Lazawab umda bahut hi Shandar updateDoston teen update de diye hai. In update me punnu ki mumbai me nikki ke sath nok jhok aur us se dosti hona dikhaya gaya hai. Priya se bhi isme parichay hua hai. Lekin abhi punnu ki priya se mulakat dikhane me samay hai. Ummid hai ki ye update aapko pasand aayege. Story se jude rahne ke liye aur apna sath banaye rakhne ke liye aap sabka bahut bahut dhanyawad.
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Nimi boli “didi, maine aur ami didi ne subah se kuch nahi khaya.”
Vaani didi boli “tu ruk, mai abhi kuch lekar aati hu.”
Ye kahte huye vaani didi ne call rakha aur fir saxena ji ko jata kar, us patrakar-varta se bahar nikal aayi. Unke bahar nikalte hi, humne bhi Tv band kar diya. Tv band hote hi, mehul ne nimi se kaha.
Mehul bola “moti, tujhe kuch khana hi tha to, mujhse bol deti. Is tarah vaani didi ko pareshan karne ki kya jarurat thi.”
Lekin nimi ne mehul ki baat sunte hi, rona suru kar diya. Maine badi mushkil se kisi tarah se use chup karaya aur fir kuch der bad, ek hawaldar khana lekar aa gaya. Nimi saara khana khol khol kar dekhne lagi.
Lekin use usme samosa kahi najar nahi aaya aur wo fir se rone lagi. Use rota dekh kar, chhoti maa us par gussa karne lagi. Chhoti maa ko nimi par gussa hote dekh kar, mujhe laga ki, ab kahi wo nimi par hath na utha de. Isliye mai nimi ko bahlane ke liye bahar lane laga.
Lekin pritam ne mujhe bahar jaane se rok diya. Abhi mai pritam se baat kar hi raha tha ki, tabhi vaani didi aa gayi. Unne humare pas aate hi samose nimi ki taraf bada diye aur nimi khushi khushi samose lekar daudti huyi, ami ke pas chali gayi.
Nimi ke humare pas se jate hi, vaani didi ke pas police commissioner ka phone aa gaya. Un ne call uthaya to, commissioner ne kaha.
Commissioner bola “miss vaani, media janna chahti hai ki, humne sabhi apradhiyon ko jinda hi giraftar kiya hai ya kuch ko maar bhi giraya hai.”
Vaani didi boli “sir hum sabhi ko jinda giraftar karna chahte the. Lekin guranga ki giraftari ke samay, uske do aadmiyon ne hum par goliyan barsana suru kar diya. Jiski jababi karyawahi me humne un dono ko maar giraya hai.”
Itna kahne ke bad, vaani didi ne call rakh diya aur fir apne assitant officer niranjan se kaha.
Vaani didi boli “niranjan, tum CID office jao. Waha gauranga aur jin do logon ne hum par goliyan chalayi thi. Unhe apne pas rakh kar, baki sab apradhiyon ko police ke hawale kar do. Kuch der bad, mai gauranga se puchh tachh ke liye aati hu. Tab tak un teeno ko ek sath hi rakho.”
Vaani didi ki baat sunkar, niranjan ke chehre par muskurahat aa gayi aur wo vaani didi ka aadesh pate hi, waha se chala gaya. Uske bad un ne apne assitant officer aniruddha se kaha.
Vaani didi boli “aniruddha, ab mujhe yaha koi khatra najar nahi aa raha hai. Isliye yaha ki saari police hata do. Lekin abhi aetihaat ke taur par, vishwa aur pritam yahi rahege. Tum jakar saxena uncle se milo aur mumbai CID se baat karo. Mujhe pura yakin hai ki, gauranga se puchh tachh ke bad hume mumbai jana padega.”
Vaani didi ka aadesh pate hi, wo bhi waha se chala gaya. Uske bad, un ne apne assitant officer manik se kaha.
Vaani didi boli “manik, tum police commissioner se milkar, unse school student bharti ke gang-rape case ki file lekar, us par aaj se hi kaam suru kar do aur tumhe usme kya samajh me aa raha hai. Mujhe suchit karo.”
Vaani didi ki baat sunkar, manik bhi waha se chala gaya. Uske jate hi, mai vaani didi ko nisha bhabhi se milane laga. Nisha bhabhi se milte hi vaani didi ne kaha.
Vaani didi boli “sorry, mai kaam ki vajah se pahle aapse nahi mil payi. Ab humari mausi ki tabiyat kaisi hai.”
Nisha bhabhi boli “koi baat nahi, kabhi kabhi mai bhi kaam me fas kar chahte huye bhi kisi ko samay nahi de pati. Magar aapka kaam mujhse bhi kahi jyada jaruri tha. Aapne to ek hi jhatke me pure mafiya ka safaya kar diya. Khalid bhai, aapke baare me bilkul sahi hi kahte the.”
Nisha bhabhi ki baat sunkar, vaani didi ne hairan hote huye kaha.
Vaani didi boli “khalid ne aapse mere baar me kya kaha.”
Nisha bhabhi boli “khalid bhai, kahte hai ki, puri CID me sirf ek hi mard hai aur wo hai vaani roy.”
Nisha bhabhi ki baat sunte hi, vaani didi bahut jor se hasne lagi. Unhe is tarah se hanste dekh kar hum sabhi hairan the. Kyoki hum me se kisi ne bhi na to, unhe dil khol kar hanste dekha tha aur na hi kabhi rote dekha tha.
Hum to, unke thoda sa muskurane ko hi unki hansi maan lete the aur unki aankhon me aayi nami ko hi unka rona samajh lete the. Vaani didi ne hanste huye kaha.
Vaani didi boli “aap khalid ko kaise janti hai.”
Nisha bhabhi boli “mai, mere pati aman aur khalid teeno ek hi college me the. Usi samay se humari dosti hai.”
Vaani didi boli “kya aap janti hai ki, mujhe mumbai CID se bahar karne me bhi khalid ka hi hath hai.”
Vaani didi ki ye baat sunkar, hum sab chauke bina na rah sake. Lekin nisha bhabhi ne hanste huye kaha.
Nisha bhabhi boli “haan, mai ache se janti hu aur ye bhi janti hu ki, aap khalid bhai ka bhi bheja udane wali thi. Lekin na jaane kya soch kar, aapne goli nahi chalayi aur khalid bhai aapki pakad se bach kar bhag nikle.”
“Jiske bad, un ne aapko promotion dilwakar pune bhijwa diya tha. Lekin aaj bhi unko ye baat pareshan karti rahti hai ki, kabhi kisi mujrim par raham na karne wali officer ne, un par goli kyo nahi chalayi. Kya mai jaan sakti hu ki, aapne us din un par goli kyo nahi chalayi thi.”
