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UPDATE 15
Abtak aapne padha ki AURTHER aashram se Milne ke bad apne Ghar jata hai aur sharab pine baith jata hai ki tabhi wahan ARCHANGEL aata hai Jo ki ye batata hai ki heaven par sankat aane Wala hai aur use uski madad chahiye iske was me archangel AURTHER ko koi sprit lautata hai jisko dekhte hi AURTHER bhawuk ho jata hai .(Yahan se flashback start hone Wala hai )
FLASHBACK 1
Shahar Mumbai 1992 log ise sapno ka sahar bhi kahte hai magar sapne hamesha unke pure hote hai jinke pas paise ho .aur jinke pas paise na ho unka is sahar me rahna ya na rahna barabar hai .aur waise log ko duniya badnasib kahti hai usi badnasib me se ek tha AURTHER.
Subha ka waqt tha ek budhi aurat sadak ke kinare chal rahi thi pahnawe se saf pata chal Raha tha ki wo kisi jhuggi jhopdi me rahti hogi .raste se guzarte hue use kisi chote bacche ki rone ki aawaz sunai deti hai .wo bhudi aurat idher udher dhekti hai to use aage ke kachre KE dibbe ke pas me ek baccha dikhta hai lakh koshison ke bad bhi wo aurat us bacche ko utane se rok nahi pati hai aur apne sath apne Ghar le aati hai .Ghar bhi wahi ghas phus ka tuta phuta jaisa ki aksar slum areas me hota hai Ghar me aur koi nahi tha sayad wo bhudi aurat akeli rahti thi .Ghar me bacche ke rone se uske bagal ki ek mahila us bhudiya ke Ghar aati hai to dekhti hai ki us ke hath me ek baccha hai Jo ki ro Raha hai bacche ko dekhte hi wo padosi mahila kahti hai .kaki ye baccha kiska hai .
Ispar wo bhudhiya kahti hai dekh na beti kitna kharab zamana aa Gaya hai logo ko is choti si Jan par bhi Taras nahi aayi ye mujhe kachre KE dibbe ke pas Mila syad Mai wahan na pahuchti to iska Kya hota .
Ispar wo bagal wali aurat kahti hai magar tum iska palan posan kaise karogi kaki ab to tumhari Umar bhi ho chali hai .
Ispar wo bhudhiya kahti hai ki jab iswar ne mujhe ye baccha Diya hai to wo hi iski dekh bhal bhi karega ye kah Kar wo bhudhiya waha se us bacche ko apni charpai par rakh deti hai aur wo bagal wali aurat apne Ghar chali jati hai .bacche ka name us bhudiya ne ramu rakha tha . isi tarah din bitte hai aur wo ramu 7 sal ka ho jata hai ki ek din jab wo bahar apne dosto KE sath khel Kar Ghar aata hai to dekhta hai ki uski ma ki tabiyat bohot kharab hai .
(Note jab se ramu ne hosh sambhala tha tab se wo us bhudiya ko hi ma manta tha )
Ramu bhudiya ke pas ja Kar Kya hua ma tum khas kyun rahi ho .
Bhudiya -kuch nahi ramu Meri antim ghadi aa gayi hai sayad us upar wale ne itni hi Zindagi Tere sath likhi thi ab tujhe apni Zindagi khud hi Jini hogi tujhe ek bat batani thi beta tu anath hai Mai Teri asli ma nahi hun fir bhudiya ramu ko sab kuch batati hai sab sunne ke bad ramu rote hue kahta hai mujhe chod ke mat jao ma tum hi Meri ma ho Mai kaise rahunga .
Ispar bhudiya kahti hai mujhe Jana hi hoga beta Mai chah Kar bhi nahi ruk sakti beta khub padna khub aage badna aur bada aadmi banna yehi Meri aakhri iccha hai ye kahte waqt us bhudiya ki sans tutne lagti hai aur uski gardan bayin taraf ludak jati hai .ramu bilakh bilakh Kar rone lagta hai Sam Tak us mahalle wale lakdiyaon ki wawastha karte hai aur ramu bhudiya ko agni deta hai .ramu bhuje hue kadmo se wapas jhopdi me aata hai khane ko kuch rahta nahi hai is liye wo Pani pi Kar sone ko Chala jata hai magar nind uski aankhon se koso dur thi aise hi subha ho jati hai .
