Jasmeen wal vekheya. Oh vi ik pal layi usde wal takki, par usne nal hi apni nazar jhuka lyi.
Karan nu te ih koi kala jadu hi lag reha si, te oh chahunda si je koi uste kala jadu kar reha aa oh kadi na ruke bass karda jawe.
Hor nahi ta ki aa ih, system ne usde saamne gadi liya ke khadi kar diti, usnu rato raat ameer bana dita te hun Jasmeen nu khud hi liya ke usdi jholi vich pa dita.
Jasmeen te usnu parchi fadah ke sharmondi jaldi nal chali gayi, par Karan da dil te dimag vich is time agency hi chal rahi si, jo usnu kuj der pehla hi system ne diti si, oh hun othe hi jana chahunda si.
Oh car da darwaza khol ke driver seat te baithh gya. Vich bethdian hi usnu nami car de khoosbooh a gayi, jisnu sung ke usnu ina sakoon miliya ke usdian akhan hi band ho giyan, usne kambde hathan nal jime hi staring nu fadeya ta usde muh vicho apne aap hi nikal gya, “Ihnu kehnde a na car penchod.”
Changi gal ih si ke usde kol driving license si. Te upro sytem walo mili Vehicular Mastery karke jida hi usne gadi start karke staring nu hath paeya ta, usnu apne andar ik alag hi tarah da confidence mehsos hoeya, usnu inj lag reha si ke oh gadi di ik ik vibration nu mehsos kar pa reha aa te har ek awaz te vibration nu alag v kar pa reha aa.
Isto pehla ke oh car torda usne sab ton pehla dashboard vich rakhi file chon documents kadhe. Jis vich Agency de papers san te usnu dekh ke Karan samj reha si ih poori tarah legal te original papers ne. Ate hat jagah owner da naam — Karan Singh likhiya hoeya si.
Ohne file band karke upar likhe adress wal nazar mari te apne google map vich address feed karke tur piya.
———
Mohali de ik commercial block di teesri manzil te, JPR Talent House de andar mahaul hamesha vang tanav naal bharya hoya si.
“Mainu samajh nahi aunda tusi lok karde ki ho! Main tuhadi agency ch aayi si kyunki tusi keha si gigs milangiyan, par do saal ton mainu ik dhang da audition vi nahi milya!” ik kudi uchi te tikhi awaaz ch bol rahi si.
“Gigs na milan da kami sade contacts nahi sama tere kaam ch aa,” usde saamne khadi aurat shaant ate lehje ch boli. “Mera khayal nal tenu hor acting classan di lodh aa.”
“Tu mainu acting sikhaengi?” Kudi hor bhadak gayi. “Talent, mere vich kudrati bahut talent aa tu soch samjh me bol jo v bol rahi aa!”
Usde saamne kahdi aurat ne ik lamba saah leya. Oh usnu bahut kujh bolna chaundi si, par usne khud te kabu kar liya ih soch ke ki, agency di haalat ta pehla hi kharab te upro je usne kuj bol ke client gawah liya ta paise kitho milan ge.
Par oh us kudi nu koi response dindi ke usto pehla hi staaf chon ik ladki tezi naal usde kol aa gayi te usnu side te le gayi.
Isto pehla side te jaan wali aurat di gal kareyr ta usdi shakhsiyat hi alag si. Mid-twenties ch hoke vi usde chehre te leadership poori jachdi si. Te is kudi da nal si Ishita Sandhu, jo ke agency di operational head si.
“Ki hoya?” Ishita ne beparwah lehje ch puchhya.
Asal gall eh si ke agency doobn de kinare te si. Mohali-Chandigarh di market ch log already established agencies wal jande san. Te JPR bas kise tarah apne aap nu bacha rahi si.
“Ma’am, bohat vaddi khabar aa!” staff wali, Karishma, excitement ch lagbhag uchhaldi hoyi boli.
Ishita ne usde chehre wal vekheya te turant samajh gayi ke pakka koi vadia hi gal howe gi.
“Jaldi Dass, Karishma, main free nahi aa—”
Te nal hi Karishma ne usde saamne apna phone kar ditta.
Phone dekh ke Ishita de chehre di shanti ik pal ch hi excitement vich badal gayi. Oh jaldi nal Karishma da phone fadh ke notification padhan lag pyi.
“Sachi—? Kise ne agency da poora controlling stake khareed liya?” oh excitement vich zor naal bol bethi, par usne jaldi nal sambal ke apni aawaz nimi kar layi.
Karishma v bahut khush si oh excited tone vcih boli, “Ma’am… asi bach gaye!”