Vaani didi boli “aapka kahna bilkul sahi hai ki, mai kisi bhi mujrim par raham nahi karti. Lekin us din khalid ki ek neki ne use bacha liya tha. Mai khalid ka pichha kar rahi thi. Mera use jinda pakadne ka bhi koi irada nahi tha.”
“Isliye meri car ke uske najdik pahuchte hi, maine us par goli chalane ke liye apni revolver taan di. Khalid ne ek najar meri taraf dekha aur apni car ki speed bada di. Lekin usi samay na jaane kaha se ek bachcha bhagte huye, uski car ke samne aa gaya.”
“Us samay yadi koi aur mujrim hota to, us bachche ko apni car se udha deta. Lekin khalid ne apni maut samne dekhte huye bhi, apni car ko break laga diye. Uski isi neki ne mujhe us par goli chalane se rok diya aur wo meri pakad se bhag nikla.”
“Uske bad, wo dubai bhag gaya aur fir kuch samay bad mujhe bhi promotion dekar pune bhej diya gaya. Khalid ek mujrim jarur tha. Lekin mujhe uske andar insaniyat najar aayi thi aur is vajah se mujhe apne aisa karne ka kabhi pachhtawa nahi hua.”
Nisha bhabhi boli “ye aapne bilkul sahi baat boli. Khalid bhai, aaj bhi aurton aur bachchon par hath nahi uthate.”
Vaani didi boli “lekin mere bhai ko marne to, wo aaya tha. Ye aur baat hai ki, aap logon ki vajah se usne kuch nahi kiya.”
Nisha bhabhi boli “nahi, yadi hum nahi bhi hote, tab bhi wo punit ko dekhne ke bad, is par hath nahi uthate. Un ne humare samne salim ko kuch nahi kaha tha. Lekin ghar jaane ke bad, use maara bhi aur ghar se bhi nikal diya tha.”
“Hum sabke samjhane par bhi wo salim ko maaf karne ko taiyar nahi the. Unka kahna tha ki, wo har baat ke liye maaf kar sakte hai. Lekin kisi maa bahan ke sath bad-saluki karne wale ko kabhi maaf nahi kar sakte.”
“Fir chahe aisa karne wala unka saga bhai hi kyo na ho. Bad me un ne priya ke kahne par, badi mushkil se salim ko maaf kiya. Wo ek don jarur hai, magar bure insan nahi hai. Isliye hum aaj bhi dost hai.”
Vaani didi boli “chalo, acha hua ki, aapne ye baat mujhe bata di. Warna mere dil me ek baat hamesha rahti ki, khalid mere bhai ko marne ke liye aaya tha aur mai use iske liye kabhi maaf nahi kar pati.”
Nisha bhabhi boli “matlab ki, ab aapne unhe is baat ke liye maaf kar diya hai.”
Nisha bhabhi ki baat sunkar, vaani didi ne muskurate huye kaha.
Vaani didi boli “haan, maine use maaf kar diya hai. Lekin use ye baat jarur bata dena ki, wo jis punit ko marne aaya tha. Us punit ki bahan, us se bhi badi Don hai.”
Vaani didi ki ye baat sunte hi, nisha bhabhi sahit sabhi hasne lage. Fir maine vaani didi ka barkha didi se parichay karwaya. Dono muskurate huye gale mili aur fir vaani didi ne muskurate huye kaha.
Vaani didi boli “mujhe pata chala hai ki, tum raat ka khana is nalayak se baat kiye bina nahi khati ho.”
Vaani didi ki is baat par barkha didi ne muskurate huye kaha.
Barkha didi boli “didi, jiska itna pyara bhai ho, uska khana bhala, apne bhai se baat kiye bina kaise pach sakta hai.”
Barkha didi ki baat sunkar, vaani didi ek baar fir dil khol kar hans di. Fir un ne ami nimi ki taraf dekhte huye kaha.
Vaani didi boli “tum fikar mat karo, ab tum apne bhai se jab chahe, tab mil sakgogi. Kyoki nimi ne mere sath badtamizi ki thi. Isliye ab mai ise apne sath pune lekar jaugi.”
Vaani didi ye baat ami nimi ko suna rahi thi. Isliye is baat ko sunte hi, sabki najar ami nimi ki taraf chali gayi. Lekin un dono ne ye baat suni hi nahi thi aur dono samose khane me mast thi.
Kuch der tak wo muskurate huye ami nimi ko samose khate dekhti rahi. Lekin fir achanak na jaane unko kya hua ki, un ne gusse me chikhte huye kaha.
Vaani didi boli “pritammmm.”
Vaani didi ko chikhte dekh kar, chhoti maa, richa aunty aur mohini aunty bhi humare pas aa gayi. Vaani didi ka bulana hi kisi ke pasine chhudane ke liye kaafi tha. Aise me vaani didi ke gusse me pritam ko bulane se uski haalat kharab ho gayi. Usne vaani didi ke pas aakar, haklate huye kaha.
Pritam bola “ji, ji ji, madam.”
Vaani didi ne use gusse me ghurte huye kaha.
Vaani didi boli “tu kis mitti ka bana hai. Maine tujhe apni galti ko sudharne ka ek mauka diya aur tujhse kaha ki, mere parivaar ka pura khayal rakhna. Iske bad bhi tune unka khayal nahi rakha.”
Pritam bola “nahi madam, aap chahe to, mausi ji se puchh sakti hai. Mai pure samay saaye ki tarah inke sath raha hu.”
Vaani didi boli “kya sirf sath rahna hi khayal rakhna kahlata hai. Meri dono masum bahne bhookh se kaisi behal ho gayi hai. Tujhse itna bhi nahi hua ki, mai yaha nahi hu to, kam se kam unke khane ka hi kuch intejam kar deta.”
Vaani didi ki ye baat sunte hi, chhoti maa ne pritam ka bachav karte huye kaha.
Chhoti maa boli “vaani beta, isme inki koi galti nahi hai. Inka ghar idhar pas hi hai. In ne bahut baar hum sabse khana khane chalne ko kaha tha. Lekin maine hi khane ke liye mana kar diya tha.”
Vaani didi boli “aapko nahi khana tha to, kam se kam ami nimi ko to khana khila diya hota. Wo ek aur kaha gayab hai. Kam se kam use to inka khayal rakhna chahiye tha.”
Ye kah kar vaani didi yaha waha dekhne lagi. Kisi ko samajh me nahi aaya tha ki, wo kisko puchh rahi hai. Lekin mai aur mehul samajh gaye the ki, wo mehul ko hi puchh rahi hai.
Isliye mehul unke hi pichhe hi chhup kar, chup chap khada raha. Mehul ki is harkat se richa aunty ko bhi samajh me aa gaya ki, vaani didi mehul ko puchh rahi hai. Un ne fauran hi vaani didi se kaha.
