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Adultery Kundali Bhagya

Alok

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अति सुन्दर प्रस्तुति वेगा स्टार भाई।
 
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mass8787

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Bohut hee sunder or lajawab update thaa Shiv bohut pyar say suchay mun say Bhargavi koo churamsukh deya hay or puray Prem kaa aanund deya hay bohut khubsurty say puray update koo lekha bout sandar
 
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krish1152

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nice update
 
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Aap jis tarha ke carracter ki baat kar rahe hai wo sirf single caracter story ke liye ho sakta hai, yaha ye story lambi ho jayegi, aur dusari baat, mene story Shiv ko dhyan me rakh kar likhi hai, agar dusare caracter ki soch aur paristhitiya ditail me likhunga to apko aisa nahi lagega, dusare caracter achanak uske niche nahi aa rahe hai par agar unki mansikta likhne bethunga to bahot lamba ho jayega, fir bhi me karne ki koshis karunga.
Aur agar aapki koi story ho to muje bataiyega, jise padh kar me thoda inspire ho shaku.
Na bhai kuch bhi change mat karna...jaisa chal raha he sahi chal raha he
 

Riky007

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बढ़िया भाई, तो भारगवि जी के भाग्य भी खुले अखीरकार।
 
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