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Tarun ne Rashmi ke Gale PE chaku Chala Diya Rashmi ko apne gale pe Jalan si mahsus Hui aur usne AURTHER ki taraf dekh Kar kaha mujhe maaf karna aur uska sar dusri taraf ludak Gaya .
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Wahin dusri taraf nidhi junjle KE andar ki taraf bhage ja rahi thi uske pair se khun nikal Raha tha kyunki do bar uske pair thokar se takra chuke the aur uski sandal bhagte waqt tut chuki thi magar wo fir bhi nahi ruki .
Aur uske piche se wo gunda bhi bhage ja Raha tha tabhi achanak nidhi KE pair ruk Gaye aur nidhi KE rukte hi wo gunda bhi ruk Gaya nidhi se kuch duri par kyunki aage jharna tha jo ki 1000 m niche jakar Nadi se milta tha jharne ki aawaz in dono ko sunai de rahi thi tabhi wo gunda kahta hai
Gunda - aur kaha Tak bhag ke jayegi ladki ab to Rasta bhi khatam ho Gaya aur tera Bhai aur bhabhi bhi Marne hi wale hai fark sirf itna hai ki tera Bhai abhi marega aur Teri bhabhi kuch dino KE bad jab Tarun sir ka Mann bhar jayega aurr fir tera number lagega ab chup chap mere sath chal aur ye bhul me mat rahna ki koi tujhe bachane aayega abhi ye dono bat hi Kar rahe the ki tabhi AURTHER ke chillane ki aawaz aati hai nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
aawar itni dardnak aur zor ki thi ki sare panchi ud Gaye .
Tabhi nidhi ne kaha tujhe aur Tere Malik ko is sab ki saza milegi wo Jan chuki thi ki marna use dino Surat me hai ya to izzat Hawa ke ya fir apni izzat ke liye tabhi nidhi ne jharne me chalang laga di aur us gunde ke hosh ud Gaye jab us gunde ka sud bud wapas aaya to wo ek wafadar kutte ki tarah Tarun ke pas Chal pada .
Wahin AURTHER ki taraf jaise hi Rashmi giri AURTHER ko aisa laga uske Dil ne dhak se Kiya use apni sanse band hoti Hui nazar aai aur wo bojhil kadmo se Rashmi ke pas Gaya aur sham se apne ghutne ke Bal gir Gaya aur Rashmi ke sar ko apne God me le Kar uske gal ko thaptapate hue kahta hai nidhi uth ja nidhi tumne wada Kiya tha ki tum mujhe chod Kar kabhi nahi jaogi tum tum ne mujh se wada Kiya tha idher AURTHER buri tarah se Rashmi ko apne gale se lagaye kuch badbadate hue roe ja Raha tha wo apne hosh me nahi tha jaise pagal ho Gaya ho aur idher Tarun pagalo ke tarh hase ja Raha tha ki tabhi Jo gunda Tarun ko lat padne KE bad uthane aaya tha wo kahta hai Tarun sir ye laundiya to gai aur ye majnu bhi pagal ho Gaya hai Mai us dushri wali ko le ke aata hun pata nahi wo Sala gundu (wo gunda Jo nidhi KE piche bhaga tha ) kaha mar Gaya .