Richa aunty boli “wo tumhare hi pichhe chhup kar khada hai.”
Richa aunty ki baat sunte hi, vaani didi ne palat kar mehul ko dekha. Unke dekhte hi, mehul ki saari masti gayab ho gayi aur usne vaani didi ke samne aate huye kaha.
Mehul bola “didi, mummy galat soch rahi hai. Mai chhupa thodi tha. Mai to kab se aapke pichhe hi khada hu. Asal me mujhe samajh me nahi aaya ki, aap mujhe puchh rahi hai.”
Mehul ki baat sunkar, vaani didi ne use kuch kaha to nahi, lekin use gusse me ghurti rahi. Vaani didi ka bolna to, khatarnak tha hi, na bolna bhi kam khatarnak nahi tha. Mehul ne jab unhe is tarah se ghurte dekha to, unke bina kuch puchhe hi, unhe apni safayi dete huye kaha.
Mehul bola “didi, mai to ami nimi ne khane ke liye bahut baar kah chuka tha. Lekin wo hi mana kar deti thi.”
Ami nimi ka dhyan pahle humari taraf nahi tha. Lekin jab vaani didi ne pritam ko chillaya, tab se wo log humari taraf hi dekh rahi thi. Magar jaise hi nimi ne mehul ko safed jhuth bolte dekha, wo samosa khate khate humare pas aa gayi aur usne vaani didi se kaha.
Nimi boli “didi, ye motu jhuth bol raha hai. Ye to pure samay phone par laga tha.”
Nimi ki baat sunkar, jaha sab dabi muskan me muskurane lage. Asal me mehul ne kuch samay pahle nimi ko moti kah kar chidaya tha. Nimi ne us se usi baat ka badla nikalne ke liye use motu kaha tha.
Yadi koi aur samay hota to, nimi ke mehul se is tarah baat karne par vaani didi ne nimi ko fatkar laga di hoti. Lekin is samay wo ami nimi par kuch jyada meharban thi. Isliye un ne nimi ke is tarah se baat karne ki harkat ko andekha kar diya.
Lekin nimi ke is tarah se mehul ki baat ko jhutha sabit kar dene se aur uski pol khol dene se, mehul ki to jaan hi nikal gayi. Wo ghabrahat me yaha waha dekhne laga aur vaani didi se najar bachane laga.
Mehul bahut der se pritam ka maja le raha tha. Pritam ko bhi apna badla lene ka ye sahi samay najar aaya aur usne bhi is bahti ganga me hath dhote huye, nimi ki haan me haan milate huye kaha.
Pritam bola “madam, ye bachchi sahi kah rahi hai. Ye bhai sahab pure samay hi mobile par lage the.”
Pritam ki baat sunkar, mehul use kha jaane wali najron se dekhne laga. Lekin pritam use andekha kar, muskurate huye nimi ki taraf dekhne laga. Pritam ki baat sunkar, maine dhire se keerti ke kaan me kaha.
Mai bola “ise kahte hai, sau sunar ki, ek lohar ki. Mai mehul se mana kar raha tha ki, pritam ko pareshan mat kar, warna wo bad me tujhse iska badla lega. Lekin isne meri baat nahi maani. Ab uska natija bhi dekh le.”
“Vaani didi shayad nimi ki kahi baat ko andekha kar bhi deti. Lekin ab nimi ki baat par, pritam ke bhi muhar laga dene se, wo is baat ko andekha nahi karegi. Isko ab nimi ko moti kahna aur pritam ka maja lena mahanga padne wala hai.”
Meri ye baat bilkul sahi hi nikli. Pritam ki baat sunne ke bad, vaani didi ne apna hath aage badaya aur mehul se apna mobile dene ko kaha. Mehul ne bhi bujhe man se apna mobile vaani didi ki taraf bada diya.
Ab ise pritam ki khushkismati kaho ya fir mehul ki badkismati ki, vaani didi ke mehul ka mobile hath me lete hi, usme shilpa ka call aane laga. Vaani didi ne aa rahe call ko dekhne ke bad, apna sar utha kar mehul ki taraf dekha.
Lekin mehul sar jhuka kar khada raha. Vaani didi ne mehul ko dekhte huye, shilpa ka call utha liya. Lekin un ne call par kuch kaha nahi. Jis vajah se dusri taraf se shilpa ne kaha.
Shilpa boli “………….” “kya hua jaan, kuch bolte kyo nahi.”
Shilpa ki baat sunte hi, vaani didi ne us se kaha.
Vaani didi boli “jaan nahi, jaan ki amma jaan bol rahi hu. Apne ghar walon se bol dena ki, tumhari aur mehul ki shadi ki baat karne vaani didi aa rahi hai.”
Vaani didi ka itna kahna tha ki, shilpa ne fauran call kaat diya. Vaani didi ne use wapas call lagaya. Lekin tab tak wo apna mobile band kar chuki thi. Is se pahle ki, vaani didi fir se mehul ki khichai karna suru kar pati. Maine baat ko sambhalte huye kaha.
Mai bola “didi, khana to aap le aai hai. Ab aap hi chhoti maa se kahiye ki, wo khana kha le.”
Meri baat sunkar, vaani didi ne ek najar meri taraf dekha. Lekin is samay unko meri ye baat sahi lagi aur un ne mehul se kaha.
Vaani didi boli “us ladki ki aur tumhari khabar mai bad me lugi. Lekin aaj tumhari laparwahi ki vajah se ami nimi ko din bhar bhukha rahna pada. Isliye aaj tumhe raat ke pahle khana nahi milega.”
Mehul bhi hum logon ke sath din bhar se bhukha pyasa laga hua tha aur wo bhi nimi ki tarah hi petu tha. Isliye vaani didi ki ye baat sunte hi usne apni safayi dene ke liye kaha.
Mehul bola “lekin didi…….”
Abhi mehul itna hi bol paya tha ki, vaani didi ne uski baat ko kaatte huye kaha.
Vaani didi boli “ab tumko raat ko bhi khana nahi milega.”
Mehul bola “magar didi…..”
Vaani didi ne fir uski baat ko kaatte huye kaha.
Vaani didi boli “ab tumhe kal subah bhi khana nahi milega.”
Itna bol kar, vaani didi mehul ke fir se kuch bolne ka intejar karne lagi. Lekin ab mehul ke andar himmat nahi thi ki, wo fir se kuch bolne ki koshish karke, apna kal raat ka bhi khana band karwa le.
Isliye wo chup chap khada raha. Jab mehu khamosh raha to, vaani didi ne uski taraf se apna dhyan hatate huye, chhoti maa se kaha.
Vaani didi boli “mausi, khana to aa gaya hai. Fir aap log khana khane me der kyo kar rahi hai.”
Chhoti maa boli “vaani beta, mujhse hospital me khana nahi khaya jata hai. Mai raat ko ghar me jakar khana kha lugi.”