Ishita kujh second tak ta phone wal hi dekhdi rahi. Ine chir toh jo bojh oh apne modeya te le ke chal rahi oh bojh usnu lehnda hoeya mehsus ho reha si.
Apne toh attention door hundi dekh uchi bol rahi aspiring actress dubara cheekhi, “Hello? Main ajje vi ethe khadi haan! Mere kol hor vi bahut kaam ne!”
Eh sun ke Ishita nu gussa aa gya. Ajj pehli vaar usnu mehsoos ho reha si ke oh is batmeez client nu usdi aukaat dikha sakdi aa. Oh ida hi kise di v batmeezi nahi seh sakdi aa.
Oh ek dum confidence bhari chal nal kuri wal gayi, te usde bilkul saamne ja khadi ho gayi, te shaant, par sakht lehje vich boli,“Mainu maaf kar deo, par hun tusi sadi agency layi suitable nahi ho.”
“Tuhaade fees refund kar ditti jaawe ge,” eh sun ke sahmen kahdi kudi de muhon koi gal nahi nikal rahi si.
Ishita ne agge bola zari rakhde hoye keha. “Hun tusi itho jaa sakde hoo. Nahi ta main security nu bulone pe sakda aa.”
Eh sab bolan to vaad Ishita nu apne andar ek ajeeb jeha sukoon mehsoos ho reha si. Eh gall oh bahut dinan ton us kudi nu kehna chaundi si.
Par hun usnu sirf apne name malak da intezar si. Usne Karishma wal nazar mari te usnu ih keh apne office vich chali gayi ke je Agency da new boss awe ta oh usnu jaldi hi inform kar dawe.
Haje Ishita nu apne cabin vich gaye 5-7 mint hi hoye si ke, Karan di Jaguar XF di goonj agency di parking vich goonj gayi.
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Karan nu ajje vi poori tarah samajh nahi aa reha si ke ho ki reha aa, par sab ton pehla usne apna phone kadd ke account dubara check kita. Te balance screen dekhi ta us kolo apni khushi sambi nahi ja rahi si.
“Bhen di Lun sala mainu te halee tak v yakeen nahi ho reha aa ke rab mere te ina mehrbaan kime ho gya aa,” Karan ne apne mann vich socheya. Is time usde account vich 50 lakh ton vi vadh rakam si. Usne apni poori zindagi vich kade ina paisa nahi dekhya si.
Ine paise milan di khushi vich Karan ina rujh gya si ke usne ih miss hi kar dita si ke system da ik nava feature vi unlock ho gya si. Balance ton nazar hatde hi usda dhyaan wapas apne saamne khuli neeli screen wal gaya ta usnu new function bare pata laga.
“Eh ki aa… Harem function?” Karan ne sochya.
Usne kujh keha vi nahi si ke system khud hi usnu samjhaun lag peya.
Harem Function: Eh function di madad nal user aurtan nu pane wal attract karke apne Harem vich shamil kar sakda aa, jiniyan v aurtaan harem vich hon giyan, ona te kharch hoyi rakam te normal cashback ton ilawa special bonus cashback vi tuhanu dita jawe ga.
Karan ih sun ke pal layi sunn jeha ho ke reh gaya. Usne socheya si ke ih system bass usnu sohni lagi kudi ja aurat te paise kharchan te usnu inaam dawe ga. Par is system ta isto v aage nikliya.
“Oh teri di…” Karan ne apne mann vich hi keha. Usnu system har vele koi na koi nama jhatka de reha si, jithe Karan is time apne hi soch vich si. Par cash counter te khadi kudi te usde nal khadi Jasmeen usnu ida bina kuj bole te bina kise harkat kahda dekh ik duji wal sawal bharian nazra nal dekh rehian si.
“Sir… tusi theek ta ho?” Jasmeen ne aakhir vich himmat karke puch hi liya.
Eh gall sun ke Karan jaldi nal hosh vich a gya. Oh jaldi nal khud nu sambaleya te payment desk wali kudi te hathon packaged item wala bag fadh ke Jasmeen wal vadha ditta.
Jasmeen ne bag fadh ta liya par oh kuj boldi usto pehla hi Karan usnu bag fadah ke store cho bahar nikal aeya. Bahar ke usne system de bare sochan nal hi usdian akhan aage screen khul gayi.
Phir usne screen te YES wala button daba dita, taaki draw shuru ho jaave. Te fer usdi nazar ik hor cheez te gayi — Extreme Lottery ticket. Usne draw layi haan te kar diti si par oh ih dua v kar reha si ke kujh vadhiya nikal jawe, nahi ta usdi ticket barbaad ho jani si.