Subha ko iske bagal wale jhopde me rahne wale Bhaiya aate hai aur kahte hai tu kabbtak yaha rahega ramu yaha se do km dur sahar hai wahan chal. ramu ek bar apne us Cote se jhopde ko dekhta hai aur fir apna cota sa kapde se bandhi thaili uthata hai aur fir bagal wale Bhaiya KE sath Sahar Chala jata hai wahin se wo dono ek ek paw thele se lekar khate hai aur paise de Kar aage badh jate hai wo dono ek anathaalya ke samne rukte hai .
Jiska nam tha ALAM ANATHAALYA is anathashram me sab dharam ke bacche rahte the aur ye anathashram ek Muslim pariwar chalata tha yahan kul 800 bacche the aur isi anathashram me school bhi tha 10 Tak .ramu aur wo bagal wale Bhaiya wahan pahuchte hai aur wahan ke incharge miss mery decosta Jo ki ek Christian thi aur Dil ki bohot nek thi unse milte hai wo ramu un dono ko baithne ko kahti hai .tabhi bagal wale Bhaiya decosta ko sab batate hai jise sun Kar miss decosta ki aankhon me aasu aa jate hai .
Aur wo kahti hai ki upar Wala itna nirdayi kaise ho sakta hai fir wo ramu se puchti hai ( Jo ki is waqt bina chappal ke half pant aur halki phati baniyan me tha )
Tumhara name Kya hai .ispar bagal wale Bhaiya kahte hai ki madam ji ham log ise pyar se ramu kahte hai magar iska namkaran nahi hua hai .ispar miss decosta kahti hai koi bat nahi Mai iska nam AURTHER rakhti hun likin pukaru nam ramu hi rahega .fir wo bagal wale Bhaiya chale jate hai aur AURTHER miss decosta ke sath jata hai Jahan wo use Baki ke bacchon se milwati hai .aur use ye Bata Kar chali jati hai ki Kal se us ka school bhi suru hone Wala hai .aur Kal aane ka kah ke chali jati hai .
Doston update de Diya hai read and enjoy flashback thode din challenge fir kahani apni original speed par aa jayegi aur kuch sawalo ke jawab bhi flashback me AAP sab ko mil jayenge update thoda chota hai Kya karun doston waqt ki thodi kami hai.
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Nice update..
Arthur ka Archangel aur samael wagrah s kaise connection h ye Janna h .
Archangel n last update m Arthur K samne kisi ki aatma ko laya th a aur Arthur n usko Rashmi bulaya tha. Uske reaction aur archangel ki baato s lagta h ki Rashmi Arthur ka love rahi hogi.
Story vki shururat m jab Arthur k bedroom ka description dia tha wahan Arthur k bed k pass painting thi aur khoon s nidhi naam likha hua tha.
To ye nidhi hi Rashmi h ya dono alag alag bandiya h..
Archangel k according agar Arthur rahsmi ko jinda karna chahta h to use us insane ki jarurat padegi Jo Arthur s dil o jaan s chahta ho but agar aisa hogaya to us insan ka Kya hoga jiske andar Rashmi ki aatma chali jaegi ..?
Let's see..
Arthur ka Archangel aur samael wagrah s kaise connection h ye Janna h .
Archangel n last update m Arthur K samne kisi ki aatma ko laya th a aur Arthur n usko Rashmi bulaya tha. Uske reaction aur archangel ki baato s lagta h ki Rashmi Arthur ka love rahi hogi.
Story vki shururat m jab Arthur k bedroom ka description dia tha wahan Arthur k bed k pass painting thi aur khoon s nidhi naam likha hua tha.
To ye nidhi hi Rashmi h ya dono alag alag bandiya h..
Archangel k according agar Arthur rahsmi ko jinda karna chahta h to use us insane ki jarurat padegi Jo Arthur s dil o jaan s chahta ho but agar aisa hogaya to us insan ka Kya hoga jiske andar Rashmi ki aatma chali jaegi ..?
Let's see..
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AAP ki baton se lagta hai ki AAP ne story ki barikiyon ko milaya hai I m really impressed AAP jaise reader's ki Mai qadr karta hun but ye nidhi aur rasmi ka matter bhi aage clear ho jayega .Rashmi kaun hai aur uske sath aage Kya hoga AURTHER archangel se kaise Mila SAMAEL se uski zaida kyun banti hai ye bhi aapko jald hi pata chal jayega ek bat sayad AAP ne notice nahiki ki AURTHER LORD OF COUNCIL KAISE BANA AUR YE LORD OF COUNCIL AAKHIR HAI KYA ye ab Tak kisi ne nahi pucha abhi to bohot jhatke Baki hai just be along and keep supporting bro TC