Chhoti maa ki baat sunte hi, pritam ne fauran aage aate huye kaha.
Pritam bola “mausi ji, meri patni ne aap logon ke khane ki puri taiyari kar rakhi hai. Mera ghar yaha pas me hi hai. Aap sab chal kar yadi mere ghar me khana khayegi to, mujhe bahut khushi hogi.”
Pritam ki baat sunkar, chhoti maa use mana karna chahti thi. Lekin vaani didi ne unhe kuch bolne ka mauka diye bina hi kaha.
Vaani didi boli “pritam thik kah raha hai. Khana to, mai le hi aayi hu. Aap sab waha chal kar shukun se khana kha lijiye. Ye log bhi mumbai se sidhe yaha hi aa gaye hai. Inhe bhi waha chal kar fresh hone ka mauka mil jayega.”
Vaani didi ki is baat ke bad, kisi ke pas kahne ko kuch nahi bacha. Sab vaani didi ke sath pritam ke ghar ke liye nikal pade. Ek gaadi me, mai vaani didi, nisha bhabhi aur barkha didi ho gaye.
Dusri gaadi me chhoti maa, ami, nimi, keerti, mehul aur pritam ho gaye. Kuch hi der me hum pritam ke ghar pahuch gaye. Ghar kya, wo ek aalishan bangalow tha aur jiski shano-shaukat bahar se hi dikhayi de rahi thi.
Ab uski ye shano-shaukat uske purkhon ki den thi ya fir uske beimani se kamaye gaye, kaale dhan ki den thi. Ye baat ya to pritam bata sakta tha ya fir shayad vaani didi bata sakti thi.
Pritam ne ghar pahuch kar, doorbell bajayi. Doorbell bajte hi, kisi ke payal khankhanate huye, bhag kar aane ki aawaj sunayi. Darwaja khulte hi humare samne ek sundar si ladki khadi thi.
Usne hum sabko dekhte hi, hum se namaste kiya. Pritam ne hume uska parichay dete huye kaha.
Pritam bola “ye meri chhoti bahan payal hai. Humara saara ghar iski payal ki khan khan se hi ghunjta rahta hai.”
Pritam ki baat sunkar, hum sabke chehre par muskurahat aa gayi. Lekin thodi si hairani bhi huyi. Kyoki payal ki umar 20-22 saal ke aas pas lagti thi. Jabki pritam ki umar 35-36 saal ke aas pas lagti thi.
Aise me payal ke pritam ki sagi bahan hone ki ummid kam hi lagti thi. Fir bhi hum me kisi ne bhi is baare me koi sawal nahi kiya. Pritam ne hume ghar ke andar lakar baithaya aur fir ghar ke andar ki taraf aawaj lagate huye kaha.
Pritam bola “koyal, jaldi aao, mehmaan aa gaye hai.”
Pritam ki aawaj sunte hi, ek aurat bhagti huyi humare pas aayi aur hum sab se namaste karne lagi. Pritam ne humse uska parichay apni patni ke roop me karaya aur usko bhi hum sabka parichay dene laga.
Lekin pritam ki patni ko dekh kar, hum sab hi hakke bakke se rah gaye. Humare hakke bakke rahne ki vajah ye thi ki, uski sirf aawaj hi koyal ki tarah meethi nahi thi. Balki uska rang roop bhi koyal ki tarah hi kaala tha.
Pritam dekhne me ek aakarshak naujawan tha. Aise me koyal ke sath uski jodi bilkul bemel lag rahi thi. Pritam ki harkaten to, humare liye pahle hi kisi paheli ki tarah thi. Us par ab uski patni koyal aur uski bahan payal bhi humare liye kisi paheli se kam nahi thi.
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Ye to sab se bada update hai panu ki behen hi Priya hai is story ke is part ko 4 saal me 40 baar se jyada padh chuka hu or har baar asssu bahata hu kash is story ko writer is story ko restart kar ke puri karta kher sapne acche hote hai or ye sapna mai khuli ankho se dekh raha huKo To Rok Lo {Update - 204}
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Mai abhi itna hi bol paya tha ki, chatakkk ki aawaj ke sath meri bolti band ho gayi. Mere gaal par vaani didi ka ek jordar tamacha pad tha. Jiske padte hi, mere sath sath, baki sab bhi vaani didi ko dekhne lage.
Wo bahut hi jyada gusse me mujhe ghoor rahi thi. Unko itne gusse me dekh kar, ek pal ke liye to, mai bhi saham gaya. Wahin vaani didi ne mujh par apna gussa utarte huye kaha.
Vaani didi boli “tere muh me jo kuch bhi aata hai, bina soche samjhe bakta chala jata hai. Ab yadi priya ke liye ek bhi galat shabd tere muh se bahar nikla to, mai abhi ke abhi tera muh tod dugi.”
“Tu janta bhi hai ki, yadi mohini aunty ki ye baat sahi nikalti hai to, fir priya se tera kya rishta niklega. Mohini aunty ki is baat ke sahi nikalne ka matalab hai ki, priya teri judwa bahan hai.”
Vaani didi ki is baat ko sunte hi, mai, keerti, mehul, barkha didi aur mohini aunty chauk kar rah gaye. Lekin chhoti maa, anu mausi, richa aunty aur nisha bhabhi ke chehre ke bhav kuch alag hi the. Jinhe mai samajh nahi pa raha tha.
Mere samne meri jindgi ke ek aise raz ka khulasa hua tha. Jiski kalpna maine kabhi apne sapne me bhi nahi ki thi. Mere sath ye sab kuch itna achanak hua tha ki, mai kuch bhi samajh nahi pa raha tha aur kisi sadme ki haalat me sa, vaani didi ko dekhe ja raha tha.
Mai apni jindagi ke ek aise sach se samna kar raha tha. Jis par yakin karna mere liye itna aasan nahi tha. Lekin mere aas pas is samay jo kuch ghat raha tha, use itni aasani se jhuthlaya nahi ja sakta tha.
Mohini aunty ki baat se mai itna to samajh chuka tha ki, hospital me un ne jis aadmi ki apni mardangi dikhane wali baat suni thi, wo koi dusra nahi, balki mera kamina bap hi tha.
Kyoki apni aulad ke kho jane par bhi, uske liye dukh manane ki jagah apni mardangi ki shokhiyan bagharne jaisi nich harkat mere bap ki jagah koi dusra insan nahi kar sakta tha.
Ye baat dimag me aate hi, maine is baat ki sacchai janne ke liye palat kar chhoti maa ki taraf dekha. Is samay unki najar mujh par hi tiki huyi thi. Lekin jaise hi maine unki taraf dekha, un ne apne sar ko jhuka liya.