Congratulations! Tusi “Extreme Memory Recall” draw kita aa!
Extreme Memory Recall: User hun apni zindagi da har tajurba, har gall, har chhoti ton chhoti detail bilkul saaf yaad rakh sakda aa.
Congratulations! Tusi “Vehicular Mastery” draw kita aa!
Vehicular Mastery: User har tarah de vehicle — car, bike, itho tak ke jahaz v kise natural master vang chala sakda aa!
Congratulations! Tusi ik “Jaguar XF” jeeti aa!
Jaguar XF: Hun eh exotic car tuhadi aa. Eh tuhanu bahar parking vich khadi mil jawegi!
Congratulations! Tusi “JPR Talent House” agency jiti aa, hun tuci us agency de name malik ho!
JPR Talent House: Mohali based ik chhoti par promising talent te acting agency aa, hun oh poori tarah user de naam te transfer ho chukki aa. Zaroori documents car vich maujood ne, address de naal.
Ina sab kujh sun ke Karan te paer punje nahi lag rahe si. Ajj tak di zindagi vich usnu ini khushi kadi nahi hoyi si. Usdi bekar zindagi ne ik dum 360 degree turn le liya si.
Oh mall ton bahar nikal aeya c, te parking wal jaa reha si. Te saariyan gaddiyan vich ik hi car si jo bilkul vakhri, mehngi, te unique dikh rahi si. Te us gadi nu dekh ke oh smajh gya si ke ih usdi hi car aa.
Isto pehla ke usde dimag vich ih gal aundi ke jabi kithe aa…ki system di aawaz pehla hi aa gayi,”gadi di chabi tuhdi pent di jeb vich aa.” Te jida hi Karan apni jeb vich hath paeya te usda hath vich chabi a gyi.
“FFFFUUUCCCKK…” Karan ne hauli jahi cha vich huuuuu kita te seedha car wal tur peya. Par car tak pahunchan ton pehla kise ne usdi shirt halki jahi khich lyi. Ohne mud ke vekhya ta Jasmeen usde magar khadi si.
Usde hath ch ik mudi hoi chhoti jehi parchi si. Ohne oh parchi Karan de hath ch thama ditti, par oh usdi himmat nahi pe rahi si ke oh Karan dian akhan ch akhan paa ke vekh sake.
Karan ne pichhe store wal nazar maari ta usde do-tinn colleagues luk ke ohna dono nu dekh ke has rahe san. Te ina kafi si Karna de samjhan layi ki, ohna ne hi Jasmeen nu himmat de ke us kol pejya aa.
Karan ne parchi khol ke vekhi, ta uste usda number te naam likhya hoeya si.
Odo hi system di aawaz fer toh usde dimag vich goonj payi.
Harem Members: 1
Name: Jasmeen
Age: 20
Affection: 5%
Karan ikdam khadh hi gaya. Usne dubara Jasmeen wal vekheya. Oh vi ik pal layi usde wal takki, par usne nal hi apni nazar jhuka lyi.
Karan nu te ih koi kala jadu hi lag reha si, te oh chahunda si je koi uste kala jadu kar reha aa oh kadi na ruke bass karda jawe.
Hor nahi ta ki aa ih, system ne usde saamne gadi liya ke khadi kar diti, usnu rato raat ameer bana dita te hun Jasmeen nu khud hi liya ke usdi jholi vich pa dita.
Jasmeen te usnu parchi fadah ke sharmondi jaldi nal chali gayi, par Karan da dil te dimag vich is time agency hi chal rahi si, jo usnu kuj der pehla hi system ne diti si, oh hun othe hi jana chahunda si.
Oh car da darwaza khol ke driver seat te baithh gya. Vich bethdian hi usnu nami car de khoosbooh a gayi, jisnu sung ke usnu ina sakoon miliya ke usdian akhan hi band ho giyan, usne kambde hathan nal jime hi staring nu fadeya ta usde muh vicho apne aap hi nikal gya, “Ihnu kehnde a na car penchod.”
Changi gal ih si ke usde kol driving license si. Te upro sytem walo mili Vehicular Mastery karke jida hi usne gadi start karke staring nu hath paeya ta, usnu apne andar ik alag hi tarah da confidence mehsos hoeya, usnu inj lag reha si ke oh gadi di ik ik vibration nu mehsos kar pa reha aa te har ek awaz te vibration nu alag v kar pa reha aa.
Isto pehla ke oh car torda usne sab ton pehla dashboard vich rakhi file chon documents kadhe. Jis vich Agency de papers san te usnu dekh ke Karan samj reha si ih poori tarah legal te original papers ne. Ate hat jagah owner da naam — Karan Singh likhiya hoeya si.