AURTHER ne jaise he ye suna use jaise hosh aaya ho aakhen bojhal Hui wi kapde pahate hue pure badan se khun bahta hua wo achanak aage badhta hai aur jis gunde ne nidhi ko lane ki bat kahi thi uske pet pe ek punch Marta hai aur jaise hi wo piche hota hai AURTHER us gunde ke sar ped KE nikle hue nokile hisse me Marta hai jis se uska sar kisi kharbuz ki tarah us nokile hisse me ghus jata hai jis se us gunde ki body thada tadapne KE bad sant ho jati hai ye sab itna jaldi hua ke Tarun Jo has Raha tha wo sant ho Gaya aur jaise hi hamla karne ke liye AURTHER ki taraf punch mara AURTHER ne wo hath pakad ke kaha isi hath se tune Meri Rashmi ko mara na aur ye kahte hi usne Tarun ke hath kandhe aur kohni dono jagah se Tod Diya isi tarh AURTHER ne Tarun KE Baki sare hath pair bhi tod tod diye Tarun ki Bali Dene wale bakre ki tarh sadak par let Kar chikh Raha tha tabhi AURTHER ki nazar ek patthar par padi wo us patthar ko utha Kar laya aur Tarun ke chehre par kuchalne ke kiye is waqt Tarun itna dar Gaya tha ki usne apne pant me toilet aur Susu dono Kar Diya tha aur idher AURTHER ne jaise hi patthar uske muh pe fekna chaha tabhi AURTHER ko kisi keep ne dhakka mara AURTHER ke hath se patthar chitak Kar dur ja gira aur AURTHER bhi thodi duri par ja gira usme ab uthne ki himmat nahi thi magar fir bhi khada hua tabhi Jeep ka gate khula aur usme se Jo nikla wo koi aur nahi jogendar Rao URF Mumbai ka mla tha usne nikalte hi apne bete ke pas ja Kar kaha hamse thodi der ho gai re bachwa Tarun ne jab dekha ke us ka bap aa Gaya hai to us ke Jan me Jan aai usne darte hue kaha daddy mujhe bacha lo wo mujhe mar dalega usne sab ko Mar Diya ye dono abhi bat hi Kar rahe the ki gundu (wo gunda Jo nidhi KE piche bhaga tha ) waha aa Gaya aur aate hi kaha Tarun sahab wo ladki ne jharne se kid KE aatmhatya Kar li ye sunna tha ki AURTHER ka sabr jawab de Gaya aur wo jogendar Rao aur Tarun ki tarf badha leki jaise hi wo aage badha jogendar Rao ke paltu kutto ne do nali wali banduk se 4 bar fire Kiya jisme se 2 goli uske pair me lagi aur wo wahi baith Gaya aur do goli uske Baku me lagi AURTHER ke muh se shine aawaz me kaha mujhe maf Kar dena nidhi uske aakh se aansu bah rahe the wo kuch Kar nahi sakta tha tabhi waha jogendar Rao aaya uske hath me is waqt baseball ka bat tha aur usne AURTHER ke sat par us bat se marna suru Kar Diya aur kahte ja Raha tha sale harami ke bacche suar ke pille tune hamre bachwa ko mara jogendar Rao tab Tak AURTHER ko Marta Raha jab Tak use santusti na mili usne apne bete ko pahle hi hospital bhej Diya tha aur apne aadmiyon se kahke apne Baki zinda bache gundo ko jise AURTHER ne mara tha unhe bhi hospital bhej Diya tha .jab AURTHER ko Mar Kar jogendar thank Gaya tabhi usne apne ek aadmi se kaha in Laila majnu ko usi jharne me phek aao .
Us gunde ne waisa hi Kiya jaisa jogendar ne kaha tha aur fir jogendar ne apne kisi aadmi ko road saf karane aur ped ko hatwane ko kaha aur apne ek aadmi se Pani lekar apna muh aur hath safe Kiya aur shit change Kiya kyunki AURTHER ke khun ke chite uske shit pe lag Gaye the Sara Kam karne ke bad jogendar Rao apni keep me baith hospital rawana ho Gaya .
Idher 6 mahine bad kisi khandar jaisi jagah me Jahan bahut zaida garmi ho aachank kisi ki aankh khulti hai aur wo zor se chillaya hai nnahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
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Update 21 flashback 7
Wahin dusri taraf nidhi junjle KE andar ki taraf bhage ja rahi thi uske pair se khun nikal Raha tha kyunki do bar uske pair thokar se takra chuke the aur uski sandal bhagte waqt tut chuki thi magar wo fir bhi nahi ruki .
Aur uske piche se wo gunda bhi bhage ja Raha tha tabhi achanak nidhi KE pair ruk Gaye aur nidhi KE rukte hi wo gunda bhi ruk Gaya nidhi se kuch duri par kyunki aage jharna tha jo ki 1000 m niche jakar Nadi se milta tha jharne ki aawaz in dono ko sunai de rahi thi tabhi wo gunda kahta hai
Gunda - aur kaha Tak bhag ke jayegi ladki ab to Rasta bhi khatam ho Gaya aur tera Bhai aur bhabhi bhi Marne hi wale hai fark sirf itna hai ki tera Bhai abhi marega aur Teri bhabhi kuch dino KE bad jab Tarun sir ka Mann bhar jayega aurr fir tera number lagega ab chup chap mere sath chal aur ye bhul me mat rahna ki koi tujhe bachane aayega abhi ye dono bat hi Kar rahe the ki tabhi AURTHER ke chillane ki aawaz aati hai nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
aawar itni dardnak aur zor ki thi ki sare panchi ud Gaye .