Unki aankhon me is samay nami aur chehre par pareshani saaf dekhi ja sakti thi. Shayad wo is baat ke is tarah se khul jaane ki vajah se is sab ka samna karne ke liye khud ko taiyar nahi kar pa rahi thi.
Unhe shayad is baat ka dar sata raha tha ki, ab is baat ke khul jaane se pata nahi kya kya sawal karuga. Mai unki kisi pareshani ko badana nahi chahta tha. Isliye maine apne man ke har sawal ko apne man me hi dabaye rakhna thik samjha aur chhoti maa ke pas aate huye kaha.
Mai bola “chhoti maa, aapne suna ki, vaani didi kya kah rahi hai. Ye kah rahi hai ki, priya bhi aapki beti hai. Yadi inki baat sahi nikli to, aap usko kaise sambhalegi. Wo to hum sabse jyada shararti hai.”
Meri ye baat sunte chhoti maa ki aankhon ki nami aansuon me badal gayi. Un ne mujhe apne seene se laga liya aur fut fut kar rona suru kar diya. Unke ye aansu kisi dukh ke nahi, balki is khushi ke the ki, unka beta unko samajhne laga hai.
Magar ye haal sirf chhoti maa ka nahi tha. Is samay waha khade sabki aankhen aansuon se bhigi huyi thi. Un ne mere pas aakar, mere mathe chumte huye chhoti maa se kaha.
Richa aunty boli “sonu, humara beta sach me bahut bada ho gaya hai. Ye ab sab kuch samajhne laga hai. Tujhe ab iski fikar karne ki jara bhi jarurat nahi hai.”
Ye kahte huye, un ne bhi mujhe apne gale se laga liya. Mai thodi der aunty se milta raha. Fir maine chhoti maa se kaha.
Mai bola “chhoti maa, humari baten to, bad me bhi hoti rahegi. Abhi nisha bhabhi ka mumbai wapas lautna bahut jaruri hai. Hume inke jaane ka intejam kar dena chahiye.”
Meri baat sunkar, chhoti maa ne fauran hi, nisha bhabhi se kaha.
Chhoti maa boli “aap log chinta mat kijiye. Mai abhi hi aap logon ki wapsi ki ticket karwa deti hu.”
Magar vaani didi ne chhoti maa ki is baat ko kaatte huye kaha.
Vaani didi boli “mausi, aapko inki ticket ke liye pareshan hone ki jarurat nahi hai. Ab mai bhi mumbai ja rahi hu. Ye log mere sath hi chali jayegi. Aap yadi mere sath chalna chahti hai to, befikar hokar chal sakti hai. Anu mausi aur richa mausi milkar, yaha chanda mausi ka khayal rakh legi.”
Vaani didi ki is baat ki sahmati, anu mausi aur richa aunty ne bhi de di. Jiske bad chhoti maa vaani didi ke sath jaane ko taiyar ho gayi. Chhoti maa ke mumbai jaane ki baat sunte hi, keerti ne bhi fauran bich me kudte huye kaha.
Keerti boli “mausi yadi aap mumbai jayegi to, fir mai bhi aapke sath mumbai chalugi. Warna mai aapko bhi mumbai nahi jaane dugi.”
Keerti ki ye baat sunte hi, mai use ghoor kar dekhne laga. Lekin us par mere is ghurne ka koi farak nahi pada aur wo ulta mujhe hi ghoor kar dekhne lagi. Wahin dusri taraf chhoti maa ne use samjhate huye kaha.
Chhoti maa boli “nahi, abhi teri tabiyat sahi nahi hai. Aisi haalat me mai tujhe apne sath mumbai nahi le ja sakti.”
Chhoti maa ki baat sunkar, mere chehre par muskurahat aa gayi aur mai keerti ko chidate huye dekhne laga. Lekin wo abhi bhi mumbai jaane ki jid par adi huyi thi. Keerti ko mumbai jaane ki jid karte dekh, nisha bhabhi ne chhoti maa se kaha.
Nisha bhabhi boli “aunty, mujhe lagta hai ki, keerti ko piliya hua hai. Yadi mera ye andaza sahi hai to, aap befikar hokar ise apne sath mumbai le chal sakti hai. Iske piliya ko puri tarah se thik karne ki jimmedari meri hai.”
Nisha bhabhi ki baat sunkar, chhoti maa use bhi apne sath le chalne ko taiyar ho gayi aur mai muh bana kar keerti ko dekhne laga. Sabke mumbai jaane ki baat ko sunkar, mohini aunty ne kuch sankoch sa karte huye vaani didi se kaha.
Mohini aunty boli “vaani beta, kya mai bhi tum logon ke sath mumbai chal sakti hu.”
Mohini aunty ki is baat ke jabab me vaani didi ne muskurate huye, unse kaha.
Vaani didi boli “aunty, isme puchhne wali kya baat hai. Aap bhi humare sath mumbai chal sakti hai. Lekin aap apne chalne ki taiyari jaldi kar lijiye. Kyoki hume abhi hi yaha se nikalna hai.”
Abhi vaani didi ki mohini aunty se baat chal hi rahi thi ki, tabhi fir se mera mobile bajne laga. Maine mobile dekha to, nikki ka call aa raha tha. Mere call uthate hi, nikki ne rote huye kaha.
Nikki boli “wo priya… pata nahi priya ko kya ho gaya hai. Wo kisi se baat nahi kar rahi hai. Plz tum jaldi yaha aa jao. Hum sab yaha bahut pareshan hai.”
Nikki ka rona sunkar, meri aankhon me bhi nami chhane lagi. Fir bhi maine khud ko sambhalte huye, nikki se kaha.
Mai bola “tum ro mat, humari priya ko kuch bhi nahi hoga. Wo jaldi hi thik ho jayegi.”
Lekin nikki par meri is baat ka koi asar nahi pada aur usne fir se rote huye kaha.
Nikki boli “mujhe ye sab nahi sunna. Mai ye sab sunte sunte thak gayi hu. Plz tum fauran yaha aa jao. Mujhe pura yakin hai ki, tumhare uske pas rahne se wo jaldi hosh me aa jayegi.”
Nikki ko is tarah rote dekh kar, mera hausla jabab de raha tha. Fir bhi maine khud par kabu paane ki kosis karte huye nikki se kaha.
Mai bola “haan, haan, tum chinta mat karo, mai fauran hi waha aa raha hu. Humari priya ko kuch bhi nahi hoga.”
Magar itna kahte hi, meri aankhon ke samne priya ka chehra ghoom gaya. Ek taraf priya ke muskurate huye chehre ne aur dusri taraf nikki ke lagatar rone ki aawaj ne mujhe tod kar rakh diya tha.
Meri aankhon se aansuon ka samundar bah nikla aur mujhse nikki se iske aage kuch bhi kahte nahi bana. Meri is haalat ko dekhte hi, nisha bhabhi ne mujhse mobile le liya aur wo nikki ko samjhane lagi.