Ohne file band karke upar likhe adress wal nazar mari te apne google map vich address feed karke tur piya.
———
Mohali de ik commercial block di teesri manzil te, JPR Talent House de andar mahaul hamesha vang tanav naal bharya hoya si.
“Mainu samajh nahi aunda tusi lok karde ki ho! Main tuhadi agency ch aayi si kyunki tusi keha si gigs milangiyan, par do saal ton mainu ik dhang da audition vi nahi milya!” ik kudi uchi te tikhi awaaz ch bol rahi si.
“Gigs na milan da kami sade contacts nahi sama tere kaam ch aa,” usde saamne khadi aurat shaant ate lehje ch boli. “Mera khayal nal tenu hor acting classan di lodh aa.”
“Tu mainu acting sikhaengi?” Kudi hor bhadak gayi. “Talent, mere vich kudrati bahut talent aa tu soch samjh me bol jo v bol rahi aa!”
Usde saamne kahdi aurat ne ik lamba saah leya. Oh usnu bahut kujh bolna chaundi si, par usne khud te kabu kar liya ih soch ke ki, agency di haalat ta pehla hi kharab te upro je usne kuj bol ke client gawah liya ta paise kitho milan ge.
Par oh us kudi nu koi response dindi ke usto pehla hi staaf chon ik ladki tezi naal usde kol aa gayi te usnu side te le gayi.
Isto pehla side te jaan wali aurat di gal kareyr ta usdi shakhsiyat hi alag si. Mid-twenties ch hoke vi usde chehre te leadership poori jachdi si. Te is kudi da nal si Ishita Sandhu, jo ke agency di operational head si.
“Ki hoya?” Ishita ne beparwah lehje ch puchhya.
Asal gall eh si ke agency doobn de kinare te si. Mohali-Chandigarh di market ch log already established agencies wal jande san. Te JPR bas kise tarah apne aap nu bacha rahi si.
“Ma’am, bohat vaddi khabar aa!” staff wali, Karishma, excitement ch lagbhag uchhaldi hoyi boli.
Ishita ne usde chehre wal vekheya te turant samajh gayi ke pakka koi vadia hi gal howe gi.
“Jaldi Dass, Karishma, main free nahi aa—”
Te nal hi Karishma ne usde saamne apna phone kar ditta.
Phone dekh ke Ishita de chehre di shanti ik pal ch hi excitement vich badal gayi. Oh jaldi nal Karishma da phone fadh ke notification padhan lag pyi.
“Sachi—? Kise ne agency da poora controlling stake khareed liya?” oh excitement vich zor naal bol bethi, par usne jaldi nal sambal ke apni aawaz nimi kar layi.
Karishma v bahut khush si oh excited tone vcih boli, “Ma’am… asi bach gaye!”
Ishita kujh second tak ta phone wal hi dekhdi rahi. Ine chir toh jo bojh oh apne modeya te le ke chal rahi oh bojh usnu lehnda hoeya mehsus ho reha si.
Apne toh attention door hundi dekh uchi bol rahi aspiring actress dubara cheekhi, “Hello? Main ajje vi ethe khadi haan! Mere kol hor vi bahut kaam ne!”
Eh sun ke Ishita nu gussa aa gya. Ajj pehli vaar usnu mehsoos ho reha si ke oh is batmeez client nu usdi aukaat dikha sakdi aa. Oh ida hi kise di v batmeezi nahi seh sakdi aa.
Oh ek dum confidence bhari chal nal kuri wal gayi, te usde bilkul saamne ja khadi ho gayi, te shaant, par sakht lehje vich boli,“Mainu maaf kar deo, par hun tusi sadi agency layi suitable nahi ho.”
“Tuhaade fees refund kar ditti jaawe ge,” eh sun ke sahmen kahdi kudi de muhon koi gal nahi nikal rahi si.
Ishita ne agge bola zari rakhde hoye keha. “Hun tusi itho jaa sakde hoo. Nahi ta main security nu bulone pe sakda aa.”
Eh sab bolan to vaad Ishita nu apne andar ek ajeeb jeha sukoon mehsoos ho reha si. Eh gall oh bahut dinan ton us kudi nu kehna chaundi si.
Par hun usnu sirf apne name malak da intezar si. Usne Karishma wal nazar mari te usnu ih keh apne office vich chali gayi ke je Agency da new boss awe ta oh usnu jaldi hi inform kar dawe.
Haje Ishita nu apne cabin vich gaye 5-7 mint hi hoye si ke, Karan di Jaguar XF di goonj agency di parking vich goonj gayi.