Tabhi nidhi ne kaha tujhe aur Tere Malik ko is sab ki saza milegi wo Jan chuki thi ki marna use dino Surat me hai ya to izzat Hawa ke ya fir apni izzat ke liye tabhi nidhi ne jharne me chalang laga di aur us gunde ke hosh ud Gaye jab us gunde ka sud bud wapas aaya to wo ek wafadar kutte ki tarah Tarun ke pas Chal pada .
Wahin AURTHER ki taraf jaise hi Rashmi giri AURTHER ko aisa laga uske Dil ne dhak se Kiya use apni sanse band hoti Hui nazar aai aur wo bojhil kadmo se Rashmi ke pas Gaya aur sham se apne ghutne ke Bal gir Gaya aur Rashmi ke sar ko apne God me le Kar uske gal ko thaptapate hue kahta hai nidhi uth ja nidhi tumne wada Kiya tha ki tum mujhe chod Kar kabhi nahi jaogi tum tum ne mujh se wada Kiya tha idher AURTHER buri tarah se Rashmi ko apne gale se lagaye kuch badbadate hue roe ja Raha tha wo apne hosh me nahi tha jaise pagal ho Gaya ho aur idher Tarun pagalo ke tarh hase ja Raha tha ki tabhi Jo gunda Tarun ko lat padne KE bad uthane aaya tha wo kahta hai Tarun sir ye laundiya to gai aur ye majnu bhi pagal ho Gaya hai Mai us dushri wali ko le ke aata hun pata nahi wo Sala gundu (wo gunda Jo nidhi KE piche bhaga tha ) kaha mar Gaya .
AURTHER ne jaise he ye suna use jaise hosh aaya ho aakhen bojhal Hui wi kapde pahate hue pure badan se khun bahta hua wo achanak aage badhta hai aur jis gunde ne nidhi ko lane ki bat kahi thi uske pet pe ek punch Marta hai aur jaise hi wo piche hota hai AURTHER us gunde ke sar ped KE nikle hue nokile hisse me Marta hai jis se uska sar kisi kharbuz ki tarah us nokile hisse me ghus jata hai jis se us gunde ki body thada tadapne KE bad sant ho jati hai ye sab itna jaldi hua ke Tarun Jo has Raha tha wo sant ho Gaya aur jaise hi hamla karne ke liye AURTHER ki taraf punch mara AURTHER ne wo hath pakad ke kaha isi hath se tune Meri Rashmi ko mara na aur ye kahte hi usne Tarun ke hath kandhe aur kohni dono jagah se Tod Diya isi tarh AURTHER ne Tarun KE Baki sare hath pair bhi tod tod diye Tarun ki Bali Dene wale bakre ki tarh sadak par let Kar chikh Raha tha tabhi AURTHER ki nazar ek patthar par padi wo us patthar ko utha Kar laya aur Tarun ke chehre par kuchalne ke kiye is waqt Tarun itna dar Gaya tha ki usne apne pant me toilet aur Susu dono Kar Diya tha aur idher AURTHER ne jaise hi patthar uske muh pe fekna chaha tabhi AURTHER ko kisi keep ne dhakka mara AURTHER ke hath se patthar chitak Kar dur ja gira aur AURTHER bhi thodi duri par ja gira usme ab uthne ki himmat nahi thi magar fir bhi khada hua tabhi Jeep ka gate khula aur usme se Jo nikla wo koi aur nahi jogendar Rao URF Mumbai ka mla tha usne nikalte hi apne bete ke pas ja Kar kaha hamse thodi der ho gai re bachwa Tarun ne jab dekha ke us ka bap aa Gaya hai to us ke Jan me Jan aai usne darte hue kaha daddy mujhe bacha lo wo mujhe mar dalega usne sab ko Mar Diya ye dono abhi bat hi Kar rahe the ki gundu (wo gunda Jo nidhi KE piche bhaga tha ) waha aa Gaya aur aate hi kaha Tarun sahab wo ladki ne jharne se kid KE aatmhatya Kar li ye sunna tha ki AURTHER ka sabr jawab de Gaya aur wo jogendar Rao aur Tarun ki tarf badha leki jaise hi wo aage badha jogendar Rao ke paltu kutto ne do nali wali banduk se 4 bar fire Kiya jisme se 2 goli uske pair me lagi aur wo wahi baith Gaya aur do goli uske Baku me lagi AURTHER ke muh se shine aawaz me kaha mujhe maf Kar dena nidhi uske aakh se aansu bah rahe the wo kuch Kar nahi sakta tha tabhi waha jogendar Rao aaya uske hath me is waqt baseball ka bat tha aur usne AURTHER ke sat par us bat se marna suru Kar Diya aur kahte ja Raha tha sale harami ke bacche suar ke pille tune hamre bachwa ko mara jogendar Rao tab Tak AURTHER ko Marta Raha jab Tak use santusti na mili usne apne bete ko pahle hi hospital bhej Diya tha aur apne aadmiyon se kahke apne Baki zinda bache gundo ko jise AURTHER ne mara tha unhe bhi hospital bhej Diya tha .jab AURTHER ko Mar Kar jogendar thank Gaya tabhi usne apne ek aadmi se kaha in Laila majnu ko usi jharne me phek aao .