Wahin dusri taraf barkha didi ne mujhe apne kandhe se laga kar, mujhe dilasa dete huye kaha.
Barkha boli “mere bhai, us ladki ne hanste hanste bahut bade bade dard sahe hai. Aise me ye dard uska kuch bhi nahi bigad payega. Yakin rakho, wo jaldi hi thik ho jayegi.”
Barkha didi ki is baat se mujhe thoda hausla mila aur maine apne aansu ponchh liye. Lekin ab bhi meri aankhon me priya ka chehra ghum raha tha.
Mai fauran hi priya ke pas jaana chahta tha.
Magar chanda mausi ko aisi haalat me chhod kar jaane ko bhi mera dil ganwara nahi kar raha tha. Udhar nisha bhabhi ne nikki ko samjhane ke bad, call rakhte huye mujhse kaha.
Nisha bhabhi boli “mujhe lagta hai ki, tumhe bhi humare sath, mumbai chalna chahiye. Tumhare waha hone se sabko hausla milega.”
Lekin maine nisha bhabhi ke sath mumbai jaane se mana karte huye kaha.
Mai bola “bhabhi, priya ka khayal rakhe ke liye to, wahan bahut se log hai aur ab chhoti maa bhi wahan ja rahi hai. Magar yahan chanda mausi hosh me aate hi, mujhse aur chhoti maa se milna chahegi.”
“Ab chhoti maa ke yahan na rahne par, mera chanda mausi ke pas rahna bahut jaruri ho gaya hai. Wo mere parivar ka ek hissa hai aur mai unko aisi haalat me akela chhod kar, nahi ja sakta.”
Meri is baat ke samarthan me chhoti maa ne bhi nisha bhabhi se kaha.
Chhoti maa boli “ye thik hi kah raha hai. Chanda mausi se bhale hi humara koi rishta na ho, lekin fir bhi wo humare parivar ka ek hissa hi hai. Mai to iski jindgi me bahut bad me aayi hu. Lekin chanda mausi iske janam se hi iske sath hai.”
“Jab ise sambhalne wala koi nahi tha. Tab wo hi ek maa ki tarah hi iska khayal rakhti thi aur aaj jab iske pas iska khayal rakhne ke liye hum sab hai, tab bhi wo ek maa ki tarah hi iska khayal rakh rahi hai. Hum sab unhe, ghar ke kisi bade bude ki tarah hi, pyar aur samman dete hai.”
“Jis tarah is samay priya ke parivar ka uske pas rahna jaruri hai. Usi tarah chanda mausi ke parivar ka bhi unke pas rahna jaruri hai. Isliye jab tak mai mumbai se wapas nahi aa jaati, tab tak ye aur iski dono bahne yaha chanda mausi ke pas rah kar, unka khayal rakhege.”
Chhoti maa ki is baat ko sunkar, nisha bhabhi ne bhi mere yahi rukne ki baat par sahmati de di. Jis samay humari ye baat chal rahi thi. Us samay vaani didi mumbai jaane ki taiyari kar rahi thi.
Humhari baat khatam hote hi, un ne chhoti maa, keerti aur mohini aunty se apne chalne ki taiyari karne ke liye kah diya. Jiske bad, chhoti maa keerti ke sath aur mohini aunty mehul ke sath ghar chali gayi.
Vaani didi ne keerti se apne kamre se unka saman bhi le aane ko jata diya tha. Unke jaane ke bad, vaani didi ki nisha bhabhi aur barkha didi se baat chalti rahi. Kuch hi samay bad, chhoti maa, keerti aur mohini aunty wapas aa gayi.
Mohini aunty ke sath nitika bhi thi. Wo priya ki tabiyat ki vajah se bahut pareshan lag rahi thi. Usne vaani didi se unke sath mumbai chalne ki baat puchhi to, vaani didi ne use bhi sath chalne ke liye haan bol diya.
Iske bad, hum sab airport ke liye nikal gaye. Mujhe keerti ke mumbai jaane ki baat par bahut gussa aa raha tha. Lekin pata nahi, use mumbai jaane ki kaisi dhun chadi thi ki, wo mere gusse ki koi parwah nahi kar rahi thi.
Usne mujhse mumbai wali sim bhi le li thi aur mumbai pahuch kar usi se baat karne ki baat kah rahi thi. Mai uske jaane se khush to nahi tha, lekin uski khushi ke liye, mai use hanste hanste mumbai ke liye vida kar raha tha.
Khair 8:30 baje unki flight ka samay ho gaya aur sab humse vida lekar flight ki taraf bad gaye. Unki flight ke chhutte hi, mai aur mehul, ami nimi ke sath wapas hospital aa gaye.
Nisha bhabhi aur barkha didi ko to, wapas jaana hi tha. Lekin unke sath sath, chhoti maa, vaani didi aur keerti ke bhi chale jaane ki vajah se mujhe bahut khali khali sa lag raha tha.
Jabki vaani didi ke chale jaane se mehul bahut hi jyada khush najar aa raha tha. Usne hospital wapas aate hi, richa aunty se kaha.
Mehul bola “mummy, nisha bhabhi ne kaha hai, chanda mausi ko der raat ko hi hosh aayega. Isliye aap log ami nimi ko lekar ghar chali jaiye aur hum dono ke khane ke liye kuch ko bhej dijiyega.”
Richa aunty ko mehul ki ye baat sahi lagi aur un ne mehul se kaha.
Richa aunty boli “tu thik kahta hai. Ami nimi din bhar se pareshan ho gayi hai. Mai abhi inko lekar ghar chali jati hu aur inhe subah jaldi lekar aa jaugi. Punnu bhi humare sath ghar jakar hi khana kha lega.”
Richa aunty ki baat sunkar, mehul ne bhi unki baat ki sahmati dete huye kaha.
Mehul bola “thik hai, aap ise apne sath le jaiye aur mere liye khana yahi bhej dijiyega.”
Mehul ki is baat ko sunkar, richa aunty ne use dhamakte huye kaha.
Richa aunty boli “vaani tera khana kal subah tak ke liye band karke gayi hai. Yadi tune kal subah ke pahle kuch bhi khane ki kosis ki to, mai vaani ko teri sikayat kar dugi. Tujhe kal ke pahle kuch bhi khane ko nahi milega.”
Richa aunty ki ye baat sunte hi, mehul ki saari khushi gayab ho gayi. Wo richa aunty ko manane ki kosis karne laga. Lekin un ne mehul ki koi bhi baat nahi suni aur mujhe apne sath lekar ghar aa gayi.
Humare sath sath anu mausi bhi khana khane aayi thi. Unhe raat ko chanda mausi ke pas hi rukna tha. Isliye wo apne ghar nahi gayi thi. Hum richa aunty ke ghar pahuche to, waha par uncle ke pas kamal ke sath sath shilpa bhi thi.
Shilpa ko itne samay waha dekh kar, jitni hairani mujhe ho rahi thi, utni hi hairani richa aunty aur anu mausi ko bhi ho rahi thi. Lekin kamal ne humari is hairani ko door karte huye, richa aunty se kaha.
Kamal bola “aunty, shilpa didi aaj raat ko nitika didi ke pas ruk kar padne aayi thi. Magar nitika didi yaha thi to, ye bhi yaha chali aayi. Ye dono mil kar, humara khana taiyar kar rahe the ki, tabhi mehul bhaiya aa gaye.”
“Un ne aakar nitika didi ko priya ki tabiyat aur unki mummy ke mumbai jaane ki baat batayi to, nitika didi bhi mumbai jaane ki jid karne lagi. Jiske bad mehul bhaiya ne unse chalne ki taiyari kar lene ko kaha aur nitika didi apne ghar chali gayi.”
“Jab nitika didi apni mummy aur mehul bhaiya ke sath hospital jaane lagi to, wo shilpa didi se humara khana taiyar karne ki baat kah gayi thi. Jis vajah se ye khana taiyar karne yahi ruk gayi thi.”
“Humara khana taiyar karne ke bad, ye akeli hi ghar jaane lagi to, maine inko rok liya tha. Maine inse kaha tha ki, jab koi ghar wapas aa jayega to, mai inko inke ghar chhod aauga.”
Itna bol kar kamal chup ho gaya. Lekin uske ek hi saans me itni lambi chaudi baat bol jaane se, mai itna to samajh gaya tha ki, iske pichhe bhi mehul ka hi hath hai. Wo bas thodi der ke liye hi, ghar aaya tha.
Magar usne us thodi hi si der me kamal ko sab kuch samjha diya tha aur shilpa ka bhi uske ghar ki rasoi me pravesh karwa kar, ghar walon ke dil me ghar banane ka rasta khol diya tha.
Ab jab usne itna kar diya tha to, rahi sahi kasar maine bhi puri kar dene ki baat sochi aur shilpa se kaha.
Mai bola “aap to apne ghar se aaj raat ko nitika ke ghar rukne ka bol kar aayi thi aur ab raat bhi jyada ho gayi hai. Yadi aapka ghar wapas lautna jaruri na ho to, aap aaj raat ko yahi ami nimi ke pas ruk jaiye. Ye dono aaj yahi rahne wali hai.”
Meri ye baat sunte hi, kamal ne fauran meri haan me haan milate huye kaha.
Kamal bola “haan didi, aap yahi ruk jaiye. Mai subah aapko ghar chhod duga.”
Meri aur kamal ki baat sunkar, shilpa uncle aunty ki taraf dekhne lagi. Jab uncle ne bhi us se yahi ruk jaane ki baat kahi to, wo iske liye taiyar ho gayi. Iske bad, aunty log khana lagane lagi.
Hum sabne sath mil kar khana khaya. Khana khane ke bad, maine ami nimi ko kuch jaruri baten samjhayi aur fir mai anu mausi ke sath wapas hospital ke liye nikal gaya.
Hum log jab hospital pahuche to, mehul maje se apne dost atul ke sath baitha khana khane me laga tha. Atul wo hi ladka tha, jo mere accident ke samay, mehul ke sath, mujhe aur keerti ko lene aaya tha. Mehul ko atul ke sath khana khate dekh kar, mujhe laga ki, atul hi mehul ke liye khana lekar aaya hai. Ye dekhte hi, maine atul se kaha.
Mai bola “tumne iske liye khana lakar, bahut badi musibat mol li hai. Yadi vaani didi ko ye baat pata chal gayi to, wo iske sath sath tumhari khatiya bhi khadi kar degi.”
Meri baat sunte hi, khana khate khate, atul ke hath ruk gaye aur usne safayi dete huye kaha.
Atul bola “mai kaha iske liye khana laya hu. Mai to bas is se milne aaya tha. Ye khana kha raha tha aur isne mujhse khana khane ko kaha to, mai bhi iske sath khane ke liye baith gaya.”
Mai bola “to fir ye khana kaun lekar aaya.”
Meri baat sunkar, humare pas khade pritam ne kaha.
Pritam bola “ye khana mai lekar aaya tha. Vaani madam jaati samay bol kar gayi thi ki, unke gusse ki vajah se yadi aunty mehul ko khana khane se mana kar de to, mai isko khana lakar de du.”
Pritam ki baat sunkar, mere chehre par muskurahat aa gayi aur maine pritam se kaha.
Mai bola “humari vaani didi bhi kamal hai. Ek taraf khud hi ise khana khane se mana kiya tha aur dusri taraf khud hi ise khana dene ki bhi bol kar gayi hai.”
Meri baat sunkar, pritam ne kaha.
Pritam bola “madam ne mehul ke hospital me rahne ki vajah se hi, aakhiri samay me iski ye saza maaf kar di hai. Warna wo aisa karne ke mood me bilkul nahi lag rahi thi.”
Mai bola “hum logon ka khana to ho gaya hai. Lekin aapke khane ka kya hua.”
Pritam bola “mai to apne ghar jakar hi khana khauga. Abhi kuch der me vishwa aa jayega. Uske aate hi, mai ghar chala jauga.”
Pritam se itni baat karne ke bad, mai chanda mausi ko dekhne andar chala gaya. Chanda mausi ko abhi bhi hosh nahi aaya tha. Thodi hi der bad, anu mausi aa gayi to, mai uth kar bahar aa gaya.
Bahar aane ke bad, maine sabse alag thalag jakar, nikki ko call laga diya. Nikki ke call uthate hi, maine use nisha bhabhi ke sath, chhoti maa, vaani didi aur keerti ke aane ki baat batane laga.
Lekin jab use mere na aane ki baat pata chali to, wo mujh par gussa hone lagi aur usne isi gusse me call riya ko pakda diya. Maine riya se priya ka haal chal puchha aur use bhi chhoti maa aur keerti ke waha aane ki baat bata di.
Iske bad meri raj se thodi bahut baat huyi aur fir raj ne wapas nikki ko call thama diya. Maine apne waha na aa pane ki baat par nikki ko apni safayi dena chaha. Lekin usne mujhe koi safayi dene ka mauka diye bina hi call rakh diya.
Mai nikki ki is narajgi ko achi tarah se samajh sakta tha. Wo is baat ko lekar naraj thi ki, priya mujhe apni jaan se bhi jyada pyar karti hai aur mai uski aisi haalat ki baat sunkar, bhi uske pas nahi aaya.