Us gunde ne waisa hi Kiya jaisa jogendar ne kaha tha aur fir jogendar ne apne kisi aadmi ko road saf karane aur ped ko hatwane ko kaha aur apne ek aadmi se Pani lekar apna muh aur hath safe Kiya aur shit change Kiya kyunki AURTHER ke khun ke chite uske shit pe lag Gaye the Sara Kam karne ke bad jogendar Rao apni keep me baith hospital rawana ho Gaya .
Idher 6 mahine bad kisi khandar jaisi jagah me Jahan bahut zaida garmi ho aachank kisi ki aankh khulti hai aur wo zor se chillaya hai nnahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
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Bhailog update de Diya hai kuch logo ko ye Janna tha ke AURTHER SAMAEL aur ARCHANGEL se kaise Mila aur wo LORD OF COUNCIL AAKHIR bana kaise ab ye hi jawab Dena hai uske bad flashback khatam ek aur bat puchni hai bhailog ye story Mai lambi chalaun ya jaldi khatam Kar dun kyunki sayad kuch logo ko story utni pasand nahi aa rahi hai khair apne reviews zarur den read and enjoy TC
Sir apki story to achi h.... Lekin late update ke kaaran concentration bna nhi rhta isliye apko lg rha h ki comments kam aa rhe h.... Or isme hum readere ki bhi koi galti nhi h... Kyuki story ko pdne ka maza ek flow mai hi aata h... Flow tuta to story ka maza bhi nhi aata.... Apse ye nhi kah rha hu ki daily update digiye lekin alternate days pr to de digiye.... Baki sab aap ki marji
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Bhai AAP ka kahna sahi hai lekin pichle 3 updates alternate days par hi mile hai well I m happy ki AAP ko story pasand aai sath bane rahiye
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Alex bhai till now story bahut acchi ja rahi hai , acha suspense create kr rahe ho , flashback chal rahi hai toh ho sakta hai kuch logo ko pasand na aaye , but. Yeh bahut jaruri thi story lineup k liye , rahi baat kuch logo ko pasand na aane ki toh story name he hai kya farak padhta hai toh jo log itna pasand karte hai unka b toh dhyaan rakho
Rahi baat long aur short ki toh yeah aap par depend krta hai long k chakar mai unnecessarily kuch mat dal dena story mai aur short k chakar mai kujh shod mat dena
So kio ho apni marji se
Bcoz jo apne socha hai voh karoge toh story best ho jayegi har readers k review aur sochne ka tareeka apna hota hai , aap story aur characters k creater ho aapse jaida koi apki story behtreen nhi kr sakta
Like attitude vj ki story , vj me story apne tareeke se likhi jese sochi thi and see at the end uski story best of best story rahi
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Rahi baat long aur short ki toh yeah aap par depend krta hai long k chakar mai unnecessarily kuch mat dal dena story mai aur short k chakar mai kujh shod mat dena
So kio ho apni marji se
Bcoz jo apne socha hai voh karoge toh story best ho jayegi har readers k review aur sochne ka tareeka apna hota hai , aap story aur characters k creater ho aapse jaida koi apki story behtreen nhi kr sakta
Like attitude vj ki story , vj me story apne tareeke se likhi jese sochi thi and see at the end uski story best of best story rahi
Next upto u what u want to do