Lekin wo is hakikat se anjan thi ki, mai sirf priya ka pyar hi nahi, balki uska bichhda hua judwa bhai bhi hu. Magar is wakt mere liye priya se jyada chanda mausi ke pas rahna jaruri tha.
Kyoki priya ke pas to, is samay uska saara parivar tha. Lekin chanda mausi ke liye to, unka saara parivar mai hi tha. Un ne ek maa ki tarah sirf meri dekh bhal hi nahi ki thi, balki aaj meri taraf badne wali maut ko bhi apne upar le liya tha.
Mai unki mamta ke is karz ko to, kabhi nahi chuka sakta tha. Lekin is samay unke pas rah kar, ek bete ka farz to nibha hi sakta tha. Yahi vajah thi ki, mai chahte huye bhi priya ke pas nahi ja paya tha.
Lekin mere priya ke pas na jaane ka ye matlab hargij nahi tha ki, mujhe priya ki fikar bilkul bhi nahi thi. Priya ko lekar is wakt mere dil me ek aisa dard tha, jise mai chah kar bhi kisi ke samne bayan nahi kar pa raha tha.
Jab se mujhe pata chala tha ki, priya meri bahan hai. Tab se mai kisi ke samne dil khol kar, priya ki is haalat par ro bhi nahi pa raha tha. Mujhe apne dard se jyada, mere apno ka dard mehsus hone laga tha.
Ek tarah se priya khud to besudhi ki nind me soyi huyi thi. Lekin wo apni jhuthi muskan, apni dard chhupane ki aadat mujhe de gayi thi. Mere andar jo baat baat par ro dene wala chhota sa baccha tha, wo na jaane kaha kho gaya tha.
Aaj bhale hi meri aankhon me aansu nahi the. Lekin aaj mai mehsus kar pa raha tha ki, priya apne muskurate huye chehre ke pichhe kitna jyada dard chhupa kar rakha karti thi.
Priya ka chehra baar baar meri aankhon ke samne ghoom raha tha aur mere uske pas na jaane ki vajah se, jo dard mujhe ho raha tha, us dard ka aehsas nikki to kya koi bhi nahi kar sakta tha.
Mai apni yahi haalat nikki ko batana chahta tha. Magar usne mujhe apni koi baat kahne ka mauka hi nahi diya tha. Mai nikki se jara bhi naraj nahi tha. Lekin priya ke liye pareshan jarur tha.
Meri isi pareshani ne mujhe mere dil ki baat nikki se kahne par majbur kar diya aur maine jindagi me pahli baar apne dil se kuch likh kar nikki ko bhej diya.
Mera Sms “Aaj Acchi Si Koi Saza Do Mujhe.
Chalo Aisa Karo Aaj Rula Do Mujhe.
Usko Bhoolu To Maut Aa Jaye Mujhe.
Apne Dil Ki Gahrayi Se Ye Dua Do Mujhe.”
Nikki ko Sms bhejne ke bad, mai aankh band karke baith gaya aur priya ki baton ko yaad karne laga. Thodi hi der bad, mere pas nikki ka Sms aa gaya.
Nikki ka Sms “Ek Parinde Ka Dard Bhara Fasana Tha.
Tute The Pankh Aur Udte Huye Jana Tha.
Toofan To Jhel Gaya Par Hua Ek Afsos,
Wahi Daali Tooti Jispe Uska Ashiyana Tha.”
Ye Sms mujhe nikki ne bheja tha. Lekin is Sms me mujhe priya ka chehra aur uski bebasi najar aa rahi thi. Priya ki bebasi aur uske dard ko mehsus karte hi, mai chah kar bhi, apni aankhon ko chhalakne se na rok saka aur meri aankhon se aansuon ki barsat hone lagi.
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Koi To Rok Lo
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Doston………. Bahut samay xossip me bitane ke bad achanak mujhe apne niji karno ki vajah se apni story Koi To Rok Lo ko adhura chhodna pada tha aur fir jab maine dobara xossip par wapsi karna chaha to wo site band ho chuki thi aur us jaisi site na milne ki vajah se mai apni story ko aage badana nahi chahta tha.
Ab mujhe xossip se milti julti 2 site ka pata chala hai. Jisme bahut kuch us se milta julta hai. Pahli site me mai apni story suru kar chuka hu. Wahi se mujhe is site Xforum Live ka pata chala aur mai is site me bhi apni story Koi To Rok Lo suru karne ja raha hu.
Xossip me meri is story ko kafi saraha gaya aur mujhe reader ka dher saara pyar mila. Isi vajah se mai apni is story ko adhura chhodna nahi chahta hu aur apne kuch anjan doston ke liye ise pura karna chahta hu.
Mai nahi janta ki mujhe xossip ki tarah yaha par reader ka sahyog mil pata hai ya nahi mil pata hai. Mai dusri site par stroy suru kar chuka hu. Waha mujhe writer me kuch jane pehchane naam mile lekin reader me koi jana pehchana nahi najar aaya.
Mere ek gumnaam friend ne mujhe is site ka pata diya. Yaha par mujhe bahut se jane pehchane writer najar aa rahe hai. Dekkhte hai yaha mujhe mere purane reader dost mil pate hai ya nahi mil pate hai.
Ab jo bhi hai mai apni is adhuri story ko yaha suru karne ja raha hu aur ummid karta hu ki mujhe aap sab doston ka sahyog aur pyar milta rahega. Isi ummid ke sath mai ek baar fir se is pyar se sarabor story Koi To Rok Lo ki suruaat kar raha hu.
Ye story xossip me kafi aage bad chuki thi. Lekin ab ise is nayi site me suru karne ki vajah se mai ise pahle update se suru kar raha hu aur is ke purane update me kuch sudhar bhi karta ja raha hu.
Taki naye reader ke judne ke sath sath purane reader ki bhi isme ruchi bani rahe. Is story ke update me hone wale sudhar se purani story ki bhavna par koi bhi asar nahi padega.
Mai roj ek update dene ki koshish karuga. Yadi purane reader stroy se judte hai to mai koshish karuga ki story ke update dene ki gati ya sankhya ko badaya ja sake.
Lekin purane sabhi reader jante hai ki story ke update bade hai aur yadi ek sath mai do update post karta hu to naye reader par bojh badega. Isliye mai reader ki suvidha ko dekhte huye update post karta rahuga.
Update post hone me hone wali deri ke liye mai abhi se aap sab se maafi maang leta hu aur aap sabke sath meri story Koi To Rok Lo ka naya safar suru karta hu. Dekhte hai ki is nayi site par ye story reader ka dil jeetne me kamyab ho pati hai ya nahi ho pati hai.
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Yaha bhi story adhuri haiCongratulations
Bro hum sab aap ke sath
Aur aap ko umeed se zyada
Yaha par milega
Thanks a lot
Bhai zyada tar story adhuri haiYaha bhi story adhuri hai
